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Nekomata Master+ - Nightbird Lost Wing [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 3월 25일 화요일 at 오전 11:27:10

Artist: Nekomata Master+
Title: Nightbird Lost Wing
Source: DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags: TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BPM: 190
Filesize: 5037kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.72 stars, 113 notes)
  2. Insane (4.9 stars, 393 notes)
  3. Leader's Normal (4.28 stars, 155 notes)
  4. Sonnyc's Hard (4.99 stars, 225 notes)
  5. TK'S Muzukashii (4.81 stars, 400 notes)
  6. TK'S Oni (5 stars, 554 notes)
Download: Nekomata Master+ - Nightbird Lost Wing
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Easy - Done!
Normal - Done! By Leader Added 2014-02-16 00:09
Hard - Done! By Sonnyc Added 2014-02-16 23:48
Insane - Done!
TK's Muzu, Oni - Done! By TKSalt
[MOD History]
  1. 2014-02-05 ritsu-tanaika, Revo STANDARD MOD
  2. 2014-02-06 pishifat STANDARD MOD
  3. 2014-02-07 [Navy], Zero__wind STANDARD MOD
  4. 2014-02-16 KoreaPenguin STANDARD IRC MOD
  5. 2014-02-17 Freya STANDARD MOD
  6. 2014-02-18 ts8zs STANDARD, TAIKO MOD
  7. 2014-02-20 Neta STANDARD MOD
  8. 2014-02-22 Inyuschan, [Twinkle] STANDARD MOD
  9. 2014-03-09 Sonico Makaron STANDARD MOD
  10. 2014-03-13 bbj0920 TAIKO MOD
  11. 2014-03-22 Cancel STANDARD MOD
  12. 2014-03-23 Byakugan249 STANDARD MOD
  13. 2014-03-25 JeZag STANDARD MOD
TOTAL 17 MODs 15 STANDARD MODs || 2 TAIKO MODs ||
TKS
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

TKSalt wrote:

go! 8-)
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar
I'm so happy for fast mapping! Thanks! :D
ritsu-tanaika
m4m

EASY

try increasing DS to 1.1 to avoid the overlaps and tight spacing between notes

00:46:260 (3,4) - change to slider for better flow


01:44:996 (3) - Move down to (152,236) to avoid overlap with circle slider



INSANE

00:08:996 (1) - overlap with 00:08:681 (4) - so I suggest this


00:11:523 (1) - ctrl J and stack it back on top of the stream

00:29:996 (1,2,3,1,2) - pattern is quite confusing since there's so many colors, so remove NC on some of them

00:49:891 (2) - ctrl G for better flow

01:01:654 - add a note here so the stream is consistent of 5

01:35:444 - add note here since the instrument is still going on at this point

hope I helped
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

m4m

EASY

try increasing DS to 1.1 to avoid the overlaps and tight spacing between notes think about that!

00:46:260 (3,4) - change to slider for better flow no!


01:44:996 (3) - Move down to (152,236) to avoid overlap with circle slider fixed!



INSANE

00:08:996 (1) - overlap with 00:08:681 (4) - so I suggest this no!


00:11:523 (1) - ctrl J and stack it back on top of the stream no!

00:29:996 (1,2,3,1,2) - pattern is quite confusing since there's so many colors, so remove NC on some of them remove NC on 00:30:470 (1)

00:49:891 (2) - ctrl G for better flow no!

01:01:654 - add a note here so the stream is consistent of 5 no! there is not rhythm.

01:35:444 - add note here since the instrument is still going on at this point same,no!

hope I helped
thanks! :oops:
Revo
Hi TaMul! I'll try to mod your map. (Just a random mod, or m4m if you want)

[Easy]
  1. 00:37:891 (2) - Isn't this too hard and shocking for a newbie? I suggest you to change it.

[Insane]
  1. 00:28:970 (1) - This isn't put perfectly. Move it to 00:28:996 - with a 1/3 snap.
  2. 00:56:365 (4) - How about making it like below? It fits the background music, but it's just a suggestion, though.
  3. 00:47:365 (2) - Ctrl + G to make it flow better.

I love the hitsounds :)
That's all from me. I hope it helps and hope your map get ranked soon!
Good Luck! :)
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Revo wrote:

Hi TaMul! I'll try to mod your map. (Just a random mod, or m4m if you want)

[Easy]
  1. 00:37:891 (2) - Isn't this too hard and shocking for a newbie? I suggest you to change it.

[Insane]
  1. 00:28:970 (1) - This isn't put perfectly. Move it to 00:28:996 - with a 1/3 snap.
  2. 00:56:365 (4) - How about making it like below? It fits the background music, but it's just a suggestion, though.
  3. 00:47:365 (2) - Ctrl + G to make it flow better.

I love the hitsounds :)
That's all from me. I hope it helps and hope your map get ranked soon!
Good Luck! :)
fixed on last one! thanks!
pishifat
hello from your m4m queue :P

Insane

00:13:102 (2) make this a NC to indicate new slider velocity

01:01:418 (1,2,3,4) hard to read this coming off of the slider. approach circles blend with the slider circle and make things hard to read, along with the irregular rhythm: blanket more visibly i guess would be the easiest way to fix. 01:23:918 (2) does it fine, but i'd say that's because the song is much more predictable there

01:02:996 (5) make this a NC. there's no way to really tell that the slider's gonna be slower than the previous otherwise

01:40:891 (2) this looks fine in the editor, but in actual gameplay, it's kind of off center due to the auto-blanket thing. i'd suggest just doing this to keep symmetry:

01:45:312 (2) move to x:232 y:248 to have super awesome lined up proprelynes blahbalhablh


Easy

00:20:996 (4) this note is pretty close to the bottom border, i think you should make it higher up :P

01:14:681 (1) also pretty close to the bottom border

01:20:996 (1,2) avoid the overlap :/

01:34:260 (2) this note just doesn't fit with teh song

01:39:944 (1) just personal opinion here, having the note centered inside of the other slider and curving like it does looks bad. having it instead bend around one of the end points of the slider or not bend at all would be better.

01:45:628 (4) maybe make this a new combo just because it's the last note of the song and the clap hitsound emphasizes it. your choice there though :P


also can't mod taiko so i'll ignore those :P
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

pishifat wrote:

hello from your m4m queue :P

Insane

00:13:102 (2) make this a NC to indicate new slider velocity

01:01:418 (1,2,3,4) hard to read this coming off of the slider. approach circles blend with the slider circle and make things hard to read, along with the irregular rhythm: blanket more visibly i guess would be the easiest way to fix. 01:23:918 (2) does it fine, but i'd say that's because the song is much more predictable there

01:02:996 (5) make this a NC. there's no way to really tell that the slider's gonna be slower than the previous otherwise

01:40:891 (2) this looks fine in the editor, but in actual gameplay, it's kind of off center due to the auto-blanket thing. i'd suggest just doing this to keep symmetry:

01:45:312 (2) move to x:232 y:248 to have super awesome lined up proprelynes blahbalhablh


Easy

00:20:996 (4) this note is pretty close to the bottom border, i think you should make it higher up :P

01:14:681 (1) also pretty close to the bottom border

01:20:996 (1,2) avoid the overlap :/

01:34:260 (2) this note just doesn't fit with teh song

01:39:944 (1) just personal opinion here, having the note centered inside of the other slider and curving like it does looks bad. having it instead bend around one of the end points of the slider or not bend at all would be better.

01:45:628 (4) maybe make this a new combo just because it's the last note of the song and the clap hitsound emphasizes it. your choice there though :P


also can't mod taiko so i'll ignore those :P
some fixed! thanks!
NavyYa
안녕하세요~
M4M 신청해볼께요..

3달만에 하는거라 도움이 안되실수도 ㅠㅠ


[Easy]

00:36:786 (1,2,3) - 1번노트랑 2번노트 박자가 약간 까다로운데
1번슬라이더에 리버스 다시는걸 추천합니다

01:33:628 (1,2) - 이것도 긴거 하나로 묶으심이..

노트 배치 진짜 잘하시네요 존경합니다

[Insane]

불필요한 3연타가 좀 많은것..같아요
히트사운드 볼륨을 높이시면 좀 괜찮을듯

00:13:312 (3,1) - 간격에 비해 점프가 너무넓은데 3번 슬라이더 끝에 노트를 붙여주시면 될거같아요


00:15:312 (2) - 이것만 점프를 좀 넣으시는 건 어떤가요?


00:38:365 (2,3,4,5,1) - 리듬이 이상한데 평소처럼 해주시는게


01:02:996 (1,1) - 슬라이더 대신 스피너를 빨리넣고 끝내는게 좋아보여요



01:36:312 (1) - 01:36:154 <<여기서 시작해야할것같은데..어렵네요 ㅠㅠ
01:41:365 (1) - 이것도..반박자느린느낌


태고는 모딩을못하기에..ㅠ
여기까지 할께요

Good Luck~ :)
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

[Navy] wrote:

안녕하세요~
M4M 신청해볼께요..

3달만에 하는거라 도움이 안되실수도 ㅠㅠ


[Easy]

00:36:786 (1,2,3) - 1번노트랑 2번노트 박자가 약간 까다로운데
1번슬라이더에 리버스 다시는걸 추천합니다 3번 슬라이더 반복 넣었어요~

01:33:628 (1,2) - 이것도 긴거 하나로 묶으심이..PASS! :P

노트 배치 진짜 잘하시네요 존경합니다

[Insane]

불필요한 3연타가 좀 많은것..같아요
히트사운드 볼륨을 높이시면 좀 괜찮을듯

00:13:312 (3,1) - 간격에 비해 점프가 너무넓은데 3번 슬라이더 끝에 노트를 붙여주시면 될거같아요 PASS! 이정도는 괜찮을 거라고 봐요ㅎ :P


00:15:312 (2) - 이것만 점프를 좀 넣으시는 건 어떤가요? PASS! :P


00:38:365 (2,3,4,5,1) - 리듬이 이상한데 평소처럼 해주시는게 PASS! :P


01:02:996 (1,1) - 슬라이더 대신 스피너를 빨리넣고 끝내는게 좋아보여요 그건 생각해봐야겠어요~ :roll:



01:36:312 (1) - 01:36:154 <<여기서 시작해야할것같은데..어렵네요 ㅠㅠ
01:41:365 (1) - 이것도..반박자느린느낌 위아래 패스!


태고는 모딩을못하기에..ㅠ
여기까지 할께요

Good Luck~ :)
감사합니다 ;)
Zero__wind
Hi, m4m from your queue
I unfortunately lost my mod post cause my pc sunddenly shut itself for unknown reason so I'm trying to writing it again, sorry if I lost patience...
Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
may add muted sliderslide

Insane
00:04:102 (1,2,3) - misused drum sample, should be at 00:04:260 - and 00:04:733 - instead, same thing happened in the first part, like 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - and so on, plz fix them by yourself
00:07:733 (1) - may drum at end, also drum at 00:08:839 (5) -
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - drum at 1's end, 2's end (not on head) and 3's end
00:13:890 (6,7) - whistle fits better than drum, for these two notes
00:14:681 (3,4) - CTRL+G for better flow, as 00:14:049 (1,2) - is clockwise flow
00:19:418 (2) - clap fits nicely, 00:19:733 (4,5) - also for their heads, and for 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all these beats, I think you could add clap to them all and gradually increase volume from a lower state, that would be cool
00:23:365 (1) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:25:654 (2,3) - wrong snap again, should be snapped on 1/6, and you should use 3 circles instead of 2, or a 1/6 reverse slider

00:27:154 (2) - not a good rhythm, better to use circle at 00:27:154 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:27:312 -
00:28:891 - should have a circle with clap here, forming basic rhythm, and 00:28:970 (1) - wrong snapped, should be on 1/3, check the picture below
00:29:839 - not good to leave it blank as there's clear audioable sound here, recommend to add a circle at 00:29:207 (3) - 's end
00:31:418 (9,3) - not a nice-looking overlap, move 3 to (184,248)?
00:33:312 (3) - should have a clap at end as well
00:35:523 (5,1) - better exchange NC, cause it's 5 that actually starts a new stanza
00:36:312 (4,5,6) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6, see the pic below
00:38:996 (4,5) - correct!
00:42:470 (3) - better to shorten to a 1/2 slider and you don't need to use tick sound
00:45:786 (1) - should use whistle instead according to music
00:46:102 (3) - also clap at here sounds nice
00:46:418 (5,6,7) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:47:365 (2) - need finish on head, just like 00:46:891 (1,3) -
00:49:260 (8,9,1) - wrong snap again, should be on 1/6
00:50:839 (4) - missed a whistle
00:52:418 (2) - missed whistle on head
00:52:891 (3) - replace the clap with finish, it should be with the same sound as 1,2

00:53:365 (4) - better to use a circle at 00:53:365 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:53:523 - for better rhythm
00:53:996 (2) - missed a whistle
00:54:786 (2) - finish at end, same sound as 00:54:470 -

00:54:786 (2,3) - better blanket?
00:56:365 (4,5) - better to use claps for their ends instead
00:57:470 (4) - missed finish
00:59:207 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/4, and you should use 4 circles instead of 3
00:59:996 (2) - whistle + finish on head
01:01:418 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:02:523 (4) - missing finish on head
01:12:944 (4,5) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:14:049 (4,5) - clap on 4's head and 5's head and tail?
01:18:786 (3) - missing clap on head
01:19:418 (3) - ^
01:24:391 - it would be cool to add a circle here, stacking on 01:24:470 (2) - 's head
01:29:996 (1) - not good rhythm, use circle at 01:29:996 - and 1/2 slider at 01:30:154 -
01:31:418 (2) - finish on head, like 01:31:102 (1) -
01:34:496 - same as 01:24:391 -

Easy
00:40:891 (3) - missing clap on head and end
00:50:839 - tick whistle here
00:54:470 (1) - also finish at reverse point
01:11:523 (2) - missing clap at end, maybe also on head
01:21:944 (2) - missing clap at end
01:26:996 (3) - ^

01:26:996 (3,4,5,1) - not really a natural flow
01:35:523 (3) - whistle at end

That's all.....
Good luck
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue
I unfortunately lost my mod post cause my pc sunddenly shut itself for unknown reason so I'm trying to writing it again, sorry if I lost patience...
Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
may add muted sliderslide

Insane
00:04:102 (1,2,3) - misused drum sample, should be at 00:04:260 - and 00:04:733 - instead, same thing happened in the first part, like 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - and so on, plz fix them by yourself
00:07:733 (1) - may drum at end, also drum at 00:08:839 (5) -
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - drum at 1's end, 2's end (not on head) and 3's end
00:13:890 (6,7) - whistle fits better than drum, for these two notes
00:14:681 (3,4) - CTRL+G for better flow, as 00:14:049 (1,2) - is clockwise flow
00:19:418 (2) - clap fits nicely, 00:19:733 (4,5) - also for their heads, and for 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all these beats, I think you could add clap to them all and gradually increase volume from a lower state, that would be cool
00:23:365 (1) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:25:654 (2,3) - wrong snap again, should be snapped on 1/6, and you should use 3 circles instead of 2, or a 1/6 reverse slider

00:27:154 (2) - not a good rhythm, better to use circle at 00:27:154 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:27:312 -
00:28:891 - should have a circle with clap here, forming basic rhythm, and 00:28:970 (1) - wrong snapped, should be on 1/3, check the picture below
00:29:839 - not good to leave it blank as there's clear audioable sound here, recommend to add a circle at 00:29:207 (3) - 's end
00:31:418 (9,3) - not a nice-looking overlap, move 3 to (184,248)?
00:33:312 (3) - should have a clap at end as well
00:35:523 (5,1) - better exchange NC, cause it's 5 that actually starts a new stanza
00:36:312 (4,5,6) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6, see the pic below
00:38:996 (4,5) - correct!
00:42:470 (3) - better to shorten to a 1/2 slider and you don't need to use tick sound
00:45:786 (1) - should use whistle instead according to music
00:46:102 (3) - also clap at here sounds nice
00:46:418 (5,6,7) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:47:365 (2) - need finish on head, just like 00:46:891 (1,3) -
00:49:260 (8,9,1) - wrong snap again, should be on 1/6
00:50:839 (4) - missed a whistle
00:52:418 (2) - missed whistle on head
00:52:891 (3) - replace the clap with finish, it should be with the same sound as 1,2

00:53:365 (4) - better to use a circle at 00:53:365 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:53:523 - for better rhythm
00:53:996 (2) - missed a whistle
00:54:786 (2) - finish at end, same sound as 00:54:470 -

00:54:786 (2,3) - better blanket?
00:56:365 (4,5) - better to use claps for their ends instead
00:57:470 (4) - missed finish
00:59:207 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/4, and you should use 4 circles instead of 3
00:59:996 (2) - whistle + finish on head
01:01:418 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:02:523 (4) - missing finish on head
01:12:944 (4,5) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:14:049 (4,5) - clap on 4's head and 5's head and tail?
01:18:786 (3) - missing clap on head
01:19:418 (3) - ^
01:24:391 - it would be cool to add a circle here, stacking on 01:24:470 (2) - 's head
01:29:996 (1) - not good rhythm, use circle at 01:29:996 - and 1/2 slider at 01:30:154 -
01:31:418 (2) - finish on head, like 01:31:102 (1) -
01:34:496 - same as 01:24:391 -

Easy
00:40:891 (3) - missing clap on head and end
00:50:839 - tick whistle here
00:54:470 (1) - also finish at reverse point
01:11:523 (2) - missing clap at end, maybe also on head
01:21:944 (2) - missing clap at end
01:26:996 (3) - ^

01:26:996 (3,4,5,1) - not really a natural flow think about that...! pass!
01:35:523 (3) - whistle at end

That's all.....
Good luck
Reaaaaally nice mod!! all fixed! Without one Thank you for detail mod!!!!

Will you mod Normal,Hard Diff when i get GD? ;)
Leader
Normal
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nightbird lost wing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:Reflec Beat
Tags:TKSalt
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"356141.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Leader wrote:

Normal
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Creator:TaMul
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Thanks! :D
koreapenguin
Freya
Hi TaMul here's your M4M


  • [General]
  1. The source sould be "DanceDanceRevolution (2013)" Naoyuki Sato arrange this song originally for DDR here is the source
  2. and move reflec beat colette to the tags since it's appearance in reflec beat for promote DDR OST, you can read here
  3. also add autumn on the tag
  4. inconsistence widescreen support on insane and taiko oni

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:04:260 (2,3) - how about rotate like this? http://puu.sh/6ZBGC.jpg
    i think its better, flows good with (1)
  2. 00:08:839 (5) - NC should be here since there's rhytym change from drum to piano
  3. 00:25:628 (2) - ^
  4. 00:26:523 (9) - ^
  5. 00:40:418 (6) - ^
  6. 00:11:207 (4) - NC should be here piano to drum
  7. 00:13:891 (6,7) - change this to with clap, your whistle too much bass and doesn't fit with piano i think
  8. 00:16:418 (3,1) - i think it's better if you reduce the spacing, jump is not fit with clam part like that
  9. 00:19:023 (4) - it's better you try ctrl + G, the sounds fit for jump
  10. 00:20:996 (1,2,3,4) - this one is sure confusing, it's okay you give jump there but it's better if you put same spacing
  11. 00:22:575 (3) - i think this slider unrankable, correct me if i'm wrong
  12. 00:22:891 (1,2,3) - it's better if you put (3) stack with (1) rather than (2) because the sounds fit for such jump
  13. 00:25:628 (2,3,4) - i think it's still better if you put 2 notes stack but if it's three i think it's really confusing
  14. 00:28:260 (2) - ctrl + G for better flow, and this 00:28:575 (3) too
  15. 00:33:628 (1,5) - give some hitsound here, because of piano sounds, finish is okay
  16. 00:34:260 (1,2,3) - the spacing change is too way different despite same sounds, if dont want to change spacing, it's safe you give NC on 00:34:575 (2) to emphasize spacing change
  17. 00:35:996 (3) - i think this slider repeat doesn't fit with the song, i clearly hear piano sound just on here 00:36:154, and before that i hear nothing, it;s better if you put note there
  18. 00:39:102 (5,1) - the flow is way too rigid for 2/3 jump, when you slide down and suddenly jump up. how about ctrl + G 00:39:102 (5), it's way more better
  19. 00:46:418 (5) - NC here since there's change from 1/2 to 1/6
  20. 00:49:260 (8) - ^
  21. 00:58:891 (4) - ^
  22. 00:49:418 (1,2,3) - i think it's better if you give Ctrl + G on each slider, for emphasize drum obviously
  23. 00:55:102 (3,4) - because i think this one is overmap, it's better if you ctrl+ G this one for sake of spacing, so it's not really confusing
  24. 01:10:575 (6,7,8) - you put stack there despite there's rhytym difference, so add NC at (7)
  25. 01:20:681 (4,5,1) - i think that note is 1/6, just guessing though, it's safe if you ask experienced mapper

    it's nice insane

  • [Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:04:418 (2) - change to clap then change 00:04:575 (3) tail to whistle, i thinks sounds better
  2. 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:08:996 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:10:733 (1) - i thinks it's nice if you put soft whistle
  5. 00:17:365 - i hear drum here ad note please
  6. 00:17:996 - ^
  7. 00:18:470 (7) - move it far abit, so flows better with next slider http://puu.sh/6ZEtl.jpg
  8. 00:29:049 (3) - i think it's wrong snapped, must be 1/6, look at insane, or i think i know your intention to put notes between 2 1/6 beat notes
    i don't really good at this, so ask another experienced mapper maybe, or if you think it's okay leave it as is
  9. 00:59:996 (2,3) - at first glance i think it's 1/2, it sure confusing, consider unstack, yah if you say no make the stack more perfect
  10. 01:05:839 ~ 01:10:812 . i don't feel right with the clap at ths part, make it sounds like insane maybe?

    i feel a bit don't right with the rhytym on this diff, but since i'm not really experienced with rhytym itself maybe we leave as it is, or ask next modder

  • [Leader's Normal]
  1. 01:09:627 (3) - aibat said it's unsnaped
  2. 00:29:049 - i think you should start slider here, it's less confusing imo because 1/6 triplet piano sounds
  3. 00:32:996 (6) - i don't feel right with that default clap, how about make soft:c1 clap, its more better
  4. 00:44:996 (2) - i don't hear any sound at all here, how about move to 00:44:996 (2) -
  5. 01:05:839 - same with hard, and i feel the clap is inconsistent too

    well i think it's solid normal diff
  • [Easy]
  1. that is my 3rd time recheck buti didn't find anything error at all, so its okay
    or maybe i'm too noob lol
I can't mod taiko that too well made, so sorry.
goodluck TaMul, i hope this mapset ranked, nice song after all
Sonnyc
TaMul will take care of mine, and I think I've put in hitsounds quite randomly lol
Still, I think 1/6 rhythm will be inappropriate for a hard.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Freya wrote:

Hi TaMul here's your M4M


  • [General]
  1. The source sould be "DanceDanceRevolution (2013)" Naoyuki Sato arrange this song originally for DDR here is the source
  2. and move reflec beat colette to the tags since it's appearance in reflec beat for promote DDR OST, you can read here
  3. also add autumn on the tag
  4. inconsistence widescreen support on insane and taiko oni
    Fixed! all of them.

  • [Insane]
  1. 00:04:260 (2,3) - how about rotate like this? http://puu.sh/6ZBGC.jpg no, i don' want to change. :? but not bad!
    i think its better, flows good with (1)
  2. 00:08:839 (5) - NC should be here since there's rhytym change from drum to piano no,pass
  3. 00:25:628 (2) - ^ ^
  4. 00:26:523 (9) - ^ ^
  5. 00:40:418 (6) - ^ ^
  6. 00:11:207 (4) - NC should be here piano to drum sorry, pass :P
  7. 00:13:891 (6,7) - change this to with clap, your whistle too much bass and doesn't fit with piano i think ok, not bad
  8. 00:16:418 (3,1) - i think it's better if you reduce the spacing, jump is not fit with clam part like that no,pass
  9. 00:19:023 (4) - it's better you try ctrl + G, the sounds fit for jump ok, not bad
  10. 00:20:996 (1,2,3,4) - this one is sure confusing, it's okay you give jump there but it's better if you put same spacing sorry, pass
  11. 00:22:575 (3) - i think this slider unrankable, correct me if i'm wrong it's not unrankable because there is not stacked sliderpoint. it's no problem! :)
  12. 00:22:891 (1,2,3) - it's better if you put (3) stack with (1) rather than (2) because the sounds fit for such jump no, i want to stack (2),(3). because of similiar sound.
  13. 00:25:628 (2,3,4) - i think it's still better if you put 2 notes stack but if it's three i think it's really confusing yup, but i try to put 3 notes. if another people mod about this, i'll chagne!
  14. 00:28:260 (2) - ctrl + G for better flow, and this 00:28:575 (3) too no,pass but i fixed another pattern!
  15. 00:33:628 (1,5) - give some hitsound here, because of piano sounds, finish is okay fixed!
  16. 00:34:260 (1,2,3) - the spacing change is too way different despite same sounds, if dont want to change spacing, it's safe you give NC on 00:34:575 (2) to emphasize spacing change no,pass
  17. 00:35:996 (3) - i think this slider repeat doesn't fit with the song, i clearly hear piano sound just on here 00:36:154, and before that i hear nothing, it;s better if you put note there fixed!
  18. 00:39:102 (5,1) - the flow is way too rigid for 2/3 jump, when you slide down and suddenly jump up. how about ctrl + G 00:39:102 (5), it's way more better sorry,pass! :P
  19. 00:46:418 (5) - NC here since there's change from 1/2 to 1/6 no,pass
  20. 00:49:260 (8) - ^ no,pass
  21. 00:58:891 (4) - ^ no,pass
  22. 00:49:418 (1,2,3) - i think it's better if you give Ctrl + G on each slider, for emphasize drum obviously fixed!
  23. 00:55:102 (3,4) - because i think this one is overmap, it's better if you ctrl+ G this one for sake of spacing, so it's not really confusing no,pass
  24. 01:10:575 (6,7,8) - you put stack there despite there's rhytym difference, so add NC at (7) no,pass
  25. 01:20:681 (4,5,1) - i think that note is 1/6, just guessing though, it's safe if you ask experienced mapper no,pass

    it's nice insane Thanks! ;)

I can't mod taiko that too well made, so sorry.
goodluck TaMul, i hope this mapset ranked, nice song after all
Thanks mod!
ts8zs
[I]
00:09:312 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345614
00:37:260 (2,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345617
00:42:470 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:42:786 (4) - ^
01:08:996 (4) - blanket
01:26:681 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:45:628 (1,2,3) - a reverse
Good map,Makes me want to make a diff for this,Do you accept insane? :3
[H]
01:00:312 (1) - NC
01:21:312 (2) - Ctrl+G
>01:21:628 (3) - ^
GJ
[N]
00:22:891 (1) - del
>00:21:628 (1) - end at 00:22:891
Try HP3 CS3 AR4 OD3or2?
GJ
[E]
00:28:575 (1) - blanket
00:34:260 (1) - blanket
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:01:102 (1) - ^
01:30:470 (3) - ^
>01:31:733 (2) - copy from^
[Oni]
00:23:365 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - kkd kkddk
00:32:839 (129,130) - kd?
00:57:470 (263,264) - k k
01:25:418 (125,126,127,128,129) - kkdkk?
01:35:523 (197,198,199,200,201) - ^
[Muzu]
00:57:470 (180,181) - k k
um...This make I remenber Nitrome
[Finished]
↓choose one please:3
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

ts8zs wrote:

[I]
00:09:312 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345614 Good! changed!
00:37:260 (2,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345617 Not bad! changed!
00:42:470 (3) - Ctrl+G fixed!
00:42:786 (4) - ^ fixed!
01:08:996 (4) - blanket fixed!
01:26:681 (4) - Ctrl+G sorry, i want to make jump.. :P
01:45:628 (1,2,3) - a reverse fixed!
Good map,Makes me want to make a diff for this,Do you accept insane? :3
Sorry, i don't want to add diff anymore..:( but i can add your diff as non upload.. :P

[E]
00:28:575 (1) - blanket
00:34:260 (1) - blanket
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:01:102 (1) - ^
01:30:470 (3) - ^
>01:31:733 (2) - copy from^
all checked!
Thanks!
TKS

ts8zs wrote:

[Oni]
00:23:365 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - kkd kkddk - i dont like them.
00:32:839 (129,130) - kd? - nope.
00:57:470 (263,264) - k k - i made a contrast with 00:54:470 (254,255,256) -
01:25:418 (125,126,127,128,129) - kkdkk? - nope.
01:35:523 (197,198,199,200,201) - ^ - ^
[Muzu]
00:57:470 (180,181) - k k - same as Oni.
um...This make I remenber Nitrome
thanks for mod.
sorry but i didnt got anything from your mod.
i fixed some timing issues.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Leader
Fixed some, thanks
whee
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags:TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BeatmapID:371438
BeatmapSetID:128070

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@TaMuL: don't bother contacting me, I'll check my diff every two/three mods :3
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Leader wrote:

Fixed some, thanks
whee
osu file format v12

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252,176,31575,2,0,P|300:180|332:192,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,268,32207,2,0,P|259:304|273:335,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,276,32839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,276,32996,2,0,P|72:244|56:188,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,104,33628,5,0,3:0:0:0:
76,104,33944,1,0,3:0:0:0:
76,104,34260,6,0,B|176:56|208:156|340:84,1,240,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,35207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,144,35523,2,0,P|476:208|472:272,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,36154,2,0,P|376:248|380:184,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,124,36786,2,0,P|192:64|92:172,1,300,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,264,37891,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,264,38049,2,0,P|164:268|212:308,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,300,38681,2,0,P|351:265|411:263,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,216,39312,2,0,P|500:152|468:96,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,80,39944,2,0,L|260:68,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,76,40418,6,0,P|196:104|184:144,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,41049,2,0,P|273:189|293:226,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,172,41681,2,0,P|392:192|432:204,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,80,42312,2,0,P|417:74|454:54,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,32,42944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,32,43102,2,0,P|236:32|184:72,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,140,43733,5,0,3:0:0:0:
44,108,44049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,200,44365,6,0,P|68:260|108:320,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,44996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,304,45312,2,0,L|380:296,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,320,45786,6,0,P|396:252|420:148,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,72,46575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,52,46891,5,6,0:0:0:0:
360,52,47365,1,6,0:0:0:0:
340,52,47839,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,52,48312,6,0,B|264:52|264:52|216:88|216:88|152:88,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,88,49418,6,0,P|368:148|348:216,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,49891,2,0,P|228:220|184:260,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,280,50365,2,0,B|224:300|256:360|256:360|284:300|352:284,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,268,51312,6,0,P|488:232|472:120,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,128,51944,6,0,L|304:116,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,52418,2,0,P|224:176|164:184,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,180,52891,2,0,P|44:188|52:328,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,348,53839,6,0,B|224:384|224:316|316:356,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,54470,5,6,0:0:0:0:
368,312,54944,1,6,0:0:0:0:
376,292,55418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,268,55891,6,0,B|324:268|324:268|272:244|272:244|204:244,2,180,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,56996,6,0,P|428:172|408:108,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,104,57470,2,0,P|304:112|256:84,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,56,57944,2,0,P|116:40|60:152,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,220,58891,6,0,P|200:220|252:144,1,180,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,124,59523,6,0,L|424:112,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,136,59996,2,0,P|436:196|464:264,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,292,60470,2,0,L|336:308,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,368,61102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,304,61418,2,0,B|148:304|148:304|96:272|96:272|32:272,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,228,62049,5,6,0:0:0:0:
16,208,62523,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,188,62996,1,14,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63154,12,0,64575,0:0:0:0:
192,120,65839,6,0,L|312:120,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,66470,2,0,P|404:232|388:292,1,120,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,356,67102,2,0,L|196:356,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,292,67733,1,0,3:0:0:0:
124,292,68365,6,0,P|108:234|124:177,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,116,68996,2,0,L|316:116,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,180,69628,2,0,P|404:236|384:300,1,120,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,356,70259,2,0,L|196:356,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,292,70891,6,0,P|96:216|64:192,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,104,71523,2,0,L|12:48,2,60,0|0|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,72154,2,0,L|248:120,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,72786,2,0,L|176:204,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,280,73418,2,0,P|152:324|216:336,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,340,74049,2,0,L|376:340,2,60,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74681,12,0,75628,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75944,5,6,0:0:0:0:
96,284,76260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,244,76575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,76891,2,0,P|308:336|364:316,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,248,77523,2,0,L|444:128,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,319,78470,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,248,78786,2,0,B|212:212|212:280|120:244,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,232,79418,2,0,P|40:152|88:80,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,80207,2,0,P|256:148|336:112,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,88,80996,5,6,0:0:0:0:
464,176,81312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,268,81628,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,272,81944,2,0,P|272:284|228:332,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,360,82575,2,0,L|28:384,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,83523,6,0,P|148:228|80:212,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,224,83996,2,0,P|28:164|52:104,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,88,84470,2,0,L|216:80,1,120,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,56,85102,2,0,L|320:-4,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,148,85733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,196,86049,5,4,0:0:0:0:
432,140,86365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,52,86681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,56,86996,2,0,P|244:52|192:84,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,156,87628,2,0,P|60:128|32:80,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,88575,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,280,88891,2,0,B|368:256|368:320|452:284,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,264,89523,2,0,P|460:192|480:92,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,32,90312,2,0,P|316:24|252:84,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,91102,5,6,0:0:0:0:
248,268,91418,1,12,0:0:0:0:
340,296,91733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,92049,2,0,P|420:168|392:116,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,92,92681,2,0,L|184:76,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,184,93628,6,0,P|344:240|320:304,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,304,94102,2,0,P|216:288|156:328,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,94575,2,0,P|72:268|84:176,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,104,95365,2,0,P|240:56|332:136,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96154,12,0,98681,0:0:0:0:
256,168,99944,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,101207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101365,12,0,103733,0:0:0:0:
256,216,104365,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,105628,2,0,L|256:108,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

@TaMuL: don't bother contacting me, I'll check my diff every two/three mods :3
Updated! Sorry, I thought you didn't know! :P
OverPower
안녕하세요! M4M 보고왔습니다.

앞서서, 타물님 배치 진짜 대단하시네요.

Easy


00:37:891 (2) - 먼저 이부분 입니다. 제 개인적인 생각으로, 초보분들에겐 이런 짦은슬라이드가 낯설어보이지 않을까 합니다.


00:38:049 - 여기에 서클 한개와,

00:38:365 - 서클 또하나,

00:38:681 - 여기에서 00:38:996 - 여기까지 슬라이드를 넣어도 꽤 괜찮지 않을까 합니다.


01:20:996 (1) - Easy 곡에서 이렇게 슬라이드와 01:21:944 (2) - 슬라이드를 겹치게 두어도 애매모호 한데요. 초보유저 분들깨서는 혼란을 줄수도 있죠.


01:45:944 (4) - 맨 마지막 서클입니다. 마지막에 이렇게 맨밑에 장식하면 끝나는 분위기가 아닌것 같은데요. (어디까지나 개인적인 생각이지만)

x:384 y:272 에 배치 하셔도 나쁘진 않을것 같네요. 기존 prev와 크게 차이도 없고, 옴겨봤자 안좋은건 아니니까요.


Normal

00:03:944 (1) - 스핀은 대부분 가운데에서 돌립니다. 하지만 이 슬라이드는 가운데와 멀리 떨어져있네요. 노말과 안어울리는 느낌일까요?


01:14:049 (6) - 그전 슬라이드와 동선이 너무 단순합니다. 다른 배치는 완벽하지만, 슬라이드와 리핏슬라이드를 같은 동선에 두게되면 말그대로 단순해 보

이지 않을까 합니다. 리핏슬라이드를 위로 세우거나, 아니면 반대로, 아니면 그전 슬라이드 꺾어질때쯤 사이에 둬도 나쁘지 않습니다.

01:25:102 (4) - 이런식으로 리핏슬라이드를 좀더 자유롭게 두어도 된다는 뜻이죠.


Insane

배치도 정말 좋으시고, 보는내내 입만 벌리고 있었네요.

딱 집을때가 없습니다. 브레이크 타임대신

01:38:839 - 이런 여백을 사용하셨고, 01:05:523 - 중간중간 유저들을 짦게라도 쉬게 해주고픈 느낌도 촥 왔네요.

저도 이런 정신없는 곡에 스핀조차없고, 하다못해 짦은 여백도 없는곡을 싫어하는편 입니다.

타블렛 유저다 보니까 저는 손에 땀이생겨서 자꾸 펜이 밑으로 내려가는군요.. ㅠㅠ

펜을 다시 잡을수있는 시간이 필요하기 때문에.. 이런식의곡 정말 좋아하구요.


하루빨리 랭크되셨으면 좋겠습니다! (애용할깨요)

포럼에 리플 날리고 가겠습니다!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Translation for Leader

OverPower wrote:

Normal

00:03:944 (1) - 스핀은 대부분 가운데에서 돌립니다. 하지만 이 슬라이드는 가운데와 멀리 떨어져있네요. 노말과 안어울리는 느낌일까요?


01:14:049 (6) - 그전 슬라이드와 동선이 너무 단순합니다. 다른 배치는 완벽하지만, 슬라이드와 리핏슬라이드를 같은 동선에 두게되면 말그대로 단순해 보

이지 않을까 합니다. 리핏슬라이드를 위로 세우거나, 아니면 반대로, 아니면 그전 슬라이드 꺾어질때쯤 사이에 둬도 나쁘지 않습니다.

01:25:102 (4) - 이런식으로 리핏슬라이드를 좀더 자유롭게 두어도 된다는 뜻이죠.
00:03:944 (1) - Most People spin a spinner on the center. But this slider is far from the center. Maybe It doesn't feat as Normal Diff..?

01:14:049 (6) - compare with previous slider, traffic line is so simple. Another placement is perfect, but if the slider and repeat slider are laid by same traffic line, it maybe seems to simple. try to stand the repeat slider, or the other way. Or lay between previous slider is snapped.

01:25:102 (4) - Like this, make freely a repeat slider.
>>It's just my translation. maybe there is strange sentence.. :oops:
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

OverPower wrote:

안녕하세요! M4M 보고왔습니다.

앞서서, 타물님 배치 진짜 대단하시네요.

Easy


00:37:891 (2) - 먼저 이부분 입니다. 제 개인적인 생각으로, 초보분들에겐 이런 짦은슬라이드가 낯설어보이지 않을까 합니다.


00:38:049 - 여기에 서클 한개와,

00:38:365 - 서클 또하나,

00:38:681 - 여기에서 00:38:996 - 여기까지 슬라이드를 넣어도 꽤 괜찮지 않을까 합니다.
전 그대로가 나을 것 같아요. 전 초보자들한테 자비는 없습니다(?) 고려사항으로만 둘께요! 패스!


01:20:996 (1) - Easy 곡에서 이렇게 슬라이드와 01:21:944 (2) - 슬라이드를 겹치게 두어도 애매모호 한데요. 초보유저 분들깨서는 혼란을 줄수도 있죠. 괜찮습니다. 어느 랭크맵에서도 이런 부분이 없진 않거든요 ㅎ 꼬아두지만 않으면 괜찮다고 봅니다. 패스!


01:45:944 (4) - 맨 마지막 서클입니다. 마지막에 이렇게 맨밑에 장식하면 끝나는 분위기가 아닌것 같은데요. (어디까지나 개인적인 생각이지만)

x:384 y:272 에 배치 하셔도 나쁘진 않을것 같네요. 기존 prev와 크게 차이도 없고, 옴겨봤자 안좋은건 아니니까요.
죄송하지만 패스할께요..겹치는게 영 아니여보여요 ^^;
모딩 감사합니다. 하지만 고친게 없으므로 쿠도스 못 드려요 ㅠ
노멀에서 고친게 나왔으면 쿠도스 드리고요 ^^;
Neta
안녕하세요~ M4M큐 보고 왔습니다

[모딩 전 팁]
우선 기본적으로 슬라이더 모양을 신경 써주셧으면 합니다 http://puu.sh/73w0d.jpg -->http://puu.sh/73w0L.jpg 이런식으로 슬라이더 끝을 중앙에 배치하시면서 깔끔한 슬라이더를 만들면 맵 퀄이 올라가요~


[Easy]
  1. 00:06:470 (2) - http://puu.sh/73vXx.jpg 슬라이더 모양을 이렇게 고쳐주세요
  2. 00:44:365 (1) - ^
  3. 01:26:996 (3) - ^
  4. 우선 배치는 잘 짜셧네요 딱히 흠 잡을게 없는듯 합니다. 슬라이더 모양만 조금 신경써주시면 좋곘어요 겉보기엔 정상이지만 슬라이더선이 이상한 슬라이더가 많습니다

[Leader's Normal]
  1. 00:26:681 (4) - Make slider clearly plz like http://puu.sh/73wmC.jpg
  2. 00:16:575 (1,2,3,4) - you used this patterns but i think it's not good for normal better use distance snap

[Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:08:996 (1,3) - 패턴을 앞과 똑같이 하는게 좋을듯합니다
  2. 01:06:470 (2) - 차라리 노트 2개로 바꾸는게 패턴상 좋지 않을까 싶습니다

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:523 (1) - 위에서 말했듯이 깔끔하게 바꿔주세요
  2. 00:25:418 (1) - 뒤에 1/6 3연타를 쓰셧는데 BPM도 BPM인 만큼 별로 좋은 선택은 아닌듯합니다 슬라이더 같은걸로 대처하시는게 좋을듯해요
  3. 00:43:102 (1) - 첫번째와 동일 이유
  4. 01:26:996 (1) - 음 이건 좀 심하게 틀어졌네요
  5. 01:35:839 (1) - 1번을 스트림 형식으로 EX) http://puu.sh/73x86.jpg 이런식으로 바꿔주세요

허졉한 모딩 죄송합니다

맵 배치가 매우 깔끔하네요 부러울 정도 ㅠㅠ

슬라이더만 조금 신경 써주시면 퀄리티 좋은 맵이 될꺼라 생각합니다
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Neta wrote:

안녕하세요~ M4M큐 보고 왔습니다

[모딩 전 팁]
우선 기본적으로 슬라이더 모양을 신경 써주셧으면 합니다 http://puu.sh/73w0d.jpg -->http://puu.sh/73w0L.jpg 이런식으로 슬라이더 끝을 중앙에 배치하시면서 깔끔한 슬라이더를 만들면 맵 퀄이 올라가요~


[Easy]
  1. 00:06:470 (2) - http://puu.sh/73vXx.jpg 슬라이더 모양을 이렇게 고쳐주세요
  2. 00:44:365 (1) - ^
  3. 01:26:996 (3) - ^
  4. 우선 배치는 잘 짜셧네요 딱히 흠 잡을게 없는듯 합니다. 슬라이더 모양만 조금 신경써주시면 좋곘어요 겉보기엔 정상이지만 슬라이더선이 이상한 슬라이더가 많습니다

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:523 (1) - 위에서 말했듯이 깔끔하게 바꿔주세요
  2. 00:25:418 (1) - 뒤에 1/6 3연타를 쓰셧는데 BPM도 BPM인 만큼 별로 좋은 선택은 아닌듯합니다 슬라이더 같은걸로 대처하시는게 좋을듯해요
  3. 00:43:102 (1) - 첫번째와 동일 이유
  4. 01:26:996 (1) - 음 이건 좀 심하게 틀어졌네요
  5. 01:35:839 (1) - 1번을 스트림 형식으로 EX) http://puu.sh/73x86.jpg 이런식으로 바꿔주세요

허졉한 모딩 죄송합니다

맵 배치가 매우 깔끔하네요 부러울 정도 ㅠㅠ

슬라이더만 조금 신경 써주시면 퀄리티 좋은 맵이 될꺼라 생각합니다
1/6 3연타 부분만 고쳤습니다.^^
Thanks!
Nyukai
Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

o3o - Suggestions
o3o - Highly suggestions

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:839 (1) - Remove NC.
00:07:733 (1) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - ^
00:15:944 (1) - ^
00:20:996 (1) - ^
00:22:733 (5) - Move it to x:360 y:344, then put (6) in the same place, overlapping (5).
00:23:839 (1) - Remove NC.
00:27:628 (3) - I think a curve slider would look better, if you do that move it to x:320 y:20. (:
00:31:418 (5, 1) - Repeat only slider (5). Then move (1) to x:255 y:317 to follow next note.
00:40:418 (1, 2) - Remove NC at (1) and add it to (2).
00:41:681 (1, 2) - ^
00:45:944 (3) - Maybe it would look better if you move it to x:280 y:288, since it's overlapping 00:46:891 (1).
00:51:628 (6) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:96 y:328. :3
01:00:312 (3) - Maybe overlap on (2)? Looks weird for me. >_<
01:14:523 (3) - I think it would have a better flow if you move it to x:288 y:160.

Nice diff. <3

[Insane]

I think AR:9 is too much, consider adding only AR:8. >_<

00:02:523 (1) - Remove NC.
00:28:891 (1) - ^ and add it to 00:29:907 (3).

[Normal]

Better if you add CS:3 instead of CS:4.

[Easy]

CS:2 instead of CS:3 maybe?


That's all, nice mapset and song. :) GL~
[Twinkle]
M4M from your Q
I can only mod stardard. ;w;

[Easy]
01:03:312 (1) - this spinner may close at this point

[Leader's Normal]
00:44:365 (1) - remove NC
00:45:786 (1) - ^
00:51:944 (1) - ^
00:54:470 (1) - ^
00:56:996 (1) - ^
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:25:733 (5) - add nc
01:26:049 (1) - remove nc

[Sonnyc's Hard]
I think the drop sound effect is used too many. u may remove some
01:02:996 (1) - add a note at the starting point of the spinner and put the spinner backwards

[Insane]
00:50:365 (3) - make this slider slow down may fit the rhythm better
01:00:470 (1) - ^

nice song! good luck
Leader
Just fixed two/three things, leaving CS4 and the current combo scheme

diff
osu file format v12

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Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Inyuschan

Inyuschan wrote:

Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

o3o - Suggestions
o3o - Highly suggestions

[Insane]

I think AR:9 is too much, consider adding only AR:8. >_< think about AR 8. i want to make it as AR 9!

00:02:523 (1) - Remove NC. No!
00:28:891 (1) - ^ and add it to 00:29:907 (3). fixed!

[Easy]

CS:2 instead of CS:3 maybe? no, i want to make it CS 2


That's all, nice mapset and song. :) GL~

[box=[Twinkle:1337]]

[Twinkle] wrote:

M4M from your Q
I can only mod stardard. ;w;

[Easy]
01:03:312 (1) - this spinner may close at this point i can't see your screen shot image.. :o i don't know what you mean but, i fixed this spinner a little bit. ;)


[Insane]
00:50:365 (3) - make this slider slow down may fit the rhythm better no
01:00:470 (1) - ^ no

nice song! good luck

Thanks!
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Updated ;)
Sonnyc
Fixed by request
Freya

Freya wrote:


  • [Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:04:418 (2) - change to clap then change 00:04:575 (3) tail to whistle, i thinks sounds better // Added Whistle at the head of (3) instead.
  2. 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:08:996 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:10:733 (1) - i thinks it's nice if you put soft whistle // Whistle at 00:10:891 (2,4) will be enough.
  5. 00:17:365 - i hear drum here ad note please // That's not that strong to emphasize, and tick will be fine enough.
  6. 00:17:996 - ^
  7. 00:18:470 (7) - move it far abit, so flows better with next slider http://puu.sh/6ZEtl.jpg // The spacing was based on the end of 00:17:839 (5).
  8. 00:29:049 (3) - i think it's wrong snapped, must be 1/6, look at insane, or i think i know your intention to put notes between 2 1/6 beat notes
    i don't really good at this, so ask another experienced mapper maybe, or if you think it's okay leave it as is // Well didn't noticed that this is empty. Well I should look for more opinions
  9. 00:59:996 (2,3) - at first glance i think it's 1/2, it sure confusing, consider unstack, yah if you say no make the stack more perfect // Changed spacing.
  10. 01:05:839 ~ 01:10:812 . i don't feel right with the clap at ths part, make it sounds like insane maybe? // I think it's fine.

    i feel a bit don't right with the rhytym on this diff, but since i'm not really experienced with rhytym itself maybe we leave as it is, or ask next modder
Neta

Neta wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
    1. 00:08:996 (1,3) - 패턴을 앞과 똑같이 하는게 좋을듯합니다 // 이 부분만 좀 이질적이긴 하네요. 그렇지만 다음 노트 흐름상 이제 와서 바꾸기 곤란할듯요<<
    2. 01:06:470 (2) - 차라리 노트 2개로 바꾸는게 패턴상 좋지 않을까 싶습니다 // 음,, 큰 차이 없는거 같은데 슬라이더로 두고 싶습니다.
Inyuschan

Inyuschan wrote:

Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:839 (1) - Remove NC. // Nah, having it the same combo with previously is really nonsense in hp drain, and the time gap.
00:07:733 (1) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - ^
00:15:944 (1) - ^
00:20:996 (1) - ^
00:22:733 (5) - Move it to x:360 y:344, then put (6) in the same place, overlapping (5). // Sorry, I want a square pattern here.
00:23:839 (1) - Remove NC. // Bell emphasis.
00:27:628 (3) - I think a curve slider would look better, if you do that move it to x:320 y:20. (: // Sure it'll be, but prefer an aesthetic here.
00:31:418 (5, 1) - Repeat only slider (5). Then move (1) to x:255 y:317 to follow next note. // Can't understand the meaning here, but I want to give symmetry<<
00:40:418 (1, 2) - Remove NC at (1) and add it to (2). // Following the music, I think my selection is better,, Still 00:42:944 (5) added NC here instead.
00:41:681 (1, 2) - ^
00:45:944 (3) - Maybe it would look better if you move it to x:280 y:288, since it's overlapping 00:46:891 (1). // Since the overlapping part is the head, it's nearly unoticable when playing.
00:51:628 (6) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:96 y:328. :3 // Curving down, and breaking flow with the next slider was my selection here, and I want to keep the flow.
01:00:312 (3) - Maybe overlap on (2)? Looks weird for me. >_< // Fixed
01:14:523 (3) - I think it would have a better flow if you move it to x:288 y:160. // Looks good.
Twinkle

[Twinkle] wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
I think the drop sound effect is used too many. u may remove some
01:02:996 (1) - add a note at the starting point of the spinner and put the spinner backwards // Fixed
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags:TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BeatmapID:372047
BeatmapSetID:128070

[Difficulty]
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200,60,35207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,184,35523,6,0,P|396:204|428:204,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,176,35839,2,0,P|504:252|444:300,2,150,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,48,36786,6,0,B|316:20|264:32|264:32|228:60,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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0,288,37733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,336,37891,5,0,0:0:0:0:
84,336,38049,2,0,B|124:336|124:336|156:280|224:288,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,320,38681,2,0,B|440:268|412:216|412:216|416:172,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,80,39154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
428,80,39312,2,0,B|376:72|340:112|340:112|284:112,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,208,39786,2,0,B|252:216|216:176|216:176|160:176,1,150,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,176,40260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,92,40418,5,2,0:0:0:0:
212,92,40575,2,0,B|288:92|288:92|328:92|356:120,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,204,41049,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,292,41207,2,0,B|329:318|289:318|289:318|213:318,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,316,41681,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,316,41839,2,0,B|76:316|48:288|48:288|68:256|60:216,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,120,42312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,120,42470,2,0,B|88:108|128:144|128:144|152:144|176:132,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,56,42944,5,2,0:0:0:0:
240,56,43102,2,0,B|276:92|288:144|252:192|252:192|224:224|208:288|256:332,1,300,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,84,44365,6,0,P|388:60|336:16,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,112,44681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,76,44839,2,0,P|190:67|122:73,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
167,163,45155,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,184,45312,2,0,P|48:196|4:248,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,280,45628,5,8,0:0:0:0:
188,324,45786,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,252,45944,2,8,P|280:288|284:336,1,75
372,276,46260,2,0,L|444:236,1,75,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
473,111,46575,2,0,L|407:147,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,196,46891,6,0,P|285:206|242:201,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,160,47207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
109,245,47365,2,0,P|80:216|63:177,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,89,47681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,68,47839,2,0,B|244:56|272:88|332:76,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,40,48312,6,0,P|428:96|408:136,2,75,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,75,48786,2,0,P|296:104|272:148,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,216,49102,2,0,P|217:246|187:267,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,288,49418,6,0,B|104:328|140:364|196:364|196:364|212:364,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,364,49891,2,0,B|316:364|316:364|372:364|408:328|420:288,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,192,50365,2,0,B|440:144|404:112|404:112|368:108|336:84,2,150,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,228,51154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,268,51312,2,0,B|220:288|220:288|184:288,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,288,51628,2,0,B|54:288|54:288|18:308,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,212,51944,6,0,B|56:164|40:120|40:120|40:92|52:64,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,88,52418,2,0,B|204:100|240:48|296:60,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,52891,2,0,P|416:132|416:232,2,150,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,240,54154,2,8,L|308:308,1,75
352,216,54470,2,0,P|312:156|240:140,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,54944,2,0,B|136:128|148:76|200:52|200:52|244:36|280:48,1,225,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,55891,6,0,P|384:316|340:324,2,75,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,208,56365,2,0,B|440:168|440:168|420:136,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,64,56681,2,0,B|330:82|330:82|290:78,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,60,56996,6,0,B|156:56|156:56|112:64|60:112,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,192,57470,1,6,0:0:0:0:
12,196,57944,2,0,B|36:244|88:272|88:272|148:284|204:260,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,188,58575,6,0,P|296:168|332:164,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,196,58891,2,0,P|456:220|476:252,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,284,59207,2,0,L|344:300,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,312,59523,6,0,P|244:312|152:264,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,59996,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,192,60312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,60470,2,0,B|120:88|156:116|156:116|208:116|208:116|244:88|290:91,1,225
386,101,61102,2,0,P|353:166|284:188,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,212,61575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,61733,2,2,P|300:284|336:276,1,75
416,232,62049,6,0,P|424:308|372:368,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,380,62523,1,4,0:0:0:0:
48,304,62996,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63075,12,8,65207,0:0:0:0:
192,88,65839,6,0,P|244:56|320:88,1,150,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,284,66470,2,0,P|304:304|260:316,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,284,66786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,168,67102,6,0,P|352:136|360:88,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,67418,2,0,L|256:127,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,168,67733,2,0,P|160:136|152:88,2,75,8|0|8,3:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,68365,6,0,B|304:296|304:296|256:324|208:296|208:296|184:296,1,150,8|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,236,68839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,68996,2,0,B|68:96|92:56|92:56|120:40|146:36,1,150,8|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,36,69628,2,0,B|392:40|420:56|420:56|444:96|432:144,1,150,8|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,236,70102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,188,70260,2,0,B|296:168|296:168|256:160|216:168|216:168|188:188,1,150,8|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,284,70733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,70891,6,0,L|256:84,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,71365,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,80,71523,2,0,P|52:112|40:160,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,244,71839,2,0,P|55:279|78:308,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,72154,2,8,B|236:340|236:292|308:292,1,150
405,292,72628,5,0,0:0:0:0:
468,216,72786,2,0,P|484:180|488:136,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,48,73102,2,0,P|428:32|384:28,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,52,73418,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,228,73733,2,0,P|140:224|136:148,2,150
288,160,74523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74681,12,8,75628,0:0:0:0:
112,160,75944,6,0,P|84:184|64:220,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,76260,2,0,P|188:272|208:308,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,304,76575,2,0,P|323:272|352:248,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,216,76891,2,0,P|428:184|400:160,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,127,77207,2,0,P|313:92|304:56,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,56,77523,2,0,P|198:92|208:128,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,77839,2,0,B|224:228|256:208|256:208|288:228|328:224,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,78470,6,0,P|108:268|92:220,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,141,78786,2,0,P|113:109|144:88,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,151,79102,2,0,L|294:151,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,87,79418,2,0,B|408:104|416:144|416:144|432:224,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,312,79891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,312,80048,2,0,B|392:316|356:280|356:280|300:280,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,212,80523,2,0,P|210:243|204:280,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,376,80839,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,336,80996,6,0,P|92:312|64:264,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,81312,2,0,L|112:192,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,100,81628,2,0,P|93:70|124:48,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,81944,2,0,B|272:108|304:76|360:96,2,150,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,20,82891,2,0,P|432:52|444:88,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,176,83207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,328,83523,6,0,P|276:344|184:328,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,83996,2,0,B|228:236|256:260|256:260|284:236|324:232,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,84470,2,0,B|360:124|296:120|256:156|256:156|216:120|152:124|120:160,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,85260,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,52,85418,2,0,B|224:48|256:66|256:66|288:48|328:52,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,86049,6,0,B|424:264|424:264|404:292,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,348,86365,2,0,B|324:308|324:308|304:280,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,86681,2,0,B|188:308|188:308|188:348,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,292,86996,2,0,B|88:264|88:264|88:224|88:224|88:184|64:152|64:152|40:120|40:80,1,225,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,84,87628,2,0,P|172:80|216:56,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,144,87944,2,0,P|300:104|292:4,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,88575,6,0,B|420:212|456:232|456:232|464:272|432:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,368,89049,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,299,89207,2,0,P|284:331|276:368,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,288,89523,2,0,B|196:328|192:368|192:368|124:352|64:280|60:208,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,115,90312,2,0,P|100:124|131:145,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,96,90628,2,0,P|227:131|224:168,2,75,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,48,91102,6,0,P|322:119|316:193,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,91575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,240,91733,2,0,P|144:228|84:236,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,324,92049,2,0,B|160:348|192:364|232:368|232:368|284:372|340:364|372:308|356:248,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,160,92996,2,0,P|216:231|272:280,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,296,93628,6,0,B|480:244|456:200|456:200|428:152,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,72,94102,2,0,B|336:100|332:152|332:152|296:160|276:192,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,94575,2,0,P|296:276|224:100,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,44,95365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,20,95523,2,0,P|128:68|96:148,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,96233,12,0,98681,3:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
↑Updated! 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ ;)
Sonico Makaron
Hi!

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
Fix this.

[Leader's Normal]
00:11:523 (1,2) - Play little weird, maybe make rhythm like this? 00:17:839 (3) - Add finish.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:10:733 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here, remove it.
00:15:944 (1) - How about ctrl+g? it will get better flow imo.
00:16:575 (1) - Add finish at the head slider
00:17:207 (3) - Add NC.
00:23:839 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here imo.
00:47:207 (2) - Make perfect stack.
00:47:365 (3) - ^
01:02:996 (1) - This is not a new rhythm, will be better if you remove NC.

[Insane]
00:07:733 (1) - Use 0.75 slider velocity.
00:08:365 (2) - Since you returned the slider velocity back it must be NC.
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - Confused rhythm for me, i recommend remove slider velocity 0.50 and try make rhythm like this, it will be easier read imo
good luck :)
Sonnyc
소수 슬라 속도 저거 안고치는게 좋습니다. 모딩 체크는 차후에,,
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hi!

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
Fix this.

[Insane]
00:07:733 (1) - Use 0.75 slider velocity.
00:08:365 (2) - Since you returned the slider velocity back it must be NC.
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - Confused rhythm for me, i recommend remove slider velocity 0.50 and try make rhythm like this, it will be easier read imo
good luck :)
Only fixed at easy's error.
i don't want to make change of speed. :P

Thanks mod ;)
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Sonnyc wrote:

모딩 체크는 차후에,,
천천히 하셔도됩니다 :lol:
그땐 너무 재촉했어요 :o
Akiyama Mizuki
늦어서 죄송해요
TK'S Muzu
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - I prefer D. It sounds better IMO
00:13:733 (8) - d
00:33:707 (90) - k? I'm not sure it sounds better honestly
00:46:102 (142) - ^
00:51:154 (159) - ^
00:59:049 (183) - d
01:17:996 (55) - d
01:18:154 (56) - k
01:25:418 (95) - d
I'll mod Oni later, sry

/// uhhh I ate dinner
TK'S Oni
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - D
00:18:944 (38) - k
wtf my father came I'll mod more tomorrow I'm really sorry

////OK. And here's more
TK'S Oni (more)
SPOILER
00:33:786 (136) - k
00:51:154 (235) - d
01:17:918 (71) - ^
01:25:418 (128) - d
01:25:496 (129) - k
TKS

bbj0920 wrote:

늦어서 죄송해요
TK'S Muzu
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - I prefer D. It sounds better IMO - fixed.
00:13:733 (8) - d - no need that triplet pattern for Muzu.

TK'S Oni
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - D - fixed.
thanks for mod!!
sorry for fixed only a little.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated!
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[General]

    1. Remove all capitals from the tags.
    2. Why not use custom diff names like Beginner, Standard and Hyper?

    [Easy]

      1. 00:08:365 (3) - Make a better blanket with 00:06:470 (2) - . >like this maybe??<
      2. 00:24:154 (1) - This slider makes no sense. At all. Maybe change it to a regular wave slider like this? If you do, make sure 00:25:418 (1) - makes a good blanket with that slider end.
      3. 00:53:839 (5) - Move slider end to x=304 y=72. It will look much better imo.
      4. 00:59:523 (1) - Make a good blanket with 00:59:207 (3) - .
      5. 01:10:891 (1,2) - Make these blanket good with each other.
      6. 01:19:102 (2) - Make a good blanket with the slider end of 01:17:839 (4) - .
      7. 01:24:470 (2) - Move this slider one block to the right, so that it makes a good blanket with 01:23:523 (1) - .

        Good diff, only a few fixes needed.

      [Leader's Normal]

        1. 00:28:575 (2,3) - Fix these sliders so that it looks like a better circle.
        2. 01:03:154 (1) - The slider end sound is a bit unfitting. Maybe change volume to 10%?
        3. 01:11:523 (2) - Let it flow better by making it bend?

          Good diff overall, but the jumps like 01:02:049 (1,2,3) - bother me enormously. Maybe ask a BAT if this is an ok placement for a normal difficulty.

        [Sonnyc's Hard]

          1. 00:04:575 (3) - Make it a bent slider just like 00:07:102 (3) - ?
          2. 00:12:154 (3) - Make it a better blanket with the slider end.
          3. 00:12:787 (1) - Maybe instead of a spinner, you could place a slider(s) like this?:
          4. If you apply the one above, make sure to place a beat at 00:14:049 - to keep the flow stable. Or you could anything else that you like, since this is only a suggestion... :lol:
          5. 00:30:154 (1) - Remove NC and place NC at 00:30:628 (2) - .
          6. 00:30:786 (3,5) - Maybe make these a good blanket with 00:32:049 (1) - ?
          7. 00:48:786 (2) - I personally hate these kind of sliders with a passion. Why do you overlap a slider as simple as that, with the slider end of 00:47:839 (5) - ??
          8. 00:57:470 (2,3) - This is a lazy jump imo. Maybe increase the spacing between those two?
          9. 01:15:944 - From this part on, all the sliders have a clap in them. Why? Was this intentional?
          10. 01:32:049 (4) - Weird unfitting slider. Make it something else?
          11. 01:38:681 - Why is this section after the spinner not mapped like all the other diffs?

            This diff is really lazy, if I have to be fair, but its not that bad.

          [Insane]

          Please reach me In-Game to talk about this diff.

          Thats it! Nice map overall, and nice song. Good luck! ^^
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
@Cancel : Fixed without General.
I'll call you in In-Game for checking Insane! ☜▒▒(-,.ㅡ )3
YTYuyu
hey~ i'm here from my queue :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:12:786 (2,3) - replace this for a 2/1 repeat slider. it'll be more easier to follow for beginners during gameplay, as well as the BGM smoothly just like this 1/1, 2/1 combination. yes it breaks the blanket, but would you go for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier in terms of rhythm?
00:15:628 (2) - i think you should delete this note. because the downwards transition feels a bit forced for beginners during gameplay. yes i see the blanket, but again--would you do for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier?
00:19:102 (1,2,3,4) - you should do something easier because i really feel that this belongs in a normal diff more than an easy diff. try a 4/1 repeat slider it'll follow the drums more nicely due to the sliderticks in effect, and a lot easier to follow for beginners as well.
00:29:839 (2) - why don't you curve this slider downwards? i mean the current pattern would possibly feel uncomfortable since the arc of the slider is in the way of the previous note during gameplay. if you don't understand, it should look something like this when i mentioned downwards.
00:37:891 (2) - because the BPM is pretty high, this can throw off beginners when it comes to their sense of rhythm, and to the song as well. remove the 1/2 slider, and add a repeat on (1) so that it can be easier to follow, as well as it can follow the music nicely as well during gameplay.
00:39:312 (1,2,3,1) - for this one, do something like this. again it's easier to follow and it can follow the music nicely during gameplay.
00:55:891 (2) - flip this instead. at 1st glance, it can look pretty uncomfortable to follow for beginners since the slider is faced like this. basically like this.
you need to make this easy a lot easier. right now as it stands, it feels like a light normal, and this can give beginners a hard time to keep up during gameplay.

[Leader's Normal]
consider AR5. with this CS, AR6 would feel like the notes appear too quickly for players IMO.
00:01:733 (1,1) - don't you think this appears a bit too quick for players? i say that you give them some time to recover, at least a 1 tick gap should be fine. in roder to do that, extend the spinner to where (1) is, and delete (1) while doing this. it'll give players enough time for them to recover after the spinner during gameplay.
00:16:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - i really feel this pattern can cause a bit of confusion for amateurs because since it's spaced like this, this can be misleading for 1/2 or a 1/1 note pattern since it's spaced like an anti-jump. space it out instead so that it can be more readable and a lot easier to follow for amateurs during gameplay.
00:46:891 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:470 (1,2,3) - ^ i'm sure you get the idea by now.
01:14:681 (1,1,2) - same as 00:01:733. for this one, remove the 2nd (1) and (2) and extend the spinner to where the 2nd (1) is. same reason.
besides the anti jumps and spinner recovery, this is a good normal. kind of feels like a normal+, but i think it might be me.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:04:418 (2,3) - i think you should go for something like this so that the curve feels more comfortable for players than the current pattern you have. i feel that the curve felt like taking a sudden sharp turn when driving a car IMO.
00:09:628 (3) - space this out. i really feel that you're breaking consistency with the last 2 combo in this part of the song.
00:12:153 (3) - ^
00:29:128 - consider adding a circle here to follow the music more effectively in this part of the song during gameplay IMO.
00:32:049 (1) - just a minor issue, but consider removing the whistle on the sliderbody since it sounds slightly disturbing IMO.
00:39:233 - same as 00:29:128.
a good hard. the only flaw i had was those sliderticks at the kiai. they don't sound fitting to follow during gameplay personally.

[Insane]
01:08:049 (2) - i think you can replace this for a 1/2 slider, followed by a 1/1 slider to follow the music more properly during gameplay, as well as emphasis in the piano a lot better.
01:18:707 (2) - remove this note. it doesn't follow anything in the music.
01:20:918 (5) - ^
decent insane. i may have overlooked overmapped 1/4 notes, so i want you to highly consider removing those since there's some that don't follow the music, and there are others that do.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map :D.
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ i'm here from my queue :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:12:786 (2,3) - replace this for a 2/1 repeat slider. it'll be more easier to follow for beginners during gameplay, as well as the BGM smoothly just like this 1/1, 2/1 combination. yes it breaks the blanket, but would you go for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier in terms of rhythm? ok,fixed!
00:15:628 (2) - i think you should delete this note. because the downwards transition feels a bit forced for beginners during gameplay. yes i see the blanket, but again--would you do for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier? ok,fixed!
00:19:102 (1,2,3,4) - you should do something easier because i really feel that this belongs in a normal diff more than an easy diff. try a 4/1 repeat slider it'll follow the drums more nicely due to the sliderticks in effect, and a lot easier to follow for beginners as well.ok,fixed!
00:29:839 (2) - why don't you curve this slider downwards? i mean the current pattern would possibly feel uncomfortable since the arc of the slider is in the way of the previous note during gameplay. if you don't understand, it should look something like this when i mentioned downwards. yes,maybe it's uncomfortable thing. because of next slider, i want to locate it upwards.
00:37:891 (2) - because the BPM is pretty high, this can throw off beginners when it comes to their sense of rhythm, and to the song as well. remove the 1/2 slider, and add a repeat on (1) so that it can be easier to follow, as well as it can follow the music nicely as well during gameplay.
00:39:312 (1,2,3,1) - for this one, do something like this. again it's easier to follow and it can follow the music nicely during gameplay. 00:39:312 ~ 00:39:312 - i changed rhythm pattern like easier.
00:55:891 (2) - flip this instead. at 1st glance, it can look pretty uncomfortable to follow for beginners since the slider is faced like this. basically like this. fixed!
you need to make this easy a lot easier. right now as it stands, it feels like a light normal, and this can give beginners a hard time to keep up during gameplay.

[Insane]
01:08:049 (2) - i think you can replace this for a 1/2 slider, followed by a 1/1 slider to follow the music more properly during gameplay, as well as emphasis in the piano a lot better. i think it was not bad. :P
01:18:707 (2) - remove this note. it doesn't follow anything in the music.
01:20:918 (5) - ^ i don't want to delete those. if i delete those, i feel like empty.
decent insane. i may have overlooked overmapped 1/4 notes, so i want you to highly consider removing those since there's some that don't follow the music, and there are others that do.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map :D.
Thanks Byaku! :D
Sonnyc

Sonico Makaron wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:10:733 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here, remove it. // But I can't find an alternative hitsound to support the high-toned sound here..
00:15:944 (1) - How about ctrl+g? it will get better flow imo. // It seems so, but I want to avoid jump here.
00:16:575 (1) - Add finish at the head slider // Added a drum.
00:17:207 (3) - Add NC // Added
00:23:839 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here imo. // Removed.
00:47:207 (2) - Make perfect stack. // ?
00:47:365 (3) - ^ //
01:02:996 (1) - This is not a new rhythm, will be better if you remove NC. // Removed.

Cancel wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]

    1. 00:04:575 (3) - Make it a bent slider just like 00:07:102 (3) - ? // Linear slider was for flow to the next note.
    2. 00:12:154 (3) - Make it a better blanket with the slider end. // The blanket is nice enough.
    3. 00:12:787 (1) - Maybe instead of a spinner, you could place a slider(s) like this?: // Sorry, I think a spinner fits best here.
    4. If you apply the one above, make sure to place a beat at 00:14:049 - to keep the flow stable. Or you could anything else that you like, since this is only a suggestion... :lol:
    5. 00:30:154 (1) - Remove NC and place NC at 00:30:628 (2) - . // fix
    6. 00:30:786 (3,5) - Maybe make these a good blanket with 00:32:049 (1) - ? // Uhh,, want to stick a symmetry here..
    7. 00:48:786 (2) - I personally hate these kind of sliders with a passion. Why do you overlap a slider as simple as that, with the slider end of 00:47:839 (5) - ?? // This much overlap won't be unreadable, and I had no selection here to maintain flow.
    8. 00:57:470 (2,3) - This is a lazy jump imo. Maybe increase the spacing between those two? // I wanted to emphasize pause as 00:59:996 (2,3).
    9. 01:15:944 - From this part on, all the sliders have a clap in them. Why? Was this intentional? // I didn't realized there was a custom tick. Removed.
    10. 01:32:049 (4) - Weird unfitting slider. Make it something else? // This is blanketing 01:31:575 (2). The circular slider can't support my pattern.
    11. 01:38:681 - Why is this section after the spinner not mapped like all the other diffs? // I thought that part of the music wasn't worth enough to map..

      This diff is really lazy, if I have to be fair, but its not that bad. // Good catch.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:04:418 (2,3) - i think you should go for something like this so that the curve feels more comfortable for players than the current pattern you have. i feel that the curve felt like taking a sudden sharp turn when driving a car IMO. // (3) is to shaped to flow nice with 00:05:839 (1). Rather fixed with 00:03:944 (1).
00:09:628 (3) - space this out. i really feel that you're breaking consistency with the last 2 combo in this part of the song. // 2 flow, 2 stacks. This was a variation of mine for 4 same part of the song.
00:12:153 (3) - ^
00:29:128 - consider adding a circle here to follow the music more effectively in this part of the song during gameplay IMO. // Added
00:32:049 (1) - just a minor issue, but consider removing the whistle on the sliderbody since it sounds slightly disturbing IMO. // Removed
00:39:233 - same as 00:29:128. // Added
a good hard. the only flaw i had was those sliderticks at the kiai. they don't sound fitting to follow during gameplay personally.
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated! ;)
Leader
Fixed everything except the antijumps which sounds fine and I don't really want to change them (I've asked some BATs and they are fine with them, anyway), thank you

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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nightbird lost wing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags:TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BeatmapID:371438
BeatmapSetID:128070

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Combo5 : 128,255,128

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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated!
JeZag
M4M request please >.<

Easy

00:35:523 (2) - Would go better with 00:34:260 (1) if it moved up a bit (you may have to adjust 00:36:154 (3,4) after for consistant ds)

00:38:681 (2) - If you moved the third point( or tick) up a bit, it would blanket 00:36:786 (1) a bit better (I think x.x)

00:45:628 (2) - Adjust this to make the blanket more even (first point (204,208) second point (236,248) third point (245,196)

00:48:154 (2) - Better blanket if second point (or tick on the slider) is at (295,247) and third is at (315,206)

01:01:102 (1) - Second point (348,160) third point (396,136)

01:10:891 (1) - Second point (47,265) third point (8,291)

01:11:523 (2) - Flip 01:10:891 (1) and place where it once was

01:14:681 (1) - Second point (251,346) third point (215,375)

01:19:102 (2) - Off a bit second point (447,314) third point (345, 293)

01:21:944 (6) - Second point (137,363) third point (209, 106)

01:23:523 (1) - Second point (392,47) third (437,65)

Leader's Normal

01:33:628 (1,2,3) - Make these symmetrical?

01:34:575 (3,4) - Looks better if 01:35:365 (4) is moved up a bit? (3 points towards 4 instead of being a bit crooked)

Insane

00:54:312 (4,5,1) - maybe these can face 00:54:154 (3)? Its a bit awkward to me.. (because I'm bad)


Being really tough because I can't mod your flow; its too good T_T
I also got tired of doing pics of every single one xD I'm bad
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