Xinely wrote:

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  General
  00:03:278 - kiai fountain here dosa gw klo naruh kiai disini T-T

• 
  Hard
  00:21:621 (3) - hayo spacing 1,28x nya :v ampun kk
  00:28:993 (4) - lbh enak d ctrl+G flownya, kalo ngerasa kesusahan, d deketin ya lol gitu aja ud bagus kok
  00:39:793 (3) - coba buat gni http://puu.sh/3VQjH.jpg ? nggak bagus flow buat slider berikutnya imo
  01:02:078 (4) - NC biar konsisten okay~

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  Insane
  00:00:707 (2,3,4) - bisa ko stackednya lbh perfect how ?
  00:06:364 (2) - gk spacing 1,1x aja kek 00:04:307 (4) - fixed dua dua nya
  00:08:764 (1) - that spacing, kebalik lol (harusnya 1,2x)
  00:34:478 (4,5) - lbh enak d bc kalo d ctrl+G imo maap gw lupa ngefix ini atau kaga
  00:54:707 (4) - NC biar lbh gampang ke baca kaga konsisten ntar.. di protes player hard
  01:02:078 (4) - ctrl+G, flownya lbh enak aman.. 2 bawah ini jg
  01:02:593 (5) - ^
  01:05:678 (1) - gk usah NC lol fixed gan
  01:16:993 (5) - add clap, btw 01:16:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whistle nya cukup d garis putih aja, sumpah brisik woke

Good Luck yaaa
kejem lw gw mw ngeGD lagu moewakwkawka sekali sekali gw pgn bikin hard

Thx for mod ~

Hello, M4M =D

[Normal]

00:02:593 (1) - Maybe better to place this circle at x:156 y:372
00:08:421 - Maybe a circle here ?
00:21:278 - Maybe a slider who start here and finished at 00:21:536

[Hard]
00:16:307 - Here it's better to have 2 circles (1/4) and the slider (who will finish at the same time)
00:54:364 (2,3) - Maybe a very high jump for a hard ?
01:07:564 (4,1,2) - ^

That's it =3

Random Mod!

[General]

00:11:507 - make the kiai end 1/8 after the kiai starts
01:25:564 - end your kiai here
Now, I'm going to make this clear, MAP THE VOCALS. Your map makes no sense according to the music, this also throws off the player while we're at it. Its like you're mapping this without speakers on.


[Normal]

00:02:593 (1) - blanket this note
00:09:964 - NO!, there should be NO SV changes in a Normal
00:20:421 (2,3) - this plays weird although its hard to map it while still be reasonable
00:25:221 (3,1) - swap NC's
00:31:907 (5) - NC
00:44:421 - SV changes are a NO
00:47:164 (3) - don't overlap sliders, they're hard to read for players at this level
01:03:450 (1) - spinner is too short for a normal
01:25:564 - why is this 0.75x speed, the song dosen't even drop, use 1x


[Hard]

Drain -1

00:00:536 (1,2,3,4) - isn't this too hard already
00:05:507 (3,4) - you should distance snap these from the previous slider, make sure to adjust the rest though
00:07:907 (2,3) - why is this spacing bigger
00:09:964 - this slowdown can be suprising for players at this level
00:15:621 (1) - make this spacing smaller
00:20:936 (1,2,3,4) - i know this is hard to map while still making it play well but i think you could simplify this
00:25:050 (4) - delete this, put the slider to this and put a note on 00:25:050 (4)
00:41:507 (2) - i would perfer if you extended the slider up to 3
00:54:364 (2,3,4,5) - back and forths plus jumps can be tough to read
01:04:993 (1,2) - normal whistles sound bad, both notes sound better with normal finishes
01:07:564 (4,1,2) - this does not play well
01:15:621 (4,5) - this also feels like it could be a bit too hard to read
01:16:650 (1) - line this slider up with the 2nd one
01:25:564 - why is this 0.75x speed, the song dosen't even drop, use 1x


[Mochi]

Is there really a point with this difficulty naming, just use Insane.
Drain -1 If you followed Hard, OD -1 definately

00:02:593 (1,2) - what is the point of the anti jumps, it feels forced
00:05:936 (5) - barely noticable but space these correctly
00:08:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - bad pattern, this isn't AR 9 and looks ugly
00:09:964 (1) - why isn't this stacked
00:10:821 (2,3) - what is this 3/4 spacing, its forcing difficulty
00:12:878 (1,2) - fix the blanket
00:13:393 (2,3,4,5) - horribly spaced, the song dosen't ask for it
00:15:621 (1) - this dosen't feel like your style
00:18:021 (5,1) - these are too close, space the 1 just a bit further
00:20:764 (4,1) - swap the NC's
00:21:278 (1) - if you did the above, NC this
00:22:821 (2,3) - equalize the spacing here
00:24:707 (3) - bad blanket
00:30:707 (1,2) - 3/4 for no reason, why
00:34:478 (4,5) - this looks bad
00:36:021 - This is one example why you should map vocals, your map makes no sense with the song
00:37:564 (5) - NC
00:38:593 (1,2) - i perfer if you switch these 2 NC's
00:40:307 (6) - NC
00:42:193 (4) - NC and if you do this, NC (6) as well
00:44:421 - okay, this is unacceptable, why in the world do you have big spacing for a calm part, even the SV is slow, force dificulty
00:54:707 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - you're better off making these symetrical
01:04:993 (1,2) - normal whistles sound bad, both notes sound better with normal finishes
01:06:364 - this kiai really does make no sense, am i playing with the music or not, refer to my first point
01:12:536 (3,4,1) - bad flow
01:18:707 (1) - copypaste onto 3
01:21:450 (6) - NC
01:25:564 - why is this 0.75x speed, the song dosen't even drop, use 1x
01:28:307 (1,2,3,4) - i would try something different since this looks ugly to me tbh

This could really use some work.

Hard

00:07:907 (2,3) - because of the vocals, it feels weird having the slider after the circle, swap positions so slider is before the circle
00:12:364 (3) - finish on the end of slider
00:13:907 (3) - finish at the start of slider
00:15:278 (4) - ^
00:15:964 (2) - ^
00:16:393 (4) - finish at end of slider
00:18:021 (3) - finish at the start of slider
00:19:393 (3) - ^
00:21:621 (3) - remove, it doesn't fit anywhere
00:36:021 - add a note
01:00:021 (2,3) - swap positions too, slider before circle
01:07:907 (2,3) - ^
01:11:850 (1,2,3) - the 1/2 sliders should be before the 1/1 slider
01:19:221 (2,3) - swap positions too, slider before circle

Normal

00:21:278 (3) - replace with a slider ending at 00:21:536

Mochi

01:00:450 - add a note
01:08:078 (3) - let it repeat at 01:08:250 (basically shorten it by half and repeat the slider)
01:18:707 (1,2,3) - doesn't really fit the music

Offset 550
No KD

Fixed, thanks~ <3

I think this is the video you are looking for http://puu.sh/40NwY.avi. Tell me if you have any problems

I don't know how to mod this anymore (not so pro in mapping)
But I find some of it a little awkward.

[Normal]

1. 01:18:378 - add finish
   okay just this. . . . . .

[Hard]

1. 01:15:807 (5,6,7) - add clap
2. 01:17:864 (2) - add clap slider end
3. 01:18:207 (3) - add clap
4. 01:28:321 (1,3) - add clap
5. 01:26:092 (2,3) - add clap
   I think it would be better if you add some clap pattern from 01:05:007, the same pattern I give to you on 01:17:350 - 01:18:378

[Mochi]

1. 00:02:607 (1) - remove whistle, add clap
2. 00:02:950 (2) - add clap
3. 00:08:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add clap
4. 00:10:664 (2) - add clap
5. 01:18:207 (4) - add clap
6. 01:28:321 (1,3) - add clap

Thanks for mod ~
also thanks again bliss for video :3

hi~

Artist: Shizuka Itou ⇒ 桂ヒナギク starring 伊藤静
Romanised Artist : Shizuka Itou ⇒ Katsura Hinagiku starring Itou Shizuka

I quoted the Wikipedia. http://puu.sh/41ABw.png

Title: 春ULALA♥LOVEよ来い!!! ⇒ 春ULALA♥LOVEよ来い!!! (TV EDIT)
Romanised Title: Haru ULALA LOVE yo Koi!!! ⇒ Haru ULALA LOVE yo Koi!!! (TV EDIT)

http://puu.sh/41AR7.png
These are song that have been in the Edit for TV. It has been add to the CD > (TV EDIT).
Therefore, you should add

Hmm.. i agree with the artist,
but for the tittle, isn't the new ranking guide for not alter song title ?

Momochikun wrote:

Hmm.. i agree with the artist,
but for the tittle, isn't the new ranking guide for not alter song title ?

No rule certainly. But, please look at this ranked map. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/71742

It is a song of the works of the same series. The same way as this, I thought better to have add. I just thought..

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.

I'll keep that title atm,
however the artist name will updated soon ~

hi, from queue






Lastly, TV Size should not be three diffs imo, it's just show your laziness at here. Please at least add a easy diff.
Good Luck~

Yes i am.. lol xD
thanks a lot ~ almost fixed all

Quick peek

so I'm going to say that your diff is pretty, but that stack isn't

Consider to use stack and manual stack for one purpose. Example, stack for 1/1 and manual for 1/2

On some part I found out that it's confusing even with nomod

Oh, and don't forget that this is not an obligatory, so you can leave it if you feel that the flow looks better that way.

Good luck

Mochii~
M4M from your queue

[Normal]
tiba2 jadi bhs. indo
00:00:721 (2,1) - kurang greget kyknya kalo gak di encircle pas :v bwt ky gini aja https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/930618
00:09:978 (1) - SV change disini agak tiba2 ya, mending di normalin aja deh sv nya
00:23:178 (2) - rhythm yg disini agak susah ngambilnya buat beginner, tambah circle disini
00:26:950 (3) - stack di end slider agak susah ngeliatnya, mending di unstack aja
00:31:921 (5) - disini agak tiba2 ngikutin vocal, padahal pattern sebelumnya ngambil rhythm. Consider change:v
00:41:350 (3,1) - lel rhythm disini agak susah ditangkep, soalnya disini ngikut vocal tapi di 00:42:378 (2,3) - nggak orz
01:15:807 (3) - aneh kalo diatas gini, tweak 01:15:292 (2) - sedikit biar bisa ditaruh pake DS normal didepannya
01:25:578 (1,2,3) - Placementnya bisa agak ngebingungin karena SV change, mending SV normal aja orz

[Hard]
00:08:092 (3) - tail nya digeser dikit ke kanan, (pas nya x132 y200) biar bisa encircle 00:07:407 (1) - bagusan
00:21:635 (3) - kicknya agak ngebingungin :v biar gampangan, coba di 00:22:150 (4) - taruh circle :v
00:37:578 (1) - lel geser tail 2 grid kanan biar blanket bagusan
00:45:121 (2) - coba buat ky gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/930658 biar encircle bagusan sama ngindari overlap sama 00:43:750 (3) -
01:08:607 (4) - buat curvy, lebih pas sama vokal

[mochi]
00:15:635 (1,2) - buat 2 ini curvy biar patternnya lebih bagus dan lebih variasi krn slider sebelumnya lurus :v
00:27:978 (1) - ctrl + G disini, flownya lebih jalan
00:45:807 (1) - remove notenya ini terus stack (2) sama slider setelahnya buat antijump. Antijump lebih cocok buat part lagunya disini
01:26:778 (4) - buat kaya gini http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/930690 lebih cocok dgn vocalnya
01:28:321 (1,2,3,4) - eh coba 4 ini dipakein pattern. Yg skrg gak ngebentuk apa orz

Oke semoga ngebantu itu ya maaf bgt kalo ndak orz

Defuq bendera US ngemod indo.. kaget gw pertamanya :v
thanks for mod btw ~ lolicjj too xD

I'll mod Mochi diff

Hell I'm so lazy

=Mochi=
1. 00:24:721 (3) - Bad flow imo, try ctrl+g and recreate the path. Anything is fine but here's what I recommend. It's optional. http://puu.sh/44tqv.jpg
2. 00:29:178 (4,1) - I don't enjoy this jump too much because it's put after stack, which gives a terrible flow.
3. 00:34:664 (5) - Quite unseen imo, better put it under 00:34:150 (3) - 's slider head.
4. 00:49:921 (1) - Make it neater.
5. 01:14:607 (1,2,3) - Sounds better if sampleset normal addition soft, hitsound volume reduced by 5~10% with finish.
6. 01:16:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1-4 use soft hitclap + soft sampleset, 5-8 use normal sampleset. Don't forget to use additioin soft to keep the whistle hitsound.
7. 01:17:350 (1) - Soft hitclap + soft sampleset
8. 01:26:092 (2) - Soft Finish
9. 01:27:978 (6) - Soft Finish sounds better, since the music doesn't plays any splashy sounds.
10. 01:27:635 (5,6) - Also, This plays better for me if it gets ctrl+g (back & forth pattern)
11. 01:28:321 (1) - Soft Finish

Good luck

Thx.. fixed some~

Hey Mochi^^
Here's a mod for you.

[General]

1. Seems fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:664 (5,1) - This bothers me in play. The flow is a bit too harsh with this jump here. Try stacking the 5 on the head of the 00:34:150 (3) instead.
   
2. 00:45:807 (1) - Just a suggestion. For a nicer flow, try stacking this on the head of the 00:45:121 (3) and then placing the 00:45:807 (1,2,3) in a triangle. Here's what I mean:
   
   Image

   
3. 01:03:292 (3,1) - The music makes me really want to hit two notes here and then play the spinner. Try moving the spinner 1/4 later and adding another circle.
   
   Image

   
4. 01:10:321 (4,5,1) - Most it more upwards, around (168, 56). It will make a nicer flow from the previous slider and fix the blanket. If you do so, make sure 01:11:007 (2,3,4) are following in the curve.
   
   Image

   
5. 01:24:207 (1,2,3) - Try to make the spacing more consistent. It will look nicer.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too difficult for a hard imo. Try to make it more simple and use a repeating slider at 00:16:321 instead. Maybe like this:
   
   Image

   
2. 00:20:950 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because we start the repeating slider before the music calls for it. I suggest that you replace the 1 with a single circle, and then move the 3 to 00:21:807 and remove two repeats from it. That will be easier to read and follow the music nicer.
   
   Image

   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Make the finish a normal finish instead here? Seems more fitting and consistent with the Insane diff.
   
4. 00:25:921 (3) - Maybe rotate it by 12 degrees to make a nice blanket with the 1 here.
   
5. 00:33:464 (1) - Normal finish on the head maybe?
   
6. 00:49:407 - Really suggest that you add a note here and get rid of this confusing stacking with the 00:48:892 (3,4) since there is an active piano part in the music that the player can hear.
   
7. 01:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - The blankets look pretty sloppy here. Try to clean it up a bit. Move the 01:09:635 (2,3) downwards a bit so the 3 can sit in a blanket with the 01:10:492 (1) and the 2 can sit in between the sliders perfectly.

[Normal]

1. 00:00:721 (2) - This slider doesn't feel so great imo. Since this is normal, try to make use of some 1/2 sliders. Here are a few rhythms you could try:
   
   Image

   
   Or if you want to get right of that 1/2 stack right at the beginning of the map, then try:
   
2. 00:05:692 (4) - Just a suggestion here, if you delete this note and rearrange the 00:06:035 (1), you can make the rhythm after it 00:06:035 (1,2,1) feel nicer with how the vocals are. That's because you put a pause in front of and behind the 00:08:092 (2).
   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Same as hard, maybe make the finish a normal finish.
   
4. 00:25:921 (2) - I think it would be better to use a rhythm that follows more closely to the vocals here. Try removing the repeat from the 2 and adding another 1/2 slider. Then move the 4 1/2 earlier. This way you can add the clap in that you are missing also.
   
   Image

   
5. 00:31:064 (4,5) - It's so bland and straight. =w= Add some curves and curve the 5 more upwards so it doesn't overlap with the 00:29:007 (2). Here's just an example, try it out:
   
   Image

   
6. 00:33:464 to 00:41:350 - You've used onbeat normal hits here. It sounds very strange... Try to remove the normal hits from beats 1 and 3 and place them only on beats 2 and 4. It will sound much nicer with the music.
   
7. 00:33:464 (1) - Same as hard, try a normal finish.
   
8. 00:34:492 - Try to add a note here with a clap. It's a bit strange that we have this pause here after the music starts to pick up.
   
9. 00:36:207 (1,3) - The normal hits on the head are kind of loud since these are onbeats, can you replace them with soft whistles?
   
10. 01:06:378 (1,2,1) - You've add the normal hits on the onbeats here. Please change to the offbeats.
    
11. 01:06:378 (1,1) - Placement looks not so great imo. Try flipping the 01:07:750 (1) over and making it blanket the first slider. You could try giving the wave more of a curve, it would be more interesting imo. Here's what I mean:
    
    Image

    
12. 01:10:492 (1,2) - Similar point, the normal hit should be on the 2 there. Remove the one from the end of the 1 and add it to the 2.
    
13. 01:15:292 (2) - Normal hit on the head is nice here.
    
14. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:06:378 (1,2,1). The normal hits are placed incorrectly here.
    
15. 01:28:321 (1) - To make it more interesting here, try pointing the slider more to the right. Also if you add some anchors, you can make a slider that fits the playful music here a bit better. her's just an example:
    
    Image

    

Anyways. The Insane is pretty nice. I don't like your spread. The hard is really jumpy for a set without an Easy diff, and the Normal diff is too difficult for beginners to play imo. You chose a very large spacing for the easiest diff. You could try placing the objects in a lower spacing. I recommend trying to map an Easy diff and adding more 1/2 rhythms in the Normal. If you really don't want to do that, then you'll have to make the Normal a bit easier.
Good luck!^^

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey Mochi^^
Here's a mod for you.

[General]

1. Seems fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:664 (5,1) - This bothers me in play. The flow is a bit too harsh with this jump here. Try stacking the 5 on the head of the 00:34:150 (3) instead. fixed
   
2. 00:45:807 (1) - Just a suggestion. For a nicer flow, try stacking this on the head of the 00:45:121 (3) and then placing the 00:45:807 (1,2,3) in a triangle. Here's what I mean: i like the flow i have, no change for now
   
   Image

   
3. 01:03:292 (3,1) - The music makes me really want to hit two notes here and then play the spinner. Try moving the spinner 1/4 later and adding another circle. k ~ added
   
   Image

   
4. 01:10:321 (4,5,1) - Most it more upwards, around (168, 56). It will make a nicer flow from the previous slider and fix the blanket. If you do so, make sure 01:11:007 (2,3,4) are following in the curve. fixed the blanket
   
   Image

   
5. 01:24:207 (1,2,3) - Try to make the spacing more consistent. It will look nicer.omg.. fixed~

[Hard]

1. 00:15:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too difficult for a hard imo. Try to make it more simple and use a repeating slider at 00:16:321 instead. Maybe like this: fixed on my own
   
   Image

   
2. 00:20:950 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because we start the repeating slider before the music calls for it. I suggest that you replace the 1 with a single circle, and then move the 3 to 00:21:807 and remove two repeats from it. That will be easier to read and follow the music nicer.okay.. i got hard time fix this xD
   
   Image

   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Make the finish a normal finish instead here? Seems more fitting and consistent with the Insane diff. i'll check this later
   
4. 00:25:921 (3) - Maybe rotate it by 12 degrees to make a nice blanket with the 1 here. fixed the blanket
   
5. 00:33:464 (1) - Normal finish on the head maybe? make it consistent with insane
   
6. 00:49:407 - Really suggest that you add a note here and get rid of this confusing stacking with the 00:48:892 (3,4) since there is an active piano part in the music that the player can hear. i make it as same as insane, i just followed the drum sound at the whole mapset
   
7. 01:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - The blankets look pretty sloppy here. Try to clean it up a bit. Move the 01:09:635 (2,3) downwards a bit so the 3 can sit in a blanket with the 01:10:492 (1) and the 2 can sit in between the sliders perfectly.looks nice.. fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:00:721 (2) - This slider doesn't feel so great imo. Since this is normal, try to make use of some 1/2 sliders. Here are a few rhythms you could try:
   
   Image

   
   Or if you want to get right of that 1/2 stack right at the beginning of the map, then try:
   
   i just changed into spinner -w-
2. 00:05:692 (4) - Just a suggestion here, if you delete this note and rearrange the 00:06:035 (1), you can make the rhythm after it 00:06:035 (1,2,1) feel nicer with how the vocals are. That's because you put a pause in front of and behind the 00:08:092 (2). i'll consider this
   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Same as hard, maybe make the finish a normal finish. k
   
4. 00:25:921 (2) - I think it would be better to use a rhythm that follows more closely to the vocals here. Try removing the repeat from the 2 and adding another 1/2 slider. Then move the 4 1/2 earlier. This way you can add the clap in that you are missing also. imo missing clap before finish is fine
   
   Image

   
5. 00:31:064 (4,5) - It's so bland and straight. =w= Add some curves and curve the 5 more upwards so it doesn't overlap with the 00:29:007 (2). Here's just an example, try it out: orz.. okay~
   
   Image

   
6. 00:33:464 to 00:41:350 - You've used onbeat normal hits here. It sounds very strange... Try to remove the normal hits from beats 1 and 3 and place them only on beats 2 and 4. It will sound much nicer with the music. try to change rhytm
   
7. 00:33:464 (1) - Same as hard, try a normal finish. fixed
   
8. 00:34:492 - Try to add a note here with a clap. It's a bit strange that we have this pause here after the music starts to pick up. i think it still better to add after slider
   
9. 00:36:207 (1,3) - The normal hits on the head are kind of loud since these are onbeats, can you replace them with soft whistles?
   
10. 01:06:378 (1,2,1) - You've add the normal hits on the onbeats here. Please change to the offbeats.
    
11. 01:06:378 (1,1) - Placement looks not so great imo. Try flipping the 01:07:750 (1) over and making it blanket the first slider. You could try giving the wave more of a curve, it would be more interesting imo. Here's what I mean: k
    
    Image

    
12. 01:10:492 (1,2) - Similar point, the normal hit should be on the 2 there. Remove the one from the end of the 1 and add it to the 2. normal on thhe 2 looks nice, but the rest feel weird IMO
    
13. 01:15:292 (2) - Normal hit on the head is nice here. added
    
14. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:06:378 (1,2,1). The normal hits are placed incorrectly here. changed
    
15. 01:28:321 (1) - To make it more interesting here, try pointing the slider more to the right. Also if you add some anchors, you can make a slider that fits the playful music here a bit better. her's just an example: added anchors xD
    
    Image

    

Anyways. The Insane is pretty nice. I don't like your spread. The hard is really jumpy for a set without an Easy diff, and the Normal diff is too difficult for beginners to play imo. You chose a very large spacing for the easiest diff. You could try placing the objects in a lower spacing. I recommend trying to map an Easy diff and adding more 1/2 rhythms in the Normal. If you really don't want to do that, then you'll have to make the Normal a bit easier.
Good luck!^^

Almost fixed..
Thanks a lot for mod ~

Hi:
In Normal:
01:13:235 and 01:13:921 : In my opinión here should have some notes because the Singer contine singing, also I feel this part a bit empty

In Hard:
00:33:121 (5) - Excuse me, but Why didn't you use the claps like 00:21:807 (3)
01:15:978 and 01:16:150 (6,7) - This part is some confusing because of the precise momento there is a sound of piano and tend precipitate to 01:16:150 (6,7)

In Insane
00:43:921 (4,5) - could remove them
00:54:721 (4,5,6) and 00:55:064 (7,8,9) - Could replace these circles with short slider like the hard
01:15:978 and 01:16:150 (6,7) - same problem of piano like hard

That's all

when I grow up I want to make maps like you

Minor change.. thanks

Nice.

Only found a few issues. Call me back once you fixed it.

[Normal]
01:13:578 (4,5) - Try making this a longer slider. At the moment its very tricky to play, and this would flow better IMO. (Normal sampleset on start and end ofc)



[Mochi]
AR 9 is no good. It's to fast and the bpm doesnt justify it. Please lower it to 8.

Fixed all ~ thanks

Normal
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00:23:178 - add a note because I think it sounds better

Hard
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Everythings ok here

Insane
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00:20:007 - add a note on (2)
new combo begins 00:11:350 (1) instead of 00:11:435 (2)


Very nice map
This was everything because I cant find more.... ''orz

Bonch0 wrote:

Normal
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00:23:178 - add a note because I think it sounds better i want to make it easier

Hard
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Everythings ok here

Insane
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00:20:007 - add a note on (2) it doesn't fit IMO
new combo begins 00:11:350 (1) instead of 00:11:435 (2) downbeat.. my NC is right


Very nice map
This was everything because I cant find more.... ''orz

Sorry no change..
Thanks for mod

ulala! Sorry for being very late.

Strangely enough the title has TV EDIT in it and not TV SIZE.



Good luck!

Thank you ~ <3

Edit : to any Bats that willing to check this.. can you make the title and artist appeared at 00:11:521 ? any color is fine ~

Made a few minor changes in [Mochi]

Ranked!

Thanks for checking ~ <3

Baka!!! WHy you always make me crazyy~?

o3o congratz

never got around to modding this ><
Congratulations~

Congratulations Mochi!

gratz

lol this artist title..
you might as well just put Itou Shizuka
congrats~

H-I-N-A Hinagiku!

Thankyou guys ~
and jona if you don't mind you can mod my other pending maps :p /runs