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Hachikuji Mayoi - Kaerimichi

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miccoliasms
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年10月25日 at 0:07:36

Artist: Hachikuji Mayoi
Title: Kaerimichi
Source: Bakemonogatari
Tags: bakemonogatari 3rd op katou emiri taka1235
BPM: 87.5
Filesize: 18817kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.07 stars, 86 notes)
  2. Hard (4.99 stars, 280 notes)
  3. Normal+ (4.72 stars, 175 notes)
  4. taka's Insane (5 stars, 319 notes)
Download: Hachikuji Mayoi - Kaerimichi
Download: Hachikuji Mayoi - Kaerimichi (no video)
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4th map

Bakemonogatari Mayoi MaiMai OP

09/23 taka's Insane added thx :3

please advice me XD
James2250
errrr judging by the star ratings...
make your normal a hard, and make your hard an insane. Then increase the circle size, hp drain rate, overall dif on them a bit
(as people arnt going to like a normal thats 4.5 stars+)

-you are also going to have to make a new diff (call it normal) thats below 4.0 stars as both of these are too hard atm
or I guess you could just make your current normal alot easier (up to you)

normal:
00:00:94 (x) - sounds better with note here
00:28:37 (x) - ^
overall I think diff could use some more hitsounds (more than just those claps)

hard:
nice... same hitsound comment though

*star*
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

James2250 wrote:

errrr judging by the star ratings...
make your normal a hard, and make your hard an insane. Then increase the circle size, hp drain rate, overall dif on them a bit
(as people arnt going to like a normal thats 4.5 stars+)

-you are also going to have to make a new diff (call it normal) thats below 4.0 stars as both of these are too hard atm
or I guess you could just make your current normal alot easier (up to you)

mmm...I think Hard is too easy for Insane.
and , Normal is too.
Therefore, Normal made Normal + and Easy made.


normal:
00:00:94 (x) - sounds better with note here Done
00:28:37 (x) - ^ Done
overall I think diff could use some more hitsounds (more than just those claps) I also considered. It corrects later.

hard:
nice... same hitsound comment though It corrects later.

*star*
Thx for Modding & star~:3
taNa
:P
Mafiamaster
Easy~
00:02:99 (5) - Suggestion: New combo.
00:30:42 (6) - ^

Normal~
01:18:25 (3) - Suggestion: Stack the endpoint directly under the endpoint of 2.
01:19:11 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo.
01:19:97 (2) - Suggestion: Add new combo.

Hard~
01:04:88 (4) - Suggestion: New combo.
01:13:97 (1,2) - I personally don't like 1 being on top of 2 like this. But you can keep it if you want. (Change it please!)

OP makes me want to watch this anime some day~
Topic Starter
miccoliasms
>taNa
:roll: thx star!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Easy~
00:02:99 (5) - Suggestion: New combo. Done
00:30:42 (6) - ^ Done

Normal~
01:18:25 (3) - Suggestion: Stack the endpoint directly under the endpoint of 2. Done
01:19:11 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo. Done
01:19:97 (2) - Suggestion: Add new combo. Done

Hard~
01:04:88 (4) - Suggestion: New combo. Done
01:13:97 (1,2) - I personally don't like 1 being on top of 2 like this. But you can keep it if you want. (Change it please!)
O.o...Different shape is seen by thinking.

OP makes me want to watch this anime some day~I want you to see because it is interested :3
thx for Modding & star~ XD
EEeee
Easy
Fix Break and done
^^

Normal+
00:45:34 (5) - space this with the rest of the combo, it's a bit too far
01:18:77 (4) - new combo

Hard
00:50:31 (3) - bit too far, space it and tilt the endpoint so that 4 will still be spaced
01:12:77 (5) - new combo
and wow that's it :D
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

EEeee wrote:

Easy
Fix Break and done
^^

Normal+
00:45:34 (5) - space this with the rest of the combo, it's a bit too far Done
01:18:77 (4) - new combo Done

Hard
00:50:31 (3) - bit too far, space it and tilt the endpoint so that 4 will still be spaced Done
01:12:77 (5) - new combo Done
and wow that's it :D
thx for modding & star~ ;)
proseyu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

proseyu wrote:

       
阿澄巫女!>w</

Hard
00:21:85 - Add a note ? >_< soryy ;_;
00:38:31 - ^ soryy ;_;
00:47:57 (3) - 00:47:91 (1) - 00:48:25 (3) - remove these notes, and other notes(00:47:22 (1,2,4,2,4,5))change to jump? >_< soryy ;_;
00:48:42 (4,5) - change to note(red tick), note(white tick), slider(red white)? @_@ soryy ;_;
00:52:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - change to jump? It is too Hard when keeping hard. ;_;
00:54:77 - Add a note ? soryy ;_;
01:00:59 - ^ Done :3
01:05:74 - ^ soryy ;_;
01:11:57 - ^ Done :3
01:15:34 - ^ soryy ;_;
01:17:05 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - jump? It is too Hard when keeping hard. ;_;

Normal+
00:53:91 (4) - extend up to 00:54:25? Done
01:00:59 - Add a note ? Done


雨chan Mod & star thx!! >A</
PicoLo
~Star. ;)
taka1235
DeadAlready
hi :D

very good map <3

and I only have a suggestion. 0.0

[Normal+]
00:34:88 (4) - 00:35:74 (1) -
The distance of these 2 objects maybe can move more bigger. XD
(If you think you don't want to fix this,that's OK. :) )


and I don't have any big problem in this map. XD

star <3

really a nice map :D
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

quintitem wrote:

hi :D

very good map <3

and I only have a suggestion. 0.0

[Normal+]
00:34:88 (4) - 00:35:74 (1) -
The distance of these 2 objects maybe can move more bigger. XD
(If you think you don't want to fix this,that's OK. :) ) Done XD


and I don't have any big problem in this map. XD

star <3

really a nice map :D
thx for moddin and star~ >A</ <3
Aenna
kono kyoku atama ni nokoru <3
nice map sugite nuita
Topic Starter
miccoliasms
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azuki
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Topic Starter
miccoliasms
>azuki

thank you your modding in irc :oops:
Cyril Scarlet
いただきます ~
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
00:05:97 (B) - Delete and replace break.

Notes: This difficulty seems okay so far. Just a small issue with the break.

[Normal+] (Done)

SPOILER
00:00:25 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is not equal. (look at the small gap between (1) and (2) then look at (2) and the notes down.
00:01:79 (6,8) - Touching the bottom of the window...
00:54:42 (5) - This looks like I can go down a bit more to line up with (4).
00:57:34 (1,2,1) - Slight spacing gap between here.
01:00:59 (1,2) - ^

Notes: Just some minor stuff to look at. Nice work though.

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
00:07:97 (1,2,3) - The triangle shape looks a bit off.
00:31:62 (1,2,3,4) - Make sure to double check the spacing around here. It looks like the sliders are a bit closer than it needs to compared to the other notes...
00:52:19 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It doesn't look evenly lined up.
00:55:28 (3) - Looks a bit too close to (2).
00:56:48 (5,6) - A bit too close together.
01:19:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The setup doesn't seem even or lined up that well here. Between (7) and (5) has some extra space while (8) is touching (5).
01:24:25 (1,1) - A bit too close together.
01:25:45 (4,5,6) - Extra spacing between these notes.

Notes: The map seems okay, but the spacing would need to be rechecked.

[taka's Insane] (Done)

SPOILER
00:19:79 (5,6) - These two hitnotes are touching.
00:22:02 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The two triangle shapes here are different. The first one has the notes touching while he second one has the notes spaced out evenly.
00:24:94 (2,4) - Are these two notes supposed to be touching?
00:41:65 (4,6) - ^
01:16:37 (4,5) - ^
01:18:25 (5) - Not lined up with (1).
01:19:97 (1) - ^

Notes: Just some minor stuff to check into. Make sure to double check the spacing for the rest of the map.

Overall: The map seems really good overall, though there is one thing that really bugs is the file size for the video. It could be a bit smaller since its a short song but other than the minor stuff, its good so far. I'll drop my star in then...
v2b
894ww

I think you should change artist to Katou Emiri
offset -15,dont forget to resnap notes and reinsert breaktme

hard:
00:22:01 (1,1) - I dont think the 2x sliders fit the song
01:13:95 (1,2) - overlapped slider is unrankable


star :)
I hope I have time to map fullver ;_;
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod ^^

Blue = Suggestion

[Easy]
No Problems Found :)

[Normal+]
No Problems Found :)

[Hard]
00:00:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Maybe all these could be flipped vertically? Because the beat placement is very similar to [Normal+]
No Problems Found :)

[taka's Insane]
No Problems found :)

A flawless map in every way! I love it! Starred for sure :)
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~


[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
00:05:97 (B) - Delete and replace break. Done

Notes: This difficulty seems okay so far. Just a small issue with the break.

[Normal+] (Done)

SPOILER
00:00:25 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here is not equal. (look at the small gap between (1) and (2) then look at (2) and the notes down. Done
00:01:79 (6,8) - Touching the bottom of the window... Done
00:54:42 (5) - This looks like I can go down a bit more to line up with (4). Done
00:57:34 (1,2,1) - Slight spacing gap between here. Done
01:00:59 (1,2) - ^ Done

Notes: Just some minor stuff to look at. Nice work though.

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
00:07:97 (1,2,3) - The triangle shape looks a bit off. Done
00:31:62 (1,2,3,4) - Make sure to double check the spacing around here. It looks like the sliders are a bit closer than it needs to compared to the other notes... Done
00:52:19 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - It doesn't look evenly lined up. Done
00:55:28 (3) - Looks a bit too close to (2). Done
00:56:48 (5,6) - A bit too close together. Done
01:19:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The setup doesn't seem even or lined up that well here. Between (7) and (5) has some extra space while (8) is touching (5). Done
01:24:25 (1,1) - A bit too close together. Done
01:25:45 (4,5,6) - Extra spacing between these notes. Done

Notes: The map seems okay, but the spacing would need to be rechecked.

[taka's Insane] (Done)

SPOILER
00:19:79 (5,6) - These two hitnotes are touching.
00:22:02 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - The two triangle shapes here are different. The first one has the notes touching while he second one has the notes spaced out evenly.
00:24:94 (2,4) - Are these two notes supposed to be touching?
00:41:65 (4,6) - ^
01:16:37 (4,5) - ^
01:18:25 (5) - Not lined up with (1).
01:19:97 (1) - ^ I tell taka.

Notes: Just some minor stuff to check into. Make sure to double check the spacing for the rest of the map.

Overall: The map seems really good overall, though there is one thing that really bugs is the file size for the video. It could be a bit smaller since its a short song but other than the minor stuff, its good so far. I'll drop my star in then...sorry...I hope to use a more beautiful video.
thx for modding & star ~ XD
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

v2b wrote:

894ww mayoimaimai :)

I think you should change artist to Katou Emiri I tried to change it, but it becomes new beatmap in the uploaded shape and isn't done ;_;
offset -15,dont forget to resnap notes and reinsert breaktme Done

hard:
00:22:01 (1,1) - I dont think the 2x sliders fit the song Done
01:13:95 (1,2) - overlapped slider is unrankable Done


star :)
I hope I have time to map fullver ;_; Please take into my beatmap at that time;_;
thx for modding & star ~ >A</
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod ^^

Blue = Suggestion

[Easy]
No Problems Found :)

[Normal+]
No Problems Found :)

[Hard]
00:00:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - Maybe all these could be flipped vertically? Because the beat placement is very similar to [Normal+] I changed it towards Normal+
No Problems Found :)

[taka's Insane]
No Problems found :)

A flawless map in every way! I love it! Starred for sure :)
thx for modding & star ~ :)
Alace
<Easy>
00:00:24 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - delete this XD they didn`t sound so good

<Hard>
00:23:38 (1) - lol It doesn`t fit XD

pretty good mapset
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

Alace wrote:

<Easy>
00:00:24 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - delete this XD they didn`t sound so good Done XD

<Hard>
00:23:38 (1) - lol It doesn`t fit XD Done!

pretty good mapset
thx for modding & star ~ Alace sensei >A</
Armin
-Easy
00:31:612 1/4 earlier, maybe?
00:49:612 Finish
00:50:983 ^
00:52:355 Finish at the start
01:22:183 Finish?
01:24:926 Finish at the start

-Normal+
00:12:069 Add a clap at the start
00:20:983 Finish at the start
00:26:469 Finish
00:42:926 Finish at the start

-Hard
00:02:126 Align whith (5)
00:13:955 Finish
00:14:469 ^
00:14:983 ^
00:51:326 Respect the spacing (even if it isn't necessary in this case)
01:24:926 (1,4,7) Finish

-taka's Insane
01:16:526 Align this circle better ( 1 square to the right)

Starred. I like the last difficulty @_@
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

Armin wrote:

-Easy
00:31:612 1/4 earlier, maybe? ;_;
00:49:612 Finish Done
00:50:983 ^ Done
00:52:355 Finish at the start Done
01:22:183 Finish? Done
01:24:926 Finish at the start Done

-Normal+
00:12:069 Add a clap at the start Done
00:20:983 Finish at the start Done
00:26:469 Finish Done
00:42:926 Finish at the start Done

-Hard
00:02:126 Align whith (5) Done
00:13:955 Finish Done
00:14:469 ^ Done
00:14:983 ^ Done
00:51:326 Respect the spacing (even if it isn't necessary in this case) Done
01:24:926 (1,4,7) Finish Done

-taka's Insane
01:16:526 Align this circle better ( 1 square to the right)

Starred. I like the last difficulty @_@
thx for modding & star ~:)
blissfulyoshi
Yay, my favorite op from Bakemonogatari

Easy;
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:18:06 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:34:52 (3)
00:23:55 (1) - ^
00:57:84 (1) - I sort of want to remove this new combo because it is inconsistent with your 2 line of lyrics pattern that you used for most of the song, but that will make this combo pretty long. It can go either way.
01:24:92 (6) - new combo?

Normal:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
Having more than repeats than a single repeat slider in a song is a song that is dominated by single repeat sliders is annoying and hard to see. Especially the ones inbetween combos such as 00:41:72 (2). I would change these if you can.

Combo mod:
00:26:46 (1) - remove new combo to get whole line of lyrics in one combo
00:47:21 (1) - ^
01:18:75 (1) - ^?

Hard:
SPOILER
I think it is a little weird to have a hard worth over 3mil in a 90s song.

Normal mod:
00:15:49 (13,14,15) - lower stack leniency to make this look nicer

Insane:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
01:04:86 (1) - I am going to warn you that this type of jump is pretty unexpected for players and not very popular

Combo mod:
00:34:35 (5) - new combo

Great map. A little bit on the hard side for all maps besides easy, but I think it is fine. Star.
Topic Starter
miccoliasms

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Yay, my favorite op from Bakemonogatari

Easy;
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:18:06 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:34:52 (3) Done
00:23:55 (1) - ^ Done
00:57:84 (1) - I sort of want to remove this new combo because it is inconsistent with your 2 line of lyrics pattern that you used for most of the song, but that will make this combo pretty long. It can go either way. Done?_?
01:24:92 (6) - new combo? Done

Normal:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
Having more than repeats than a single repeat slider in a song is a song that is dominated by single repeat sliders is annoying and hard to see. Especially the ones inbetween combos such as 00:41:72 (2). I would change these if you can. Done?_?

Combo mod:
00:26:46 (1) - remove new combo to get whole line of lyrics in one combo Done
00:47:21 (1) - ^ Done
01:18:75 (1) - ^? Done

Hard:
SPOILER
I think it is a little weird to have a hard worth over 3mil in a 90s song. sorry i don't understand?_?

Normal mod:
00:15:49 (13,14,15) - lower stack leniency to make this look nicer sorry not done+_+

Insane:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
01:04:86 (1) - I am going to warn you that this type of jump is pretty unexpected for players and not very popular

Combo mod:
00:34:35 (5) - new combo Done

Great map. A little bit on the hard side for all maps besides easy, but I think it is fine. Star.
thx for modding & star ~ yoshi XD
taka1235
Topic Starter
miccoliasms
changed!!
Cyril Scarlet
追加したたかさんバージョン拾いにやってきました 笑
kingoffoxes
star
Sleep Powder
[Easy]
00:21:15 (4) - Finish sounds good here
00:26:64 (4) - ^
00:27:66 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Add a hitsound on every 2nd full beat.
00:37:26 (3) - Finish on 1st repeat
00:43:09 (4) - Finish here
00:44:12 (1,2,3,4) - Add a hitsound on every other full beat.
00:57:15 (5) - Hitsound this
01:03:32 (3) - ^
01:06:06 (1,2,3) - Add a hitsound on every other full beat.

[Normal+]
00:42:92 (6) - Too close to (5)
00:55:44 (2) - Hitsound this
00:58:18 (2) - ^

[Hard]
01:24:24 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:24:92 (1) - ^

[taka's Insane]
I like it~ :)
Could use a bit more hitsounds in the beginning though.
Oh and add "taka1235" to the Tags.
Topic Starter
miccoliasms
> animask

all Done >A</

thx for modding & star ~ :oops:
gdeath
love this anime OP ^^
star
Mystearica
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Topic Starter
miccoliasms
> Mystearica

All Done other than taka's insane XD

thx for modding & star :lol:

i like your map :roll:
minyeob
[taka]
00:46:86-> (3)から(4)までの spacingと (4)から(5)までの spacingか 同一では いけません。(時間的 間隔い 同じでないので)

わたしは このbeatmapを すきです。
幸運を 所ります。>A<

ミ★

If my Japanese bothers you, tell me. I'll use English. :p
taka1235
Topic Starter
miccoliasms
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Furawa
>A< mii~star desu
Starrodkirby86
All fine~

One thing though...Uh, d - d (miccoliasms).osb ?

This file is unneeded. Just for perfection, would you mind deleting this and then doing a full submission? x3 Thank you.
Topic Starter
miccoliasms
> SOGASOGAMO

thx SOGA ~ =A=//

> Starrodkirby86

thx for Mod >w</

I deleted it and fullsub uploaded it!!
ignorethis
Excellent!
Mafiamaster
taka~
01:25:44 (2) - Mirror this with 1 so the distance is the same with 3.

Everything else is fine.
Topic Starter
miccoliasms
> Mafiamaster

fixed!! XD
Mafiamaster
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