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Hatsune Miku - Miracle Paint

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Krisom
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 12 de julio de 2010 at 8:25:55

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Miracle Paint
Source: OSTER Project
Tags: Project Diva Vocaloid Dusty
BPM: 215
Filesize: 18594kb
Play Time: 02:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dusty's Acrylic (4,87 stars, 296 notes)
  2. Easy (1,42 stars, 110 notes)
  3. Hard (4,6 stars, 262 notes)
  4. Normal (3,56 stars, 184 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Miracle Paint
Download: Hatsune Miku - Miracle Paint (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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-Some skin elements were taken from safe_osu's Hatsune Miku song, Dear Cocoa Girls, check it out, it's a great map!-
This is a Jumpy-1/3 song
I recommend downloading the video. You'll see Miku dancing in a magician suit at the most pure Las Vegas Style! It's priceless!
Special Thanks to Dusty for an incredible Acrylic.
Last edited by Krisom , edited 71 times in total.
Ozitiho
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Ozitiho
No way! You mapped this song? I actually got wanted to do it myself, but i don't have the MP3 anymore.
Sides, the one i used to have was ripped from youtube, and we all know how that works out...
I love you just for attempting to map it. I'll check it out in a bit. Dun have much to do anyway.

EDIT: First of all, the image is so... White. Whatever you like, i guess.
Generally a VERY charming map though!
Anything green is an opinion of mine

[Normal]
00:36:49 - Add note here
01:20:86 - I KNOW you can do better! Besides it's so sudden, it's impossible to get the first one right.
01:25:88 - WOAH?! What?! Where?! Double BPM? You sure? We're talking normal here! Even i couldn't get them right.
01:35:93 - If there was ever a perfect time to go kiai mode... Go kiai mode here.
01:41:51 - Clap!
01:42:64 - Clap again!
01:45:63 - What did they tell you about 1/8th beat? I'm telling you it's wrong. This one follows right up with the rest. Should be at 01:45:70.
01:53:79 - If there was ever a perfect time to go kiai mode... (Note, i didn't make that green)
01:56:30 - Clap!
01:56:83 - Clap again!
01:57:56 - And AGAIN!
02:02:58 - Should be one tick earlier

I played hard to, i remember somethings bugged me, but i don't have much time right now.
Either way, AWSOME beatmap! I'm loving it! I've seen the real PV, but this one beats it to Manhattan and back!
Probably coz she's not wearing any pants, dude... *cough* Wait, what?
But one thing i can say, the circles in hard should be bigger. As they are small now, everything gets really cramped or far to hard. That's why all my beatmaps have circles as big as the planet Amsterdam!

I'll mod hard later to... And uh... Yeah... Great map!
Krisom
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Ozitiho wrote:

EDIT: First of all, the image is so... White. Whatever you like, i guess. Tried to find a better BG. Yeah, I'll try again, I completely hate that BG...
Generally a VERY charming map though!Thank you, but I bet that you just say that becouse of the song XD
Anything green is an opinion of mineAwsm, I love green...

[Normal]
00:36:49 - Add note here Right.
01:20:86 - I KNOW you can do better! Besides it's so sudden, it's impossible to get the first one right.Ok, I'll try something diferent, I'll just stick with the lyrics.
01:25:88 - WOAH?! What?! Where?! Double BPM? You sure? We're talking normal here! Even i couldn't get them right.In fact, I'm not that sure, but I dont feel it that weird. I'll think on that one later. Maybe it is becouse I did not do right the slider lenghts, I'll redo em.
01:35:93 - If there was ever a perfect time to go kiai mode... Go kiai mode here.Gotcha
01:41:51 - Clap!True...
01:42:64 - Clap again!True...
01:45:63 - What did they tell you about 1/8th beat? I'm telling you it's wrong. This one follows right up with the rest. Should be at 01:45:70.You sure?...
01:53:79 - If there was ever a perfect time to go kiai mode... (Note, i didn't make that green)Gotcha...
01:56:30 - Clap!Ok
01:56:83 - Clap again!Ok
01:57:56 - And AGAIN!I don't feel that one being ok, but what about having it on finish and the one on 01:57:42 claping?
02:02:58 - Should be one tick earlierYou sure???

I played hard to, i remember somethings bugged me, but i don't have much time right now.
I'll try self-modding it again then, Thanks
Either way, AWSOME beatmap! I'm loving it! I've seen the real PV, but this one beats it to Manhattan and back!
Probably coz she's not wearing any pants, dude... *cough* Wait, what?
XD Lol'd
But one thing i can say, the circles in hard should be bigger. As they are small now, everything gets really cramped or far to hard. That's why all my beatmaps have circles as big as the planet Amsterdam!

I'll mod hard later to... And uh... Yeah... Great map!
Thank you :D
Re-Submitting.

Thank you :D
shadow7412
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Joined September 2009
shadow7412
Good song... I really hope it gets ranked. I can't spend a huge amount of time on this, but here are some things I picked up on;

Easy:
1:03:838 - If you drop a circle here, you will lead into the offbeat section more smoothly.
1:25:86 - I can't say I am a fan of sliders that shoot into out-of-space suddenly... While it does fit in musically, it is very hard to follow.

Hard:
0:05:511 - As in easy, I think a lead in for the offbeat section would be good here.
0:52:396 - I think the spinner starting here would match the vocals a little better.
1:26:862, 1:27:979: I feel there are beats missing here.
1:29:514: I think the spinners a little early (I think you should be spinning when she is holding the 'eee" (or い～ if you prefer)
2:18:352: I would like to see a little more of the scat part mapped out.


Anyway.Thats more or less what I think.
Krisom
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shadow7412 wrote:

Good song... I really hope it gets ranked. I can't spend a huge amount of time on this, but here are some things I picked up on;

Easy It's normal XD:
1:03:838 - If you drop a circle here, you will lead into the offbeat section more smoothly. ...ok, I'll try
1:25:86 - I can't say I am a fan of sliders that shoot into out-of-space suddenly... While it does fit in musically, it is very hard to follow.Yeah... ...I think I'll just get rid of double BPMs in Normal for now.

Hard:
0:05:511 - As in easy, I think a lead in for the offbeat section would be good here.ok, I'll test it
0:52:396 - I think the spinner starting here would match the vocals a little better.True
1:26:862, 1:27:979: I feel there are beats missing here.I was not sure if I should have added 'em or not. Thanks.
1:29:514: I think the spinners a little early (I think you should be spinning when she is holding the 'eee" (or い～ if you prefer) True, I did not feel ok with that one, I also had to add circles in 01:29:51 and 01:29:79 to follow up
2:18:352: I would like to see a little more of the scat part mapped out. At the begining, the offset was wrong, so I did not map that one. When I fix'd the offset (...or so it seems...), I completely forgot 'bout that, thanks for pointing that out :D


Anyway.Thats more or less what I think.

Thank you :D
shadow7412
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shadow7412

Krisom wrote:

Easy It's normal XD:
/facepalm
Oops :P
Krisom
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Krisom
BTW, I'm still working on it, but if anyone want's to help me with another diff I'd be happy.
shadow7412
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shadow7412

Krisom wrote:

BTW, I'm still working on it, but if anyone want's to help me with another diff I'd be happy.
Then I shall have another look over tonight.

EDIT: Thats looking quite good I think... Could do with another difficulty: and I really wish I wasn't so busy so I could do that for you.

Anyway.

Easy:
1:50:724 - I think the beat 1 should be here instead of where it is (ie, 1/2 beat earlier) to match the trumpets

Hard:
1:26:862 - The 3 looks a little unnatural. Maybe consider moving the 1 and 2 down (or 4 up) to make it look smooth like the other couple of similar runs?
1:28:816 - This secion (1,2,1,2,3) gets very buried under the section previous. You can decide whether this is a good or bad thing.

Also. I cannot help but think that tempo is a little slow... Why I pick up on this now, and not before is a little strange. I also noted that it didnt seem to be a problem in easy. So I took a bit of a look at your timing points - and after lots of clicking, as well as running the file through FL Studio for a tempo analysis (which turned out to be wrong) i have decided the tempo is in fact right. I think the timing points not always being on beats may possibly be the cause. So I strongly suggest you go through your beat points in Hard and put them all on beats (preferable first ones). I really hope that is the problem.

tdlr; - Change the tempo on beats.
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Hard
00:05:79 (1,1,1,1,1) - you could sparete this a bit more... since is Hard.. a few jumps fits here
00:26:72 (3,1) - wrong spacing
00:42:21 (5,6) - ^
00:54:35 - add note
00:55:74 (3,4) - wrong spacing
02:18:49 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - thsi ssounds weird. snap it to 1/4

Normal
a lot of spacing problems
example
00:29:51 (3,1) - look the space between this two
now look this two 00:28:39 (3,1)
try to be more consistent with spacing, specially on a normal diff
plz dont use 1/4beats on normal.

you have a lot of spacing problems... check this image to know better how to use the spacing right.
Krisom
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zekira
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Zekira
Use these two uninherited offsets:

1st: 1038ms
2nd: 95924ms

Resnap to whatever you're using afterwards. Fix the other timing points too (these offsets are -8 from the original)
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Put Oster Project and Project Diva in the tags section

Edit: You have 2 .osb files, please remove the wrong one.

Normal:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
02:06:90 (1) - it looks messy and is hard to read with this note being so close to the end of the previous combo

Combo mod:
01:29:22 (4) - new combo
02:01:32 (1) - remove new combo
02:02:15 (2) - if you did the previous mod, you might want to consider putting a new combo here
02:04:11 (1) - remove new combo

Timing section mod:
01:35:90 - y is there a noninherited timing section here?
01:53:62 - add another inherited timing section here to make prevent against the normal hitsound triggering on the start of 01:53:78 (1) -

The hitsounds sound sort of random to me in this map

Hard:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:27:82 (1) - this was too close to the previous note for me
01:37:04 (5) - stack the start on top of 3
01:40:67 (1) - this was too close to the previous note for me

Combo mod: you seemed to keep doing combos for either one or two lines of lyrics. Please choose one. I might be good just to copy normal's combo style

Timing section mod:
00:54:62 - I don't see the purpose of this timing section, can you please remove it
01:04:10 - ^
01:35:90 - y is there a noninherited timing section here?
01:53:62 - same as normal

Nazi mod:
02:03:70 (4) - fix spacing (since this is spacing problem is visible while playing)

The hitsounds sound sort of random to me in this map

Nice map. It needs some fine tuning though.
Star.
Krisom
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blissfulyoshi wrote:

Put Oster Project and Project Diva in the tags section

Edit: You have 2 .osb files, please remove the wrong one.

Normal:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
02:06:90 (1) - it looks messy and is hard to read with this note being so close to the end of the previous combo True. I'm trying to stick with the lyrics in that one, so I'll replace it.

Combo mod:
01:29:22 (4) - new combo True
02:01:32 (1) - remove new combo
02:02:15 (2) - if you did the previous mod, you might want to consider putting a new combo here Did both. Thanks
02:04:11 (1) - remove new combo True

Timing section mod:
01:35:90 - y is there a noninherited timing section here? Dunno, Zekira said so. Anyway, it does not mess anything.
01:53:62 - add another inherited timing section here to make prevent against the normal hitsound triggering on the start of 01:53:78 (1) - All right

The hitsounds sound sort of random to me in this map
I'm not good at hitsounds...

Hard:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:27:82 (1) - this was too close to the previous note for me Replaced it.
01:37:04 (5) - stack the start on top of 3 Ok.
01:40:67 (1) - this was too close to the previous note for me The idea is to make a pseudo-heart with the notes (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8), I tried moving 01:38:15's(1,2,3,4,5) Hope that makes it look better.

Combo mod: you seemed to keep doing combos for either one or two lines of lyrics. Please choose one. I might be good just to copy normal's combo style Ok I'll do my best

Timing section mod:
00:54:62 - I don't see the purpose of this timing section, can you please remove it
01:04:10 - ^
Done

01:35:90 - y is there a noninherited timing section here?
01:53:62 - same as normal
Same as normal

Nazi mod:
02:03:70 (4) - fix spacing (since this is spacing problem is visible while playing) Ok

The hitsounds sound sort of random to me in this map
Same as normal...

Nice map. It needs some fine tuning though.
Star.
Thank you very much!

Now I'll need to check again all my hitsounds :3
Kytoxid
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[Normal]

00:36:34 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier?
00:47:08 (4,5,6) - This section is a bit more spaced out than the other sections, although it's relatively minor.
01:16:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:10:50 (1) - Extend by 1/4?

[Hard]

00:26:71 (3) - Shorten by 1/4.
01:04:10 (2,4) - Move back by 1/12 each.
02:04:95 (4) - Make this slider a bit more symmetrical?

Pretty nice overall, starred.
Krisom
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Kytoxid wrote:

[Normal]

00:36:34 (1) - Move 1/4 earlier? Ok
00:47:08 (4,5,6) - This section is a bit more spaced out than the other sections, although it's relatively minor. Yeah, I'll just leave it like that for now, unless someone says that it may confuse gameplay...
01:16:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ I did change these ones a little bit
02:10:50 (1) - Extend by 1/4? Thanks

[Hard]

00:26:71 (3) - Shorten by 1/4. Ok
01:04:10 (2,4) - Move back by 1/12 each. OMG Thnaks, I could not get that one to sound right. I suppose that 01:45:42 (2,4) and 02:03:27 (2,4) should be moved too, since they are similar
02:04:95 (4) - Make this slider a bit more symmetrical? Ok, I hope it looks better like that...

Pretty nice overall, starred.
Thank you very much!
I't seems that this map has more 1/6th notes of what I though, I'll be recheking it all over again...
Jinxy
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Jinxy
[Normal]
00:32:29 (9) - New combo? A 11 combo seems too long for [Normal]
00:36:06 (2,3) - Move these 1/4 to the right.
00:52:24 (1) - 1/4 to the right, then shorten by 1/4, so it sends at the same spot.
02:20:27 (1) - LOLWUT. Keep this if you like.

[Hard]
Use 1/4 or 1/8 snap, not 1/6.
01:40:67 (1,2,3) - What. Weird snapping.
02:18:48 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Now THIS is awesome.
Krisom
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JInxyjem wrote:

[Normal]
00:32:29 (9) - New combo? A 11 combo seems too long for [Normal] ok, thank you
00:36:06 (2,3) - Move these 1/4 to the right. the idea is to follow the lyrics, I guess that if more ppl tell me that is confusing, I'll get rid of it
00:52:24 (1) - 1/4 to the right, then shorten by 1/4, so it sends at the same spot. Ok Thanks
02:20:27 (1) - LOLWUT. Keep this if you like. I will, thanks :3

[Hard]
Use 1/4 or 1/8 snap, not 1/6.
I'm sure that at places like 01:25:31's Kiai Time, 00:26:34 (1) and 01:04:10's (1,2,3,4) It needs 1/6, I'll keep them until more ppl tell me that's not like that.

01:40:67 (1,2,3) - What. Weird snapping. Fix'd, I guess, The idea is to make a heart with (1,2,3...,8)
02:18:48 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - Now THIS is awesome.:D Thanks
Thanks a lot :3
DJPop
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DJPop
BPM 215.00
Offset 1,037

Map whole song with 1/3 beat snap divisor.

These things are needed to fix first.
After that, call me in IRC to mod again ;)
Krisom
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DJPop wrote:

BPM 215.00
Offset 1,037

Map whole song with 1/3 beat snap divisor.

These things are needed to fix first.
After that, call me in IRC to mod again ;)
I had my doubts, but It sounds nice, please check it again whenever you can (I hope I get so see you again in #mod...)
kino77
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kino77
Since DJPOP said it shoulb be 1/3 divisor but I can't agree with him....
So I could't mod till you dicided which to choise...
Sorry for that...
DJPop
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DJPop
Hitsounds are too loud, set overall volume to 60 (6th line).
Another way is increase the song's volume.

PreviewTime: 54,618 (00:54:618)

~Normal~
00:42:61 (8) - new combo
01:01:59 (5) - ^
01:30:19 (1) - snap by using 1/3 divisor
01:42:61 (5) - new combo
01:50:29 (5) - snap by using 1/3 divisor
02:02:57 (2) - ^
02:10:52 (1) - ^

~Hard~
01:01:31 (8) - new combo
01:20:85 (1,2,3) - spacing is different
01:42:61 (7) - new combo


The maps look better in many ways, +Star
Krisom
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DJPop wrote:

Hitsounds are too loud, set overall volume to 60 (6th line). I think I fix'd that...
Another way is increase the song's volume.

~Normal~
00:42:61 (8) - new combo ok
01:01:59 (5) - ^ Huh? I think it's ok the way it is now
01:30:19 (1) - snap by using 1/3 divisor ok
01:42:61 (5) - new combo As before, this one follows (1,2,3,4), so I think it's ok
01:50:29 (5) - snap by using 1/3 divisor ok
02:02:57 (2) - ^ Dunno where to snap this one... ...I think I fix'd it
02:10:52 (1) - ^ ok

~Hard~

01:20:85 (1,2,3) - spacing is different Fix'd
01:01:31 (8) - new combo This one follows (1,2,3,4...7) combo perfectly, I don't think it'll look that good as a new combo...
01:42:61 (7) - new combo ^


The maps look better in many ways, +Star
Thanks for the mod and the star, but I'm still waiting for someone else to mod it before doing anything to it, as kino77 said thet he didn't think that the map should be done in 1/3, I'm just unsure on what to do now... :o

EDIT: Added an Insane diff. I hope it's ok...
Andrea
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Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Krisom
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osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point on all diff's. I'll have to read a faq becouse I dunno how to set it...

[Normal]

Snap correctly all circles.

00:37:59 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:55:73 (1) - ^ Not done :3
00:57:96 (1) - ^[/color] ^
01:22:52 (4) - Too close from (3). Done
01:32:29 (1) - This spinner is too hard for a normal. o_o Dunno what to do, I'll just make 01:30:24's longer, then...

[Hard]

00:33:40 (3) - Too close from (2). It sould be fix'd now I guess..

00:49:87 (7) - New combo.
00:50:15 (1) - Remove new combo.
Both done

01:44:29 (10) - Too close from (9). Done

01:54:61 (4) - New combo because this is a jump.
01:54:89 (1) - Remove new combo.
Done, I suppose it looks better now...

[Insane]

In some parts seems like "Hard". Look hard suggestions for this.
Yeah, I'm working on insane, I just grew confident on making that diff, but I'll fix some stuff looking at Hard suggestions. Thank you
Thanks for the star, much appreciated :3

(I should be studying chemistry x_x)
Yes_old
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Yes_old
insane : just a bunch of hitsound mods so i'll spoiler it.
SPOILER
volume sounds really loud for most of the song. you may want to lower it a little
i dunno if you wanted to leave it hitsoundless for the beginning but it kinda bothered me that there were none so i just wrote down what i think would sound nice. these are just suggestions Dx

00:10:24 (3) - clap?
00:10:80 (6) - ^
00:11:36 (9) - ^
00:11:54 (10) - whistle
00:11:92 (2) - ^
00:12:19 (4) - ^
00:12:47 (6) - clap
00:13:03 (9) - ^
00:14:71 (3) - ^
00:15:26 (6) - ^
00:15:73 (8) - whistle
00:15:82 (9) - clap
00:16:01 (10) - whistle
00:16:29 (11) - whistle
00:26:33 (1,2) - ^
00:26:71 (3) - ^ at end
00:27:17 (4) - ^
00:37:59 (6) - take whistle off
00:47:36 (5,6,7,8) - whistles?
00:56:01 (5) - clap
01:04:94 (5) - ^
01:05:50 (9) - ^
01:25:59 (2) - ^
01:25:87 (4) - finish at beginning? maybe if you lower volume
01:26:71 (2,4) - same thing
01:27:82 (2,4) - add clap at the end of 4, too?
01:46:80 (4) - clap
01:49:03 (1) - whistle
02:04:10 (1) - clap
02:04:66 (5) - ^
02:18:89 (3) - whistle
02:19:17 (2) - ^
02:19:36 (1) - ^
02:19:73 (2) - ^
02:19:92 (1) - ^

all other difficulties has similar things i mentioned for insane so i'm not going to go through all of it >_<

to be honest i don't like the way you placed a lot of your notes ;__; but i guess that can't be helped because of the way the song is :/

to set a preview point, go to a part in the song you'd like to make your preview point. i'd say maybe somewhere like 00:54:61. then go to timing >> set current position point as preview. then save. do this for all 3 difficulties.

pretty good for a first map. such a difficult song to map >__< star for you!
Krisom
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Yes wrote:

insane : just a bunch of hitsound mods so i'll spoiler it.

SPOILER
volume sounds really loud for most of the song. you may want to lower it a little I think It's fix'd now...
i dunno if you wanted to leave it hitsoundless for the beginning but it kinda bothered me that there were none so i just wrote down what i think would sound nice. these are just suggestions Dx
Sorry, hitsounds seem to be my hardest challenge in mapping, so I normally take time...

00:10:24 (3) - clap?
00:10:80 (6) - ^
00:11:36 (9) - ^
00:11:54 (10) - whistle
00:11:92 (2) - ^
00:12:19 (4) - ^
00:12:47 (6) - clap
00:13:03 (9) - ^
00:14:71 (3) - ^
00:15:26 (6) - ^
00:15:73 (8) - whistle
00:15:82 (9) - clap
00:16:01 (10) - whistle
00:16:29 (11) - whistle
00:26:33 (1,2) - ^
00:26:71 (3) - ^ at end
00:27:17 (4) - ^
00:37:59 (6) - take whistle off
00:47:36 (5,6,7,8) - whistles?
00:56:01 (5) - clap
01:04:94 (5) - ^
01:05:50 (9) - ^
01:25:59 (2) - ^
01:25:87 (4) - finish at beginning? maybe if you lower volume
01:26:71 (2,4) - same thing
01:27:82 (2,4) - add clap at the end of 4, too?
01:46:80 (4) - clap
01:49:03 (1) - whistle
02:04:10 (1) - clap
02:04:66 (5) - ^
02:18:89 (3) - whistle
02:19:17 (2) - ^
02:19:36 (1) - ^
02:19:73 (2) - ^
02:19:92 (1) - ^
Everything Done


all other difficulties has similar things i mentioned for insane so i'm not going to go through all of it >_<
Is that bad? I mean, to have similar things in other diffs <_<, I dunno so If someone can tell me, I'd be grateful... ...anyway, I'll check my other diffs as well, following this whenever I can.

to be honest i don't like the way you placed a lot of your notes ;__; but i guess that can't be helped because of the way the song is :/

Any suggestions? I don't want to look back at this map when I get older and say "I did this?!?!", that's why I'm trying to put a lot of effotr into it, even though I know I'll hate the way I mapped this in the future...

to set a preview point, go to a part in the song you'd like to make your preview point. i'd say maybe somewhere like 00:54:61. then go to timing >> set current position point as preview. then save. do this for all 3 difficulties.
Done, Thank you!

pretty good for a first map. such a difficult song to map >__< star for you!
Thanks, but I've recived a LOT of help, and yeah, I also think this one is difficult...

TYVM for the star! I'll be updating as soon as possible!
-EDIT: Updated-
Alice
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Alice
Normal
00:27:08 (2) - 1/3 later?
01:30:33 (1) - finish at 01:33:68?
01:40:66 (1) - I don't like the fact it restarts that close from the previouses notes. But no matter.. I guess..?
02:08:38 (//) - I really don't feel like it needs a break here. Add a spinner, I think.. Or remove the break.. Don't think it's useful..

Hard
00:05:50 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't really like new combo spams and I don't think they are useful here.. Maybe make this 1,2,3,4,5,6 or 1,2,3,1,2,3?
01:19:73 (6) - I don't know but this part seems a bit empty, and this note a bit out of place. Map a bit more here??
01:30:06 (x) - Note?
02:08:38 (//) - Just look at my normal suggestion ^^;

Star :3
Krisom
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Lokamp
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Lokamp
Normal
Sounds good ^^

Hard
Perfect even this ^^

Insane
01:29:22 (2,4) - whistle here
01:55:64 - new beat here and on 01:55:73
01:57:87 - new beat here and on 01:57:96
01:58:24 (6) - new beat (maybe next to the next yellow slider)

Star'd ^^
Krisom
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Lokamp wrote:

Normal
Sounds good ^^
Thanks!

Hard
Perfect even this ^^
Thanks!

Insane
01:29:22 (2,4) - whistle here
01:55:64 - new beat here and on 01:55:73
01:57:87 - new beat here and on 01:57:96
01:58:24 (6) - new beat (maybe next to the next yellow slider)
Done, everything, I really liked how the new beats fit in there

Star'd ^^
Thanks for the star and the mod ^^!
Luvdic
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Luvdic
All of these thing sare just suggestions...

Insane:
Theres something that bugs me here.... and are those circles placed 4 ticks after a circle like 00:01:54 (3,4) - Well... they just sound weird to me >_> (not all of them though... as well as probably not used to 1/6 snapping...)

00:07:73 - Add circle here with finish sound
00:18:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Add hitsounds here? Or nvm, i saw other combos without hitsounds, so im guessing it was intentional
01:25:87 (4,4,4) - Make those three sliders the same, just rotated. Will make it look better i believe >_>

Hard:

00:20:75 (8) - Add circle here
02:04:94 (4) - Move the slider higher to make it look more simetrical

Normal:

I guess its okay
Krisom
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ErufenRito wrote:

All of these thing are just suggestions...

Insane:
Theres something that bugs me here.... and are those circles placed 4 ticks after a circle like 00:01:54 (3,4) - Well... they just sound weird to me >_> (not all of them though... as well as probably not used to 1/6 snapping...)
That's intentional.

00:07:73 - Add circle here with finish sound I dunno :S
00:18:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Add hitsounds here? Or nvm, i saw other combos without hitsounds, so im guessing it was intentional It was, but that may be just becuz my lack of ability on hitsounding
01:25:87 (4,4,4) - Make those three sliders the same, just rotated. Will make it look better i believe >_> True, Thanks!

Hard:

00:20:75 (8) - Add circle here Would be too similar to Insane, but I'll think on this
02:04:94 (4) - Move the slider higher to make it look more simetrical Done, thanks

Normal:

I guess its okay
Thanks for the mod and the star!
Armin
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Armin
Please change the mp3 (download it down)
Change also the BG, it's too small >A<
[Normal]

01:02:153 remove the whistle in the middle
01:22:525 Whistle
01:29:502 Clap at the end
02:07:176 Whistle
02:07:734 Whistle at the start

[Hard]

00:23:362 (1,2) Claps at the end
01:46:525 whistle

[Insane]

01:39:734 Clap

That's all for me. Starred. :D

Download: Projetc Diva's Miracle Paint.mp3
Krisom
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Armin wrote:

Please change the mp3 (download it down)
Change also the BG, it's too small >A<
[Normal]

01:02:153 remove the whistle in the middle
01:22:525 Whistle
01:29:502 Clap at the end
02:07:176 Whistle
02:07:734 Whistle at the start

[Hard]

00:23:362 (1,2) Claps at the end
01:46:525 whistle

[Insane]

01:39:734 Clap

That's all for me. Starred. :D
Done, thanks for the mp3, thanks for the mod and the star ^^
EDIT- Forgot to xhange the background, next time I fullsubmit I will
ouranhshc
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Krisom
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ouranhshc wrote:

heres my mod, i hope you find it helpful

Normal
00:27:083(2) - move 1 tick to the right Done
00:45:409(2,3) - spacing I think it's ok now
00:50:618(2) - move right to white tick Sure?
01:49:595(3) - center this between (1,2) Done

Insane
00:13:316 - can you make this look prettier I guess it's better now
01:00:757(8,9,10,11,12) - is this supposed to be a heart Yup, I dunno how to make it prettier...

Thanks for the mod and the star ^^
Zekira
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Zekira
[General]
Maybe reduce the hitsound volume a bit?

[Normal]
00:18:089 (1,2,3,4,5) - I sort of think this sounds weird...
00:27:008 (2) - 1/3 later?
00:27:082 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I sort of think this sounds weird...
Krisom
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Mismagius
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Mismagius
Normal
00:19:045 (2,3,4,5) - 1/2 earlier
00:25:059 (3) - center
00:34:043 (3) - move to the 'center line' (in spacing terms, not timing)
01:18:033 (6) - new combo
01:19:017 (9) - spacing, btw silence slider end
02:20:029 (1) - move to the center?

Hard
00:57:096 (8,1) - spacing made me cry :(
02:02:015 (2,3) - ^
02:07:073 (2,3) - ^

Insane
01:00:075 (8) - new combo

Great map, have a star(ite, olololol) <3
Krisom
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Blue Dragon wrote:

Normal
00:19:045 (2,3,4,5) - 1/2 earlier :S I still like it as it is...
00:25:059 (3) - center Done
00:34:043 (3) - move to the 'center line' (in spacing terms, not timing)Done
01:18:033 (6) - new comboDone
01:19:017 (9) - spacing Done, btw silence slider end :S Not done
02:20:029 (1) - move to the center? The idea is to make it EXPLOOODE when miku points up

Hard
00:57:096 (8,1) - spacing made me cry :( It's partially fix'd, as 00:59:036 (1,2,3...,10) are supposed to make that heart-like shape. I just modified the sliders
02:02:015 (2,3) - ^
02:07:073 (2,3) - ^
Huh? That's the same spacing I've used for 1 1/3 - 3 1/3 notes the wole song. yeah, it's not distance snapped, but it's the same during the whole song, look at 00:01:059 or 00:08:029, by example. That changes in Insane diff.

Insane
01:00:075 (8) - new combo That's intentional

Great map, have a star(ite, olololol) <3
Yay! An star(ite, olololol)! Thanks for looking at it ^^!
Azure_Kite
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Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
so kiyewt!

No problems found :)

[Hard]
00:31:017 (4) - Copy (5) and use the curve slider as (4) as well?
00:52:038 (1) - Extend by 1/3
01:19:073 (6) - Move forward 1/3
01:20:029 (8) - Move back 1/3
02:03:073 (4) - Start the kiai section here?

[Insane]
01:20:001 (3) - Shorten by 1/3
02:01:031 (1) - Not sure how rankable this is, Maybe you can make it easier to see the path of the slider?

Great beatmap! :D Starred
Krisom
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Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Normal]
so kiyewt!

No problems found :)

[Hard]
00:31:017 (4) - Copy (5) and use the curve slider as (4) as well? Done
00:52:038 (1) - Extend by 1/3 Thanks, it sounds much better now
01:19:073 (6) - Move forward 1/3 Not done.
01:20:029 (8) - Move back 1/3 Done
02:03:073 (4) - Start the kiai section here?Partially done, I made Kiai start in 02:04:010 (1)

[Insane]
01:20:001 (3) - Shorten by 1/3 Done
02:01:031 (1) - Not sure how rankable this is, Maybe you can make it easier to see the path of the slider?I hope it looks better the way it's now


Great beatmap! :D Starred
Thanks for the mod and the star ^^!
naruti
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naruti
to be honoust i dont like hatsune maps
but you maped it nicely

[norma]
SPOILER
decrease circle size by 1 see why @ hard
rest is fine

[hard]
SPOILER
To make the map look cute use bigger notes
decrease size of the notes by 2
01:04:057 (4) - To close to 3
01:45:087 (4) - ^
02:07:092 (3) - To close to 2 (it looks like a 1/4 not its actualy a 1/2
funny end XD

[insane]
SPOILER
fine to me
but decrease the size of the notes by 1
or even 2 to make it look cute
but increase the overal difficulty if you decrease the size notes by 2
star 4 yu
Krisom
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naruti wrote:

to be honoust i dont like hatsune maps
but you maped it nicely

[norma]
SPOILER
decrease circle size by 1 see why @ hard
Done, and increased HP drain rate by one
rest is fine

[hard]
SPOILER
To make the map look cute use bigger notes
decrease size of the notes by 2 Just decreased it by one. Increased Overall diff by one.
01:04:057 (4) - To close to 3 Fix'd
01:45:087 (4) - ^ Fix'd
02:07:092 (3) - To close to 2 (it looks like a 1/4 not its actualy a 1/2 Fix'd
funny end XD

[insane]
SPOILER
fine to me
but decrease the size of the notes by 1 Not done :s
or even 2 to make it look cute
but increase the overal difficulty if you decrease the size notes by 2
star 4 yu
Thanks for the mod and the star ^^
Diasios
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Krisom
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xxheroxx wrote:

[Hard]

00:56:085 (6) - New combo Done

[Insane]

00:52:038 (1) - end at 00:53:967Done

00:52:038 (1) - remove finish Not done :S


Starred~
Thank you ^^!
Takuma
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I'm so sorry, I didn't realize you posted this already. Have a bubble, though!
Derekku
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I kept waiting to mod this until it hit Pending, but it seems to have snuck past me right into a bubble o-o;

[Normal]
00:26:711 (1,2) - I'd make this one slider. I recommend avoiding single notes (at least earlier in the song) that are 1/4th or 1/3rd snapped since they're offbeats and can be tricky (for easier difficulties). For Hard+ they're fair game imo.
00:33:409 (2,3) - Perhaps make 2 the single note and then start a slider at where (2) ended extending to (3)?
00:36:106 (2,3) - Make into a slider
00:36:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd prefer that these were parallel with each other, but it doesn't matter.
00:45:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance spacing is weird. 1/2 overlap, then there's a gap between 2/3 and 3/4, and 4/5 overlap. Fix please :p
00:50:711 (2) - Sounds awkward. I'd make a slider on the white tick before 2 to match the vocals, and then maybe add a slider at 00:51:269 for two white ticks because I don't like the silence before the slider =x
01:18:897 (3,4) - I usually don't like when circles are clustered on top of sliders like this. If you moved (3) above the slider, it'd look better.
02:20:292 (1) - I think it'd look better in the center, but again, it doesn't matter.

[Hard]
00:52:385 (1) - Again, I'm not crazy about the empty space before this. Hmm...
01:02:990 (11) - Too close to (10).
02:02:339 (3) - Too close to (2) and then make (4,5) farther away too. (I think a couple other notes had wrong spacing towards the end too, so you might want to double check with distance snap)
02:08:199 (1) - Would sound/look better as a spinner fading out into silence, and then having 02:10:525 (1) - start 4 white ticks later. (Possibly have the second spinner silenced too) [And also for Normal/Insane do the same thing]

[Insane]
00:52:385 (1) - Maybe add three notes to match the vocals before this? (and in Hard too)

The map seems pretty solid for me (especially since there's all those triplet offbeats which don't seem to be wrong), but there's just a few details that should be ironed out before this gets ranked. :P
Krisom
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Derekku Chan wrote:

I kept waiting to mod this until it hit Pending, but it seems to have snuck past me right into a bubble o-o;

[Normal]
00:26:711 (1,2) - I'd make this one slider. I recommend avoiding single notes (at least earlier in the song) that are 1/4th or 1/3rd snapped since they're offbeats and can be tricky (for easier difficulties). For Hard+ they're fair game imo. Done
00:33:409 (2,3) - Perhaps make 2 the single note and then start a slider at where (2) ended extending to (3)? :S I don't like it that way
00:36:106 (2,3) - Make into a slider Done
00:36:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd prefer that these were parallel with each other, but it doesn't matter. I think it should be looking better right now
00:45:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance spacing is weird. 1/2 overlap, then there's a gap between 2/3 and 3/4, and 4/5 overlap. Fix please :pHuh? I dont remember doing that. Fix'd, thanks for pointing that out
00:50:711 (2) - Sounds awkward. I'd make a slider on the white tick before 2 to match the vocals, and then maybe add a slider at 00:51:269 for two white ticks because I don't like the silence before the slider =x Partially done, I just added a slider before 2 and made it end at a 1/3
01:18:897 (3,4) - I usually don't like when circles are clustered on top of sliders like this. If you moved (3) above the slider, it'd look better. Not donem then :P
02:20:292 (1) - I think it'd look better in the center, but again, it doesn't matter. I like it over there, it's just the place miku points up in the video, so it feels like if she was popping it XD

[Hard]
00:52:385 (1) - Again, I'm not crazy about the empty space before this. Hmm... Break Time now
01:02:990 (11) - Too close to (10). It should be fix'd now
02:02:339 (3) - Too close to (2) and then make (4,5) farther away too. (I think a couple other notes had wrong spacing towards the end too, so you might want to double check with distance snap) I think it should be fix'd now. Using Distance snap on these 1/3rd notes on hard wont work for me since it's not the distance I want for this diff.
02:08:199 (1) - Would sound/look better as a spinner fading out into silence, and then having 02:10:525 (1) - start 4 white ticks later. (Possibly have the second spinner silenced too) [And also for Normal/Insane do the same thing] :S I like the way it's now. I'd change it if someone else suggests the same.

[Insane]
00:52:385 (1) - Maybe add three notes to match the vocals before this? (and in Hard too)I like this (for Hard too)

The map seems pretty solid for me (especially since there's all those triplet offbeats which don't seem to be wrong), but there's just a few details that should be ironed out before this gets ranked. :P
Thank you, but now, a general question. Is it legal to make changes after getting a bubble?
EDIT: It looks like it is, but the bubble transforms into a star <_<.
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Krisom wrote:

I like it over there, it's just the place miku points up in the video, so it feels like if she was popping it XD
Ah, okay. I usually don't download the video for maps, but that's a cute idea~

Krisom wrote:

EDIT: It looks like it is, but the bubble transforms into a star <_<.
Yep. Months ago, the bubble would stay, and sometimes maps would get ranked after the mapper changed something. The bubble automatically popping works a lot better. Now, you can either way until another BAT checks out the map or ask the one that bubbled it to rebubble.
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