Fycho wrote:

Heya~!

[Mod Info]

1. Black: Suggestions
2. Bold: Importance.You might consider
3. Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[General]
how about rename Insane to Lunatic? It's touhou song.
kkk, forgot xD

[Insane]

1. 00:01:196 (4) –why not add whistle at sliderhead to follow the musice?It sounds better imo.It seems you added at 00:03:833 (4) –
2. 00:06:471 (4) -00:09:108 (4) -00:11:745 (4) –etc.these the same as above
   The sounds get too monotonous for me when there is a whistle on each hit. I prefer the sounds when we skip over these whistles.
   
3. 00:04:493 (2) –should add clap at sliderhead not whistle imo, since the beat in musice is the same as 00:03:998 and00:04:987 –
4. 00:25:097 (1) –same^
   I feel the whistle is more fitting since the clap at that hit is more low in pitch than the other two.
   
5. 00:25:592 (2) –adding a clap will be better to fit drums in music
   added a whistle
   
6. 00:26:086 (4) –sliderhead ^
   did a whistle
   
7. 01:00:372 (4) –It’s good to avoid the overlap by00:59:713 (2) –
   kkk
   
   
8. 00:58:724 (5) –how about using this rhythm?
   SPOILER

   
   , since there is no beat at00:58:888 – so it’s nice to make a jump with a blank. And also there is a triplet at 00:58:640 –
   I don't think the gap fits personally. I'd consider using a triplet instead on top of the 5, but I won't change it now.
   
9. 01:36:717 –adding a circle is also good, stream starting at 01:36:635 – to follow drums.
   I can't agree, I don't hear the stream starting until 01:36:800.
   
10. 01:37:294 (4) -–how about changing to two 1/4 sliders? Plays more smooth than 1/4 reverses
    It's a good thought but I'd like to keep the reverses for now since I feel they fit the music better and add contrast with 03:59:713 (1,2).
    
11. 01:39:932 (8) –miss a whistle at sliderhead?
12. 01:41:415 (5) -^
    fixed \o/
    
13. 01:46:195 –there is a clear drums, so it’s better to cut this to 1/2 rhythm. Also add a clap then.
    I think I'd like to leave the two sliders for now since I use this rhythm at all similar places throughout the kiais. I seems to fit with vocals alright.
    
14. 01:47:184 (2) – how about adding a clap? sound better for me
    I feel it stands out too much from the music.
    
15. 01:53:119 (4) – move to (452,280) to avoid the weird overlapping
    should be better now
    
16. 02:13:064 (7) – a suggestion, how about this?
    SPOILER

    
    . It plays more natural imo.
    alright I'll try it
    
17. 02:35:152 (3,4) –hard to hit, how about removing 02:35:317 (4) – and change 02:35:152 (3) – to reverse?
    I like the current pattern but maybe it is kind of troll. Let me try to play with it.
    
18. 02:53:943 (4) – miss a finish imo
    fixed
    
19. 03:19:493 (3) – why not add a whistle at sliderhead?
20. 03:24:767 (3) –^
    Same as beginning, I feel it blends better with the music this way.
    
21. 03:23:778 – hitsound volume is too low, can’t hear it when I play. I recommend you use 50%
    I wanted to drop the volume here to try and bring out the music more. I think it's audible, I'd like to leave it for now.
    
22. 03:27:075 (1) – drum clap and 03:27:570 (2,3) –drum finish will be better
    k
    
23. 03:34:822 (2,3) –avoid overlapping since03:34:328 (1,2) –this distance is large
    Was just how I envisioned the music here. It plays fine imo but I'll change if need be.
    
24. 03:51:471 (3) –miss a clap imo
    fixed ww
    
25. 03:54:107 (2) –adding a clap will be better
    fix!

[Hard]

1. 00:38:943 (6) –I suggest you use this,
   SPOILER

   
   , Silderend at vocal and spinner start at blue tick.
   alright
   
2. 02:37:129 (2) –whistle at sliderhead and clap at sliderend is better.
   fixed
   
3. 02:37:129 (2,3) –ctrl+g them? Rhythm good imo
   Imo the current rhythm follows the music best.
   
4. 03:51:470 (5) –clap at sliderhead since this is a “snare drum” in m
   fixed
   usic

Some hitsounds suggestion in Insane diff are the same as hard/normal/easy.

[Normal]

1. 01:03:338 (1) –miss a clap at sliderend
   ww
   
2. 01:19:162 (1) –shoud add finish not whistle at sliderhead since there is a crash in music
   done
   
3. 01:45:536 (1) –miss a clap at sliderend
   kkk
   
4. 02:27:734 (1) –add finish at sliderhead, this 02:33:009 (1) –is the same, due to the crash
   Imo the finish is too soft in the music.
   
5. 03:51:140 (4) –add clap at slideend since you missed it
   yesss

Some important clap should added at the 3rd kiai though you follow vocals at some 03:47:349 –and some other area. Other diffs ard the same.

[Easy]

1. 01:15:866 (3) –this looks a little weird for me.How about trying this?
   SPOILER

   
   I think I prefer the current placement since it's pretty unique and fits imo. ;_;

Good luck.

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

[Easy]

02:36:635 (2) - How do you feel about this as a flow alternative from the straight slider into the right-hand curve? (http://puu.sh/7bbnr.jpg). This way you are helping build up the flow for the change in direction of slider 1 of the next combo.
done

03:27:074 (1) - I felt you should try to reveal the tail of this slider a little more to prevent throwing beginners off. As you can see the tail of this slider is slightly overlapping the body to the point where the slider tick is being hidden slightly. Here's my alternative (http://puu.sh/7bbuN.jpg).
Here I prefer the shape of the slider now and how it fits in the pattern, and I think the player will know what to expect after 03:21:800 (1).

[Normal]

02:14:547 (1) - I feel you could aid flow a little more to start this section off by angling the slider a little more into the following slider by moving the head point to the right a little like so (http://puu.sh/7bczp.jpg).
I'm a bit on the fence for this one since I like the current angle because downward motion feels more natural for me and it fits better with the 3. Since it's a hold slider, I think flow isn't so much effected.

02:19:162 (5) - Similarly here, how do you feel about angling the slider so it is at a perfect right angle with the blanket of the slider before it? I feel it looks prettier and flows nicely too (http://puu.sh/7bcEl.jpg).
fixed!

02:21:800 (5) - I also felt that this slider could be moved down a touch so that its tail blankets slider 1 and also snugly blankets slider 2 a little more as well. I also felt that with my alternative, you should make it so slider 2 heads straight up in a perfect line like so (http://puu.sh/7bcJO.jpg).
I adjusted the blanket but I'd like to leave the angle on the 2 and I like the reach to the right on the 3 since it makes it more interesting imo.

03:19:822 (3) - How do you feel about angling this slider down a little for some good flow? (http://puu.sh/7bdeF.jpg).
kkk

04:34:987 (2) - Similar angle change so you aren't compacting and stifling these end sliders so they have a little more impact by themselves freestanding a little more (http://puu.sh/7bddo.jpg).
should be good now

[Hard]

00:03:833 (4,1) - First of all id like to point out that this is AMAZING and INVENTIVE spacing that goes perfectly with the deep drums in the background so any modder reading this post keep that in mind, listen out for the sounds of music.
thanks <3

00:43:888 (5) - I felt that if you implemented an outward curving slider at the bottom, you should really have an outward curving slider before it to compliment its movement so it doesn't feel out of place. Here's what I went with (http://puu.sh/7bdDc.jpg).
ok lets try

00:55:426 (1,2) - I really feel that this section flows out of the anti jump a little better if the two sliders were angled to the right a little more than they were before like this (http://puu.sh/7bdFZ.jpg).
I see the concern there but I think I'd like to leave it for now. To me the current placement encourages more circle flow from the 8-9.

01:26:580 (4) - I think I managed to get this repeat slider even more in line that it was previously (http://puu.sh/7bdLm.jpg).
fixed!

01:42:074 (1,2,3) - I feel you should stick to linear here, in my opinion moving the first note down a touch improves the whole triple to slider and helps with the continuity of the song (http://puu.sh/7bdPq.jpg). Plus there isn't any particular vocals here that warrant a unique part of the song in my opinion.
ok I made it linear

03:21:470 (3) - I felt this slider could even go nearly flat as part of the trio (http://puu.sh/7be8s.jpg).
unsure here, I think I prefer a bit of downward motion after the 3 onto the 1

[Lunatic]

I felt that OD8 would bring more diversity to the leaderboards and prompt hd hr players to improve their accuracy even further.
I just feel that 7 appeals to more players of all play levels. But idk.

01:08:448 (5) - Perhaps stack this note on preceding slider 4's head for neatness. On the plus side, thehe spacing seems more even if you include my alternative also (http://puu.sh/7beAg.jpg).
I prefer there not to be a jump between 4 and 5 here, so I'd like to leave it like this for now.

I WILL RECHECK THIS. Great mapset, loved each diff and good luck ranking!

koreapenguin wrote:

K.Penguin's Mod <3 (my mod is all suggestion)

• General

1. Disable widescreen support. It's for widescreen SB only. proof~
   fixed

Easy

1. seem good =w=b

Normal

1. 00:25:096 (2,3) - check distance xD
   fixed
   
2. 03:17:184 (1) - just suggestion this Drum sampleset whistle how about? or soft whistle xD
   I did soft finish
   
3. 03:34:987 - how about this rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371567
   I want the rhythm to be the same as the ones before it ^^

Hard

1. 02:50:811 (3) - add clap slider head ?
   ok
   
2. 03:17:184 (1) - same reason normal
   yep
   
3. 04:32:348 (5) - unsnap is here! check ai mod xD
   fixed D:

Insane

1. aw.... nothing >w<

this already ranked xD

GL >w< and star ~★