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Nomizu Iori - DARAKENA (TV-size) [Taiko]

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Nofool
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 4 avril 2015 at 15:10:48

Artist: Nomizu Iori
Title: DARAKENA (TV-size)
Source: 棺姫のチャイカ
Tags: Hitsugi no Chaika Nardoxyribonucleic 伊織
BPM: 177
Filesize: 2535kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kantan (1,74 stars, 125 notes)
  2. Muzukashii (2,95 stars, 308 notes)
  3. Nardo's Futsuu (2,23 stars, 197 notes)
  4. Nardo's Oni (4,06 stars, 454 notes)
  5. Oni (4,03 stars, 436 notes)
Download: Nomizu Iori - DARAKENA (TV-size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thanks to Nardoxyribonucleic for his Oni and Futsuu.
qoot8123
Hi~ o/
Taiko mod~ :)

[ Kantan]

General
:idea: I suggest you reduce some 1/2 notes, It is a bit hard on Kantan
:idea: Try to follow the drum sound to make simple pattern ,so that new player can handle this diff easier. ex :00:24:477 (26,27) - i suggest you move 00:24:477 (26) - to 00:24:646 - and move 00:24:816 (27) - to 00:25:324 - to follow the drum simply

  1. 00:46:341 (69) - move to 00:46:680 - ? i think this pattern is easier to play
  2. 00:48:375 (73) - ^
  3. 00:54:477 (86) - ^
  4. 00:56:511 (90) - ^
  5. 01:21:086 (40,41) - try to make easier ?
  6. 01:22:442 (43,44) - ^
  7. 01:23:798 (46,47,48,49) - ^

[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:17:443 (23) - move to 00:17:612 - as the pattern you used on 00:21:595 (42,43,44,45) -
  2. 00:21:934 (45,46,47,48) - consider to add finish? there are too peace to me :o
  3. 00:17:443 (23,70) - remove finish? as you use on 00:30:070 (75,76,77,78,79) -
  4. 01:08:374 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - umm...this pattern is not suitable here imo, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1798265

[ Nardo's Oni]

  1. 00:17:528 (24) - change to k? I think you use d to connect 00:17:867 (25,26,27) - is a bit lowering
  2. 00:22:104 (46) - remove? to follow the guitar as 00:22:273 (47,48,49,50) -
  3. 01:14:645 (87,88) - try ddkkk? i think it is better to reflect the next part
  4. 01:24:307 - add note? it is a bit empty to me
  5. 01:25:154 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - try to use k ddkkddk? to follow the drum

[ Oni]

General
:idea: The SV change on 00:23:206 - is really unreadable try remove the green line and move 00:23:290 - this green line to 00:23:460 - . others part are same

  1. 00:27:951 (95,96) - i suggest you use same SV on these two note , it might read easier
  2. 01:04:562 (12) - move to 01:04:645 - ? i think it is better to me
  3. 01:08:884 (44,45) - move to 01:08:798 - and change 01:08:883 - to d to follow the vocal's accent 01:08:375 (41,43,45) -
  4. 01:10:494 (55) - remove and move 01:11:002 (59) - to 01:10:662 - . it can reflect drum sound clearly
  5. 01:19:392 (33,34) - same as 01:08:884 (44,45) -try dk dk
That's all~
Good Luck~ :)
Topic Starter
Nofool

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi~ o/
Taiko mod~ :)

[ Kantan]

General
:idea: I suggest you reduce some 1/2 notes, It is a bit hard on Kantan
:idea: Try to follow the drum sound to make simple pattern ,so that new player can handle this diff easier. ex :00:24:477 (26,27) - i suggest you move 00:24:477 (26) - to 00:24:646 - and move 00:24:816 (27) - to 00:25:324 - to follow the drum simply

  1. 00:46:341 (69) - move to 00:46:680 - ? i think this pattern is easier to play deleted most of them without move
  2. 00:48:375 (73) - ^ ^
  3. 00:54:477 (86) - ^ ^
  4. 00:56:511 (90) - ^ ^
  5. 01:21:086 (40,41) - try to make easier ? i delete most of the notes to follow the vocal then
  6. 01:22:442 (43,44) - ^ ^
  7. 01:23:798 (46,47,48,49) - ^ added a spinner to follow the vocal instead

[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:17:443 (23) - move to 00:17:612 - as the pattern you used on 00:21:595 (42,43,44,45) - done
  2. 00:21:934 (45,46,47,48) - consider to add finish? there are too peace to me :o done
  3. 00:17:443 (23,70) - remove finish? as you use on 00:30:070 (75,76,77,78,79) - done
  4. 01:08:374 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - umm...this pattern is not suitable here imo, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1798265well i applied this even if i was following the instrumental instead of the vocal, but i guess what i did for all the kiai still fits the vocal so im gonna do that to keep the diff easier

[ Oni]

General
:idea: The SV change on 00:23:206 - is really unreadable try remove the green line and move 00:23:290 - this green line to 00:23:460 - . others part are same
okok i did some changes 'bout that, that should be easier to read now

  1. 00:27:951 (95,96) - i suggest you use same SV on these two note , it might read easier deleted the SV change here with your previous suggestion
  2. 01:04:562 (12) - move to 01:04:645 - ? i think it is better to me good
  3. 01:08:884 (44,45) - move to 01:08:798 - and change 01:08:883 - to d to follow the vocal's accent 01:08:375 (41,43,45) - yeah done, good, and then i don't have that little weird break
  4. 01:10:494 (55) - remove and move 01:11:002 (59) - to 01:10:662 - . it can reflect drum sound clearly true :c
  5. 01:19:392 (33,34) - same as 01:08:884 (44,45) -try dk dk no change, i wanna keep a little break here, as sounds the song
That's all~
Good Luck~ :)
Thanks a lot for this mod qoot! pretty usefull
Nardoxyribonucleic

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi~ o/
Taiko mod~ :)

[ Nardo's Oni]

  1. 00:17:528 (24) - change to k? I think you use d to connect 00:17:867 (25,26,27) - is a bit lowering Realizing it would be a bit boring for having many dons consecutively, I changed the specified note as k.
  2. 00:22:104 (46) - remove? to follow the guitar as 00:22:273 (47,48,49,50) - As stressed sound occurs at 00:21:934 - , it would be fine to keep the don at 00:22:104 - , which could supplement the sound.
  3. 01:14:645 (87,88) - try ddkkk? i think it is better to reflect the next part fixed
  4. 01:24:307 - add note? it is a bit empty to me added a don there.
  5. 01:25:154 (158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - try to use k ddkkddk? to follow the drum fixed
That's all~
Good Luck~ :)
Thanks for your mod qoot~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/a3tMZ.rar
Soldsaga KunG
Taiko mod :)

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat
> = change from

Kantan
00:28:036 (31) - k

Muzukashii
00:18:545 (30) - move 00:18:714


Good Music , Beatmaps :) :)

Good Luck :) :)
Topic Starter
Nofool

Soldsaga KunG wrote:

Taiko mod :)

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat
> = change from

Kantan
00:28:036 (31) - k i can't really do that because there are others similar parts where i should do this then :c (i followed the instrumental, not the vocal) and i want to keep this easy for the new players

Muzukashii
00:18:545 (30) - move 00:18:714 nope, there's a drum beat at 00:18:545 that i don't want to ignore and there's nothing important to point at 00:18:714


Good Music , Beatmaps :) :)

Good Luck :) :)
edit : ho well even if i applied nothing, checking this forced me to do some others changes x_x
thanks for the check then' (try to do some deeper mods tho é_è)
wasonz
From my queue Nardo request ~


Oni
00:14:307 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - kdd kdd
00:19:985 (52) - add k
00:20:409 (55) - add d
00:52:782 (208) - k
00:58:460 (231) - , 00:57:443 (226) - add d
01:03:290 (6) - k

remove kiai after finish

Nardo's Oni
00:01:765 (4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+G
.-. Nardo is god

Good Luck ~ :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

From my queue Nardo request ~

Nardo's Oni
00:01:765 (4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+G no change, as the vocal there has the same pitch as 00:03:121 (10,11,12,13) -
.-. Nardo is god

Good Luck ~ :)
Thanks for the mod~ :)
Evening
ogod browser crashed, have to rewrite everything

m4m from quehuehue


[Nardo's Oni]
00:22:612 (48,49) - Change to finishes? | To emphasize the guitar
00:28:206 (75) - d > k | For vocals? | The kat rhythm here seems rather plain
00:39:053 (132,134) - kd > - k | Follows vocals better and creates a break here since the pattern here is rather long
01:18:629 - Use this pattern here instead? | The kat there is rather isolated, I suggest to add more notes there https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809294

[Oni]
00:18:375 (40,41,42) - ddk > D - - | I suggest to emphasize note 40 here, due to the guitar
00:19:731 - Same idea here | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809312
00:21:087 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809315
00:33:121 (114) - D > K | Pitch map and it plays better
00:43:968 (167) - ^
00:49:646 (193,194,197,198) - dkdk > - K - K | The 1/4 here sounds weird I suggest to just use a finisher on them instead
00:52:104 (203) - Finisher?
01:28:713 - Shift the end of kiai time here?

I don't think the kiai time is rankable even though it looks really nice due to the ranking criteria in general ( Do not overuse kiai time. )

[Muzu]
00:18:375 (29,30) - dd > D - | Same idea as Oni
00:19:731 (34,35) - dk > D - | ^
00:44:646 (138) - d > D | Finisher here?
00:52:104 (163,164,165) - Finishers all here?
01:12:951 - Maybe this pattern? | Note that 58 is a finisher | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809338
01:19:391 (87) - Move right 1/4 | Follow vocals more
01:27:357 (127) - d > D | Finisher due to cymbal?

[Nardo's Futsuu]

You might want to use the 2nd BG ( Similar to your oni )
00:54:138 (126,129) - Finishers on these | Following your mapping style previously that has the similar pattern

[Kantan]
00:05:494 (5) - k > d | Pitchmap?
00:09:053 (8,10) - dd > kk | For pitchmap?
01:27:357 (5,7) - Finishers?

Nothing else, good luck owo/!!
Topic Starter
Nofool

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

From my queue Nardo request ~


Oni
00:14:307 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - kdd kdd no change, im just following drums on this part
00:19:985 (52) - add k mm i'll keep this in mind, not a bad idea
00:20:409 (55) - add d nope, i keep nothing here to emphasize the next d
00:52:782 (208) - k done, also changed the previous k to d
00:58:460 (231) - , 00:57:443 (226) - add d no change, as usuall i follow drums :c
01:03:290 (6) - k mm gonna keep d at the moment

remove kiai after finish i'll be waiting for a bat 'bout that since there are the same things in some ranked map

Good Luck ~ :)
Thanks for the mod!

lZenxl wrote:

ogod browser crashed, have to rewrite everything

m4m from quehuehue

[Oni]
00:18:375 (40,41,42) - ddk > D - - | I suggest to emphasize note 40 here, due to the guitar good idea but then we got nothing at 00:18:545 while there's a good drum beat, well i'll keep this in mind tho
00:19:731 - Same idea here | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809312 ^
00:21:087 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809315 ^ that sounds good tho ,_, idk
00:33:121 (114) - D > K | Pitch map and it plays better ok
00:43:968 (167) - ^ doesn't work here imo, might change it later if it still plays better
00:49:646 (193,194,197,198) - dkdk > - K - K | The 1/4 here sounds weird I suggest to just use a finisher on them instead no change atm
00:52:104 (203) - Finisher? ok
01:28:713 - Shift the end of kiai time here? ok

I don't think the kiai time is rankable even though it looks really nice due to the ranking criteria in general ( Do not overuse kiai time. ) yeah i'll need a bat to be sure i think. About the kiai overuse on big note, there are some ranked map with that so i wonder

[Muzu]
00:18:375 (29,30) - dd > D - | Same idea as Oni ok for the muzu
00:19:731 (34,35) - dk > D - | ^ ^+ you forgot the 3rd part
00:44:646 (138) - d > D | Finisher here? no change for now
00:52:104 (163,164,165) - Finishers all here? ok for (163) only
01:12:951 - Maybe this pattern? | Note that 58 is a finisher | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809338 damn i shouldn't.. i didn't want to follow the vocal at all but well... too late now, changed
01:19:391 (87) - Move right 1/4 | Follow vocals more ok, 'cause i did earlier at a similar part anyways
01:27:357 (127) - d > D | Finisher due to cymbal? ok

[Kantan]
00:05:494 (5) - k > d | Pitchmap? ok
00:09:053 (8,10) - dd > kk | For pitchmap? no change, following drums/keep the part easier
01:27:357 (5,7) - Finishers? ok, might also need some color changes

Nothing else, good luck owo/!!
Thanks a lot!
mmm still need help about the audio i think x_x.. updated
Nardoxyribonucleic

lZenxl wrote:

ogod browser crashed, have to rewrite everything

m4m from quehuehue


[Nardo's Oni]
00:22:612 (48,49) - Change to finishes? | To emphasize the guitar umm... no change as I did not do it at 00:21:934 (45,47) - where the other two guitar sounds occur.
00:28:206 (75) - d > k | For vocals? | The kat rhythm here seems rather plain It works, fixed
00:39:053 (132,134) - kd > - k | Follows vocals better and creates a break here since the pattern here is rather long remain unchanged because there is a prominent snare at 00:39:053 (132) - which cannot be ignored.
01:18:629 - Use this pattern here instead? | The kat there is rather isolated, I suggest to add more notes there https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1809294 It seems to be fine to me, as there are no vocal at the spaces. Well, I'll seek further opinion about this.

[Nardo's Futsuu]

You might want to use the 2nd BG ( Similar to your oni ) Umm... I would keep the current bg as this is the only Futsuu in the set. The reason of using another bg for my Oni is owing to the fact that it is the second Oni.
00:54:138 (126,129) - Finishers on these | Following your mapping style previously that has the similar pattern 00:46:002 (109,112) - do not have finish, so I don't add finishes to 00:54:138 (126,129) - for the sake of consistency.

Nothing else, good luck owo/!!
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/a8hGG.rar
JUDYDANNY
Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via Juda's Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

[Timings]

  • Beat isn’t true .
    00:00:917 - metronome starts this timing. 00:00:240 - move to 00:00:917 -.
    and, 00:12:443 - add red line. (4/4)
    00:44:985 - ~~~ 00:49:053 - Change to the beat from 4/4 to 6/4
    00:53:121 - ~~~ 01:00:240 - ^


    And, 01:00:240 (233) – add 5/4 line. I think this 5/4 looks nice.
To “Nofool”
[Kantan]
  1. HP 3 >>> 3.5~4 too easy to pass. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1819790
  2. 00:17:358 (9) – delete this.
  3. 00:21:765 (18) - ^ , 00:21:595 (17) - ^
  4. and, change 00:22:273 (19) – to k?
  5. If you changed previous suggestion, I also suggest to change 00:32:782 (36,37,38,39) - kkkd …or kkdd
  6. 01:09:391 (15) – delete this? Vocal needs to break .
  7. 01:12:442 (19,20) – k? same as 00:57:189 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) – dd,kk, KKD.
  8. 01:14:476 (23) – K too hard KDK for Kantan.
  9. plays hard, I guess. But not bad~~
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:09:053 (13,14,15) - delete finisher? not too loud. unnecessary imo.
  2. 00:33:375 (85) – delete this. Sounds weird a bit… for Muzu.
  3. 00:44:138 (130,131) – 130 > d, 131 > delete.
  4. 00:52:104 (158) – add finisher?
  5. 01:13:459 (58) – finisher ~~ needs more power I guess~ :3
[Oni]
  1. 00:09:053 (13,14,15) – delete finisher?
  2. 00:38:799 (144) - add k? same as previous kd pattern 00:27:951 (94,95) -
  3. 01:11:934 (64,65,66,67) – kd,dk >> k,ddk sounds better? cuz previous pattern you use 01:10:578 (55,56,57) – triplet kkd.
  4. 01:18:799 (28,29) – kd?
  5. 01:23:629 (63) – delete?
  6. good~ :3/

To “Nardo”
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:47:528 (111) – , 00:55:663 (128) - swap? I prefer to change.
  2. 01:02:443 (1,2,3,4,5) – k,kk,dk>>> kk,k,dk or k k,k,d sounds better imo.
  3. 01:08:205 (24) – move to 01:08:713 (25) - ?
  4. and, 01:19:561 (58) – add d?
  5. great~~ !
[Nardo’s Oni]
  1. 00:38:799 (130) - change don? weird for vocal. I guess.
  2. 00:58:375 (215) – delete this , same as previous d-dk~~
  3. 01:04:815 (14) – k ?
  4. 01:06:086 (25) – move to 01:06:425 (27) - ? and change don ?
  5. 01:07:951 (39) – delete? for vocal accent .next kkd ~~
  6. 01:14:137 (83) - k? I think 1/2 pattern dkdk~~~or kdkd~~~ is better~.
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
Nofool

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via Juda's Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

[Timings]

  • Beat isn’t true .
    00:00:917 - metronome starts this timing. 00:00:240 - move to 00:00:917 -.
    and, 00:12:443 - add red line. (4/4)
    00:44:985 - ~~~ 00:49:053 - Change to the beat from 4/4 to 6/4
    00:53:121 - ~~~ 01:00:240 - ^
    did everything except the 5/4 suggestion

    And, 01:00:240 (233) – add 5/4 line. I think this 5/4 looks nice.
To “Nofool”
[Kantan]
  1. HP 3 >>> 3.5~4 too easy to pass. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1819790 changed to 4
  2. 00:17:358 (9) – delete this. done
  3. 00:21:765 (18) - ^ , 00:21:595 (17) - ^ both done
  4. and, change 00:22:273 (19) – to k? no change, following the melody
  5. If you changed previous suggestion, I also suggest to change 00:32:782 (36,37,38,39) - kkkd …or kkdd ^
  6. 01:09:391 (15) – delete this? Vocal needs to break . ^ still the melody
  7. 01:12:442 (19,20) – k? same as 00:57:189 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) – dd,kk, KKD. ^
  8. 01:14:476 (23) – K too hard KDK for Kantan. done
  9. plays hard, I guess. But not bad~~
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:09:053 (13,14,15) - delete finisher? not too loud. unnecessary imo. gonna keep them for now, will wait for others opinion
  2. 00:33:375 (85) – delete this. Sounds weird a bit… for Muzu. ok
  3. 00:44:138 (130,131) – 130 > d, 131 > delete. ^
  4. 00:52:104 (158) – add finisher? done
  5. 01:13:459 (58) – finisher ~~ needs more power I guess~ :3 no change for now, i keep this in mind
[Oni]
  1. 00:09:053 (13,14,15) – delete finisher? refer to the muzu
  2. 00:38:799 (144) - add k? same as previous kd pattern 00:27:951 (94,95) - no change, i did it at 00:27:951 'cause there was a drum beat
  3. 01:11:934 (64,65,66,67) – kd,dk >> k,ddk sounds better? cuz previous pattern you use 01:10:578 (55,56,57) – triplet kkd. mm i'll keep kd dl for now just 'cause it looks a bit cooler to play
  4. 01:18:799 (28,29) – kd? no change for now, following drums (which are really low i must admit...hard to hear)
  5. 01:23:629 (63) – delete? ^
  6. good~ :3/

That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Thanks a lot! really appreciated, mostly for the timings x_x still thanks for all suggestions.
Nardoxyribonucleic

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via Juda's Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.


To “Nardo”
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:47:528 (111) – , 00:55:663 (128) - swap? I prefer to change. The current pattern suits the instrument imo.
  2. 01:02:443 (1,2,3,4,5) – k,kk,dk>>> kk,k,dk or k k,k,d sounds better imo. fixed the former.
  3. 01:08:205 (24) – move to 01:08:713 (25) - ? umm... I think the current pattern is fine imo :3
  4. and, 01:19:561 (58) – add d? I want to pair this pattern with 01:08:374 (26,27,28,29) - , so no change here.
  5. great~~ !
[Nardo’s Oni]
  1. 00:38:799 (130) - change don? weird for vocal. I guess. k could fit the music there imo.
  2. 00:58:375 (215) – delete this , same as previous d-dk~~ umm... Retained because of the vocal.
  3. 01:04:815 (14) – k ? no change, as the vocal has a lower pitch than 01:04:645 (13) -
  4. 01:06:086 (25) – move to 01:06:425 (27) - ? and change don ? nice~ fixed.
  5. 01:07:951 (39) – delete? for vocal accent .next kkd ~~ fixed
  6. 01:14:137 (83) - k? I think 1/2 pattern dkdk~~~or kdkd~~~ is better~. I prefer following the low-pitched vocal here.
That’s all! I thank you for reading it through ;)
Good Luck! :D
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/acHxW.rar
toara_fict


Taiko Mod request from My Queue.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. okay
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Kantan]
  1. 0:00 ( x0.90 => x1.00 ) why 'Kantan' change speed ?????????????

  2. 00:52:779 (70) - Change d ( 00:52:440 (69) - have hi hat sounds. but 00:52:779 (70) - not have hi hat sounds. )

  3. 01:13:456 (22) - add Finish. ( Cymbal sounds follow )

  4. 01:25:998 (3) - ^
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[Nardo's Futsuu]
  1. 00:25:662 (48,49) - swap ? ( 49combo have Ride cymbal? sounds. k is better / & 00:36:509 (80,81,82) - this dkd :3 )

  2. 00:49:729 (114) - => 00:49:560 (114) - & 00:50:746 (116) - 00:50:577 (116) - ( Vocal & Cymbal follow )


    Good :3
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. speed all 1.00 ( Meaning Unknown use 0.90 0.95 1.10 1.20 )

  2. why 00:33:119 (83,84,85,86,87) - Kdddk 00:43:967 (129,130,131,132,133) - Kdkkd ????????? 00:33:458 (85,86,87) - Change kkd or kdd or kdk is better


    ok
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[ Oni]
  1. ................ ( This map TV size. why many change speed ?)

  2. ok
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[Nardo's Oni]
  1. 00:49:390 (180,181) - swap ?

  2. 00:50:407 (186) - Change k ?


    Nice map. good Nardo~
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GL
Topic Starter
Nofool

toara_fict wrote:

[ Kantan]
  1. 0:00 ( x0.90 => x1.00 ) why 'Kantan' change speed ????????????? done

  2. 00:52:779 (70) - Change d ( 00:52:440 (69) - have hi hat sounds. but 00:52:779 (70) - not have hi hat sounds. ) nope, I follow the the guitar/melody there, rarely the vocal

  3. 01:13:456 (22) - add Finish. ( Cymbal sounds follow ) no finish here to emphasize the next Ks

  4. 01:25:998 (3) - ^ Cymbal is not as high as the one later (+ i want to keep the diff easy without too many finishers)
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. speed all 1.00 ( Meaning Unknown use 0.90 0.95 1.10 1.20 ) removed all, except 1.20 (Ill explain why in the Oni)

  2. why 00:33:119 (83,84,85,86,87) - Kdddk 00:43:967 (129,130,131,132,133) - Kdkkd ????????? 00:33:458 (85,86,87) - Change kkd or kdd or kdk is better mm i did it mostly 'cause of the guitar/melody are different for the two parts, changed to Kdkdd for the moment, still not sure what i'll do there


    ok
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[ Oni]
  1. ................ ( This map TV size. why many change speed ?) Well let's explain x_x I placed my SV changes regarding how loud or not was the song, when the SV is low, the song is also low. Another example, when i used 1,40 SV, the song is suddenly way louder for like one or two notes, so i use a high SV just to follow better the song. That's cooler/better to play imo, i wonder why peoples don't do this more, TV size or not, it depends on the song imo.

  2. ok
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GL
Thanks for the mod and for being so fast o_o!

I'll update later i guess...
Nardoxyribonucleic

toara_fict wrote:



Taiko Mod request from My Queue.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. okay
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[Nardo's Futsuu]
  1. 00:25:662 (48,49) - swap ? ( 49combo have Ride cymbal? sounds. k is better / & 00:36:509 (80,81,82) - this dkd :3 ) fixed

  2. 00:49:729 (114) - => 00:49:560 (114) - & 00:50:746 (116) - 00:50:577 (116) - ( Vocal & Cymbal follow ) I think a rhythm different from the previous 00:44:984 (107,108,109) - sounds better imo.


    Good :3
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[Nardo's Oni]
  1. 00:49:390 (180,181) - swap ? The hit-hat sound is too soft... The current pattern fits the vocal imo.

  2. 00:50:407 (186) - Change k ? ^


    Nice map. good Nardo~ Nice to hear that~ :3
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GL
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/adAAW.rar
Charlotte
Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Kantan

SV1.4→1.2

01:09:388 (15,16) - ctrl + G

Nardo's Futsuu

01:00:406 (1) - 01:02:101 - move end
01:19:476 - add d (be better?)

Muzukashii

00:17:452 - add d
00:17:611 (25) - delete
00:17:696 (25) - change k
01:05:998 (19,20) - ctrl + G

Nardo's Oni

Good~

Oni

00:29:221 (100) - Kiai time = main chorus. I felt there is no need to Kiai Time
00:30:577 (106) - ^
00:31:933 (111) - ^ other...
01:27:530 - add d

Good luck :)
Nardoxyribonucleic

Charlotte wrote:

Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Nardo's Futsuu

01:00:406 (1) - 01:02:101 - move end Umm... The sound stops at 01:02:270 - , so I think that the spinner should end at there as well.
01:19:476 - add d (be better?) no change, as it is a bit hard to put 3/4 notes in Futsuu imo.

Nardo's Oni

Good~

Good luck :)
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Topic Starter
Nofool

Charlotte wrote:

Hi from Charlotte's Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Kantan

SV1.4→1.2 ok

01:09:388 (15,16) - ctrl + G gonna keep what i did, easier to read

Muzukashii

00:17:452 - add d im just following drums there+easier to read
00:17:611 (25) - delete ^
00:17:696 (25) - change k ^
01:05:998 (19,20) - ctrl + G still easier to read é_è

Oni

00:29:221 (100) - Kiai time = main chorus. I felt there is no need to Kiai Time waiting for a bat about that, i used them kiais regarding the song intensity
00:30:577 (106) - ^
00:31:933 (111) - ^ other...
01:27:530 - add d mm nothing important to follow there imo

Good luck :)
Thank you for the mod!
updated
ts8zs
因为无效所以随便摸一下
00:00:917 - correct
00:12:442 - correct
00:44:985 - redline3/4
01:04:307 - redline4/4
del other redline.
offset+5?not effects much I think:3
[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:561 (33,34) - dK
00:22:104 (46) - del
00:30:409 (86,87) - dK
ts8zs
No kd
[Oni]
00:12:611 (2) - del
00:13:628 (8) - k
00:15:492 - copy from 00:12:780 - and 00:16:340 (8,9) - kk
I think short kiai shouldn't use in taiko maps:3
Topic Starter
Nofool

ts8zs wrote:

因为无效所以随便摸一下
00:00:917 - correct
00:12:442 - correct
00:44:985 - redline3/4
01:04:307 - redline4/4
del other redline. done
offset+5?not effects much I think:3

[Oni]
00:12:611 (2) - del ok
00:13:628 (8) - k mm no change atm
00:15:492 - copy from 00:12:780 - and 00:16:340 (8,9) - kk ^
I think short kiai shouldn't use in taiko maps:3 gonna keep this untill a BAT tells me NO! hue
Thank you!
Nardoxyribonucleic

ts8zs wrote:

因为无效所以随便摸一下
00:00:917 - correct
00:12:442 - correct
00:44:985 - redline3/4 done
01:04:307 - redline4/4 ^
del other redline. ^
offset+5?not effects much I think:3 Retained offset as 917.
[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:561 (33,34) - dK The guitar pitch at 00:18:375 (28,40) - is higher than that at 00:19:731 (34) - , so k D is fine imo.
00:22:104 (46) - del I can hear a beat there, so keeping it is okay.
00:30:409 (86,87) - dK same as 00:19:561 (33,34) -
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/agH9q.rar
mliencheng
Mod from mod request queue ~


Kantan
00:09:052(8,9,10) je pense k sera mieux, le ton vocal est assez haut ici



personnellement je préfère pas changer le couleur trop souvent dans "kantan", parfois ça sera difficile pour le joueur

certains 1/2 k d k d k peuvent être changés en d d d d d ou k k k k k pour la simplicité

Nardo's Futsuu
00:28:205 k, high pitch ends 00:28:375

Muzukashii
00:07:018 ajoute un k ici puisque tu suis le vocal, et à 00:08:374 ajoute k

01:15:831 - 01:17:187 - 01:18:543 etc, je préfère ddd d de dd dd

Oni
la change de slider velocity un peu trop (?


00:09:052(8,9,10) k, même raison de kantan

00:49:645 met ce note à 00:49:560
00:49:729 enlève

00:50:661 :arrow: 00:50:577
00:50:746 enlève

01:13:458 K

Nardo's Oni
00:38:798(130,131) ctrl G, the end note with a k fits better I think

01:22:188 d




désolé pour mon pauvre français ,ça fait longtemps que je ne l'ai pas utilisé
Topic Starter
Nofool

mliencheng wrote:

Mod from mod request queue ~


Kantan
00:09:052(8,9,10) je pense k sera mieux, le ton vocal est assez haut ici ok, je suivais plutôt l'instru mais ça passera mieu pour la Kantan avec k



personnellement je préfère pas changer le couleur trop souvent dans "kantan", parfois ça sera difficile pour le joueur

certains 1/2 k d k d k peuvent être changés en d d d d d ou k k k k k pour la simplicité ouais c'est vrai ;_; je vais laisser comme c'est pour l'instant pour pas garder trop d'écart entre les diffs parces la futsuu et la muzukashii sont aussi un peu difficils je trouve, je changerais sûrement si d'autres le disent aussi

Muzukashii
00:07:018 ajoute un k ici puisque tu suis le vocal, et à 00:08:374 ajoute k je laisse comme c'est, je suis l'instru (le piano surtout) pour cette partie

01:15:831 - 01:17:187 - 01:18:543 etc, je préfère ddd d de dd dd ok, j'ai changé en d ddd, les dd dd suivaient la batterie/drums mais bon les triplets sont plus adaptés pour une muzukashii

Oni
la change de slider velocity un peu trop (? je laisse pour l'instant, les BAT me diront sûrement de changer de toute façon ;_;


00:09:052(8,9,10) k, même raison de kantan je garde les D cette fois, pour l'instru

00:49:645 met ce note à 00:49:560
00:49:729 enlève mm je garde ce que j'ai fait pour l'instant, ça suit la batterie/drums

00:50:661 :arrow: 00:50:577
00:50:746 enlève ^

01:13:458 K j'ai laissé un k simple pour souligner/donné plus d'importance au D d'après qui suit l'instru



désolé pour mon pauvre français ,ça fait longtemps que je ne l'ai pas utilisé aucun problème^^ peu de fautes et c'est assez compréhensible
Merci beaucoup pour le mod!
Nardoxyribonucleic

mliencheng wrote:

Mod from mod request queue ~

Nardo's Futsuu
00:28:205 k, high pitch ends 00:28:375 fixed

Nardo's Oni
00:38:798(130,131) ctrl G, the end note with a k fits better I think Following the guitar would be better, fixed.

01:22:188 d fixed
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/ajuFa.rar
Neku Okazaki
[Kantan]
00:24:306 - k
01:03:628 (1) - Delete
01:08:710 (16) - Delete?
01:12:439 (22) - D?

[Futsuu]
00:05:323 - k
00:09:730 - d
00:17:188 - d 00:17:527 (21) - k

[Muzukashii]
00:01:255 - k
00:01:764 - k
00:01:933 - d
00:02:103 - d
00:03:289 - d
00:04:645 - d
00:07:018 - k
00:08:374 - d
01:28:034 (132,133,134,135,136,137) - Ctrl + G

[Oni and Nardo's oni]
Looks good ~
Nardoxyribonucleic

Neku okazaki wrote:

[Futsuu]
00:05:323 - k As this is the beginning of the song, making the pattern simple would be better.
00:09:730 - d ^
00:17:188 - d If this note is added, five consecutive 1/2 notes will be formed, which will be a bit hard for Futsuu.
00:17:527 (21) - k I followed the drum beat there, so no change.

[Oni and Nardo's Oni]
Looks good ~ Nice to hear that~
Thanks for your mod~ :) No change atm.
Topic Starter
Nofool

Neku okazaki wrote:

[Kantan]
00:24:306 - k no change, the diff has to be airy
01:03:628 (1) - Delete mm i still don't know what to do there, i'll see about that
01:08:710 (16) - Delete? no change atm
01:12:439 (22) - D? ^ sounds not that high

[Muzukashii]
00:01:255 - k no change, i only follow the piano on this part
00:01:764 - k ^
00:01:933 - d ^
00:02:103 - d ^
00:03:289 - d ^
00:04:645 - d ^
00:07:018 - k ^
00:08:374 - d ^
01:28:034 (132,133,134,135,136,137) - Ctrl + G no change, i follow more the instrumental than the vocal for this part
Still Thanks! Some points still need to be improved :c
Topic Starter
Nofool
Update

Removed all the kiai time abuse on the big notes after asking TKS about it.

@DakeDekaane, if you see this post (before your mod) i think i maybe need help on the Muzu and Kantan diff about the notes structure now. I might be totally wrong é_è that's why i asked you x_x.
DakeDekaane
Fast™

[General]
:!: Title: DARAKENA (TV Size) :arrow: DARAKENA (TV-size) (or only DARAKENA)
Sources: http://vgmdb.net/album/45012 | http://vgmdb.net/album/44447

[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:222 (31,32,33,34) - I think a k d d D pattern would make a nice play along with the other d d d K patterns, as they'd be very similar
00:26:680 (64) - You're basing this part mostly on vocals so removing this one would help to emphasize them better :p
00:37:527 (120) - ^
00:48:713 (178) - I'd suggest it to make this a kat to make it consistent with the other patterns like this.
01:00:239 - It'd make more sense to begin the spinner here so the player begins to play it along with vocals.
01:11:764 (69,70) - Maybe remove (70) and make (69) a don, I think this would follow vocals better (which I think you're basing on)
01:15:747 (96) - You could remove this to let 01:15:662 (95) emphasize vocals better.
01:17:103 (108) - ^Something similar
01:27:696 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - You could try kdddkdddkkkkd here, I think it follows better the drums here.

[Oni]
dem kiai fla..*shot*
The sudden speed ups in 01:03:628 and 01:14:136 feels very awkward, it'd be better to remove them imo.
00:00:917 - I'd suggest to increase a bit the volume here
00:10:408 - The whooshy sound begins here so it's better to begin this spinner here.
00:13:289 (5,6,7) - This may be just personal taste but I feel a simple d k would help the previous ddk to feel more emphasized, which would fit better as the song is stronger in the first ddk than in the second.
00:14:645 (13,14,15) - ^
00:17:865 - 00:21:933 - This part is somehow ignoring the song, we have this strong beats for the guitar and drums but we don't have anything in the map that reflects that intensity x.x I'd suggest something like this, where the highlighted notes are big notes. You could make some changes depending of your style.

00:23:035 - Add a note here, a ddddd would emphasize better this part imo.
00:39:560 (149) - Making this a don would help to keep your patterns consistent and I also think this way the drums would be followed better
01:00:239 - It'd make more sense to begin the spinner here so the player begins to play it along with vocals.
01:09:560 (49) - You could remove this note to make a tiny break here, as this pattern is a bit long.
01:11:933 (63,64,65,66) - I'd keep using a kkd k here as in the previous pattern.
01:14:475 (2) - This would compliment better the song being a K, so you have K to emphasize the vocals and d for the drums. If you do, make 01:14:644 (3) a small note.
01:15:831 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern breaks how you use kats on the red ticks, which is a bit bad as the player would be already used with that, I'd suggest something like this.

01:17:187 (16,17,18,19,20) - dk dk k -> d kd dk for the same reason as above.
01:18:543 (26,27,28,29) - As in 01:15:831 (5,6,7,8) -
01:27:611 (91) - This note feels a bit weird to begin the stream, maybe remove it?
01:27:695 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - I'd suggest you to try a kdddkdddkkk for this stream, it'd fit better the drums imo.

[Muzukashii]
Yes, there are some flaws in the Muzu, but I guess this can be easily fixed :P

The speed ups really feel awkward while playing, better keeping the same speed here.
00:10:239 (1) - Same as Oni.
00:12:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the pattern that represents the music better here, you should base on this one for the rest of this section. Possibliy adding a don in 00:13:628 would play nicer (the result would be a d k kdkdd).
00:17:526 (23,24,25,26) - Here you could use kkk d, so the new don will be consistent with later patterns here.
00:18:713 - I'd suggest to add a note here to make a nice syncopation, which would be interesting to play. Also add a note in 00:20:069.
00:20:238 (34) - Shouldn't this be a kat?
00:49:390 - A note (preferably a don) would fit nicely here with the 3/4 signature, same in 00:50:407.
01:00:238 - As in Oni.
For the kiai, it would need a few more 1/4 triples, as Oni is heavy in 1/4 patterns, this is an idea I have and that would play nicely without altering the map too much, this is for 01:04:306 - 01:07:017, this song benefits better with kkk triples than with ddd as you have later due how the drums sounds (I'm really bad explaining technical stuff here so I'll just say that), so you may try some kkk in similar spots there too.

01:12:611 (56,59) - Here you could use kat instead, they'd fit better with vocals.
01:16:848 - 01:19:221 - This is certainly a long pattern for this Muzu, but I guess you could cut it nicely with the ideas I gave you above.

Will continue with Futsuu and Kantan later (or tomorrow) = =
Nardoxyribonucleic

DakeDekaane wrote:

Fast™

[General]
:!: Title: DARAKENA (TV Size) :arrow: DARAKENA (TV-size) (or only DARAKENA)
Sources: http://vgmdb.net/album/45012 | http://vgmdb.net/album/44447 This will be considered by Nofool.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:19:222 (31,32,33,34) - I think a k d d D pattern would make a nice play along with the other d d d K patterns, as they'd be very similar Done.
00:26:680 (64) - You're basing this part mostly on vocals so removing this one would help to emphasize them better :p As there is a noticeable hit-hat sound, it'd be better to keep the don so that the beat could be mapped.
00:37:527 (120) - ^ ^
00:48:713 (178) - I'd suggest it to make this a kat to make it consistent with the other patterns like this. As 00:48:713 (178) - does not have the snare sound like 00:46:679 (171) - , I think keeping it as d would be fine.
01:00:239 - It'd make more sense to begin the spinner here so the player begins to play it along with vocals. I really want to map the stressed sound at 01:00:239 - with a big note for the sake of better emphasis, so no change here.
01:11:764 (69,70) - Maybe remove (70) and make (69) a don, I think this would follow vocals better (which I think you're basing on) Since the vocal pitch is the highest at 01:11:764 - , mapping it as k is better imo. Furthermore, longer 1/4 patterns would result in a greater impact before the vocal "DARAKENA" appears, so keeping 70 is not bad imo.
01:15:747 (96) - You could remove this to let 01:15:662 (95) emphasize vocals better. Umm... It is a good idea, but I prefer making the second part of the kiai more dense, so two longer 1/4 patterns would be better for achieving the purpose.
01:17:103 (108) - ^Something similar Same as above.
01:27:696 (181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190,191,192,193) - You could try kdddkdddkkkkd here, I think it follows better the drums here. Comparing the background music at 01:27:696 (181,185,189,193) - we could notice that 01:28:035 (185,189) - are higher-pitched. This is the reason why I mapped them as k and the other two as d.

Will continue with Futsuu and Kantan later (or tomorrow) = =
Thanks for your mod~ :)

Update: http://puu.sh/aoVI5.rar
Topic Starter
Nofool

DakeDekaane wrote:

Fast™

[General]
:!: Title: DARAKENA (TV Size) :arrow: DARAKENA (TV-size) (or only DARAKENA)
Sources: http://vgmdb.net/album/45012 | http://vgmdb.net/album/44447 done

[Oni]
dem kiai fla..*shot*
The sudden speed ups in 01:03:628 and 01:14:136 feels very awkward, it'd be better to remove them imo. mm I did it because the instrumental sounds suddenly higher at these moments of the song x_x TKS said SV changes were alright, do I really have to remove these :c ?
00:00:917 - I'd suggest to increase a bit the volume here increased to 30, is it enough ? else I'll have to increase the volume everuwhere i guess.
00:10:408 - The whooshy sound begins here so it's better to begin this spinner here. done
00:13:289 (5,6,7) - This may be just personal taste but I feel a simple d k would help the previous ddk to feel more emphasized, which would fit better as the song is stronger in the first ddk than in the second. ok removed
00:14:645 (13,14,15) - ^ ^
00:17:865 - 00:21:933 - This part is somehow ignoring the song, we have this strong beats for the guitar and drums but we don't have anything in the map that reflects that intensity x.x I'd suggest something like this, where the highlighted notes are big notes. You could make some changes depending of your style. I originally mapped this part on another mp3 and what i did fited way better that other mp3 x_x I must admit that sounds a bit weird now...
well I just did what you suggested, I always had problems mapping this part because the guitare and drums are both high but sounds different and i could not chose one to reallt follow..
00:23:035 - Add a note here, a ddddd would emphasize better this part imo. done, not sure if that really fits better tho
00:39:560 (149) - Making this a don would help to keep your patterns consistent and I also think this way the drums would be followed better true
01:00:239 - It'd make more sense to begin the spinner here so the player begins to play it along with vocals. yep, was hesitating about that
01:09:560 (49) - You could remove this note to make a tiny break here, as this pattern is a bit long. I prefer to keep this, we can hear the k from drums there and there are some break just after this part
01:11:933 (63,64,65,66) - I'd keep using a kkd k here as in the previous pattern. mm i wanna keep kd dk here 'cause it doesn't sound like drums for the kkd k before, and i really wan't to show the difference here as the kiai break will start (idk how to explain ;_;)
01:14:475 (2) - This would compliment better the song being a K, so you have K to emphasize the vocals and d for the drums. If you do, make 01:14:644 (3) a small note. Im mostly following the drums/instrumental here, 01:14:306 (1) is a small note to emphasize that next D.
01:15:831 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern breaks how you use kats on the red ticks, which is a bit bad as the player would be already used with that, I'd suggest something like this. mm ok done, I did it first to follow some pretty low drum beats that sounded like xy xy but they are to low anyways, better follow that red ticks=>blue logic x_x thanks for the type

01:17:187 (16,17,18,19,20) - dk dk k -> d kd dk for the same reason as above. ^
01:18:543 (26,27,28,29) - As in 01:15:831 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:27:611 (91) - This note feels a bit weird to begin the stream, maybe remove it? I'll keep it for now and maybe remove later, I played it alot to be sure and it felt alright
01:27:695 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102) - I'd suggest you to try a kdddkdddkkk for this stream, it'd fit better the drums imo yeah what you suggest fits better drums but what I did still fit a bit the song and I want to keep the end a bit challenging with a pattern a bit more complex.

[Muzukashii]
Yes, there are some flaws in the Muzu, but I guess this can be easily fixed :P

The speed ups really feel awkward while playing, better keeping the same speed here. removed
00:10:239 (1) - Same as Oni. done (also in the kantan)
00:12:442 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is the pattern that represents the music better here, you should base on this one for the rest of this section. Possibliy adding a don in 00:13:628 would play nicer (the result would be a d k kdkdd). done
00:17:526 (23,24,25,26) - Here you could use kkk d, so the new don will be consistent with later patterns here. done
00:18:713 - I'd suggest to add a note here to make a nice syncopation, which would be interesting to play. Also add a note in 00:20:069. both done
00:20:238 (34) - Shouldn't this be a kat? d was alright alone but if i have a d on the previous 1/2 yeah that should be a k
00:49:390 - A note (preferably a don) would fit nicely here with the 3/4 signature, same in 00:50:407. mm nothing important to follow there but yeah that sounds good
01:00:238 - As in Oni. done (also in the kantan)
For the kiai, it would need a few more 1/4 triples, as Oni is heavy in 1/4 patterns, this is an idea I have and that would play nicely without altering the map too much, this is for 01:04:306 - 01:07:017, this song benefits better with kkk triples than with ddd as you have later due how the drums sounds (I'm really bad explaining technical stuff here so I'll just say that), so you may try some kkk in similar spots there too. ok did some changes by adding/changing some ddd to kkk

01:12:611 (56,59) - Here you could use kat instead, they'd fit better with vocals. no change, too much k in a row then imo
01:16:848 - 01:19:221 - This is certainly a long pattern for this Muzu, but I guess you could cut it nicely with the ideas I gave you above. Okay cut it, I did alot of changes in that kiai, if you got time please recheck it a little bit and tell me if that's better.

Will continue with Futsuu and Kantan later (or tomorrow) = =
Thanks a lot! pretty usefull mod x_x did a lot of changes. Im waiting for the Kantan mod now, it prolly needs to be impreoved too.
DakeDekaane
Continuing in another post.

Muzu looks better, just forgot to say to increase the volume in the beginning too, like in Oni.
Also I think you misunderstood me, the spinner should begin in 00:10:408, not in 00:10:069 ;w; (This goes for all your diffs).

[Futsuu]
00:32:443 (67) - You could remove this note so the next note feels more emphasized?
00:43:290 (102) - ^
00:56:849 (130) - Remove this one too so you follow the vocals better here, this note makes this part play a bit awkward as it's mapped on the main beat.
01:14:137 (38,39) - I'd suggest you to change this to kats, the vocals are pretty similar so having d d k feels a bit weird.

[Kantan]
There are many 3/2 patterns for a Kantan, I don't say they're bad, but there shouldn't be too many, let's simplify a bit.
Increase the volume in the beginning like in Oni
00:05:493 (5) - You could remove this note.
00:06:340 (6) - And make this a kat so all this part is consistent.
00:13:119 (2,4,6) - You could delete these notes to make it different from your next parts mapped like this, as this is less intense.
00:29:221 (30,32,34) - You could move this 1/2 beat forward so the rhythm here simplifies to 2/1, similar to what you did in 00:17:865 (10,11,12,13). This goes for 00:40:069 (48,50,52) too.
00:34:136 - A note (preferably a don) is missing here.
00:44:984 (56,57,58) - These 3/2 are actually okay to keep them.
00:52:441 (69,70) - Maybe remove this ones to create a tiny break and separate better both sections in the music.
00:57:695 (78,80) - You could remove these two notes, this part is more quiet than the one I pointed above, so better having less notes :p
01:02:441 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This one can be a bit hard for this Kantan having notes on red ticks and a 1/2 kdd, you could remove the kat notes here and maybe only keep the dons, a pause here would fit nicely to prepare the player to strong music in the kiai.
01:04:812 (4) - You could move this note to 01:04:642 so you this rhythm gets easier to play. This goes for all similar 3/2 patterns in the kiai.
01:09:388 (15) - You could remove this one, to emphasize better the next note, where vocals are a bit stronger, same for 01:20:236 (37).
01:15:490 - You could've missed a note here I think.
01:25:320 (1,2) - As you're using the previous slider for vocals, this notes can be a bit confusing in a Kantan, as the player would be focused on vocals in this spot, so better remove them and let the player begin on vocals again wit 01:25:998 (3). If you do, extend the slider to 01:25:320 to cover completely the vocals.
It may need a bit more of simplifying, feel free to ask me again if you want to and have doubts about it.

Don't kd this post.

This set has potential, good luck =v=
Topic Starter
Nofool

DakeDekaane wrote:

Continuing in another post.

Muzu looks better, just forgot to say to increase the volume in the beginning too, like in Oni.
Also I think you misunderstood me, the spinner should begin in 00:10:408, not in 00:10:069 ;w; (This goes for all your diffs). Ha, okay changed then

[Kantan]
There are many 3/2 patterns for a Kantan, I don't say they're bad, but there shouldn't be too many, let's simplify a bit.
Increase the volume in the beginning like in Oni
00:05:493 (5) - You could remove this note. done
00:06:340 (6) - And make this a kat so all this part is consistent. done
00:13:119 (2,4,6) - You could delete these notes to make it different from your next parts mapped like this, as this is less intense. done
00:29:221 (30,32,34) - You could move this 1/2 beat forward so the rhythm here simplifies to 2/1, similar to what you did in 00:17:865 (10,11,12,13). This goes for 00:40:069 (48,50,52) too. ok done, sounds a bit weird but alright for a Kantan i guess x)
00:34:136 - A note (preferably a don) is missing here. added
00:44:984 (56,57,58) - These 3/2 are actually okay to keep them.
00:52:441 (69,70) - Maybe remove this ones to create a tiny break and separate better both sections in the music. done
00:57:695 (78,80) - You could remove these two notes, this part is more quiet than the one I pointed above, so better having less notes :p yeah that sounds better without anyways
01:02:441 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This one can be a bit hard for this Kantan having notes on red ticks and a 1/2 kdd, you could remove the kat notes here and maybe only keep the dons, a pause here would fit nicely to prepare the player to strong music in the kiai. removed, i was looking for a solution there yeah...
01:04:812 (4) - You could move this note to 01:04:642 so you this rhythm gets easier to play. This goes for all similar 3/2 patterns in the kiai. ok changes that
01:09:388 (15) - You could remove this one, to emphasize better the next note, where vocals are a bit stronger, same for 01:20:236 (37). true, done
01:15:490 - You could've missed a note here I think. yeah i had to add something anyways, following your rpevious suggestion õ_o
01:25:320 (1,2) - As you're using the previous slider for vocals, this notes can be a bit confusing in a Kantan, as the player would be focused on vocals in this spot, so better remove them and let the player begin on vocals again wit 01:25:998 (3). If you do, extend the slider to 01:25:320 to cover completely the vocals. yep, done
It may need a bit more of simplifying, feel free to ask me again if you want to and have doubts about it.

Don't kd this post.

This set has potential i hope so ;_; , good luck =v=
Thanks again for the huge help! everything sounds better
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