First off, please remove all kiai time. I don't believe anything in this song merits a kiai time part. Second, I think you should remove the fade out at the end - it's really unnecessary, especially since there's nothing really fading out in the song. -__- I'm no expert at timing, but are all those timing sections really needed?
-Angry Banana:
That's a fucking crazy SB.
00:49:622 (3) - 1/6th forward.
01:00:957 (1,2,3) - ^?
01:08:494 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not quite sure what this follows.
01:09:313 (6,7) - 1/6th forward.
01:10:625 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:13:330 (6,7,8,9) - I don't know what this follows either, plus its noisy. D:
01:27:549 (1) - 1/6th forward.
-Nuts:
01:11:608 (3) - The whistle at the end sounds ugly. @__@
01:50:572 (7) - Hmm, shorten to red tick?
02:19:901 (1,2) - 1/6th forward.
Have a star.
-Angry Banana:
That's a fucking crazy SB.
00:49:622 (3) - 1/6th forward.
01:00:957 (1,2,3) - ^?
01:08:494 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not quite sure what this follows.
01:09:313 (6,7) - 1/6th forward.
01:10:625 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:13:330 (6,7,8,9) - I don't know what this follows either, plus its noisy. D:
01:27:549 (1) - 1/6th forward.
-Nuts:
01:11:608 (3) - The whistle at the end sounds ugly. @__@
01:50:572 (7) - Hmm, shorten to red tick?
02:19:901 (1,2) - 1/6th forward.
Have a star.