This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, September 04, 2013 at 4:49:06 AM

Artist: Katsura Hinagiku starring Itou Shizuka
Title: Haru ULALA LOVE yo Koi!!! (TV EDIT)
Source: Hayate no Gotoku! Cuties
Tags: opening katsura hinagiku
BPM: 175
Filesize: 11942kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.93 stars, 250 notes)
2. Mochi (5 stars, 307 notes)
3. Normal (3.19 stars, 108 notes)

Download: Katsura Hinagiku starring Itou Shizuka - Haru ULALA LOVE yo Koi!!! (TV EDIT)
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hello~ from m4m :3/

[Generale]
nothing important...
just think maybe you can used grid4 to map,it'll be more neat.

[Normal]
00:31:050(4) as same angle as 00:28:307(1)?
01:07:736(3) this? 01:20:078(1) surround 01:19:736(4)
01:26:764(3) this for symmetry 01:28:821(2) x440 y112

[Hard]
00:25:907(3) surround 00:25:221(1) tail please...
00:27:107(2,3,4) i think there's rhythm is circle-slider-slider
00:39:793(3) this 00:45:107(2) more bend to surround (1) tail
00:47:336(5) less bend
00:49:393 add a note there?
01:08:078(3) one grid left to make a rhombus
01:21:364(5) delete?

[Mochi]
00:55:050(7,8,9) try this 01:18:707(1) one grid right
01:20:764(3) ^same as above

sorry...i'm still not good at modding insane diff

that all ;3
if you think my mod is too short or you don't like me mod,just ignore my m4m o3o/

Hi \o/ m4m from your queue!

Hard

Mochi

Normal

Well that's it from me. Incredibly solid mapset, if I might say so myself. Makes me feel kind of bad for my map...

Anyway hope this helps. Bye-beee

Hi~

[Normal]
I can't really tell what your combos are based on ><
I would suggest not having SV changes in a lower diff, since it's hard to beginners to adjust.
I'm going to say mostly shape things ><
00:00:536 (1) - Since this is a lower diff, I suggest you don't start with a circle when there is no intro/lead-in, because it could be difficult for beginners to hit this accurately. Maybe just remove this circle since this beat isn't really important, or use a 1/2 slider and change the pattern or something ><
00:00:707 (2,1) - Assuming that your spacing is at 1.2, try not to deviate by more than 0.03.
00:00:707 (2,1) - This doesn't look good or flow well imo. Try to either blanket of directly flow?
00:04:650 (3,4,5) - Please blanket this better; it looks really off. If you look at the approach circle on (4) in the image below, you can clearly see that it is not blanketed well.
00:11:507 (1) - I don't really think the fountain is necessary here
00:14:593 (2,3) - Same as 00:00:707 (2,1)
00:16:307 (2,3) - I would highly suggest not having circle under the end of a slider in lower diffs. It hides the circle and can be confusing.
00:17:678 (4,5) - Same as 00:00:707 (2,1)
00:19:050 (1,2) - ^, could also improve blanket slightly
00:21:621 (5) - The hit in the music is not actually on this tick. I believe it's a quarter note triplet, but this could be very confusing to play for beginners, so I would suggest just somehow replace the pattern with sliders or something.
00:25:907 (2,3) - Same as 00:16:307 (2,3)
00:28:307 (1,2) - Same as 00:00:707 (2,1); I think you get the point, just go through your map and find the rest of these.
00:34:821 (2,3) - Same as 00:16:307 (2,3)
00:43:736 (7) - I don't think this needs to stack with 00:41:507 (4) . It would flow and look better if you just aligned it with 00:43:050 (6,1)
00:44:421 (1,2,3) - Aesthetically unpleasing in general. Try to get some blanket in there?
01:03:450 (1) - I would extend this spinner to 01:04:993 and add a hitsound
01:18:364 (2) - Move this right for better alignment
01:16:650 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - You could make this entire figure rotationally symmetrical
01:19:736 (4,1) - Blanket this
01:25:564 (1,2) - Try to blanket
Again, I would suggest not using SV changes in this diff.

[Hard]
00:02:936 (1) - This NC is unnecessary
00:16:307 (3,4) - >< I think this would be better as just a 1/1 slider
00:20:421 (5,6) - Try switch them around for better rhythm, I think this would be much better:
00:29:336 (1,3) - Just being picky, but blanket could be better
00:37:564 (1) - This straight slider is kinda boring compared to the bouncy feel in the vocals. Try a special shape to match style with vocals.
00:41:336 (1) - Move NC to 00:41:507 (2) to match 00:42:878 (6,1)
00:45:621 (3,1,2,3) - I suggest you do something about combos here. I know it's musically correct in terms of starting combo on beat 1, but it just looks really awkward.
01:07:564 (4,1,2,3) - I would try for consistent spacing (polygon?) to look cleaner
01:09:107 (1,2,3) - Please blanket this better
01:15:793 (5) - Maybe NC because this figure is markedly different
01:18:193 (3,4) - Switch these around? Simply because the rhythm goes better with the music, and I feel that slider head is better for emphasizing accented notes rather than slider ends.
01:19:393 (3) - I think you should make this into 1/2 slider and hitcircle. It goes better with the music imo:
01:24:193 (5) - I think you should add NC here. You did it in Mochi diff.

[Mochi]
00:00:707 (2,3,4) - Something here is not stacked perfectly.
00:02:936 (1) - Again, I feel this NC is unnecessary.
00:02:593 (1,1,1) - Just being picky, but try to align these so the direction of the circles flows into the slider.
00:08:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make this cleaner. (3) is clearly closer to (6) than (4) is. Try to make better symmetry.
00:18:364 (1,2) - This doesn't flow at all ><
00:41:507 (2,5,7) - Stack these perfectly
00:43:564 (8,1) - I suggest unstacking these.
00:45:107 (3,5) - Stack these perfectly.
01:15:793 (5) - Maybe NC?
01:18:707 (1,2,3) - Make the spacing the same with perfect blanket. Also, I think this rhythm will be better:

That's all ~
Good Luck

M4M
[General]
why only checked "Wide screen support" on Hard?
[Normal]
this diff is the most easiest diff, so I don't follow to change the velocity of slider.
and same, try to keep NC pattern. I'm confused since this pattern looks randomly.
Placement
00:06:021(5) NC for pattern.
00:17:336(3) stack at end of slider looks difficult, and ignored DS. recommend replace. and more
00:37:221(5) same, for Normal (in case it contains Easy), you should avoid stack positively. and more.
Rhythm
00:21:621(5) this note doesn't follow any sounds.
[Hard]
Placement
00:02:936(1) spamming NC looks not better. delete NC also Insane.
00:23:336(3) not overlapped with (1) better.
00:28:993(4) Ctrl+G? I suppose this tiny jump looks nice for Hard.
01:22:307(3)^
00:47:336(5) make blanket beautiful~
01:14:593(1,2,3,4,5) for Hard, it is too easy I suppose. maybe make a jump or replace sliders...
Rhythm
01:08:708(3,4,5) a bit odd for me, to follow the vocal, maybe like this?
[Mochi]
Placement
00:12:193(3) Ctrl+G klooks nice and this jump for experienced player is fine.
00:18:707(2) change this direction like this? this flow (1,2) is more better.
00:24:193(2,3) suggest this flow.
Rhythm
00:10:650(2) it sounds nice if delete this note.
00:23:678 expect a note here because of starting vocal.
00:46:136(7,8) a bit weird for me, to follow the vocal properly, maybe it is better
01:03:107 blank is odd for me. like this?
01:18:707(1,2,3,4) same reason.
Hit Sonud
01:26:421(3) add whistle

Normal diff needs more work I suppose. but not bad, good luck & star.

not many weird thing , just new combo problem i think
m4m from your quene

Normal
00:00:707 (2) - try to connecting to this circle 00:02:593 (1) - because its little hard for this difficult
00:03:278 (1) - Remove NC
00:09:964 (1) - Remove NC
00:59:507 (1) - Remove NC then start NC here 01:00:536 (2) -
01:01:564 (1) - Remove NC
01:06:364 (1) - Remove NC
01:07:736 (3) - NC Here

Hard
00:21:221 (4,5) - i think this beat is 1/3 note , try to fix it . neh this beat that i think right [example] 00:20:878 (7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/3VHr6.jpg
01:07:736 (3) - Remove NC
00:30:878 (4) - NC here
00:45:793 (1) - Remove NC

Mochi
00:20:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 1/3 note case
00:45:793 (1) - NC here
00:16:307 (1) - Remove NC
00:37:564 (5) - NC here
00:40:307 (6) - NC here
00:41:336 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:507 (2) - NC here
00:43:050 (7) - NC here
00:45:964 (6) - NC here
01:21:450 (6) - NC here

Thanks for mod guys ~
Almost fixed, and Updated

Good Luck yaaa
kejem lw gw mw ngeGD lagu moe

Xinely wrote:

• 
  General
  00:03:278 - kiai fountain here dosa gw klo naruh kiai disini T-T

• 
  Hard
  00:21:621 (3) - hayo spacing 1,28x nya :v ampun kk
  00:28:993 (4) - lbh enak d ctrl+G flownya, kalo ngerasa kesusahan, d deketin ya lol gitu aja ud bagus kok
  00:39:793 (3) - coba buat gni http://puu.sh/3VQjH.jpg ? nggak bagus flow buat slider berikutnya imo
  01:02:078 (4) - NC biar konsisten okay~

• 
  Insane
  00:00:707 (2,3,4) - bisa ko stackednya lbh perfect how ?
  00:06:364 (2) - gk spacing 1,1x aja kek 00:04:307 (4) - fixed dua dua nya
  00:08:764 (1) - that spacing, kebalik lol (harusnya 1,2x)
  00:34:478 (4,5) - lbh enak d bc kalo d ctrl+G imo maap gw lupa ngefix ini atau kaga
  00:54:707 (4) - NC biar lbh gampang ke baca kaga konsisten ntar.. di protes player hard
  01:02:078 (4) - ctrl+G, flownya lbh enak aman.. 2 bawah ini jg
  01:02:593 (5) - ^
  01:05:678 (1) - gk usah NC lol fixed gan
  01:16:993 (5) - add clap, btw 01:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistle nya cukup d garis putih aja, sumpah brisik woke

Good Luck yaaa
kejem lw gw mw ngeGD lagu moewakwkawka sekali sekali gw pgn bikin hard

Thx for mod ~

Hello, M4M =D

[Normal]

00:02:593 (1) - Maybe better to place this circle at x:156 y:372
00:08:421 - Maybe a circle here ?
00:21:278 - Maybe a slider who start here and finished at 00:21:536

[Hard]
00:16:307 - Here it's better to have 2 circles (1/4) and the slider (who will finish at the same time)
00:54:364 (2,3) - Maybe a very high jump for a hard ?
01:07:564 (4,1,2) - ^

That's it =3

Random Mod!

[General]

00:11:507 - make the kiai end 1/8 after the kiai starts
01:25:564 - end your kiai here
Now, I'm going to make this clear, MAP THE VOCALS. Your map makes no sense according to the music, this also throws off the player while we're at it. Its like you're mapping this without speakers on.


[Normal]

00:02:593 (1) - blanket this note
00:09:964 - NO!, there should be NO SV changes in a Normal
00:20:421 (2,3) - this plays weird although its hard to map it while still be reasonable
00:25:221 (3,1) - swap NC's
00:31:907 (5) - NC
00:44:421 - SV changes are a NO
00:47:164 (3) - don't overlap sliders, they're hard to read for players at this level
01:03:450 (1) - spinner is too short for a normal
01:25:564 - why is this 0.75x speed, the song dosen't even drop, use 1x


[Hard]

Drain -1

00:00:536 (1,2,3,4) - isn't this too hard already
00:05:507 (3,4) - you should distance snap these from the previous slider, make sure to adjust the rest though
00:07:907 (2,3) - why is this spacing bigger
00:09:964 - this slowdown can be suprising for players at this level
00:15:621 (1) - make this spacing smaller
00:20:936 (1,2,3,4) - i know this is hard to map while still making it play well but i think you could simplify this
00:25:050 (4) - delete this, put the slider to this and put a note on 00:25:050 (4)
00:41:507 (2) - i would perfer if you extended the slider up to 3
00:54:364 (2,3,4,5) - back and forths plus jumps can be tough to read
01:04:993 (1,2) - normal whistles sound bad, both notes sound better with normal finishes
01:07:564 (4,1,2) - this does not play well
01:15:621 (4,5) - this also feels like it could be a bit too hard to read
01:16:650 (1) - line this slider up with the 2nd one
01:25:564 - why is this 0.75x speed, the song dosen't even drop, use 1x


[Mochi]

Is there really a point with this difficulty naming, just use Insane.
Drain -1 If you followed Hard, OD -1 definately

00:02:593 (1,2) - what is the point of the anti jumps, it feels forced
00:05:936 (5) - barely noticable but space these correctly
00:08:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bad pattern, this isn't AR 9 and looks ugly
00:09:964 (1) - why isn't this stacked
00:10:821 (2,3) - what is this 3/4 spacing, its forcing difficulty
00:12:878 (1,2) - fix the blanket
00:13:393 (2,3,4,5) - horribly spaced, the song dosen't ask for it
00:15:621 (1) - this dosen't feel like your style
00:18:021 (5,1) - these are too close, space the 1 just a bit further
00:20:764 (4,1) - swap the NC's
00:21:278 (1) - if you did the above, NC this
00:22:821 (2,3) - equalize the spacing here
00:24:707 (3) - bad blanket
00:30:707 (1,2) - 3/4 for no reason, why
00:34:478 (4,5) - this looks bad
00:36:021 - This is one example why you should map vocals, your map makes no sense with the song
00:37:564 (5) - NC
00:38:593 (1,2) - i perfer if you switch these 2 NC's
00:40:307 (6) - NC
00:42:193 (4) - NC and if you do this, NC (6) as well
00:44:421 - okay, this is unacceptable, why in the world do you have big spacing for a calm part, even the SV is slow, force dificulty
00:54:707 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - you're better off making these symetrical
01:04:993 (1,2) - normal whistles sound bad, both notes sound better with normal finishes
01:06:364 - this kiai really does make no sense, am i playing with the music or not, refer to my first point
01:12:536 (3,4,1) - bad flow
01:18:707 (1) - copypaste onto 3
01:21:450 (6) - NC
01:25:564 - why is this 0.75x speed, the song dosen't even drop, use 1x
01:28:307 (1,2,3,4) - i would try something different since this looks ugly to me tbh

This could really use some work.

Hard

00:07:907 (2,3) - because of the vocals, it feels weird having the slider after the circle, swap positions so slider is before the circle
00:12:364 (3) - finish on the end of slider
00:13:907 (3) - finish at the start of slider
00:15:278 (4) - ^
00:15:964 (2) - ^
00:16:393 (4) - finish at end of slider
00:18:021 (3) - finish at the start of slider
00:19:393 (3) - ^
00:21:621 (3) - remove, it doesn't fit anywhere
00:36:021 - add a note
01:00:021 (2,3) - swap positions too, slider before circle
01:07:907 (2,3) - ^
01:11:850 (1,2,3) - the 1/2 sliders should be before the 1/1 slider
01:19:221 (2,3) - swap positions too, slider before circle

Normal

00:21:278 (3) - replace with a slider ending at 00:21:536

Mochi

01:00:450 - add a note
01:08:078 (3) - let it repeat at 01:08:250 (basically shorten it by half and repeat the slider)
01:18:707 (1,2,3) - doesn't really fit the music

Offset 550
No KD

Fixed, thanks~ <3

I think this is the video you are looking for http://puu.sh/40NwY.avi. Tell me if you have any problems

I don't know how to mod this anymore (not so pro in mapping)
But I find some of it a little awkward.

[Normal]

1. 01:18:378 - add finish
   okay just this. . . . . .

[Hard]

1. 01:15:807 (5,6,7) - add clap
2. 01:17:864 (2) - add clap slider end
3. 01:18:207 (3) - add clap
4. 01:28:321 (1,3) - add clap
5. 01:26:092 (2,3) - add clap
   I think it would be better if you add some clap pattern from 01:05:007, the same pattern I give to you on 01:17:350 - 01:18:378

[Mochi]

1. 00:02:607 (1) - remove whistle, add clap
2. 00:02:950 (2) - add clap
3. 00:08:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add clap
4. 00:10:664 (2) - add clap
5. 01:18:207 (4) - add clap
6. 01:28:321 (1,3) - add clap

Thanks for mod ~
also thanks again bliss for video :3

hi~

Artist: Shizuka Itou ⇒ 桂ヒナギク starring 伊藤静
Romanised Artist : Shizuka Itou ⇒ Katsura Hinagiku starring Itou Shizuka

I quoted the Wikipedia. http://puu.sh/41ABw.png

Title: 春ULALA♥LOVEよ来い!!! ⇒ 春ULALA♥LOVEよ来い!!! (TV EDIT)
Romanised Title: Haru ULALA LOVE yo Koi!!! ⇒ Haru ULALA LOVE yo Koi!!! (TV EDIT)

http://puu.sh/41AR7.png
These are song that have been in the Edit for TV. It has been add to the CD > (TV EDIT).
Therefore, you should add

Hmm.. i agree with the artist,
but for the tittle, isn't the new ranking guide for not alter song title ?

Momochikun wrote:

Hmm.. i agree with the artist,
but for the tittle, isn't the new ranking guide for not alter song title ?

No rule certainly. But, please look at this ranked map. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/71742

It is a song of the works of the same series. The same way as this, I thought better to have add. I just thought..

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.

I'll keep that title atm,
however the artist name will updated soon ~

hi, from queue






Lastly, TV Size should not be three diffs imo, it's just show your laziness at here. Please at least add a easy diff.
Good Luck~

Yes i am.. lol xD
thanks a lot ~ almost fixed all

Quick peek

so I'm going to say that your diff is pretty, but that stack isn't

Consider to use stack and manual stack for one purpose. Example, stack for 1/1 and manual for 1/2

On some part I found out that it's confusing even with nomod

Oh, and don't forget that this is not an obligatory, so you can leave it if you feel that the flow looks better that way.

Good luck

Mochii~
M4M from your queue

[Normal]
tiba2 jadi bhs. indo
00:00:721 (2,1) - kurang greget kyknya kalo gak di encircle pas :v bwt ky gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/930618
00:09:978 (1) - SV change disini agak tiba2 ya, mending di normalin aja deh sv nya
00:23:178 (2) - rhythm yg disini agak susah ngambilnya buat beginner, tambah circle disini
00:26:950 (3) - stack di end slider agak susah ngeliatnya, mending di unstack aja
00:31:921 (5) - disini agak tiba2 ngikutin vocal, padahal pattern sebelumnya ngambil rhythm. Consider change:v
00:41:350 (3,1) - lel rhythm disini agak susah ditangkep, soalnya disini ngikut vocal tapi di 00:42:378 (2,3) - nggak orz
01:15:807 (3) - aneh kalo diatas gini, tweak 01:15:292 (2) - sedikit biar bisa ditaruh pake DS normal didepannya
01:25:578 (1,2,3) - Placementnya bisa agak ngebingungin karena SV change, mending SV normal aja orz

[Hard]
00:08:092 (3) - tail nya digeser dikit ke kanan, (pas nya x132 y200) biar bisa encircle 00:07:407 (1) - bagusan
00:21:635 (3) - kicknya agak ngebingungin :v biar gampangan, coba di 00:22:150 (4) - taruh circle :v
00:37:578 (1) - lel geser tail 2 grid kanan biar blanket bagusan
00:45:121 (2) - coba buat ky gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/930658 biar encircle bagusan sama ngindari overlap sama 00:43:750 (3) -
01:08:607 (4) - buat curvy, lebih pas sama vokal

[mochi]
00:15:635 (1,2) - buat 2 ini curvy biar patternnya lebih bagus dan lebih variasi krn slider sebelumnya lurus :v
00:27:978 (1) - ctrl + G disini, flownya lebih jalan
00:45:807 (1) - remove notenya ini terus stack (2) sama slider setelahnya buat antijump. Antijump lebih cocok buat part lagunya disini
01:26:778 (4) - buat kaya gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/930690 lebih cocok dgn vocalnya
01:28:321 (1,2,3,4) - eh coba 4 ini dipakein pattern. Yg skrg gak ngebentuk apa orz

Oke semoga ngebantu itu ya maaf bgt kalo ndak orz

Defuq bendera US ngemod indo.. kaget gw pertamanya :v
thanks for mod btw ~ lolicjj too xD

I'll mod Mochi diff

Hell I'm so lazy

=Mochi=
1. 00:24:721 (3) - Bad flow imo, try ctrl+g and recreate the path. Anything is fine but here's what I recommend. It's optional. http://puu.sh/44tqv.jpg
2. 00:29:178 (4,1) - I don't enjoy this jump too much because it's put after stack, which gives a terrible flow.
3. 00:34:664 (5) - Quite unseen imo, better put it under 00:34:150 (3) - 's slider head.
4. 00:49:921 (1) - Make it neater.
5. 01:14:607 (1,2,3) - Sounds better if sampleset normal addition soft, hitsound volume reduced by 5~10% with finish.
6. 01:16:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1-4 use soft hitclap + soft sampleset, 5-8 use normal sampleset. Don't forget to use additioin soft to keep the whistle hitsound.
7. 01:17:350 (1) - Soft hitclap + soft sampleset
8. 01:26:092 (2) - Soft Finish
9. 01:27:978 (6) - Soft Finish sounds better, since the music doesn't plays any splashy sounds.
10. 01:27:635 (5,6) - Also, This plays better for me if it gets ctrl+g (back & forth pattern)
11. 01:28:321 (1) - Soft Finish

Good luck

Thx.. fixed some~

Hey Mochi^^
Here's a mod for you.

[General]

1. Seems fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:664 (5,1) - This bothers me in play. The flow is a bit too harsh with this jump here. Try stacking the 5 on the head of the 00:34:150 (3) instead.
   
2. 00:45:807 (1) - Just a suggestion. For a nicer flow, try stacking this on the head of the 00:45:121 (3) and then placing the 00:45:807 (1,2,3) in a triangle. Here's what I mean:
   
   Image

   
3. 01:03:292 (3,1) - The music makes me really want to hit two notes here and then play the spinner. Try moving the spinner 1/4 later and adding another circle.
   
   Image

   
4. 01:10:321 (4,5,1) - Most it more upwards, around (168, 56). It will make a nicer flow from the previous slider and fix the blanket. If you do so, make sure 01:11:007 (2,3,4) are following in the curve.
   
   Image

   
5. 01:24:207 (1,2,3) - Try to make the spacing more consistent. It will look nicer.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too difficult for a hard imo. Try to make it more simple and use a repeating slider at 00:16:321 instead. Maybe like this:
   
   Image

   
2. 00:20:950 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because we start the repeating slider before the music calls for it. I suggest that you replace the 1 with a single circle, and then move the 3 to 00:21:807 and remove two repeats from it. That will be easier to read and follow the music nicer.
   
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3. 00:22:492 (1) - Make the finish a normal finish instead here? Seems more fitting and consistent with the Insane diff.
   
4. 00:25:921 (3) - Maybe rotate it by 12 degrees to make a nice blanket with the 1 here.
   
5. 00:33:464 (1) - Normal finish on the head maybe?
   
6. 00:49:407 - Really suggest that you add a note here and get rid of this confusing stacking with the 00:48:892 (3,4) since there is an active piano part in the music that the player can hear.
   
7. 01:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - The blankets look pretty sloppy here. Try to clean it up a bit. Move the 01:09:635 (2,3) downwards a bit so the 3 can sit in a blanket with the 01:10:492 (1) and the 2 can sit in between the sliders perfectly.

[Normal]

1. 00:00:721 (2) - This slider doesn't feel so great imo. Since this is normal, try to make use of some 1/2 sliders. Here are a few rhythms you could try:
   
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   Or if you want to get right of that 1/2 stack right at the beginning of the map, then try:
   
2. 00:05:692 (4) - Just a suggestion here, if you delete this note and rearrange the 00:06:035 (1), you can make the rhythm after it 00:06:035 (1,2,1) feel nicer with how the vocals are. That's because you put a pause in front of and behind the 00:08:092 (2).
   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Same as hard, maybe make the finish a normal finish.
   
4. 00:25:921 (2) - I think it would be better to use a rhythm that follows more closely to the vocals here. Try removing the repeat from the 2 and adding another 1/2 slider. Then move the 4 1/2 earlier. This way you can add the clap in that you are missing also.
   
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5. 00:31:064 (4,5) - It's so bland and straight. =w= Add some curves and curve the 5 more upwards so it doesn't overlap with the 00:29:007 (2). Here's just an example, try it out:
   
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6. 00:33:464 to 00:41:350 - You've used onbeat normal hits here. It sounds very strange... Try to remove the normal hits from beats 1 and 3 and place them only on beats 2 and 4. It will sound much nicer with the music.
   
7. 00:33:464 (1) - Same as hard, try a normal finish.
   
8. 00:34:492 - Try to add a note here with a clap. It's a bit strange that we have this pause here after the music starts to pick up.
   
9. 00:36:207 (1,3) - The normal hits on the head are kind of loud since these are onbeats, can you replace them with soft whistles?
   
10. 01:06:378 (1,2,1) - You've add the normal hits on the onbeats here. Please change to the offbeats.
    
11. 01:06:378 (1,1) - Placement looks not so great imo. Try flipping the 01:07:750 (1) over and making it blanket the first slider. You could try giving the wave more of a curve, it would be more interesting imo. Here's what I mean:
    
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12. 01:10:492 (1,2) - Similar point, the normal hit should be on the 2 there. Remove the one from the end of the 1 and add it to the 2.
    
13. 01:15:292 (2) - Normal hit on the head is nice here.
    
14. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:06:378 (1,2,1). The normal hits are placed incorrectly here.
    
15. 01:28:321 (1) - To make it more interesting here, try pointing the slider more to the right. Also if you add some anchors, you can make a slider that fits the playful music here a bit better. her's just an example:
    
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Anyways. The Insane is pretty nice. I don't like your spread. The hard is really jumpy for a set without an Easy diff, and the Normal diff is too difficult for beginners to play imo. You chose a very large spacing for the easiest diff. You could try placing the objects in a lower spacing. I recommend trying to map an Easy diff and adding more 1/2 rhythms in the Normal. If you really don't want to do that, then you'll have to make the Normal a bit easier.
Good luck!^^

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey Mochi^^
Here's a mod for you.

[General]

1. Seems fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:664 (5,1) - This bothers me in play. The flow is a bit too harsh with this jump here. Try stacking the 5 on the head of the 00:34:150 (3) instead. fixed
   
2. 00:45:807 (1) - Just a suggestion. For a nicer flow, try stacking this on the head of the 00:45:121 (3) and then placing the 00:45:807 (1,2,3) in a triangle. Here's what I mean: i like the flow i have, no change for now
   
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3. 01:03:292 (3,1) - The music makes me really want to hit two notes here and then play the spinner. Try moving the spinner 1/4 later and adding another circle. k ~ added
   
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4. 01:10:321 (4,5,1) - Most it more upwards, around (168, 56). It will make a nicer flow from the previous slider and fix the blanket. If you do so, make sure 01:11:007 (2,3,4) are following in the curve. fixed the blanket
   
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5. 01:24:207 (1,2,3) - Try to make the spacing more consistent. It will look nicer.omg.. fixed~

[Hard]

1. 00:15:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too difficult for a hard imo. Try to make it more simple and use a repeating slider at 00:16:321 instead. Maybe like this: fixed on my own
   
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2. 00:20:950 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because we start the repeating slider before the music calls for it. I suggest that you replace the 1 with a single circle, and then move the 3 to 00:21:807 and remove two repeats from it. That will be easier to read and follow the music nicer.okay.. i got hard time fix this xD
   
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3. 00:22:492 (1) - Make the finish a normal finish instead here? Seems more fitting and consistent with the Insane diff. i'll check this later
   
4. 00:25:921 (3) - Maybe rotate it by 12 degrees to make a nice blanket with the 1 here. fixed the blanket
   
5. 00:33:464 (1) - Normal finish on the head maybe? make it consistent with insane
   
6. 00:49:407 - Really suggest that you add a note here and get rid of this confusing stacking with the 00:48:892 (3,4) since there is an active piano part in the music that the player can hear. i make it as same as insane, i just followed the drum sound at the whole mapset
   
7. 01:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - The blankets look pretty sloppy here. Try to clean it up a bit. Move the 01:09:635 (2,3) downwards a bit so the 3 can sit in a blanket with the 01:10:492 (1) and the 2 can sit in between the sliders perfectly.looks nice.. fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:00:721 (2) - This slider doesn't feel so great imo. Since this is normal, try to make use of some 1/2 sliders. Here are a few rhythms you could try:
   
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   Or if you want to get right of that 1/2 stack right at the beginning of the map, then try:
   
   i just changed into spinner -w-
2. 00:05:692 (4) - Just a suggestion here, if you delete this note and rearrange the 00:06:035 (1), you can make the rhythm after it 00:06:035 (1,2,1) feel nicer with how the vocals are. That's because you put a pause in front of and behind the 00:08:092 (2). i'll consider this
   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Same as hard, maybe make the finish a normal finish. k
   
4. 00:25:921 (2) - I think it would be better to use a rhythm that follows more closely to the vocals here. Try removing the repeat from the 2 and adding another 1/2 slider. Then move the 4 1/2 earlier. This way you can add the clap in that you are missing also. imo missing clap before finish is fine
   
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5. 00:31:064 (4,5) - It's so bland and straight. =w= Add some curves and curve the 5 more upwards so it doesn't overlap with the 00:29:007 (2). Here's just an example, try it out: orz.. okay~
   
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6. 00:33:464 to 00:41:350 - You've used onbeat normal hits here. It sounds very strange... Try to remove the normal hits from beats 1 and 3 and place them only on beats 2 and 4. It will sound much nicer with the music. try to change rhytm
   
7. 00:33:464 (1) - Same as hard, try a normal finish. fixed
   
8. 00:34:492 - Try to add a note here with a clap. It's a bit strange that we have this pause here after the music starts to pick up. i think it still better to add after slider
   
9. 00:36:207 (1,3) - The normal hits on the head are kind of loud since these are onbeats, can you replace them with soft whistles?
   
10. 01:06:378 (1,2,1) - You've add the normal hits on the onbeats here. Please change to the offbeats.
    
11. 01:06:378 (1,1) - Placement looks not so great imo. Try flipping the 01:07:750 (1) over and making it blanket the first slider. You could try giving the wave more of a curve, it would be more interesting imo. Here's what I mean: k
    
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12. 01:10:492 (1,2) - Similar point, the normal hit should be on the 2 there. Remove the one from the end of the 1 and add it to the 2. normal on thhe 2 looks nice, but the rest feel weird IMO
    
13. 01:15:292 (2) - Normal hit on the head is nice here. added
    
14. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:06:378 (1,2,1). The normal hits are placed incorrectly here. changed
    
15. 01:28:321 (1) - To make it more interesting here, try pointing the slider more to the right. Also if you add some anchors, you can make a slider that fits the playful music here a bit better. her's just an example: added anchors xD
    
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Anyways. The Insane is pretty nice. I don't like your spread. The hard is really jumpy for a set without an Easy diff, and the Normal diff is too difficult for beginners to play imo. You chose a very large spacing for the easiest diff. You could try placing the objects in a lower spacing. I recommend trying to map an Easy diff and adding more 1/2 rhythms in the Normal. If you really don't want to do that, then you'll have to make the Normal a bit easier.
Good luck!^^

Almost fixed..
Thanks a lot for mod ~

Hi:
In Normal:
01:13:235 and 01:13:921 : In my opinión here should have some notes because the Singer contine singing, also I feel this part a bit empty

In Hard:
00:33:121 (5) - Excuse me, but Why didn't you use the claps like 00:21:807 (3)
01:15:978 and 01:16:150 (6,7) - This part is some confusing because of the precise momento there is a sound of piano and tend precipitate to 01:16:150 (6,7)

In Insane
00:43:921 (4,5) - could remove them
00:54:721 (4,5,6) and 00:55:064 (7,8,9) - Could replace these circles with short slider like the hard
01:15:978 and 01:16:150 (6,7) - same problem of piano like hard

That's all

when I grow up I want to make maps like you

Minor change.. thanks

Nice.

Only found a few issues. Call me back once you fixed it.

[Normal]
01:13:578 (4,5) - Try making this a longer slider. At the moment its very tricky to play, and this would flow better IMO. (Normal sampleset on start and end ofc)



[Mochi]
AR 9 is no good. It's to fast and the bpm doesnt justify it. Please lower it to 8.

Fixed all ~ thanks

Normal
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00:23:178 - add a note because I think it sounds better

Hard
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Everythings ok here

Insane
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00:20:007 - add a note on (2)
new combo begins 00:11:350 (1) instead of 00:11:435 (2)


Very nice map
This was everything because I cant find more.... ''orz