1. 01:18:378 - add finish
   okay just this. . . . . .

1. 01:15:807 (5,6,7) - add clap
2. 01:17:864 (2) - add clap slider end
3. 01:18:207 (3) - add clap
4. 01:28:321 (1,3) - add clap
5. 01:26:092 (2,3) - add clap
   I think it would be better if you add some clap pattern from 01:05:007, the same pattern I give to you on 01:17:350 - 01:18:378

1. 00:02:607 (1) - remove whistle, add clap
2. 00:02:950 (2) - add clap
3. 00:08:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - add clap
4. 00:10:664 (2) - add clap
5. 01:18:207 (4) - add clap
6. 01:28:321 (1,3) - add clap

Momochikun wrote:

Hmm.. i agree with the artist,
but for the tittle, isn't the new ranking guide for not alter song title ?

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.

1. Seems fine.

1. 00:34:664 (5,1) - This bothers me in play. The flow is a bit too harsh with this jump here. Try stacking the 5 on the head of the 00:34:150 (3) instead.
   
2. 00:45:807 (1) - Just a suggestion. For a nicer flow, try stacking this on the head of the 00:45:121 (3) and then placing the 00:45:807 (1,2,3) in a triangle. Here's what I mean:
   
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3. 01:03:292 (3,1) - The music makes me really want to hit two notes here and then play the spinner. Try moving the spinner 1/4 later and adding another circle.
   
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4. 01:10:321 (4,5,1) - Most it more upwards, around (168, 56). It will make a nicer flow from the previous slider and fix the blanket. If you do so, make sure 01:11:007 (2,3,4) are following in the curve.
   
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5. 01:24:207 (1,2,3) - Try to make the spacing more consistent. It will look nicer.

1. 00:15:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too difficult for a hard imo. Try to make it more simple and use a repeating slider at 00:16:321 instead. Maybe like this:
   
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2. 00:20:950 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because we start the repeating slider before the music calls for it. I suggest that you replace the 1 with a single circle, and then move the 3 to 00:21:807 and remove two repeats from it. That will be easier to read and follow the music nicer.
   
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3. 00:22:492 (1) - Make the finish a normal finish instead here? Seems more fitting and consistent with the Insane diff.
   
4. 00:25:921 (3) - Maybe rotate it by 12 degrees to make a nice blanket with the 1 here.
   
5. 00:33:464 (1) - Normal finish on the head maybe?
   
6. 00:49:407 - Really suggest that you add a note here and get rid of this confusing stacking with the 00:48:892 (3,4) since there is an active piano part in the music that the player can hear.
   
7. 01:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - The blankets look pretty sloppy here. Try to clean it up a bit. Move the 01:09:635 (2,3) downwards a bit so the 3 can sit in a blanket with the 01:10:492 (1) and the 2 can sit in between the sliders perfectly.

1. 00:00:721 (2) - This slider doesn't feel so great imo. Since this is normal, try to make use of some 1/2 sliders. Here are a few rhythms you could try:
   
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   Or if you want to get right of that 1/2 stack right at the beginning of the map, then try:
   
2. 00:05:692 (4) - Just a suggestion here, if you delete this note and rearrange the 00:06:035 (1), you can make the rhythm after it 00:06:035 (1,2,1) feel nicer with how the vocals are. That's because you put a pause in front of and behind the 00:08:092 (2).
   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Same as hard, maybe make the finish a normal finish.
   
4. 00:25:921 (2) - I think it would be better to use a rhythm that follows more closely to the vocals here. Try removing the repeat from the 2 and adding another 1/2 slider. Then move the 4 1/2 earlier. This way you can add the clap in that you are missing also.
   
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5. 00:31:064 (4,5) - It's so bland and straight. =w= Add some curves and curve the 5 more upwards so it doesn't overlap with the 00:29:007 (2). Here's just an example, try it out:
   
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6. 00:33:464 to 00:41:350 - You've used onbeat normal hits here. It sounds very strange... Try to remove the normal hits from beats 1 and 3 and place them only on beats 2 and 4. It will sound much nicer with the music.
   
7. 00:33:464 (1) - Same as hard, try a normal finish.
   
8. 00:34:492 - Try to add a note here with a clap. It's a bit strange that we have this pause here after the music starts to pick up.
   
9. 00:36:207 (1,3) - The normal hits on the head are kind of loud since these are onbeats, can you replace them with soft whistles?
   
10. 01:06:378 (1,2,1) - You've add the normal hits on the onbeats here. Please change to the offbeats.
    
11. 01:06:378 (1,1) - Placement looks not so great imo. Try flipping the 01:07:750 (1) over and making it blanket the first slider. You could try giving the wave more of a curve, it would be more interesting imo. Here's what I mean:
    
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12. 01:10:492 (1,2) - Similar point, the normal hit should be on the 2 there. Remove the one from the end of the 1 and add it to the 2.
    
13. 01:15:292 (2) - Normal hit on the head is nice here.
    
14. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:06:378 (1,2,1). The normal hits are placed incorrectly here.
    
15. 01:28:321 (1) - To make it more interesting here, try pointing the slider more to the right. Also if you add some anchors, you can make a slider that fits the playful music here a bit better. her's just an example:
    
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UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey Mochi^^
Here's a mod for you.

[General]

1. Seems fine.

[Insane]

1. 00:34:664 (5,1) - This bothers me in play. The flow is a bit too harsh with this jump here. Try stacking the 5 on the head of the 00:34:150 (3) instead. fixed
   
2. 00:45:807 (1) - Just a suggestion. For a nicer flow, try stacking this on the head of the 00:45:121 (3) and then placing the 00:45:807 (1,2,3) in a triangle. Here's what I mean: i like the flow i have, no change for now
   
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3. 01:03:292 (3,1) - The music makes me really want to hit two notes here and then play the spinner. Try moving the spinner 1/4 later and adding another circle. k ~ added
   
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4. 01:10:321 (4,5,1) - Most it more upwards, around (168, 56). It will make a nicer flow from the previous slider and fix the blanket. If you do so, make sure 01:11:007 (2,3,4) are following in the curve. fixed the blanket
   
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5. 01:24:207 (1,2,3) - Try to make the spacing more consistent. It will look nicer.omg.. fixed~

[Hard]

1. 00:15:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too difficult for a hard imo. Try to make it more simple and use a repeating slider at 00:16:321 instead. Maybe like this: fixed on my own
   
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2. 00:20:950 (1,2,3) - This is confusing because we start the repeating slider before the music calls for it. I suggest that you replace the 1 with a single circle, and then move the 3 to 00:21:807 and remove two repeats from it. That will be easier to read and follow the music nicer.okay.. i got hard time fix this xD
   
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3. 00:22:492 (1) - Make the finish a normal finish instead here? Seems more fitting and consistent with the Insane diff. i'll check this later
   
4. 00:25:921 (3) - Maybe rotate it by 12 degrees to make a nice blanket with the 1 here. fixed the blanket
   
5. 00:33:464 (1) - Normal finish on the head maybe? make it consistent with insane
   
6. 00:49:407 - Really suggest that you add a note here and get rid of this confusing stacking with the 00:48:892 (3,4) since there is an active piano part in the music that the player can hear. i make it as same as insane, i just followed the drum sound at the whole mapset
   
7. 01:09:121 (1,2,3,4,1) - The blankets look pretty sloppy here. Try to clean it up a bit. Move the 01:09:635 (2,3) downwards a bit so the 3 can sit in a blanket with the 01:10:492 (1) and the 2 can sit in between the sliders perfectly.looks nice.. fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:00:721 (2) - This slider doesn't feel so great imo. Since this is normal, try to make use of some 1/2 sliders. Here are a few rhythms you could try:
   
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   Or if you want to get right of that 1/2 stack right at the beginning of the map, then try:
   
   i just changed into spinner -w-
2. 00:05:692 (4) - Just a suggestion here, if you delete this note and rearrange the 00:06:035 (1), you can make the rhythm after it 00:06:035 (1,2,1) feel nicer with how the vocals are. That's because you put a pause in front of and behind the 00:08:092 (2). i'll consider this
   
3. 00:22:492 (1) - Same as hard, maybe make the finish a normal finish. k
   
4. 00:25:921 (2) - I think it would be better to use a rhythm that follows more closely to the vocals here. Try removing the repeat from the 2 and adding another 1/2 slider. Then move the 4 1/2 earlier. This way you can add the clap in that you are missing also. imo missing clap before finish is fine
   
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5. 00:31:064 (4,5) - It's so bland and straight. =w= Add some curves and curve the 5 more upwards so it doesn't overlap with the 00:29:007 (2). Here's just an example, try it out: orz.. okay~
   
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6. 00:33:464 to 00:41:350 - You've used onbeat normal hits here. It sounds very strange... Try to remove the normal hits from beats 1 and 3 and place them only on beats 2 and 4. It will sound much nicer with the music. try to change rhytm
   
7. 00:33:464 (1) - Same as hard, try a normal finish. fixed
   
8. 00:34:492 - Try to add a note here with a clap. It's a bit strange that we have this pause here after the music starts to pick up. i think it still better to add after slider
   
9. 00:36:207 (1,3) - The normal hits on the head are kind of loud since these are onbeats, can you replace them with soft whistles?
   
10. 01:06:378 (1,2,1) - You've add the normal hits on the onbeats here. Please change to the offbeats.
    
11. 01:06:378 (1,1) - Placement looks not so great imo. Try flipping the 01:07:750 (1) over and making it blanket the first slider. You could try giving the wave more of a curve, it would be more interesting imo. Here's what I mean: k
    
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12. 01:10:492 (1,2) - Similar point, the normal hit should be on the 2 there. Remove the one from the end of the 1 and add it to the 2. normal on thhe 2 looks nice, but the rest feel weird IMO
    
13. 01:15:292 (2) - Normal hit on the head is nice here. added
    
14. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:06:378 (1,2,1). The normal hits are placed incorrectly here. changed
    
15. 01:28:321 (1) - To make it more interesting here, try pointing the slider more to the right. Also if you add some anchors, you can make a slider that fits the playful music here a bit better. her's just an example: added anchors xD
    
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Anyways. The Insane is pretty nice. I don't like your spread. The hard is really jumpy for a set without an Easy diff, and the Normal diff is too difficult for beginners to play imo. You chose a very large spacing for the easiest diff. You could try placing the objects in a lower spacing. I recommend trying to map an Easy diff and adding more 1/2 rhythms in the Normal. If you really don't want to do that, then you'll have to make the Normal a bit easier.
Good luck!^^

Bonch0 wrote:

Normal
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00:23:178 - add a note because I think it sounds better i want to make it easier

Hard
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Everythings ok here

Insane
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00:20:007 - add a note on (2) it doesn't fit IMO
new combo begins 00:11:350 (1) instead of 00:11:435 (2) downbeat.. my NC is right


Very nice map
This was everything because I cant find more.... ''orz