Okay..... now that the no video issue is fixed....
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.
Non-Detailed Modding v.1.0 Go~
[ztrot's Easy Style]
The only think I can say that is odd about the map is the void of hitsounds (not counting the switch between Normal and Soft).
[Normal Style]
00:00:03 (1,2,3,4) - Cannot have hitnotes before the first offset. Either: 1.) Delete the notes 2.) Move the offset to the first note 3.) Add an offset here (Make sure it is the same for the other difficulties using this .mp3)
00:25:47 (3,1,1,1,2) - Got a small gap between these notes here.
00:46:47 (3,1,2) - ^
00:49:03 (6,1) - Was this jump intentional?
01:08:47 (2,3) - A small gap between the notes here.
01:14:47 (3,1) - ^
01:18:03 (4,1) - ^
01:21:36 (3,4,1) - ^
01:23:36 (5,1) - ^
It would be a good idea to do some touch ups using a level 3 grid for those gaps between the notes.
[Hard Style]
00:00:03 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cannot have hitnotes before the first offset. Either: 1.) Delete the notes 2.) Move the offset to the first note 3.) Add an offset here (Make sure it is the same for the other difficulties using this .mp3)
The drain seens to be strong between 00:28:81 ~ 00:46:70, keeping auto going with 3/4 HP with all 300's. Just pointing this out for you to keep an eye on it.
[Redesign Style]
00:00:17 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Cannot have hitnotes before the first offset. Either: 1.) Delete the notes 2.) Move the offset to the first note 3.) Add an offset here
Overall: The map seems good so far, but another thing to point out is that the combo colors 1 and 2 looked a bit too dark. Also, double check the spacing using the level 3 grid to fine tune any odd spots in the spacing. Once those fixes are looked into, forum PM me again but if you have other stuff to add in as well, I suggest doing that first before the PM.
(Extra Note: It seems you have an unused .osb file in the song folder. Check into that as well.)