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[Marathon]
00:25:604 (1,2,3,4) - this was confusing for me bc the spacing makes it seem like a 1/4 (not 1/6) stream. imo use a closer spacing like this
would feel a lot better for stream like this. (if you agree, you'll have to rearrange the notes after bc spacing)
00:29:734 (1,3) - imo normal-hit isn't enough to emphasize this part- you make a jump here but i can hardly hear the hitsound @_@ imo standard soft-whistle fits a lot better here.
00:55:821 (1) - remove clap? imo no need to put a clap here.
01:20:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - imo jump here would fit well (and also more consistent with 02:08:865 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - )
01:47:126 - normal-slidertick here? seems you use cymbals on 1/2s for this part, but this one isn't
02:43:213 - how about add whistle here, 02:43:647 - , and 02:44:952 - ? imo feels a lot better here to keep the rhythm going.
03:26:631 (7) - blanket fix
http://puu.sh/eFZiH/11c8787cc1.jpg437,272,206631,2,0,B|360:228|396:152|396:152|444:136|476:68|448:16,1,300,0|2,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:24:131 (7) - x196 y56? feel more natural than back-and-forth pattern imo
03:41:215 (1) - missing hit-normal here
05:30:918 - add note?
05:48:946 (1) - NC here for spacing change
07:01:603 (1) - remove NC? not necessary to have combo with 1 note here imo.
07:52:463 (5) - ctrl+G to keep curve?
08:53:569 (1) - imo add NC here to differentiate between pattern
08:55:060 (1,2) - switch NCs for pattern?
09:14:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - imo this pattern was a lot less fun than its counterparts (07:01:976 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 08:20:967 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ) which were really cool because of the way they flowed with the vocal. i think it'd be better if you made a pattern more similar to that.
idea372,192,554622,5,14,1:2:0:0:
260,360,554808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,165,555181,5,14,1:2:0:0:
260,360,555367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
241,160,555740,5,14,1:2:0:0:
260,360,555926,1,0,0:0:0:0:
174,175,556298,5,14,1:2:0:0:
260,356,556484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,216,556857,5,14,1:2:0:0:
262,356,557043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,216,557416,2,0,P|184:7|376:115,1,500,6|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
there might be a different way, that's just one example. anyway just a suggestion
10:14:968 - any reason different hitsound here?
10:22:100 (5) - imo clap here sounds really out of place... given you're using clap on slidertick before, i think it'd be better if you removed claps here and added clap at 10:22:837 -
10:57:878 - add note (stack on tail of 10:56:771 (5) - )? fits instrument in background, and current spacing to 10:58:124 (1) - is confusing bc it feels like a 1/2.
11:42:953 (3) - how about this rhythm instead, then add whistle on (4)? emphasize beat better imo
11:58:203 (7) - this rhythm instead, then add clap at 11:58:453 - ?
12:45:953 (1,2,3) - imo this rhythm is better here to emphasize the beat:
12:54:078 (2) - this plays really bad imo; since most of the sliders have 1 repeat, putting a slider with 3 repeats makes the rhythm really awkward. imo smth like this
would feel a lot more natural to play.
13:01:578 (1) - same idea as before. imo this rhythm is good here:
i honestly don't have any problems with this map, just some minor suggestions. call me back when you get someone to check the timing orz