1. Seems fine.

1. 00:34:664 (5,1) - This bothers me in play. The flow is a bit too harsh with this jump here. Try stacking the 5 on the head of the 00:34:150 (3) instead.
   
2. 00:45:807 (1) - Just a suggestion. For a nicer flow, try stacking this on the head of the 00:45:121 (3) and then placing the 00:45:807 (1,2,3) in a triangle. Here's what I mean:
   
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3. 01:03:292 (3,1) - The music makes me really want to hit two notes here and then play the spinner. Try moving the spinner 1/4 later and adding another circle.
   
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4. 01:10:321 (4,5,1) - Most it more upwards, around (168, 56). It will make a nicer flow from the previous slider and fix the blanket. If you do so, make sure 01:11:007 (2,3,4) are following in the curve.
   
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5. 01:24:207 (1,2,3) - Try to make the spacing more consistent. It will look nicer.

1. 00:15:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too difficult for a hard imo. Try to make it more simple and use a repeating slider at 00:16:321 instead. Maybe like this:
   
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2. 00:20:950 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because we start the repeating slider before the music calls for it. I suggest that you replace the 1 with a single circle, and then move the 3 to 00:21:807 and remove two repeats from it. That will be easier to read and follow the music nicer.
   
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3. 00:22:492 (1) - Make the finish a normal finish instead here? Seems more fitting and consistent with the Insane diff.
   
4. 00:25:921 (3) - Maybe rotate it by 12 degrees to make a nice blanket with the 1 here.
   
5. 00:33:464 (1) - Normal finish on the head maybe?
   
6. 00:49:407 - Really suggest that you add a note here and get rid of this confusing stacking with the 00:48:892 (3,4) since there is an active piano part in the music that the player can hear.
   
7. 01:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - The blankets look pretty sloppy here. Try to clean it up a bit. Move the 01:09:635 (2,3) downwards a bit so the 3 can sit in a blanket with the 01:10:492 (1) and the 2 can sit in between the sliders perfectly.

1. 00:00:721 (2) - This slider doesn't feel so great imo. Since this is normal, try to make use of some 1/2 sliders. Here are a few rhythms you could try:
   
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   Or if you want to get right of that 1/2 stack right at the beginning of the map, then try:
   
2. 00:05:692 (4) - Just a suggestion here, if you delete this note and rearrange the 00:06:035 (1), you can make the rhythm after it 00:06:035 (1,2,1) feel nicer with how the vocals are. That's because you put a pause in front of and behind the 00:08:092 (2).
   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Same as hard, maybe make the finish a normal finish.
   
4. 00:25:921 (2) - I think it would be better to use a rhythm that follows more closely to the vocals here. Try removing the repeat from the 2 and adding another 1/2 slider. Then move the 4 1/2 earlier. This way you can add the clap in that you are missing also.
   
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5. 00:31:064 (4,5) - It's so bland and straight. =w= Add some curves and curve the 5 more upwards so it doesn't overlap with the 00:29:007 (2). Here's just an example, try it out:
   
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6. 00:33:464 to 00:41:350 - You've used onbeat normal hits here. It sounds very strange... Try to remove the normal hits from beats 1 and 3 and place them only on beats 2 and 4. It will sound much nicer with the music.
   
7. 00:33:464 (1) - Same as hard, try a normal finish.
   
8. 00:34:492 - Try to add a note here with a clap. It's a bit strange that we have this pause here after the music starts to pick up.
   
9. 00:36:207 (1,3) - The normal hits on the head are kind of loud since these are onbeats, can you replace them with soft whistles?
   
10. 01:06:378 (1,2,1) - You've add the normal hits on the onbeats here. Please change to the offbeats.
    
11. 01:06:378 (1,1) - Placement looks not so great imo. Try flipping the 01:07:750 (1) over and making it blanket the first slider. You could try giving the wave more of a curve, it would be more interesting imo. Here's what I mean:
    
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12. 01:10:492 (1,2) - Similar point, the normal hit should be on the 2 there. Remove the one from the end of the 1 and add it to the 2.
    
13. 01:15:292 (2) - Normal hit on the head is nice here.
    
14. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:06:378 (1,2,1). The normal hits are placed incorrectly here.
    
15. 01:28:321 (1) - To make it more interesting here, try pointing the slider more to the right. Also if you add some anchors, you can make a slider that fits the playful music here a bit better. her's just an example:
    
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UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey Mochi^^
Here's a mod for you.

[General]

1. Seems fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:664 (5,1) - This bothers me in play. The flow is a bit too harsh with this jump here. Try stacking the 5 on the head of the 00:34:150 (3) instead. fixed
   
2. 00:45:807 (1) - Just a suggestion. For a nicer flow, try stacking this on the head of the 00:45:121 (3) and then placing the 00:45:807 (1,2,3) in a triangle. Here's what I mean: i like the flow i have, no change for now
   
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3. 01:03:292 (3,1) - The music makes me really want to hit two notes here and then play the spinner. Try moving the spinner 1/4 later and adding another circle. k ~ added
   
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4. 01:10:321 (4,5,1) - Most it more upwards, around (168, 56). It will make a nicer flow from the previous slider and fix the blanket. If you do so, make sure 01:11:007 (2,3,4) are following in the curve. fixed the blanket
   
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5. 01:24:207 (1,2,3) - Try to make the spacing more consistent. It will look nicer.omg.. fixed~

[Hard]

1. 00:15:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too difficult for a hard imo. Try to make it more simple and use a repeating slider at 00:16:321 instead. Maybe like this: fixed on my own
   
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2. 00:20:950 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because we start the repeating slider before the music calls for it. I suggest that you replace the 1 with a single circle, and then move the 3 to 00:21:807 and remove two repeats from it. That will be easier to read and follow the music nicer.okay.. i got hard time fix this xD
   
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3. 00:22:492 (1) - Make the finish a normal finish instead here? Seems more fitting and consistent with the Insane diff. i'll check this later
   
4. 00:25:921 (3) - Maybe rotate it by 12 degrees to make a nice blanket with the 1 here. fixed the blanket
   
5. 00:33:464 (1) - Normal finish on the head maybe? make it consistent with insane
   
6. 00:49:407 - Really suggest that you add a note here and get rid of this confusing stacking with the 00:48:892 (3,4) since there is an active piano part in the music that the player can hear. i make it as same as insane, i just followed the drum sound at the whole mapset
   
7. 01:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - The blankets look pretty sloppy here. Try to clean it up a bit. Move the 01:09:635 (2,3) downwards a bit so the 3 can sit in a blanket with the 01:10:492 (1) and the 2 can sit in between the sliders perfectly.looks nice.. fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:00:721 (2) - This slider doesn't feel so great imo. Since this is normal, try to make use of some 1/2 sliders. Here are a few rhythms you could try:
   
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   Or if you want to get right of that 1/2 stack right at the beginning of the map, then try:
   
   i just changed into spinner -w-
2. 00:05:692 (4) - Just a suggestion here, if you delete this note and rearrange the 00:06:035 (1), you can make the rhythm after it 00:06:035 (1,2,1) feel nicer with how the vocals are. That's because you put a pause in front of and behind the 00:08:092 (2). i'll consider this
   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Same as hard, maybe make the finish a normal finish. k
   
4. 00:25:921 (2) - I think it would be better to use a rhythm that follows more closely to the vocals here. Try removing the repeat from the 2 and adding another 1/2 slider. Then move the 4 1/2 earlier. This way you can add the clap in that you are missing also. imo missing clap before finish is fine
   
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5. 00:31:064 (4,5) - It's so bland and straight. =w= Add some curves and curve the 5 more upwards so it doesn't overlap with the 00:29:007 (2). Here's just an example, try it out: orz.. okay~
   
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6. 00:33:464 to 00:41:350 - You've used onbeat normal hits here. It sounds very strange... Try to remove the normal hits from beats 1 and 3 and place them only on beats 2 and 4. It will sound much nicer with the music. try to change rhytm
   
7. 00:33:464 (1) - Same as hard, try a normal finish. fixed
   
8. 00:34:492 - Try to add a note here with a clap. It's a bit strange that we have this pause here after the music starts to pick up. i think it still better to add after slider
   
9. 00:36:207 (1,3) - The normal hits on the head are kind of loud since these are onbeats, can you replace them with soft whistles?
   
10. 01:06:378 (1,2,1) - You've add the normal hits on the onbeats here. Please change to the offbeats.
    
11. 01:06:378 (1,1) - Placement looks not so great imo. Try flipping the 01:07:750 (1) over and making it blanket the first slider. You could try giving the wave more of a curve, it would be more interesting imo. Here's what I mean: k
    
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12. 01:10:492 (1,2) - Similar point, the normal hit should be on the 2 there. Remove the one from the end of the 1 and add it to the 2. normal on thhe 2 looks nice, but the rest feel weird IMO
    
13. 01:15:292 (2) - Normal hit on the head is nice here. added
    
14. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:06:378 (1,2,1). The normal hits are placed incorrectly here. changed
    
15. 01:28:321 (1) - To make it more interesting here, try pointing the slider more to the right. Also if you add some anchors, you can make a slider that fits the playful music here a bit better. her's just an example: added anchors xD
    
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Anyways. The Insane is pretty nice. I don't like your spread. The hard is really jumpy for a set without an Easy diff, and the Normal diff is too difficult for beginners to play imo. You chose a very large spacing for the easiest diff. You could try placing the objects in a lower spacing. I recommend trying to map an Easy diff and adding more 1/2 rhythms in the Normal. If you really don't want to do that, then you'll have to make the Normal a bit easier.
Good luck!^^

Bonch0 wrote:

Normal
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00:23:178 - add a note because I think it sounds better i want to make it easier

Hard
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Everythings ok here

Insane
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00:20:007 - add a note on (2) it doesn't fit IMO
new combo begins 00:11:350 (1) instead of 00:11:435 (2) downbeat.. my NC is right


Very nice map
This was everything because I cant find more.... ''orz