This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November-28-09 at 5:51:42 PM

Artist: nao.paradigm
Title: Zero-One
Source: O2Jam
Tags: Techno
BPM: 147
Filesize: 2088kb
Play Time: 01:44
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.77 stars, 106 notes)
2. Hard (4.6 stars, 247 notes)
3. Insane (4.96 stars, 285 notes)

Download: nao.paradigm - Zero-One
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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More playing around. Yay. Hard and Insane were mapped in different ways, stylistically. Comment!

Thanks DJPop for the nicer MP3, I was looking for one and couldn't find one. >_<

[Easy]
Nothing wrong.
Moving on...

[Hard]
00:24:030 (1,1) - That's a bit mean for Hard.
00:47:056 (1,1) - ^
00:58:099 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

[Insane]
00:58:099 (1) - When I got here I thought my computer was making some weird sound and had broken from awesomeness or something. Remove clap or cymbal?

Dusty wrote:

[Easy]
Nothing wrong.
Moving on...

[Hard]
00:24:030 (1,1) - That's a bit mean for Hard.
00:47:056 (1,1) - ^
00:58:099 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^

[Insane]
00:58:099 (1) - When I got here I thought my computer was making some weird sound and had broken from awesomeness or something. Remove clap or cymbal?

Fixed, thanks!

Also, my mapping isn't awesome enough to break your computer YET.

~ Random Mod ~

Timing:

I got offset - 211

Easy

00:04:506 - Unnecessary break?
00:15:032 (3) - Clap imo.
00:17:077 (2) - ^
00:18:058 (3) - Not a fan of the whistle
00:19:081 (1,2,3,4) - Rearrange, all the ends are obscured, not really easy lol.
00:19:081 (1,2,3,4) - Hitsounds - clap the end of 1 and 2, whistle the end of 3 and 4, and remove the whistle from the start of 3.

00:39:040 (1) - For this section and the others like it I wouldn't cymbal abuse, give emphasis to the later notes by removing cymbal from this one - example - 00:39:040 (1) - Whistle or normal, 00:40:001 (2) - keep cymbal.

00:41:085 (1) - Whistle etc for this section, I just felt there was too many cymbals.

00:53:690 - The reduction in sound here is slightly odd, if you wanted to emphasize 00:58:099 (1) - then you should probably gradually fade out right from 00:41:853 then bring it back up to full volume.

00:58:996 - Normal hitsounds sound amazing here, remove the whistle though if you take this suggestion. You could go back to soft at about 01:05:032 (2) - or keep it normal for the rest of the song, if you take the latter option make sure to remove those whistles they sound awful in normal.

Same thing about cymbals applies to the other difficulties for the most part.

Hard:

Difficulty spike? You might need a normal.

01:21:002 (3,1) - Cymbals sound out of place.
01:23:006 (2) - Clap
01:23:088 (4) - Clap (You could probably add more claps in general)

Insane:

00:18:099 (5) - Random cymbal
00:20:062 (3) - ^
00:22:026 (4) - ^
00:40:323 - I think this and the other breaks are a little unnecessary but I see what effect your going for.
00:54:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Difficult to see whats actually going on but its easily hittable.
01:05:527 - From this point the cymbals on almost every 5th note are a little random, I'd recommend incorporating claps into the beat.
01:21:003 (1) - Extremely mean.
01:40:062 (4) - Random cymbal.

That's all very nice, ~ star.

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Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
01:05:52 - Kiai start here?

No problems found

[Hard]
00:03:88 (1) - Continue reversing this until 00:04:70? Playing with volume (loud to quiet) would work well with this
01:05:52 - Kiai?

No problems found

[Insane]
00:03:88 (1) - Same suggestion as Hard
00:58:58 (4) - Whistle sounds a little strange in the beginning of this slider. Maybe finish + clap?
01:35:31 (2) - reverse to 01:35:92?

Awesome beatmaps, as usual. Starred

New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Video: No.
Storyboard: No.
Custom Skin: No.
Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize Techno please.)
File Size: 2,72MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 147,00 - Offset: 230 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

Increase HP Drain by one tick for balance with overall difficulty.

00:13:068 (1) - A note after spinner is too hard for an easy map.

[Hard]

01:17:076 (1) - These new combo seems out of place.
01:21:084 (1) - ^
01:44:602 - Move this section 1/4 backward. Better.

[Insane]

Too much new combo on this difficulty.

00:27:056 (5) - New combo.
00:58:058 (4) - Remove the whistle on this slider. Sounds bad.
01:14:050 (5) - New combo.
01:44:602 - Same as "Hard".

Modding as promised.

Offset: 220

[Easy]
01:05:03 (2) - For some reason I feel like this should be a 1/4 slider that repeats once. (opinion) [Would have to change spacing for this.] {It could be like a wake up call that the map gets faster here.}

[Hard]
00:16:09 (3,4,5,6,7) - This would make the difficulty gap between Easy and Hard too much. Either make a [Normal] or make a repeating slider.
00:23:05 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ (Psst. I don't see the triplets or double ones as a big problem)
00:52:05 (2) - Move left 1 grid2. (More perfect triangle :yaynazi:)
01:08:10 (2,3,4) - I really dislike it when the circles are under the sliders, may be a little too hard for this diff. anyways, please rearrange.
01:33:069 - Beat here plz.
01:35:031 (3,4,5,6,7) - Diff. gap blahblah.
01:36:095 - Beat here plz.
01:41:084 (3,4,5,6,7) - Diff. gap *shot*
01:43:048 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[Insane]
No complaints.

Amazing, star.

Easy
Hard
Insane

Thanks for all the mods. Many changes were applied.

Real modding this time.

[Hard]
00:19:019 (5) - Momentum killer, move (5)?
00:47:056 (1) - Shorten by 1/4?
00:47:056 (1) - Add whistle on white and red ticks? (double-click the 1 on the play field)/or on first and last sliderpoint?
01:07:097 (1,2,3,4) - Flip across y-axis or otherwise separate from (6,7)?
01:31:064 (1,2,3) - Move (3) up?
01:38:017 (3,4,5) - Move (5) up.
01:44:070 (1) - Finish+clap instead?

[Insane]
00:00:041 (2,3,4,5) - (2,3) down or (4,5) down?
00:26:013 (3) - Whistle+clap?
01:14:050 (1,2,3,4) - Get possessed by a demon lately?...
01:44:070 (1) - Finish+clap instead?

[Easy]
End kiai at 78,582 - dunno if you're supposed to end kiai or if it doesn't matter, but my OCD causes me to point this out

[Hard]
00:58:099 (1,2,3,4) - Clap spam seems sorta out of place compared to the rest of the song

[Insane]
00:58:058 (4) - Changing to normal here sounds odd to me

Nothing I can really mod here, just pointed out those odd parts. Also maybe you could use a custom sampleset with that little clap noise from the song? Though I'm sure it'd be a pain to get so... just have a star :3

You're too pro for my modding

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MP3 is really sick, especially 00:39:398 - 01:05:521
Try this > http://up.ppy.sh/files/zeroone.mp3

~Easy~
Map whole song.
00:15:031 (3) - remove hitclap
00:17:076 (2) - ^
00:40:001 (2) - silence all sliderticks
00:43:027 (3) - ^
00:46:054 (3) - ^
00:49:080 (3) - ^

~Hard~
00:03:088 (1) - repeat 8 times
00:10:041 (2) - ^
00:38:058 (1,2) - too close
00:39:019 (4,1) - ^

~Insane~
Maps can be harder so I don't call this diff "Insane".
No major issues found.


No star for now

[Easy]
No issues :3

[Hard] Grid level=2
00:31:03(7) - How about move 1 grid right?

[Insane]
No issues :3

Not much issues XD
Good map and I hope it will be ranked soon.

Here's my star :3

Easy

The diff feels very cut off...

Hard

Try putting the spinners that follow notes 1/4 after instead of 1/2 after; Example: 01:29:194 (1)

00:15:317 (X) - Add note here
00:20:214 (X) - ^
00:50:623 (X) - ^ It feels awkward if you don't put a note between the notes in (00:50:419 (1,2,3) )
00:51:031 (X) - ^
00:58:990 (1,2,3,4) - Sounds awkward. Replace?

Insane
Some combos would sound better if you add a note in between some other notes

00:58:582 - Lower volume
01:35:929 - Add note

Changed the new MP3, changed all the offsets, mapped Easy to the end, and a whole bunch of other nice stuff. Check it out!

Thanks everyone.

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Sounds better.

[Hard]
00:04:057 (1) - Shorten?
00:11:010 (2) - ^?
00:24:098 (1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/normal-hitclap.mp3 as a custom hitsound finish?
01:45:039 (1) - ^+ clap?

[Insane]
00:26:071 (2,3,4,1) - Looks funny, the (3) kinda juts out there.
00:34:098 (3) - Whistle?
01:45:039 (1) - same as Hard?

[Easy]
Did something weird happen with your sliders? Most of them seem off.

00:11:092 (1) - custom hitsound?
00:24:098 (1) - ^?
01:44:016 (1) - ^?

Dusty wrote:

Sounds better.

[Hard]
00:04:057 (1) - Shorten?
00:11:010 (2) - ^?
00:24:098 (1) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/normal-hitclap.mp3 as a custom hitsound finish?
01:45:039 (1) - ^+ clap?

[Insane]
00:26:071 (2,3,4,1) - Looks funny, the (3) kinda juts out there.
00:34:098 (3) - Whistle?
01:45:039 (1) - same as Hard?

[Easy]
Did something weird happen with your sliders? Most of them seem off.

00:11:092 (1) - custom hitsound?
00:24:098 (1) - ^?
01:44:016 (1) - ^?

I found the custom sound to be a bit weird, but other things were changed, thanks!

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

Slider Tick Rate: 2
00:04:168 - Add a circle

Starred~

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Hard]

It's ok

[Insane]

Slider Tick Rate: 2
00:04:168 - Add a circle

Starred~

Done, thanks!

hellooo little child ^^

Insane:
00:26:617 [1]looks better if it goes up one tiny square and like it auto moves to the left o.o
00:30:494 [1]one tiny square to the right?
01:32:739 [2]wanna move it up one tiny square, it looks more even between the before and after note o.o

Hard:
fine.

Easy:
meh..just wondering
00:18:454 [2] why is this one so clsoe the the slider when the other beats are like same disctance apaart o.O just caught my eye,. looks weird i think to be in an easy. myabe it's just me o.o

wahh ~

star star for you you ^^

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As your request in my queue.

[Easy]
Fine. But there's one thing that make me feel crazy. 01:19:067 (1). Too close to the spinner. That's a bit too hard for beginner

player. If you want to change it, make the slider longer (on the (1) note) and delete the (1) note. But overall, nice.

[Hard]
00:04:057 (1) - Add one more repeat.
00:11:010 (2) - ^
00:36:082 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle.

[Insane]
00:11:010 (1) - Add one more repeat. Remove finish.
00:11:071 (1) - Remove finish.
00:13:096 (3) - Add finish.
00:26:041 (3) - Add clap maybe.
01:36:000 (2) - Add one more repeat.
01:42:053 (2) - ^

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However, you may ignore them all ^^
And *star~

o2jam !!!

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Yay Fuukomod. Thanks!

IRC Modded.

Bubbled!

Wow...bubbling is so fast...

Wow...Ranking is so fast. ;w;