OMG this is the cutest song ever
This is Nana from Nana's queue
[General]
- You probably want to change the filename for the mp3. mp3clan doesn't exactly hide the fact you got this music somewhere not quite as legal. Lol. derp.
- You can remove "of" from tags. lol
[Easy]
[Normal]
[Hard]
[Insane]
Yay, good luck ^^ Can't wait for you get to this ranked.
This is Nana from Nana's queue
[General]
- You probably want to change the filename for the mp3. mp3clan doesn't exactly hide the fact you got this music somewhere not quite as legal. Lol. derp.
- You can remove "of" from tags. lol
[Easy]
SPOILER
[spoilerbox]- I love the hitsounds!
00:10:684 (5) - Blanket: It's just off a little bit. You want to make sure it's surrounding the circle perfectly. Like this.
00:35:128 (4) - Cosmetics: It's just a little below Slider 2, Move it up a little. Try copying Slider 2, Ctrl + H, then Ctrl + G for change in direction. Otherwise it looks lopsided.
00:41:795 (3) - Blanket: Same as before. Make sure to do it consistently.
00:46:240 (4) - Song: I feel like a spinner would be more appropriate for this section. If you don't want to put a spinner here, you can try this? Maybe this can be an alternative. (Sorry its so sloppy, I wasn't doing it in a hurry.)
00:50:684 (3) - Blanket: YESSS! THIS is the sort of blanket you should strive for the previous two blankets i mentioned.
01:00:462 (4) - Cosmetics: The slider you have now doesn't flow aesthetically from Slider 2. Try this. (Ctrl + H)
01:15:128 (3) - Blanket: Yeah, you are blanketing inside the curve. Refer to 00:50:684 (3).
00:10:684 (5) - Blanket: It's just off a little bit. You want to make sure it's surrounding the circle perfectly. Like this.
00:35:128 (4) - Cosmetics: It's just a little below Slider 2, Move it up a little. Try copying Slider 2, Ctrl + H, then Ctrl + G for change in direction. Otherwise it looks lopsided.
00:41:795 (3) - Blanket: Same as before. Make sure to do it consistently.
00:46:240 (4) - Song: I feel like a spinner would be more appropriate for this section. If you don't want to put a spinner here, you can try this? Maybe this can be an alternative. (Sorry its so sloppy, I wasn't doing it in a hurry.)
00:50:684 (3) - Blanket: YESSS! THIS is the sort of blanket you should strive for the previous two blankets i mentioned.
01:00:462 (4) - Cosmetics: The slider you have now doesn't flow aesthetically from Slider 2. Try this. (Ctrl + H)
01:15:128 (3) - Blanket: Yeah, you are blanketing inside the curve. Refer to 00:50:684 (3).
[Normal]
SPOILER
00:07:128 (1, 2, 3) - Flow: Its choppy. Not circular or alternating or dynamic. I think you should reverse the curve of the sliders on 1 and 3. Like this.
00:16:017 (3, 4, 5, 6) - Cosmetics: Either make this into a diamond, or create a pentagon using points off the end of Slider 2 to 6. Like this?
00:18:684 (2, 1) - Flow: I think you should try reversing both slider's curves. It flows better.
00:29:351 (2) - Cosmetics: Symmetry with Slider 1. Ctrl + H the copied and pasted version.
00:30:240 (4) - Cosmetics: Looks bad following the Slider 2. Can you not try something like this?
00:41:351 (5, 6) - Flow & Cosmetics: It looks choppy and doesn't well. How's this?
01:15:124 (1, 2) - Cosmetics: Looks better when centered along the Y-axis.
00:16:017 (3, 4, 5, 6) - Cosmetics: Either make this into a diamond, or create a pentagon using points off the end of Slider 2 to 6. Like this?
00:18:684 (2, 1) - Flow: I think you should try reversing both slider's curves. It flows better.
00:29:351 (2) - Cosmetics: Symmetry with Slider 1. Ctrl + H the copied and pasted version.
00:30:240 (4) - Cosmetics: Looks bad following the Slider 2. Can you not try something like this?
00:41:351 (5, 6) - Flow & Cosmetics: It looks choppy and doesn't well. How's this?
01:15:124 (1, 2) - Cosmetics: Looks better when centered along the Y-axis.
[Hard]
SPOILER
I like fall in love with this song more with every new difficulty xD
00:14:240 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Cosmetics: Make square. Think Dear Rei diff of Dear You. Lol.
00:22:684 (1) - Flow: Alternate the slider for better flow. Copy and paste Slider 2 and Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J
00:36:017 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3) - Originality: I feel like you could do more with this. It doesn't come off as original or inspired. Maybe this? Idk, is this confusing? Ask me about this if you can't tell what I'm doing. Its two-point windmill.
00:36:017 (1, 2)
00:36:906 (3, 1 )
00:37:795 (2, 3)
01:07:795 (1, 2) Flow & Cosmetics: THis?
00:14:240 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Cosmetics: Make square. Think Dear Rei diff of Dear You. Lol.
00:22:684 (1) - Flow: Alternate the slider for better flow. Copy and paste Slider 2 and Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J
00:36:017 (1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3) - Originality: I feel like you could do more with this. It doesn't come off as original or inspired. Maybe this? Idk, is this confusing? Ask me about this if you can't tell what I'm doing. Its two-point windmill.
00:36:017 (1, 2)
00:36:906 (3, 1 )
00:37:795 (2, 3)
01:07:795 (1, 2) Flow & Cosmetics: THis?
[Insane]
SPOILER
00:26:684 (3, 4, 5) - Cosmetics: Less harsh of a turn.
01:04:017 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - Cosmetics: Make a star with this? Feels right for the song. And it doesn't add too much artificial structure to the song if you like the big jumps.
01:12:684 (6) - Blanket
01:15:351 (3) - Flow: Stack on top of Circle 2. You undermine the two surrounding sliders by moving the focus of the song away from what you're spinning around.
01:04:017 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) - Cosmetics: Make a star with this? Feels right for the song. And it doesn't add too much artificial structure to the song if you like the big jumps.
01:12:684 (6) - Blanket
01:15:351 (3) - Flow: Stack on top of Circle 2. You undermine the two surrounding sliders by moving the focus of the song away from what you're spinning around.
Yay, good luck ^^ Can't wait for you get to this ranked.