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Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - Crystal Dream TV Size ver.

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Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 марта 2015 г. at 14:01:43

Artist: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo
Title: Crystal Dream TV Size ver.
Source: そにアニ -SUPER SONICO THE ANIMATION-
Tags: soniani nitroplus ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare first astronomical velocity r_a_r_e acceleratorrus project_railgun すーぱーそに子 富士見 鈴 綿抜 フウリ 山本 彩乃 Suzu Fujimi Furi Watanuki
BPM: 144
Filesize: 19800kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,35 stars, 102 notes)
  2. Insane (3,6 stars, 262 notes)
  3. Natsu's Normal (1,77 stars, 128 notes)
  4. Railgun's Normal+ (2,23 stars, 148 notes)
  5. Rare's Hard (3,17 stars, 240 notes)
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - Crystal Dream TV Size ver.
Download: Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo - Crystal Dream TV Size ver. (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#3 Sonico Beatmap
I hope you will enjoy it (○ﾟε＾○)

Mapset:
[Easy] - Finished by me
[Natsu's Normal] - Finished by Natsu
[Railgun's Normal+] - Finished by Project Railgun
[Rare's Hard] - Finished by Rare
[Insane] - Finished by me
Last edited by Sonico Makaron , edited 40 times in total.
Raisa12
330 posts
Joined January 2013
Raisa12
amm ... would you accept GD ?
In fact, I did a normal diff to map ~
SPOILER
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pyuvngardjk1is3/Normal%20G%20Diff.rar
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

Raisa12 wrote:

amm ... would you accept GD ?
In fact, I did a normal diff to map ~
SPOILER
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pyuvngardjk1is3/Normal%20G%20Diff.rar
все All diffs are already occupied ><
thx for try :3
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
http://puu.sh/7fRcP.rar

sorry for be late, hope you like it :)
Nekonyan
305 posts
Joined October 2013
Nekonyan
well, this is my suggestion:

Easy

00:43:550 (1,2) - merge this 2 slider into 1 slider
00:51:883 (3,4) - too fast here, suggest delete circle and make slider longer
00:53:341 - this is easy diff, right? the beat is too fast here, try make it smooth c:

Normal & Insane

No Problem I see so far c:
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
done
http://puu.sh/7iO2H.osu
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

nekoaddict wrote:

well, this is my suggestion:

Easy

00:43:550 (1,2) - merge this 2 slider into 1 slider nah, i dont like this rhythm
00:51:883 (3,4) - too fast here, suggest delete circle and make slider longer ok
00:53:341 - this is easy diff, right? the beat is too fast here, try make it smooth c: ok

Normal & Insane

No Problem I see so far c:
thx for suggestion :)
BCslav
19 posts
Joined July 2012
BCslav
I'm afraid I couldn't mod much.
All difficulties are well made :3

You could optionally swap the spinner on Easy 01:21:883 (1) with some notes.
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

BCslav wrote:

I'm afraid I couldn't mod much.
All difficulties are well made :3

You could optionally swap the spinner on Easy 01:21:883 (1) with some notes.
nah, spinner is fine here
anyway thx for mod xD
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645
Hi~

Wow! I love this song!!

[General]
Move offset to 00:03:133
Edit : actually 00:01:882
I don't think this is needed
SPOILER
Oh well..

[Easy]
00:25:216 (3) - Try moving it to the right a little bit for better flow
00:30:633 (1) - I think this flows better
SPOILER
01:04:800 (2) - move this down for better flow
01:11:050 (2) - possible blanket?
01:16:050 (2) - 188 : 296 seems to provide better flow imo
01:21:883 (1) - end the spinner at 01:23:550 that way you can add hit finish too
01:23:654 (1) - if you fixed the spinner move this too (well it's obvious.. but sometimes people forget)

[Natsu's Normal]
00:46:883 (1) - move the tail to the left for better flow??
01:12:508 (3,1) - spacing?

[Rare's Hard]
00:27:300 (5,1) - stack them?
01:11:466 (5,2) - I don't think it looks good because they overlap. 01:12:091 (2) - try 152 : 128?
01:18:133 (5,2) - stack them? it would be trickier when HD is applied :3

[Insane]
00:03:966 (1) - delete NC
00:05:216 (1) - ^
00:07:716 (1) - ^
00:25:633 (5) - try to place this somewhere else? I think it's a bad flow
00:25:008 (4,1) - stack tail?
00:32:925 (4) - stack on 00:31:466 (4) ?
00:33:758 (6) - stack on 00:32:925 (4) head?
00:39:175 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this flows so much better..
SPOILER


00:41:258 (6) - crtl + g??
00:46:883 (1,2) - I think this is a bad flow. How about stack 00:47:508 (2) on 00:47:716 (3) head?
00:48:550 (1) - Better flow?
SPOILER
00:50:841 (7) - 00:49:800 (4,6) - if this was supposed to be blanket, might as well stack 00:50:841 (7) on 00:49:800 (4)
00:56:050 (1,2,3,4) - How about increasing DS to emphasize this part
01:06:258 (2) - crtl + g?
01:06:675 (3) - ^
01:07:300 (5) - Try this for better flow
SPOILER
01:12:300 (6,1) - increase DS?
01:12:716 (2) - try stacking on 01:11:675 (5) head


Very well made~~ but I thought the Insane could have been a little bit more harder considering Rare's Hard is a bit hard :3
Hope my mod helped and good luck!
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:050 (4) - It should be the same way of that 2 notes like this http://puu.sh/7kGqT.jpg but I don't like 00:06:466 (5) :( because it's break my flow, it should stop move to hit it.
  2. 00:07:508 - add note is better.
  3. 00:20:425 (6,7) - it has 1/1 break before a new set is come so please make this more flow, ex: http://puu.sh/7kGIg.jpg
  4. 00:25:841 (1) - should make it's tail stack with the previous slider's tail. for avoid the overlap.
  5. 00:50:216 (6) - more blanket.
  6. 01:01:258 (2,3,1,2,3) - looks a bit random for me, try to set it more :X
  7. 01:03:550 (7,1) - should be jump on 7 since it's a strong beat.
  8. 01:07:300 (5) - decrease a bit curve to make it looks same as (3)
[Rare]
  1. 00:32:091 (6) - move this a bit up and make (7) perfect stack.
  2. 01:07:300 (6) - can blanket more.
[Nardtzue]
  1. 00:11:883 (4) - would be great if you can make this blanket too.
  2. 00:29:591 (5) - it should be around 217|224 imo, to make it's space from (4) look balance with (3) to (4)
  3. 00:38:966 (5) - feel like distance error here.
  4. 01:13:758 (1) - hmm I don't know about this spacing.
[Easy]
  1. 00:28:133 (2) - kind of force the flow here, fix if possible.
that's all, good luck im headache
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

No Dap wrote:

[Rare's Hard]
00:27:300 (5,1) - stack them?
01:11:466 (5,2) - I don't think it looks good because they overlap. 01:12:091 (2) - try 152 : 128?
01:18:133 (5,2) - stack them? it would be trickier when HD is applied :3
all no change becausei don't care stack for me.
thanks for modding~
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Fixed the spacing issues, dunno how it happen lol

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Super Sonico - Crystal Dream (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56050
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
Artist:Super Sonico
ArtistUnicode:Super Sonico
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:nitroplus soniani ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare
BeatmapID:379105
BeatmapSetID:149241

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
fix some things~
thx for mod :3
kintyan
150 posts
Joined September 2010
kintyan
hi~

[General]
00:03:550 - red line move to 00:00:216 or 00:01:883
Letterbox during breaks - remove check

[Easy]
00:21:466 (3) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:18:550 (3) - copy
00:54:800 (2,3) - ^
SPOILER

00:54:800 - 1/1slider
00:55:425 - 1/2slider return
01:21:883 (1) - 2/1 slider return?

[Natsu's Normal]
00:05:216 (4,5,6) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:05:841 (5) - remove
00:55:216 (3) or 00:56:050 (4) - add nc?

[Rare's Hard]
00:11:883 (4) - nc
00:32:508 (7) - 00:31:050 (4) on stack

[Insane]
please see AIbot
SPOILER
00:07:716 (1) - remove nc
00:12:716 (4) - add nc
00:25:633 (5) - move to x316 y108
SPOILER
00:26:883 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:26:883 (1) - 1/2slider and remove nc
00:27:300 - add circle and nc
00:29:800 (5) - nc
00:37:508 (1) - remove nc
00:38:341 (3) - nc
00:39:175 (1) - remove nc
00:40:008 (3) - nc
00:51:883 (3) - change circle?
00:59:175 (1) - move to 00:58:341 (6) - head ?
01:05:841 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER
01:14:800 (4) - x224 y244 how about?

good luck!!
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Sheryl wrote:

[Rare's Hard]
00:11:883 (4) - nc
00:32:508 (7) - 00:31:050 (4) on stack
all no change.
thanks for modding~
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

Sheryl wrote:

hi~

[Easy]
00:21:466 (3) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:18:550 (3) - copy
00:54:800 (2,3) - ^
SPOILER

00:54:800 - 1/1slider
00:55:425 - 1/2slider return
01:21:883 (1) - 2/1 slider return?

[Insane]
please see AIbot
SPOILER
00:07:716 (1) - remove nc
00:12:716 (4) - add nc
00:25:633 (5) - move to x316 y108
SPOILER
00:26:883 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER

00:26:883 (1) - 1/2slider and remove nc
00:27:300 - add circle and nc
00:29:800 (5) - nc
00:37:508 (1) - remove nc
00:38:341 (3) - nc
00:39:175 (1) - remove nc
00:40:008 (3) - nc
00:51:883 (3) - change circle?
00:59:175 (1) - move to 00:58:341 (6) - head ?
01:05:841 (1,2) - suggestion
SPOILER
01:14:800 (4) - x224 y244 how about?

good luck!!
fix some!
thx for mod~
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Hey

[Insane]

00:03:551 (3) - I general think this slider can be not so curve lol.... more like this is better 00:04:383 (2) -
00:10:216 (6) - Umm it should NC here but not 00:10:633 (1) - ?
00:22:716 (1) - How about use this slider, it look more smooth.
SPOILER
00:27:925 (3) - It should not use a slider to cover this rhythm, i think it would be better if you use 1/2 reverse slider or 3 notes.
00:33:966 (7) - Same as up, i think this slider is so curve.
00:36:883 (4) - How about CTRL+G ? it will get better flow Imo.
SPOILER

I think the NCs aren't assigned properly.

[Hard]

Nice Hard, but just one thing to consider: I see your diff didn't have any break time , it might not the must but i wish you can put some break at here.

[Normal]
AR+1 ? seem really slow imo

00:26:675 (1) - wow umm.. I think this is stiff, you not need to put like this right? Just put normal slider instead.
00:45:633 - I think this green line is unused, and I don't see why you need to put this clap.
00:48:550 (4) - ^ slider-end

[Easy]

Nothing;

Mostly are suggestion.
Good luck!
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

Mintong wrote:

Hey

[Insane]

00:03:551 (3) - I general think this slider can be not so curve lol.... more like this is better 00:04:383 (2) -
00:10:216 (6) - Umm it should NC here but not 00:10:633 (1) - ?
00:22:716 (1) - How about use this slider, it look more smooth.
SPOILER
00:27:925 (3) - It should not use a slider to cover this rhythm, i think it would be better if you use 1/2 reverse slider or 3 notes.
00:33:966 (7) - Same as up, i think this slider is so curve.
00:36:883 (4) - How about CTRL+G ? it will get better flow Imo.
SPOILER

I think the NCs aren't assigned properly.

[Easy]

Nothing;

Mostly are suggestion.
Good luck!
fix some!
thx for mod :3
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Mintong wrote:

[Hard]
Nice Hard, but just one thing to consider: I see your diff didn't have any break time , it might not the must but i wish you can put some break at here.
pls gimme point out to time that you thought.
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Mod by Request :3

[General]

  1. I suggest to move start of the short kiai-break a bit. It would be cooler in my opinion if it was placed at 01:09:383 or 01:09:800.
[Easy]

  1. 00:16:466 (3) - A slider always connects a more emphasized beat (slider-start) and a less emphasized beat (slider-end) together. Often, the rhythm is not good if a slider ends on the big white tick. Here it is ok, since the big white tick doesn't have a very loud or emphasized beat. But, if you do it like this, please delete the finish at the end of the slider, because it destroys the whole feeling of the slider when playing. The tick doesn't need a hitsound.
  2. Awesome diff ^-^
[Natsu's Normal]

  1. 00:05:841 (5) - Small spacing difference but it is quite noticable.
  2. 00:22:716 (5) - Is that finish placed on purpose? Because it sounds pretty unfitting to me.
  3. 00:36:050 (5) - Ok, so the finish was on purpose o: I suggest to remove both.
  4. 00:40:633 (2,3) - You could make a blanket here, to make it look better.
  5. 00:56:466 (5) - Again, small spacing difference, this time even more nazi than the other one.
  6. 01:21:883 (4) - Consider adding a finish on the slider's start because it's hearable in the music.
  7. Cool ^^
[Rare's Hard]

  1. 00:30:841 (3,4) - Make a blanket here would look good.
  2. Well, it's a nice diff, I personally don't like it very much though, because I prefer Hard's with less 1/2 and more 1/1 and some 1/4 to make it more interesting. In my opinion, at many places in the map a 1/1-slider would have fit better, but it's fine as you got it.
[Insane]

  1. 00:06:466 (5) - This antijump doesn't fit and breaks the flow. Consider to ctrl+g those: 00:06:466 (5,6)
  2. 00:27:925 (3,1) - Make a blanket?
  3. Really nice diff! Well done o:
The mapset is awesome! I loved the Insane and Easy the most <3
Anyways, I wasn't able to find much ;w; I hope it was a useful mod nevertheless... Good luck with the mapset! Keep up the great work :3
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Rare's Hard]

  1. 00:30:841 (3,4) - Make a blanket here would look good.
  2. Well, it's a nice diff, I personally don't like it very much though, because I prefer Hard's with less 1/2 and more 1/1 and some 1/4 to make it more interesting. In my opinion, at many places in the map a 1/1-slider would have fit better, but it's fine as you got it.
no change thanks for modding
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
never mind, my fault. sorry
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Sheryl wrote:

hi~
[Natsu's Normal]
00:05:216 (4,5,6) - suggestion did some here
00:55:216 (3) or 00:56:050 (4) - add nc? nah it broke my pattern
good luck!!

Mintong wrote:

Hey
[Normal]
AR+1 ? seem really slow imo 5 play better, also th BPM is really low
00:26:675 (1) - wow umm.. I think this is stiff, you not need to put like this right? Just put normal slider instead. It fit the music :p I'll think about this
00:45:633 - I think this green line is unused, and I don't see why you need to put this clap. just keeping my pattern
00:48:550 (4) - ^ slider-end ^
Good luck!

Desperate-kun wrote:

Mod by Request :3

[General]



  • [Natsu's Normal]

  1. 00:05:841 (5) - Small spacing difference but it is quite noticable. fixed in previous mod
  2. 00:22:716 (5) - Is that finish placed on purpose? Because it sounds pretty unfitting to me. was a mistake
  3. 00:36:050 (5) - Ok, so the finish was on purpose o: I suggest to remove both.
  4. 00:40:633 (2,3) - You could make a blanket here, to make it look better. is fine now o.o idk nothing wrong with it
  5. 00:56:466 (5) - Again, small spacing difference, this time even more nazi than the other one. not even noticeable in game
  6. 01:21:883 (4) - Consider adding a finish on the slider's start because it's hearable in the music. k
  7. Cool ^^
thanks for mods

SPOILER
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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
Artist:Super Sonico
ArtistUnicode:Super Sonico
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
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HonKAn
226 posts
Joined March 2013
HonKAn
hello~

[Insane]

00:06:466 (5) - how about this pattern?
SPOILER
00:21:050 - add note
00:30:841 (2,3) - how about this pattern?
SPOILER

:) Good look!.
Last edited by HonKAn , edited 1 time in total.
HonKAn
226 posts
Joined March 2013
HonKAn
:)
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
all no change
thx for mod :)
Pandiar
391 posts
Joined February 2012
Pandiar
[Insane]
00:03:551 (3) - reverse curve?
SPOILER
00:04:383 (2) - Ctrl + G?
00:06:466 (5) - x320y296?
00:06:675 (6) - x488 y296?
00:27:508 (2) - move 00:25:841 (1)
00:27:716 - add note about x40 y216?
00:30:841 (2) - x216 y224?
00:36:675 (3) - x32 y260?
00:40:008 (3) - move on the 00:39:175 (1) about x168 y56?
00:40:425 (4) - bad flow imao x112y248?
00:55:841 (3) - x376y120?
01:00:425 (2,3) - Ctrl + G?
01:03:133 (5) - add finish
01:09:383 (1,1) - starting position is 01:09:383 and 01:09:800
SPOILER
01:12:508 (1) - x300y204?

[Hard]
00:03:341 (1) - 斜めにしてあげるのはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:19:592 (4) - こっち向きはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:27:300 (5) - Ctrl G してリバースにしてみるのはどうですか
00:41:258 (5) - 00:40:216 (1) この辺に配置するのはどうでしょう？

[Normal]
uncheck widescreen and letterbox

[Easy]
nice

goood luck !
truth revealer
86 posts
Joined July 2013
truth revealer
Hi nice beatmap... :)
Mod from me :
[Easy]
00:36:883 -> Not stacked properly.
00:37:716 -> Not stacked properly.
00:38:133 -> Not stacked properly.
00:39:383 -> Not stacked properly.
00:39:800 -> Not stacked properly.
00:40:216 -> Not stacked properly.

[Rare's Hard]
00:06:883 -> Make it curve?
00:09:383 -> Make it curve?
00:14:800 -> Make it curve?
00:17:300 -> Make it curve?
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Pandiar wrote:

[Hard]
00:03:341 (1) - 斜めにしてあげるのはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:19:592 (4) - こっち向きはどうでしょうか
SPOILER
00:27:300 (5) - Ctrl G してリバースにしてみるのはどうですか
00:41:258 (5) - 00:40:216 (1) この辺に配置するのはどうでしょう？

truth revealer wrote:

[Rare's Hard]
00:06:883 -> Make it curve?
00:09:383 -> Make it curve?
00:14:800 -> Make it curve?
00:17:300 -> Make it curve?
all no change. thanks for modding~
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,147 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
hey~ here for the m4m.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
the artist is incorrect. you have to put the name of the band, and i'm sure you know the name since you ranked a couple maps.
add the english meaning of the band, First Astronomical Velocity. as well as 第一宇宙速度 for the Japanese meaning in the tags.
also add "R_a_r_e" and "AcceleratorRUS" in the tags since you 2 ranked maps from those names.

[Easy]
00:05:216 (3) - make this slider look like (1). it'll flow a lot smoother for beginners, as well as symmetrical for this combo during gameplay.
00:10:216 (1) - the direction this is taking feels a bit uncomfortable for me. perhaps you can do Ctrl+> to make the transition even smoother for beginners like i said above?
00:11:883 (3) - what about a curve to make this slider flow more effectively during gameplay?
00:20:216 (1) - ^. it'll feel like a smoother bridge without the bumps and cracks IMO.
00:25:216 (3,4,1) - maybe you can do something like this for more effect and symmetry in the pattern?
00:29:800 (4,5) - i suggest that you use a 1/1 slider here because of the emphasis in the bass guitar. i find it more flowy than following the drums IMO.
00:54:800 (2,3) - ik you can do something easier than this. may i suggest something like this since it's simpler and a lot easier than the previous rhythm during gameplay?
01:16:466 (3) - i find that using a 1/1 repeat here feels uncomfortable to follow during gmaeplay. replace it for a circle and a 1/1 slider to make it play more effectively during gameplay.
this is a great easy. besides that 1/2 rhythm. can't do anything about it sadly :(.

[Natsu's Normal]
00:11:883 (4) - i think you should make this slider look like (1) mainly because it'll be more symmetrical and more smoother to follow during gameplay. it should look something like this.
00:15:216 (1,1) - i want you to highly consider leaving a 1/1 gap. just because it's a normal diff, doesn't mean that certain players have time to recover after the spinner. i really feel that doing this would give time for players to recover for the next note during gameplay.
00:50:008 (6) - maybe a drum clap to emphasize those drums in the BGM? it'll sound more effective during gameplay.
01:03:550 (1,2) - the overlap feels like it's untidy and uncomfortable to follow at the same time. i really think that doing something like this is more tidier and more comfortable to follow during gameplay.
i really think there can be minor improvements in the rhythm selections.

[Rare-sama's Hard]
00:03:341 (1) - don't you think that this is too far out? what about using 2 circles instead to make this an easier introduction to the song?
00:08:550 (1) - i think it'd make more sense if this is flipped by using Ctrl+G. the transition would flow a lot smoother from the previous combo during gameplay.
00:29:800 (3,4) - add claps at the end of (3), and at (4) for better emphasis in the drums. it sounds too plain and empty to follow during gameplay.
00:42:716 (3,4) - same idea here, but use drum claps instead. same reason as above.
00:46:050 (7) - same as 00:29:800 - (3).
00:49:383 (3,4) - for this one, use a clap on the end of (3), and a drum clap on (4). i'm sure you get the idea on why.
not bad. just the hitsounds at the calm part bothered me. consider adding them to make it sound more effective.

[Insane]
00:04:800 (3) - perhaps you can do this for symmetry and transition during gameplay?
00:06:466 (5,6) - i think you can switch these notes around to make it more fun to follow for players during gameplay.
00:11:466 (3) - why don't you keep the flow steady by using the same slider and DS? it should look like this.
00:30:841 (2) - space this out. it follows the same lyric, but it feels like the "me" in "yume" is asking for a small jump in this part of the song IMO.
00:56:050 (1,2,3,4) - i say that you delete this part. since you left this part blank for the easy diff, you're breaking consistency with this part since it ruins the setup for the kiai during gameplay.
01:11:675 (5) - you can make this slider look a lot better. if you mention the blanket, the blanket doesn't look nice during gameplay. fix the slider by making it more symmetrical, and move the next note somewhere else if you want. it should look something like this if you do this.
an acceptable insane. liking the AR9 feel of the diff btw.

and that's all i got. remember to reply with reason to what you guys fixed and didn't fix in my mod. anyways, GL and don't give up on this map :D
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ here for the m4m.

[Natsu's Normal]

00:15:216 (1,1) - i want you to highly consider leaving a 1/1 gap. just because it's a normal diff, doesn't mean that certain players have time to recover after the spinner. i really feel that doing this would give time for players to recover for the next note during gameplay.
well about this I'll like to keep it, since is a really low bpm and I have some new players to test my diff before and was ok, also there is a easy diff, and without that beat I can't represent the vocals properly orz
thanks for mod, others are done

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56050
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
Artist:Super Sonico
ArtistUnicode:Super Sonico
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:nitroplus soniani ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare
BeatmapID:379105
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OverallDifficulty:4
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312,260,36050,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,352,36466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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416,328,45008,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,364,45425,2,0,B|261:370|261:370|237:338|237:338|197:346,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,116,47716,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,44,48133,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,180,51466,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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132,36,52925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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432,180,57508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Rare-sama's Hard]
00:03:341 (1) - don't you think that this is too far out? what about using 2 circles instead to make this an easier introduction to the song? this is really my favorite pattern. i want to keep my pattern ><. if you not agree it, i will change to triplets.
00:08:550 (1) - i think it'd make more sense if this is flipped by using Ctrl+G. the transition would flow a lot smoother from the previous combo during gameplay. no change.
00:29:800 (3,4) - add claps at the end of (3), and at (4) for better emphasis in the drums. it sounds too plain and empty to follow during gameplay. added clap to (3).
00:42:716 (3,4) - same idea here, but use drum claps instead. same reason as above. i don't think so. i like one with now on.
00:46:050 (7) - same as 00:29:800 - (3). 00:46:050 (7) - 00:49:383 (3) - added to clap to end
00:49:383 (3,4) - for this one, use a clap on the end of (3), and a drum clap on (4). i'm sure you get the idea on why. ^
not bad. just the hitsounds at the calm part bothered me. consider adding them to make it sound more effective.
thanks for modding~
http://puu.sh/7rkbI.osu
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,147 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
@Rare: it's fine if you wanna keep it, but personally, i feel that it's better if you get more opinions about that 1/4 slider at the beginning.
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Byakugan249 wrote:

@Rare: it's fine if you wanna keep it, but personally, i feel that it's better if you get more opinions about that 1/4 slider at the beginning.
thanks!
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

Pandiar wrote:

[Insane]
00:03:551 (3) - reverse curve?
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00:04:383 (2) - Ctrl + G?
00:06:466 (5) - x320y296?
00:06:675 (6) - x488 y296?
00:27:508 (2) - move 00:25:841 (1)
00:27:716 - add note about x40 y216?
00:30:841 (2) - x216 y224?
00:36:675 (3) - x32 y260?
00:40:008 (3) - move on the 00:39:175 (1) about x168 y56?
00:40:425 (4) - bad flow imao x112y248?
00:55:841 (3) - x376y120?
01:00:425 (2,3) - Ctrl + G?
01:03:133 (5) - add finish
01:09:383 (1,1) - starting position is 01:09:383 and 01:09:800
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01:12:508 (1) - x300y204?

[Normal]
uncheck widescreen and letterbox

[Easy]
nice

goood luck !
fix some, thx for mod :3

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ here for the m4m.

[Easy]
00:05:216 (3) - make this slider look like (1). it'll flow a lot smoother for beginners, as well as symmetrical for this combo during gameplay. i wanna keep my pattern
00:10:216 (1) - the direction this is taking feels a bit uncomfortable for me. perhaps you can do Ctrl+> to make the transition even smoother for beginners like i said above? ^

[Insane]
00:04:800 (3) - perhaps you can do this for symmetry and transition during gameplay? i want to keep my pattern
00:56:050 (1,2,3,4) - i say that you delete this part. since you left this part blank for the easy diff, you're breaking consistency with this part since it ruins the setup for the kiai during gameplay. i like this place i dont wanna change it
an acceptable insane. liking the AR9 feel of the diff btw.

and that's all i got. remember to reply with reason to what you guys fixed and didn't fix in my mod. anyways, GL and don't give up on this map :D
thx for mod, others are done :D
Neta
536 posts
Joined May 2011
Neta
Hi~ From PM modding request

my mod is all suggestion

[Easy]
  1. 00:48:550 (2) - i think put whistle to slider's end is better but this is your choice
  2. 00:59:383 (5,1) - delete whistle 5 and put 1's start
  3. 01:21:883 (1) - how about change like this ? http://puu.sh/7tyH6.jpg or http://puu.sh/7tyHN.jpg (just suggestion)

[Natsu's Normal]
  1. 00:04:800 (3,6) - umm better fix this overlap not to overlap. i fell little strange when i playing
  2. fine~

[Rare's Hard]
  1. 00:48:341 (4,1) - overlapped better fix this
  2. 00:49:175 (2) - move this to 236, 8 will be clear
  3. 00:53:758 (2) - ^ 304, 280

[Insane]
  1. 01:03:133 (5,6,7) - make distance same will be good
  2. 01:10:008 (2,3,1) - ^
  3. 01:19:175 (4) - straight will be better
  4. 01:21:466 (3) - move to 384, 352
Nice map~~

GOOD LUCK :)
Unsfamiliar
540 posts
Joined May 2013
Unsfamiliar
Hey Sonico o/

As requested:

Insane
  1. 00:03:551 (3,1) - I think you should swap the new combo here. It makes more sense if the combo begins at 00:03:550, since this is where the measure begins. Additionally, you've used a finish to emphasise the note there, which is a strong indicator for this particular part.
  2. 00:03:966 (1,2,3) - The flow here could be improved slightly. I will give you a suggestion, but what you have now isn't particularly bad. It's just the fact that the song is only 144 bpm, makes the possibly awkward bits more evident. Anyway, I think the angle between 00:03:966 (1,2) is too large. This means that the exit from (1)'s slider end is to sharp to (2) imo. To fix this, I suggest you Ctrl+G 00:04:383 (2).
    SPOILER
    Now this essentially increases the jump a bit, but I think this is absolutely fine because if you listen carefully you can hear a nice bell sound (or whatever) that's worth emphasising. Plus the jump is easy to catch now, because of the subtle angle. Furthermore, this generates a very nice circular flow leading into the next 2 sliders 00:04:800 (3,1).
  3. 00:16:883 (6,1) - Swap new combo for the same reason I mentioned before.
  4. 00:30:216 (8,1) - ^
  5. 00:40:633 (5,6,1) - This is a kind of awkward use of slider angles and entrance into a jump pattern. I feel 00:41:258 (6) should not be below the (5) slider end, this makes for some jarring play (for me). I can't really suggest something in particular that could fix this though... Well if you agree with what I'm saying, try find an arrangement that will also lead better into the following jump sequence starting at 00:41:883 (1). Right now, entry into this sequence is pretty strange coming from a reverse slider in the opposite direction.
  6. 00:45:841 (2,3,4,5) -
    SPOILER
    This rhythm works a lot better for me, as it follows the vocals with the 2 sliders, and it works as a nice build up to the following jump 00:46:675 (4,1).
  7. 00:51:883 (3,4) - Try Ctrl+G this on the timeline. 00:51:883 - This vocal should be empathised by a note rather than a slider, as it is a short, sharp sound. 00:52:091 - Whereas the vocal part form here is longer and warrants a slider.
    SPOILER
  8. 00:53:966 (2,3,4) - Similar sort of thing here regarding rhythm. 00:53:966 - Short. 00:54:175 - Long. 00:54:591 - Long.
    SPOILER
    By fixing these rhythm issues I think it would be much more comfortable to play and is nice in terms of predictability/flow.
  9. 01:03:550 (7,1) - Swap new combo.
  10. 01:11:258 (4,5) - This is sort of unorthodox, particularly for a mouse player like myself. I was expecting some sort of circular flow here, considering you build up here 01:10:841 (3,4). However, the entry into 01:11:675 (5) is jarring in terms of direction; the way it is curved is counter-intuitive. I suggest you Ctrl+H (flip horizontally) this slider and make it less vertical. The following works nicely for me:
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    You will have to adjust the spacing of the following note slightly if you decide to do this.
  11. 01:13:341 (4) - Unnecessary 3/4 slider. There is, in fact, no audible beat on the blue tick. I think you should avoid using 3/4 sliders just for the sake of it, particularly when a normal 1/2 slider works much better as it catches the beat on the big white tick.
  12. 01:23:966 (2) - This could use some more spacing from the previous note, to emphasise this final note. Plus, it doesn't make sense if the spacing of 01:23:341 (4,1) is larger.

Rare's Hard
  1. 00:53:550 (1,2) - This jump doesn't really make sense in my opinion. The song doesn't warrant one and (2) isn't worth emphasising. If anything, the jump should be between here 00:53:133 (9,1) instead.
  2. 01:18:966 (3,4) - I think it would work wonders if you moved these two sliders 1/2 forward in the timeline. This will follow the vocals better, and would be much more comfortable to play. Just try it :) but you'll also have to delete 01:19:800 (5), and add a note here 01:18:966. For reference:
    SPOILER

Easy
  1. 00:38:133 (3,4) - This is the only 1/2 you've used in this entire difficulty if I'm not mistaken. Yeah probably don't do this ww. Beginners will absolutely freak out when they see this overlap. A 3/2 reverse slider from 00:37:716 would be sufficient imo if you really need to emphasise 00:38:341 (which I think you are correct in doing so. The reverse part also gives it a nice swing emphasising that red tick note even better!

Normal is fine for me, because well... it's Natsu :)

Well that's all! All suggestions, feel free to use them or not; only use them if it doesn't affect you mapping style :3
If you don't understand anything I mentioned, you can contact me any time in-game. Good luck and star for support~
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Neta wrote:

[Rare's Hard]
  1. 00:48:341 (4,1) - overlapped better fix this
  2. 00:49:175 (2) - move this to 236, 8 will be clear
  3. 00:53:758 (2) - ^ 304, 280

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Rare's Hard
  1. 00:53:550 (1,2) - This jump doesn't really make sense in my opinion. The song doesn't warrant one and (2) isn't worth emphasising. If anything, the jump should be between here 00:53:133 (9,1) instead.
  2. 01:18:966 (3,4) - I think it would work wonders if you moved these two sliders 1/2 forward in the timeline. This will follow the vocals better, and would be much more comfortable to play. Just try it :) but you'll also have to delete 01:19:800 (5), and add a note here 01:18:966. For reference:
    SPOILER
all no change.
thanks for modding~
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Neta wrote:

Hi~ From PM modding request



[Natsu's Normal]
  1. 00:04:800 (3,6) - umm better fix this overlap not to overlap. i fell little strange when i playing It's on purpose, since is a pattern I always use in some maps :3
  2. fine~

GOOD LUCK :)
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
fix some~
thx for mod :3
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Sonico Makaron

[ General ]

Photo size is 1366x768.
You must change as shown in the photograph the widescreen support..
SPOILER

[ Easy ]

AR - 1 ( It's likely a little easier is to play )

00:06:466 (4) - Delete whistle
00:16:466 (3) - Add finish
00:59:383 (5) - Delete whistle
01:07:300 (1) - Add finish ( Front of the slider )
01:08:966 (1) - ^
01:09:800 (3) - ^
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

[ Natsu's Normal ] Hi~ Natsu

00:05:216 (4) - umm .. I, slider not good many ...
It is recommended that you want to change the appearance.
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

no problem

[ Rare's Hard ] Hi~ Rare

00:03:341 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
00:13:966 (2) - Add finish
00:14:800 (5) - The finish added to the start of the slider
00:15:633 (3) - Add finish
00:16:050 (5) - The finish added to the start of the slider
00:16:466 (6) - ^
00:41:258 (5) - x236 y272 ( I think towards the location of this place is good. )
00:44:383 (3) - Ctrl + G
00:44:800 (4) - ^
00:52:508 (7) - ^
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

[ Insane ]

00:32:091 (2) - Ctrl + G
00:32:925 (4) - ^
00:36:050 (1) - ^
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends

Good Map !!
Star~

http://osu.ppy.sh/b/384818 MY MAP!! M4M!! : )
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[ Rare's Hard ] Hi~ Rare
00:03:341 (1) - Add clap at the end of the slider
00:13:966 (2) - Add finish
00:14:800 (5) - The finish added to the start of the slider
00:15:633 (3) - Add finish
00:16:050 (5) - The finish added to the start of the slider
00:16:466 (6) - ^
00:41:258 (5) - x236 y272 ( I think towards the location of this place is good. )
00:44:383 (3) - Ctrl + G
00:44:800 (4) - ^
00:52:508 (7) - ^
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends
all no change thanks for modding~
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Random modding~

Easy:

00:41:883 (1) - Add Finish?
00:50:216 (1,3) - Make these sliders identical.
01:21:883 (1,1) - I doubt if a spinner in a row with a 1/4 gap is nice...

Natsu's Normal:

00:05:216 (4) - Since this is too round, the head and the end overlaps a little. Make a little space?
01:08:133 (2) - Make a better blanket with the previous slider.
00:11:883 (4,5) - Mind adjusting the flow like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1422511
01:23:550 (1) - I think a whistle should be in reverse to follow the vocal from 01:22:508 (5,6,7).

Rare's Hard:

00:30:216 (1) - (372,28) makes a better flow with the previous triplet.
01:05:008 (6,7) - Switching the rhythm fits the song better.

Insane:

00:32:925 (4) - Imo (134,196) would be more natural.
00:36:883 - Whistles were missing some part.. Add some like 00:37:508 and 00:39:175 for example?
00:51:883 (3) - Lessen the curve, it's too curvy compared to 00:51:050 (1,2).
01:00:841, 01:01:675 - Add whistle.
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare

Sonnyc wrote:

Rare's Hard:
00:30:216 (1) - (372,28) makes a better flow with the previous triplet.
01:05:008 (6,7) - Switching the rhythm fits the song better.
all no change thanks for modding~
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron
fix some~
thx for mod :3
Natsu
8,076 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Sonico Makaron


[ Natsu's Normal ] Hi~ Natsu

00:05:216 (4) - umm .. I, slider not good many ... I just move it a bit
01:23:758 (1) - Change to 5% the sound to the point where the spinner here ends I really don't like inaudible stuff orz

no problem
all apply in Sonnyc mod

SPOILER
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56050
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Crystal Dream (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:クリスタル・ドリーム (TV Size)
Artist:Daiichi Uchuu Sokudo
ArtistUnicode:第一宇宙速度
Creator:Sonico Makaron
Version:Natsu's Normal
Source:Super Sonico The Animation
Tags:nitroplus soniani ending 5 ayano yamamoto natsu rare first astronomical velocity r_a_r_e acceleratorrus
BeatmapID:379105
BeatmapSetID:149241

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"Super Sonico - Crystal Dream (TV Size).avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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hopperhtkn
317 posts
Joined April 2010
hopperhtkn
[General]
would you like to add this hitsound? the map could be better in that way imo
Normal-hitnormal

add that hitsound like this place
00:03:550 - 00:03:758 - 00:03:966 -
00:04:591 - 00:04:800 - 00:05:008 -
00:55:216 - 00:55:425 - 00:55:633 - 00:55:841 -

GL :)
Sonico Makaron
731 posts
Joined March 2011
Topic Starter
Sonico Makaron

hopperhtkn wrote:

[General]
would you like to add this hitsound? the map could be better in that way imo
Normal-hitnormal

add that hitsound like this place
00:03:550 - 00:03:758 - 00:03:966 -
00:04:591 - 00:04:800 - 00:05:008 -
00:55:216 - 00:55:425 - 00:55:633 - 00:55:841 -

GL :)
I like the when sound goes without hitnormal
thx for help~
Jethh
157 posts
Joined May 2013
Jethh
Random testplay~ [Insane]
Testplay

Rhythm & flow are good
I guess it should be a little bit harder,
00:55:425 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - maybe increase Distance spacing in this place for example??

btw 00:03:965 (1) - end of slider isn't snapped.

Anyway, good job.
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