1. Easy (3.2 stars, 240 notes)
2. Hard (4.77 stars, 454 notes)
3. Insane (4.94 stars, 583 notes)
4. pkmnyab's Normal (4.02 stars, 297 notes)

MY MOTIVATION >:O

Half wtf

1. Easy [100%] KK MODS NOW PLZ!
2. pkmnyab's Normal [Done] Mod this too :3
3. Hard [Done] PLEASE MOD!
4. Insane [Done] ^Mod this too please <3
   
   
   Just did some pretty big changes to improve flow lol
   More flow improvement - 20/02/2014
   ^ 27/02/2014
   Added some linear sliders n stuff 28/02/2014
   Improving rhythm super big changes so gunna need more mods xD 09/03/2014
   umm, TRIED to do some NC stuff, but truthfully, i had no idea what i was doing haha... ^^' 11/03/2014
   Changed up some ugly patterns on easy 21/03/2014
   23/03/2014 more flow stuff ._. (damn dis stuff is hard)
   Rearranged objects for first section of Insane and rearranged some jumps 04/04/2014
   Rearranged objects for insane 05/04/2014
   Repositioned easy 08/04/2014

pkmnyab wrote:

[Hard]
00:11:375 (2) - slider is shaped a bit weird, I think you should make it simple here, like this: fixd, made a blanket

SPOILER

I'm not sure how to explain it, but it feels smoother this way compared to the original slider.

00:22:961 (1) - distance snap this, it will throw people off since it is so close to (5). If you distance snap (1) you will also have to snap (2), etc
fixd (sorta), mostly at least

01:55:651 (1) - distance snap this as well, it's a bit too close to (5) fixd

02:08:892 - why not have the (1) slider like this so it matches the vocal? (it's moved earlier and extended, the shape and orientation of the slider is up to you) : k done

SPOILER

02:16:134 - I think it would sound better if you extended the (1) slider by one tick. This also applies to 02:17:789. This is what it would look like:

SPOILER

im not really a fan of having things start or end in the off beats

As for the storyboard, I'm not sure where you got the picture of the butterfly from but IF there is one with the wings open, you can switch between the two pictures when the butterfly changes directions, which makes it look like it's flapping (sort of). hmm that's a good idea i'll do so if i get the pictures

[Insane]
00:26:272 (1) - (3) and (1) are too close together considering the spacing before. Maybe try to space it out, kind of like this? : hmm i think this part is fine, the difference isnt too big

SPOILER

01:57:720 (7) - spacing of the jumps is inconsistent. Pro tip: while holding alt, you can change the distance snap multiplier in the top right corner. This is useful in your case for the jumps, just set the multiplier somewhere near 2.0 x and rearrange the circles. alright i will do this

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I didn't find anything else wrong with the map. Overall it feels right when you play it, the song is also nice
Since you are open for guest difficulties, I guess I can do an easy version sometime this week. If you need any other mods don't hesitate to ask

1. Useless stuff, but current BG is 1365x768, might want to fix it for sake of having it right
2. Set a preview point for all diffs
3. I'm pretty sure offset is really late.. I'm not a timing expert myself, but 2257 sounds much better for me (don't forget to resnap notes and timing sections)

1. 00:07:237 (1,2,3) - Aren't these overlapping too much?
2. 00:10:547 (1,2) - This almost-overlap looks pretty ugly to be honest
3. 00:49:030 (1,2) - Same as before, these overlaps are just ew
4. 00:51:099 (5,1) - Spacing plays pretty much awkward here, consider adding a note at 00:51:720
5. 01:11:582 (2) - Making this slider's curve like this would improve flow
6. 01:36:616 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit wrong
7. 01:47:789 (2) - Finish hitsound at the end?
8. 01:56:478 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ehm... pretty unpredictable and plays awkwardly
9. 02:08:065 (4,5) - Not a big fan of this jump, but I don't see how to fix it
10. 02:13:858 (4,1) - osu!'s spacing system when there's a slowdown is a bit fucked up. In this case, it becomes really confusing. I'd move (1) and its pattern further away from the previous note
11. 02:42:409 (4) - Move to x200 y124 so it doesn't overlap with the previous note?
12. 02:45:099 (3) - I'm pretty sure this isn't allowed, especially in a Hard diff. For a simple fix, ctrl+g this slider.
13. 03:01:030 (1,1) - No need for 2 new combos here
14. 03:07:651 (1) - Maybe use a normal-hitnormal in this spinner?

1. 00:33:705 (3,4,5) - Flow doesn't really make much sense here. I'd stack (4,5), but dunno about you
2. 00:36:188 (3,4) - Spacing between these seems a bit too short... Ctrl+G'ing (3) would solve the problem and flow would be nice as well
3. 00:48:601 (4) - Finish hitsound?
4. 01:44:481 (7) - Move to x104 y212 so they're blanketing?
5. 01:50:895 (3,4) - Not a big fan of the flow here, but dunno how it'd work
6. 02:17:378 (4,1) - why such a big jump? o_o you didn't really do this anywhere else in the diff

Blue Dragon wrote:

[General]

1. Useless stuff, but current BG is 1365x768, might want to fix it for sake of having it right hmm what dimensions should the image be? fixed... i think
2. Set a preview point for all diffs done
3. I'm pretty sure offset is really late.. I'm not a timing expert myself, but 2257 sounds much better for me (don't forget to resnap notes and timing sections) hmm that seems better thanks!

[Hard]

1. 00:07:237 (1,2,3) - Aren't these overlapping too much? k spaced out a bit
2. 00:10:547 (1,2) - This almost-overlap looks pretty ugly to be honest oops i think i forgot to update map after the previous mod, owo
3. 00:49:030 (1,2) - Same as before, these overlaps are just ew ^
4. 00:51:099 (5,1) - Spacing plays pretty much awkward here, consider adding a note at 00:51:720 fixd
5. 01:11:582 (2) - Making this slider's curve like this would improve flow fixd
6. 01:36:616 (1,2) - Spacing is a bit wrong fixd
7. 01:47:789 (2) - Finish hitsound at the end? fixd
8. 01:56:478 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Ehm... pretty unpredictable and plays awkwardly changed a little
9. 02:08:065 (4,5) - Not a big fan of this jump, but I don't see how to fix it hmm, how bout now?
10. 02:13:858 (4,1) - osu!'s spacing system when there's a slowdown is a bit fucked up. In this case, it becomes really confusing. I'd move (1) and its pattern further away from the previous note fixd
11. 02:42:409 (4) - Move to x200 y124 so it doesn't overlap with the previous note? fixd
12. 02:45:099 (3) - I'm pretty sure this isn't allowed, especially in a Hard diff. For a simple fix, ctrl+g this slider. fixd, ty for suggestion
13. 03:01:030 (1,1) - No need for 2 new combos here fixd
14. 03:07:651 (1) - Maybe use a normal-hitnormal in this spinner?

done.. i think

[Insane]

1. 00:33:705 (3,4,5) - Flow doesn't really make much sense here. I'd stack (4,5), but dunno about you k did that
2. 00:36:188 (3,4) - Spacing between these seems a bit too short... Ctrl+G'ing (3) would solve the problem and flow would be nice as well k did that
3. 00:48:601 (4) - Finish hitsound? done
4. 01:44:481 (7) - Move to x104 y212 so they're blanketing? ^
5. 01:50:895 (3,4) - Not a big fan of the flow here, but dunno how it'd work changed it up a little
6. 02:17:378 (4,1) - why such a big jump? o_o you didn't really do this anywhere else in the diff

ok moved it down a bit

That's it, good luck!

Kibbleru wrote:

hmm what dimensions should the image be?

Mira-san wrote:

Sorry for the late mod! :<

Also you get a ticket for guessing where my name was based from (actually old IGN).

[Easy]
00:23:775 (3) - This isn't stacked to (4)'s end properly. can u explain? o-o nm got it
00:48:602 (3) - Fix this blanket, if possible. k
01:06:395 (2) - Move this to x:200 y:156 so it creates a smoother flow within the sliders. k
01:53:154 (1) - The position of this slider can cause confusion to other players, probably. Maybe try to put it above 01:51:499 (1) since there's still available space. k

[Normal]
01:21:722 (4) - Move this to y:215 so it's collinear with (3). k
01:36:602 (3) - Is it intended to be not aligned to (2)? If it's not then I suggest to move it to y:80. k
03:06:395 (2) - Not stacked properly to (3). i don't really get what you mean. should i stack (2) and (3)? nm got it

[Hard]
01:11:567 (2) - It seems that you're following vocals and the beat. If you're going to follow the vocals, change this to a 1/1 slider, if not, then keep the current one. i like the current 1
01:22:325 (2) - Fix this blanket. ok
01:58:946 (3,1,2) - Kinda weird how the distance between these three are different. Especially (3) and (1) lol. i c what u mean. ill try to do something about it
02:03:084 (4,5,6) - Make this one similar to this: 00:45:291 (1,2,3) ok

[Insane]
00:22:532 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of pattern is inconsistent. Try making this a trapezoid or something. There are similar inconsistencies within the map as well. k
00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a perfect pentagon. trying ><
00:56:463 (5) - This one isn't stacked properly. can u explain ><? nm got it
01:20:463 (2) - You could try making some of these into triples. >>suggestion only<< hmm triples won't really work here

[SB suggestions]

From 02:14:670 - 02:27:912: I suggest putting a dark BG when it's on this part, so it emphasizes the slowness.
From 02:27:912 - 02:41:050: I suggest putting a dark BG but LIGHTER from the previous one, this part is like when 'everything is going to be restored ' or something. (I hope you can get my point here lol).

ill test them out, ty
Good luck! Sorry for the late mod.

Autumn wrote:

Hi!
From my queue

[General]
Display epilepsy warning (Song setup-design-misc-toggles)

Easy is fine to me.

[pkmnyab's Normal]
some jumps like 00:56:464 (3) - are bit too far imo. fixd

[Hard]
00:32:257 (3) - Distance: http://puu.sh/6IqRi.jpg fixd
01:08:877 - Add a circle? Stack with 01:09:084 (1) - fixd
01:09:084 (1) - ^ ?
01:57:705 - Clap fixd

[Insane]
00:19:636 - Add a circle? There's a drum sound here. fixd
00:22:532 (1) - Too close to 00:22:119 (6) - move right a little fixd
02:11:774 (3) - Try Ctrl+G to get a better distance. fixd

GL~

Tsumetaku wrote:

awesome DECOOOOO

(　ﾟдﾟ)ノ☆

EDIT:
I wonder whether you seen my in game PMww so i stick it here too

drum for clap~
http://puu.sh/6DeBe.wav

No Dap wrote:

Hi M4M from modding Q~~

Very good song!! I love it <3

[General]
looking good

[Easy]
fixed all the nc and hitsound stuff
AR +1 OD+1
00:08:050 (1) - delete NC
00:08:878 (2) - NC
00:17:981 (5) - NC
00:20:050 (1) - NC
00:20:464 (2) - delete NC
00:22:947 (1) - delete clap
00:23:361 (2) - add clap
00:28:740 (5) - delete NC
00:29:154 (1) - NC
00:29:775 (3) - This sounds more fun im still a bit confused to where to put that at lol

SPOILER

00:46:947 (1) - delete NC
00:48:602 (7) - NC
00:49:430 (1) - NC
00:49:430 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - too many circles all of sudden!? consider substituting sliders k
00:54:809 (5) - delete NC
00:55:223 (1) - NC
01:02:257 (3) - NC
01:12:602 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles, and ugly flow. k
01:16:740 (2,3) - blanket properly
01:20:878 (3,4) - convert to slider k. i tried but the slider looks a bit weird lol
01:38:257 (6) - NC
01:39:499 (1) - delete NC
01:42:395 (7) - delete NC
01:42:809 (1) - NC
01:43:223 (3,1) blanket
01:47:775 (6) - stack this on 4 and move the rest accordingly.. k
01:55:637 (1,2) - blanket properly
02:01:016 (4) - delete NC
02:01:430 (1) - NC
02:07:223 (5) - NC
02:08:464 (1) - delete NC
02:27:912 (1,2) - blanket
02:29:154 (3,1) - blanket
02:34:947 (1,2) - blanket
02:44:464 (1,2) - blanket
02:46:947 (5,6) - you have stacked notes on easy and hidden notes too. i dont get what u mean here lol but i stacked it better
02:57:706 (1) - move these around so 02:57:706 (1) can stack on 02:55:637 (3) k

[Normal]
fixed everything here except the hidden notes; since osu automatically shifts them over when playing, i think they're fine
HP+1 AR+2 OD+1
00:06:395 (2,3) - blanket properly
00:08:050 (5,1) - why not fill in notes? ill do that later when i feel like it lol xD
00:18:395 (7) - no hidden note
00:22:119 (1) - remove curve, make it like the previous slider
00:29:154 (2,3,4) - unify rhythm like this one 00:32:050 (4,5) 00:36:188 (2,3) ~~ im not exactly sure what u mean here lol ewe
00:31:016 (2,3) - no hidden note
00:34:326 (2,3) - ^
00:53:154 (2) - its up in the sky and looks awkward :3 change 00:51:912 (1) so you can move it to somewhere else
00:55:844 (2,3) - spacing
00:56:671 (4,1) - they overlapped
00:57:498 (5,6) - spacing
00:59:154 (2,3) - spacing
01:08:464 (1,4) - overlapped
01:09:912 (4,1) - overlapped
01:11:567 (1,3,1) - overlapped. Blanket properly
01:12:395 (2,3) - spacing
01:39:912 (1) - delete NC
01:42:395 (7) - NC
01:43:223 (1) - delete NC
01:48:602 (2,3) - spacing
01:50:464 (6,7) - hidden note
01:51:706 (2,1) - fill in notes
01:58:947 (2,3) - spacing
02:06:809 (4,5) - spacing
02:09:499 (4,5) - spacing
02:14:671 (7) - add finish
02:34:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is a heck of a jump for normal diff fixd
02:41:775 (2,3) - spacing
02:43:430 (5,6) - spacing
02:45:085 (2,3) - spacing
02:49:844 (4,1) - blanket
02:51:499 (3,4) - spacing
02:53:982 (1,3) - overlapped
02:54:603 (2,3) - spacing
02:56:878 (5,6) - spacing
02:58:326 (1) - delete NC
02:58:326 (1,2) - spacing
02:59:153 (1) - NC
03:04:326 (1,2) - spacing

Sorry I have to finish up now... got something to do

[Hard]
HP+1 AR+1 k

[Insane]
HP+1 k

Hope my mod helped >~< thanks, it was a big help!

Good map and really good song!! good luck~~

Papcio wrote:

m4m here
[insane]
00:03:084 (3,4,5,6) - What about square? nah i like it how it is now
00:15:498 (5) - Spacinggg wow cant believe i didnt see this o-o
00:23:360 (1,2) - Make it so that 1 looks the part of the other. design changed
00:28:739 (1,2) - Blanket? good idea
00:50:257 (3) - This slider can be reverse of 1 and mirror-edge of 5 XD i dont quite understand :/
00:58:119 (4) - Blanket of 00:59:153 (1) ? i dont see a good way of making this working so no for now

I can't see more, it's perfect ;w; ty :3

[hard]
AR- ill change if more ppl tell me to
OD-
00:05:153 (4) - This slider can be less curve hmm k i agree
00:43:636 (1) - Spin this more kk
01:47:774 (2) - Blank this XD fixed? maybe?
01:58:946 (3) - Ugly :/ i tried to make it fit with 01:58:119 (1) ;-;
02:16:946 (2,3,4) - It isn't triangle nice catch
02:45:912 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's too hard to hard i think its ok tbh

Sorry for short mod, it's too high level of making to mod by me XD np ty for mod~

1. plz control Eazy star rating below 3 or near 3
2. spacing should be same in easy and normal diff. I’ll check it out
3. add source "Rabukarenda" (ラブカレンダー )
4. add "so18140621 Ryosuke "Dr.R" Sakai " in tags

1. plz reduce your SB load and it is very very high(over 5X) after 02:54:395 -

1. ar-1
2. 01:17:568 (3,4) - spcaing
3. 00:12:188 (1,2) - spacing
4. 00:27:912 (4,5) - spacing
5. 00:59:361 (2) - spacing
6. 01:15:085 - add circle? and clap at 01:13:430 (1,2) - slider's tail
7. move break time to 02:14:671 - ( just for perfect )

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

1. 00:10:532 (1,2) - why not keep the same rhythm as 00:07:222 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:33:291 (1,2) - this overlap looks bad
3. 00:27:912 (5) - remove the clap on the tail
4. 00:44:463 - add something here?
5. 00:47:774 - add something here?
6. 01:01:843 - lose a necessary object
7. 01:15:084 - ^
8. 03:07:636 (1) - turn down the spinner volume

1. 00:13:636 (6,1) - too close
2. 00:16:532 (2,4) - ctrl+G
3. 00:22:532 (1,3) - ctrl+G
4. 00:23:153 (4) - keep the same spacing plz, P:1X N:1.1X now
5. 00:29:774 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G
6. 00:40:532 - add something?
7. 01:10:325 (6,1) - ctrl+G make a flow
8. 01:17:774 (4,6) - ctrl+G and you may not put these two so close
9. 02:17:360 (4,1) - this jump a "bit" big 5X and 02:15:705 (4,1) - only 0.83X
10. 02:29:153 (4,5) - too close (it may disorder your map
11. 02:33:084 (3,4) - blanket better
12. 02:37:429 - I suggest put a hit point at long white tick (like this
    
    click

    
13. 02:39:291 (1) - use two circle plz, a slider is kinda confusing (try this
    
    click

    
14. 03:00:601 (8,9,1) - keep the same spacing

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~

[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing fixed
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

looked over the map and resnapped most objects.

pkmnyab wrote:

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~

[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing fixed
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

looked over the map and resnapped most objects.

Thanks for the mod!

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

Hi M4M from my queue~
sry for late~
[General]

1. plz control Eazy star rating below 3 or near 3 i think its pretty close to 3 .-. not quite sure >< uhg i hate osu's star system
2. spacing should be same in easy and normal diff. I’ll check it out
3. add source "Rabukarenda" (ラブカレンダー ) should only do this if the source made this song famous or came from it
4. add "so18140621 Ryosuke "Dr.R" Sakai " in tags

k
[SB]

1. plz reduce your SB load and it is very very high(over 5X) after 02:54:395 -

explain this a bit more pls? like how and what is a SB load lol Edit: it doesnt get over 5x o-o? Edit Edit: took out SB
[Easy]

1. ar-1 k
2. 01:17:568 (3,4) - spcaing k
3. 00:12:188 (1,2) - spacing k
4. 00:27:912 (4,5) - spacing k
5. 00:59:361 (2) - spacing k
6. 01:15:085 - add circle? and clap at 01:13:430 (1,2) - slider's tail k
7. move break time to 02:14:671 - ( just for perfect )

k
[Normal]

1. 00:31:637 (3,4) - spacing
2. 00:18:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:25:430 (1,2,3) - ^ and etc
4. different spacing may make new player confused, keep your distance open as you map easy and normal diff

[Hard]

1. 00:10:532 (1,2) - why not keep the same rhythm as 00:07:222 (1,2,3,4) - i like some variety
2. 00:33:291 (1,2) - this overlap looks bad hmm k i tried to fix
3. 00:27:912 (5) - remove the clap on the tail k
4. 00:44:463 - add something here? doesn't fit music
5. 00:47:774 - add something here? k
6. 01:01:843 - lose a necessary object k
7. 01:15:084 - ^ k
8. 03:07:636 (1) - turn down the spinner volume

did i do it right?
[Insane]

1. 00:13:636 (6,1) - too close k
2. 00:16:532 (2,4) - ctrl+G k
3. 00:22:532 (1,3) - ctrl+G k
4. 00:23:153 (4) - keep the same spacing plz, P:1X N:1.1X now k
5. 00:29:774 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G k
6. 00:40:532 - add something? k
7. 01:10:325 (6,1) - ctrl+G make a flow k
8. 01:17:774 (4,6) - ctrl+G and you may not put these two so close k
9. 02:17:360 (4,1) - this jump a "bit" big 5X and 02:15:705 (4,1) - only 0.83X k
10. 02:29:153 (4,5) - too close (it may disorder your map k
11. 02:33:084 (3,4) - blanket better k
12. 02:37:429 - I suggest put a hit point at long white tick (like this k
    
    click

    
13. 02:39:291 (1) - use two circle plz, a slider is kinda confusing (try this i like the slider, fits better with vocals
    
    click

    
14. 03:00:601 (8,9,1) - keep the same spacing

k
that's all, good luck

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, M4M mod o̿ ̭ o̿

[Easy]
00:12:188 (1) - The tail would look neater if it was stacked under 00:10:119 (2) - properly. k did my best
00:29:568 (2,3) - Just make them both the same slider shape. i like the current one '^'
00:36:188 (6) - NC instead of 00:36:188 (1) - hmm ok? i think? can u recheck this? cuz you have 2 of the same timestamps
00:40:326 (4,2) - Very confusing overlap, this is can obviously be easily seen with the slow AR. Please try to remodel objects so they're less crowded together. made overlap look better
00:49:430 (1) - Remove NC? k
01:20:878 (3) - Forgot to add a clap on the tail here. oh ty
02:07:223 (1) - Change clap on the tail to finish. kk

[Hard]
00:10:532 (1,2) - I know it isn't necessary to use DS in hard diffs 24/7, but these objects are just appearing too close to each other! alright fixed, got a lot of people complaining about this part anyways lol
00:28:739 (1) - Finish on the head. damn i need to pay attention to my hitsounds more lol. all of them are fixed
00:29:567 (3,4) - Also looks to close to each other. i spaced them out a bit, not completely fixed though nevermind fixed
00:40:325 (4,5) - Should be stacked the same way as 00:38:670 (1,2) - k done
00:55:222 (2) - Finish on the head. And first object appearing in Kai time should also be a NC fixed
02:01:429 (1) - Forgot to add a finish here.
02:08:050 (4) - ^ On the head.

[Insane]
00:02:256 (1) - Finish on the head
00:55:222 (2) - ^

Colorful SB you made there Hope this helps!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]
00:55:223 (1) - Finish on the head. removed clap and added finish
00:47:775 (4,5) - Wrong Distance snap fixed
01:08:464 (1) - Finish on the head.removed clap and added finish
02:54:603 (2,3) - Wrong Distance snapfixed
01:34:947 - Sounds very unfinished, I feel as though the objects itself comes in too late after. Try adding a note here with a finish hotsound. fixed, note with hitsound added
01:48:188 (1) - Add finish?removed clap and added finish
02:01:430 (1) - ^ On the headremoved clap and added finish
02:08:050 (1) - ^removed clap and added finish
02:27:912 (1) - ^removed clap and added finish
02:41:154 (1) - ^removed clap and added finish
02:53:981 - 02:56:671 New rhythm suggestion:
changed this in both kiai times

1. Airtist: DECO*27 feat. 悠木碧　 (according to ranked maps of DECO*27)
   http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0 ... co*27&m=-1
2. remove "Display epilepsy warning" because you don't use Storyboading
3. remove your name "Kibbleru" from tags
4. tags suggetion:
   LOVE CALENDER
5. outro is too long. I recommend to cut and adjust mp3 file

1. 00:42:809 (2,3) - I recommend to make blanket for smoother cursor moving
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:740 (2) - how about stack on 00:51:085 (4) - ?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:20:050 (1,2) - for easy, stack of DS 0.0x should be avoided
4. 01:34:947 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:44:878 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 02:06:395 (3,4) - ^
7. 02:14:257 (7,1) - ^
8. 02:32:878 (1,2) - make DS 1.0x
9. 02:46:947 (5,6) - same as 01:20:050 (1,2) -
10. 03:04:326 (3,4,5,6) - ^

1. I suggest to increase DS more than 1.0x in SV 1.0x part
2. 00:07:222 (1) - I prefer the same curved slider as 00:07:636 (2,3,4) -
3. 01:45:912 (2) - x:317 y:259
4. 01:47:567- add a note
5. 02:12:601 (3) - I prefer the following
   
6. 02:59:981 (6,7,8) - blanket?
   
   SPOILER

   

1. i recommend to increase SV more than hard diff
2. 00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - it looks awkward. how about this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   132,76,53567,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   236,180,53774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   213,34,53981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   146,166,54188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   277,98,54394,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:42:394 (1,2) - I prefer to exchange positions
4. 02:53:981 (5) - end at 02:54:188

1. 00:38:671 (3,4) - symmetric sliders are better
2. 00:41:981- add a note and finish
3. 00:55:637- shift finish to 00:55:223
4. 00:56:464 (3) - delete?
5. 01:10:119- shift clap to 01:09:706
6. 01:51:912- why no hitsound at this position?
7. 02:05:568 (2) - x:429 y:66 (stack correctly)
8. 02:07:223 (6) - I prefer this
   
9. 02:28:326- clap
10. 02:54:809- ^
11. 02:55:637- ^
12. 02:56:464- ^
13. 03:06:395 (2) - x:308 y:126

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]

1. Airtist: DECO*27 feat. 悠木碧　 (according to ranked maps of DECO*27) k added
   http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?l=1&r=0 ... co*27&m=-1
2. remove "Display epilepsy warning" because you don't use Storyboading oops forgot to get rid of it after i removed my SB
3. remove your name "Kibbleru" from tags k
4. tags suggetion:
   LOVE CALENDER added
5. outro is too long. I recommend to cut and adjust mp3 file

ill look into it
[Easy]

1. 00:42:809 (2,3) - I recommend to make blanket for smoother cursor moving k
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:52:740 (2) - how about stack on 00:51:085 (4) - ? k
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:20:050 (1,2) - for easy, stack of DS 0.0x should be avoided fixed all
4. 01:34:947 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:44:878 (1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 02:06:395 (3,4) - ^
7. 02:14:257 (7,1) - ^
8. 02:32:878 (1,2) - make DS 1.0x nice catch
9. 02:46:947 (5,6) - same as 01:20:050 (1,2) - not sure what you mean by same but i unstacked them
10. 03:04:326 (3,4,5,6) - ^

[Hard]

1. I suggest to increase DS more than 1.0x in SV 1.0x part ill look into it
2. 00:07:222 (1) - I prefer the same curved slider as 00:07:636 (2,3,4) - nah i like it like this
3. 01:45:912 (2) - x:317 y:259 nazi lol k
4. 01:47:567- add a note done
5. 02:12:601 (3) - I prefer the following changed but can you check if this is rankable?
   
6. 02:59:981 (6,7,8) - blanket? hm i'd agree too
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. i recommend to increase SV more than hard diff well it is increased a bit, just through the timing points cuz i was dumb to use the actual slider velocity changer :/
2. 00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - it looks awkward. how about this? umm thats what i have?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   132,76,53567,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   236,180,53774,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   213,34,53981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   146,166,54188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   277,98,54394,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:42:394 (1,2) - I prefer to exchange positions hmm i agree
4. 02:53:981 (5) - end at 02:54:188 k done

I like this song ty for modding!
good choice!
~Good Luck~

RandomEffect wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]

1. 00:38:671 (3,4) - symmetric sliders are better fixed
2. 00:41:981- add a note and finish fixed
3. 00:55:637- shift finish to 00:55:223 fixed
4. 00:56:464 (3) - delete? deleted
5. 01:10:119- shift clap to 01:09:706 fixed
6. 01:51:912- why no hitsound at this position? fixed
7. 02:05:568 (2) - x:429 y:66 (stack correctly) fixed
8. 02:07:223 (6) - I prefer this fixed
   
9. 02:28:326- clap all fixed
10. 02:54:809- ^
11. 02:55:637- ^
12. 02:56:464- ^
13. 03:06:395 (2) - x:308 y:126

stacked

Mako Sakata wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]
00:40:326 (5,1,2) - Try this rhythm? sound better imo fixed
00:41:981 - Add circle there? you missed the cymbal sound fixed
00:55:223 (1) - The finish sound should be on slider head, not on the tail and change finish sound on slider tail with clap instead fixed
01:08:878 (2) - Add clap on head fixed
01:09:706 (3) - Clap sund should be on slider head not on the tail fixed
01:10:533 (4) - Add clap on head fixed
01:21:706 (4) - Add finish fixed
01:48:809 (1) - NC? fixed
02:41:154 (1) - 02:44:257 (1) - 02:55:223 (3) - 02:56:050 (4) - Clap on tail fixed all
02:54:395 (2) - Add finish on head and add clap on tail fixed
02:55:533 - and 02:55:740 - Useless green lines, you can remove that fixed

This diff still needs extra work on hitsounding and rhythm imo

Mako Sakata wrote:

Hi M4M~

[General]
Remove Aoi Yuki from tags? It's already on artist name k
Video not played on pkmnyab's Normal fix that

fixed all unless else said

[Easy]
SV 1.0 on BPM 145 is pretty fast imo for an Easy i agree, i made this map when i didn't realize you could adjust sv through the actual timing panel lol
00:20:050 (1,2) - (1) is almost touch (2) slider body, maybe you can re-arrange that to avoid It
00:29:568 (3) - Maybe change into curve one? to match the next slider shape and make It more symetric
00:53:568 (3) - Add clap on head? I hear a drum sound there
01:20:878 (3) - That kind of slider is tricky for an Easy diff, maybe you can change that into something simple like curve
02:34:947 (1,2) - Almost touching each other, maybe you can re-arrange that
02:51:085 (1,2) - Move both to x:476 y:232 to make a perfect blanket for slider (2) and circle (4), like this

SPOILER

don't forget to re-arrange the rest of notes after that

Everything looks fine, except stars rating 3.5 for an Easy, I think you should re-consider about this diff would lowering SV lower the difficulty?

[pkmnyab's Normal]
00:40:326 (5,1,2) - Try this rhythm? sound better imo
00:41:981 - Add circle there? you missed the cymbal sound
00:55:223 (1) - The finish sound should be on slider head, not on the tail and change finish sound on slider tail with clap instead
01:08:878 (2) - Add clap on head
01:09:706 (3) - Clap sund should be on slider head not on the tail
01:10:533 (4) - Add clap on head
01:21:706 (4) - Add finish
01:48:809 (1) - NC?
02:41:154 (1) - 02:44:257 (1) - 02:55:223 (3) - 02:56:050 (4) - Clap on tail
02:54:395 (2) - Add finish on head and add clap on tail
02:55:533 - and 02:55:740 - Useless green lines, you can remove that

This diff still needs extra work on hitsounding and rhythm imo

[Hard]
Maybe you can you 1.1 or 1.2 Distance Spacing for default spacing and make sure each notes not touching each others hmm i went through the map and fixed the almost touching sliders
00:53:153 (5) - Add clap on tail then 00:53:774 (1) - Add clap then Add clap on head, because I hear drum sound that part
02:13:015 (1,2,3,4) - Add clap on them and 02:13:843 (5) - On head same reason as above
03:01:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe you can make the star shape better i tried :<

[Insane]
Maybe you can you 1.1 or 1.2 Distance Spacing for default spacing and make sure each notes not touching each others
00:53:360 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think you can make this star jump larger, since It's Insane ehh nah i think its fine
00:53:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add clap on them, I hear the drum sound there
01:34:946 (1) - Add finish on head
02:03:084 (6,7,8) - Maybe you can arrange It beter like this

SPOILER

i like mine

Sorry late, that's all

Kibbleru wrote:

Everything looks fine, except stars rating 3.5 for an Easy, I think you should re-consider about this diff would lowering SV lower the difficulty?

Mako Sakata wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

Everything looks fine, except stars rating 3.5 for an Easy, I think you should re-consider about this diff would lowering SV lower the difficulty?

I'm sure It will lowerng the difficulty

iNickel wrote:

[Normal]

00:41:981 - add a circle here (With a finish hitsound)! fixed from previous mod
01:34:947 (1) - Don't place this circle here please! fixed
00:56:464 (3) - Remove this circle and do it like this: http://puu.sh/70Pap.jpg fixed
00:30:395 (1) - Make a softer curve here, like this: http://puu.sh/70P4h.jpg fixed
00:45:292 (1) - Make a softer curve here, like this: http://puu.sh/70P7j.jpg fixed all
00:49:430 (1) - ^
01:10:533 (4) - ^
01:43:223 (3,4) - ^
01:45:706 (3) - ^
01:50:464 (5) - ^
01:56:464 (3) - ^
01:59:775 (3) - ^
02:04:327 (1) - ^
02:12:188 (4) - ^
02:34:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not recommended in a normal diff.
01:51:292 (6) - Fix the blanket, Like this: http://puu.sh/70Pfy.jpg fixed

* Don't do so many straight lines

iNickel wrote:

[General]

- You need an diff. with 3 stars or lower. Just set in easy HD and OD to 0 if you don't want to re-map it.
- You should map this to 03:34:119

[Easy]

01:03:499 (2,3,4,5) - Too many circles here!
02:03:085 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:45:292 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:44:878 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:13:430 (5,6,7,1) - ^
02:39:499 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:49:430 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:52:740 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:04:326 (3,4,5,6) - ^

HD - 0
OD - 0

[Normal]

00:41:981 - add a circle here (With a finish hitsound)!
01:34:947 (1) - Don't place this circle here please!
00:56:464 (3) - Remove this circle and do it like this: http://puu.sh/70Pap.jpg
00:30:395 (1) - Make a softer curve here, like this: http://puu.sh/70P4h.jpg
00:45:292 (1) - Make a softer curve here, like this: http://puu.sh/70P7j.jpg
00:49:430 (1) - ^
01:10:533 (4) - ^
01:43:223 (3,4) - ^
01:45:706 (3) - ^
01:50:464 (5) - ^
01:56:464 (3) - ^
01:59:775 (3) - ^
02:04:327 (1) - ^
02:12:188 (4) - ^
02:34:533 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Not recommended in a normal diff.
01:51:292 (6) - Fix the blanket, Like this: http://puu.sh/70Pfy.jpg

* Don't do so many straight lines

[Hard]

Looks very good, but the flow is a bit bad..

That's all!

Good Luck

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

[pkmnyab's Normal]
Not sure if it's just my laptop but wheres the video? hmm still need to fix this xD
Also there are a number of straight sliders that make this look bland. maybe curve some of them or tilt to add more spice to the map made some straight sliders curved, might make some more curved later
Another is try to make your hitsounds consistent. There are some parts that turn me off in terms of sound will look into this
00:08:878 (6) - move to x:180 y:224 done
00:09:085 - the break here is pretty useless and unneeded. you should map it to keep the unexpected stop from happening mapped
01:15:912 (3,4) - how about making 3 the same shape as 4. 3 has a sharp curve and plays weirdly to me. maybe delete it and copy 4 onto 3 and space it accordingly so that it plays smoothly fixed

Kibbleru wrote:

TY for mod, fixed all but i couldn't get the music to work :/
also did some big changes to improve flow

RatedNC17 wrote:

Hello~

[Easy]
Nice job keeping hitsounds consistent
00:07:637 (4) - move this to x:308 y:100 to create a proper blanket if thats what you were going for uhmm that doesn't help?
00:15:499 (1) - move this one grid down to align with 3 without messing up with distance k
00:15:912 (2) - move 1 grid to right or at x:152 y:148 to make a nicer blanket. looked off a bit to the left ^
00:54:395 (4,5) - how about adding a clap to 4 and removing the clap for 5. At 4 there is still one more beat that can justify putting a clap here and on 5 the vocalist is the only thing here being heard so adding a silent part or taking out clap sounds better and doesn't sound too loud.hmm k
01:10:119 (1) - ctrl +J and H then move it to x:164 y:116 then ctrl +G then space the next notes (2,3) accordingly. k
01:51:499 (1) - move your 2nd slider point two grids to the left to curve a bit more to make the blanket neater k
02:51:085 (1,2) - how about tilting the sliders to the right or left and align 2 with it. it seems pretty bland here i like, fixed

[pkmnyab's Normal]
Not sure if it's just my laptop but wheres the video?
Also there are a number of straight sliders that make this look bland. maybe curve some of them or tilt to add more spice to the map
Another is try to make your hitsounds consistent. There are some parts that turn me off in terms of sound
00:08:878 (6) - move to x:180 y:224
00:09:085 - the break here is pretty useless and unneeded. you should map it to keep the unexpected stop from happening
01:15:912 (3,4) - how about making 3 the same shape as 4. 3 has a sharp curve and plays weirdly to me. maybe delete it and copy 4 onto 3 and space it accordingly so that it plays smoothly

[Hard]
Can't really say anything since stuff has been pointed out by previous modders but i agree with iNickel and flow could use some work but diff overall is actually pretty great and nicely made

[Insane]
01:09:912 (5,6,7) - i don't think a jump this huge is necessary here. perhaps make them a bit closer made it closer
02:47:153 (5,6) - another big jump here isn't necessary either. changed design a bit for better flow

Flow could use just a small bit of work here as well but overall really great. I like how you kept the hitsounds consistent throughout the whole map yah i already tried to fix it once q-q

iNickel wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

TY for mod, fixed all but i couldn't get the music to work :/
also did some big changes to improve flow

Try this MP3 (This should work 100%): http://puu.sh/72aln.zip

I really like this song, but the quality is terrible

iNickel wrote:

- You need an diff. with 3 stars or lower. Just set in easy HD and OD to 0 if you don't want to re-map it.

No Dap wrote:

I just saw this



Congratzzzzzz

No Dap wrote:

I just saw this



Congratzzzzzz

1. Why it the Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty 0? At least increase them by 1 or 2 to give novice players some challenge.
2. 00:02:260 (1) - Move this slider at 00:02:208. This slider is currently off-beat.
3. 00:20:415 (2) - You can improve flow by re-angling this slider. You can either make this slider curved or straight. Here are two examples:
   
   Example #1

   
   Example #2

   
   

   428,208,20415,2,0,P|444:156|440:104,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:44:415 (5,1,2) - This spacing is inconsistent. You going to have to re-arrange these notes somehow. You can try moving 00:45:657 (1) at 28|348 and 00:46:484 (2) at 228|328.
5. 00:45:243 (6) - Add a new combo here. You don't want your combos too much for easier difficulties. Try to keep the combo count 6 or less.
6. 00:46:898 (3) - Flow feels weird on this slider. Try re-arranging this slider like this:
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   216,228,46898,2,0,B|300:248|300:248|312:296|348:328|408:332,1,225

7. 00:54:346 (4) - I'll probably remove this clap since there is a instrumental pause in the music with only the vocals playing. If suggested, you can also remove the clap at 02:14:209 (5).
8. 01:52:691 (2) - Spacing is slightly off. Move this note at 112|100 to fix the spacing.

1. Try increasing the overall difficulty a bit (preferably to 4). OD2 is just too easy for a Normal difficulty. Normal difficulty should typically have a OD and HP Drain range of 3 - 5.
2. 00:53:519 (1,1) - the spinner appears too suddenly for a novice player to react. I recommend changing this somehow.
3. 01:11:312 (1,2) - These notes are not perfectly stacked. Try again. Also, the notes at 02:06:760 (4,5,6) and 02:40:277 (4,1) are not perfectly stacked as well.
4. 01:56:415 (3,4) - You have inconsistent spacing between these notes. You can try re-arranging the slider like this:
   
   Image

   
5. 02:50:622 (5,1) - You for got to add claps on these notes. For the slider, add a clap at the end of the slider and delete the clap at the start. Do the same thing for 02:51:864 (3) as well.

1. 00:40:898 (6,7) - The spacing between these notes is awkward and it just makes these notes confusing. You can try moving this slider at 420|84 and blanket this slider with 00:41:933 (1). Here is an example:
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   420,84,41312,2,0,P|448:104|464:136,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:43:588 (1,2,3) - The way you arrange these notes is pretty awkward imo. I would try re-arranging the rhythm like this (I would also fix the spacing as well):
   
   Image (Time Frame)

   
3. 00:47:933 (5) - I guess you can fix this spacing as well, unless you like it that way.
4. 00:57:243 (2,3,4) - Same suggestion as above: "I guess you can fix this spacing as well, unless you like it that way."
5. 01:39:450 (2) - Another awkward spacing issue. Try replacing this slider with 2 hit circles (stacking the first circle with 01:39:036 and moving the second circle at 292|16. Here is an example:
   
   Image

   
6. 01:50:209 (2) - Is the drum-sampleset on the head of this slider intentional? If not, please remove the drum-sampleset.
7. 02:12:553 (3,1) - These notes are confusing to read. Why not just delete the note at 02:12:967 (1) and add a reverse on slider 3? o.o
8. 02:13:174 (4,5,6,7) - In addition to the last suggestion, please consider stacking 4 with 5 and 6 with the head of 02:13:795 (7).

1. 00:17:105 (7) - The end of this slider is off-grid (325|-4). Please move this slider down.You should also fix these following sliders as well: ]01:02:622 (3) - 02:48:553 (2) - 02:50:208 (6).
2. 00:33:657 (3) - Careful, this slider is almost off-grid, but passable. Just a precaution.

BeatofIke wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]

1. Try increasing the overall difficulty a bit (preferably to 4). OD2 is just too easy for a Normal difficulty. Normal difficulty should typically have a OD and HP Drain range of 3 - 5. increased OD to 4
2. 00:53:519 (1,1) - the spinner appears too suddenly for a novice player to react. I recommend changing this somehow. removed note before spinner to give more time for players to react
3. 01:11:312 (1,2) - These notes are not perfectly stacked. Try again. Also, the notes at 02:06:760 (4,5,6) and 02:40:277 (4,1) are not perfectly stacked as well. fixed
4. 01:56:415 (3,4) - You have inconsistent spacing between these notes. You can try re-arranging the slider like this: fixed
   
   Image

   
5. 02:50:622 (5,1) - You for got to add claps on these notes. For the slider, add a clap at the end of the slider and delete the clap at the start. Do the same thing for 02:51:864 (3) as well. fixed

BeatofIke wrote:

No Dap wrote:

I just saw this



Congratzzzzzz

No Dap you stalker! o.o Anyways, mod request via modding queue. Here's what I found! Enjoy!
[General]

Thx for modding! fixed everything unless else said

[Easy]

1. Why it the Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty 0? At least increase them by 1 or 2 to give novice players some challenge. bleh problem right now is my easy is 3.5 stars .-. meh fixed
2. 00:02:260 (1) - Move this slider at 00:02:208. This slider is currently off-beat. oops forgot to snap this when i changed the offset
3. 00:20:415 (2) - You can improve flow by re-angling this slider. You can either make this slider curved or straight. Here are two examples:
   
   Example #1

   
   Example #2

   
   

   428,208,20415,2,0,P|444:156|440:104,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:44:415 (5,1,2) - This spacing is inconsistent. You going to have to re-arrange these notes somehow. You can try moving 00:45:657 (1) at 28|348 and 00:46:484 (2) at 228|328.
5. 00:45:243 (6) - Add a new combo here. You don't want your combos too much for easier difficulties. Try to keep the combo count 6 or less.
6. 00:46:898 (3) - Flow feels weird on this slider. Try re-arranging this slider like this:
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   216,228,46898,2,0,B|300:248|300:248|312:296|348:328|408:332,1,225

7. 00:54:346 (4) - I'll probably remove this clap since there is a instrumental pause in the music with only the vocals playing. If suggested, you can also remove the clap at 02:14:209 (5).
8. 01:52:691 (2) - Spacing is slightly off. Move this note at 112|100 to fix the spacing.

[Hard]

1. 00:40:898 (6,7) - The spacing between these notes is awkward and it just makes these notes confusing. You can try moving this slider at 420|84 and blanket this slider with 00:41:933 (1). Here is an example:
   
   Image and Code

   
   

   420,84,41312,2,0,P|448:104|464:136,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:43:588 (1,2,3) - The way you arrange these notes is pretty awkward imo. I would try re-arranging the rhythm like this (I would also fix the spacing as well):
   
   Image (Time Frame)

   
3. 00:47:933 (5) - I guess you can fix this spacing as well, unless you like it that way. i kinda like this one, but will change if any1 else mentions it
4. 00:57:243 (2,3,4) - Same suggestion as above: "I guess you can fix this spacing as well, unless you like it that way." fixed this one
5. 01:39:450 (2) - Another awkward spacing issue. Try replacing this slider with 2 hit circles (stacking the first circle with 01:39:036 and moving the second circle at 292|16. Here is an example:
   
   Image

   
6. 01:50:209 (2) - Is the drum-sampleset on the head of this slider intentional? If not, please remove the drum-sampleset. oops o-o how did that get there
7. 02:12:553 (3,1) - These notes are confusing to read. Why not just delete the note at 02:12:967 (1) and add a reverse on slider 3? o.o
8. 02:13:174 (4,5,6,7) - In addition to the last suggestion, please consider stacking 4 with 5 and 6 with the head of 02:13:795 (7).

I'll stop from here. Please get more mods for this difficulty.
[Insane]

1. 00:17:105 (7) - The end of this slider is off-grid (325|-4). Please move this slider down.You should also fix these following sliders as well: ]01:02:622 (3) - 02:48:553 (2) - 02:50:208 (6).
2. 00:33:657 (3) - Careful, this slider is almost off-grid, but passable. Just a precaution.

ahh fixed all including the warning
I'll stop from here. Please fix these sliders and get more mods on insane.


Not a bad map, but there there are some work to be done. I recommend a few more mods on Hard and Insane before I'm comfortable enough to star/bubble this map. Once you do that, you can call me back for a re-check. Good luck with this map!

pkmnyab wrote:

Just tried insane with DT. oh my god, so much fun~ well, insane by itself is lots of fun already because the flow is really good, but it's even more fun with DT. DT testplay below:

SPOILER

You should suggest playing insane on DT/NC in your description or something~

Muya wrote:

hi!
[Insane]
00:02:622 (2,3) - maybe better rhythm http://puu.sh/78yJo.jpg nah. i don't really like it and that would screw up my jumps
00:27:450 (2,3) - stack here? k
00:27:863 (3) - remove clap k
00:39:657 (4,5,6,7) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/78yU9.jpg i like
00:54:346 (5,6) - remove clap? I think no hitsounds is better because here is music has silenced. k will change the hitsounds
01:14:415 (6,7) - stack on 01:12:760 (2) - 's 2nd note? k
01:52:070 (7) - stack on 01:52:484 (1) - 's beginning k
01:57:863 (8) - move to x:512 y:76? http://puu.sh/78zaz.jpg maybe looks good changed it up a bit my own way
02:12:967 (1,2,4) - add clap? like a 00:53:519 - part
02:13:794 (5) - some as 00:54:346 (5,6) -
02:16:691 - need a some note here. fit a vocal There isn't really any vocal here its just her taking a breath Oo? and i don't really feel like mapping that tbh lol
02:18:346 - ^ ^
02:40:277 (1,2) - add clap to (1)'s beginning and remove clap from (2)

[Hard]
00:15:864 - add note here k
00:19:065 - ^ k
00:41:933 (1,2) - add finish to (1) and remove finish from (2) o-o. dafuq lol can't believe i didnt see this
00:42:967 (4,5) - add clap to (5) and remove clap from (4) ^
00:51:036 (5,1) - do not overlap? i think this one is fine
00:54:760 (4) - stack on 00:55:174 (1) - 'sbeginning and maybe clap isnt need (same as insane) but that would destroy distance snap fixed clap though nvm just realized it wasn't distance snapped in the beginning so fixed
01:21:657 (1) - end at 01:22:898 -
02:13:795 (7) - remove both clap , some as Insane
02:24:967 - why no circle here don't really hear anything in the music
02:28:691 (3,4) - probably no jump here is better, ah didn't even realize that lol ty

[pkmnyab's Normal]
00:27:864 (4) - remove clap
01:21:657 (4) - change to spinner? like a other's diffs
01:47:312 (2) - ^
01:56:002 (2,4) - do not overlap
02:12:967 (5) - hidding sliderarrow by 02:12:140 (4) - 's hitburst
02:40:277 (4,5) - switch clap
03:07:174 (4) - move to x:180 y:163

[Easy]
00:27:864 (4) - remove clap fixed all claps
00:45:243 - need a circle here nah trying to reduce difficulty lmao
01:18:346 (4) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/78Aji.jpg k
01:21:657 (1) - end at 01:22:898 -
01:47:726 (4) - remove clap
02:40:691 (4) - ^

good luck~

Easy

Hard

00:03:864 (1,2,3,4) - Theses are overlapped weirdly, can you fix it ?
00:07:174 (1,2) - ^
00:08:829 (1) - x:156 y:304 to make a better overlap with the previous slider (this makes a little jump, but allowed into an Hard diff)
00:51:036 (5,2) - Kinda ugly overlap
00:53:105 (5,1) - maybe do a blanket ?
00:57:450 (3,4) - Overlapping sucks here too. :'(
01:00:760 (1,2) - ^
01:06:760 (2,3,4) - ^
03:09:243 - Same problem about the end, the song doesn't end here

Insane

Lumina wrote:

Hello. From my modding queue

General : Offset 2200 sounds just better, you should fix it, also resnap your timings point and unherited after that. ok

Easy

UNRANKABLE! : Name it as Normal, since the Star Rating is 3 stars don't think it's necessary, unless a BAT tells me so, ill keep this
HP3, AR5, OD4 gotta keep the difficulty low lol

00:12:140 (1,3) - This overlap doesn't look good fixed this one
01:21:657 (1) - Maybe extend the spinner to the next big white tick ? Because it's a bit short for a spinner into a Normal diff uhh k
02:14:622 (1) - x:40 y:256 k
03:09:243 - The song doesn't ends here but here -> 03:34:071 - i know it does, however its just them replaying the same thing a bunch of times, and i don't really think its worth mapping that out. also, i feel like it'd get too long with only 1 break.

Hard

00:03:864 (1,2,3,4) - Theses are overlapped weirdly, can you fix it ? fixed a few of the overlaps, some i like though :/
00:07:174 (1,2) - ^
00:08:829 (1) - x:156 y:304 to make a better overlap with the previous slider (this makes a little jump, but allowed into an Hard diff) k
00:51:036 (5,2) - Kinda ugly overlap uh. i just made it like ^?
00:53:105 (5,1) - maybe do a blanket ? i would but DS and the area i have doesn't really let me make one
00:57:450 (3,4) - Overlapping sucks here too. :'(
01:00:760 (1,2) - ^
01:06:760 (2,3,4) - ^
03:09:243 - Same problem about the end, the song doesn't end here

Insane

AR9 ? hmm i don't think thats necessary since nothing is really clumped together much, and there's alot of jumps

00:24:553 (3,4) - Make theses symetrical like this : http://puu.sh/7aurw.jpg nah i like it like this how it is
02:09:657 (6,7) - ^ http://puu.sh/7auGB.jpg
02:23:725 (5,1) - Overlap ? k fixed
03:09:243 - Still ending here... the song continues hm..

Nice map, but work a bit on esthetics, it will help you.
Good luck. :3

Caffe_[Latte] wrote:

As M4M from my modding queue

[Insane]

00:08:406 (4) - ctrl g? fixed a different way

00:16:889 (6) - 108 l 100 k

00:29:717 (3) - 284 l 96 k

00:35:303 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/7aS8i.jpg would break spacing and flow

If you applided ^, 00:36:958 (4) - ctrl g

01:09:441 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/7aSd8.jpg k (kinda)

01:21:234 (4) - 220 232 nah

02:03:027 (6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/7aSoD.jpg (6) 476 l 212, (7) 306 l 278, (8) 337 l 97, (9) 372 l 196 not a bad idea but it flows better the way it is

02:11:096 (2) - reverse hmm good idea :3

02:15:648 (4) - 132 l 212 k

02:39:027 (7,1) - spacing bleh doesn't really matter imo, made it slightly closer since if i completely fix the spacing, it touches lol

02:51:855 (4) - ah... make more S? uhh k? Oo

[Hard]

00:07:165 (1,2,3,4) - match with 00:03:855 (1,2,3,4) no i want some variety

01:54:337 (4,5) - blanket perfectly. (maybe third point to 333 l 140) k

02:22:475 (3,4) - dosen't stacked o-o i couldve sworn it was stacked last time i checked. bleh fixed

02:47:096 (4) - reverse ? hmm good suggestion ty

02:48:337 (3,4) - blanket well nazi lol >< kk

I can't find any problem in Normal and Easy

Well... Really nice song and nice map
thx for mod (pink cuz its manly)
Good luck!

-Kirito wrote:

hi owo from my queues

forgive me for being late

[Easy]
00:48:131 (4) - x396 y232 move? here interval error appeared. nice catch fixed
03:09:234 - ~ 03:34:062 - why, this part circle is blank? the song is not over. rythm kinda gets boring after. also i don't really want the song to be too long

good difficulty

[Hard]
00:17:096 (5) - NC add k
01:54:337 (4) - ,01:54:751 (5) - crtl + g? change the flow of other? and (5) NC add but that kills the spacing and i think it flows okay
02:03:027 (4) - NC add k
02:07:993 (4) - ^ k
02:09:234 (1) - clap add i don't really hear a clap in the background Oo
02:08:820 (1) - NC remove k
02:09:648 (3) - NC add k
02:12:544 (3) - clap add ^
02:21:648 (2,3,4,5,2,4,6) - clap remove. i can not hear the sound of the clap. k
03:03:855 (2) - do you want to change the direction of the slide curve? if you change, will improve the flow. kk

01

03:09:234 - ~ 03:34:062 - Easy is the same

[Insane]
00:02:197 (1,2) - speed ​​difference. (2) add the new Combo, or at the same speed change k i had to put the offset back a bit but fixed
00:02:197 - Object isn't snapped kk
00:02:403 - Object's end is not snapped ^
00:17:096 (7) - NC add ~all nc and claps fixed~
01:55:165 (4) - clap add
01:56:820 (4) - ^
01:59:717 (1) - ^
02:21:234 (1) - clap remove. i can not hear the sound of the clap.
02:22:062 (2) - , 02:23:303 (4,6,1,3,1,3) - ^
02:40:682 (2) - crtl + g? good idea. fixed
02:58:889 (3) - duplicated on the scoreboard. hmm it might be ur skin but yah i moved it down

01

03:09:234 - ~ 03:34:062 - Easy is the same

good deco27 song

1. 00:00:544 - in the EASY diffu you have ''Omit first bar line'' remove it.
   
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2. Inconsistency in timing selections: in the pkmnyab's Normal the red line is at: 00:02:200 - when in all other diffs is on 00:00:544 - move the red line in the normal diffu like in the others diff.offset should be the same in all diffs.

1. Unsnapped greenlines:
   
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   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   00:02:415 - snap to 00:02:406
   00:02:829 - snap to 00:02:819
   00:05:726 - snap to 00:05:716
   00:06:140 - snap to 00:06:130
   00:10:691 - snap to 00:10:681
   00:11:105 - snap to 00:11:095
   00:12:346 - snap to 00:12:337
   00:12:760 - snap to 00:12:750
   00:16:484 - snap to 00:16:475
   00:16:947 - snap to 00:16:992
   00:40:533 - snap to 00:40:578
   00:40:898 - snap to 00:40:888
   00:47:105 - snap to 00:47:095
   00:47:519 - snap to 00:47:509
   01:51:657 - snap to 01:51:647
   01:52:071 - snap to 01:52:061
   02:07:381 - snap to 02:07:371
   02:07:795 - snap to 02:07:785
   02:08:002 - snap to 02:07:992
   03:02:829 - snap to 03:02:819
   03:03:243 - snap to 03:03:233
2. 00:26:200 (2) - try to do a blanket here:
   
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   288,88,26200,2,0,P|249:44|193:32,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 01:44:819 - don't miss this note here,is a strong sound here,so add a circle.
4. 02:27:855 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this pattern is so confusional for beginners T_T i explain you why:
   imo you should totally re-do this pattern.
   
   SPOILER

   the green line is for a good flow.
   red for a bad on and is confusional ò-ò beginners need a good flow
   
5. 02:36:544 (3,4,5) - here is again a confusional flow,try to fix it like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:39:440 - a strong sound is missing again.add a circle here.
7. 02:46:889 (5,6) - again a bad flow,what about to remove the slider and replace those with 2 circles like this:
   
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8. 02:49:371 - add something here
9. 03:09:233 - aww sad that you finished to map here i aspected a finish here : 03:34:061 - with a spinner with iiih c: nvm your choise

1. 00:07:993 (5,1,2) - this pattern should be not be used in normal diffu is a bit hard
2. 00:15:855 (2,3) - i would use just a reverse-slider here and not a circle+slider
3. 00:29:096 (2,3) - same ^
4. 00:33:648 (1) - something like: for a better flow?
   
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5. 00:48:337 (5,6) - use a slider here or unstack
6. 01:08:820 (2) - try something like this here: for a better flow
   
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7. 02:14:613 (7) - add a new combo here since the breack is starting it will look better

1. 00:02:197 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
2. 00:02:197 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

-Kirito wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]
- slider tick tate -1 ?
02:01:768 (1) - clap add I feel that it sounds better if it's no clap here since another clap comes before or comes right after
02:07:579 (6) - ^
02:08:406 (1) - ^
02:12:958 (5) - add a NC, and add clap to all slides done
02:14:200 (6) - clap remove. here also, there is no sound clap. fixed
03:09:234 - ~ 03:34:062 - Easy is the same

Lally wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:07:993 (5,1,2) - this pattern should be not be used in normal diffu is a bit hard I think this is fine as it is
2. 00:15:855 (2,3) - i would use just a reverse-slider here and not a circle+slider fixed
3. 00:29:096 (2,3) - same ^ fixed
4. 00:33:648 (1) - something like: for a better flow? fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:48:337 (5,6) - use a slider here or unstack added slider
6. 01:08:820 (2) - try something like this here: for a better flow
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:14:613 (7) - add a new combo here since the breack is starting it will look better fixed

spaminabox wrote:

Normal

00:29:095 (2) - Add clap I feel that adding a clap here would be too repetitive

00:07:993 (5,2) - Seems to be the only stack of this sort in the whole piece. Doesn't feel like it fits to me. fixed
00:40:268 (5,1,2,3) - Not a big fan of this off-beat rhythm in a normal. I would chart it like you did with 01:59:717 (3,4). hm the way it is now matches the music and beat very strongly, I think I forgot to change it at 01:59:717 (3,4)
01:08:406 (1,2) - Suddenly not following the vocal rhythm, or actually any discernable rhythm. I'd just go with following the vocals as you have done for this and the few sliders after. fixed
01:08:820 (2,3) - Not distance snapped. fixed when I listened to your previous suggestion
02:08:820 (2,3) - Suits being a slider more imo. fixed

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]
[notice]

1. 00:14:613 (1) - why nc here? remove it? fixed
2. 00:15:854 (2,3) - the placement may confuse players, the same to 00:29:095 (2,3) - remapped this to a slider
3. 00:34:889 (3,1) - blanket? fixed
4. 00:44:820 (4,2) - stack? properly stacked
5. 00:51:855 (1) - extend to 00:53:095 - ? changed
6. 01:08:820 (2,3) - x1.22 → x1.0 not sure what you mean by this
7. 01:47:303 (2,3) - make the distance close to x1.0 fixed
8. 02:12:958 (1) - the repeat is under 02:12:131 (4) - , that is hard to read and maybe unrankable fixed
9. 02:27:855 (1,2,3,4) - 02:31:165 (1,2,3,1,2) - please keep the same ds in mapping a normal diff fixed
10. 02:40:268 (4,1) - stack better? fixed
11. 03:13:371 (3,1) - avoid this kind of rhythm is better changed to slider
12. 03:19:164 (5,6) - x1.11 → x1.0

spaminabox wrote:

Here to return the M4M

Insane

00:28:682 (1) - Feels as if it needs a cymbal finish. oops forgot to add that :X
00:54:337 (5) - There is no snare on this beat in the song itself. Not too bothered if the clap stays though it fits either way.
01:20:820 (3) - Add a clap at the end of this as it's there in the drums. cant really hear it
02:13:786 (5) - Same observation as 00:54:337 (5).
03:33:233 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Add claps? hmm ill think about it, they kind of sound loud so im not sure

00:27:026 (1) - Ctrl-g feels more natural to me here. not to me lol xD
00:39:855 (5,6) - This jump feels big, I would just distance snap (6) to give something a little like this? i like it, fixed
01:09:441 (3,4,5) - Have the distance snap similar to the other one in this section? which one?
01:16:682 (1,2,3) - The distance between 1 and 2 feels too small whereas the jump between feels too big. fixed the longer jumps, 1 and 2 seems fine imo
01:52:062 (7,1) - Caught me off guard especially as there is a held note in the vocals. i see what you mean but i don't really have a good way to fix this
02:16:061 (1,2) - Could do with a little more of a jump here. hmm good catch, added
02:47:303 (5,6) - Moving (6) to 44,268 and then ctrl-g makes for a better time to jump than before. i don't really like the looks of that, i might change it to something else later if i think of something
03:00:957 (4,5,1) - The stack you did at 1:52:062 before would actually fit quite nicely here if you were to remove the (5). k
03:20:819 (3,1) - The break here is a little weird since there's then not much map left to go anyways. ill keep that in mind

I feel like I've done as much as I can before I start attempting to remap the whole map for you otherwise I could literally be here forever with no guarantees that you would even consider the changes I put forward at all... x.x Though feel free to pm me in-game if you want more input on just the jump patterns themselves I'm happy to go into it a little more if you want it.

Hard

00:54:131 (3) - Add clap k
03:33:233 (3,4) - Claps here? i will consider

00:02:819 (2,3) - Put slider first to match the synth rhythm better? i think its fine
00:06:130 (2,3) - ^
00:09:440 (2,3) - ^
00:39:441 (3) - Placing this under the slider makes it a difficult to read for my taste. ill change if more people say so, but i think its fine
00:57:234 (2) - ^
01:08:406 (6,1) - While it's nice that (5),(6) and (1) are all equal distance. I feel (1) ought to be distance snapped a little further away from (6). fixd
01:44:405 (3,4) - Make the rhythm like this? i like it, fixed
01:45:440 (1,2) - Similar thing here, I feel the hitcircle 1st fits better.
01:46:268 (3,4) - ^
03:20:819 (3,1) - Once again, break feels forced.

Normal

00:29:095 (2) - Add clap

00:07:993 (5,2) - Seems to be the only stack of this sort in the whole piece. Doesn't feel like it fits to me.
00:40:268 (5,1,2,3) - Not a big fan of this off-beat rhythm in a normal. I would chart it like you did with 01:59:717 (3,4).
01:08:406 (1,2) - Suddenly not following the vocal rhythm, or actually any discernable rhythm. I'd just go with following the vocals as you have done for this and the few sliders after.
01:08:820 (2,3) - Not distance snapped.
02:08:820 (2,3) - Suits being a slider more imo.

Easy

00:44:406 (5,1,2,3) - I reckon this little bit should be charted a little more, I would especially put one between (5) and (1) as it's the height of the phrase. k fixed all the issues here, basically, before, i had 4 circles in a row and some other mod told me not to have those in easy
01:02:200 (1,2,3) - Same as above, feels bare.
01:46:475 (3,4,1) - This sort of stack definitely is too hard for easy. Everything needs to be super clear when it comes to this level of map. fixed
02:01:786 (2,3,4,1) - Same as the others, mapping the weaker 2 beats in the bar can be fine but it seems silly when you have such a prominent downbeat in the voice.
02:10:475 (6,1) - Whilst the voice starts on the red, The strong beat between these 2 is still very prominent here. I'd go with this.
02:49:371 (2,3) - I think you've got the point by now. >_>
02:51:855 (2,3) - And here
03:02:613 (2,3,4,1) - Well
03:25:769 - Oh god something that isn't me thinking you've missed notes out! :p Same as the other diffs here.
03:33:233 (2) - Put a clap on the slider tick maybe?i will consider

Seeing as everyone seems to be doing it here's my lame attempt at the insane on dt/nc. Not the kinda map I generally like to dt cause my streaming is awful but the few bigger jumps which were in it were delicious to play. ^^

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of M4M

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.

[General]

1. None.

[Easy]

1. 00:15:441 (1,1) - stack together? not allowed to stack on easy
2. 00:33:234 (3) - nc? k
3. 00:36:544 (3,4) - nazi blanket lol. fixed xD
4. 00:44:406 (5,1,2,3) - the rhythm here may be a little confused to new players, imo I prefer to follow the vocal changed
5. 01:03:855 (2) - may touch the hp bar k fixed
6. 01:16:682 (2,3,4) - too hard in easy diff, and nc on 01:18:337 (4) - both fixed
7. 01:46:475 (3,1) - ^
8. 03:07:578 - make the kiai time end at the same time as your other diffs at 03:07:993 - k
9. 03:36:130 - change n:c1 to s:c1 kk
   ——
10. Some patterns in the easy may be hard to new players imo. Consider to simplify the rhythm to make it easier.

[pkmnyab's Normal]

1. 00:14:613 (1) - why nc here? remove it?
2. 00:15:854 (2,3) - the placement may confuse players, the same to 00:29:095 (2,3) -
3. 00:34:889 (3,1) - blanket?
4. 00:44:820 (4,2) - stack?
5. 00:51:855 (1) - extend to 00:53:095 - ?
6. 01:08:820 (2,3) - x1.22 → x1.0
7. 01:47:303 (2,3) - make the distance close to x1.0
8. 02:12:958 (1) - the repeat is under 02:12:131 (4) - , that is hard to read and maybe unrankable
9. 02:27:855 (1,2,3,4) - 02:31:165 (1,2,3,1,2) - please keep the same ds in mapping a normal diff
10. 02:40:268 (4,1) - stack better?
11. 03:13:371 (3,1) - avoid this kind of rhythm is better
12. 03:19:164 (5,6) - x1.11 → x1.0
    ——
13. Need some works. And normal diff should keep the same DS all the time.

[Hard]

1. 00:47:510 (4,5,6) - make the same ds? i like this '^'
2. 01:45:441 (1,2,3,4) - move 2 and 4 out is better when playing changed from other mod
3. 03:36:130 - change n:c1 to s:c1 k

[Insane]

1. 00:03:026 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern makes a better feeling in playing http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1385371 fixed differently
2. 00:40:062 (6,7) - let 6 blanket 7 to make a bigger jump between 00:40:475 (7,1) - ? changed design from another mod
3. 01:13:579 (4,5) - since the distance is big here, why not also make a jump between 01:13:993 (5,6) - ? fixed big spacing
4. 01:17:096 (2,3,4,5,6) - the jump may be too big here? fixed
5. 02:15:441 (3,4) - this part is quite so not make a jump like this, and the placement is different from 02:18:544 (2,3,4) - , right? k
6. 03:17:716 (1,3) - blanket? well it was a blanket but i guess it wasn't really good xD
7. 03:33:233 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I recommend to make the stream easier to go, 'kill a player at the end' is not a good idea, is it? kk
8. 03:36:130 - change n:c1 to s:c1 k
   ——
9. The connection of the patterns and jumps is not very smooth, I just point out some of them in my modding, but hard, and poor to point out all. Since you have no ranked maps? Not bad job, but can be better.

Good luck with your map <3.

Pandiar wrote:

[pkmnyab's Normal]
00:09:233 (2) - add clap done
00:29:509 (3) - add clap the end of the slider done
00:53:509 (1) - 00:55:165 (1) - It may be difficult for Easy and Normal players Hm I think this is fine, but maybe I will consider moving slider closer to center of spinner
01:08:406 (1) - add finish beginning of slider and add clap end of slider done
02:07:165 (6) - add clap the end of the slider done
02:07:993 (1) - ^
02:08:819 (2) - ^
02:37:785 (1) - it may be difficult for Easy and Normal players fixed
03:05:923 (1) - 03:07:578 (1) - ^
03:13:371 (3) - add clap the end of the slider done
03:15:854 (4) - remove clap the beginning of the slider done
03:16:268 (5) - remove clap the end of the slider done
03:17:095 (6) - add clap done

good luck ! XD

Pandiar wrote:

hi
from my Q

i hope it comes to your help!

[General]
uncheck widescreen support



[Insane]
00:03:027 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - how about this? fixed everything unless i said so

SPOILER

00:07:579 (2,3,4) - another pattern suggestion

SPOILER

00:08:820 (1,2) - try to change slider like 00:02:199 (1)
00:10:268 (7) - move x168 y46?
00:11:510 (3,4,5,1) - make triangle? like this

SPOILER

00:12:751 (2) - stack on 00:11:924 (5)?
00:12:751 (2,3,4,5,6) - i recommend DS1.0 of all notes
00:16:889 (6) - move x100 y108?
00:19:578(5) - remove? vocal can not hear and how about this?

SPOILER

00:33:027 (1) - start 00:32:613 (6)? that means stack
00:37:993 (7) - i think close from 00:37:579 (6)
00:57:648 (2,3) - ctrl + G
01:07:579 (6) - try to move in the vertical?
01:09:027 (2) - ctrl + g
01:52:475 (1) - add clap the end of the slider
01:55:165 (4) - stack on 01:55:579 (1) ?
02:05:303 (3) - move x268 y168,make blanket with 02:05:924 (5)
02:42:544 (4) - ctrl + g?
02:47:717 (7) - how about x300 y320?
02:54:337 (1,2) - the pattern like 01:08:406 (1) is better imo
03:00:958 (4) - stack on 03:01:372 (1)
03:01:165 (5) - remove
03:16:475 (6) - i think it is bad flow.move changed a bit



[Hard]
AR-1
01:39:027 (1) - remove nah i want to keep this one
01:39:440 (1) - add clap?
02:08:820 (3) - add clap the end of the slider
02:12:544 (3) - add clap the beginning of the slider


good luck ! XD

• 1. I actually looked at the same song 2 years ago, and that map had the title in caps. I did a quick search, and it seems that the proper title is indeed in all caps.
  2. Consider shortening the video to save space? Your mapping ends 03:09:243 - at the end of the last kiai here, leaving 30 extra seconds of video.
  3. 03:20:819 (3) - The break beginning here does not fit. The music continues to build up, indicating that you should map it, and the break leaves the ending too weak; additionally, pkmnyab mapped this part out. You don't want that inconsistency.
  [*]03:09:233 - There is a weird break here that should not exist. I specified in the Insane mod.
  
  [Hard]
  • 1. Perhaps it's just me, but I think HP6 might be a bit high for a low BPM Hard? I'd try HP5.
    2. 00:05:096 (4) - The difference of this slider from the rest turns that pattern from an interesting pattern into regular ugly partial overlaps.
    3. 00:05:510 (1) - The different spacing between 4 and this compared to the other sliders in 4's pattern is a real turn-off.
    4. 00:06:131 (2) - In a hard this 2 overlapped on the previous 4 really looks bad and probably plays bad too.
    5. 00:25:372 (5) - The spacing really makes it look like this 5 should be played as a 1/2 gap from the previous slider.
    6. 00:47:924 (5,6) - I don't know why you spaced these further from 4 when they are close together. The song doesn't change drastically the merit that.
    7. 01:04:268 (4,1) - The 1 reaaaally does not look nice.
    8. 01:05:924 (3) - I've refrained from commenting on most of these, but the 3 really should be leading in more directionally from the 2, like this. The method I posted seems to work with 1 as well. Be on the lookout for other problems like this that I didn't point out.
    9. 01:36:544 (1) - Not as bad as other instances but this miiiiight cause problems like playing it as 1/2.
    10. 01:44:819 (4,1,2,3,4) - This part honestly looks like it would be played all 1/2.
    11. 02:01:372 (1) - Spacing alert! That type of structure is commonly used to have a larger jump at the end, which would trick the player into playing that as 1/2! Either space it farther or make it a complete overlap under 4.
    12. 02:16:889 (2,3,4) - I really have no clue how wise this is...
        
    13. 02:41:717 (2,3,4,1) - Make this standardized polygons, so more like this, as in so the end of 2 also makes a triangle with 3 and 4.
    14. 02:50:200 (1) - Another spacing issue, this 1 would be played like 1/2.
    15. 03:33:647 (4) - Space this out, that slider is really dysfunctional with such a strong overlap and it won't hurt (it will help) to break DS for this.
    
    [Insane]
    • 1. 00:03:855 (1) - Ctrl+G. Flows better with earlier pattern and works nicely with next slider.
      2. 00:04:682 (3,4) - Also consider using Ctrl+G on these two as well.
      3. 00:05:096 (4) - This would look better spaced closer to 3, as the other 3 sliders before it are like that. See what I mean? (the 4 slider in question is selected) It looks like you improved this after I wrote this (this was earlier when I was modding this) but it looks like 4 could still be a bit closer.
      4. 00:08:406 (4) - Ctrl+G on this? I use this technique a lot too, and you used the Ctrl+G on 2, so it's kind of imbalanced without it on 4. Looks like you fixed this via someone else's mod as this was one of my older suggestions before I ran out of time, but below mod still applies.
      5. 00:08:819 (1,2) - If you accepted above suggestion, Ctrl+G these for better feel. Wow ok you changed that part up.
      6. 00:27:863 (3) - This spacing is extremely misleading, it's literally spaced the exact same distance between earlier 1/2 and mentioned 1/1. Space this out further away somewhere it can be properly spaced, please.
      7. 00:28:682 (1) - Misleading spacing like above until you fixed that.
      8. 00:30:337 (6,1) - The 1 looks a bit weird with the 6 breathing on its neck.
      9. 00:32:612 (6,1) - Same problem as above, the jumps you had right before make the player think this should be played immediately as 1/2.
      10. 00:41:717 (5,2) - The 5 and 2 overlapping is just kinda icky.
      11. 01:21:234 (4) - Why do this back again? Why not just make it a nice, complete pattern and continue the clockwise rotation instead of that ugly, awkward perpendicular return overlap?
      12. 01:55:578 (1) - This misleading spacing is a huge no-no.
      13. 02:03:027 (6,7,8) - This pattern looks a bit off with each slider, could be improved.
      14. 02:13:579 (4,5) - The blanket is off (see this)
      15. 02:48:131 (1) - This spacing might be a bit misleading, considering the spacing and direction of the jumps before it.
      16. 02:53:924 (5) - I don't like this being spaced farther than the other 3 sliders in the pattern.
      17. 03:09:233 - Starting from this point on the pause is extremely awkward. I would suggest having a rhythm that looks like this (the combo right after the spinner is what I suggest adding). You would of course have to raise the volume.
      [/list]
      
      Wow, you really got some nice mods for me to have had to cross out so many points.
      Again, I'm really sorry for being unable to finish it.
      Good luck.

No Dap wrote:

Tell me the secret Kibbleruuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

secret of making good maps

13:25 Kibbleru: wb o3o
13:26 Zero__wind: hi, I'm fine now
13:26 Kibbleru: hm do we get started o-o?
13:26 Zero__wind: let me update first
13:27 Zero__wind: ok
13:27 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/359869 DECO*27 feat. Aoi Yuki - Heart's Homing Instinct [Insane]]
13:27 Zero__wind: let's see
13:28 Kibbleru: oh god o3o
13:29 Zero__wind: oh god, just ease
13:29 Zero__wind: 00:37:371 - missing clap
13:30 Zero__wind: also 00:39:026 - and 00:39:854 -
13:30 Kibbleru: lol whoops
13:30 Zero__wind: and 00:43:164 -
13:30 Zero__wind: eh I though it was rare but seems there're many lol
13:30 Kibbleru: lol
13:30 Kibbleru: its just that
13:31 Kibbleru: every time i change pattern or something
13:31 Kibbleru: i keep forgetting to add in the hitsounds
13:31 Kibbleru: again
13:31 Kibbleru: lol
13:31 Zero__wind: I see
13:31 Zero__wind: self check is important, plz always remember
13:31 Kibbleru: kk
13:32 Zero__wind: 01:58:475 - and some more
13:32 Zero__wind: 01:59:302 -
13:32 Kibbleru: ill go through it later to fix up any missing hitsounds lol
13:32 Kibbleru: ah got that one already
13:33 Zero__wind: I'm just going through the diff
13:33 Zero__wind: I need to have a full view of it first
13:33 Kibbleru: ah
13:33 Kibbleru: ill try to find any missing hitsounds
13:33 Zero__wind: 02:54:337 - finish
13:34 Zero__wind: and 02:54:750 - clap
13:34 Kibbleru: k
13:35 Zero__wind: ok, now we could go again from the start
13:35 Zero__wind: first I got a question to ask about
13:35 Kibbleru: mhm?
13:36 Zero__wind: can you still remember how you arranged the rhythm for the preface?
13:36 Zero__wind: I mean, from the start till 00:15:441 (1) -
13:36 Kibbleru: hmm
13:36 Zero__wind: just try to express what you thought when mapping it
13:36 Kibbleru: kinda
13:36 Kibbleru: actualy
13:36 Kibbleru: not sure lol
13:36 Zero__wind: ok
13:37 Zero__wind: so this is the problem
13:37 Zero__wind: when you're making a map, and you're not sure what you're actually doing, that means it's not good
13:37 Kibbleru: mhm?
13:38 Zero__wind: so let me explain what I mean by this
13:39 Zero__wind: first, you need to grab what's happing in the music, how the drums are working, and also about other instruments, no matter what they are
13:39 Zero__wind: for your song, the drums are just simple as you see
13:39 Kibbleru: yep
13:40 Zero__wind: so in this case, we're more often focusing some other more unique things, right?
13:40 Kibbleru: mhm
13:40 Zero__wind: otherwise all maps could be the same if with all 1/2 beats
13:41 Kibbleru: yes
13:41 Zero__wind: so for the preface, you could rather try to go with the melody instead of drum instead
13:42 Zero__wind: let me call it keyboard sound
13:42 Zero__wind: I don't what instrument it should be
13:42 Kibbleru: ah
13:43 Zero__wind: so let's take an example from the start
13:43 Zero__wind: 00:02:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
13:43 Kibbleru: k
13:43 Zero__wind: I would arrange the rhythm differently, like http://puu.sh/7otd7.jpg
13:44 Zero__wind: the difference is between 00:02:612 (2,3) -
13:44 Kibbleru: hmm
13:45 Kibbleru: can u explain a bit as to why you would use a circle though o3o
13:45 Zero__wind: yeah sure
13:46 Zero__wind: starting from 00:02:199 - , then at 00:02:406 - , and then 00:02:612 - , till 00:02:819 - , there're four different tones of that "keyboard sound" can you get them?
13:47 Kibbleru: yes
13:47 Zero__wind: and when comparing, you could see that the one from 00:02:819 - is longer?
13:47 Zero__wind: while there's not a new tone at 00:03:026 -
13:48 Kibbleru: hm i see
13:50 Zero__wind: so that's what I'm trying to achieve, by stating a slider from 00:02:819 -
13:50 Kibbleru: i see
13:50 Zero__wind: so that's the difference between my rhythm and yours
13:51 Zero__wind: and in this way, your rhythm won't be like consistent 1/2 in pairs all the way
13:51 Kibbleru: i see
13:51 Zero__wind: let's try something similar with 00:03:855 (1,2,3,4) -
13:53 Zero__wind: for these, it would be really interesting if you replace 00:03:855 (1) - with two circles, and replace 00:04:682 (3) - with two circles
13:54 Zero__wind: in this way, the shorter tones and the longer tones would have difference in between
13:54 Kibbleru: i can see why with (3) but why (1) o-o
13:54 Zero__wind: it's really the same
13:55 Zero__wind: there're two different tones at 00:03:854 - and 00:04:061 -
13:55 Kibbleru: i cant really hear any tone change with (1) though o-o
13:55 Kibbleru: hmm Oo
13:55 Zero__wind: the one at 00:04:061 - is with low pitch
13:55 Zero__wind: but don't you ignore that
13:55 Kibbleru: i hear that with (2) as well though
13:56 Kibbleru: hm
13:56 Kibbleru: actualy nvm
13:57 Kibbleru: hm
13:57 Kibbleru: how doul i arrange this :X
13:57 Kibbleru: it feels awkward having 2 normally spaced circles after a jump lol
13:57 Zero__wind: hmm
13:57 Zero__wind: you can stack them
13:58 Kibbleru: guess that works
13:58 Zero__wind: common spacing is also ok, as long as they're leading the same flow from the jump
13:58 Zero__wind: ok
13:59 Zero__wind: if you tried to stack them, then it would be like two stacked circles and a 1/2 slider following
13:59 Zero__wind: and that's a pair
13:59 Zero__wind: and from 00:04:681 - , it's the other one
14:01 Kibbleru: hm hows something like this http://puu.sh/7ouvg.jpg
14:01 Kibbleru: fk puush still down
14:01 Zero__wind: I mean that, the first two stacks and the slider is 123, and the second group of stacks with slider is 456
14:01 Zero__wind: and you should try to make them match with each other
14:02 Kibbleru: they stack on the slider?
14:02 Zero__wind: no
14:02 Kibbleru: k
14:02 Kibbleru: something like this?
14:02 Kibbleru: http://gyazo.com/ef6ef02edf8700a9caed6ec69ad5114d
14:02 Zero__wind: oh no why the puush image is dead and dead and dead today
14:03 Zero__wind: I was really disturber
14:03 Kibbleru: yah gunna use gyazo xD
14:03 Zero__wind: disturbed
14:03 Kibbleru: yah puush seems to be buggy today :u
14:03 Kibbleru: does the gyazo link work?
14:04 Zero__wind: sadly, no
14:04 Zero__wind: idk if it's my problem
14:04 Kibbleru: hm
14:05 Kibbleru: ah ill just describe it
14:05 Kibbleru: 00:03:854 (1,2) - stacked
14:05 Kibbleru: then 00:04:268 (3) -
14:05 Kibbleru: then 00:04:681 (4,5) - stacked
14:05 Kibbleru: then 00:05:095 (6) -
14:05 Zero__wind: yes right
14:05 Zero__wind: this is basical
14:05 Zero__wind: and what I'm trying to tell is that
14:05 Zero__wind: 456 could correspond to 123
14:06 Zero__wind: this may be a symmetrical pattern or any
14:06 Kibbleru: basically what i did i i copied 123 copied, and did ctrl hj
14:06 Kibbleru: oops said copied twice
14:06 Zero__wind: yes
14:06 Kibbleru: is
14:06 Zero__wind: you're just doing it right, exaaaaaactly
14:07 Kibbleru: i suppose i follow the same rhythm for the rest of the part?
14:07 Zero__wind: not forcing symmetry for any sake, but it's only because that make sense for this kind of case
14:07 Kibbleru: yah
14:07 Zero__wind: yeah
14:07 Kibbleru: its looks kinda nice in this case xD
14:08 Zero__wind: it's also ok that you change for some time
14:08 Zero__wind: to have some variety
14:08 Zero__wind: like 00:10:889 (2) -
14:08 Zero__wind: it's good
14:08 Kibbleru: thats fine o3o?
14:08 Kibbleru: mmk
14:08 Zero__wind: but I hope they were organized
14:08 Kibbleru: yah lol
14:09 Zero__wind: eh, but I don't really mean a 1/1 slider at that point
14:09 Kibbleru: oh
14:09 Zero__wind: I would rather prefer using a 1/1 from 00:06:130 -
14:09 Zero__wind: of course a circle at 00:05:923 -
14:11 Zero__wind: oh wow
14:11 Zero__wind: I suddenly noticed that
14:11 Zero__wind: all of your notes was 1ms off from correct
14:11 Kibbleru: o-o
14:11 Kibbleru: o_O
14:12 Kibbleru: wut
14:12 Kibbleru: how did
14:12 Kibbleru: like unsnapped?
14:12 Zero__wind: that may happen after some timing change
14:12 Kibbleru: or is the offset wrong
14:12 Zero__wind: unsnapped
14:12 Kibbleru: oh
14:12 Kibbleru: hmm i checked the boxes
14:12 Kibbleru: maybe it bugged out a bit lol
14:12 Zero__wind: just drag them all together on the time line
14:13 Kibbleru: would that snap it?
14:13 Zero__wind: well, won't be a big problem, I think
14:13 Kibbleru: all?
14:13 Zero__wind: assume that
14:13 Kibbleru: k i just ctrl a and moved it a bit
14:13 Kibbleru: lol
14:13 Zero__wind: all of the notes were off
14:13 Zero__wind: and that would work I think
14:15 Zero__wind: it's like when you already have a slider at 00:09:233 (2) - , and I want to set a circle here to replace it, but after I throw the circle down, the slider didn't appear
14:15 Zero__wind: so I noticed that the original slider was off
14:15 Zero__wind: no
14:15 Kibbleru: ah
14:15 Zero__wind: didn't disappear*
14:16 Kibbleru: ah idk what to make for a pattern here00:07:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
14:16 Kibbleru: it would be boring to make another symmetrical thing right
14:16 Zero__wind: ok let's go on and see
14:17 Zero__wind: ok I have some ideas
14:17 Zero__wind: eh
14:18 Zero__wind: I think it's just fine to use 4 sliders lol
14:18 Kibbleru: o-o
14:18 Kibbleru: lol
14:19 Zero__wind: and it would be good if they correspoind to each other
14:19 Zero__wind: and then for 00:09:233 (2,3) - , it's like 00:02:612 (2,3) -
14:20 Zero__wind: also 00:12:130 (1) - is a good way to arrange
14:20 Zero__wind: but still you should better start a slider from 00:12:750 -
14:21 Kibbleru: mmk
14:26 Kibbleru: is this rhythm fine? 00:11:510 (4,5,6) -
14:26 Zero__wind: it's ok
14:26 Zero__wind: then you got every time different
14:30 Kibbleru: alright im done up to here 00:13:888 -
14:30 Zero__wind: ok good
14:31 Zero__wind: from where there's vocal, I found the rhythm fine
14:32 Zero__wind: 00:20:406 (2,3,4,5,6) - these are good
14:32 Zero__wind: it really goes well with the guitar
14:33 Zero__wind: still good at 00:25:372 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
14:33 Kibbleru: 00:13:786 (1,2,3) - these random triplets are not fine right lol
14:33 Kibbleru: i think i have a general idea of what i need to change
14:33 Kibbleru: i should make sliders where the guitar plays right
14:33 Kibbleru: ie here 00:18:544 (1,2) -
14:33 Zero__wind: but 00:34:475 (5,6) -
14:34 Zero__wind: yeah you grabbed it
14:34 Zero__wind: it would be good if you swap 00:18:544 (1,2) -
14:34 Kibbleru: yah i c what to fix
14:35 Zero__wind: then you'll know what to do to 00:34:475 (5,6) -
14:35 Zero__wind: quite similar, right?
14:35 Kibbleru: 00:39:026 (2,3) - here too i suppose?
14:35 Kibbleru: yah i get it
14:35 Zero__wind: yes
14:35 Zero__wind: don't let 00:39:026 (2) - reverse
14:35 Kibbleru: yep
14:35 Kibbleru: i swapped the circle and slider around xD
14:36 Kibbleru: mmk
14:36 Kibbleru: but
14:36 Zero__wind: ya
14:36 Kibbleru: 00:13:786 (1,2,3) - should i change these o-o?
14:36 Zero__wind: ok these
14:36 Zero__wind: better do
14:36 Kibbleru: honestly idk why i made them triplets lol
14:36 Zero__wind: yeah, they don't really make sense
14:38 Zero__wind: and these are almost what you need to do until the kiai
14:39 Kibbleru: ah k
14:39 Zero__wind: then we'll have a look at the kiai part
14:40 Kibbleru: ill get rid of the weird triplets too lol
14:40 Zero__wind: yes
14:40 Zero__wind: 00:59:303 (2,3) -
14:40 Zero__wind: maybe swap the rhythm I think
14:40 Zero__wind: it goes better with the vocal
14:41 Zero__wind: and 01:00:337 (5,6,7) - 'are not fitting well
14:41 Zero__wind: 00:59:924 (4,5,6,7) - , you really should have 3 sliders for the "de" , "na" and "i"
14:42 Zero__wind: and circles instead for 01:01:165 (8) -
14:43 Kibbleru: hang on still on 00:59:303 (2) - lol
14:45 Zero__wind: the "shi" at 00:59:302 - is short
14:45 Zero__wind: better with a circle imo
14:46 Zero__wind: and start slider from 00:59:509 - for "nan"
14:47 Kibbleru: mk
14:47 Kibbleru: i just randomly placed them down for now gunna work on placement later xD
14:48 Zero__wind: yeah
14:48 Kibbleru: so for the kiai do we focus on the vocals o-o?
14:48 Zero__wind: 01:03:441 (1,2,3,4) - these make sense
14:48 Zero__wind: it's fine if you do so
14:49 Zero__wind: because from 00:55:164 - , it would be the same as preface if you don't
14:49 Kibbleru: ic
14:49 Zero__wind: and for parts like 01:02:200 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
14:50 Zero__wind: the background track is NOT really clear to follow
14:50 Zero__wind: that also means that the one who wroted this song wanted us to focus more on the vocal
14:51 Kibbleru: but for like the longer held notes is it fine to map out some drum beats there cuz i don't want to have like very long sliders on insane
14:51 Zero__wind: yes
14:51 Kibbleru: 01:17:510 (3,4,5,6) - example
14:51 Zero__wind: at some gaps where vocal is longer than 1/1
14:52 Zero__wind: or at points where there's no vocal
14:52 Zero__wind: ah
14:52 Zero__wind: these are also fine
14:52 Kibbleru: hmm ic
14:53 Zero__wind: though the placement of 01:18:337 (1) - isn't vevry nice lol
14:53 Zero__wind: this is another topic =.=
14:53 Kibbleru: i agree haha
14:53 Kibbleru: idk why but my beats always end up off the screen =w=
14:53 Zero__wind: it's mostly because 01:17:510 (3,4,5,6) -
14:53 Zero__wind: are leading a strong anti-clockwise flow
14:54 Zero__wind: while the trail from 01:17:510 (3) - to 01:18:337 (1) - 's head is not leading that
14:54 Kibbleru: i get it
14:54 Kibbleru: so would it be better to get rid of the reverse?
14:55 Zero__wind: no
14:55 Kibbleru: k i dont get it then lol
14:55 Zero__wind: I think the most simple sollution is to move 01:18:131 (6) - to (160,272)
14:55 Kibbleru: oh nvm
14:55 Kibbleru: i get it
14:55 Zero__wind: of course you could have you other ideas
14:56 Zero__wind: I'm just bring up the issues
15:03 Zero__wind: I checked other parts then, and mostly similar problems
15:04 Kibbleru: mmk
15:04 Kibbleru: i will go through everything
15:04 Kibbleru: is this still only on the insane diff though?
15:04 Kibbleru: what about hard o3o
15:04 Zero__wind: yeah, like 01:37:993 (4,5) - and 01:40:682 (1,2,3) - and so on
15:04 Zero__wind: I know you could handle them on your own
15:05 Zero__wind: still some small things in Insane
15:05 Zero__wind: like removing clap from 02:13:786 (5) - 's head
15:05 Kibbleru: mmk
15:05 Zero__wind: and also remove 02:24:544 (1,3,1,3) - 's claps, I think they don't sound nice
15:06 Zero__wind: the band starts again from 02:27:855 (1) -
15:06 Zero__wind: not before it
15:06 Kibbleru: ic
15:07 Zero__wind: and could you plz remove those bodywhistles?
15:07 Kibbleru: when im done fixing what i can would u mind coming back for a recheck o3o
15:07 Zero__wind: is that intended?
15:07 Zero__wind: I really hate them
15:07 Kibbleru: bodywhistles o-o?
15:07 Kibbleru: oh
15:07 Kibbleru: un
15:07 Kibbleru: um
15:07 Zero__wind: 02:14:613 (1,1,4,1) -
15:07 Kibbleru: how lmao
15:07 Kibbleru: oh those
15:07 Kibbleru: nvm
15:07 Zero__wind: intended?
15:07 Kibbleru: i thought u meant like the slider sound
15:08 Zero__wind: yes
15:08 Zero__wind: I mean that
15:08 Zero__wind: ssssssssssssssssssssssss sound
15:08 Kibbleru: hmm
15:08 Zero__wind: 02:19:372 (1,2) -
15:08 Zero__wind: and so on
15:08 Kibbleru: do i
15:08 Kibbleru: how do i get rid of tha ;w;
15:08 Zero__wind: it would be ok if you'd really want to keep them
15:08 Kibbleru: do i use a silent custom hitsound?
15:09 Zero__wind: I'm just so fed up with that
15:09 Zero__wind: silent what
15:09 Kibbleru: wait are we talking about the same thing here lol
15:09 Zero__wind: no I think
15:09 Kibbleru: do u mean the whistle u add by pressing w or like
15:09 Kibbleru: the
15:09 Zero__wind: w
15:09 Kibbleru: slidersound itself
15:09 Kibbleru: the little drumroll
15:09 Kibbleru: oh ok
15:09 Kibbleru: alright
15:10 Zero__wind: select 02:19:372 (1) - with your mouse
15:10 Zero__wind: and you'll see the whistle icon on the right is bright
15:10 Kibbleru: yah ik what u mean now xD
15:10 Zero__wind: and would you plz deactivate that
15:10 Kibbleru: k i will
15:11 Zero__wind: it's good that you use whistles on both 02:19:372 (1) - 's head and tail
15:11 Zero__wind: but plz not body
15:11 Kibbleru: wait a sec Oo
15:11 Kibbleru: when you select a slider
15:12 Zero__wind: there are many, in the soft part, from 02:14:613 (1) -
15:12 Zero__wind: yeah
15:12 Kibbleru: normaly
15:12 Kibbleru: when you select a slider normal
15:12 Kibbleru: so both ends are orange
15:12 Kibbleru: it adds a different kind of whistle Oo?
15:12 Kibbleru: like
15:12 Zero__wind: soft sliderbody whistles is different
15:12 Zero__wind: you could have a try with 100% volume
15:12 Zero__wind: that would be more apparent
15:13 Kibbleru: if just selected 02:19:372 (1) -
15:13 Kibbleru: and pressed w
15:13 Kibbleru: it would be different than selecting 02:19:372 (1) - 's head and tail individually and pressing w?
15:13 Kibbleru: like both
15:13 Zero__wind: yes
15:13 Zero__wind: different, totally
15:13 Kibbleru: oh shiet o-o
15:13 Kibbleru: i did not know that
15:13 Kibbleru: lol
15:13 Kibbleru: i thought it would just automatically add a whistle at the head and tail
15:13 Kibbleru: wow learning new stuff everyday lol
15:14 Zero__wind: if you add whistle to the slider directly, when there's no any other hitsounds on it, there would be whistles on both head&tail and also body
15:14 Zero__wind: but moooooooooost time, we don't want that body one
15:14 Kibbleru: ic
15:15 Zero__wind: so when you're gonna add whistles to both head and tail of a slider, plz do them seperately
15:15 Zero__wind: so now you know, and I'lm thinking that there might be simiar problems in all your diffs
15:15 Kibbleru: kk xD
15:15 Zero__wind: plz be considerate and deal with them on
15:15 Zero__wind: them all *
15:16 Zero__wind: ok then, next topic
15:16 Zero__wind: 02:39:234 (1) - , it would just play better if you replace it with two circles
15:17 Kibbleru: hmm i got that suggestion before but i dont really see why o-o
15:17 Zero__wind: on two hands
15:18 Zero__wind: on one hand for playability
15:19 Zero__wind: starting streams after a 1/2 slider simply sucks at most times
15:19 Zero__wind: ACC breaker
15:19 Zero__wind: on the other hand, to make sense with the music
15:20 Kibbleru: ah
15:20 Zero__wind: it's good that you noticed that from 02:37:786 (1) - , the drum in the music is getting more intensive
15:20 Zero__wind: and you did it right to use coherent circles to express
15:21 Zero__wind: and in this case, there simply should be a 8 at 02:39:233 - to join the group of 02:38:613 (5,6,7) - and match with 02:37:786 (1,2,3,4) -
15:22 Zero__wind: and from 02:39:440 - , it's a new stanza, from where the drums get even more intensive than 02:37:786 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ,which became a stream
15:23 Zero__wind: so they are just seperate different things, and should not be confounded with a 1/2 slider
15:23 Kibbleru: ic
15:28 Zero__wind: omgggggg, puush woks for me again, plz see (this)[http://puu.sh/7ozs5.jpg]
15:28 Kibbleru: oh sweet puush is up
15:28 Kibbleru: hmm
15:29 Zero__wind: this is for referrence only
15:29 Kibbleru: thats a good pattern
15:29 Zero__wind: or you could have 1234 straight, and 5678 stragith, also fine
15:30 Zero__wind: this is just what I mean by saying 5678 and 1234 should correspond to each other
15:31 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/7ozBE.jpg yah i get what u mean
15:31 Kibbleru: is that good?
15:31 Zero__wind: of course
15:31 Zero__wind: just fine
15:31 Zero__wind: ok next topic then
15:31 Zero__wind: last one for Insane
15:31 Zero__wind: about 03:07:579 (1) -
15:32 Zero__wind: I would really prefer you throw this away and map this part with circles&sliders
15:32 Kibbleru: mhm
15:32 Kibbleru: hmm
15:32 Kibbleru: ok
15:32 Zero__wind: the music is simply different from 01:21:648 (1) -
15:32 Kibbleru: yah
15:33 Zero__wind: there're many interesting and detailed things startin from 03:07:578 -
15:33 Zero__wind: you should appreciate them
15:33 Kibbleru: mmk
15:33 Zero__wind: that's all for Insane
15:34 Kibbleru: im gunna assume its similar for the other difficulties lol
15:35 Kibbleru: lol the reason that spinner is there is cuz i originaly had the song end there
15:35 Kibbleru: then ppl told me to map the rest
15:37 Zero__wind: yeah, viewing the Hard
15:37 Zero__wind: difficulty spread is good,
15:37 Zero__wind: flow is good
15:38 Kibbleru: rhythm probably isnt good
15:38 Zero__wind: plz improve the rhythm with what you've leanred just now
15:38 Zero__wind: yes
15:38 Zero__wind: and after that, make the objects align better
15:39 Kibbleru: mk
15:39 Zero__wind: I mean, to make the map looks neater by saying that align
15:39 Kibbleru: hmm what do u mean by align? like the blankets and stuff?
15:40 Zero__wind: and it contains things mostly about consistency
15:40 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/358606 DECO*27 feat. Aoi Yuki - Heart's Homing Instinct [Hard]]
15:40 Zero__wind: take some examples
15:40 Zero__wind: slider shapes
15:40 Kibbleru: k
15:40 Zero__wind: it would be good if you avoid making 1/2 sliders too curved like this
15:41 Kibbleru: 00:03:855 (1) - o3o?
15:41 Zero__wind: yes
15:41 Zero__wind: 00:03:855 (1) -
15:41 Zero__wind: eh why haven't I copied that lol
15:41 Zero__wind: baka me
15:42 Zero__wind: then, some slider shapes could improoved, 00:10:475 (1) -
15:42 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/7oA9A.jpg
15:43 Zero__wind: but gah, I'm bad at drawing sliders, plz do better than me
15:43 Kibbleru: lol
15:45 Zero__wind: all kinds of decorating work like these
15:45 Zero__wind: it's like polishing a newly-made draft
15:45 Zero__wind: poor network lol
15:45 Kibbleru: wb o-o?
15:45 Zero__wind: poor network lol
15:46 Kibbleru: wait did u get what i said?
15:46 Zero__wind: nothing, I just said that there're plenty of similar work of this kind
15:46 Zero__wind: like polishing a newly-made draft
15:46 Zero__wind: to make it LOOK better
15:47 Kibbleru: ah
15:47 Kibbleru: but question; when a slider has more than one tone lol..
15:47 Kibbleru: 00:02:199 (1) -
15:47 Zero__wind: yes?
15:47 Kibbleru: how would i do the rhythm
15:47 Zero__wind: it's just fine
15:47 Kibbleru: originally what i thought for 00:02:199 (1) - is the pitch is increasing so i would make one slider for that
15:47 Kibbleru: does that make sense? Oo
15:48 Zero__wind: using 1/1 s to cover too frequent 1/2 beats in Hard diff is common
15:48 Zero__wind: well, I don't mean that's TOO frequent though
15:49 Kibbleru: but like how would i know when to do that and when not to thats basically what im asking xD
15:49 Zero__wind: being more important, you need to avoid rhythm like 00:06:131 (2,3) -
15:49 Kibbleru: hmm what's the problem with that one o3o
15:50 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/7oArI.jpg
15:51 Zero__wind: bugged two objects together
15:51 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/7oAug.jpg
15:51 Zero__wind: this is correct
15:52 Kibbleru: ahhhaa that makes sense
15:52 Zero__wind: yes I mostly mean this kind of problems in the diff
15:53 Zero__wind: and for 00:03:855 (1,2,3,4) -
15:53 Zero__wind: it's ok that you make them seperate, I think that looks better
15:53 Kibbleru: u mean ignoring DS?
15:54 Zero__wind: as sliders have their leniency, distance usage between sliders is with looser restriction
15:54 Zero__wind: yes, or maybe a bit bigger ds between sliders
15:55 Zero__wind: but remember, this only applies from Hard diff and on
15:55 Zero__wind: you should keep ds anyway when mapping Easy or Normal
15:56 Kibbleru: 00:07:165 (1,2,3,4) - what about this one
15:56 Zero__wind: same
15:56 Zero__wind: could make them seperate
15:56 Zero__wind: and why is 00:07:165 (1) - pointing the opposite side
15:56 Kibbleru: k
15:58 Zero__wind: hos easy it is to draw a siingle slider and copy paste it over n' over again
15:58 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/7oAKp.jpg
15:58 Zero__wind: possible sollution ↑
15:58 Kibbleru: idk i thought it would look nice lmao
15:58 Zero__wind: of course you could something different
15:59 Kibbleru: so its mainly just the rhythm right
16:00 Zero__wind: yes
16:00 Zero__wind: and decorate it after making rhythm fine
16:00 Kibbleru: k
16:00 Zero__wind: pokishing work is always important, although there're always just small things
16:00 Zero__wind: polishing*
16:01 Zero__wind: but still plz remember, that was the last step of mapping
16:01 Zero__wind: you should have your map mostly ok, and polish it afterwards
16:01 Kibbleru: mmk
16:02 Zero__wind: hmm let me think
16:02 Zero__wind: nothing else
16:02 Kibbleru: mmk
16:02 Zero__wind: just refer to the log for Insane, mostly similar problem, also for those whistles and blahblahblah
16:02 Zero__wind: will post in the thread
16:02 Kibbleru: okie :3
16:03 Kibbleru: alright
16:03 Kibbleru: tyvm!

Lust wrote:

pkmnyab's Normal

1. 00:07:993 (5,1) - This blanket is a bit off, try and have it so the circle is blanketed evenly on both sides! fixed
2. 00:25:372 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off here as wellfixed
3. 00:40:268 (5,1,2) - This is a lot to click in a short amount of time. Almost confusing! Players will not be expecting to click this many times. Especially with a stack as well! It would be best if you would unstack the circle and slider, at least that will clear up some of the confusion fixed, turned circle+slider into repeat slider
4. 00:53:510 (1) - Lower the volume of this spinner's end so that it creates a nice fade. Just create a new green line and set it to soft sampleset with 5% volume done
5. 01:19:993 (1) - This slider seems a bit out of place, would be best if you had just a simple three point curve slider in its place fixed
6. 01:20:820 (2,3,4) - Instead of a triangle, have the circles create a curve in to the breakfixed
7. 02:39:027 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved herefixed
8. 02:40:268 (5,6,1) - Confusing pattern! stacked it under (4) instead, should be clearer now
9. 03:21:233 (2,3,4) - I would advise having a stack of two or more replaced hitcircles with a slider

Lust wrote:

Zexous asked me to finish the mod on his behalf
I actually tried mapping this song myself a looong time ago, probably around the time I started mapping in fact

since this mod is so long im just gunna state what i didnt fix and why lol

General

(Note that some may only apply to easy and normal)

1. The quality of the video is kind of blah, try and find a new one?
2. The correct title is HEART's HOMING INSTINCT (i know, because I tried this song out too :3)
3. Add kissou honnou to the tags
4. Some hitsounds are a bit too loud and overwhelming, check back through the mapset to see if you can spot any in particular
5. The combos are all over the place, try and keep them consistent!

Easy

Well here we go!

1. 00:02:199 (1) - I highly suggest you do not have such a strong sound as a slider tick. Slider ticks encompass passive hitsounding (you are not hitting on them), which should be effectively a tad weaker than the hit objects you do hit (active hitsounds)
2. 00:04:682 (4) - This can better blanket 00:03:855 (2) - 's hitburst
3. 00:02:199 (1,2,3,4) - This is a very confusing pattern to have. You see because of the low AR, (4) appears before (3) is even hit, and if you follow the flow coming from the beginning slider, it leads down to (4)! (3) is a little off to the side and hard to see, and the way it stands now the flow is kind of awkward. Try changing the pattern up a bit, or you can try stacking (3) on top of (4)
4. 00:04:682 (4,1,2) - Now this is also a tad confusing, (2) was stacked underneath (4)'s slider end and hitburst, no way will an easy player be expecting something like that. You can move that hit circle to the end of the slider and then adjust the following pattern accordingly. However if you do not follow this suggestion, please at least fix the blanket between 00:05:510 (1,2) - . You can use (2)'s approach circle to help you in fixing this! If you are lazy to do that, you can just move the slider endpoint to 256:352
5. 00:07:579 (4,5) - This blanket is slightly off. However, I would put a better curve on the slider, it will look better
6. 00:10:062 (2,3) - This blanket is also slightly off at the beginning.
7. 00:07:993 (5,1) - Weird flow here. You go down with (5) and then back up with (1)'s repeat. You can move (1) down and have it blanket 00:10:062 (2) - instead seems fine to me :I (5)'s flow is going into the next slider
8. 00:15:855 (2,3) - Blanket is off
9. 00:15:441 (1,2) - Eh linear flow is kind of uninteresting, try putting a curve in in the path of these circles
10. 00:17:924 (1,2) - (2) isn't adequately blanketing (1)'s slider end. You can ctrl+g (1) and use its approach circle to help in fixing this
11. 00:23:717 (2) - Move this to 82:127 so that its slider end stacks with 00:22:062 (4) - 's hitburst perfectly
12. 00:24:544 (3,1) - Check spacing
13. 00:25:372 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders seem kind of randomly placed. Try this pattern or something similar to spice things up a bit! Note I put this to AR0 so you can see what is going on all in one screenshot.
    
    example

    
    After that I had (3) blanket (4)'s slider which was also doing the same rotation thing. Be sure to adjust the following pattern so that it can fit something like this
14. 00:31:579 (1,2) - (Nazi) This blanket is a bit off
15. 00:33:648 (2,3,1) - Another random bunch of sliders, try and form them in to nice patterns! 00:34:475 (3) - I actually suggest you move this slider down and invert the curve so that it avoids the small overlap with 00:36:544 (3) - .
16. 00:36:544 (3,4) - More weird flow, you go down with the circles before the slider and then go back up with the slider. You can try something like this
    
    example

    
17. 00:42:751 (2,3,4) - Confusing pattern, the flow from the starting slider leads to (4), and not (3)! This will throw players off expecting (3) to be in (4)'s place
18. 00:45:233 (1) - Whoa weird out of place slider shape, just use a regular three point slider curve on this. The way how it is now is kind of (for lack of a better word sorry) ugly. I know its going to blanket 00:46:889 (3) - 's slider shape but its way too far in the time line for it to be noticeable
19. 00:45:233 (1,2) - Huge jump! Try and keep it 1.00x spacing. Don't manipulate spacing to fit a pattern, manipulate spacing to fit the song!
20. 00:48:544 (1,2) - You can form these sliders better
21. 00:49:372 (2,3) - have (2) blanket (3)'s slider end and vice versa
22. 00:51:441 (5,1) - Blanket is really off here
23. 00:53:510 (3) - To cover all the beats, you can extend the slider to 00:54:337
24. 00:54:337 (4,5) - Overmapping, there is really no beat to follow here, so you can remove these notes. hmm i disagree
25. 01:04:682 (3,1) - Blanket is a bit off here
26. 01:13:372 (1,2) - ^
27. 01:15:441 (1) - You can use this slider shape to blanket 01:16:682 (2) - !
28. 01:18:337 (1) - I would move this over a bit more so that its not too close to 01:16:682 (2) - . Then adjust the spacing in the following patterns
29. 01:42:751 (1,2,3) - The blanket is off here.
30. 01:45:647 (2) - I would move this slider a bit further away from 01:44:819 (1) - . Its too close how it is now
31. 01:51:441 (1) - You can actually use this slider's shape to blanket 01:51:027 (5) - ! Moving the second slider point to 245:176 and the red anchor point to 261:227 should accomplish this.
32. 01:51:441 (1,1) - This is kind of awkward. Try having 01:53:096 (1) - Blanket over 01:51:441 (1) - 's slider start, like this! It'll be a bit more cleaner and will flow way better
    
    example

    
    Be sure to adjust the following pattern accordingly
33. 02:01:372 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off here towards the end
34. 02:06:337 (3,4) - Linear flow is a bit weird. Try and put a curve so that it leads up to the long slider! Try these coordinates:
    02:06:337 (3) - 319:350
    02:06:751 (4) - 417:335
    02:07:165 (1) - 400:236
35. 02:11:302 (7,1,2) - the triangle curve here is a bit too harsh, try and have a nice lead in!
36. 02:14:200 (5) - (Nazi) 57:151 so that the straight slider smacks right in to the middle of this hit circle. Be sure to adjust the spacing of the next circle
37. 02:14:612 - The break starting here is kinda long, try mapping it out a bit seems fine considering the length of this song
38. 02:28:682 (2,3) - The blanket is a bit off here
39. 02:32:820 (1,2) - Have (1) blanket (2) and vice versa, would be a bit neater
40. 02:38:613 (2,3) - (Nazi) (3) isn't quite blanketing (2)'s slider end
41. 02:55:579 (3,1) - Blanket is off
42. 02:56:820 (2,3,1) - Although there is an NC on the slider, the stack is pretty confusing. Newer players will probably hit the slider instead of moving up to (3)
43. 02:57:648 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
44. 03:07:579 (1) - Why spinner, nothing here really for it to go on. Just remove it and map it out
45. 03:20:923 - You can definitely map this break out. It is kind of abrupt and comes in the middle of nowhere

Well that took a bit longer than I thought, but yeah. Sorry I got a bit lazy at the end
These two difficulties need a bit of work before it is ready to be ranked.

hmm i will make my NC's consistent later

Good luck!