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Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions
General
may add muted sliderslide
Insane
00:04:102 (1,2,3) - misused drum sample, should be at 00:04:260 - and 00:04:733 - instead, same thing happened in the first part, like 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - and so on, plz fix them by yourself
00:07:733 (1) - may drum at end, also drum at 00:08:839 (5) -
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - drum at 1's end, 2's end (not on head) and 3's end
00:13:890 (6,7) - whistle fits better than drum, for these two notes
00:14:681 (3,4) - CTRL+G for better flow, as 00:14:049 (1,2) - is clockwise flow
00:19:418 (2) - clap fits nicely, 00:19:733 (4,5) - also for their heads, and for 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all these beats, I think you could add clap to them all and gradually increase volume from a lower state, that would be cool
00:23:365 (1) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:25:654 (2,3) - wrong snap again, should be snapped on 1/6, and you should use 3 circles instead of 2, or a 1/6 reverse slider
00:27:154 (2) - not a good rhythm, better to use circle at 00:27:154 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:27:312 -
00:28:891 - should have a circle with clap here, forming basic rhythm, and 00:28:970 (1) - wrong snapped, should be on 1/3, check the picture below
00:29:839 - not good to leave it blank as there's clear audioable sound here, recommend to add a circle at 00:29:207 (3) - 's end
00:31:418 (9,3) - not a nice-looking overlap, move 3 to (184,248)?
00:33:312 (3) - should have a clap at end as well
00:35:523 (5,1) - better exchange NC, cause it's 5 that actually starts a new stanza
00:36:312 (4,5,6) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6, see the pic below
00:38:996 (4,5) - correct!
00:42:470 (3) - better to shorten to a 1/2 slider and you don't need to use tick sound
00:45:786 (1) - should use whistle instead according to music
00:46:102 (3) - also clap at here sounds nice
00:46:418 (5,6,7) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:47:365 (2) - need finish on head, just like 00:46:891 (1,3) -
00:49:260 (8,9,1) - wrong snap again, should be on 1/6
00:50:839 (4) - missed a whistle
00:52:418 (2) - missed whistle on head
00:52:891 (3) - replace the clap with finish, it should be with the same sound as 1,2
00:53:365 (4) - better to use a circle at 00:53:365 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:53:523 - for better rhythm
00:53:996 (2) - missed a whistle
00:54:786 (2) - finish at end, same sound as 00:54:470 -
00:54:786 (2,3) - better blanket?
00:56:365 (4,5) - better to use claps for their ends instead
00:57:470 (4) - missed finish
00:59:207 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/4, and you should use 4 circles instead of 3
00:59:996 (2) - whistle + finish on head
01:01:418 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:02:523 (4) - missing finish on head
01:12:944 (4,5) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:14:049 (4,5) - clap on 4's head and 5's head and tail?
01:18:786 (3) - missing clap on head
01:19:418 (3) - ^
01:24:391 - it would be cool to add a circle here, stacking on 01:24:470 (2) - 's head
01:29:996 (1) - not good rhythm, use circle at 01:29:996 - and 1/2 slider at 01:30:154 -
01:31:418 (2) - finish on head, like 01:31:102 (1) -
01:34:496 - same as 01:24:391 -
Easy
00:40:891 (3) - missing clap on head and end
00:50:839 - tick whistle here
00:54:470 (1) - also finish at reverse point
01:11:523 (2) - missing clap at end, maybe also on head
01:21:944 (2) - missing clap at end
01:26:996 (3) - ^
01:26:996 (3,4,5,1) - not really a natural flow
01:35:523 (3) - whistle at end
That's all.....
Good luck
I unfortunately lost my mod post cause my pc sunddenly shut itself for unknown reason so I'm trying to writing it again, sorry if I lost patience...
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions
General
may add muted sliderslide
Insane
00:04:102 (1,2,3) - misused drum sample, should be at 00:04:260 - and 00:04:733 - instead, same thing happened in the first part, like 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - and so on, plz fix them by yourself
00:07:733 (1) - may drum at end, also drum at 00:08:839 (5) -
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - drum at 1's end, 2's end (not on head) and 3's end
00:13:890 (6,7) - whistle fits better than drum, for these two notes
00:14:681 (3,4) - CTRL+G for better flow, as 00:14:049 (1,2) - is clockwise flow
00:19:418 (2) - clap fits nicely, 00:19:733 (4,5) - also for their heads, and for 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all these beats, I think you could add clap to them all and gradually increase volume from a lower state, that would be cool
00:23:365 (1) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:25:654 (2,3) - wrong snap again, should be snapped on 1/6, and you should use 3 circles instead of 2, or a 1/6 reverse slider
00:27:154 (2) - not a good rhythm, better to use circle at 00:27:154 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:27:312 -
00:28:891 - should have a circle with clap here, forming basic rhythm, and 00:28:970 (1) - wrong snapped, should be on 1/3, check the picture below
00:29:839 - not good to leave it blank as there's clear audioable sound here, recommend to add a circle at 00:29:207 (3) - 's end
00:31:418 (9,3) - not a nice-looking overlap, move 3 to (184,248)?
00:33:312 (3) - should have a clap at end as well
00:35:523 (5,1) - better exchange NC, cause it's 5 that actually starts a new stanza
00:36:312 (4,5,6) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6, see the pic below
00:38:996 (4,5) - correct!
00:42:470 (3) - better to shorten to a 1/2 slider and you don't need to use tick sound
00:45:786 (1) - should use whistle instead according to music
00:46:102 (3) - also clap at here sounds nice
00:46:418 (5,6,7) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:47:365 (2) - need finish on head, just like 00:46:891 (1,3) -
00:49:260 (8,9,1) - wrong snap again, should be on 1/6
00:50:839 (4) - missed a whistle
00:52:418 (2) - missed whistle on head
00:52:891 (3) - replace the clap with finish, it should be with the same sound as 1,2
00:53:365 (4) - better to use a circle at 00:53:365 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:53:523 - for better rhythm
00:53:996 (2) - missed a whistle
00:54:786 (2) - finish at end, same sound as 00:54:470 -
00:54:786 (2,3) - better blanket?
00:56:365 (4,5) - better to use claps for their ends instead
00:57:470 (4) - missed finish
00:59:207 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/4, and you should use 4 circles instead of 3
00:59:996 (2) - whistle + finish on head
01:01:418 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:02:523 (4) - missing finish on head
01:12:944 (4,5) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:14:049 (4,5) - clap on 4's head and 5's head and tail?
01:18:786 (3) - missing clap on head
01:19:418 (3) - ^
01:24:391 - it would be cool to add a circle here, stacking on 01:24:470 (2) - 's head
01:29:996 (1) - not good rhythm, use circle at 01:29:996 - and 1/2 slider at 01:30:154 -
01:31:418 (2) - finish on head, like 01:31:102 (1) -
01:34:496 - same as 01:24:391 -
Easy
00:40:891 (3) - missing clap on head and end
00:50:839 - tick whistle here
00:54:470 (1) - also finish at reverse point
01:11:523 (2) - missing clap at end, maybe also on head
01:21:944 (2) - missing clap at end
01:26:996 (3) - ^
01:26:996 (3,4,5,1) - not really a natural flow
01:35:523 (3) - whistle at end
That's all.....
Good luck