Awaken wrote:

我草 一场战争不可避免 魔法QAT们正在成群结队的逼近中

Awaken wrote:

我草 一场战争不可避免 魔法QAT们正在成群结队的逼近中

Awaken wrote:

我草 一场战争不可避免 魔法QAT们正在成群结队的逼近中

Flask wrote:

Awaken wrote:

我草 一场战争不可避免 魔法QAT们正在成群结队的逼近中

Melophobia wrote:

wow this insane is I really want you to replace the soft-hitnormal with this http://puu.sh/bGWHq/9ea6aaaa5b.zip please take this into consideration if by any chance this gets unqualified. ;_;

More importantly, I think source is "劇場版 魔法少女まどかマギカ[新編]叛逆の物語" which is romanized into "Gekijouban Mahoushoujo Madoka*Magica [Shinpen] Hangyaku no Monogatari". (I suggest using the formar as Source, since the romanized one looks terrible. lol)

1. Insane has very inconsistent spacing and spacing changes that don't look logical at all, except the parts with vocal, maybe. They probably follow the song or attempt to do so, but in such manner that the whole map consists of random and hardly predictable speedups and slowdowns. I'd even consider things like 04:27:547 (1) as spacing errors if they didn't have new combo.
   
   
2. It is suggested to use CS 4.5 and OD 6.5 on Insane to make a better spread; having Extra with CS lower than on Insane looks like Extra's CS was set up that way solely to make it more playable and to justify high SV and rapid jumps.
   
   
3. You got at least one slider following vocals in an incorrect way: 01:19:946 (6) should be starting from the white tick before it.

TicClick wrote:

Hello. Unfortunately, I have to disqualify your map due to the following reasons:

[Extra]

1. It has LOTS of overstretched 3/4 sliders that feel forced and needless to use, while most of the sounds and music phrases are plain 1/2, especially the vocals: they r not forced and needless to use, if turn those extended sliders into 1/2 ones, still can't express long consecutive vocal melody. use 3/4 ones can do that better than 1/2 ones. and also it's not a rare example to set rhythms like this, u can find sets which exactly the same ones in lots of lots of ranked maps nowadays.
   
   1. 00:10:520 (2) -
      
   2. 00:21:060 (3,4) -
      
   3. 00:23:493 (4,5) -
      and so on. Note that it goes nearly for all extended sliders.
      

[Insane]

1. A couple of patterns that are very uncomfortable and unnatural to play:
   
   1. 02:36:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - thou i can't find issue here, i still reversed slider 1
      
   2. 03:45:384 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - changed 8,9,10's order into 9,10,8 with better flow and phasis jump to 1 behind
      

Now about suggestions (Insane diff.)

1. Insane has very inconsistent spacing and spacing changes that don't look logical at all, except the parts with vocal, maybe. They probably follow the song or attempt to do so, but in such manner that the whole map consists of random and hardly predictable speedups and slowdowns. I'd even consider things like 04:27:547 (1) as spacing errors if they didn't have new combo. that's also a kind of pattern used in so much ranked maps nowadays, some kind of ds or sv or rhythm shifting noticed by nc
   
   
2. It is suggested to use CS 4.5 and OD 6.5 on Insane to make a better spread; having Extra with CS lower than on Insane looks like Extra's CS was set up that way solely to make it more playable and to justify high SV and rapid jumps. changed
   
   
3. You got at least one slider following vocals in an incorrect way: 01:19:946 (6) should be starting from the white tick before it. changed rhythm here into 2 notes

The rest of the set (Hard, Normal) is surprisingly good. Also note this mapset will be handled by BAT from now on, but you are encouraged to collect some mods first, given the fact that Insane requires.. uh, more attention. hmm, does 32 bats' mods already enough?

P.S. Regarding the source: it's better to use original (Japanese) spelling, as Melo suggested. changed, thou i got really surprised that ranked map's source can't be ranked

TicClick wrote:

Hello. Unfortunately, I have to disqualify your map due to the following reasons:

[notice][Extra]

1. It has LOTS of overstretched 3/4 sliders that feel forced and needless to use, while most of the sounds and music phrases are plain 1/2, especially the vocals:
   
   1. 00:10:520 (2) -
      
   2. 00:21:060 (3,4) -
      
   3. 00:23:493 (4,5) -
      and so on. Note that it goes nearly for all extended sliders.
      

Desperate-kun wrote:

I'd like to add a problem I found when looking through the map:

[Normal]

00:04:033 (2) - I wouldn't use multiple-reverse-sliders in a Normal, especially not in the easiest difficulty. The multiple repeats aren't visible early enough. Try to replace it by two 1/2-sliders and a circle, or simplify the rhythm by using an 1/1-reverse-slider (maybe with a red anchor in the middle, then it has almost the same effect as your current slider has.)
The same applies for the other slider that you used later on. yes i agree with u, checked all reversing sliders and fixed all these patterns (sry Desperate-kun i disapointted u again in lower diffs ;w;

Good luck with re-ranking this mapset! The Extra is very fun to play, as always! thank u ;w;

changed, thou i got really surprised that ranked map's source can't be ranked

Melophobia wrote:

I would like to bother you with metadata issue a little more.. 1) There's Chinese characters in the tags, replace 廢怯少女 with 魔法少女.

xxdeathx wrote:

Melophobia wrote:

I would like to bother you with metadata issue a little more.. 1) There's Chinese characters in the tags, replace 廢怯少女 with 魔法少女.

How did you even notice the difference?

Zare wrote:

Yeah. Don't unrank over stuff that isn't an issue.

I RECOMMEND TO CHANGE [MINAKAMI YUKI] TO MINAKAMI YUKI IN THE SB THANKS

Zare wrote:

i really agree what those said, and that's what exactly why i or other mappers use 3/4 sliders for beats like that. my bad english just can't express this, thx those and Zare for state this point of view clearly ;w;

Yeah. Don't unrank over stuff that isn't an issue.
Unrank over shit rhythms such as
01:04:033 (2) -
01:09:912 (2) -
01:11:939 (1) -
03:24:709 (1,2) -
because these are actually bad
the sliders ending on blue ticks in order to emphasize vocals or violin melodys are NOT. yeah, maybe that should be a note to emphasis the vocal beat at the end, thou idk why people can't accept it while others do it in their maps as well

Frostmourne wrote:

Zare wrote:

Yeah. Don't unrank over stuff that isn't an issue.

This makes me giggle when I see people perceive that 3/4 extended slider is being used for emphasizing the vocal where the music doesn't present. plz frosty... i know u hate that kind of stuff, but in this song, 1/2 ones r not that good as well... and that kind of way to set rhythms is really common ones in ranked maps ;w;

DakeDekaane wrote:

It's not just about the extended sliders, it's about the abuse of them, I mean, I don't like this "technique" but I don't say you must not use them at all, they could be used, but sparingly, because when you abuse of this, the ones that really could fit gets lost, as they wouldn't be that "unique". i know lots of mappers don't agree with that even bats like u, thou i still wanna keep them... ;w;

00:10:114 (1,2,3) - 00:14:979 (1,2,3) - uhm, I can see a lot of inconsistencies here, despite the music being similar. uh... must similiar song's part be set with similiar rhythm? orz
01:05:959 (7) - Also there's this kinda random triples, some of them are really intrusive and doesn't compliment the song at all, if you wanted to emphasize this, a bigger jump would've been better. 01:05:655 (6,7,1) - this pattern is just like 02:33:425 (8,9,1) - as a maybe consistencies thing or trick in this map?
01:25:114 (5) - This could be better as a 1/2 slider as you're passing over a stronger beat. i can agree with this, changed
01:26:331 (4) - ^ changed as well, and arranged 01:26:736 (1,2,3) - 's position to give a better ds setting with testing
02:11:736 (1,2) - I find this as a cool alternative when you want to create a hold feeling. various patterns maybe, people can select by themselves imo w
02:31:196 - 02:50:655 - This part is ridiculous, song isn't that dense on beats yet you have a lot of 1/4 stuff. just same ones as i mentioned

This is just some of the things I caught on first look, so take this just as my point of view. ok. thou actually i know DakeDekaane u hate 1/4 everywhere, still thx if u can accept them even exist
Good luck. >.<

Melophobia wrote:

I love how you ignored my suggestion. i'm so sorry that i haven't reply ur mods and even forgot to give a check, i apologize, seriously. plz give a chance to explain: when i check those unqualified issues, it's about 4:30 a.m. in cn time zone and i'm just too tired to give a move. it's my bad to post those feedback in a hurry and just missed ur words... i'm sure there's something wrong with me at that time orz, plz forgive me ;w;

changed, thou i got really surprised that ranked map's source can't be ranked

Things ain't what they used to be, there's a good chance that they have something wrong (Apparently in this case the source was just overlooked though) Keep in mind that you shouldn't refer to ranked maps blindly. i see, next time i'll take metadata's setting in detail checks to make sure nothing goes wrong before ranking

I would like to bother you with metadata issue a little more..
1) There's Chinese characters in the tags, replace 廢怯少女 with 魔法少女. http://puu.sh/bHyNJ/f2792bc0a6.jpg ←the original title here lol, thou i know it's "魔法" but look at this words! it's really like 廢怯 www. and another thing, "魔法" in japanese is still written as "魔法" in chinese, it's just that odd font to force me change this... if "魔法" is ok as it's true meaning in that title and to the rank system in tags, ofc why not fix this w
2)"Yuki" is duplicate, remove one of them. fixed
3) Add the romanized source; Gekijouban Mahoushoujo Madoka Magica [Shinpen] Hangyaku no Monogatari" into the tags. These pretty much put every metadata in order. fixed
Good luck on the way. :3 apologize to u again thou orz

Minakami Yuki wrote:

I RECOMMEND TO CHANGE [MINAKAMI YUKI] TO MINAKAMI YUKI IN THE SB THANKS

changed, yuki moe~

kamisamaaa wrote:

If HW use all 1/2 rhythm instead of 3/4, this map will not be a HW style.

kamisamaaa wrote:

If HW use all 1/2 rhythm instead of 3/4, this map will not be a HW style.

Guu wrote:

If 3/4 sliders were replaced by 1/2 ones, I won't love this map so much.

Kodora wrote:

Guu wrote:

If 3/4 sliders were replaced by 1/2 ones, I won't love this map so much.