Yay finally~
Congrats ruber ><)/
The longest mania marathon? o.o
Congrats ruber ><)/
The longest mania marathon? o.o
aya-hatate.jpg (1366x853)
momiji-a.jpg (1366x994)
momiji-nitori.jpg (679x960)
mitori-a.jpg (905x1280)
mitori-b.jpg (850x966)
mitori-nitori-a.jpeg (1280x960)
yukari-a.jpg (1366x972)
alice-x.jpg (660x860)
alice-a.jpg (660x860)
mugetsu-gengetsu-a.jpg (905x1280)
rika-c.jpeg (700x1059)
Kuo Kyoka wrote:
As first i want to congratulate you, but i have to sorry as well for giving bad news D:
hmm ... seems to be some BPM timings are wrong, i will give you the correct one:
You can get it here: http://puu.sh/mMNzb/e0edd3d38d.osu
(Please take note that green timings, which is SV changes and kiai time are not set)
It's more accurate in my opitions
fixed
Furthermore, i found out some issues, which are unrankable:
• Storyboard image file dimensions are more than allowed maximum (640x1440 or 1920x480 for scrolling images) or (1366x768)aya-hatate.jpg (1366x853)
momiji-a.jpg (1366x994)
momiji-nitori.jpg (679x960)
mitori-a.jpg (905x1280)
mitori-b.jpg (850x966)
mitori-nitori-a.jpeg (1280x960)
yukari-a.jpg (1366x972)
alice-x.jpg (660x860)
alice-a.jpg (660x860)
mugetsu-gengetsu-a.jpg (905x1280)
rika-c.jpeg (700x1059)
And on 16:18:030 - there are two timings on here
It's unrankable issues and won't work perfectly if you kept 2 timings with differents volume
fixed
Few last things:
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[Phantasm Stage]
00:13:120 - on here have 1/8 too, you may want to add it no change
00:27:370 (27370|2,27449|2) - appearancely they're different pitch fixed
00:53:422 (53422|3,53580|2) - make a jack on here, for the pitch and sound exactly same from both of them (move 00:53:580 (53580|2) - to 4th column) fixed
02:35:580 (155580|1) - i suggest to remove this, for focus on main 1/2 jack above fixed
03:16:316 (196316|1,196474|0,196632|0) - may hard to catch on here, hmm, i recomended you to move 03:16:474 (196474|0) - to 3 for more comfortable fixed
04:56:132 (296132|3,296234|2,296337|1,296440|0,296440|3,296440|2,297055|0,297055|1) - Ctrl + H this, pitch is going up, not going down fixed
05:03:517 - and 05:03:670 - you may want to add a note for them on 4th column, for guitar's sound, make it more insteresting for rhythm fixed
05:08:593 (308593|0) - move this to 3, those jack looks hard to catch well fixed
05:10:901 - to 05:11:209 - don't miss this rhythm, fill it with some notes 05:10:901 - added
okay, i checked lightly the rest of the map, seems only few of these issues
and this is a good map, i really love it
Good luck then, tell me if you need rebubbles
Harbyter wrote:
05:40:054 (340054|0,340093|2,340131|3) - 1/6 05:40:029 - 05:40:080 -
fixed. and 05:42:016 (342016|3,342785|0) - move to 1/6
14:05:699 - from here i think the pitch relevancy should be more accurate ,it felt really weird pressing the LNs here no change
thank you for checkBakari wrote:
Greetings.
I am here as Kuo Kyoka's post lists rather important issues that have to be addressed. While I don't know much about mania, I believe that the concurrent volume levels have to be fixed as well as the SB elements which are of unreasonable size. As those things are valid for all modes.
Here are a few things you should do.
- sb\3rd\aya-hatate.jpg - doesn't do any scrolling, hence it has to be reduced in size/cut.
- sb\12th\alice-x.jpg - from what I see this one doesn't scroll either. Could also use a cut/resize fix.
- sb\16th\Flandle.jpg - aspect ratio is broken here. Care to fix that, please.
There might be a few more, so, please have a look at the SB once again.
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07:03:100 - green line move to 07:03:094 -Feerum wrote:
okay lets continue.
I will not use my overlay since its just a recheck xdd
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[Phantasm Stage]
01:27:525 (87525|3,87525|1) - According how you mapped the LN Sounds, like 01:24:051 (84051|2,84130|3) - as example, 01:27:525 (87525|3) - this LN should beginn 1/4 later, means 01:27:604 - .
fixed and changed pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633830
02:22:156 (142156|1) - Uhh shouldn't this Ln end 02:22:630 - and to follow the 1/4 sounds you could add a note then on the Blue line here 02:22:709 -
fixed and changed pattern. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633801
04:39:898 - (Optional) Could add a note for drum.
added 1
04:59:206 (299206|0) - Bit confused here because maybe this LN is wrong or i just don't hear what you follow. When i'm right this LN should end 04:59:667 - and there should be another LN from 04:59:821 - to 05:00:129 - . I am right or wrong? xd
that is right xD fixed
05:06:283 (306283|2) - Same like here? This LN Should end 05:06:590 - and another from here to next LN? x:
fixed and changed pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4633894
05:35:821 - For this LN Part. Uhm. Some of your LN's end 1/4 beat earlier. But i think you should keep Consistency with this. I tried it and it plays kinda fine so i think following LN's should end 1/4 Beat earlier:
05:36:051 (336051|1) - end 05:36:205 -
05:36:667 (336667|2) - end 05:36:821 -
05:37:282 (337282|2) - end 05:37:436 -
05:38:513 (338513|2) - end 05:38:667 -
05:43:436 (343436|2) - end 05:43:590 -
05:44:051 (344051|1) - end 05:44:205 -
At some LN's its clearly that they end earlier, but at some i'm not sure, but it would be just logical looking at all other,
i will leave a notice for the next BN to recheck this just to be sure.
all fixed
13:29:126 - // Okay you know what. I have mod this now so many times and this is bugging me. PLEASE Tell me who is this guy xD
ZUN!! xD
AYY Thats all i have to say. Let the hype slowly beginn
lolKuo Kyoka wrote:
awwwwww i'm totally so sorry
almost forgot this, after checking pending forum and i saw this ;x;
i will check this soon asap, maybe after exams
once again, i'm so sorry for delay D:
thank you for check!Fresh Chicken wrote:
私日本語下手なので、何か知らな部分があったら教えてください!w
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*05:35:821 - As Feerum said, this LN part seems fine to me too. I think it won't be a problem.
00:04:472 (4472|1,4551|0) - 00:04:630 (4630|1,4709|2,4788|1,4867|2) - この二つはなんか違う音が聞こえるから変化があればいいだとおもいます。ノートの数どかパタンの変化とか。。
パターンのみ変更しました。 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5566277
00:20:735 - これがもっといいだと思いますけどどうですか?
fixed
00:25:788 - 同じ理由です。でも上のパタンと同じですから何か変化があればいいですね
fixed.ここは反転+パターンを少し変更しました
00:30:604 - synth sound に二つのノートを使っています、一つ追加するのが正しいと思います。例えば 00:35:656 - これみたいにw
うーん…no changeで。ここはViolinが主体でピアノの音が小さいです( 00:35:656 - ははっきりピアノが聞こえます)
逆に00:35:656 - 00:36:288 - 00:36:525 - の2notesを活かすために00:35:735 (35735|3,36367|1,36604|2) - を削除しました。
00:48:525 - 一つ追加するほうはどうですか?melodyの強調をために、
fixed
02:07:946 - 今二つのノート使用するパートと同じように一つ追加するのをおすすめします。
fixed
02:29:025 (149025|2,149104|2) - 正直によくないpatternだと思います。02:27:209 (147209|3) - これが one handを作るので02:29:025 (149025|2,149104|2) - これを1や2で移動するほうがいいです。
jackを削除し、パターンを変更しました。
03:07:945 - <3<3<3
03:23:576 (203576|2) - 1で移動してくればもっといいと思います for hand balance. 03:23:576 (203576|2,203655|3,203734|3) - これが全部右手にあるのてよくないと思います。
fixed
07:01:094 - 一つ追加はどうですか?06:57:094 - これと同じだと思いますけど。。。
no change. 06:57:094 - はdramに加えてmain soundがあるため2notesにしています。
09:47:724 (587724|2) - これは削除するほうがいいですよ、プレイするときも全然感じなかったし。。
fixed
13:27:672 - ここかれ出るこのおっさんは誰ですか?ㅇㅅㅇ
ZUNさんです。東方Projectを作った人です(>_<
15:40:730 (940730|3,940837|3) - このjackはいらないと思います。15:45:337 - こんなものとは違うようにはっきり感じなっかたです。15:40:730 (940730|3) - を3に移動させました。
この曲想像以上に長かった;;
返事が日本語なら嬉しいと思います!日本語の勉強もできるしw
修正が終わったらTwitterとかPMで教えてください!あとなんか変わった部分があれば(このmod以外)それも教えてください!
thank you for check ><)/Kuo Kyoka wrote:
why I always forgoting something awww D:
I deeply sorry for the delay long away, I forgot about this and somehow get reminded by checking pending list
So i guess i'm qualifier then
Overall seems it's fine then
[Phantasm Stage]
02:59:419 (179419|0) - move to 2nd for the move balanced. kinda blank around here fixed
03:47:103 (227103|2,227260|2,227418|2,227576|2,227734|2,227892|2,228050|2,228208|2) - somehow I feel it have a different pitch than 03:46:155 (226155|2,226313|2,226471|2,226629|2,226787|2,226945|2) - changed pattern…
04:11:514 (251514|1) - move to 3rd for balance fixed
08:32:058 (512058|0,512058|3) - should be begin on 08:32:141 - fixed. and 08:32:058 - SV moved to 08:32:141 -
08:45:308 (525308|2) - imo, move to 2nd would be more better for hand balance and patterning thing fixed
10:25:307 (625307|1,625390|0) - on here have kick sound, since you only follow kick sound on here so maybe make a rearrange and add more note to fit with this kick sound added notes. 10:30:640 - here also the same
11:52:058 (712058|3,712365|3,712673|1,712827|3,712904|2,712981|3,713134|1) - add clap sound for them
11:53:288 - to 12:03:134 - seems to be need kick sound (soft-hitclap)
11:53:288 (713288|3,713596|3,713904|0,714211|2,714519|2,714827|3,715134|3,715442|1,715750|1,716058|2,716365|2,716673|2,716981|0,717288|0,717596|2,717750|1,717827|2,717904|0,718058|1,718211|2,718519|3,718827|0,719134|1,719442|0,719750|2,720058|2,720365|3,720673|1,720981|1,721288|1,721596|2,721904|1,721981|2,722058|0,722134|1,722211|2,722288|1,722365|0,722442|1,722519|0,722596|2,722673|0,722750|2,722827|1,722904|2,722981|1,723058|0) - I marked them, you only need to add soft-hitclap
no change. 11:52:058 - to 12:03:058 - is not follow kick sound. and i think also that it is important hitsound(hit-normal)
13:44:210 (824210|2,824755|1) - switch them, if you remain 13:44:210 (824210|2) - for pitch like you did for the part before fixed
15:14:319 (914319|0) - unsnapped, should be on 1/6 15:14:337 - fixed
15:55:194 (955194|2) - same pitch with 15:54:766 (954766|3,954873|3,954980|3) - fixed
17:12:936 (1032936|2) - should be 1/6 (17:12:954 - ) fixed
17:23:249 (1043249|1) - should be on 1/6 (17:23:240 - ) fixed
17:56:980 (1076980|2) - move to 2nd, reason i mentioned before fixed
17:57:520 - for outro pattern http://puu.sh/qzztA/84cfc3da30.png fixed
Well, only them left I guess so
Call me soon