https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2086821http://puu.sh/bTRUG.osrExtra00:56:331 (1,2) - This is difficult to guess and estimate which position is landing on. The previous rhythm on 00:53:898 (1,2,3) - guides that making 1/2 is the best and is corresponding.
02:33:425 (8,9,1) - This flows quite difficult to move and feels forceful to do. Reducing its spacing to the like on 01:05:655 (6,7,1) - is better. (1.4x)
03:14:574 (1,1) - make them close to each other? possible to do it? if so, 03:15:790 (4,1) - this can be left because you fixed 03:14:574 (1,1) - so it guides players this direction
03:41:736 (1,2) - make them close to each other as same as 03:39:304 (1,2) - or if you don't want that close,
use around 2.3x as 03:40:520 (1,2) - did
It's nonsensical to have it end and force players to jump from 03:41:736 (1) - to 03:42:141 (2) - on such spacing. It's too easy to get x100 like a random.
Something like this is totally better and more comfortable to play.
03:42:953 (1,2) - same as above, make them closer
03:44:168 (1) - ctrl+h absolutely gives a better flow
04:00:587 (x) - should be a note and don't make jump like that, use this instead
04:01:601 (1) - shorten this slider by 1/4 to follow a significant sound of drum on 04:01:804. Following vocal here is like following something you can't predict as well as 00:56:331 (1,2) -
04:02:412 (1,2) - same as above, and remove new combo on 04:03:020 (1) - after fixing
04:31:601 (1,2,1,2) - There is no need to make the last part cruel and break the combo just to piss people off.
You can adjust this way and let it flow with the 04:30:790 (1,2,1,2) - you did.
I expect you to fix
everything above. They are all of my critical playability concerns that I will never qualify anything containing these.
If you did fix everything above, I could be able to do something with this map after this.
HanzeR wrote:
Everyone keeps saying this is a calm song lol, its like you guys can't listen and feel the power that the song has and that this map is taking advantage of.
Mapping isn't just putting notes in time with the music, mapping is about feeling, and Hollow Wings is a mapper for your heart.
I thought you were joking though, but it seems I can agree with you somehow.