This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 3월 25일 화요일 at 오전 11:27:10

Artist: Nekomata Master+
Title: Nightbird Lost Wing
Source: DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags: TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BPM: 190
Filesize: 5037kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.72 stars, 113 notes)
2. Insane (4.9 stars, 393 notes)
3. Leader's Normal (4.28 stars, 155 notes)
4. Sonnyc's Hard (4.99 stars, 225 notes)
5. TK'S Muzukashii (4.81 stars, 400 notes)
6. TK'S Oni (5 stars, 554 notes)

Download: Nekomata Master+ - Nightbird Lost Wing
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - Done!
Normal - Done! By Leader Added 2014-02-16 00:09
Hard - Done! By Sonnyc Added 2014-02-16 23:48
Insane - Done!
TK's Muzu, Oni - Done! By TKSalt

go!
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar

TKSalt wrote:

go!
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar

I'm so happy for fast mapping! Thanks!

m4m

EASY

try increasing DS to 1.1 to avoid the overlaps and tight spacing between notes

00:46:260 (3,4) - change to slider for better flow


01:44:996 (3) - Move down to (152,236) to avoid overlap with circle slider



INSANE

00:08:996 (1) - overlap with 00:08:681 (4) - so I suggest this


00:11:523 (1) - ctrl J and stack it back on top of the stream

00:29:996 (1,2,3,1,2) - pattern is quite confusing since there's so many colors, so remove NC on some of them

00:49:891 (2) - ctrl G for better flow

01:01:654 - add a note here so the stream is consistent of 5

01:35:444 - add note here since the instrument is still going on at this point

hope I helped

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

m4m

EASY

try increasing DS to 1.1 to avoid the overlaps and tight spacing between notes think about that!

00:46:260 (3,4) - change to slider for better flow no!

SPOILER

01:44:996 (3) - Move down to (152,236) to avoid overlap with circle slider fixed!



INSANE

00:08:996 (1) - overlap with 00:08:681 (4) - so I suggest this no!

SPOILER

00:11:523 (1) - ctrl J and stack it back on top of the stream no!

00:29:996 (1,2,3,1,2) - pattern is quite confusing since there's so many colors, so remove NC on some of them remove NC on 00:30:470 (1)

00:49:891 (2) - ctrl G for better flow no!

01:01:654 - add a note here so the stream is consistent of 5 no! there is not rhythm.

01:35:444 - add note here since the instrument is still going on at this point same,no!

hope I helped

thanks!

Hi TaMul! I'll try to mod your map. (Just a random mod, or m4m if you want)



I love the hitsounds
That's all from me. I hope it helps and hope your map get ranked soon!
Good Luck!

Revo wrote:

Hi TaMul! I'll try to mod your map. (Just a random mod, or m4m if you want)

[Easy]

1. 00:37:891 (2) - Isn't this too hard and shocking for a newbie? I suggest you to change it.

[Insane]

1. 00:28:970 (1) - This isn't put perfectly. Move it to 00:28:996 - with a 1/3 snap.
2. 00:56:365 (4) - How about making it like below? It fits the background music, but it's just a suggestion, though.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:47:365 (2) - Ctrl + G to make it flow better.

I love the hitsounds
That's all from me. I hope it helps and hope your map get ranked soon!
Good Luck!

fixed on last one! thanks!

hello from your m4m queue

Insane

00:13:102 (2) make this a NC to indicate new slider velocity

01:01:418 (1,2,3,4) hard to read this coming off of the slider. approach circles blend with the slider circle and make things hard to read, along with the irregular rhythm: blanket more visibly i guess would be the easiest way to fix. 01:23:918 (2) does it fine, but i'd say that's because the song is much more predictable there

01:02:996 (5) make this a NC. there's no way to really tell that the slider's gonna be slower than the previous otherwise

01:40:891 (2) this looks fine in the editor, but in actual gameplay, it's kind of off center due to the auto-blanket thing. i'd suggest just doing this to keep symmetry:

01:45:312 (2) move to x:232 y:248 to have super awesome lined up proprelynes blahbalhablh


Easy

00:20:996 (4) this note is pretty close to the bottom border, i think you should make it higher up

01:14:681 (1) also pretty close to the bottom border

01:20:996 (1,2) avoid the overlap :/

01:34:260 (2) this note just doesn't fit with teh song

01:39:944 (1) just personal opinion here, having the note centered inside of the other slider and curving like it does looks bad. having it instead bend around one of the end points of the slider or not bend at all would be better.

01:45:628 (4) maybe make this a new combo just because it's the last note of the song and the clap hitsound emphasizes it. your choice there though


also can't mod taiko so i'll ignore those

pishifat wrote:

hello from your m4m queue

Insane

00:13:102 (2) make this a NC to indicate new slider velocity

01:01:418 (1,2,3,4) hard to read this coming off of the slider. approach circles blend with the slider circle and make things hard to read, along with the irregular rhythm:

this

blanket more visibly i guess would be the easiest way to fix. 01:23:918 (2) does it fine, but i'd say that's because the song is much more predictable there

01:02:996 (5) make this a NC. there's no way to really tell that the slider's gonna be slower than the previous otherwise

01:40:891 (2) this looks fine in the editor, but in actual gameplay, it's kind of off center due to the auto-blanket thing. i'd suggest just doing this to keep symmetry:

this is what it looks like in game

this is what it should look like in editor to be good

01:45:312 (2) move to x:232 y:248 to have super awesome lined up proprelynes blahbalhablh


Easy

00:20:996 (4) this note is pretty close to the bottom border, i think you should make it higher up

01:14:681 (1) also pretty close to the bottom border

01:20:996 (1,2) avoid the overlap :/

01:34:260 (2) this note just doesn't fit with teh song

01:39:944 (1) just personal opinion here, having the note centered inside of the other slider and curving like it does looks bad. having it instead bend around one of the end points of the slider or not bend at all would be better.

01:45:628 (4) maybe make this a new combo just because it's the last note of the song and the clap hitsound emphasizes it. your choice there though


also can't mod taiko so i'll ignore those

some fixed! thanks!

안녕하세요~
M4M 신청해볼께요..

3달만에 하는거라 도움이 안되실수도 ㅠㅠ


[Easy]

00:36:786 (1,2,3) - 1번노트랑 2번노트 박자가 약간 까다로운데
1번슬라이더에 리버스 다시는걸 추천합니다

01:33:628 (1,2) - 이것도 긴거 하나로 묶으심이..

노트 배치 진짜 잘하시네요 존경합니다

[Insane]

불필요한 3연타가 좀 많은것..같아요
히트사운드 볼륨을 높이시면 좀 괜찮을듯

00:13:312 (3,1) - 간격에 비해 점프가 너무넓은데 3번 슬라이더 끝에 노트를 붙여주시면 될거같아요


00:15:312 (2) - 이것만 점프를 좀 넣으시는 건 어떤가요?


00:38:365 (2,3,4,5,1) - 리듬이 이상한데 평소처럼 해주시는게


01:02:996 (1,1) - 슬라이더 대신 스피너를 빨리넣고 끝내는게 좋아보여요



01:36:312 (1) - 01:36:154 <<여기서 시작해야할것같은데..어렵네요 ㅠㅠ
01:41:365 (1) - 이것도..반박자느린느낌


태고는 모딩을못하기에..ㅠ
여기까지 할께요

Good Luck~

[Navy] wrote:

안녕하세요~
M4M 신청해볼께요..

3달만에 하는거라 도움이 안되실수도 ㅠㅠ


[Easy]

00:36:786 (1,2,3) - 1번노트랑 2번노트 박자가 약간 까다로운데
1번슬라이더에 리버스 다시는걸 추천합니다 3번 슬라이더 반복 넣었어요~

01:33:628 (1,2) - 이것도 긴거 하나로 묶으심이..PASS!

노트 배치 진짜 잘하시네요 존경합니다

[Insane]

불필요한 3연타가 좀 많은것..같아요
히트사운드 볼륨을 높이시면 좀 괜찮을듯

00:13:312 (3,1) - 간격에 비해 점프가 너무넓은데 3번 슬라이더 끝에 노트를 붙여주시면 될거같아요 PASS! 이정도는 괜찮을 거라고 봐요ㅎ


00:15:312 (2) - 이것만 점프를 좀 넣으시는 건 어떤가요? PASS!


00:38:365 (2,3,4,5,1) - 리듬이 이상한데 평소처럼 해주시는게 PASS!


01:02:996 (1,1) - 슬라이더 대신 스피너를 빨리넣고 끝내는게 좋아보여요 그건 생각해봐야겠어요~



01:36:312 (1) - 01:36:154 <<여기서 시작해야할것같은데..어렵네요 ㅠㅠ
01:41:365 (1) - 이것도..반박자느린느낌 위아래 패스!


태고는 모딩을못하기에..ㅠ
여기까지 할께요

Good Luck~

감사합니다

Hi, m4m from your queue
Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
may add muted sliderslide

Insane
00:04:102 (1,2,3) - misused drum sample, should be at 00:04:260 - and 00:04:733 - instead, same thing happened in the first part, like 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - and so on, plz fix them by yourself
00:07:733 (1) - may drum at end, also drum at 00:08:839 (5) -
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - drum at 1's end, 2's end (not on head) and 3's end
00:13:890 (6,7) - whistle fits better than drum, for these two notes
00:14:681 (3,4) - CTRL+G for better flow, as 00:14:049 (1,2) - is clockwise flow
00:19:418 (2) - clap fits nicely, 00:19:733 (4,5) - also for their heads, and for 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all these beats, I think you could add clap to them all and gradually increase volume from a lower state, that would be cool
00:23:365 (1) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:25:654 (2,3) - wrong snap again, should be snapped on 1/6, and you should use 3 circles instead of 2, or a 1/6 reverse slider
00:27:154 (2) - not a good rhythm, better to use circle at 00:27:154 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:27:312 -
00:28:891 - should have a circle with clap here, forming basic rhythm, and 00:28:970 (1) - wrong snapped, should be on 1/3, check the picture below
00:29:839 - not good to leave it blank as there's clear audioable sound here, recommend to add a circle at 00:29:207 (3) - 's end
00:31:418 (9,3) - not a nice-looking overlap, move 3 to (184,248)?
00:33:312 (3) - should have a clap at end as well
00:35:523 (5,1) - better exchange NC, cause it's 5 that actually starts a new stanza
00:36:312 (4,5,6) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6, see the pic below
00:38:996 (4,5) - correct!
00:42:470 (3) - better to shorten to a 1/2 slider and you don't need to use tick sound
00:45:786 (1) - should use whistle instead according to music
00:46:102 (3) - also clap at here sounds nice
00:46:418 (5,6,7) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:47:365 (2) - need finish on head, just like 00:46:891 (1,3) -
00:49:260 (8,9,1) - wrong snap again, should be on 1/6
00:50:839 (4) - missed a whistle
00:52:418 (2) - missed whistle on head
00:52:891 (3) - replace the clap with finish, it should be with the same sound as 1,2
00:53:365 (4) - better to use a circle at 00:53:365 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:53:523 - for better rhythm
00:53:996 (2) - missed a whistle
00:54:786 (2) - finish at end, same sound as 00:54:470 -
00:54:786 (2,3) - better blanket?
00:56:365 (4,5) - better to use claps for their ends instead
00:57:470 (4) - missed finish
00:59:207 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/4, and you should use 4 circles instead of 3
00:59:996 (2) - whistle + finish on head
01:01:418 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:02:523 (4) - missing finish on head
01:12:944 (4,5) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:14:049 (4,5) - clap on 4's head and 5's head and tail?
01:18:786 (3) - missing clap on head
01:19:418 (3) - ^
01:24:391 - it would be cool to add a circle here, stacking on 01:24:470 (2) - 's head
01:29:996 (1) - not good rhythm, use circle at 01:29:996 - and 1/2 slider at 01:30:154 -
01:31:418 (2) - finish on head, like 01:31:102 (1) -
01:34:496 - same as 01:24:391 -

Easy
00:40:891 (3) - missing clap on head and end
00:50:839 - tick whistle here
00:54:470 (1) - also finish at reverse point
01:11:523 (2) - missing clap at end, maybe also on head
01:21:944 (2) - missing clap at end
01:26:996 (3) - ^
01:26:996 (3,4,5,1) - not really a natural flow
01:35:523 (3) - whistle at end

That's all.....
Good luck

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, m4m from your queue

I unfortunately lost my mod post cause my pc sunddenly shut itself for unknown reason so I'm trying to writing it again, sorry if I lost patience...

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
may add muted sliderslide

Insane
00:04:102 (1,2,3) - misused drum sample, should be at 00:04:260 - and 00:04:733 - instead, same thing happened in the first part, like 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - and so on, plz fix them by yourself
00:07:733 (1) - may drum at end, also drum at 00:08:839 (5) -
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - drum at 1's end, 2's end (not on head) and 3's end
00:13:890 (6,7) - whistle fits better than drum, for these two notes
00:14:681 (3,4) - CTRL+G for better flow, as 00:14:049 (1,2) - is clockwise flow
00:19:418 (2) - clap fits nicely, 00:19:733 (4,5) - also for their heads, and for 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all these beats, I think you could add clap to them all and gradually increase volume from a lower state, that would be cool
00:23:365 (1) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:25:654 (2,3) - wrong snap again, should be snapped on 1/6, and you should use 3 circles instead of 2, or a 1/6 reverse slider
00:27:154 (2) - not a good rhythm, better to use circle at 00:27:154 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:27:312 -
00:28:891 - should have a circle with clap here, forming basic rhythm, and 00:28:970 (1) - wrong snapped, should be on 1/3, check the picture below

SPOILER

00:29:839 - not good to leave it blank as there's clear audioable sound here, recommend to add a circle at 00:29:207 (3) - 's end
00:31:418 (9,3) - not a nice-looking overlap, move 3 to (184,248)?
00:33:312 (3) - should have a clap at end as well
00:35:523 (5,1) - better exchange NC, cause it's 5 that actually starts a new stanza
00:36:312 (4,5,6) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6, see the pic below

SPOILER

00:38:996 (4,5) - correct!
00:42:470 (3) - better to shorten to a 1/2 slider and you don't need to use tick sound
00:45:786 (1) - should use whistle instead according to music
00:46:102 (3) - also clap at here sounds nice
00:46:418 (5,6,7) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:47:365 (2) - need finish on head, just like 00:46:891 (1,3) -
00:49:260 (8,9,1) - wrong snap again, should be on 1/6
00:50:839 (4) - missed a whistle
00:52:418 (2) - missed whistle on head
00:52:891 (3) - replace the clap with finish, it should be with the same sound as 1,2
00:53:365 (4) - better to use a circle at 00:53:365 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:53:523 - for better rhythm
00:53:996 (2) - missed a whistle
00:54:786 (2) - finish at end, same sound as 00:54:470 -
00:54:786 (2,3) - better blanket?
00:56:365 (4,5) - better to use claps for their ends instead
00:57:470 (4) - missed finish
00:59:207 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/4, and you should use 4 circles instead of 3
00:59:996 (2) - whistle + finish on head
01:01:418 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:02:523 (4) - missing finish on head
01:12:944 (4,5) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:14:049 (4,5) - clap on 4's head and 5's head and tail?
01:18:786 (3) - missing clap on head
01:19:418 (3) - ^
01:24:391 - it would be cool to add a circle here, stacking on 01:24:470 (2) - 's head
01:29:996 (1) - not good rhythm, use circle at 01:29:996 - and 1/2 slider at 01:30:154 -
01:31:418 (2) - finish on head, like 01:31:102 (1) -
01:34:496 - same as 01:24:391 -

Easy
00:40:891 (3) - missing clap on head and end
00:50:839 - tick whistle here
00:54:470 (1) - also finish at reverse point
01:11:523 (2) - missing clap at end, maybe also on head
01:21:944 (2) - missing clap at end
01:26:996 (3) - ^
01:26:996 (3,4,5,1) - not really a natural flow think about that...! pass!
01:35:523 (3) - whistle at end

That's all.....
Good luck

Reaaaaally nice mod!! all fixed! Without one Thank you for detail mod!!!!

Will you mod Normal,Hard Diff when i get GD?

Leader wrote:

Normal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nightbird lost wing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:Reflec Beat
Tags:TKSalt
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"356141.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Thanks!

Hi TaMul here's your M4M

• 
  [General]

1. The source sould be "DanceDanceRevolution (2013)" Naoyuki Sato arrange this song originally for DDR here is the source
2. and move reflec beat colette to the tags since it's appearance in reflec beat for promote DDR OST, you can read here
3. also add autumn on the tag
4. inconsistence widescreen support on insane and taiko oni

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:04:260 (2,3) - how about rotate like this? http://puu.sh/6ZBGC.jpg
   i think its better, flows good with (1)
2. 00:08:839 (5) - NC should be here since there's rhytym change from drum to piano
3. 00:25:628 (2) - ^
4. 00:26:523 (9) - ^
5. 00:40:418 (6) - ^
6. 00:11:207 (4) - NC should be here piano to drum
7. 00:13:891 (6,7) - change this to with clap, your whistle too much bass and doesn't fit with piano i think
8. 00:16:418 (3,1) - i think it's better if you reduce the spacing, jump is not fit with clam part like that
9. 00:19:023 (4) - it's better you try ctrl + G, the sounds fit for jump
10. 00:20:996 (1,2,3,4) - this one is sure confusing, it's okay you give jump there but it's better if you put same spacing
11. 00:22:575 (3) - i think this slider unrankable, correct me if i'm wrong
12. 00:22:891 (1,2,3) - it's better if you put (3) stack with (1) rather than (2) because the sounds fit for such jump
13. 00:25:628 (2,3,4) - i think it's still better if you put 2 notes stack but if it's three i think it's really confusing
14. 00:28:260 (2) - ctrl + G for better flow, and this 00:28:575 (3) too
15. 00:33:628 (1,5) - give some hitsound here, because of piano sounds, finish is okay
16. 00:34:260 (1,2,3) - the spacing change is too way different despite same sounds, if dont want to change spacing, it's safe you give NC on 00:34:575 (2) to emphasize spacing change
17. 00:35:996 (3) - i think this slider repeat doesn't fit with the song, i clearly hear piano sound just on here 00:36:154, and before that i hear nothing, it;s better if you put note there
18. 00:39:102 (5,1) - the flow is way too rigid for 2/3 jump, when you slide down and suddenly jump up. how about ctrl + G 00:39:102 (5), it's way more better
19. 00:46:418 (5) - NC here since there's change from 1/2 to 1/6
20. 00:49:260 (8) - ^
21. 00:58:891 (4) - ^
22. 00:49:418 (1,2,3) - i think it's better if you give Ctrl + G on each slider, for emphasize drum obviously
23. 00:55:102 (3,4) - because i think this one is overmap, it's better if you ctrl+ G this one for sake of spacing, so it's not really confusing
24. 01:10:575 (6,7,8) - you put stack there despite there's rhytym difference, so add NC at (7)
25. 01:20:681 (4,5,1) - i think that note is 1/6, just guessing though, it's safe if you ask experienced mapper
    
    it's nice insane

• 
  [Sonnyc's Hard]

1. 00:04:418 (2) - change to clap then change 00:04:575 (3) tail to whistle, i thinks sounds better
2. 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - ^
3. 00:08:996 (1,2,3) - ^
4. 00:10:733 (1) - i thinks it's nice if you put soft whistle
5. 00:17:365 - i hear drum here ad note please
6. 00:17:996 - ^
7. 00:18:470 (7) - move it far abit, so flows better with next slider http://puu.sh/6ZEtl.jpg
8. 00:29:049 (3) - i think it's wrong snapped, must be 1/6, look at insane, or i think i know your intention to put notes between 2 1/6 beat notes
   i don't really good at this, so ask another experienced mapper maybe, or if you think it's okay leave it as is
9. 00:59:996 (2,3) - at first glance i think it's 1/2, it sure confusing, consider unstack, yah if you say no make the stack more perfect
10. 01:05:839 ~ 01:10:812 . i don't feel right with the clap at ths part, make it sounds like insane maybe?
    
    i feel a bit don't right with the rhytym on this diff, but since i'm not really experienced with rhytym itself maybe we leave as it is, or ask next modder

• 
  [Leader's Normal]

1. 01:09:627 (3) - aibat said it's unsnaped
2. 00:29:049 - i think you should start slider here, it's less confusing imo because 1/6 triplet piano sounds
3. 00:32:996 (6) - i don't feel right with that default clap, how about make soft:c1 clap, its more better
4. 00:44:996 (2) - i don't hear any sound at all here, how about move to 00:44:996 (2) -
5. 01:05:839 - same with hard, and i feel the clap is inconsistent too
   
   well i think it's solid normal diff

• [Easy]

1. that is my 3rd time recheck buti didn't find anything error at all, so its okay
   or maybe i'm too noob lol

I can't mod taiko that too well made, so sorry.
goodluck TaMul, i hope this mapset ranked, nice song after all

TaMul will take care of mine, and I think I've put in hitsounds quite randomly lol
Still, I think 1/6 rhythm will be inappropriate for a hard.

Freya wrote:

Hi TaMul here's your M4M

• 
  [General]

1. The source sould be "DanceDanceRevolution (2013)" Naoyuki Sato arrange this song originally for DDR here is the source
2. and move reflec beat colette to the tags since it's appearance in reflec beat for promote DDR OST, you can read here
3. also add autumn on the tag
4. inconsistence widescreen support on insane and taiko oni
   Fixed! all of them.

• 
  [Insane]

1. 00:04:260 (2,3) - how about rotate like this? http://puu.sh/6ZBGC.jpg no, i don' want to change. but not bad!
   i think its better, flows good with (1)
2. 00:08:839 (5) - NC should be here since there's rhytym change from drum to piano no,pass
3. 00:25:628 (2) - ^ ^
4. 00:26:523 (9) - ^ ^
5. 00:40:418 (6) - ^ ^
6. 00:11:207 (4) - NC should be here piano to drum sorry, pass
7. 00:13:891 (6,7) - change this to with clap, your whistle too much bass and doesn't fit with piano i think ok, not bad
8. 00:16:418 (3,1) - i think it's better if you reduce the spacing, jump is not fit with clam part like that no,pass
9. 00:19:023 (4) - it's better you try ctrl + G, the sounds fit for jump ok, not bad
10. 00:20:996 (1,2,3,4) - this one is sure confusing, it's okay you give jump there but it's better if you put same spacing sorry, pass
11. 00:22:575 (3) - i think this slider unrankable, correct me if i'm wrong it's not unrankable because there is not stacked sliderpoint. it's no problem!
12. 00:22:891 (1,2,3) - it's better if you put (3) stack with (1) rather than (2) because the sounds fit for such jump no, i want to stack (2),(3). because of similiar sound.
13. 00:25:628 (2,3,4) - i think it's still better if you put 2 notes stack but if it's three i think it's really confusing yup, but i try to put 3 notes. if another people mod about this, i'll chagne!
14. 00:28:260 (2) - ctrl + G for better flow, and this 00:28:575 (3) too no,pass but i fixed another pattern!
15. 00:33:628 (1,5) - give some hitsound here, because of piano sounds, finish is okay fixed!
16. 00:34:260 (1,2,3) - the spacing change is too way different despite same sounds, if dont want to change spacing, it's safe you give NC on 00:34:575 (2) to emphasize spacing change no,pass
17. 00:35:996 (3) - i think this slider repeat doesn't fit with the song, i clearly hear piano sound just on here 00:36:154, and before that i hear nothing, it;s better if you put note there fixed!
18. 00:39:102 (5,1) - the flow is way too rigid for 2/3 jump, when you slide down and suddenly jump up. how about ctrl + G 00:39:102 (5), it's way more better sorry,pass!
19. 00:46:418 (5) - NC here since there's change from 1/2 to 1/6 no,pass
20. 00:49:260 (8) - ^ no,pass
21. 00:58:891 (4) - ^ no,pass
22. 00:49:418 (1,2,3) - i think it's better if you give Ctrl + G on each slider, for emphasize drum obviously fixed!
23. 00:55:102 (3,4) - because i think this one is overmap, it's better if you ctrl+ G this one for sake of spacing, so it's not really confusing no,pass
24. 01:10:575 (6,7,8) - you put stack there despite there's rhytym difference, so add NC at (7) no,pass
25. 01:20:681 (4,5,1) - i think that note is 1/6, just guessing though, it's safe if you ask experienced mapper no,pass
    
    it's nice insane Thanks!

I can't mod taiko that too well made, so sorry.
goodluck TaMul, i hope this mapset ranked, nice song after all

Thanks mod!

[I]
00:09:312 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345614
00:37:260 (2,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345617
00:42:470 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:42:786 (4) - ^
01:08:996 (4) - blanket
01:26:681 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:45:628 (1,2,3) - a reverse
Good map,Makes me want to make a diff for this,Do you accept insane? :3
[H]
01:00:312 (1) - NC
01:21:312 (2) - Ctrl+G
>01:21:628 (3) - ^
GJ
[N]
00:22:891 (1) - del
>00:21:628 (1) - end at 00:22:891
Try HP3 CS3 AR4 OD3or2?
GJ
[E]
00:28:575 (1) - blanket
00:34:260 (1) - blanket
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:01:102 (1) - ^
01:30:470 (3) - ^
>01:31:733 (2) - copy from^
[Oni]
00:23:365 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - kkd kkddk
00:32:839 (129,130) - kd?
00:57:470 (263,264) - k k
01:25:418 (125,126,127,128,129) - kkdkk?
01:35:523 (197,198,199,200,201) - ^
[Muzu]
00:57:470 (180,181) - k k
um...This make I remenber Nitrome
[Finished]
↓choose one please:3

ts8zs wrote:

[I]
00:09:312 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345614 Good! changed!
00:37:260 (2,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345617 Not bad! changed!
00:42:470 (3) - Ctrl+G fixed!
00:42:786 (4) - ^ fixed!
01:08:996 (4) - blanket fixed!
01:26:681 (4) - Ctrl+G sorry, i want to make jump..
01:45:628 (1,2,3) - a reverse fixed!
Good map,Makes me want to make a diff for this,Do you accept insane? :3
Sorry, i don't want to add diff anymore.. but i can add your diff as non upload..

[E]
00:28:575 (1) - blanket
00:34:260 (1) - blanket
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:01:102 (1) - ^
01:30:470 (3) - ^
>01:31:733 (2) - copy from^
all checked!

Thanks!

ts8zs wrote:

[Oni]
00:23:365 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - kkd kkddk - i dont like them.
00:32:839 (129,130) - kd? - nope.
00:57:470 (263,264) - k k - i made a contrast with 00:54:470 (254,255,256) -
01:25:418 (125,126,127,128,129) - kkdkk? - nope.
01:35:523 (197,198,199,200,201) - ^ - ^
[Muzu]
00:57:470 (180,181) - k k - same as Oni.
um...This make I remenber Nitrome

thanks for mod.
sorry but i didnt got anything from your mod.
i fixed some timing issues.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar

TKSalt wrote:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar

updated!