I'm so sorry, I didn't realize you posted this already. Have a bubble, though!
Thank you, but now, a general question. Is it legal to make changes after getting a bubble?Derekku Chan wrote:
I kept waiting to mod this until it hit Pending, but it seems to have snuck past me right into a bubble o-o;
[Normal]
00:26:711 (1,2) - I'd make this one slider. I recommend avoiding single notes (at least earlier in the song) that are 1/4th or 1/3rd snapped since they're offbeats and can be tricky (for easier difficulties). For Hard+ they're fair game imo. Done
00:33:409 (2,3) - Perhaps make 2 the single note and then start a slider at where (2) ended extending to (3)? :S I don't like it that way
00:36:106 (2,3) - Make into a slider Done
00:36:757 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd prefer that these were parallel with each other, but it doesn't matter. I think it should be looking better right now
00:45:130 (1,2,3,4,5) - Distance spacing is weird. 1/2 overlap, then there's a gap between 2/3 and 3/4, and 4/5 overlap. Fix please :pHuh? I dont remember doing that. Fix'd, thanks for pointing that out
00:50:711 (2) - Sounds awkward. I'd make a slider on the white tick before 2 to match the vocals, and then maybe add a slider at 00:51:269 for two white ticks because I don't like the silence before the slider =x Partially done, I just added a slider before 2 and made it end at a 1/3
01:18:897 (3,4) - I usually don't like when circles are clustered on top of sliders like this. If you moved (3) above the slider, it'd look better. Not donem then
02:20:292 (1) - I think it'd look better in the center, but again, it doesn't matter. I like it over there, it's just the place miku points up in the video, so it feels like if she was popping it XD
[Hard]
00:52:385 (1) - Again, I'm not crazy about the empty space before this. Hmm... Break Time now
01:02:990 (11) - Too close to (10). It should be fix'd now
02:02:339 (3) - Too close to (2) and then make (4,5) farther away too. (I think a couple other notes had wrong spacing towards the end too, so you might want to double check with distance snap) I think it should be fix'd now. Using Distance snap on these 1/3rd notes on hard wont work for me since it's not the distance I want for this diff.
02:08:199 (1) - Would sound/look better as a spinner fading out into silence, and then having 02:10:525 (1) - start 4 white ticks later. (Possibly have the second spinner silenced too) [And also for Normal/Insane do the same thing] :S I like the way it's now. I'd change it if someone else suggests the same.
[Insane]
00:52:385 (1) - Maybe add three notes to match the vocals before this? (and in Hard too)I like this (for Hard too)
The map seems pretty solid for me (especially since there's all those triplet offbeats which don't seem to be wrong), but there's just a few details that should be ironed out before this gets ranked.
Ah, okay. I usually don't download the video for maps, but that's a cute idea~Krisom wrote:
I like it over there, it's just the place miku points up in the video, so it feels like if she was popping it XD
Yep. Months ago, the bubble would stay, and sometimes maps would get ranked after the mapper changed something. The bubble automatically popping works a lot better. Now, you can either way until another BAT checks out the map or ask the one that bubbled it to rebubble.Krisom wrote:
EDIT: It looks like it is, but the bubble transforms into a star <_<.
Phew, I've been having my exams, so I had not been able to upload and check this map properly, but I'll be finishing them soon, so I'll be back (I hope). Thanks Kyto ^^!!"Kytoxid wrote:
What? minyeob says this needs more mods?!
Fine.
[General]
I thought the countdown sounded nicer at double-time.
Delete the .OSB file if you'd like; doesn't really matter that much.
Consider making an Easy.
[Normal]
01:12:019 (1) - Watch your spacing in this section. You start out with reduced spacing, go back to normal spacing (01:16:066 (1,2)), go to somewhere in between (01:20:085 (1,2)), and return (01:23:008 (1,2,3)), although the 1-2 is still between reduced and normal while 2-3 is reduced.
x_x Fi'x, everything should be normal spacing now.
01:39:026 (5) - Put this into the same pattern as 1-4 by aligning it with 3?
I think it's ok as it is...
02:02:061 (2) - I feel like this should be 2/3 in length, not 1/3. Try it out, I've attached a picture below.
[attachment=0:725e6]Example.PNG[/attachment:725e6]
o_o I don't feel it like that
02:07:073 (4) - Could be placed better for symmetry.
Done, thankies ^^!
[Hard]
00:08:075 (3) - Move it a bit to the left so that it's horizontally right in between 1,2?
I think it's ok now
01:28:085 (1,2,1,2) - Why is this one spaced differently?
It is?
01:45:040 (1,2,3,4) - Uneven.
There
02:02:061 (4) - Move it 1/3 earlier.
I still feel it right as it is
02:06:089 (1) - Move to the left a bit.
Done
02:08:019 (1) - Consider changing this to a slider to avoid the long period of nothing.
Nice idea, thanks.
[Insane]
00:09:013 - Probably not too necessary of a break.
Hmm, I'll consider removing it depending on future mods.
00:23:036 (1) - Stack right under 7?
Done
00:27:017 (4) - Might be better if it was right under 3's endpoint.
Done
00:50:099 - Not too great of a break here either.
Same as first one
01:07:017 - This break felt like it fell right in the middle of the line. Map it to 01:10:024?
Is it ok like that?
01:33:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Hitsounds are too quiet.
I'm not sure if they're ok now...
01:51:054 - Break feels weirdly placed again.
Mapped up to 01:51:045
02:02:061 (4) - Make it 1/3 earlier?
I think I'm getting you point now =_=
02:08:029 (1) - Remove finish?
Done :3
Okay, bye.
Bye =P
Thanks, I knew I was doing something wrong with that <_<.banvi wrote:
Hello.
I know this song and I like it!
Thismap is very nice!
star☆
Good luck!
Detailed instructions
You wouldn't have to care.
This song composer is "OSTER project."
"Oster" is all caps.
Because I love VOCALOID!!! XDKrisom wrote:
You seem to appear in every vocaloid song there is in pending XD!
Well, it's not like if there's a shortage on Miku songs, go type Miku in the beatmap search and you get like 4 pages of beatmaps XD! This will be most likely my last miku song in a long time, I only wanted this ungraved so that I don't look like a cruel man who does not finishes his beatmaps, so, yeah XD!banvi wrote:
Because I love VOCALOID!!! XDKrisom wrote:
You seem to appear in every vocaloid song there is in pending XD!
And I hope Vocaloid songs bacome ranked map.
Thank you ^^!Kecco wrote:
•Insane•
02:01:316 (1) - Fix this symmetrically.
Done
•Hard•
00:50:618 (4) - 4 grid down? (lv3) Nope, thanks ^^!
02:20:292 (1) - 2 grid down? (lv3) To stack with 02:18:525 (1)? nice idea. I moved the whole section up, though
Normal and Easy are good.
Nice map
Star
Garven wrote:
[General]
The first kiai time doesn't really fit at all to me. If someone else complains, I will remove it.
[Easy]
BPM .5/2x changes in an easy mode are frown upon. It'd just confuse the poor newbies. <_< It's a very slow section, I suppose it's not THAT bad, anyway, same as above, if someone else complaint, I'll remove
02:01:316 (7) - This slider kinda looks weird compared to the other sliders you use. I hope it looks better now :<
[Normal]
00:05:502 (1) - Remove new combo Done <3
00:20:292 (4) - I'd remove the clap. It's the only one for awhile with the rhythms you chose, heh. ok
00:45:688 (3) - Remove whistle from slider slide Done
01:45:409 (1) - ^ Done
02:03:269 (1) - ^ It's there in every diff D:!
[Hard]
00:05:502 (1) - Remove new combo Done :'( -purple star is purple-
[Insane]
00:05:502 (1) - Remove new combo (I don't see why you did this combo change at all >>) 00:05:502 (1) - Remove new combo Done :'( -purple star is purple-
Maps are fine, though the stark artistic style different between the background image and the video was kind of weird to me. I agree, but I just could not find something fitting fot the BG image :<
Thank you ^^!Leorda wrote:
Bueno!
[File]
Your bg (BG.jpg) need to resize to 1024x768 OR find the bg (current 960x768)
Done
[Easy]
If the BPM Adjustment is 0.5x, I think it would be confuse to begginer player....... Can you set it to 1x?
Uggg, I'm still not sure If I want to remove this during the slow section of the song, I'm stubborn, I know. I promise, next one I'll remove it >_<"!
00:05:781 (2) - Cut short this slider to red tick? But the vocal is end at red tick Well, In fact it ends in a purple tick... Changed XD
00:50:711 (2) - Replace into slider? Right ^^!
01:03:827 (1) - Move forward to white tick. Place at current tick it awful because it's sound AUWFUL (awful)to following vocal <_< did, did you try this? I think it sounds much worse in the next white tick
01:45:129 (1) - Move forward to white tick?? The previous I mention in 01:03:827 is awful, but now it's not auwful How is that even possible XD?
02:01:316 (7) - Make symetric? COnsidering that it's not near the center, it's not really important if it is syymmetryc or not IMO
[Normal]
00:02:153 (2,3,4,5) - I thought this is object is following vocal when I first test D:, you can change this object to following vocal/rhythm if you want What about your second test :/? If it was only a first-time mistake, I don't see why to change it
00:04:385 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:05:502 (1) - Remove new combo? Then, 00:08:013 (5) would be an 11, that'd be a long combo.
00:49:036 (8) - Move backward to blue tick and extend? But the vocal is start from blue tick Hmmm, Well, that's not supposed to follow the vocals, but the previous combo does, so I'll just add a NC at 00:47:920 (7)
01:14:711 (2) - I have an idea How about, remove repeating slider and add note at 01:15:734? Nah, I'll leave that for the Hardest diffs
01:20:013 ~ 01:20:711 (x) - Empty D: Oh well, I can live with that, it's not a huuge gap :3
02:10:525 (1) - Silence this spinner please ^^!
[Hard]
Flawless
00:05:781 (1) - Remove new combo? Same as in Normal
00:47:920 (6) - New combo? True, every diff has that one as a new combo
02:10:525 (1) - Silence this spinner please YupYup
[Insane]
/me don't like triplet stream
And the spacing is too little for Insane diff, IMO I may raise it if someone else mentions this ^^!
00:05:781 (1) - Remove new combo? Same as in Normal
00:19:176 (5) - New combo? :/
00:47:920 (1) - Repeating slider at purple tick (1/3) is awful~ I'm confused... This is at a white tick o_o
02:10:525 (1) - Silence this spinner please You're right
Good Jazz
STAR
<3 <3 <3Dusty wrote:
[Easy]
00:32:292 (1) - The previous two sliders were curvy, maybe make this slider curvy too? I know it's the cheapest excuse, but what what Miku does in the video in that slider, also, notice that this pattern is similar in every diff <3
01:03:269 (3,4,1) - maybe move upwards so they don't overlap with the slider art? true
01:12:478 (1,2) - I think it's better instead of using the same 0.8x snap during 0.5x sliders, use somewhere around 1.2x snap, it makes the spacing less confusing in the beginning parts before you realize "oh, this is a 0.5x slider section!"
It also makes 01:23:641 (1,2,1) seem less strange. Oh you <3!
01:44:571 (3,4,1) - move upwards like 01:03:269? true
02:02:711 (8,1,2,3) - move down so 8 isn't underneath the slider? Stacking beneath sliders is kind of confusing on the easier diffs, I think I also changed the slider-shape so that it does not overlaps (8).
[Normal]
00:02:060 (2,3) - I was expecting these two to be 1/3 beat earlier They do sound nice, but I don't want to start with 1/3 beats on the Normal diff at that point. Knowing me though, I know I'll end up modifying it <_<
00:05:502 (6,1) - unoverlap maybe? Done
01:30:246 (1) - I think this slider should be extended 6 beats on all diffs :< ...you, you mean the SPINNER right XD? How do you, what, I mean, I, you <_<, gaaah! I know it! it sounds much better <_<...
[Hard]
lol, you've gotten better at making beatmaps, so I kinda wish you'd have mapped this later so you can make something awesome here :p
I could remap everithyng just to make it look better, it's just that I don't have much confidence yet <_<...
And thank you ^^!
00:56:850 (1,2,3) - Make these open downwards I'll have to modify (3) so it fits in the center..., that, and moving the whole combo before it upwars. That way I won't mess with the distance snap
01:35:920 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe more up and left, and then make the next combo go more down and right? Left/rigth = yes, Up/down= no D:
02:02:153 (2,3,4,5) - tricky :p It is, read how much I've fought with those notes the entire time <_< I hate them
02:18:525 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - aah ._. IMO this part is actually easier on Insane because I don't go OMGWTF STACKS D: I'll unstack. Also, I'll space more Insane ones.
02:20:292 (1) - Ctrl+J it? It must end there D: (watch the video, cheap excuse again...)
[Insane]
Spacing seems fine.
lolKrisom wrote:
I love how you appear out of nowhere on every beatmap I submit ^^! I gotta do the same I guess <_<, the problem is that you're 10 times better than me, so I can't find anything wrong in your maps >_<"!
Thanks ^^!DJPop wrote:
~Easy~
02:08:292 (2) - silence all sliderticks Done
02:18:339 (1) - more fit with soft-hitfinish Done
~Normal~
00:52:106 (1) - start on 00:52:013 Done
01:02:153 (6) - new combo Right
01:43:455 (6) - ^ ^
01:55:362 (4) - whistle!? Same as hard
02:08:199 (1) - remove new combo Done
02:20:292 (1) - more fit with soft-hitfinish Done
~Hard~
00:42:618 (5) - new combo done
01:54:897 (5) - whistle!? removed (I suppose you were suggesting that <_<)
02:08:292 (1) - move 1/3 left Right
Already star.
I will stick to what I did with MikuMikuBacteria, so I'll keep it, but thanks ^^tmokb93 wrote:
[General]
Maybe Vocaloid2 can be the Source and OSTER Project could be included in the tags.
For me there's nothing to mod <3
The Kiai time is supposed to be the same as on your diffs (I probably messed that up while changing to S:C2 oops), and the same with the color scheme (and preview points, etc.)Krisom wrote:
The beginning of the second Kiai Looks weird =x. Maybe 01:35:920 was suposed to be a Kiai Time?
Also, the color scheme I used changed. Tell me if you want something fixed :3
I feel like If I'm fallin' in love with your diff name
Samaaaa ;_;Shinxyn wrote:
.... I'm hitting the notes early, maybe offset -14? (1023), I'm not too sure since I'm not too good at playing 1/3, but your offset sounds and feels a bit late to me
Also, Easy and Normal's ending could be better (... break before last note/spinner D:?)
As for Hard - 02:11:534 (1) - start on white tick? though its a spinner... no one will notice while playing...
... Could add Dusty's name in tags (though we can do that after ranking too)
=.= since I'm not too certain, I won't pop... what do you think?
I won't change the offset then. Thanks Derek.Derekku Chan wrote:
EDIT: Tested both of the harder diffs a couple of times each; I only went a few ms early/late throughout, so I'm pretty confident that the offset is perfect.
I love bubble pops!sama wrote:
Also, Easy and Normal's ending could be better (... break before last note/spinner D:?)
I modified normal, Easy will stay as it is...
As for Hard - 02:11:534 (1) - start on white tick? though its a spinner... no one will notice while playing... Yeah, but you're right, it should start on the white tick.
... Could add Dusty's name in tags (though we can do that after ranking too)Done