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Topic Starter
thepianist

BananasGoMoo wrote:

nice song choice :P lol
[Crackers]
fine.

[Nuts]
i would lower the drain a little, just a bit too high imo. Lowered a tick

[Angry Banana]
fine as well.

[Overall]
Just wanted to say really good skin. Looks like you put lots of effort into it.

hope this gets ranked soon. :D
Thanks! :D
Bitzeralisis
I like the Bananaphone skin :D
Topic Starter
thepianist

Bitzeralisis wrote:

I like the Bananaphone skin :D
Haha thanks (:

Still need to get some of the white edges out though x.x

EDIT: PAGE 6 GO.
ouranhshc
Crackers
01:01:561(2) - this slider is ugly IMO
01:07:674(3,1,2,3) - line up with the end of (2)


Angry Bananas
00:30:061(1) - line up with (7,8)
01:07:674(4,5) - center between (2,3)
02:18:756(5) - line up with (3)
Topic Starter
thepianist

ouranhshc wrote:

Crackers
01:01:561(2) - this slider is ugly IMO Reshaped.
01:07:674(3,1,2,3) - line up with the end of (2) Done


Angry Bananas
00:30:061(1) - line up with (7,8) Done
01:07:674(4,5) - center between (2,3) Done
02:18:756(5) - line up with (3) Done
Thanks! :)
sesito71
everything is perfect for me :D

Star*

P.D: I love the skin <3
Mashley
Damn awesome

Crackers
00:33:688 (4) - Remove whistle from sliderpath, it sounds weird
01:24:997 (2,3,4) - Confusing spacing T_T
Get rid of all the inherited sections after the end of the map.

Nuts
00:22:809 (3) - Remove whistle from slider path
01:17:674 (3) - ^
Wtf is it with that countdown in the break dude? o.o
02:40:010 (1) - End on the white tick please :)

Angry Banana
Hey, could you make backgrounds like this for the other difficulties?
I lol'd hard at banana hell. Nice work dude.

Contact me when you've fixed it and I'll see if we can arrange a pubble ;)
Topic Starter
thepianist

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Damn awesome Thank you!

Crackers
00:33:688 (4) - Remove whistle from sliderpath, it sounds weird Done
01:24:997 (2,3,4) - Confusing spacing T_T Done
Get rid of all the inherited sections after the end of the map. Done

Nuts
00:22:809 (3) - Remove whistle from slider path Done
01:17:674 (3) - ^ Done
Wtf is it with that countdown in the break dude? o.o It was a small play on Strager's request a long while ago viewtopic.php?f=4&t=17878&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&hilit=break but I'll remove it.
02:40:010 (1) - End on the white tick please :) Done

Angry Banana
Hey, could you make backgrounds like this for the other difficulties? Done
I lol'd hard at banana hell. Nice work dude. Haha thanks!

Contact me when you've fixed it and I'll see if we can arrange a pubble ;)
THanks a lot! :)
Mashley
Pu pu pu pu pu pu pu... Pubblephone?!?!?
Armin
Why I have to mod this >_>

[Crackers]

Overall: I can't see any error of spacing/timing/snapping and stacking, just some imperfections for the hitsounds: I think that the clap rythm is too low and repetitive. Also, delete the short breaks if you want.
Download the file .osu at the end of the post (It has just some hitsounds added)

[Nuts]

Overall: No major problems found. Just the hitsounds, the same things in the previous difficulty <_<'

00:08:586 (2) 1/6 back
00:30:281 (Break) Short break: consider to remove it
01:10:570 (1) This slider is a bit offscreen, consider to move it in another place

[Angry Banana]

Overall: Decrease the overall difficulty please and add more hitsounds.

01:33:246 (2) Divide the slider in other sliders (it has 5 repeats D:)
01:56:827 (2) 1/6 later
01:57:432 (2) 1/6 later
02:02:918 (3) 1/6 later
02:03:465 (1) 1/6 later
02:29:274 (3) 1/6 before
02:40:010 (1) 1/8 before (and then make it longer of another 1/8)

That's all,
starred!

Download: Raffi - Bananaphone (thepianist) [Crackers].osu
Topic Starter
thepianist

Armin wrote:

Why I have to mod this >_>

[Crackers]

Overall: I can't see any error of spacing/timing/snapping and stacking, just some imperfections for the hitsounds: I think that the clap rythm is too low and repetitive. Also, delete the short breaks if you want.
Download the file .osu at the end of the post (It has just some hitsounds added)

[Nuts]

Overall: No major problems found. Just the hitsounds, the same things in the previous difficulty <_<'

00:08:586 (2) 1/6 back
00:30:281 (Break) Short break: consider to remove it
01:10:570 (1) This slider is a bit offscreen, consider to move it in another place

[Angry Banana]

Overall: Decrease the overall difficulty please and add more hitsounds.

01:33:246 (2) Divide the slider in other sliders (it has 5 repeats D:)
01:56:827 (2) 1/6 later
01:57:432 (2) 1/6 later
02:02:918 (3) 1/6 later
02:03:465 (1) 1/6 later
02:29:274 (3) 1/6 before
02:40:010 (1) 1/8 before (and then make it longer of another 1/8)

That's all,
starred!
Done. Thanks!
Lissette
I'm popping the Pubble 'cuz i found some spacing, file size and snapping problems

Tags should be the same of all diff
File size should not be larger than 10 MB with no video
The SB objects should not be larger than 640 x 480

Crackers
01:17:341 (2) - i suggest to move one beat later and remove one repeat

Nuts
00:07:323 (2) - move 1/6 later
01:17:341 (2) - i suggest to remove, and place a note here 01:17:508
01:57:212 (3) - make it end at 01:57:432 and repeat
01:57:926 (4) - 1/6 earlier

Angry Banana
01:07:920 (5) - wrong spaced
01:50:736 (5) - maybe remove?
01:57:926 (4) - move 1/6 earlier
01:59:465 (1,2,3) - put it like ^
02:07:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:10:256 (9) - ^

Star

EDIT: 02:07:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wrong spacing
forgot to put the problem with that
asdfftw
BANANA OVERLOAAAD

STAR
love the bananas :]
Topic Starter
thepianist

Lissette wrote:

I'm popping the Pubble 'cuz i found some spacing, file size and snapping problems

Tags should be the same of all diff They are.
File size should not be larger than 10 MB with no video There was only a 90 kb difference D: Compressed MP3
The SB objects should not be larger than 640 x 480 Fixed

Crackers
01:17:341 (2) - i suggest to move one beat later and remove one repeat Changed

Nuts
00:07:323 (2) - move 1/6 later moved
01:17:341 (2) - i suggest to remove, and place a note here 01:17:508 changed
01:57:212 (3) - make it end at 01:57:432 and repeat changed
01:57:926 (4) - 1/6 earlier changed

Angry Banana
01:07:920 (5) - wrong spaced moved as to:

ouranhshc wrote:

Angry Bananas
02:18:756(5) - line up with (3)
*Sigh* OK
01:50:736 (5) - maybe remove? I kinda like it that way?
01:57:926 (4) - move 1/6 earlier Moved
01:59:465 (1,2,3) - put it like ^ Moved
02:07:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Moved
02:10:256 (9) - ^ Moved

Star

EDIT: 02:07:258 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wrong spacing It's correct?
forgot to put the problem with that
Thanks!
YGOkid8
Excellent! Why, this should already be ranked D:

Hurry up and get more BATs to look at it
NoHitter
Something to add

Set default skin as preferred skin.
Lybydose
Ok first of all, this timing seems odd. All of these suggestions sound better (to me) when listening to them, but are snapped in such odd ways that it seems wrong. Before making any of these changes, listen to it yourself at a slower speed to see if it sounds better to you as well.

Crackers

00:30:226 (1) - I think this spinner sounds better if you end it on the next white tick instead
00:40:446 (2) - End point of this sounds odd. I THINK it sounds better if you move the endpoint back to the white tick. Also part of the problem is that your really loud finish sound doesn't really fit here, and makes it sound off no matter what you do.
01:17:619 (3) - move this slider so that it's the same (on the timeline) as the one in this same position on Nuts

Nuts

00:46:545 (4) - The repeat on this slider sounds off, and should be 1/6 forward from where it is. However, if you extend the slider like that, the endpoint will sound wrong. You could remap it by making the slider end where the repeat is now instead of using the repeat.
01:28:326 (3) - I think this sounds better if you end on 01:28:659
01:29:935 (1,2,3) - move 1/6 forward
01:57:226 (3) - Switch to 1/8 snap. Move this so that it begins at 1:57:266 and repeats at 01:57:473
01:57:926 (4) - Move from wherever it was before to 1:57:926
02:20:609 (2) - I don't know where it was before, but use 1/6 snap at move to 2:20:609
02:28:565 (4) - extend by 1/6
02:29:219 (6,7) - move both forward 1/6
02:29:273 (6) - extend by 1/6 after moving it
02:32:326 (10) - move to 02:32:380 (1/6 forward)
02:38:102 (1,2) - forward 1/6
02:40:010 (1) - extend 1/6
03:00:604 (4) - forward 1/6

Angry

There are a lot of places where seem to be mapping notes at the same timeline spots as in Nuts, but you have different timing here. For example, 02:19:901 (1) is different from Nuts, where it's mapped at 02:19:955 (1). It sounds better in Nuts. Go through the entire map and compare what you've mapped here to what you've mapped in Nuts (after taking the suggestions above), and move stuff here to match up with Nuts accordingly. While you're at it, make sure everything matches up in Crackers as well.
Topic Starter
thepianist

Lybydose wrote:

Ok first of all, this timing seems odd. It is. All of these suggestions sound better (to me) when listening to them, but are snapped in such odd ways that it seems wrong. Before making any of these changes, listen to it yourself at a slower speed to see if it sounds better to you as well.

Crackers

00:30:226 (1) - I think this spinner sounds better if you end it on the next white tick instead Moved (I believe this was cut back a few pages ago since the space between spinner and notes is kinda short.)
00:40:446 (2) - End point of this sounds odd. I THINK it sounds better if you move the endpoint back to the white tick. Also part of the problem is that your really loud finish sound doesn't really fit here, and makes it sound off no matter what you do. Hitsound changed and slider moved back a bit. Hope this helps.
01:17:619 (3) - move this slider so that it's the same (on the timeline) as the one in this same position on Nuts Okay, moved

Nuts

00:46:545 (4) - The repeat on this slider sounds off, and should be 1/6 forward from where it is. However, if you extend the slider like that, the endpoint will sound wrong. You could remap it by making the slider end where the repeat is now instead of using the repeat. Changed as suggested - but slider is extended a bit
01:28:326 (3) - I think this sounds better if you end on 01:28:659 KK
01:29:935 (1,2,3) - move 1/6 forward Moved
01:57:226 (3) - Switch to 1/8 snap. Move this so that it begins at 1:57:266 and repeats at 01:57:473Moved
01:57:926 (4) - Move from wherever it was before to 1:57:926 Moved
02:20:609 (2) - I don't know where it was before, but use 1/6 snap at move to 2:20:609 Ok
02:28:565 (4) - extend by 1/6 Ok
02:29:219 (6,7) - move both forward 1/6 6 wasn't moved, but extended. 7 moved.
02:29:273 (6) - extend by 1/6 after moving it ^
02:32:326 (10) - move to 02:32:380 (1/6 forward) KK
02:38:102 (1,2) - forward 1/6 2 Moved
02:40:010 (1) - extend 1/6 Kk
03:00:604 (4) - forward 1/6 Adjusted repeat in 1/8 instead.

Angry

There are a lot of places where seem to be mapping notes at the same timeline spots as in Nuts, but you have different timing here. For example, 02:19:901 (1) is different from Nuts, where it's mapped at 02:19:955 (1). It sounds better in Nuts. Go through the entire map and compare what you've mapped here to what you've mapped in Nuts (after taking the suggestions above), and move stuff here to match up with Nuts accordingly. While you're at it, make sure everything matches up in Crackers as well. Should be fixed
Thanks!

Edit: Page 7 go?
Mafiamaster
Both Crackers/Nuts~
01:10:570 (1) - Extend to 01:10:843 using 1/6 divisor.
01:11:117 (2) - Extend to 01:11:335 ^

Angry Banana~
01:10:789 (1) - Move forward a 1/6 tick (01:10:843)
Topic Starter
thepianist

Mafiamaster wrote:

Both Crackers/Nuts~
01:10:570 (1) - Extend to 01:10:843 using 1/6 divisor.
01:11:117 (2) - Extend to 01:11:335 ^

Angry Banana~
01:10:789 (1) - Move forward a 1/6 tick (01:10:843)
Fixed. Thanks! :]
Lissette
Re-Pubble
Topic Starter
thepianist

Lissette wrote:

Re-Pubble
irc-mod. Thanks ^^
yeahyeahyeahhh
Timing feels so weird, but I can see its multi timing sections so nothing I can say about that really. Here s a star though hopefully the timing is okay. Banana hell oh em gee
DeathxShinigami
[Crackers]
00:57:111 (3) - New combo?
01:26:162 (1) - Doesn't sound well to me

[Nuts]
Lol at misleading diff name. I thought this was going to be like Nexy's Nuts or something similar
02:06:714 (1) - Move below the (1) slider

[Angry Banana]
I think slider tick rate of 1 is more suitable for this diff.
O_O A bit crazy for me but I believe everything is looking good for this diff.

[Overall]
Just minor suggestions is all.
Topic Starter
thepianist

DeathxShinigami wrote:

[Crackers]
00:57:111 (3) - New combo? I don't think it fits D:
01:26:162 (1) - Doesn't sound well to me Shifted

[Nuts]
Lol at misleading diff name. I thought this was going to be like Nexy's Nuts or something similar
02:06:714 (1) - Move below the (1) slider Kk

[Angry Banana]
I think slider tick rate of 1 is more suitable for this diff. Kk
O_O A bit crazy for me but I believe everything is looking good for this diff.

[Overall]
Just minor suggestions is all.
Thanks! :)
Topic Starter
thepianist
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
NoHitter
The timing is weird.

Other than that, I want this ranked :|
YGOkid8
bloody hell, this should be ranked already. Go get moar BATs!!! D:
Agnes
Yo! I came to mod. Whee.

[Crackers]

No errors.

[Nuts]

No errors.

[Angry Banana]

01:58:043 (4,5) - Fix spacing?
02:01:553 (2,3) - ^

Pretty awesome map. I really do hope it get ranked soon. Star'd!
Topic Starter
thepianist

AgnesChan wrote:

Yo! I came to mod. Whee.

[Crackers]

No errors.

[Nuts]

No errors.

[Angry Banana]

01:58:043 (4,5) - Fix spacing? Fixed
02:01:553 (2,3) - ^ Isn't it fine?

Pretty awesome map. I really do hope it get ranked soon. Star'd!
Thanks!
Starrodkirby86
Ring-ring-ring~

[Crackers]:
01:26:204 (1,2) - Shorten (1) by 1/6 by the end, and extend (2) by 1/6 from its starting point? I could care less about (1), I'm focused on (2). :P

[Nuts]:
00:25:446 (3) - Shorten this slider so it ends on the red tick before it? (25:940)

[Angry Banana]:
01:35:290 (4) - Note seems a bit late.

Angry Banana has a different Background Color than the other two difficulties. Mind making it a little difficulty consistent? :D It's noticeable in the Song Select Screen.

You may want to do a quick check in case if there's something shifty with the rhythm as like I aforementioned. Of course, if you're not already driven bananas by this song. XD
Topic Starter
thepianist

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Ring-ring-ring~

[Crackers]:
01:26:204 (1,2) - Shorten (1) by 1/6 by the end, and extend (2) by 1/6 from its starting point? I could care less about (1), I'm focused on (2). :P Fixed

[Nuts]:
00:25:446 (3) - Shorten this slider so it ends on the red tick before it? (25:940) Fixed

[Angry Banana]:
01:35:290 (4) - Note seems a bit late. Fixed

Angry Banana has a different Background Color than the other two difficulties. Mind making it a little difficulty consistent? :D It's noticeable in the Song Select Screen. Fixed

You may want to do a quick check in case if there's something shifty with the rhythm as like I aforementioned. Of course, if you're not already driven bananas by this song. XD Ok!
Thanks! :D
Starrodkirby86
Oh shoot, just about to bubble this, but noticed a few more things.

[Crackers]:
Because of a white.png SB object on the Foreground layer at the very, very end of the song, there's a long End portion. It doesn't seem to do anything, so perhaps remove it? If you want it in the other difficulties, just get that Diff Specific and all that jazz. xD

Also, remove Bananaphone from the source. You had it there because it's the name of the album, yes? Well, thing is now that Sources shouldn't contain album names. :P Save that for tags, but since Bananaphone is already the name of the song, there's no need to put Bananaphone in tags. ;)
Starrodkirby86
Ring ring ring ring ring ring ring

B-bubble phone ~
Topic Starter
thepianist

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Ring ring ring ring ring ring ring

B-bubble phone ~
Thanks! ^^
YGOkid8
5 bucks say that someone's gonna find an error, which will leaved this Bubble *popped*, then ignored for another eternity :|

I'm kidding, i'm kidding ;)
whymeman
Did something happen with the SB?

white.png isn't being used here.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936

Not going to pop the bubble [yet], but would like to know if this is really being used, or just taking up space.
Topic Starter
thepianist

whymeman wrote:

Did something happen with the SB?

white.png isn't being used here.... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936

Not going to pop the bubble [yet], but would like to know if this is really being used, or just taking up space.
I placed the "blank" event there as suggested by Takuma, since if it is not there, it fades out the music to the score screen.

Or at least that's how I interpreted it.

Takuma wrote:

...Second, I think you should remove the fade out at the end - it's really unnecessary, especially since there's nothing really fading out in the song.
(viewtopic.php?p=255637#p255637)
whymeman
Hmmmm, alright then. Ranked.
Topic Starter
thepianist

whymeman wrote:

Hmmmm, alright then. Ranked.
Thanks! :D
Derekku
Why is hit100k the same as hit300k? :|
Topic Starter
thepianist

Derekku Chan wrote:

Why is hit100k the same as hit300k? :|
Huh.

*looks for backup.

Both 100's attached.



YGOkid8
so basically... anyone who wants the 100k correct needs to go to the actual topic...?
eh... a quick unranking, fix, Full Submit, then rerank IMO... :|
LuigiHann
I fixed it already
YGOkid8
oh.
don't mind me then >.<
/me unsubscribes topic and leaves
Derekku
Thanks; also, the thumbnail is broken :X
Topic Starter
thepianist

Derekku Chan wrote:

Thanks; also, the thumbnail is broken :X
I thought only BAT's can reset thumbnails? (I remember trying multiple times through full submission a long time ago, then found a somewhat relevent topic at viewtopic.php?f=5&t=20072&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&hilit=thumbnail)
Starrodkirby86
As of December there's a new Thumbnail system. Thumbnails change per submission now; using the Reset Thumbnail button breaks the Thumbnail forever. o3o
LuigiHann
Which might be why this one doesn't have one, if somebody hit the Reset button on it.
SapphireGhost
Old song, but I have a feeling the offset might be off a little. Could someone check to make sure it is right?
blissfulyoshi
Since there are so many timing section, I doubt a general online offset change will fix the problem, so even though the offset might be off in some areas I am pretty sure the offset will stay the way it is.
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