Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - Crystal Dream TV Size ver. · forum

Raisa12

330 posts

Joined January 2013

Raisa12 2014-02-22T19:12:21+00:00

amm ... would you accept GD ?
In fact, I did a normal diff to map ~

SPOILER

https://www.dropbox.com/s/pyuvngardjk1is3/Normal%20G%20Diff.rar

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-02-23T07:31:31+00:00

Raisa12 wrote:
amm ... would you accept GD ?
In fact, I did a normal diff to map ~
SPOILER
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pyuvngardjk1is3/Normal%20G%20Diff.rar

все All diffs are already occupied ><
thx for try :3

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-02T08:03:41+00:00

http://puu.sh/7fRcP.rar

sorry for be late, hope you like it

Nekonyan

305 posts

Joined October 2013

Nekonyan 2014-03-02T15:19:47+00:00

well, this is my suggestion:

Easy

00:43:550 (1,2) - merge this 2 slider into 1 slider
00:51:883 (3,4) - too fast here, suggest delete circle and make slider longer
00:53:341 - this is easy diff, right? the beat is too fast here, try make it smooth c:

Normal & Insane

No Problem I see so far c:

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-04T17:18:09+00:00

done
http://puu.sh/7iO2H.osu

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-05T08:27:14+00:00

nekoaddict wrote:
well, this is my suggestion:

Easy

00:43:550 (1,2) - merge this 2 slider into 1 slider nah, i dont like this rhythm
00:51:883 (3,4) - too fast here, suggest delete circle and make slider longer ok
00:53:341 - this is easy diff, right? the beat is too fast here, try make it smooth c: ok

Normal & Insane

No Problem I see so far c:

thx for suggestion

BCslav

19 posts

Joined July 2012

BCslav 2014-03-05T13:37:40+00:00

I'm afraid I couldn't mod much.
All difficulties are well made :3

You could optionally swap the spinner on Easy 01:21:883 (1) with some notes.

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-05T14:11:37+00:00

BCslav wrote:
I'm afraid I couldn't mod much.
All difficulties are well made :3

You could optionally swap the spinner on Easy 01:21:883 (1) with some notes.

nah, spinner is fine here
anyway thx for mod xD

DeletedUser_3044645

DeletedUser_3044645 2014-03-06T03:31:08+00:00

Hi~

Wow! I love this song!!

[General]
~~Move offset to 00:03:133~~
Edit : actually 00:01:882
I don't think this is needed

SPOILER

Oh well..

[Easy]
00:25:216 (3) - Try moving it to the right a little bit for better flow
00:30:633 (1) - I think this flows better

SPOILER

01:04:800 (2) - move this down for better flow
01:11:050 (2) - possible blanket?
01:16:050 (2) - 188 : 296 seems to provide better flow imo
01:21:883 (1) - end the spinner at 01:23:550 that way you can add hit finish too
01:23:654 (1) - if you fixed the spinner move this too (well it's obvious.. but sometimes people forget)

[Natsu's Normal]
00:46:883 (1) - move the tail to the left for better flow??
01:12:508 (3,1) - spacing?

[Rare's Hard]
00:27:300 (5,1) - stack them?
01:11:466 (5,2) - I don't think it looks good because they overlap. 01:12:091 (2) - try 152 : 128?
01:18:133 (5,2) - stack them? it would be trickier when HD is applied :3

[Insane]
00:03:966 (1) - delete NC
00:05:216 (1) - ^
00:07:716 (1) - ^
00:25:633 (5) - try to place this somewhere else? I think it's a bad flow
00:25:008 (4,1) - stack tail?
00:32:925 (4) - stack on 00:31:466 (4) ?
00:33:758 (6) - stack on 00:32:925 (4) head?
00:39:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this flows so much better..

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00:41:258 (6) - crtl + g??
00:46:883 (1,2) - I think this is a bad flow. How about stack 00:47:508 (2) on 00:47:716 (3) head?
00:48:550 (1) - Better flow?

SPOILER

00:50:841 (7) - 00:49:800 (4,6) - if this was supposed to be blanket, might as well stack 00:50:841 (7) on 00:49:800 (4)
00:56:050 (1,2,3,4) - How about increasing DS to emphasize this part
01:06:258 (2) - crtl + g?
01:06:675 (3) - ^
01:07:300 (5) - Try this for better flow

SPOILER

01:12:300 (6,1) - increase DS?
01:12:716 (2) - try stacking on 01:11:675 (5) head

Very well made~~ but I thought the Insane could have been a little bit more harder ~~considering Rare's Hard is a bit hard :3~~
Hope my mod helped and good luck!

P A N

2,354 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-03-06T05:43:35+00:00

[Insane]

00:06:050 (4) - It should be the same way of that 2 notes like this http://puu.sh/7kGqT.jpg but I don't like 00:06:466 (5) because it's break my flow, it should stop move to hit it.
00:07:508 - add note is better.
00:20:425 (6,7) - it has 1/1 break before a new set is come so please make this more flow, ex: http://puu.sh/7kGIg.jpg
00:25:841 (1) - should make it's tail stack with the previous slider's tail. for avoid the overlap.
00:50:216 (6) - more blanket.
01:01:258 (2,3,1,2,3) - looks a bit random for me, try to set it more :X
01:03:550 (7,1) - should be jump on 7 since it's a strong beat.
01:07:300 (5) - decrease a bit curve to make it looks same as (3)

[Rare]

00:32:091 (6) - move this a bit up and make (7) perfect stack.
01:07:300 (6) - can blanket more.

[Nardtzue]

00:11:883 (4) - would be great if you can make this blanket too.
00:29:591 (5) - it should be around 217|224 imo, to make it's space from (4) look balance with (3) to (4)
00:38:966 (5) - feel like distance error here.
01:13:758 (1) - hmm I don't know about this spacing.

[Easy]

00:28:133 (2) - kind of force the flow here, fix if possible.

that's all, good luck im headache

Rare

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Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-06T06:53:27+00:00

No Dap wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
00:27:300 (5,1) - stack them?
01:11:466 (5,2) - I don't think it looks good because they overlap. 01:12:091 (2) - try 152 : 128?
01:18:133 (5,2) - stack them? it would be trickier when HD is applied :3

all no change becausei don't care stack for me.
thanks for modding~

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-06T08:37:00+00:00

Fixed the spacing issues, dunno how it happen lol

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 56050
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Title:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
Artist:Super Sonico
ArtistUnicode:Super Sonico
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:nitroplus soniani ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:4
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Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-06T13:22:50+00:00

fix some things~
thx for mod :3

kintyan

150 posts

Joined September 2010

kintyan 2014-03-06T15:38:01+00:00

hi~

[General]
00:03:550 - red line move to 00:00:216 or 00:01:883
Letterbox during breaks - remove check

[Easy]
00:21:466 (3) - suggestion

SPOILER

00:18:550 (3) - copy

00:54:800 (2,3) - ^

SPOILER

00:54:800 - 1/1slider
00:55:425 - 1/2slider return

01:21:883 (1) - 2/1 slider return?

[Natsu's Normal]
00:05:216 (4,5,6) - suggestion

SPOILER

00:05:841 (5) - remove

00:55:216 (3) or 00:56:050 (4) - add nc?

[Rare's Hard]
00:11:883 (4) - nc
00:32:508 (7) - 00:31:050 (4) on stack

[Insane]
please see AIbot

SPOILER

00:07:716 (1) - remove nc
00:12:716 (4) - add nc
00:25:633 (5) - move to x316 y108

SPOILER

00:26:883 (1,2) - suggestion

SPOILER

00:26:883 (1) - 1/2slider and remove nc
00:27:300 - add circle and nc

00:29:800 (5) - nc
00:37:508 (1) - remove nc
00:38:341 (3) - nc
00:39:175 (1) - remove nc
00:40:008 (3) - nc
00:51:883 (3) - change circle?
00:59:175 (1) - move to 00:58:341 (6) - head ?
01:05:841 (1,2) - suggestion

SPOILER

01:14:800 (4) - x224 y244 how about?

good luck!!

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-06T16:00:50+00:00

Sheryl wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
00:11:883 (4) - nc
00:32:508 (7) - 00:31:050 (4) on stack

all no change.
thanks for modding~

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-06T16:21:59+00:00

Sheryl wrote:
hi~

[Easy]
00:21:466 (3) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:18:550 (3) - copy
00:54:800 (2,3) - ^
SPOILER

00:54:800 - 1/1slider
00:55:425 - 1/2slider return
01:21:883 (1) - 2/1 slider return?

[Insane]
please see AIbot
SPOILER
00:07:716 (1) - remove nc
00:12:716 (4) - add nc
00:25:633 (5) - move to x316 y108
SPOILER
00:26:883 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:26:883 (1) - 1/2slider and remove nc
00:27:300 - add circle and nc
00:29:800 (5) - nc
00:37:508 (1) - remove nc
00:38:341 (3) - nc
00:39:175 (1) - remove nc
00:40:008 (3) - nc
00:51:883 (3) - change circle?
00:59:175 (1) - move to 00:58:341 (6) - head ?
01:05:841 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER
01:14:800 (4) - x224 y244 how about?

good luck!!

fix some!
thx for mod~

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2014-03-07T00:36:34+00:00

Hey

[Insane]

00:03:551 (3) - I general think this slider can be not so curve lol.... more like this is better 00:04:383 (2) -
00:10:216 (6) - Umm it should NC here but not 00:10:633 (1) - ?
00:22:716 (1) - How about use this slider, it look more smooth.

SPOILER

00:27:925 (3) - It should not use a slider to cover this rhythm, i think it would be better if you use 1/2 reverse slider or 3 notes.
00:33:966 (7) - Same as up, i think this slider is so curve.
00:36:883 (4) - How about CTRL+G ? it will get better flow Imo.

SPOILER

I think the NCs aren't assigned properly.

[Hard]

Nice Hard, but just one thing to consider: I see your diff didn't have any break time , it might not the must but i wish you can put some break at here.

[Normal]
AR+1 ? seem really slow imo

00:26:675 (1) - wow umm.. I think this is stiff, you not need to put like this right? Just put normal slider instead.
00:45:633 - I think this green line is unused, and I don't see why you need to put this clap.
00:48:550 (4) - ^ slider-end

[Easy]

Nothing;

Mostly are suggestion.
Good luck!

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-07T11:25:36+00:00

Mintong wrote:
Hey

[Insane]

00:03:551 (3) - I general think this slider can be not so curve lol.... more like this is better 00:04:383 (2) -
00:10:216 (6) - Umm it should NC here but not 00:10:633 (1) - ?
00:22:716 (1) - How about use this slider, it look more smooth.
SPOILER
00:27:925 (3) - It should not use a slider to cover this rhythm, i think it would be better if you use 1/2 reverse slider or 3 notes.
00:33:966 (7) - Same as up, i think this slider is so curve.
00:36:883 (4) - How about CTRL+G ? it will get better flow Imo.
SPOILER

I think the NCs aren't assigned properly.

[Easy]

Nothing;

Mostly are suggestion.
Good luck!

fix some!
thx for mod :3

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-07T12:28:52+00:00

Mintong wrote:
[Hard]
Nice Hard, but just one thing to consider: I see your diff didn't have any break time , it might not the must but i wish you can put some break at here.

pls gimme point out to time that you thought.

Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-03-07T18:24:38+00:00

Mod by Request :3

[General]

I suggest to move start of the short kiai-break a bit. It would be cooler in my opinion if it was placed at 01:09:383 or 01:09:800.

[Easy]

00:16:466 (3) - A slider always connects a more emphasized beat (slider-start) and a less emphasized beat (slider-end) together. Often, the rhythm is not good if a slider ends on the big white tick. Here it is ok, since the big white tick doesn't have a very loud or emphasized beat. But, if you do it like this, please delete the finish at the end of the slider, because it destroys the whole feeling of the slider when playing. The tick doesn't need a hitsound.
Awesome diff ^-^

[Natsu's Normal]

00:05:841 (5) - Small spacing difference but it is quite noticable.
00:22:716 (5) - Is that finish placed on purpose? Because it sounds pretty unfitting to me.
00:36:050 (5) - Ok, so the finish was on purpose o: I suggest to remove both.
00:40:633 (2,3) - You could make a blanket here, to make it look better.
00:56:466 (5) - Again, small spacing difference, this time even more nazi than the other one.
01:21:883 (4) - Consider adding a finish on the slider's start because it's hearable in the music.
Cool ^^

[Rare's Hard]

00:30:841 (3,4) - Make a blanket here would look good.
Well, it's a nice diff, I personally don't like it very much though, because I prefer Hard's with less 1/2 and more 1/1 and some 1/4 to make it more interesting. In my opinion, at many places in the map a 1/1-slider would have fit better, but it's fine as you got it.

[Insane]

00:06:466 (5) - This antijump doesn't fit and breaks the flow. Consider to ctrl+g those: 00:06:466 (5,6)
00:27:925 (3,1) - Make a blanket?
Really nice diff! Well done o:

The mapset is awesome! I loved the Insane and Easy the most <3
Anyways, I wasn't able to find much ;w; I hope it was a useful mod nevertheless... Good luck with the mapset! Keep up the great work :3

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-07T19:15:24+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
[Rare's Hard]

00:30:841 (3,4) - Make a blanket here would look good.
Well, it's a nice diff, I personally don't like it very much though, because I prefer Hard's with less 1/2 and more 1/1 and some 1/4 to make it more interesting. In my opinion, at many places in the map a 1/1-slider would have fit better, but it's fine as you got it.

no change thanks for modding

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2014-03-08T00:56:33+00:00

never mind, my fault. sorry

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-08T06:42:33+00:00

Sheryl wrote:
hi~
[Natsu's Normal]
00:05:216 (4,5,6) - suggestion did some here
00:55:216 (3) or 00:56:050 (4) - add nc? nah it broke my pattern
good luck!!

Mintong wrote:
Hey
[Normal]
AR+1 ? seem really slow imo 5 play better, also th BPM is really low
00:26:675 (1) - wow umm.. I think this is stiff, you not need to put like this right? Just put normal slider instead. It fit the music :p I'll think about this
00:45:633 - I think this green line is unused, and I don't see why you need to put this clap. just keeping my pattern
00:48:550 (4) - ^ slider-end ^
Good luck!

Desperate-kun wrote:
Mod by Request :3

[General]

[Natsu's Normal]

00:05:841 (5) - Small spacing difference but it is quite noticable. fixed in previous mod
00:22:716 (5) - Is that finish placed on purpose? Because it sounds pretty unfitting to me. was a mistake
00:36:050 (5) - Ok, so the finish was on purpose o: I suggest to remove both.
00:40:633 (2,3) - You could make a blanket here, to make it look better. is fine now o.o idk nothing wrong with it
00:56:466 (5) - Again, small spacing difference, this time even more nazi than the other one. not even noticeable in game
01:21:883 (4) - Consider adding a finish on the slider's start because it's hearable in the music. k
Cool ^^

thanks for mods

SPOILER

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HonKAn

226 posts

Joined March 2013

HonKAn 2014-03-08T06:50:57+00:00

hello~

[Insane]

00:06:466 (5) - how about this pattern?

SPOILER

00:21:050 - add note
00:30:841 (2,3) - how about this pattern?

SPOILER

Good look!.

Last edited by HonKAn 2014-03-08T06:52:56+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

HonKAn

226 posts

Joined March 2013

HonKAn 2014-03-08T06:51:21+00:00

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-08T10:23:22+00:00

all no change
thx for mod

Pandiar

391 posts

Joined February 2012

Pandiar 2014-03-10T04:33:55+00:00

[Insane]
00:03:551 (3) - reverse curve?

SPOILER

00:04:383 (2) - Ctrl + G?
00:06:466 (5) - x320y296?
00:06:675 (6) - x488 y296?
00:27:508 (2) - move 00:25:841 (1)
00:27:716 - add note about x40 y216?
00:30:841 (2) - x216 y224?
00:36:675 (3) - x32 y260?
00:40:008 (3) - move on the 00:39:175 (1) about x168 y56?
00:40:425 (4) - bad flow imao x112y248?
00:55:841 (3) - x376y120?
01:00:425 (2,3) - Ctrl + G?
01:03:133 (5) - add finish
01:09:383 (1,1) - starting position is 01:09:383 and 01:09:800

SPOILER

01:12:508 (1) - x300y204?

[Hard]
00:03:341 (1) - 斜めにしてあげるのはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

00:19:592 (4) - こっち向きはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

00:27:300 (5) - Ctrl G してリバースにしてみるのはどうですか
00:41:258 (5) - 00:40:216 (1) この辺に配置するのはどうでしょう？

[Normal]
uncheck widescreen and letterbox

[Easy]
nice

goood luck !

truth revealer

86 posts

Joined July 2013

truth revealer 2014-03-10T10:58:29+00:00

Hi nice beatmap...

Mod from me :
[Easy]
00:36:883 -> Not stacked properly.
00:37:716 -> Not stacked properly.
00:38:133 -> Not stacked properly.
00:39:383 -> Not stacked properly.
00:39:800 -> Not stacked properly.
00:40:216 -> Not stacked properly.

[Rare's Hard]
00:06:883 -> Make it curve?
00:09:383 -> Make it curve?
00:14:800 -> Make it curve?
00:17:300 -> Make it curve?

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-10T17:15:52+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Hard]
00:03:341 (1) - 斜めにしてあげるのはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:19:592 (4) - こっち向きはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:27:300 (5) - Ctrl G してリバースにしてみるのはどうですか
00:41:258 (5) - 00:40:216 (1) この辺に配置するのはどうでしょう？

truth revealer wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
00:06:883 -> Make it curve?
00:09:383 -> Make it curve?
00:14:800 -> Make it curve?
00:17:300 -> Make it curve?

all no change. thanks for modding~

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2014-03-11T08:46:13+00:00

hey~ here for the m4m.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
the artist is incorrect. you have to put the name of the band, and i'm sure you know the name since you ranked a couple maps.
add the english meaning of the band, First Astronomical Velocity. as well as 第一宇宙速度 for the Japanese meaning in the tags.
also add "R_a_r_e" and "AcceleratorRUS" in the tags since you 2 ranked maps from those names.

[Easy]
00:05:216 (3) - make this slider look like (1). it'll flow a lot smoother for beginners, as well as symmetrical for this combo during gameplay.
00:10:216 (1) - the direction this is taking feels a bit uncomfortable for me. perhaps you can do Ctrl+> to make the transition even smoother for beginners like i said above?
00:11:883 (3) - what about a curve to make this slider flow more effectively during gameplay?
00:20:216 (1) - ^. it'll feel like a smoother bridge without the bumps and cracks IMO.
00:25:216 (3,4,1) - maybe you can do something like this for more effect and symmetry in the pattern?
00:29:800 (4,5) - i suggest that you use a 1/1 slider here because of the emphasis in the bass guitar. i find it more flowy than following the drums IMO.
00:54:800 (2,3) - ik you can do something easier than this. may i suggest something like this since it's simpler and a lot easier than the previous rhythm during gameplay?
01:16:466 (3) - i find that using a 1/1 repeat here feels uncomfortable to follow during gmaeplay. replace it for a circle and a 1/1 slider to make it play more effectively during gameplay.
this is a great easy. besides that 1/2 rhythm. can't do anything about it sadly

.

[Natsu's Normal]
00:11:883 (4) - i think you should make this slider look like (1) mainly because it'll be more symmetrical and more smoother to follow during gameplay. it should look something like this.
00:15:216 (1,1) - i want you to highly consider leaving a 1/1 gap. just because it's a normal diff, doesn't mean that certain players have time to recover after the spinner. i really feel that doing this would give time for players to recover for the next note during gameplay.
00:50:008 (6) - maybe a drum clap to emphasize those drums in the BGM? it'll sound more effective during gameplay.
01:03:550 (1,2) - the overlap feels like it's untidy and uncomfortable to follow at the same time. i really think that doing something like this is more tidier and more comfortable to follow during gameplay.
i really think there can be minor improvements in the rhythm selections.

[Rare-sama's Hard]
00:03:341 (1) - don't you think that this is too far out? what about using 2 circles instead to make this an easier introduction to the song?
00:08:550 (1) - i think it'd make more sense if this is flipped by using Ctrl+G. the transition would flow a lot smoother from the previous combo during gameplay.
00:29:800 (3,4) - add claps at the end of (3), and at (4) for better emphasis in the drums. it sounds too plain and empty to follow during gameplay.
00:42:716 (3,4) - same idea here, but use drum claps instead. same reason as above.
00:46:050 (7) - same as 00:29:800 - (3).
00:49:383 (3,4) - for this one, use a clap on the end of (3), and a drum clap on (4). i'm sure you get the idea on why.
not bad. just the hitsounds at the calm part bothered me. consider adding them to make it sound more effective.

[Insane]
00:04:800 (3) - perhaps you can do this for symmetry and transition during gameplay?
00:06:466 (5,6) - i think you can switch these notes around to make it more fun to follow for players during gameplay.
00:11:466 (3) - why don't you keep the flow steady by using the same slider and DS? it should look like this.
00:30:841 (2) - space this out. it follows the same lyric, but it feels like the "me" in "yume" is asking for a small jump in this part of the song IMO.
00:56:050 (1,2,3,4) - i say that you delete this part. since you left this part blank for the easy diff, you're breaking consistency with this part since it ruins the setup for the kiai during gameplay.
01:11:675 (5) - you can make this slider look a lot better. if you mention the blanket, the blanket doesn't look nice during gameplay. fix the slider by making it more symmetrical, and move the next note somewhere else if you want. it should look something like this if you do this.
an acceptable insane. liking the AR9 feel of the diff btw.

and that's all i got. remember to reply with reason to what you guys fixed and didn't fix in my mod. anyways, GL and don't give up on this map

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-11T09:13:36+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
hey~ here for the m4m.

[Natsu's Normal]

00:15:216 (1,1) - i want you to highly consider leaving a 1/1 gap. just because it's a normal diff, doesn't mean that certain players have time to recover after the spinner. i really feel that doing this would give time for players to recover for the next note during gameplay.
well about this I'll like to keep it, since is a really low bpm and I have some new players to test my diff before and was ok, also there is a easy diff, and without that beat I can't represent the vocals properly orz

thanks for mod, others are done

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56050
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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TitleUnicode:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
Artist:Super Sonico
ArtistUnicode:Super Sonico
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:nitroplus soniani ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare
BeatmapID:379105
BeatmapSetID:149241

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
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272,104,38966,2,0,L|288:24,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,32,39591,2,0,L|420:104,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,148,40008,6,0,P|420:200|364:236,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,236,40633,2,0,P|258:266|243:323,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,41466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,236,41883,2,0,P|256:204|192:196,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,116,42716,2,0,P|166:107|217:75,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,12,43550,6,0,P|378:20|429:52,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,112,44175,2,0,B|432:152|432:152|464:176|464:176|456:224,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,328,45008,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,364,45425,2,0,B|261:370|261:370|237:338|237:338|197:346,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,364,46258,2,0,P|48:372|12:368,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,320,46883,6,0,P|132:264|120:192,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,116,47716,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,44,48133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,144,48550,2,0,P|261:160|320:156,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,132,49175,2,0,P|428:148|428:212,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,284,50008,1,8,3:0:0:0:
340,284,50216,6,0,B|288:312|288:312|256:320|228:296,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,51050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,180,51466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,128,51883,2,0,B|371:95|349:71|349:71|300:38,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,8,52508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,36,52925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
63,136,53341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
63,136,53550,6,0,P|76:192|128:219,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,220,54175,2,0,P|239:247|252:303,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,220,55216,2,0,P|76:247|63:303,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,324,56466,2,0,L|304:324,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,320,56883,6,0,P|404:296|432:236,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,180,57508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,68,57925,2,0,P|360:56|328:56,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,76,58341,2,0,B|220:120|168:72|168:72|116:100,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,132,59175,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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456,184,61883,2,0,B|449:152|436:126|436:126|408:113|377:114,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,293,63133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,352,63550,6,0,L|184:348,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,292,64175,2,0,P|212:256|280:248,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,284,65008,2,0,P|420:236|412:168,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,208,65841,2,0,P|241:214|189:185,2,120,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,92,67091,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,92,67300,6,0,P|214:66|156:75,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
43,119,68133,2,0,P|34:61|60:8,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,192,69383,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,228,69800,2,0,P|288:228|312:220,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,184,70425,6,0,B|468:168|480:132|480:132|480:92,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,124,71675,2,0,B|260:92|192:132|144:108,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,80,72508,2,0,B|52:60|48:24|48:24|-4:24,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,132,73758,5,2,0:0:0:0:
200,132,73966,2,0,P|256:160|296:216,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,74800,2,0,P|245:342|298:368,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,368,75425,2,0,P|413:341|450:295,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,176,76258,2,0,P|440:120|452:48,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,60,77091,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,276,78133,2,0,L|216:324,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,288,80425,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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236,36,81883,2,0,L|282:73,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,152,82508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,188,82925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,152,83341,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,84070,12,0,88966,0:0:0:0:

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-11T13:43:01+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
[Rare-sama's Hard]
00:03:341 (1) - don't you think that this is too far out? what about using 2 circles instead to make this an easier introduction to the song? this is really my favorite pattern. i want to keep my pattern ><. if you not agree it, i will change to triplets.
00:08:550 (1) - i think it'd make more sense if this is flipped by using Ctrl+G. the transition would flow a lot smoother from the previous combo during gameplay. no change.
00:29:800 (3,4) - add claps at the end of (3), and at (4) for better emphasis in the drums. it sounds too plain and empty to follow during gameplay. added clap to (3).
00:42:716 (3,4) - same idea here, but use drum claps instead. same reason as above. i don't think so. i like one with now on.
00:46:050 (7) - same as 00:29:800 - (3). 00:46:050 (7) - 00:49:383 (3) - added to clap to end
00:49:383 (3,4) - for this one, use a clap on the end of (3), and a drum clap on (4). i'm sure you get the idea on why. ^
not bad. just the hitsounds at the calm part bothered me. consider adding them to make it sound more effective.

thanks for modding~
http://puu.sh/7rkbI.osu

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,147 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2014-03-12T08:15:31+00:00

@Rare: it's fine if you wanna keep it, but personally, i feel that it's better if you get more opinions about that 1/4 slider at the beginning.

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-12T10:01:35+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
@Rare: it's fine if you wanna keep it, but personally, i feel that it's better if you get more opinions about that 1/4 slider at the beginning.

thanks!

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-12T14:18:58+00:00

Pandiar wrote:
[Insane]
00:03:551 (3) - reverse curve?
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00:04:383 (2) - Ctrl + G?
00:06:466 (5) - x320y296?
00:06:675 (6) - x488 y296?
00:27:508 (2) - move 00:25:841 (1)
00:27:716 - add note about x40 y216?
00:30:841 (2) - x216 y224?
00:36:675 (3) - x32 y260?
00:40:008 (3) - move on the 00:39:175 (1) about x168 y56?
00:40:425 (4) - bad flow imao x112y248?
00:55:841 (3) - x376y120?
01:00:425 (2,3) - Ctrl + G?
01:03:133 (5) - add finish
01:09:383 (1,1) - starting position is 01:09:383 and 01:09:800
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01:12:508 (1) - x300y204?

[Normal]
uncheck widescreen and letterbox

[Easy]
nice

goood luck !

fix some, thx for mod :3

Byakugan249 wrote:
hey~ here for the m4m.

[Easy]
00:05:216 (3) - make this slider look like (1). it'll flow a lot smoother for beginners, as well as symmetrical for this combo during gameplay. i wanna keep my pattern
00:10:216 (1) - the direction this is taking feels a bit uncomfortable for me. perhaps you can do Ctrl+> to make the transition even smoother for beginners like i said above? ^

[Insane]
00:04:800 (3) - perhaps you can do this for symmetry and transition during gameplay? i want to keep my pattern
00:56:050 (1,2,3,4) - i say that you delete this part. since you left this part blank for the easy diff, you're breaking consistency with this part since it ruins the setup for the kiai during gameplay. i like this place i dont wanna change it
an acceptable insane. liking the AR9 feel of the diff btw.

and that's all i got. remember to reply with reason to what you guys fixed and didn't fix in my mod. anyways, GL and don't give up on this map

thx for mod, others are done

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-03-13T08:36:04+00:00

Hi~ From PM modding request

my mod is all suggestion

[Easy]

00:48:550 (2) - i think put whistle to slider's end is better but this is your choice
00:59:383 (5,1) - delete whistle 5 and put 1's start
01:21:883 (1) - how about change like this ? http://puu.sh/7tyH6.jpg or http://puu.sh/7tyHN.jpg (just suggestion)

[Natsu's Normal]

00:04:800 (3,6) - umm better fix this overlap not to overlap. i fell little strange when i playing
fine~

[Rare's Hard]

00:48:341 (4,1) - overlapped better fix this
00:49:175 (2) - move this to 236, 8 will be clear
00:53:758 (2) - ^ 304, 280

[Insane]

01:03:133 (5,6,7) - make distance same will be good
01:10:008 (2,3,1) - ^
01:19:175 (4) - straight will be better
01:21:466 (3) - move to 384, 352

Nice map~~

GOOD LUCK

Unsfamiliar

540 posts

Joined May 2013

Unsfamiliar 2014-03-13T11:43:39+00:00

Hey Sonico o/

As requested:

Insane

00:03:551 (3,1) - I think you should swap the new combo here. It makes more sense if the combo begins at 00:03:550, since this is where the measure begins. Additionally, you've used a finish to emphasise the note there, which is a strong indicator for this particular part.
00:03:966 (1,2,3) - The flow here could be improved slightly. I will give you a suggestion, but what you have now isn't particularly bad. It's just the fact that the song is only 144 bpm, makes the possibly awkward bits more evident. Anyway, I think the angle between 00:03:966 (1,2) is too large. This means that the exit from (1)'s slider end is to sharp to (2) imo. To fix this, I suggest you Ctrl+G 00:04:383 (2).
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Now this essentially increases the jump a bit, but I think this is absolutely fine because if you listen carefully you can hear a nice bell sound (or whatever) that's worth emphasising. Plus the jump is easy to catch now, because of the subtle angle. Furthermore, this generates a very nice circular flow leading into the next 2 sliders 00:04:800 (3,1).
00:16:883 (6,1) - Swap new combo for the same reason I mentioned before.
00:30:216 (8,1) - ^
00:40:633 (5,6,1) - This is a kind of awkward use of slider angles and entrance into a jump pattern. I feel 00:41:258 (6) should not be below the (5) slider end, this makes for some jarring play (for me). I can't really suggest something in particular that could fix this though... Well if you agree with what I'm saying, try find an arrangement that will also lead better into the following jump sequence starting at 00:41:883 (1). Right now, entry into this sequence is pretty strange coming from a reverse slider in the opposite direction.
00:45:841 (2,3,4,5) -
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This rhythm works a lot better for me, as it follows the vocals with the 2 sliders, and it works as a nice build up to the following jump 00:46:675 (4,1).
00:51:883 (3,4) - Try Ctrl+G this on the timeline. 00:51:883 - This vocal should be empathised by a note rather than a slider, as it is a short, sharp sound. 00:52:091 - Whereas the vocal part form here is longer and warrants a slider.
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00:53:966 (2,3,4) - Similar sort of thing here regarding rhythm. 00:53:966 - Short. 00:54:175 - Long. 00:54:591 - Long.
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By fixing these rhythm issues I think it would be much more comfortable to play and is nice in terms of predictability/flow.
01:03:550 (7,1) - Swap new combo.
01:11:258 (4,5) - This is sort of unorthodox, particularly for a mouse player like myself. I was expecting some sort of circular flow here, considering you build up here 01:10:841 (3,4). However, the entry into 01:11:675 (5) is jarring in terms of direction; the way it is curved is counter-intuitive. I suggest you Ctrl+H (flip horizontally) this slider and make it less vertical. The following works nicely for me:
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You will have to adjust the spacing of the following note slightly if you decide to do this.
01:13:341 (4) - Unnecessary 3/4 slider. There is, in fact, no audible beat on the blue tick. I think you should avoid using 3/4 sliders just for the sake of it, particularly when a normal 1/2 slider works much better as it catches the beat on the big white tick.
01:23:966 (2) - This could use some more spacing from the previous note, to emphasise this final note. Plus, it doesn't make sense if the spacing of 01:23:341 (4,1) is larger.

Rare's Hard

00:53:550 (1,2) - This jump doesn't really make sense in my opinion. The song doesn't warrant one and (2) isn't worth emphasising. If anything, the jump should be between here 00:53:133 (9,1) instead.
01:18:966 (3,4) - I think it would work wonders if you moved these two sliders 1/2 forward in the timeline. This will follow the vocals better, and would be much more comfortable to play. Just try it but you'll also have to delete 01:19:800 (5), and add a note here 01:18:966. For reference:
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Easy

00:38:133 (3,4) - This is the only 1/2 you've used in this entire difficulty if I'm not mistaken. Yeah probably don't do this ww. Beginners will absolutely freak out when they see this overlap. A 3/2 reverse slider from 00:37:716 would be sufficient imo if you really need to emphasise 00:38:341 (which I think you are correct in doing so. The reverse part also gives it a nice swing emphasising that red tick note even better!

Normal is fine for me, because well... it's Natsu

Well that's all! All suggestions, feel free to use them or not; only use them if it doesn't affect you mapping style :3
If you don't understand anything I mentioned, you can contact me any time in-game. Good luck and star for support~

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-13T20:58:42+00:00

Neta wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
00:48:341 (4,1) - overlapped better fix this
00:49:175 (2) - move this to 236, 8 will be clear
00:53:758 (2) - ^ 304, 280

Unsfamiliar wrote:
Rare's Hard
00:53:550 (1,2) - This jump doesn't really make sense in my opinion. The song doesn't warrant one and (2) isn't worth emphasising. If anything, the jump should be between here 00:53:133 (9,1) instead.
01:18:966 (3,4) - I think it would work wonders if you moved these two sliders 1/2 forward in the timeline. This will follow the vocals better, and would be much more comfortable to play. Just try it but you'll also have to delete 01:19:800 (5), and add a note here 01:18:966. For reference:
SPOILER

all no change.
thanks for modding~

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-14T07:02:38+00:00

Neta wrote:
Hi~ From PM modding request

[Natsu's Normal]
00:04:800 (3,6) - umm better fix this overlap not to overlap. i fell little strange when i playing It's on purpose, since is a pattern I always use in some maps :3
fine~

GOOD LUCK

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-14T17:40:13+00:00

fix some~
thx for mod :3

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2014-03-15T06:34:11+00:00

Hi~ Sonico Makaron

[ General ]

Photo size is 1366x768.
You must change as shown in the photograph the widescreen support..

SPOILER

[ Easy ]

AR - 1 ( It's likely a little easier is to play )

00:06:466 (4) - Delete whistle
00:16:466 (3) - Add finish
00:59:383 (5) - Delete whistle
01:07:300 (1) - Add finish ( Front of the slider )
01:08:966 (1) - ^
01:09:800 (3) - ^
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

[ Natsu's Normal ] Hi~ Natsu

00:05:216 (4) - umm .. I, slider not good many ...
It is recommended that you want to change the appearance.
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

no problem

[ Rare's Hard ] Hi~ Rare

00:03:341 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
00:13:966 (2) - Add finish
00:14:800 (5) - The finish added to the start of the slider
00:15:633 (3) - Add finish
00:16:050 (5) - The finish added to the start of the slider
00:16:466 (6) - ^
00:41:258 (5) - x236 y272 ( I think towards the location of this place is good. )
00:44:383 (3) - Ctrl + G
00:44:800 (4) - ^
00:52:508 (7) - ^
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

[ Insane ]

00:32:091 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:32:925 (4) - ^
00:36:050 (1) - ^
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

Good Map !!
Star~

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/384818 MY MAP!! M4M!! : )

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-15T11:11:44+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:
[ Rare's Hard ] Hi~ Rare
00:03:341 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
00:13:966 (2) - Add finish
00:14:800 (5) - The finish added to the start of the slider
00:15:633 (3) - Add finish
00:16:050 (5) - The finish added to the start of the slider
00:16:466 (6) - ^
00:41:258 (5) - x236 y272 ( I think towards the location of this place is good. )
00:44:383 (3) - Ctrl + G
00:44:800 (4) - ^
00:52:508 (7) - ^
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

all no change thanks for modding~

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-03-16T05:00:09+00:00

Random modding~

Easy:

00:41:883 (1) - Add Finish?
00:50:216 (1,3) - Make these sliders identical.
01:21:883 (1,1) - I doubt if a spinner in a row with a 1/4 gap is nice...

Natsu's Normal:

00:05:216 (4) - Since this is too round, the head and the end overlaps a little. Make a little space?
01:08:133 (2) - Make a better blanket with the previous slider.
00:11:883 (4,5) - Mind adjusting the flow like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1422511
01:23:550 (1) - I think a whistle should be in reverse to follow the vocal from 01:22:508 (5,6,7).

Rare's Hard:

00:30:216 (1) - (372,28) makes a better flow with the previous triplet.
01:05:008 (6,7) - Switching the rhythm fits the song better.

Insane:

00:32:925 (4) - Imo (134,196) would be more natural.
00:36:883 - Whistles were missing some part.. Add some like 00:37:508 and 00:39:175 for example?
00:51:883 (3) - Lessen the curve, it's too curvy compared to 00:51:050 (1,2).
01:00:841, 01:01:675 - Add whistle.

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-16T05:20:47+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Rare's Hard:
00:30:216 (1) - (372,28) makes a better flow with the previous triplet.
01:05:008 (6,7) - Switching the rhythm fits the song better.

all no change thanks for modding~

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-16T10:19:19+00:00

fix some~
thx for mod :3

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-16T10:24:30+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:
Hi~ Sonico Makaron

[ Natsu's Normal ] Hi~ Natsu

00:05:216 (4) - umm .. I, slider not good many ... I just move it a bit
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends I really don't like inaudible stuff orz

no problem

all apply in Sonnyc mod

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Super Sonico - Crystal Dream (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56050
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:クリスタル・ドリーム (TV Size)
Artist:Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo
ArtistUnicode:第一宇宙速度
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:nitroplus soniani ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare first astronomical velocity r_a_r_e acceleratorrus
BeatmapID:379105
BeatmapSetID:149241

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Super Sonico - Crystal Dream (TV Size).avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 128,255,255

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hopperhtkn

317 posts

Joined April 2010

hopperhtkn 2014-03-18T11:12:46+00:00

[General]
would you like to add this hitsound? the map could be better in that way imo
Normal-hitnormal

add that hitsound like this place
00:03:550 - 00:03:758 - 00:03:966 -
00:04:591 - 00:04:800 - 00:05:008 -
00:55:216 - 00:55:425 - 00:55:633 - 00:55:841 -

GL

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-18T11:48:39+00:00

hopperhtkn wrote:
[General]
would you like to add this hitsound? the map could be better in that way imo
Normal-hitnormal

add that hitsound like this place
00:03:550 - 00:03:758 - 00:03:966 -
00:04:591 - 00:04:800 - 00:05:008 -
00:55:216 - 00:55:425 - 00:55:633 - 00:55:841 -

GL

I like the when sound goes without hitnormal
thx for help~

Jethh

157 posts

Joined May 2013

Jethh 2014-03-19T05:38:18+00:00

Random testplay~ [Insane]

Testplay

Rhythm & flow are good
I guess it should be a little bit harder,
00:55:425 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - maybe increase Distance spacing in this place for example??

btw 00:03:965 (1) - end of slider isn't snapped.

Anyway, good job.

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-19T09:09:30+00:00

Jethh wrote:
Random testplay~ [Insane]
Testplay

Rhythm & flow are good
I guess it should be a little bit harder,
00:55:425 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - maybe increase Distance spacing in this place for example??

btw 00:03:965 (1) - end of slider isn't snapped.

Anyway, good job.

thx for test :3

RandF

1,249 posts

Joined March 2013

RandF 2014-03-19T11:56:55+00:00

hi~

[Easy]

00:08:966 (2,1) - how about symmetric pattern?

SPOILER

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189,156,10216,6,0,B|229:172|256:199|256:199|285:172|323:156,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:07:925 (2) - I prefer to move around 00:07:300 (2) - (x:256 y:150)
00:12:716 (4) - Ctrl+G for smoother cursor moving
00:25:633 (5) - how about blanketting (move to x:311 y:106) in common with 00:24:175 (2,3) - ?
00:42:925 (2,3) - I prefer to exchange their positions

[Natsu's Normal]

AR +1?
00:24:591 (3,4,5,6) - a little difficult to find rhythm. how about reverse sliders?
01:03:133 (4) - I suggest to stack on the head of 01:05:008 (3) -
01:10:112~01:10:216- don't you cut Kiai-Time in common with other diffs?

[Rare's Hard]

00:08:133 (5) - 下向きの方が流れが良くなると思います。
00:19:175 (3,4) - 前の00:18:341 (1,2) - が八の字気味なので逆八の字にしてはどうでしょう？
00:29:383 (1) - x:229 y:99 (stack correctly)
00:30:633 (2,5) - stackした方がきれいかと
00:31:050 (4,7) - ^

cute song<3
~Good Luck~

lgdry15

205 posts

Joined November 2013

lgdry15 2014-03-19T12:41:36+00:00

Well, hello! These are my suggestions.

First, if you change your timing offset to 3,540, your beats will become perfect!

Second, here are some suggestions about the notes. (The times below are based on the offset of 3,540.)

Normal

01:04:998 (3) Divide the slider into two sliders of 0.5 Beat Snap each.

Hard

00:28:540 (3) Delete the circle.
00:36:040 (8) Decrease the length of the slider to 0.5 Beat Snap.
00:43:540 (1) Increase the length of the slider to 1 Beat Snap.
01:06:040 (2) Delete the slider, and replace it with a circle at 01:06:248.

Insane

01:09:165 (1) Replace the slider with a circle at 01:09:165.
01:09:581 (1) Replace the slider with a circle at 01:09:581.
01:10:206 (1) Increase the length of the slider to 0.5 Beat Snap.

Hope the suggestions will help!
Best wishes!

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-19T15:20:21+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
00:08:133 (5) - 下向きの方が流れが良くなると思います。
00:19:175 (3,4) - 前の00:18:341 (1,2) - が八の字気味なので逆八の字にしてはどうでしょう？
00:29:383 (1) - x:229 y:99 (stack correctly)
00:30:633 (2,5) - stackした方がきれいかと
00:31:050 (4,7) - ^

lgdry15 wrote:
Hard
00:28:540 (3) Delete the circle.
00:36:040 (8) Decrease the length of the slider to 0.5 Beat Snap.
00:43:540 (1) Increase the length of the slider to 1 Beat Snap.
01:06:040 (2) Delete the slider, and replace it with a circle at 01:06:248.

all no change thanks for modding~

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-20T06:44:32+00:00

RandomEffect wrote:
hi~

[Natsu's Normal]
AR +1? mmm you're the second person who tell me this, but I believe 5 is better :l, I'll think about this
00:24:591 (3,4,5,6) - a little difficult to find rhythm. how about reverse sliders? It's just a bit hard, but there is a easy diff and is the best way to fit the music there imo
01:03:133 (4) - I suggest to stack on the head of 01:05:008 (3) - sure
01:10:112~01:10:216- don't you cut Kiai-Time in common with other diffs? mm since I don't have beats in these points so make not much sense, anyways I'll leave this to the BAT who come later o:

cute song<3
~Good Luck~

lgdry15 wrote:
Normal 01:04:998 (3) Divide the slider into two sliders of 0.5 Beat Snap each. will be to hard, also there are not strong beats :l

Best wishes!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:クリスタル・ドリーム (TV Size)
Artist:Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo
ArtistUnicode:第一宇宙速度
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:nitroplus soniani ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare first astronomical velocity r_a_r_e acceleratorrus
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OscaR CUBE

182 posts

Joined October 2013

OscaR CUBE 2014-03-21T07:31:30+00:00

Hii..

Sorry if my mods don't help so much...

NATSU'S NORMAL

SPOILER

- 00:57:508 (2) - Delete the object?
- 00:57:716 - add hit circle?
- 01:00:216 - add hit circle?
- 01:23:550 (1) - don't reverse this?
- 01:24:070 (1) - move the spinner to the white tick after ^

RARE'S HARD

SPOILER

AR : -1 ?
- 00:03:341 (1) - Change this object like this? http://puu.sh/7DAW5.jpg
- 00:27:925 (1) - Too close with previous object...

INSANE

SPOILER

AR : -1?
- 00:07:716 (1) - Too close from previous object...
- 00:22:091 (1,2,3) - Make it like this? http://puu.sh/7DBbD.jpg

Sorry for my bad english...

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-21T12:20:02+00:00

OscaR CUBE wrote:
RARE'S HARD
SPOILER
AR : -1 ?
- 00:03:341 (1) - Change this object like this? http://puu.sh/7DAW5.jpg
- 00:27:925 (1) - Too close with previous object...

no change
thanks for modding~

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-03-21T21:33:07+00:00

OscaR CUBE wrote:
Hii..
Sorry if my mods don't help so much...

NATSU'S NORMAL
- 00:57:508 (2) - Delete the object? No, there is an important vocal in the music
- 00:57:716 - add hit circle? I'm mainly following vocals, that's why I ignore some beats on purpose
- 01:00:216 - add hit circle? ^
- 01:23:550 (1) - don't reverse this? sure
- 01:24:070 (1) - move the spinner to the white tick after ^ ^

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:クリスタル・ドリーム (TV Size)
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ArtistUnicode:第一宇宙速度
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
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desudesud

118 posts

Joined December 2013

desudesud 2014-03-22T02:17:58+00:00

Mod for M4M

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:04:800 (2) - Could blanket onto 1, to make it look nicer. Just know that you would have to end up moving some of the other circles and sliders you placed to follow Distance Snap. Here's an example of a decent blanket:

00:06:466 (4) - Could blanket onto 3, for the same reason as above. Just know once again that you would have to end up moving some of the other circles and sliders you placed to follow Distance Snap.

00:33:550 (1,2) - Remove NC on 1 and make an NC on 2, because she is still singing on 1.

00:36:050 (4,1) - Remove NC on 1, put an NC on 4.

01:21:883 (1) - Could replace with some circles or sliders. Here's an example of something you could do:

[Natsu's Normal]

SPOILER

Everything was bad. Delete this.

Just kidding! It was perfect!

[Rare's Hard]

SPOILER

General - You don't always have to follow DS. That being said though, if your not gonna follow DS all the time, make sure it's not ridiculously far in comparison to what DS would say.

General - You should turn AR down to 7. Really, only Insane songs and very few Hard songs should be at 8-9 AR level. I don't really see the map you made to have an AR of 8 (no offense)

00:27:925 (1) - Could stack it onto 5, to make it a bit nicer and more expected by the player.

00:31:675 (5) - Move so it's in the same spot as 2, so they stack, for a more expected position.

00:32:508 (7) - Move so it's in the same spot as 4, so they stack, for a more expected position.

01:11:883 (1) - More moving!

Move so it's in the same spot as 3, so they stack, for the same reason as the other 2 above.

01:13:133 (5) - ^^, only moving it to the end of 3

01:15:216 (1,2,3,4) - Could make a square formation instead for a nicer look and a more expected shape from the player.

I'm not good at modding Insanes, so I really wouldn't be of much help there. Sorry!

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-03-22T02:43:14+00:00

xVirtualNinjax wrote:
M
[Rare's Hard]

SPOILER
General - You don't always have to follow DS. That being said though, if your not gonna follow DS all the time, make sure it's not ridiculously far in comparison to what DS would say.

General - You should turn AR down to 7. Really, only Insane songs and very few Hard songs should be at 8-9 AR level. I don't really see the map you made to have an AR of 8 (no offense)

00:27:925 (1) - Could stack it onto 5, to make it a bit nicer and more expected by the player.

00:31:675 (5) - Move so it's in the same spot as 2, so they stack, for a more expected position.

00:32:508 (7) - Move so it's in the same spot as 4, so they stack, for a more expected position.

01:11:883 (1) - More moving! Move so it's in the same spot as 3, so they stack, for the same reason as the other 2 above.

01:13:133 (5) - ^^, only moving it to the end of 3

01:15:216 (1,2,3,4) - Could make a square formation instead for a nicer look and a more expected shape from the player.

all no change thanks for modding~

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-22T05:47:34+00:00

fix some~
thx for mod

340

334 posts

Joined January 2014

340 2014-04-02T13:52:53+00:00

Insane
i hope, i do not need translate this part, because my english level is horrible.
00:20:633 (7) - сделай его на 2 тика больше. так будет лучше, имхо.
00:33:966 (7) - ^same
00:51:883 (3,4) - поменяй местами кружок и слайдер (на таймлайне, я имею ввиду). будет звучать лучше, имхо.
01:12:508 (1,2) - жутковато звучит. лучше заменить на слайдер
00:27:925 (3) - тоже плохо звучит. лучше этот слайдер на кружки поменяй

Hard
okay, lol
00:03:341 (1, 2) - too hard pattern for hard. i think, streams are better here.
01:10:841 (3,4,5) - remake this part (like something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475670)

Normal
01:14:800 (3) - make it 2-tick shorter

Last edited by 340 2014-04-02T14:56:45+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2014-04-02T14:00:48+00:00

340 wrote:
Hard
00:03:341 (1, 2) - слишком сложный паттерн для харда, я думаю. лучше бы поставить стримы.
01:10:841 (3,4,5) - переделать бы это место (я предлагаю сделать так: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1475670)

all no change thanks for modding

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2014-04-02T17:12:06+00:00

no change
thx for mod

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-04-03T22:18:20+00:00

340 wrote:
Insane

Normal
01:14:800 (3) - make it 2-tick shorter actually it fit the vocals, that's why

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-15T15:53:54+00:00

General:

-- "Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file" Replace this to soft-sliderslide.wav
-- "Do not use sliderslide, sliderwhistle, and spinnerspin hitsounds in a way that would replicate a hitsound on a circle, slider start, slider end, slider tick, or slider repeat." This is a rule that will be in effect soon. http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/271245 In fact, already several maps had been unranked because of this issue. Your current soft-sliderslide2.wav is unacceptable due to this. This affects for Easy and Normal difficulty, so please also remove the inherited sections that will be unused.
-- http://soniani.jp/products_cd.html https://itunes.apple.com/jp/album/kuris ... d804462868 According to the album, the title should be "Crystal Dream TV Size ver." unicode "クリスタル・ドリーム TVサイズ ver."

-- Source "SoniAni: Super Sonico The Animation". Hope you can add "そにアニ" at the tags too.

Easy:

01:23:654 (1) - End at 01:28:966. I believe it's a small mistake. Besides that, having a double spinner for an [Easy] difficulty usually isn't a good choice. Most recommended to map the part of 01:21:883 (1), but if you want to keep your double spinner, please at least consider starting the second spinner from 01:23:758.

Rare's Hard:

00:03:341 (1) - Starting a [Hard] with a 1/4 jump is not nice for the players. Please keep the distance at least here.
00:41:883 (1,2) - 00:53:550 (1,2) - These jumps are quite big considering this diff is a [Hard]. It would be best if you can find a way to alleviate these, but not a must.

Insane:

01:11:258 (4,5) - Highly recommended to reduce this excessively huge jump.

Rare

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Joined August 2010

Rare 2015-01-16T02:13:37+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
00:03:341 (1) - Starting a [Hard] with a 1/4 jump is not nice for the players. Please keep the distance at least here.
00:41:883 (1,2) - 00:53:550 (1,2) - These jumps are quite big considering this diff is a [Hard]. It would be best if you can find a way to alleviate these, but not a must.

fixed. thanks!
http://puu.sh/ezRKD.osu

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-01-16T06:46:27+00:00

fix all ^^
thx for your modding >~<

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-16T08:13:53+00:00

food for thought

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-01-16T08:20:25+00:00

thank you <3

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-01-16T09:00:01+00:00

wow O:, go go

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-01-16T09:50:12+00:00

Natsu wrote:
wow O:, go go

Rakuen

1,654 posts

Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2015-01-19T09:17:55+00:00

As requested!

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Natsu's Normal

00:15:216 (1) - Suggest to map this part, too short ready time for 00:17:300 (1) -
01:10:216 - Strong downbeat skipped, decrease other downbeat skips if possible

Rare's hard

Kindly decrease the amount of big jumps for better spread between Normal. If possible just use a few
00:11:050 (1) - Possibly use other patterns with not over 2.0x jump, there are lots of jumps around here
00:18:341 (1,2,3,4) - Distance too big
00:20:841 (3,4) - No need jump here imo, could even remove 00:20:841 (3) - , it's a bit soft part, with no vocals
00:29:591 (2) - Make it closer to 00:29:383 (1) - and 00:29:800 (3) -
01:07:716 (1,2) - Looks more like 3 hits imo, maybe remove 1 reverse?

Insane

NCs are a bit random, such as 00:10:216 (6) - should swap with 00:10:633 (1) - in my opinion.
00:25:633 (5) - Suggest to make like 00:24:800 (3) -
00:25:841 (1) - Stack slider tail to 00:25:008 (4) - prefectly
00:30:008 (6) - A bit hard to expect, it's 80% blocked by 00:29:175 (4) - . Triple circles stacked on 00:30:216 (7) - would be better
01:03:550 (7,1) - Stacks a bit random
01:10:008 (2,3,1) - Pattern a little too hard in the whole difficulty

Others

Sorry, not going to take over this map. I feel there are still a lot space to be improved.

Please do consider and apply these mods, they could be unrankable issues.

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-01-19T09:30:13+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
As requested!

Natsu's Normal
00:15:216 (1) - Suggest to map this part, too short ready time for 00:17:300 (1) - I did a long slider
01:10:216 - Strong downbeat skipped, decrease other downbeat skips if possible this is not a problem, if you check most of my maps I do this cause of my vocals mapping~

Diff

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ArtistUnicode:第一宇宙速度
Creator:Sonico Makaron
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Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2015-01-19T10:26:34+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
Rare's hard
Kindly decrease the amount of big jumps for better spread between Normal. If possible just use a few
00:11:050 (1) - Possibly use other patterns with not over 2.0x jump, there are lots of jumps around here
00:18:341 (1,2,3,4) - Distance too big
00:20:841 (3,4) - No need jump here imo, could even remove 00:20:841 (3) - , it's a bit soft part, with no vocals
00:29:591 (2) - Make it closer to 00:29:383 (1) - and 00:29:800 (3) -
01:07:716 (1,2) - Looks more like 3 hits imo, maybe remove 1 reverse?

fixed 00:29:591 (2) - only, it doesn't want to fix except.
thanks! http://puu.sh/eJdID.osu

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-01-19T12:27:45+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
As requested!

Insane
NCs are a bit random, such as 00:10:216 (6) - should swap with 00:10:633 (1) - in my opinion.
00:25:633 (5) - Suggest to make like 00:24:800 (3) -
00:25:841 (1) - Stack slider tail to 00:25:008 (4) - prefectly
00:30:008 (6) - A bit hard to expect, it's 80% blocked by 00:29:175 (4) - . Triple circles stacked on 00:30:216 (7) - would be better
01:03:550 (7,1) - Stacks a bit random
01:10:008 (2,3,1) - Pattern a little too hard in the whole difficulty

All fix but except for NC. They put in correct place on music imo
thx for mod :3

Sonnyc

7,761 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2015-01-21T16:10:42+00:00

Setting a rebubble since Rakuen refused a go.

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-01-21T16:19:18+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
Setting a rebubble since Rakuen refused a go.

thx :3

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2015-01-22T12:09:21+00:00

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Kyubey, please go ahead ~

Kyubey

osu! Alumni

3,097 posts

Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2015-01-22T19:01:55+00:00

Привет!
I have to pop your bubble due to next things:
Source is wrong, it should be «そにアニ -SUPER SONICO THE ANIMATION-» because http://soniani.jp/introduction.html this page says "Super Sonico will be made into an anime as そにアニ -SUPER SONICO THE ANIMATION-". Do not forget to delete そにアニfrom the tags and add SoniAni to them. Btw, you can add «ending ed» to the tags because it is ending of the anime, if I remember right.
Difficulty gap between Normal and Hard is inapropriate and too huge. QAT words (I lost half of logs because i was using osu client for chatting but incoming messages were saved in IRC client):

I asked, if gap between Normal and Hard is inapropriate.

There's 2 ways to make your mapset rankable:
1) Remove most of jumps in the Hard difficulty. But I'm pretty sure Rare won't do it.
2) Make one more Normal difficulty. For me it sounds as the best way because mapping Normal diffs is not that hard. You can do it fast, then ask your GD owners or someone else to mod your Normal few times and then call me for re-check.

Now, additional modding:
[Easy]
00:38:133 (3,4) - как-то я уже сталкивался с такими вещами в изях, и мне все каты говорили, что это запрещено. постарайся не использовать 1/2 в изях, это всё же может быть очень неожиданным и сложным для новичков, тем более такой момент всего один в карте, и он смотрится ну вообще лишним
00:50:216 (1,3) - ты бы мог единичку просто скопировать и нажать ctrl+G, чтобы сделать их симметричными. а сейчас они не такие, поправь
00:55:216 (3) - не надо так далеко за грид заходить, особо слева, оно очень сильно оверлапать со рекордами будет на 4:3 мониторах, и это очень сильно отвлекает
01:07:300 (1,2) - эти два слайдера намнооого лучше звучат, если их начать 01:06:883 - здесь. и под фоновое nee itte, и вообще под музыку
01:12:716 (1,2) - свапни нк
01:16:883 (4,1) - здесь тоже, под музыку намного больше подходит. и обычно когда делают длинный слайдер, который кончается на моменте, где должно быть нк, то нк ставят на следующий объект
01:20:216 (3,1) - и эти нк свапни
[Natsu's Normal]
00:56:050 (4) - move it up a little since it overlaps with score meter that enabled by default https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2585939
01:10:216 - maybe add note with soft finish here? i know you are trying to map vocals, but anyway skipping that really hard beat in music that even got kiai fountains is bad
01:23:966 - add note?
[Rare's Hard]
I hardly suggest to use AR 7-7.5 for this difficulty because it is a Hard for 144 BPM relaxing track and patterns not that unreadable, AR8 looks pretty forced here.
00:03:341 (1,2) - starting hard difficulty with triple can be really painful for getting 300s ecause player don't even hear the rhythm and don't know how should he click on it, i suggest to delete it or use 1/4 slider instead of notes for easier starting
00:08:133 (5,1) - flow goes pretty uncomfortable here and it looks like jump that doesn't follow anything in the music, make (5) curved in another way for better flow? http://puu.sh/eSssP/72c897d4e3.jpg
00:21:883 (1,2) - this flow is really uncomfortable too, but i can't suggest minor fixes here because it will break the pattern, so try to think about it yourself please. flow is really uncomfortable
00:50:008 (4,1) - very bad flow again. my suggestion to fix it: http://puu.sh/eSt63/2dce242ad5.jpg .
01:10:216 - missing finish
Diff is pretty neat, but I don't really understand why did you break the flow that hard and uncomfortable. It looks like you didn't even play your own diff to see uncomfortable things. I hardly suggest to fix things above, it will improve playability of the difficulty really hard.
[Insane]
Зачем АР9? Ведь это очень медленный и спокойный трек, да и сама карта лёгкая, девятка здесь смотрится ну вообще никак. То есть не смотрится совсем. Восьмёрка смотрелась бы намного лучше. Попробуй сменить на восьмёрку, если Rare сменит на харде тоже. А если не сменит, то попробуй 8.5, намного лучше будет подходить под трек.
00:05:841 (3,4) - ужасно неудобное флоу при игре, да и не только на этом моменте а вообще в этой части. попробуй сделать http://puu.sh/eSukh/f4402ed409.jpg так а потом как-нибудь http://puu.sh/eSunN/230248a4d5.jpg так
00:08:341 (4,1) - какой-то необоснованный непонятный джамп опять, неудобно идёт и под трек не подходит. у меня тут из идей приятного флоу только что-то типа такого в голове http://puu.sh/eSuSN/8ef101fd6a.jpg
00:19:591 (4,5) - плохо идёт опять. попробуй четвёрку сделать отражением пятёрки, намного приятнее играться будет
00:25:633 (5,1) - и опять жутко неудобно. как насчёт такого? http://puu.sh/eSvmH/d1e34c367c.jpg
00:31:675 (1,2,3,4) - 3 и 4 лучше немного раздвинуть, выглядит моднее и читается проще. просто подвинуть их влево и вправо на пару гридов
00:44:175 (3,4) - к чему этот джамп? в музыке нет ничего резкого для такого неудобного джампа против флоу, она наоборот, тихая и спокойная, и такие резкие и неудобные движения ну совсем не подходят. если уж так сильно хочется джамп, то попробуй такое http://puu.sh/eSvNN/547ab9e284.jpg это лучше играется хотя бы. но вообще я категорически против джампов в таких моментах в песне
00:50:216 (6,1) - эти нк надо бы свапнуть, новая музыка-то на шестёрке начинается
00:52:508 (1) - если здесь нажать ctrl+G, то флоу будет намного проще и приятнее. ну или что-то подобное сделать. а текущее играется и смотрится ужасно
01:03:550 (7,1) - нк должно начинаться на семёрке под музыку. я бы кстати 01:03:133 (5,6) - анстакнул и сделал движение в сторону семёрки с небольшим джампом после шестёрки, приятнее под вокал смотрелось бы
01:10:841 (3,4) - если на них нажать ctrl+G по отдельности, то флоу к 01:11:675 (5) - будет намного лучше, чем сейчас. текущее флоу ужасно и неудобно
Карта в целом выглядит аккуратно, но я не понимаю, зачем ты постоянно так сильно рвёшь флоу. Надо играть свои диффы чаще же и смотреть, что игралось плохо, и при возможности фиксить это. Ну ведь совсем неудобны те моменты выше, движение ну вообще не идёт туда. Очень надеюсь, что ты пофиксишь эти вещи. Кстати, не забывай проверять, свапнулись ли хитсаунды тоже при ctrl+G, а то иногда они оказываются не там, где надо.

В общем, пробуй сделать ещё один нормал, и поищи моды на него. Да и желательно на весь мапсет бы, ибо эти порванные флоу... очень неприятны. Как будешь готов с нормалом (или Rare соизволит удалить большинство своих джампов, что вряд ли), зови меня, речекну, и, если всё норм будет (желательно с флоу на других диффах тоже), то заребабблю.

Rare

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Joined August 2010

Rare 2015-01-23T05:21:30+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
I hardly suggest to use AR 7-7.5 for this difficulty because it is a Hard for 144 BPM relaxing track and patterns not that unreadable, AR8 looks pretty forced here.
00:03:341 (1,2) - starting hard difficulty with triple can be really painful for getting 300s ecause player don't even hear the rhythm and don't know how should he click on it, i suggest to delete it or use 1/4 slider instead of notes for easier starting
00:08:133 (5,1) - flow goes pretty uncomfortable here and it looks like jump that doesn't follow anything in the music, make (5) curved in another way for better flow? http://puu.sh/eSssP/72c897d4e3.jpg
00:21:883 (1,2) - this flow is really uncomfortable too, but i can't suggest minor fixes here because it will break the pattern, so try to think about it yourself please. flow is really uncomfortable
00:50:008 (4,1) - very bad flow again. my suggestion to fix it: http://puu.sh/eSt63/2dce242ad5.jpg .
01:10:216 - missing finish
Diff is pretty neat, but I don't really understand why did you break the flow that hard and uncomfortable. It looks like you didn't even play your own diff to see uncomfortable things. I hardly suggest to fix things above, it will improve playability of the difficulty really hard.

fixed decreased AR only. flow is not bad for me, ill keep it.
thanks for modding! http://puu.sh/eTYJD.osu

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-01-24T23:20:25+00:00

@Kyubey: maybe making my normal diff harder can work as well?

Kyubey

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Kyubey 2015-01-24T23:27:22+00:00

@Natsu: That can work, but you will need to literally remap your Normal and add much more elements. Are you sure you want to do it? I think making one more Normal diff will be better, that is not hard.

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-01-25T23:53:04+00:00

well up to the set owner then

Sonico Makaron

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Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-02-26T15:52:20+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
Привет!

Now, additional modding:
[Easy]
00:38:133 (3,4) - как-то я уже сталкивался с такими вещами в изях, и мне все каты говорили, что это запрещено. постарайся не использовать 1/2 в изях, это всё же может быть очень неожиданным и сложным для новичков, тем более такой момент всего один в карте, и он смотрится ну вообще лишним
00:50:216 (1,3) - ты бы мог единичку просто скопировать и нажать ctrl+G, чтобы сделать их симметричными. а сейчас они не такие, поправь ok
00:55:216 (3) - не надо так далеко за грид заходить, особо слева, оно очень сильно оверлапать со рекордами будет на 4:3 мониторах, и это очень сильно отвлекает ok
01:07:300 (1,2) - эти два слайдера намнооого лучше звучат, если их начать 01:06:883 - здесь. и под фоновое nee itte, и вообще под музыку
01:12:716 (1,2) - свапни нк ok
01:16:883 (4,1) - здесь тоже, под музыку намного больше подходит. и обычно когда делают длинный слайдер, который кончается на моменте, где должно быть нк, то нк ставят на следующий объект ok
01:20:216 (3,1) - и эти нк свапни ok

[Insane]
Зачем АР9? Ведь это очень медленный и спокойный трек, да и сама карта лёгкая, девятка здесь смотрится ну вообще никак. То есть не смотрится совсем. Восьмёрка смотрелась бы намного лучше. Попробуй сменить на восьмёрку, если Rare сменит на харде тоже. А если не сменит, то попробуй 8.5, намного лучше будет подходить под трек. я поменял на 8.5, вполне не плохо играется.
00:05:841 (3,4) - ужасно неудобное флоу при игре, да и не только на этом моменте а вообще в этой части. попробуй сделать http://puu.sh/eSukh/f4402ed409.jpg так а потом как-нибудь http://puu.sh/eSunN/230248a4d5.jpg так я сделал не много по своему
00:08:341 (4,1) - какой-то необоснованный непонятный джамп опять, неудобно идёт и под трек не подходит. у меня тут из идей приятного флоу только что-то типа такого в голове http://puu.sh/eSuSN/8ef101fd6a.jpg ok
00:19:591 (4,5) - плохо идёт опять. попробуй четвёрку сделать отражением пятёрки, намного приятнее играться будет
00:25:633 (5,1) - и опять жутко неудобно. как насчёт такого? http://puu.sh/eSvmH/d1e34c367c.jpg тоже не плохо, но мой больше нравится
00:31:675 (1,2,3,4) - 3 и 4 лучше немного раздвинуть, выглядит моднее и читается проще. просто подвинуть их влево и вправо на пару гридов ok
00:44:175 (3,4) - к чему этот джамп? в музыке нет ничего резкого для такого неудобного джампа против флоу, она наоборот, тихая и спокойная, и такие резкие и неудобные движения ну совсем не подходят. если уж так сильно хочется джамп, то попробуй такоеhttp://puu.sh/eSvNN/547ab9e284.jpg это лучше играется хотя бы. но вообще я категорически против джампов в таких моментах в песне я хотел подчеркнуть прыг скок как в видео, вроде не плохо получилось
00:50:216 (6,1) - эти нк надо бы свапнуть, новая музыка-то на шестёрке начинается ok
00:52:508 (1) - если здесь нажать ctrl+G, то флоу будет намного проще и приятнее. ну или что-то подобное сделать. а текущее играется и смотрится ужасно ok
01:03:550 (7,1) - нк должно начинаться на семёрке под музыку. я бы кстати 01:03:133 (5,6) - анстакнул и сделал движение в сторону семёрки с небольшим джампом после шестёрки, приятнее под вокал смотрелось бы свапнул нк
01:10:841 (3,4) - если на них нажать ctrl+G по отдельности, то флоу к 01:11:675 (5) - будет намного лучше, чем сейчас. текущее флоу ужасно и неудобно ok
Карта в целом выглядит аккуратно, но я не понимаю, зачем ты постоянно так сильно рвёшь флоу. Надо играть свои диффы чаще же и смотреть, что игралось плохо, и при возможности фиксить это. Ну ведь совсем неудобны те моменты выше, движение ну вообще не идёт туда. Очень надеюсь, что ты пофиксишь эти вещи. Кстати, не забывай проверять, свапнулись ли хитсаунды тоже при ctrl+G, а то иногда они оказываются не там, где надо.

В общем, пробуй сделать ещё один нормал, и поищи моды на него. Да и желательно на весь мапсет бы, ибо эти порванные флоу... очень неприятны. Как будешь готов с нормалом (или Rare соизволит удалить большинство своих джампов, что вряд ли), зови меня, речекну, и, если всё норм будет (желательно с флоу на других диффах тоже), то заребабблю. поправил сурс ну и добавил новый нормал

Сорри за слоупочность :c
спасибо за мод :3

Eni

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Joined May 2013

Eni 2015-02-26T18:36:04+00:00

As requested:
[Easy]

00:20:216 (1,2,3) - I suggest moving Circle 2 and Slider 3 down for flow. Remember to re-adjust 00:22:716 (4,5,1,2) - as needed.

~
00:23:550 (1,2,3) - Similar suggestion as above. I think it plays much more natural when the player is following in one direction (as opposed to going right, then down, then right for the slider curve).

~
00:29:800 (4,1) - Reflect over the Y-axis? If so then maybe 00:30:633 (1,2,3) - can play nicer too.
00:38:133 (3,4) - This is the only 1/2 wait in the map, which can be considered unrankable. I suggest adding more 1/2 or removing this 1/2 and replacing it with a 3/2 repeat slider.
00:40:216 (1,2) - Try curving one of these sliders for polarity effect?

~
01:02:716 (4,5,1,2,3) - Try for symmetry over the Y-axis here. You may need to adjust 01:06:466 (4,5) -.

~
01:07:300 (1) - Change this object into a straight slider for polarity effect?

[Natsu's Normal]

00:24:591 (3,4,5,6) - The notes here feel forced. Try a different pattern?
00:49:175 (5,6) - Here there is a loud beat on the white tick, which makes it feel like the next object is there. Try using a 1/1 slider followed by a circle instead to capture all the beats.

~
00:52:925 (6,7) - Try changing this into a 1/2 repeat slider to capture the beat at 00:53:133 -. You may need to adjust your previous and next pattern.
01:10:216 - When the stars for kiai burst out, you'd expect an object to hit. It isn't exact, but I suggest altering the pattern to have an emphasis note on the kiai start. If this doesn't work, just change the kiai time to match your mapping style.

[Rare's Hard]

Just going to point out that I really enjoyed your map <3
Just curious, but as I progressed through the song (especially during the middle) the number of jumps decreased. Was this intended? On many downbeats, there are emphasis beats that you can take advantage of Distance Snap with. Example: 00:10:216 (1) - is the 4th downbeat from main, thus it fits to increase DS here.
00:19:592 (4,1) - Personally think that a jump here would be nice because it helps the falling climax of 00:18:341 (1,2,3,4) -. Transitioning from small jumps to regular DS feels somewhat off. Try using a DS interval in between both or slightly increasing it.
00:44:383 (3,4,5) - Try a reverse-like pattern with Ctrl+G, like so. In particular the mini-jump makes it a bit funner imo. The same can also be done for 00:46:883 (1,2,3) -

~
01:03:550 (1) - This is another great place to increase Distance Snap due to it being one of the main downbeats in the chorus.
01:08:133 (2) - Try a Ctrl+G here for a cool effect
01:23:550 (1,2) - Being at the end of the song, I suggest increasing the last circle's Distance Snap to build suspense (psychology and stuff) before the spinner.

[Insane]

00:07:300 (2,1) - Not sure if I should point this out but the first time I played this I completely missed the wait here D: Try giving it more visibility from the previous slider, like so.

~
00:09:383 (3,4,5,6) - I felt that the distance snap was too low at this part. Try a zig-zag effect instead.

~
00:12:716 (4,5,6) - It plays more naturally with a triangle pattern imo. It will also help increase the jump at 00:13:341 (6,1) -.

~
00:15:216 (1,2) - Increase the diagonal Distance Snap here for emphasis of instrumental?
00:18:758 (2,4) - Instead of putting the slider in the same place, you can make it slightly further away to increase the distance snap and add diversity. Also try it with 00:31:675 (1,2,3,4) -.

~
00:20:008 (5,6,7) - (Continuing from above) The same can be applied for different slider shapes, like so. You may also want to use this pattern on 00:22:716 (1,2,3,4) -.

~
00:26:883 (1,2) - Would be great if you could increase the Distance Snap between these two objects here. Right now they feel too close.
00:57:925 (4,5) - Instead of stacking here, I suggest to increase the Distance Snap. Right now it feels too close.
01:03:133 (5,6,1) - This pattern is very difficult to read (at least for me) because there is no visual cue. I suggest moving Circle 6 so it forms a triangle to help the player figure out that the next object is below.
01:12:300 (6,1,2) - Try a triangle here instead. It also helps with the jump.

~
01:16:675 (5,6) - This feels weird for me. Reverse blanket does not fit. Try using flow instead?
01:19:800 (6) - Increase Distance Snap here? Try x:12 y:72.
01:23:341 (4,1,2) - Increase the distance snap here for emphasis of the end of the song + map.

Rank soon~

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2015-03-01T08:28:45+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
Just going to point out that I really enjoyed your map <3
Just curious, but as I progressed through the song (especially during the middle) the number of jumps decreased. Was this intended? On many downbeats, there are emphasis beats that you can take advantage of Distance Snap with. Example: 00:10:216 (1) - is the 4th downbeat from main, thus it fits to increase DS here.
00:19:592 (4,1) - Personally think that a jump here would be nice because it helps the falling climax of 00:18:341 (1,2,3,4) -. Transitioning from small jumps to regular DS feels somewhat off. Try using a DS interval in between both or slightly increasing it.
00:44:383 (3,4,5) - Try a reverse-like pattern with Ctrl+G, like so. In particular the mini-jump makes it a bit funner imo. The same can also be done for 00:46:883 (1,2,3) -

~
01:03:550 (1) - This is another great place to increase Distance Snap due to it being one of the main downbeats in the chorus.
01:08:133 (2) - Try a Ctrl+G here for a cool effect
01:23:550 (1,2) - Being at the end of the song, I suggest increasing the last circle's Distance Snap to build suspense (psychology and stuff) before the spinner.

fixed only 01:08:133 (2) - here. due to spacing.
thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/ghyZe.osu

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-03-01T11:46:39+00:00

Project Railgun wrote:
As requested:

[Insane]
00:07:300 (2,1) - Not sure if I should point this out but the first time I played this I completely missed the wait here D: Try giving it more visibility from the previous slider, like so.

~
00:09:383 (3,4,5,6) - I felt that the distance snap was too low at this part. Try a zig-zag effect instead.

~
00:12:716 (4,5,6) - It plays more naturally with a triangle pattern imo. It will also help increase the jump at 00:13:341 (6,1) -.

~
00:15:216 (1,2) - Increase the diagonal Distance Snap here for emphasis of instrumental?
00:18:758 (2,4) - Instead of putting the slider in the same place, you can make it slightly further away to increase the distance snap and add diversity. Also try it with 00:31:675 (1,2,3,4) -.

~
00:20:008 (5,6,7) - (Continuing from above) The same can be applied for different slider shapes, like so. You may also want to use this pattern on 00:22:716 (1,2,3,4) -.

~
00:26:883 (1,2) - Would be great if you could increase the Distance Snap between these two objects here. Right now they feel too close.
00:57:925 (4,5) - Instead of stacking here, I suggest to increase the Distance Snap. Right now it feels too close.
01:03:133 (5,6,1) - This pattern is very difficult to read (at least for me) because there is no visual cue. I suggest moving Circle 6 so it forms a triangle to help the player figure out that the next object is below.
01:12:300 (6,1,2) - Try a triangle here instead. It also helps with the jump.

~
01:16:675 (5,6) - This feels weird for me. Reverse blanket does not fit. Try using flow instead?
01:19:800 (6) - Increase Distance Snap here? Try x:12 y:72.
01:23:341 (4,1,2) - Increase the distance snap here for emphasis of the end of the song + map.
Rank soon~

Fixed only 00:12:716 (4,5,6) - 01:03:133 (5,6,1) - 00:26:883 (1,2) -
On Easy diff fix all
Thx for mod <3

Ranger

939 posts

Joined June 2011

Ranger 2015-03-01T14:24:46+00:00

yup o/

Box

[Easy]

00:11:883 (3) - how about put the this slider more downward? make 00:10:216 (1,2,3) this equilateral triangle :3
Box
01:06:466 (4) - this finish sound little awkward because cymbal sound of the music, quite low. so i recommend reduce volume a little of the part (30%)
01:16:466 (3) - ^same reason
01:23:758 (1) - recommend start this spinner at 01:23:966. now so close spinner of before

[Natsu's Normal]

00:36:466 (6,1) - change NC both? just suggestion
01:09:800 (4) - add clap at the end. it`s pretty match the music
01:18:758 (4) - add finish at reserve. i`m hear to cymbal sound at this part

[Railgun's Normal+]

only this diff check the widescreen support. remove this

00:10:216 (1) - maybe you forget add clap at the end :3
00:16:883 (7) - recommend change this clap to finish
00:38:341 (4) - i think it`s awkward a little. recommend make just common
Box
01:11:675 (4) - spacing error a little (recommend move to x:404 y:72)

[Rare's Hard]

00:16:050 (5) - add finish at front? just suggestion
00:27:925 (1) - move 1 point right. that`s more correct direction of before slider
01:04:800 (5) - how about move this end point of 01:03:966 (2)? if you agree my suggestion. move 01:04:591 (4) too
01:10:216 (1) - add finish at front. it`s good to hear me

[Insane]

00:34:591 (1,2,3) - make this equilateral triangle it`s looks good to me
Box
00:35:425 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:050 (1) - i think finish not match the music. if you want add hitsound this part, try use this
01:20:425 ~ 01:21:050 - how about make stream here? like this

Go to BN :p Good luck for Rank~

Euny

2,274 posts

Joined January 2014

Euny 2015-03-01T14:38:59+00:00

your request in game

Easy

00:21:466 (3) - rotate this slider with -11 degrees and place it on x136y240 for better flow? (it makes really relaxing for cursor)
SPOILER
01:16:466 (3) - a clap should be more fitting here.
01:16:883 (1) - and add finish at this slider's head. it makes better sound
01:18:966 (2) - add clap both slider's head and tail.
01:21:883 (1,1) - i'm unsure it's fine. how about just 1 spin?

Natsu's Normal

it looks fine to me cool diff.!

Railgun's Normal+

00:23:341 (1) - finish would be better for this slider's head.
01:10:216 (1) - ^
01:13:341 (2) - ^
01:19:175 (5) - remove whistle and add finish for here.

Rare's Hard

00:11:883 (4,6) - fix
00:32:508 (7) - move it to x328y172 for overlap previous slider?
00:41:883 (1) - remove finish at this slider's tail.
01:10:216 (1) - add finish at this slider's head.
01:12:716 (4,1) - recheck blanket.

Insane

00:04:800 (3) - i feel pretty weird. when i play this part. D:.. lets add some chill aim for this part! this is my suggestion : rotate this slider with 17 degrees and place it on x334y241
SPOILER
00:09:800 (4) - move it x424y184 for better flow?
00:12:300 (2,4) - fix blanket.
00:12:716 (4,2) - make perfect overlap?
00:17:716 (3) - fix blanket and ctrl g for better moving?
00:22:716 (1) - remove those finish at slider's end
00:23:550 (4) - and add finish at this slider's head.
00:24:175 (2,3) - fix blanket~
SPOILER
00:25:008 (4,5) - ^
00:25:841 (1,1) - ^
00:31:050 (3) - place it on x264y135 for better overlap previous note
SPOILER
00:31:675 (1,3) - intentional? if or not, make perfect stack.
00:32:091 (2,4) - ^
00:36:050 (1,2,4) - fix blanket.
00:41:883 (1) - add finish
00:42:091 (2) - remove finish.
00:49:800 (4,1) - fix blanket.
00:55:633 (2,3,2,3) - i think fix some distance with these. like this :
SPOILER
01:05:008 (5,6) - fix blanket.

GL with it!

Karen

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Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-03-01T15:49:54+00:00

[Hitsound]

In the creator's diffs:

00:13:550 - why here no finish?it's better to add finish here since you add finish here00:06:883 -
00:55:841 - clap fits better imo and u should increase the volume here since it's a strong beat.

[Easy]

01:23:966 - spin begins here? like normal diff,follow the vocal

[Natsu's Normal]

00:55:841 - add a note?don't ignore this

[Railgun's Normal+]

00:31:466 (2,3) - although this is Normal+,i still don't suggest u to use this flow,too hard for newbies
00:48:133 (3,4) - ^
01:14:800 (5,6) - ^
00:55:841 - add note?
01:22:508 (1,3) - both whisle?

[Rare's Hard]

01:22:508 (3,5,6) - same as normal+,add whisle?
nice diff^^

[Insane]

00:17:716 (3) - move a little right to make them00:17:300 (1,2,3) - the same distance,like this00:30:633 (1,2,3) -
00:42:925 (2,3) - ctrl+G to make the flow better?and do some changes at00:43:341 (4,5,1) -
00:55:425 (1,2,3) - make a bigger jump here.

that's all^^
my english is bad,so my mod is too short. x.x sorry

Rare

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Joined August 2010

Rare 2015-03-01T20:48:14+00:00

Ranger wrote:
yup o/
[Rare's Hard]

00:16:050 (5) - add finish at front? just suggestion
00:27:925 (1) - move 1 point right. that`s more correct direction of before slider
01:04:800 (5) - how about move this end point of 01:03:966 (2)? if you agree my suggestion. move 01:04:591 (4) too
01:10:216 (1) - add finish at front. it`s good to hear me

Euny wrote:
Rare's Hard
00:11:883 (4,6) - fix
00:32:508 (7) - move it to x328y172 for overlap previous slider?
00:41:883 (1) - remove finish at this slider's tail.
01:10:216 (1) - add finish at this slider's head.
01:12:716 (4,1) - recheck blanket.

Kagamine Ren wrote:
[Rare's Hard]
01:22:508 (3,5,6) - same as normal+,add whisle?
nice diff^^

all no change because don't matter for me these pointing out.
thanks for modding!

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

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Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-03-02T15:18:28+00:00

Kagamine Ren wrote:
[Hitsound]

In the creator's diffs:
00:13:550 - why here no finish?it's better to add finish here since you add finish here00:06:883 - i wanna keep my hitsounds, so not changes
00:55:841 - clap fits better imo and u should increase the volume here since it's a strong beat.
^

[Easy]
01:23:966 - spin begins here? like normal diff,follow the vocal
i wanna keep my spiner

[Insane]
00:17:716 (3) - move a little right to make them00:17:300 (1,2,3) - the same distance,like this00:30:633 (1,2,3) - ok
00:42:925 (2,3) - ctrl+G to make the flow better?and do some changes at00:43:341 (4,5,1) - i wanna keep my patter here
00:55:425 (1,2,3) - make a bigger jump here.
ok

that's all^^
my english is bad,so my mod is too short. x.x sorry

Euny wrote:
your request in game

Easy
00:21:466 (3) - rotate this slider with -11 degrees and place it on x136y240 for better flow? (it makes really relaxing for cursor) ok
SPOILER
01:16:466 (3) - a clap should be more fitting here. i wanna keep my hitsounds soo not changes
01:16:883 (1) - and add finish at this slider's head. it makes better sound ^
01:18:966 (2) - add clap both slider's head and tail. ^
01:21:883 (1,1) - i'm unsure it's fine. how about just 1 spin?
its wiil be weird if i put 1 spinnner

Insane
00:04:800 (3) - i feel pretty weird. when i play this part. D:.. lets add some chill aim for this part! this is my suggestion : rotate this slider with 17 degrees and place it on x334y241 ok
SPOILER
00:09:800 (4) - move it x424y184 for better flow? ok
00:12:300 (2,4) - fix blanket. ok
00:12:716 (4,2) - make perfect overlap? ok
00:17:716 (3) - fix blanket and ctrl g for better moving? i wanna keep my pattern here and fix blanket
00:22:716 (1) - remove those finish at slider's end noo, my finish fet well on music
00:23:550 (4) - and add finish at this slider's head. thats finish dont fet well
00:24:175 (2,3) - fix blanket~ ok
SPOILER
00:25:008 (4,5) - ^ ok
00:25:841 (1,1) - ^ ok
00:31:050 (3) - place it on x264y135 for better overlap previous note ok
SPOILER
00:31:675 (1,3) - intentional? if or not, make perfect stack. i wanna keep my pattern here
00:32:091 (2,4) - ^ ^
00:36:050 (1,2,4) - fix blanket. ok
00:41:883 (1) - add finish
00:42:091 (2) - remove finish.
00:49:800 (4,1) - fix blanket. ok
00:55:633 (2,3,2,3) - i think fix some distance with these. like this : i fix it in my mind
SPOILER
01:05:008 (5,6) - fix blanket.
ok

GL with it!

Ranger wrote:
yup o/
Box

[Easy]

00:11:883 (3) - how about put the this slider more downward? make 00:10:216 (1,2,3) this equilateral triangle :3
Box
i prefer keep my pattern here
01:06:466 (4) - this finish sound little awkward because cymbal sound of the music, quite low. so i recommend reduce volume a little of the part (30%) hm, sound fine for me, so no changes
01:16:466 (3) - ^same reason ^
01:23:758 (1) - recommend start this spinner at 01:23:966. now so close spinner of before
i wanna keep my spiner here

[Insane]

00:34:591 (1,2,3) - make this equilateral triangle it`s looks good to me ok
Box
00:35:425 (1,2,3) - ^ ok
00:36:050 (1) - i think finish not match the music. if you want add hitsound this part, try use this i wanna keep my hitsounds
01:20:425 ~ 01:21:050 - how about make stream here? like this that stream dont fet well for music
Go to BN :p Good luck for Rank~

thx for mod :3

Natsu

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Joined September 2012

Natsu 2015-03-03T05:52:21+00:00

gonna check this today or you can fix for me idk

Eni

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Joined May 2013

Eni 2015-03-03T22:57:11+00:00

~~Well my mod replies got erased when I tried to post this, so had to re-write it from memory...~~

Ranger wrote:
[Railgun's Normal+]

only this diff check the widescreen support. remove this Sure

00:10:216 (1) - maybe you forget add clap at the end :3 Tried clap here and it doesn't fit imo
00:16:883 (7) - recommend change this clap to finish Done!
00:38:341 (4) - i think it`s awkward a little. recommend make just common Done, thanks!
Box
01:11:675 (4) - spacing error a little (recommend move to x:404 y:72) Done intentionally

Kagamine Ren wrote:
[Railgun's Normal+]
00:31:466 (2,3) - although this is Normal+,i still don't suggest u to use this flow,too hard for newbies No change; "They have to learn somehow!"
00:48:133 (3,4) - ^
01:14:800 (5,6) - ^
00:55:841 - add note?
01:22:508 (1,3) - both whisle?
All no change because 00:55:841 - I am emphasizing the vocal with an increased wait here and 01:22:508 (1,3) - I prefer using claps

Euny wrote:
Railgun's Normal+
00:23:341 (1) - finish would be better for this slider's head.
01:10:216 (1) - ^ Done
01:13:341 (2) - ^
01:19:175 (5) - remove whistle and add finish for here.
I changed some of the hitsounds, I'm not sure which though. 01:19:175 (5) - has a whistle intentionally, though.

Thanks for modding!
http://0paste.com/7315

Sonico Makaron

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Joined March 2011

Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-03-04T16:11:30+00:00

fix some on natsu normal.
Thx for mod :3

Kyubey

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2015-03-04T17:48:04+00:00

We added some tags and increased volume in the whole mapset, because previous one was pretty inaudible.
And finally, rebubbled!
TO NEXT BN: Don't forget to check video offset, because I can make a mistake there.

SPOILER

Tari

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2012

Tari 2015-03-04T23:00:44+00:00

Checking :3

Popped, for difficulty spread issues and that stack on Insane

[Insane]

00:19:591 (4) - plz no stacking like this, the note doesn't disappear in time at all, players won't be able to read this at all, you must move this one grid up
00:32:508 (3,4) - ^ Same, they look better if you move 3 more to the right, and 4 more to the left
00:50:216 (1) - The blanket can be improved.
01:04:591 (4) - Same, you need to move this down 1-2 grids more.

[Hard]

Its safer to decrease some jumps, please tell me why u can't delete some of these (especially since it will help diff spread)
00:24:800 (5) - Tbh, you can still stack them and reduce difficulty here, try this : http://puu.sh/gofXl.jpg
00:34:591 (4) - I'd rather you stack them here, tbh.
00:50:633 (2) - Same, whats point of increase DS here?
00:52:091 (6) - ^ Ctrl+G
01:05:841 (1) - Same, I'd prefer you try this : http://puu.sh/gog7d.jpg
01:16:675 (7) - Same whats point of increase DS here?
01:22:716 (4) - First of all, to me the song is getting weaker and this part is way too hard, almost all circles and jumps, when there are sliders use you have jumps to next note, it needs to be toned down here.

[Railgun's Normal]

First of all, this map looks more like a normal than a hard, I guess everybody has higher difficulty standards now. anyways you should name this Hard and possibly add some more 1/2

Rest is fine, I'm just concerned about the spread.

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2015-03-06T06:05:05+00:00

Tari wrote:
[Hard]
Its safer to decrease some jumps, please tell me why u can't delete some of these (especially since it will help diff spread)
00:24:800 (5) - Tbh, you can still stack them and reduce difficulty here, try this : http://puu.sh/gofXl.jpg
00:34:591 (4) - I'd rather you stack them here, tbh.
00:50:633 (2) - Same, whats point of increase DS here?
00:52:091 (6) - ^ Ctrl+G
01:05:841 (1) - Same, I'd prefer you try this : http://puu.sh/gog7d.jpg
01:16:675 (7) - Same whats point of increase DS here?
01:22:716 (4) - First of all, to me the song is getting weaker and this part is way too hard, almost all circles and jumps, when there are sliders use you have jumps to next note, it needs to be toned down here.

fixed some except favorite jumps. pls pm me if they have still problem.
http://puu.sh/gouVx.osu

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

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Topic Starter

Sonico Makaron 2015-03-06T06:33:31+00:00

Tari wrote:
Checking :3

Popped, for difficulty spread issues and that stack on Insane

[Insane]

00:19:591 (4) - plz no stacking like this, the note doesn't disappear in time at all, players won't be able to read this at all, you must move this one grid up
00:32:508 (3,4) - ^ Same, they look better if you move 3 more to the right, and 4 more to the left
00:50:216 (1) - The blanket can be improved.
01:04:591 (4) - Same, you need to move this down 1-2 grids more.
Rest is fine, I'm just concerned about the spread.

fix all~
thx for mod <3

Natsu

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Natsu 2015-03-09T12:15:39+00:00

Spread seems fine to me, about diff names they are fine now tho.

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