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Ayachi-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-24-14 at 11:07:14 PM

Artist: ZUN
Title: Naki Oujyo no Tame no Septet ~ U. N. Owen wa Kanojyo nano ka?
Source: Touhou
Tags: 東方 project 紅魔鄉 vocal ShikiNoHollow
BPM: 146
Filesize: 15229kb
Play Time: 06:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab Marathon - 4Key (3.34 stars, 2783 notes)
Download: ZUN - Naki Oujyo no Tame no Septet ~ U. N. Owen wa Kanojyo nano ka?
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Music from Touhou
Beatmap By me and ShikiNoHollow
first 50% by me
second 50% by ShikiNoHollow
Done!!
Mod Please!!

Thank you yoshilove for all bpm changes!!
First time adding hitsounds myself
Going for approval
Special Thanks
yoshilove for bpm changes and audio suggestion
- [ S o r a ] - for bpm
Total_b00st for teaching me how to do bpm changes
hutunohito for mod
ArcherLove for mod
Dave-for mod
Yuutosanfor mod
aitor98for mod
lordraikafor mod
Dave-for opening and mod
Simple_starfor mod
Soldsaga KunGfor mod
Chnagelog
2014/6/24 Fixed BPM and Offest
2014/6/25 Change Audio and remap
2014/6/29 finished map
2014/6/29 apply mods
2014/6/30 apply mods
2014/7/1 Apply mods and start making hitsounds
SReisen
kakkoi!! :D
PVJ4U
Awesome!
Also glad I'm not the only one who likes 4K. :D
Unless, you going to change it.... nvm. :(
Dave-_old
If done i wanna modding your beatmap ^_^
SpiceSoul_old
Well all i can say is it looks very hard and great everything is timed and i don't see any problems.
you did good my friend :)
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

SpiceSoul wrote:

Well all i can say is it looks very hard and great everything is timed and i don't see any problems.
you did good my friend :)
Well,I think there are lots of things to improve
Still thank you for checking it
AppleKruit
23:21 [ S a k u r a ]: idunno how to change bpm in the middle
23:21 ToTaL_B00ST: ...
23:21 [ S a k u r a ]: and i dunno how to change that either
23:21 ToTaL_B00ST: :D
23:21 ToTaL_B00ST: i know how to do it
23:21 ToTaL_B00ST: but
23:21 [ S a k u r a ]: i am messaging eeryone to ask
23:22 ToTaL_B00ST: i did it in my map
23:22 ToTaL_B00ST: lol
23:22 ToTaL_B00ST: u don't need to
23:22 ToTaL_B00ST: want me to guide u?
23:22 [ S a k u r a ]: my song is song sompliation
23:22 [ S a k u r a ]: so i might have to
23:22 [ S a k u r a ]: sure
23:23 ToTaL_B00ST: go to edit it
23:23 *[ S a k u r a ] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/440850 ZUN - Nakijonotamenoseputetto ~ U. N. en wa kanojona no ka? [Marathon]]
23:23 ToTaL_B00ST: go to timing
23:23 ToTaL_B00ST: wait first
23:23 [ S a k u r a ]: yesh
23:23 ToTaL_B00ST: go to the place u want to speed up/slow down
23:23 ToTaL_B00ST: in the time
23:23 [ S a k u r a ]: yesh
23:23 ToTaL_B00ST: idk how to say that
23:24 [ S a k u r a ]: i did that
23:24 ToTaL_B00ST: now at that exact spot
23:24 [ S a k u r a ]: i understand
23:24 ToTaL_B00ST: go to timing
23:24 [ S a k u r a ]: yesh
23:24 ToTaL_B00ST: then click the "timing setup panel"
23:24 ToTaL_B00ST: then
23:24 ToTaL_B00ST: press the pretty green + sign
23:25 [ S a k u r a ]: i cant type when i open that just keep typing
23:25 ToTaL_B00ST: then, if it says "inherit previous timing settings"
23:25 ToTaL_B00ST: its probably checked by default, so uncheck it
23:26 ToTaL_B00ST: then u can change the bpm
23:26 ToTaL_B00ST: just remember to
23:26 ToTaL_B00ST: change the bpm back to normal
23:26 ToTaL_B00ST: when u want the song to go back to normal speed
23:27 ToTaL_B00ST: u should also try the slider viciety
23:27 ToTaL_B00ST: however u spell that
23:27 ToTaL_B00ST: idk if it will work in editing mania though
23:27 [ S a k u r a ]: wheres the slider thingy
23:28 [ S a k u r a ]: found it
23:28 ToTaL_B00ST: if u inherit previous settings
23:28 ToTaL_B00ST: it lets u change it
1. Go to edit
2. Go to the place u want to speed up/slow down on the time
3. Next go to timing
4. Then click the "Timing Setup Panel"
5. Then press the green + sign
6. Next if it says "inherit previous timing settings" and that is checked, un-check it (checked by default)
7. Then you can change the bpm to whatever you want (higher bpm = faster)
Just remember to change the bpm back to normal when you want the song to do normal speed
yoshilove
hi~ from PM

It's very awkward.
example, this map
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/203906

please ask BAT???


and... Romanised Title is wrong
Nakijonotamenoseputetto ~ U. N. en wa kanojona no ka?
Naki Oujyo no Tame no Septet ~ U. N. Owen wa Kanojyo nano ka?

I can't check BPM and Offset in this song.... sorry ><


32kbps Bitrate is Unrankable
plz 128kbps ~ 192kbps

BG... use 4:3 or 16:9
1024*768 ~ 1366*768 etc...

https://www.dropbox.com/s/mvpxppghdgze4 ... 218644.jpg
(1024*768) puush.... error..... ww lol


nya~
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

yoshilove wrote:

hi~ from PM

It's very awkward.
example, this map
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/203906

please ask BAT???


and... Romanised Title is wrong
Nakijonotamenoseputetto ~ U. N. en wa kanojona no ka?
Naki Oujyo no Tame no Septet ~ U. N. Owen wa Kanojyo nano ka?

I can't check BPM and Offset in this song.... sorry ><


32kbps Bitrate is Unrankable
plz 128kbps ~ 192kbps

BG... use 4:3 or 16:9
1024*768 ~ 1366*768 etc...

https://www.dropbox.com/s/mvpxppghdgze4 ... 218644.jpg
(1024*768) puush.... error..... ww lol


nya~
Thank you
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

PVJ4U wrote:

Awesome!
Also glad I'm not the only one who likes 4K. :D
Unless, you going to change it.... nvm. :(
I won't change it ;)
PVJ4U

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

PVJ4U wrote:

Awesome!
Also glad I'm not the only one who likes 4K. :D
Unless, you going to change it.... nvm. :(
I won't change it ;)
Yay 4K party!! :) :D
yoshilove
This post Nokudos Because I get to before.
~ from PM

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Hello, can you check the bpm of my map at 02:24:879 ?
thank you
t/217560
this is ~ about offset (Not accurate )

BPM check Done.
sorry. if I have wrong.

-------------------------------------------
Open .osu in Notepad
Copy Paste~
[TimingPoints]
12746,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
13362,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
79937,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
145629,378.548895899054,5,2,0,8,1,0
160770,378.548895899054,4,2,0,8,1,0
277215,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
296941,410.958904109589,3,2,0,8,1,0
316667,416.666666666667,4,2,0,8,1,0
356667,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0

and, Fix Notes plz~~

thank you change mp3~ (live ---> original)
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

yoshilove wrote:

This post Nokudos ahahahahahahahaahhahahahahahahahahahahhhhBecause I get to before.
~ from PM

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Hello, can you check the bpm of my map at 02:24:879 ?
thank you
t/217560
this is ~ about offset (Not accurate )

BPM check Done.
sorry. if I have wrong.

-------------------------------------------
Open .osu in Notepad
Copy Paste~
[TimingPoints]
12746,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
13362,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
79526,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
79936,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
145629,378.548895899054,5,2,0,8,1,0
160770,378.548895899054,4,2,0,8,1,0
277215,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
296941,410.958904109589,3,2,0,8,1,0
316667,416.666666666667,4,2,0,8,1,0
356667,410.958904109589,4,2,0,8,1,0
Done!

and, Fix Notes plz~~ ok

thank you change mp3~ (live ---> original) ; )
Thanks, and I pressed kudo by accident :o I was too exited
shionelove
oisu
Here's my mod

00:16:033 (16033|1,16135|2) - !?
00:18:498 (18498|1,18601|0) - !?

Resnap is not perfect by Auto
You should resnap by hand
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

hutunohito wrote:

oisu
Here's my mod

00:16:033 (16033|1,16135|2) - !?
00:18:498 (18498|1,18601|0) - !?

Resnap is not perfect by Auto
You should resnap by hand
Thanks for pointing all those out I will recheck everything
ArcherLove

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

exited
oh 4K, I can't mod 4K but .. I will try maybe ?

adsgakjfbkjsandjaklsgnal
collumn : 1~4

HP 8 pls this map too ez for hp 7

00:19:988 (19988|2) - I think I didn't hear a sound here.. ( use 45% playback rate) delete ?
00:21:632 (21632|2) - ^
00:22:043 (22043|1) - ^
00:39:663 (39663|1,39663|2) - move to 1-4 ?
00:48:293 (48293|1) - delete
01:02:779 (62779|1) - ... ? ^
01:02:060 (62060|1,62266|1,62471|2) - this sound deserve 2 note
01:02:779 (62779|1) - ...? delete ?
01:04:218 (64218|3) - ^
02:09:867 - add note ?

c'mon you can make it harder ....

good luck ~
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

ArcherLove wrote:

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

exited Yes I am
oh 4K, I can't mod 4K but .. I will try maybe ?

adsgakjfbkjsandjaklsgnal
collumn : 1~4

HP 8 pls this map too ez for hp 7

00:19:988 (19988|2) - I think I didn't hear a sound here.. ( use 45% playback rate) delete ? Deleted
00:21:632 (21632|2) - ^ ^
00:22:043 (22043|1) - ^^
00:39:663 (39663|1,39663|2) - move to 1-4 ? moved
00:48:293 (48293|1) - delete done
01:02:779 (62779|1) - ... ? ^ ^
01:02:060 (62060|1,62266|1,62471|2) - this sound deserve 2 note Added
01:02:779 (62779|1) - ...? delete ? done
01:04:218 (64218|3) - ^ ^
02:09:867 - add note ? Added a note

c'mon you can make it harder .... I'm bad at harder maps hehe, you will see me spamming LNs

good luck ~ Thank you~

Thank you for the mod ~ ◕‿◕
Dave-_old
Here mod by request in PM
Really I cant mod for 3min+ duration..
but for this time okay, I'll do it

Coloumn : l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l

Mod in Box >.<
I Have pattern for 00:00:211 until 00:12:540 ..
and I save it to new diff >.< download here..

https://www.dropbox.com/s/xeenyap1xjs6e ... ern%5D.osu

00:36:375 (36375|0) - Change with normal note, >.<

00:36:683 - add note in coloumn 0

00:44:594 - LN end 00:45:211 ?

00:56:923 (56923|3) - Move to col 0

00:57:129 (57129|0) - ^ 3

01:00:416 - u dont use double note here?

01:07:094 - add note to col 1

01:12:129 - ^ 3

01:59:490 (119490|1,119490|0) - delete

01:59:799 - add note to col 0

06:08:173 (368173|3) - change with LN and end 06:11:461

u dont add Kiai mode?

Thats all, nice marathon O.o
- Yuuto -
Konnichiwa desu

Here's my mod as requested

[General]
Fine

[Marathon]
00:14:800 (14800|2) - move to 4 and
00:15:005 - add note to 3
00:15:005 (15005|1) - should be end here 00:15:827
00:23:225 - add note to 3 just like 00:24:663 (24663|0,24663|2)
00:38:019 (38019|2,38019|0) - lift up to 00:38:841
00:46:649 (46649|2) - move to 1 to follow the pitch
00:46:649 (46649|2) - delete
01:03:909 (63909|0) - ^
02:16:340 (136340|1,136442|2) - ctrl + h
03:21:653 (201653|2) - move to 4
05:12:557 (312557|3,312557|2) - re arrenge become 1&3
05:28:750 (328750|1) - move to 1
06:00:160 - add note

Wow 1st 4k marathon's mapset. I just pointed the major thing, the overall is fine...
Good luck with yours marathon!
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

Dave- wrote:

Here mod by request in PM
Really I cant mod for 3min+ duration..
but for this time okay, I'll do it

Coloumn : l 0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l

Mod in Box >.<
I Have pattern for 00:00:211 until 00:12:540 ..
and I save it to new diff >.< download here..

https://www.dropbox.com/s/xeenyap1xjs6e ... ern%5D.osu

thank you , applied
00:36:375 (36375|0) - Change with normal note, >.< fixed

00:36:683 - add note in coloumn 0fixed

00:44:594 - LN end 00:45:211 ?fixed

00:56:923 (56923|3) - Move to col 0fixed

00:57:129 (57129|0) - ^ 3fixed

01:00:416 - u dont use double note here?fixed

01:07:094 - add note to col 1fixed

01:12:129 - ^ 3fixed

01:59:490 (119490|1,119490|0) - deletefixed

01:59:799 - add note to col 0fixed

06:08:173 (368173|3) - change with LN and end 06:11:461

u dont add Kiai mode?

Thats all, nice marathon O.o
Thank you for the mod ><
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

Yuutosan wrote:

Konnichiwa desu

Here's my mod as requested

[General]
Fine

[Marathon]
00:14:800 (14800|2) - move to 4 andfixed
00:15:005 - add note to 3fixed
00:15:005 (15005|1) - should be end here 00:15:827 fixed
00:23:225 - add note to 3 just like 00:24:663 (24663|0,24663|2) fixed
00:38:019 (38019|2,38019|0) - lift up to 00:38:841 fixed
00:46:649 (46649|2) - move to 1 to follow the pitchfixed
00:46:649 (46649|2) - deleteWhat?^
01:03:909 (63909|0) - ^fixed
02:16:340 (136340|1,136442|2) - ctrl + hfixed
03:21:653 (201653|2) - move to 4fixed
05:12:557 (312557|3,312557|2) - re arrenge become 1&3fixed
05:28:750 (328750|1) - move to 1fixed
06:00:160 - add note fixed

Wow 1st 4k marathon's mapset. I just pointed the major thing, the overall is fine...
Good luck with yours marathon!
Thank you for the mod!
aitor98
Hi from queue :3

Keys: 1|2|3|4


00:33:807 - I think that LN ends here 00:34:218 - .
00:36:683 - I didn't listen anything there.
01:13:670 - Remove note 1.
01:53:839 - That stream starts here I think 01:54:045 - .
02:38:121 (158121|2) - Suggestion http://puu.sh/9Sm6U/4c939d1a43.jpg

Nice map!
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

aitor98 wrote:

Hi from queue :3

Keys: 1|2|3|4


00:33:807 - I think that LN ends here 00:34:218 - .fixed
00:36:683 - I didn't listen anything there.fixed
01:13:670 - Remove note 1.There is a F sound
01:53:839 - That stream starts here I think 01:54:045 - .fixed
02:38:121 (158121|2) - Suggestion http://puu.sh/9Sm6U/4c939d1a43.jpgfixed

Nice map!
Thank you for the mod!
LordRaika
Request Mod from Lightning Speed Mania Modding

osuu~ :)
sry for the delay, orz
massive update on my beatmap...

BTW, even uve jst got MOD, he doesnt even mention the major important things...
here...

Column |1-4|

Full mod usually points out something important to HELP your beatmap improve, pls dont mistake it as modders
trying to comment or pointing out your mistake or giving bad comment, its jst a suggestion to help mapper :)
Full Mod Inside
[General]
Check AiMod,
there are lots of unsnapped objects, like 1/3 parts, jst try to move it Once again into the correct grid line...
well im certain this is not your fault but this bug happens if u have more than 1 uninherited timing point...
pls USE inherited timing point for all tht have the same BPM....
(i knw its there to divide the collab role... but yeah , pls use the green one instead...)

correct this objects error first...


well
F4 > search tags...
remove "touhou" since the source already contains this metadata... ^^/

[Marathon]
Guys, i hope u two are aware of this LEFT hand piano sound... its full 1/2 left hand piano like this....

01:24:867 (84867|3,85072|0,85278|3,85483|0,85689|3,85894|0) -
01:28:155 (88155|3,88360|1,88566|3,88771|1,88977|3,89182|1) - u r doing it right ^^/
01:31:648 (91648|3,92059|3,92470|3) - but this and
02:14:388 (134388|0,134388|3,134593|1,134799|0,134799|3,135004|3,135209|0,135209|1,135415|3) -
to be honest, pls dont chord this kind of sound...

how come the chord increase for all of them? from 1 notes before with the same sound level...

03:35:280 - full 1/2 piano sound from here too, its like 1 2 1 2 , 2 1 2 1 , 1 2 1 2, 2 1 2 1
(yeah, left hand piano sound tht flows with the BGM always create a repeating sound with low pitch)

why i mention this? because it seems a bit unconsistent to normally focusing on mapping the right hand piano hand, suddenly u guys add left hand piano sound...
then suddenly ignore it again but chording the right hand tht only use mostly 1 notes all the time...
i suggest jst mapped both of them ^^/ , chord when the 1/2 left hand goes at the same time with the right hand... never chord more than tht...


01:52:812 - pattern suggest >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1773733 this the relevancy tht ive heard...
but wait... i think everything seems to off from their proper line...
basically im certain its not ur fault but...

01:46:853 - missing notes, the notes is here btw >>> 01:46:956 (106956|1) -

01:48:017 - 1/3 notes, it should be here... from this 01:47:983 (107983|1,107983|3) -

01:48:154 - 1/3 notes, just 1 notes....not 01:48:086 (108086|0,108189|3) -

01:48:394 (108394|3,108394|2,108600|0,108600|1) - this too should be on 1/3
01:48:702 - starting from here, yes its 1/4

01:49:524 - this is what i heard (pitcth relevancy) >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1773766 , also yeah i dont like overchording... so i remove them

01:51:031 (111031|2) - OMG XD looks really off imo

01:53:840 (113840|1,113891|2,113942|3,113994|2,114045|1) - this, >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1773782
oops uve jst fixed this...

X_X dunno how come ur notes doesnt snapped properly...but u should fix them first..
i wnt to point it all out , but im certain ull hate me after thaat XD wahaha...
tht will makes a long mod , also u guys wont love to read loooong F!@#$king mod... XD

Well , thts all for now ^^
u can call me again later after u fix those...
yeah yeah i knw XD im jst a grand piano freak... ahaha
well it cnt be help since i love piano sound, u can check my grand piano keysounding for EVERY notes...
Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size),
BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED- (TV Size)
or
Suzuki Konomi - This Game (TV Size)
(jst to shw u how i love piano sound XD ...)

nice touhou song ^^/
GL
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

lordraika wrote:

Request Mod from Lightning Speed Mania Modding

osuu~ :)
sry for the delay, orz
massive update on my beatmap...

BTW, even uve jst got MOD, he doesnt even mention the major important things...
here...

Column |1-4|

Full mod usually points out something important to HELP your beatmap improve, pls dont mistake it as modders
trying to comment or pointing out your mistake or giving bad comment, its jst a suggestion to help mapper :)
Full Mod Inside
[General]
Check AiMod,
there are lots of unsnapped objects, like 1/3 parts, jst try to move it Once again into the correct grid line...
well im certain this is not your fault but this bug happens if u have more than 1 uninherited timing point...
pls USE inherited timing point for all tht have the same BPM....
(i knw its there to divide the collab role... but yeah , pls use the green one instead...)

correct this objects error first...


well
F4 > search tags...
remove "touhou" since the source already contains this metadata... ^^/

[Marathon]
Guys, i hope u two are aware of this LEFT hand piano sound... its full 1/2 left hand piano like this....

01:24:867 (84867|3,85072|0,85278|3,85483|0,85689|3,85894|0) -
01:28:155 (88155|3,88360|1,88566|3,88771|1,88977|3,89182|1) - u r doing it right ^^/
01:31:648 (91648|3,92059|3,92470|3) - but this and
02:14:388 (134388|0,134388|3,134593|1,134799|0,134799|3,135004|3,135209|0,135209|1,135415|3) -
to be honest, pls dont chord this kind of sound...

how come the chord increase for all of them? from 1 notes before with the same sound level...

03:35:280 - full 1/2 piano sound from here too, its like 1 2 1 2 , 2 1 2 1 , 1 2 1 2, 2 1 2 1
(yeah, left hand piano sound tht flows with the BGM always create a repeating sound with low pitch)

why i mention this? because it seems a bit unconsistent to normally focusing on mapping the right hand piano hand, suddenly u guys add left hand piano sound...
then suddenly ignore it again but chording the right hand tht only use mostly 1 notes all the time...
i suggest jst mapped both of them ^^/ , chord when the 1/2 left hand goes at the same time with the right hand... never chord more than tht...


01:52:812 - pattern suggest >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1773733 this the relevancy tht ive heard...
but wait... i think everything seems to off from their proper line...
basically im certain its not ur fault but...

01:46:853 - missing notes, the notes is here btw >>> 01:46:956 (106956|1) -

01:48:017 - 1/3 notes, it should be here... from this 01:47:983 (107983|1,107983|3) -

01:48:154 - 1/3 notes, just 1 notes....not 01:48:086 (108086|0,108189|3) -

01:48:394 (108394|3,108394|2,108600|0,108600|1) - this too should be on 1/3
01:48:702 - starting from here, yes its 1/4

01:49:524 - this is what i heard (pitcth relevancy) >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1773766 , also yeah i dont like overchording... so i remove them

01:51:031 (111031|2) - OMG XD looks really off imo

01:53:840 (113840|1,113891|2,113942|3,113994|2,114045|1) - this, >>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1773782
oops uve jst fixed this...

X_X dunno how come ur notes doesnt snapped properly...but u should fix them first..
i wnt to point it all out , but im certain ull hate me after thaat XD wahaha...
tht will makes a long mod , also u guys wont love to read loooong F!@#$king mod... XD

Well , thts all for now ^^
u can call me again later after u fix those...
yeah yeah i knw XD im jst a grand piano freak... ahaha
well it cnt be help since i love piano sound, u can check my grand piano keysounding for EVERY notes...
Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size),
BRYNHILDR IN THE DARKNESS -Ver. EJECTED- (TV Size)
or
Suzuki Konomi - This Game (TV Size)
(jst to shw u how i love piano sound XD ...)

nice touhou song ^^/
GL


Thank you very much Fixed everything
Deep Sea
Hi Sakura :P
mod ready

[Marathon]
00:35:964 - Suggesting : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1776361
00:43:978 - add note
00:44:183 - ^
00:56:923 - ^
01:08:430 - ^
01:08:738 - ^
01:20:757 - ^
01:21:374 - ^
01:24:045 - ^
01:26:511 - ^
01:40:483 - ^
02:44:555 - move a note from the second column to the third
02:54:397 - add note
02:54:775 - ^
02:54:965 - ^
03:20:264 - 03:21:904 - Suggesting : http://puu.sh/9TGzP/4107db2e55.avi
04:15:027 - add note

Good luck ! :oops:
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

[Shana Lesus] wrote:

Hi Sakura :P
mod ready

[Marathon]
00:35:964 - Suggesting : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1776361 Fixed
00:43:978 - add note Fixed
00:44:183 - ^ Fixed
00:56:923 - ^ I don't think it should be added here, but added at the next note
01:08:430 - ^ Fixed
01:08:738 - ^ Fixed
01:20:757 - ^Don't think this is strong enough for the second note
01:21:374 - ^^
01:24:045 - ^ Fixed
01:26:511 - ^ Fixed
01:40:483 - ^Same as the green one up there
02:44:555 - move a note from the second column to the third Fixed
02:54:397 - add note Fixed
02:54:775 - ^ Fixed
02:54:965 - ^ Fixed
03:20:264 - 03:21:904 - Suggesting : http://puu.sh/9TGzP/4107db2e55.avi Fixed
04:15:027 - add note Fixed

Good luck ! :oops:

Thank you very much for the mod!><
Bruce
Hello~Mod by request.前半部分如果有些问题比较严重需要说明的话我会用中文
Column:1 2 3 4
Red Color:Warning or Unrankable Issue
Green Color:Think it over
[General]
这个中文没问题吧 你要APP的话要有Hitsound 以及Volume不能低于30%
刚看了下 有用ogg文件 但是非常残念..现在ogg是unrankable的
[Marathon]
00:00:417 (417|2) - Haven't sound here

00:06:581 - Miss piano sound.Suggest you add it

00:18:498 (18498|1,18704|0,18909|2,18909|1) - 你这个抓的有点点问题.前面的轻钢琴音都没抓 这里突然抓了 你取舍一下 都抓或者都不抓

00:19:885 (19885|0) - ..这是什么 这里没音的吧亲

00:20:245 (20245|0,20296|1) - Overmap有点严重啊 这里也没音的

00:21:529 (21529|0,21940|3) - 这个 不用说了吧 也是Overmap

00:21:529 (21529|0,21940|3) - 和之前一样的 突然抓了一段之前没有的音 这个需要注意

00:42:745 (42745|2) - Move to 2.

00:43:772 - ~ 00:51:581 - 之后的问题也有些大 不过和前面一样的问题...抓到一半突然窜出来了别的音 要么只抓一个音轨 要么全都抓上去 这样抓一半给玩家的感觉也是不太好的

00:53:225 (53225|3) - 抓的不是同样的音 而且之后轻重音没区分 所以这个Move to 00:53:430 -

00:55:690 (55690|1) - Move to 1 音高在这里是先变低在变高的

01:10:896 - 这边懂你的意思了 但是如果是这样的话请把第二排的所有键移到1
01:12:129 - 01:12:334 - 然后这边各Add a Note

01:13:567 (73567|2) - Move to 01:13:670 - It is Heavy piano

01:17:060 (77060|2) - Hasn't sound But 01:16:957 - Here is heavy piano.You can move to 01:16:957 -

01:21:579 - 嗯..你这边是这样抓的 01:28:155 - 但这边呢 在考虑一下吧

01:43:566 - ~ 01:44:593 - 这边突然没放Note了 在01:44:798 - 之后又有相同的音冒出来了

01:46:134 (106134|2) - Change to Note.Here hasn't long Sound

01:49:422 (109422|3) - Move to 3.Too unhumanity

01:52:504 (112504|2) - Here hasn't sound

01:53:839 (113839|1,113890|2,113942|3,113993|2) - 听音更加仔细一点吧 这里还是1/4的

01:54:918 (114918|0,114918|3) - Hasn't sound

01:54:918 (114918|3,114918|0,116819|0,116819|3) - Hasn't Sound

01:57:332 - 你如果要3Notes也应该是在这放3个
01:57:538 - 以及这里至少2个

01:57:435 (117435|2,117435|3,117436|0) - 而且这里根本没音

01:57:641 (117641|0,117641|2) - 也是没音

02:01:031 - ~ 02:01:853 - 亲 这里是1/3

02:03:599 (123599|0,123703|2) - 这两个没音 然后这里是1/3

02:04:010 (124010|3,124113|1) - 这两个也没音 而且是1/3

02:04:729 - 滑条的结尾和起始还有Note都应该是在这里开始

02:09:866 - Double Notes here.The same likes 02:09:764 - Sound

02:09:969 (129969|1,129970|0) - Haven't Sound

02:12:435 - Add a Note at 4.Miss piano Sound here

02:21:990 - Has 1/4 Sound.Suggest you add it

03:15:596 (195596|3,195975|3,196353|3) - 这个排列不太好 建议不要3个连点 放在双手都能打的位置

03:17:110 - 第一版Mod就到这里..问题还是不少的 如果你改完了叫我来第二次以及告诉我你的part是到哪里结束

Good Luck~
Soldsaga KunG
Mania Mod :D

Column : 1|2|3|4

Marathon
01:28:771 (88771|1) - move to 1
01:31:853 (91853|2) - move to 4
02:14:799 (134799|0,135620|0) - move to 2

Good Beatmaps ^^ Good Luck :) :)
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello~Mod by request.前半部分如果有些问题比较严重需要说明的话我会用中文
Column:1 2 3 4
Red Color:Warning or Unrankable Issue
Green Color:Think it over
[General]
这个中文没问题吧 你要APP的话要有Hitsound 以及Volume不能低于30%
刚看了下 有用ogg文件 但是非常残念..现在ogg是unrankable的 尋找替代檔案中
[Marathon]
00:00:417 (417|2) - Haven't sound here 已修正

00:06:581 - Miss piano sound.Suggest you add it 已修正

00:18:498 (18498|1,18704|0,18909|2,18909|1) - 你这个抓的有点点问题.前面的轻钢琴音都没抓 这里突然抓了 你取舍一下 都抓或者都不抓 已修正

00:19:885 (19885|0) - ..这是什么 这里没音的吧亲 已修正

00:20:245 (20245|0,20296|1) - Overmap有点严重啊 这里也没音的 已修正

00:21:529 (21529|0,21940|3) - 这个 不用说了吧 也是Overmap 已修正

00:21:529 (21529|0,21940|3) - 和之前一样的 突然抓了一段之前没有的音 这个需要注意 ????????????

00:42:745 (42745|2) - Move to 2. 已修正

00:43:772 - ~ 00:51:581 - 之后的问题也有些大 不过和前面一样的问题...抓到一半突然窜出来了别的音 要么只抓一个音轨 要么全都抓上去 这样抓一半给玩家的感觉也是不太好的 盡可能的修正了

00:53:225 (53225|3) - 抓的不是同样的音 而且之后轻重音没区分 所以这个Move to 00:53:430 - 已修正

00:55:690 (55690|1) - Move to 1 音高在这里是先变低在变高的 已修正

01:10:896 - 这边懂你的意思了 但是如果是这样的话请把第二排的所有键移到1 已修正
01:12:129 - 01:12:334 - 然后这边各Add a Note 已修正

01:13:567 (73567|2) - Move to 01:13:670 - It is Heavy piano 已修正

01:17:060 (77060|2) - Hasn't sound But 01:16:957 - Here is heavy piano.You can move to 01:16:957 - 已修正

01:21:579 - 嗯..你这边是这样抓的 01:28:155 - 但这边呢 在考虑一下吧 已修正

01:43:566 - ~ 01:44:593 - 这边突然没放Note了 在01:44:798 - 之后又有相同的音冒出来了 已修正

01:46:134 (106134|2) - Change to Note.Here hasn't long Sound 已修正

01:49:422 (109422|3) - Move to 3.Too unhumanity 已修正

01:52:504 (112504|2) - Here hasn't sound 已修正

01:53:839 (113839|1,113890|2,113942|3,113993|2) - 听音更加仔细一点吧 这里还是1/4的 已修正

01:54:918 (114918|0,114918|3) - Hasn't sound 已修正

01:54:918 (114918|3,114918|0,116819|0,116819|3) - Hasn't Sound 已修正

01:57:332 - 你如果要3Notes也应该是在这放3个 已修正
01:57:538 - 以及这里至少2个 已修正

01:57:435 (117435|2,117435|3,117436|0) - 而且这里根本没音 已修正

01:57:641 (117641|0,117641|2) - 也是没音 已修正

02:01:031 - ~ 02:01:853 - 亲 这里是1/3 已修正

02:03:599 (123599|0,123703|2) - 这两个没音 然后这里是1/3 已修正

02:04:010 (124010|3,124113|1) - 这两个也没音 而且是1/3 已修正

02:04:729 - 滑条的结尾和起始还有Note都应该是在这里开始 已修正

02:09:866 - Double Notes here.The same likes 02:09:764 - Sound 已修正

02:09:969 (129969|1,129970|0) - Haven't Sound 已修正

02:12:435 - Add a Note at 4.Miss piano Sound here 已修正

02:21:990 - Has 1/4 Sound.Suggest you add it 已修正

03:15:596 (195596|3,195975|3,196353|3) - 这个排列不太好 建议不要3个连点 放在双手都能打的位置 已修正

03:17:110 - 第一版Mod就到这里..问题还是不少的 如果你改完了叫我来第二次以及告诉我你的part是到哪里结束

Good Luck~
感恩~~

Soldsaga KunG wrote:

Mania Mod :D

Column : 1|2|3|4

Marathon
01:28:771 (88771|1) - move to 1 I think it is same note as the one before and after, so no change
01:31:853 (91853|2) - move to 4 ^
02:14:799 (134799|0,135620|0) - move to 2 move the next note instead

Good Beatmaps ^^ Good Luck :) :)
Sorry for the rejections, still thank you for mod !
Fuuyu
Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue




*Mp3 --> OK

*BG --> Nyan~LINK
-Cropped to 16:9
-Resized to 1024*576
-Improved Photo Quality
-Added Photo Effect
-Hope you like it :)


Nyan~MOD
Important : The way I'll be modding is to NOT change your mapping style so sorry if I only modded few :(


Column |1|2|3|4|

[Marathon]
00:07:403 Move to 3
00:07:609 Move to 4
00:08:225 Move to 1
00:09:047 Move to 3
00:09:252 Move to 4
00:09:869 Move to 1
00:12:540 Move the note from 3 to 1
00:12:745 Move to 3
00:15:005 Change the LN to note


00:20:348 Change the LN to note


00:42:745 Move note from 2 to 1
00:48:498 Remove
01:01:033 Move from 4 to 1
02:15:209 Move to 1
02:57:993 Move to 4
03:11:431 Move to 3
03:12:188 Move to 4
03:25:185 Remove 1 note ( not needed )
03:58:561 Move to 3
03:58:750 Move the note from 3 to 1
05:21:042 until 05:21:667 to be followed

That's All, LOL Piano Versions . . :shock:
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

xLoupGarou wrote:

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue




*Mp3 --> OK

*BG --> Nyan~LINK
-Cropped to 16:9
-Resized to 1024*576
-Improved Photo Quality
-Added Photo Effect
-Hope you like it :)


Nyan~MOD
Important : The way I'll be modding is to NOT change your mapping style so sorry if I only modded few :(


Column |1|2|3|4|

[Marathon]
00:07:403 Move to 3
00:07:609 Move to 4
00:08:225 Move to 1
00:09:047 Move to 3
00:09:252 Move to 4
00:09:869 Move to 1
00:12:540 Move the note from 3 to 1
00:12:745 Move to 3
00:15:005 Change the LN to note Stays the same because the sound is pressed


00:20:348 Change the LN to note


00:42:745 Move note from 2 to 1
00:48:498 Remove
01:01:033 Move from 4 to 1
02:15:209 Move to 1
02:57:993 Move to 4
03:11:431 Move to 3
03:12:188 Move to 4
03:25:185 Remove 1 note ( not needed ) Stays the same
03:58:561 Move to 3 Not changed
03:58:750 Move the note from 3 to 1 Not changed
05:21:042 until 05:21:667 to be followed

That's All, LOL Piano Versions . . :shock:
Good Luck~
Thank you for your mod
Spy
Hello,mod by request :)

[General]

Yes,please change volume of notes,it is not allow to under 5%
Tags : touhou →Remove because it has already in Source


[Marathon]
01:30:620 (90620|0,90620|2,91031|2,91031|0) - Same as 01:30:620 (90620|0,90620|2,91031|2,91031|0),no need to use 2 notes.
01:34:730 (94730|1,94730|0,95141|1,95141|0,95552|1,95552|0,95963|0,95963|1) - Same.
01:38:018 (98018|0,98018|3,98429|0,98429|3,98840|0,98840|3,99251|0,99251|3) - ↑
Still have same problems,hmm,I don't mention
02:20:962 - Add a note
03:03:861 (183861|3,184240|3,184618|3) - Different pitches from 03:03:482 (183482|3),change to other column or remove
03:10:675 (190675|0) - No need to catch it
04:24:491 - Start from this part,I know these are same melody,but you can try to use Ctrl + H to change some part to another side

Just these,hope these are helpful :)
Evening
Will mod after you reply Spy's Mod owo/
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

Spy wrote:

Hello,mod by request :)

[General]

Yes,please change volume of notes,it is not allow to under 5%已修正
Tags : touhou →Remove because it has already in Source已修正


[Marathon]
01:30:620 (90620|0,90620|2,91031|2,91031|0) - Same as 01:30:620 (90620|0,90620|2,91031|2,91031|0),no need to use 2 notes. 已修正
01:34:730 (94730|1,94730|0,95141|1,95141|0,95552|1,95552|0,95963|0,95963|1) - Same.已修正
01:38:018 (98018|0,98018|3,98429|0,98429|3,98840|0,98840|3,99251|0,99251|3) - ↑已修正
Still have same problems,hmm,I don't mention全改掉了
02:20:962 - Add a note已修正
03:03:861 (183861|3,184240|3,184618|3) - Different pitches from 03:03:482 (183482|3),change to other column or remove移到第2 Column
03:10:675 (190675|0) - No need to catch it已移除
04:24:491 - Start from this part,I know these are same melody,but you can try to use Ctrl + H to change some part to another side
已改掉部分
Just these,hope these are helpful :)
感謝Spy大哥的Mod

lZenxl wrote:

Will mod after you reply Spy's Mod owo/
YAYAYAYA
Evening
Mod from quehue

[Timing]

I think you should -10 for all timing points


[Marathon]

Firstly, in the intro, there's very less notes, which means you can use pitch relevancy to map most of them so that they feel better
Ex.
00:01:444 (1444|1,1650|3) - Swap Columns | The first note is higher in pitch than the second
00:03:088 (3088|1,3293|3) - ^
00:04:732 (4732|1,4937|3) - ^

and so on..
It's rather minor, so change it/fix it if you want

00:27:540 (27540|1) - Move right by 1 column | This is the same pitch as 00:27:745 (27745|2) - , they should be of the same column
00:33:807 (33807|0) - Extend by 1/4 | For pattern consistency with the similar LNs 00:32:985 (32985|1,34629|3) -
01:04:115 - I suggest to use 2 notes here for a chord since the music suggests a chord
01:05:142 - ^
01:05:964 - This pattern fits the piano more imo | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1788118
01:07:608 - ^
01:12:745 (72745|2,73156|2) - I suggest to change these 2 to chords since the music has piano chords
01:14:389 (74389|2,74800|1) - ^
01:17:471 (77471|0,77471|2,77471|3,78088|3,78088|2,78088|1,78704|0,78704|3,78704|2,78909|1,78909|0,78909|3) - I suggest to keep the pattern constant since the piano chord is of the same pitch
02:01:185 (121185|1,121185|0,121339|2,121339|1,121596|1,121596|0,121750|2,121750|1) - The snap is wrong | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1788125
01:48:017 (108017|1,108017|3,108154|2,108428|2,108428|3,108565|0,108565|1) - ^
02:03:634 (123634|0,123771|3,124045|3,124216|0) - Wrongly snapped, use 1/8
02:05:757 (125757|2) - Move up by 1/4 and shorten by 1/4 , 02:05:552 (125552|0) - Extend by 1/4
02:07:453 (127453|3) - Move to 02:07:247 - 3rd column from the left

Don't think there's any timing/note problem for the other half

Probably should hitsound everything with piano, since you only have piano sounds on the first bit, it sounds rather weird/incomplete

Nothing else, good luck owo/
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

lZenxl wrote:

Mod from quehue

[Timing]

I think you should -10 for all timing points


[Marathon]

Firstly, in the intro, there's very less notes, which means you can use pitch relevancy to map most of them so that they feel better
Ex.
00:01:444 (1444|1,1650|3) - Swap Columns | The first note is higher in pitch than the second Fixed
00:03:088 (3088|1,3293|3) - ^Fixed
00:04:732 (4732|1,4937|3) - ^Fixed

and so on..
It's rather minor, so change it/fix it if you want

00:27:540 (27540|1) - Move right by 1 column | This is the same pitch as 00:27:745 (27745|2) - , they should be of the same columnFixed
00:33:807 (33807|0) - Extend by 1/4 | For pattern consistency with the similar LNs 00:32:985 (32985|1,34629|3) - Fixed
01:04:115 - I suggest to use 2 notes here for a chord since the music suggests a chordFixed
01:05:142 - ^Fixed
01:05:964 - This pattern fits the piano more imo | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1788118Fixed
01:07:608 - ^Fixed
01:12:745 (72745|2,73156|2) - I suggest to change these 2 to chords since the music has piano chordsFixed
01:14:389 (74389|2,74800|1) - ^Fixed
01:17:471 (77471|0,77471|2,77471|3,78088|3,78088|2,78088|1,78704|0,78704|3,78704|2,78909|1,78909|0,78909|3) - I suggest to keep the pattern constant since the piano chord is of the same pitchFixed
02:01:185 (121185|1,121185|0,121339|2,121339|1,121596|1,121596|0,121750|2,121750|1) - The snap is wrong | https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1788125Fixed
01:48:017 (108017|1,108017|3,108154|2,108428|2,108428|3,108565|0,108565|1) - ^Fixed
02:03:634 (123634|0,123771|3,124045|3,124216|0) - Wrongly snapped, use 1/8 Fixed
02:05:757 (125757|2) - Move up by 1/4 and shorten by 1/4 , 02:05:552 (125552|0) - Extend by 1/4 Fixed
02:07:453 (127453|3) - Move to 02:07:247 - 3rd column from the leftFixed

Don't think there's any timing/note problem for the other half

Probably should hitsound everything with piano, since you only have piano sounds on the first bit, it sounds rather weird/incomplete
Still working on it
Nothing else, good luck owo/
Thank you very much for the mod, fixed everything
yoshilove
hi~ from queue :3

column : 1 2 3 4

nekoneko
[manyathon]

(pitch)
00:01:650 (1650|3) - move to 3
00:01:855 (1855|2) - move to 2

00:03:293 (3293|3) - move to 3
00:03:499 (3499|2) - move to 2

00:04:937 (4937|3) - move to 3
00:05:143 (5143|2) - move to 2

00:16:649 (16649|3) - LN end 00:18:088
00:18:293 - add LN to 2 ~ end 00:19:115

00:43:978 - add note to 4
00:44:183 - add note to 3

01:05:142 - add note to 4

01:56:613 - add note to 4
01:56:716 - add note to 2
01:56:819 (116819|3,116819|0) - remove (no sound)
01:59:388 (119388|3) - remove

02:05:757 (125757|2) - LN end ~ 02:05:860
02:05:860 - add note to 4

02:10:381 (130381|1) - move to 02:10:483
02:10:586 (130586|3,130586|2) - remove
02:10:688 - add note to 3

02:16:545 (136545|3) - LN end 02:16:853
02:17:367 (137367|0) - LN end 02:17:675
02:18:086 (138086|2) - remove (why Just here 2 note?)
02:18:189 (138189|3) - LN end 02:18:497
02:18:497 - add note to 2
02:19:011 (139011|3) - LN end 02:19:319
02:19:319 - add note to 2
02:19:832 - add note to 1
02:19:833 (139833|3) - LN end 02:20:140
02:20:140 - add note to 2
02:20:141 (140141|2) - snap ww
02:20:655 (140655|0) - LN end 02:20:962

03:06:510 - add note to 3
03:07:646 - add note to 2
03:13:703 - add note to 3

04:37:215 - add note to 2 (same 05:56:667)

3notes is irregularity
05:17:500 (317500|3) - remove
05:24:167 (324167|3) - ^
05:25:833 (325833|3) - ^
05:30:000 (330000|3) -

06:00:160 (360160|0) - remove
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

yoshilove wrote:

hi~ from queue :3

column : 1 2 3 4

nekoneko
[manyathon]

(pitch)
00:01:650 (1650|3) - move to 3 This note is a F and the next note is a G so I will keep it the way it is now because the note is at column 2 and the next note is at column 3 and 1
00:01:855 (1855|2) - move to 2

00:03:293 (3293|3) - move to 3^
00:03:499 (3499|2) - move to 2

00:04:937 (4937|3) - move to 3^
00:05:143 (5143|2) - move to 2

00:16:649 (16649|3) - LN end 00:18:088Fixed
00:18:293 - add LN to 2 ~ end 00:19:115Fixed

00:43:978 - add note to 4Fixed
00:44:183 - add note to 3Fixed

01:05:142 - add note to 4Fixed

01:56:613 - add note to 4Fixed
01:56:716 - add note to 2Fixed
01:56:819 (116819|3,116819|0) - remove (no sound)Fixed
01:59:388 (119388|3) - removeFixed

02:05:757 (125757|2) - LN end ~ 02:05:860Fixed
02:05:860 - add note to 4Fixed

02:10:381 (130381|1) - move to 02:10:483Fixed
02:10:586 (130586|3,130586|2) - removeFixed
02:10:688 - add note to 3Fixed

02:16:545 (136545|3) - LN end 02:16:853Fixed
02:17:367 (137367|0) - LN end 02:17:675Fixed
02:18:086 (138086|2) - remove (why Just here 2 note?)Fixed
02:18:189 (138189|3) - LN end 02:18:497Fixed
02:18:497 - add note to 2Fixed
02:19:011 (139011|3) - LN end 02:19:319Fixed
02:19:319 - add note to 2Fixed
02:19:832 - add note to 1Fixed
02:19:833 (139833|3) - LN end 02:20:140Fixed
02:20:140 - add note to 2Fixed
02:20:141 (140141|2) - snap ww Fixed
02:20:655 (140655|0) - LN end 02:20:962Fixed

03:06:510 - add note to 3Fixed
03:07:646 - add note to 2Fixed
03:13:703 - add note to 3Fixed

04:37:215 - add note to 2 (same 05:56:667)Fixed

3notes is irregularity
05:17:500 (317500|3) - removeFixed
05:24:167 (324167|3) - ^Fixed
05:25:833 (325833|3) - ^Fixed
05:30:000 (330000|3) - Fixed

06:00:160 (360160|0) - removeFixed

Thank you for the mod!
Ichigaki
hi again~ -w-
Called from Modding Queue

[General]
  1. Huee, so this's the original song of U.N. Owen wa Kanojyo nano ka... -w-)b
  2. Seems great
[First 50% by S a k u r a ]
SPOILER
  1. from 00:13:362 - 00:38:019 - you can fill all 1/2 with a note
  2. from 00:39:663 - 01:05:553 - ^
  3. from 00:51:992 - 00:52:814 - i think you can just place 2-notes here, not 3-notes (imo)
  4. from 01:23:223 - 01:44:593 - you can fill all 1/2 with a note
  5. 02:58:372 - 02:58:561 - add a note here
  6. 03:10:675 - add double note here, to make the pattern
  7. 01:54:764 (114764|2,114798|3,114866|2,114969|2) - i think you can remove this part
  8. from 02:40:770 - 03:03:482 - you can fill all 1/2 with a note
  9. 02:58:561 - there's piano sound here

[Last 50% by ShikiNoHollow]
SPOILER
  1. 03:10:675 - there's piano sound here
  2. 03:52:882 - 03:53:072 - 03:53:261 - ^
  3. 05:34:817 (334817|1) - move to 05:34:783 -
  4. 05:34:920 (334920|2) - move to 05:34:886 -
  5. 05:35:023 (335023|3,335023|0) - move to 05:34:988 -
  6. On the last kiai time, there's so many unsnapped notes, you do it with 1/12, and i think some part in that kiai doesn't match with the BPM

Yeah, that's all from me, sorry i my mod bad `-`)v, good luck .w.)9
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

ichia7x wrote:

hi again~ -w-
Called from Modding Queue

[General]
  1. Huee, so this's the original song of U.N. Owen wa Kanojyo nano ka... -w-)b
  2. Seems great
[First 50% by S a k u r a ]
SPOILER
  1. from 00:13:362 - 00:38:019 - you can fill all 1/2 with a note It will be a bit messy
  2. from 00:39:663 - 01:05:553 - ^ ^ since I am mapping the main piano sound here
  3. from 00:51:992 - 00:52:814 - i think you can just place 2-notes here, not 3-notes (imo) Really Strong here
  4. from 01:23:223 - 01:44:593 - you can fill all 1/2 with a note ^^
  5. 02:58:372 - 02:58:561 - add a note here fixed
  6. 03:10:675 - add double note here, to make the pattern fixed
  7. 01:54:764 (114764|2,114798|3,114866|2,114969|2) - i think you can remove this partfixed
  8. from 02:40:770 - 03:03:482 - you can fill all 1/2 with a note I don't want to make this so complicated because some of the main piano sound is only one key so if I add another notes at 1/2s it will be strange, which also means I have to add extra notes to the main piano sound to make them look different then the background piano sound
  9. 02:58:561 - there's piano sound herefixed

[Last 50% by ShikiNoHollow]
SPOILER
  1. 03:10:675 - there's piano sound here
  2. 03:52:882 - 03:53:072 - 03:53:261 - ^
  3. 05:34:817 (334817|1) - move to 05:34:783 -
  4. 05:34:920 (334920|2) - move to 05:34:886 -
  5. 05:35:023 (335023|3,335023|0) - move to 05:34:988 -
  6. On the last kiai time, there's so many unsnapped notes, you do it with 1/12, and i think some part in that kiai doesn't match with the BPM

Yeah, that's all from me, sorry i my mod bad `-`)v, good luck .w.)9
You are not bad, believe in yourself
Thanks
Lirai
Hi From My ModQ

Below are just suggestion feel free to ignore it

Marathon
00:06:376 (6376|0) - forgot the hitsound here ? Try G5S (25%)
00:06:581 (6581|3) - ^ F5S (25%)
00:06:787 (6787|1,6787|2) - ^ C5S (25%)
00:12:540 (12540|0) - ^ D#5S_Eb5S (25%)
Maybe you forgot to put some hitsound

00:16:649 (16649|3) - ^ D#6S_Eb6S (25%)
00:18:293 (18293|1) - ^ A#6S_Bb6S (50%)

00:20:348 (20348|3) - Move to 1

00:21:375 (21375|3) - Move to 3

00:24:046 (24046|2) - Delete this note then 00:24:663 (24663|2) - Move here 00:24:046 then 00:25:279 (25279|1) - Delete
so you can add Note here 00:24:868 (24868|3) - add col 4 ( C6S 50%) Detail : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1812519

00:26:409 (26409|2) - Add C#6S_Db6S and vol must be same as the other

00:43:978 (43978|3) - C6S very suits imo
00:43:978 (44183|2) - C5S

00:53:430 (53430|3) - the Hitsound must be same as this one 00:53:430 (53430|1)

00:56:923 (56923|0) - ^ Same with this 00:57:026 (57026|3)

01:01:033 (61033|1) - Add note to 4 (G5S 25%)

01:01:444 (61444|1) - Move to 4

01:04:115 (64115|0) - Missing Hitsound ? (D5S 25%)
01:05:142 (65142|3) - ^ (F5S 25%)
01:06:170 (66170|2) - ^ (C#6S 25%)

04:33:481 - Add Note to 2
04:33:765 - Add Note to 1
04:35:090 - Add Note to 4
04:35:374 - Add Note to 2
04:35:658 - ^

Nah there's Nothing else i can find for now, since the hitsound isn't completed yet, everything is fine for me

Good Luck i wanna see this one ranked <3
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

DE-CADE wrote:

Hi From My ModQ

Below are just suggestion feel free to ignore it

Marathon
00:06:376 (6376|0) - forgot the hitsound here ? Try G5S (25%)
00:06:581 (6581|3) - ^ F5S (25%)
00:06:787 (6787|1,6787|2) - ^ C5S (25%)
00:12:540 (12540|0) - ^ D#5S_Eb5S (25%)
Maybe you forgot to put some hitsound

00:16:649 (16649|3) - ^ D#6S_Eb6S (25%)
00:18:293 (18293|1) - ^ A#6S_Bb6S (50%)

00:20:348 (20348|3) - Move to 1 same pitch as the previous note so moved the other note

00:21:375 (21375|3) - Move to 3

00:24:046 (24046|2) - Delete this note then 00:24:663 (24663|2) - Move here 00:24:046 then 00:25:279 (25279|1) - Delete
so you can add Note here 00:24:868 (24868|3) - add col 4 ( C6S 50%) Detail : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1812519

00:26:409 (26409|2) - Add C#6S_Db6S and vol must be same as the other

00:43:978 (43978|3) - C6S very suits imo
00:43:978 (44183|2) - C5S

00:53:430 (53430|3) - the Hitsound must be same as this one 00:53:430 (53430|1)

00:56:923 (56923|0) - ^ Same with this 00:57:026 (57026|3)

01:01:033 (61033|1) - Add note to 4 (G5S 25%)

01:01:444 (61444|1) - Move to 4

01:04:115 (64115|0) - Missing Hitsound ? (D5S 25%)
01:05:142 (65142|3) - ^ (F5S 25%)
01:06:170 (66170|2) - ^ (C#6S 25%)

04:33:481 - Add Note to 2 The notes are getting really quiet
04:33:765 - Add Note to 1^
04:35:090 - Add Note to 4^
04:35:374 - Add Note to 2 ^
04:35:658 - ^^

Nah there's Nothing else i can find for now, since the hitsound isn't completed yet, everything is fine for me

Good Luck i wanna see this one ranked <3
No reply means fixed

Thank you very much for the mod!!
[FX] AEM
mod by req.

[General]
I think the diff name should be "Collab Marathon" because there're 2 mappers. (I guess.)

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00:06:170 (6170|0,6376|3) - CTRL+H : I prefer this arrangement.
00:06:787 (6787|2) - move to 1st : ^
00:16:649 (16649|1) - move to 1st : ^
00:18:088 (18088|2,18293|1) - CTRL+H : ^
00:36:786 (36786|1,36786|3,36992|2,37197|3) - Delete : you're focusing on the right hand piano(Sol) in this part, and then left hand(Fa) coming out of nowhere. It's confusing.
00:40:279 (40279|2) - change to normal note. and try this http://puu.sh/ac54X/0fbe79dc0e.png : if you're doing like this, the following beats should do it like this too.
00:42:540 - add 2nd note. and move 00:42:745 (42745|0) - to 3rd : doubled the pressure.
00:43:567 - try this http://puu.sh/ac5dc/bd735def1e.png : I prefer this arrangement.
00:45:622 (45622|3) - move to 2nd. : doubled the pressure.
00:45:827 - add 3rd note. : ^
00:47:266 - exactly same as 00:45:622 - but just CTRL+H them. : prefer this arrangement.
00:49:115 (49115|3) - move to 1st : same sound., then change 00:49:320 (49320|1) - to normal note and move to 3rd and move 00:49:320 (49320|0) - to 4th, and move 00:49:526 (49526|3,49526|2) - to 2nd and 3rd.
00:50:142 - it's quite overmapped here try this http://puu.sh/ac5DG/0c2c725af2.png
00:51:992 - consider http://puu.sh/ac5Q7/29a5246bf4.png
00:53:430 - consider http://puu.sh/ac5S1/47cdef2323.png
00:55:485 - same as 00:48:909 -
00:56:718 - try this http://puu.sh/ac5XH/5d739b3a88.png
00:58:978 (58978|1) - move to 4th. : there's a very little different between this beat and the next beat (which is no need to arrange like that.), i suspect that who can recognize these sounds so correctly.
00:59:389 (59389|3) - move to 2nd. : ^
01:02:471 (62471|1) - move to 4th. : prefer this.
01:02:677 (62677|0) - move to 2nd. : ^
01:05:553 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6jB/f28ca2372e.png : caring about the chord.
01:07:403 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6nJ/799d301e2c.png : ^ (Continue)
01:09:868 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6tw/4806a14e5a.png : ^ (Continue)
01:12:129 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6A1/d9c84ffaed.png : ^ (Continue)
01:14:183 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6B9/be95967ab2.png : ^ (Continue)
01:15:827 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6CM/c03ee10f46.png : ^ (Continue)
01:22:812 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6HO/71f3096fcb.png : it's hard to explain here, whatever, i prefer this arrangement.
01:32:675 (92675|2) - try this http://puu.sh/ac6Y5/a610ecf49a.png : why this LN is soooooooooooooooooo long here.
01:35:963 - try this http://puu.sh/ac71e/59f2073ffb.png : missing notes.
01:40:689 - add 4th note. : FFF. (fun for fingers)
01:41:511 - try this http://puu.sh/ac7b2/50283e6ed4.png : what a jack pattern :o
01:42:949 - try this http://puu.sh/ac7ep/f8d9636833.png : are you trying to insert a LN?
01:44:593 - try this http://puu.sh/ac7i1/a8066b71f7.png : no comment anymore.

I will just stop here. Don't give me a kudosu. It's a bit offensive mod, i'm sorry if you get angry at me.
one more thing i would like to point is your mapping style, don't do a mixed instrument like 00:36:786 (36786|1,36786|3,36992|2,37197|3) - . Try focus only one instrument (right hand piano). Except there're hitsounded notes. Good Luck.
Topic Starter
Ayachi-

[FX] AEM wrote:

mod by req.

[General]
I think the diff name should be "Collab Marathon" because there're 2 mappers. (I guess.)

-------------
00:06:170 (6170|0,6376|3) - CTRL+H : I prefer this arrangement. Those note didn't exist when this was posted
00:06:787 (6787|2) - move to 1st : ^ Fixed
00:16:649 (16649|1) - move to 1st : ^Fixed
00:18:088 (18088|2,18293|1) - CTRL+H : ^Fixed
00:36:786 (36786|1,36786|3,36992|2,37197|3) - Delete : you're focusing on the right hand piano(Sol) in this part, and then left hand(Fa) coming out of nowhere. It's confusing. Deleted
00:40:279 (40279|2) - change to normal note. and try this http://puu.sh/ac54X/0fbe79dc0e.png : if you're doing like this, the following beats should do it like this too.Fixed
00:42:540 - add 2nd note. and move 00:42:745 (42745|0) - to 3rd : doubled the pressure.Fixed
00:43:567 - try this http://puu.sh/ac5dc/bd735def1e.png : I prefer this arrangement.Fixed part of it, did not add double note to some notes because they aren't as loud as the other notes are
00:45:622 (45622|3) - move to 2nd. : doubled the pressure.Fixed
00:45:827 - add 3rd note. : ^Fixed
00:47:266 - exactly same as 00:45:622 - but just CTRL+H them. : prefer this arrangement.Fixed
00:49:115 (49115|3) - move to 1st : same sound., then change 00:49:320 (49320|1) - to normal note and move to 3rd and move 00:49:320 (49320|0) - to 4th, and move 00:49:526 (49526|3,49526|2) - to 2nd and 3rd.Fixed
00:50:142 - it's quite overmapped here try this http://puu.sh/ac5DG/0c2c725af2.pngFixed
00:51:992 - consider http://puu.sh/ac5Q7/29a5246bf4.pngFixed
00:53:430 - consider http://puu.sh/ac5S1/47cdef2323.pngFixed
00:55:485 - same as 00:48:909 - Fixed
00:56:718 - try this http://puu.sh/ac5XH/5d739b3a88.pngFixed
00:58:978 (58978|1) - move to 4th. : there's a very little different between this beat and the next beat (which is no need to arrange like that.), i suspect that who can recognize these sounds so correctly. Keep the same way, even they are only a semitone higher
00:59:389 (59389|3) - move to 2nd. : ^Fixed
01:02:471 (62471|1) - move to 4th. : prefer this.Fixed
01:02:677 (62677|0) - move to 2nd. : ^Fixed
01:05:553 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6jB/f28ca2372e.png : caring about the chord.Fixed
01:07:403 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6nJ/799d301e2c.png : ^ (Continue)Fixed
01:09:868 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6tw/4806a14e5a.png : ^ (Continue)Fixed
01:12:129 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6A1/d9c84ffaed.png : ^ (Continue)Fixed
01:14:183 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6B9/be95967ab2.png : ^ (Continue)Fixed
01:15:827 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6CM/c03ee10f46.png : ^ (Continue)Fixed
01:22:812 - try this http://puu.sh/ac6HO/71f3096fcb.png : it's hard to explain here, whatever, i prefer this arrangement.Fixed
01:32:675 (92675|2) - try this http://puu.sh/ac6Y5/a610ecf49a.png : why this LN is soooooooooooooooooo long here.Fixed
01:35:963 - try this http://puu.sh/ac71e/59f2073ffb.png : missing notes.Fixed
01:40:689 - add 4th note. : FFF. (fun for fingers)Fixed
01:41:511 - try this http://puu.sh/ac7b2/50283e6ed4.png : what a jack pattern :o Fixed
01:42:949 - try this http://puu.sh/ac7ep/f8d9636833.png : are you trying to insert a LN?Fixed
01:44:593 - try this http://puu.sh/ac7i1/a8066b71f7.png : no comment anymore.Fixed

I will just stop here. Don't give me a kudosu. It's a bit offensive mod, i'm sorry if you get angry at me.
one more thing i would like to point is your mapping style, don't do a mixed instrument like 00:36:786 (36786|1,36786|3,36992|2,37197|3) - . Try focus only one instrument (right hand piano). Except there're hitsounded notes. Good Luck.

Thank you, I will try to improve my map
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