abalee wrote:

[General]
does the song have "(Short Ver.)" in the title? if not, suggest to delete it. fixed

[Insane]
01:03:401 (1,2,3,4) -
suggest change to this patten. you might need to add hitsound. fixed


[Hard]
00:20:039 (2,3,4) - no jump please, i thought it's 3/4 when first play. fixed

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* There are 2 OSBs in this beatmap folder, remove the wrong one


[Normal]
00:07:434 (5) - Move to X:380 and Y:28 for better flow. Because the tail slider will lead to (5) if you move them and the path of flow wouldn't be off
00:47:266 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern?


[Hard]
00:42:224 (3) - Reverse this section to create an oval flow


[Insane]
00:03:653 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Since this is a calm part, I don't think the stream would be fit in here... Consider to make another pattern
01:03:401 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern?


Good luck

1. Quite sure the artist "Duca" does not need to be written in Japanese unicode. Try typing "デュッカ" into Google, you will get strange results that have nothing to do with the artist. Replace "デュッカ" with "Duca".
   
2. Really really nice SB!

1. 00:05:165 (2,3) - A bit unnatural jump to the 2 here imo. Try moving the 2,3 more downwards and placing them more inside the curve given from the 00:04:661 (1). Try like this:
   
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2. 00:06:426 (5,6) - Small spacing doesn't feel so great imo, you have less than 1.0 spacing here. You could try increasing the spacing and also making a nicer blanket. It will play better after the 4-5 jump. Also make sure to make the 00:05:291 (3,4) blanket and the 00:06:426 (5,6) the same for a consistent pattern here.
   
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3. 00:17:896 (4,5,1,2) - Looks a bit sloppy. More spacing is nicer here, try moving the 00:19:031 (1,2) - more downwards and to the right so that the slider tail of 00:19:031 (1) is the same spacing from the spacing from the 00:17:896 (4) that the 5 is. Like this:
   
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4. 00:33:022 (7) - Clap missing perhaps?
   
5. 00:55:333 (1,2) - Move to (324,328) is nicer for more spacing and to make the blanket nice. Don't forget to move the 00:56:342 (3,4,5,6) also.
   
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6. 01:03:905 - When you're using a slidertick hitsound in an Insane diff to accent something important in the music, chances are your rhythm is not very good and is ignoring what's important in the song. Here I suggest that you remove the repeat from the 8 and to add a small stream after it. This way you will start following the drum transition when it's starting in the music instead of after it has started. You could also use a 1/4 slider with a repeat if you wanted. Also a NC on the 8 is great here, the combo gets a little bit long anyways. Here's what I mean:
   
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7. 01:04:787 (10,11,1) - It would be nice to have larger spacing here. When you have a pattern that increases spacing like 01:04:409 (9,10), you should continue that idea until the next downbeat or tension release. The 01:04:409 (9,10) and the spacing increase is following the drum transition in the music, which is building up tension in anticipation for the finish (downbeat) at 01:05:417. That's why when you decrease spacing like you do at 01:04:787 (10,11,1) before the downbeat, it feels really not so great. You can follow the music better by having similar spacing to the 11 that you do between the two 1/4 sliders, and then a jump and NC to the 1.
   Take 00:50:039 (2,3,4,5,6,1) for example, see how you follow the increased spacing idea until the downbeat? That plays really nicely.
   
8. 01:23:569 (1) - Clap on the end is nice.
   
9. 01:23:064 (7) - Try replacing with a 1/4 repeating slider instead to better follow the percussion here.
   
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10. 01:29:619 (1) - Try extending the slider by 1/4 here, seems to follow the music quite well.
    
11. 01:30:880 (1,2,3) - My large complaint here is that this super important beat at 01:31:636 falls on the end of the slider and is not stressed. What that does is make your map feel distanct from the music because we aren't moving and clicking along with important aspects of the song. Look at the setup that you have in the hard diff. That is the kind of thing that you want here. Try this sort of rhythm:
    
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    A triplet at 01:31:132 fits the music perfectly and then a jump into the slider 1.
    I have similar complaints with sliders like 01:07:182 (1) although that one is not as bad. On the end of that slider, the vocals start a new idea, so it makes the entire section feel awkward to play imo. You could try arranging as you see fit.
    
12. 01:31:384 (3,4,5,6) - You have such small spacing here even though these are some of the most accented beats in the song. A jump to the slider 01:32:392 (6) is fantastic because of the loud finish hit on its head.
    
13. 01:14:997 (6,7,1) - Since the vocals really increase in intensity here, you could try increasing spacing, which might play better especially after the jump pattern at 01:13:485 (1,2,3,4) when the vocals were more relaxed.
    
14. 01:19:535 (1,2,3) - Since the vocals are holding here, try instead following the background music by shortening the 1 by 1/4 and adding a circle, then delete 2 and more the 3 1/2 earlier like this:
    
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    You could have a nice blanketing jump to the 3 perhaps.
15. 01:38:947 (4,5) - Unstack them? It fits better with the 01:37:686 (1,2,3) pattern and plays nicer imo. Try it see if you agree.
    
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1. 00:03:148 (3,4) - This is alright here, just note that it's not really following anything in the music since the vocals are completely different here than they were at 00:01:132 (2,3). It would be better if you had a slider at 00:02:896 with a repeat on the blue tick, just like at 00:06:930 (6).
   
2. 00:15:501 (3,4,5) - Missing claps here I suppose.
   
3. 00:22:560 (4) - Clap on head.
   
4. 00:23:064 (5,1) - Switch NC makes more sense to me to follow vocals.
   
5. 00:24:577 (2) - Since we were following vocals with the 00:23:064 (5,6,1) I'd rather you not have this large jump here. It's a bit surprising. Instead I'd like if you would follow vocals with a rhythm like so:
   
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6. 00:27:854 (6) - The repeat is not following anything in the song and is missing the vocal hit at 00:28:358. I'd like it if you would extend the slider by 1/2. That or shorten it by 1/2 if you don't want to miss out on the clap.
   
7. 00:32:644 (5) - Clap on the head and on the end is nice to follow the music here.
   
8. 01:04:409 (3) - Clap on first repeat.
   
9. 01:33:653 (1,2,3) - Try increasing spacing to make the rhythm more obvious and to avoid the overlap with the 01:32:896 (6).
   
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10. 01:39:199 (4) - Missing clap on head I suppose.

1. 00:00:880 (1,2) - I think it's a confusing way to start the map. I'd prefer that you combine these into one slider.
   
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2. 00:06:426 (4,5) - The 5 being on the blue tick is a bit weird and it's difficult for the player to even notice the difference in spacing from previous notes. I highly suggest changing the rhythm before this so that you could have a repeating slider here. The idea is this:
   
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   Circle at 00:06:426 and then slider starting at 00:06:930. Also move the spinner to the right 1/4 tick.
3. 00:16:006 - I'd like you to remove the slider tick hitsound from this spot. After the finish at 00:15:753 this clap is really noisy. It's just too much noise and may confuse the player. Also the clap at 00:16:006 is much softer than the one at 00:15:501 so it's fine not to have it hitsounded here imo.
   
4. 00:27:602 (5) - I think you can make a more intuitive rhythm if you shorten this slider to end at 00:28:611 instead and have the clap on the end. Then have a 1/1 slider at 00:29:115 to follow the vocals. The reason why I say this is because the clap at 00:28:611 is really loud and it's an important beat in the section. It's better to have it on a hit like the slider end instead of in the middle of the slider. Like this:
   
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   This is why the ranking guidelines discourage the use of slidertick hitsounds. They encourage mappers to make unintuitive rhythms because they can add the hitsounds in the middle of sliders and it confuses the player.
   
5. Some times in the kiai you use a soft whistle instead of a finish, like at 01:21:048 (4,1) for example, at places where you normally use finishs (in other diffs. It's not a problem, just listing it here.

1. 00:06:930 (4,1) - I highly suggest that you even out the spacing here. New players will enjoy more movement, and there's plenty of space here to make it 1.0 spacing.
   
2. 00:20:543 (4,1,2,3) - Try changing the rhythm here to follow the vocals more closely. Try removing the repeat from the 4 and then moving the 1,2,3 to the left 1/2. Then add a repeat to the 3. Like so:
   
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   That or you could extend the 3 by one beat like this:
   
3. 01:37:686 (1) - Remove NC? Unnecessary imo.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

THE TIME HAS COME!

I'm going to be strict with your mapping because I see a lot of great potential and I want to help you improve it.

[General]

1. Quite sure the artist "Duca" does not need to be written in Japanese unicode. Try typing "デュッカ" into Google, you will get strange results that have nothing to do with the artist. Replace "デュッカ" with "Duca". ok
   
2. Really really nice SB!

[Insane]

1. 00:05:165 (2,3) - A bit unnatural jump to the 2 here imo. Try moving the 2,3 more downwards and placing them more inside the curve given from the 00:04:661 (1). Try like this: fixed
   
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2. 00:06:426 (5,6) - Small spacing doesn't feel so great imo, you have less than 1.0 spacing here. You could try increasing the spacing and also making a nicer blanket. It will play better after the 4-5 jump. Also make sure to make the 00:05:291 (3,4) blanket and the 00:06:426 (5,6) the same for a consistent pattern here. fixed
   
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3. 00:17:896 (4,5,1,2) - Looks a bit sloppy. More spacing is nicer here, try moving the 00:19:031 (1,2) - more downwards and to the right so that the slider tail of 00:19:031 (1) is the same spacing from the spacing from the 00:17:896 (4) that the 5 is. Like this: ok
   
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4. 00:33:022 (7) - Clap missing perhaps? added ><
   
5. 00:55:333 (1,2) - Move to (324,328) is nicer for more spacing and to make the blanket nice. Don't forget to move the 00:56:342 (3,4,5,6) also. ok
   
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6. 01:03:905 - When you're using a slidertick hitsound in an Insane diff to accent something important in the music, chances are your rhythm is not very good and is ignoring what's important in the song. Here I suggest that you remove the repeat from the 8 and to add a small stream after it. This way you will start following the drum transition when it's starting in the music instead of after it has started. You could also use a 1/4 slider with a repeat if you wanted. Also a NC on the 8 is great here, the combo gets a little bit long anyways. Here's what I mean: fixed but I put trouble note afterward overlaps with (8)
   
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7. 01:04:787 (10,11,1) - It would be nice to have larger spacing here. When you have a pattern that increases spacing like 01:04:409 (9,10), you should continue that idea until the next downbeat or tension release. The 01:04:409 (9,10) and the spacing increase is following the drum transition in the music, which is building up tension in anticipation for the finish (downbeat) at 01:05:417. That's why when you decrease spacing like you do at 01:04:787 (10,11,1) before the downbeat, it feels really not so great. You can follow the music better by having similar spacing to the 11 that you do between the two 1/4 sliders, and then a jump and NC to the 1.
   Take 00:50:039 (2,3,4,5,6,1) for example, see how you follow the increased spacing idea until the downbeat? That plays really nicely. I really can't understand this or my english is poor ><. I will ask you after
   
8. 01:23:569 (1) - Clap on the end is nice. ok
   
9. 01:23:064 (7) - Try replacing with a 1/4 repeating slider instead to better follow the percussion here. ok
   
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10. 01:29:619 (1) - Try extending the slider by 1/4 here, seems to follow the music quite well. ok
    
11. 01:30:880 (1,2,3) - My large complaint here is that this super important beat at 01:31:636 falls on the end of the slider and is not stressed. What that does is make your map feel distanct from the music because we aren't moving and clicking along with important aspects of the song. Look at the setup that you have in the hard diff. That is the kind of thing that you want here. Try this sort of rhythm: fixed
    
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    A triplet at 01:31:132 fits the music perfectly and then a jump into the slider 1.
    I have similar complaints with sliders like 01:07:182 (1) although that one is not as bad. On the end of that slider, the vocals start a new idea, so it makes the entire section feel awkward to play imo. You could try arranging as you see fit. I think it is fine? ><
    
12. 01:31:384 (3,4,5,6) - You have such small spacing here even though these are some of the most accented beats in the song. A jump to the slider 01:32:392 (6) is fantastic because of the loud finish hit on its head. link false @@
    
13. 01:14:997 (6,7,1) - Since the vocals really increase in intensity here, you could try increasing spacing, which might play better especially after the jump pattern at 01:13:485 (1,2,3,4) when the vocals were more relaxed. fixed I put (7) overlap with (5)
    
14. 01:19:535 (1,2,3) - Since the vocals are holding here, try instead following the background music by shortening the 1 by 1/4 and adding a circle, then delete 2 and more the 3 1/2 earlier like this: ok
    
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    You could have a nice blanketing jump to the 3 perhaps.
15. 01:38:947 (4,5) - Unstack them? It fits better with the 01:37:686 (1,2,3) pattern and plays nicer imo. Try it see if you agree.fix as image
    
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I'd like you to work more on this. Take these points here into consideration and work more on matching your spacing and rhythm to the music. Lots of times in this map you use smaller spacing for more intense portions of the song and it makes the map feel less that amazing.

[Hard]

1. 00:03:148 (3,4) - This is alright here, just note that it's not really following anything in the music since the vocals are completely different here than they were at 00:01:132 (2,3). It would be better if you had a slider at 00:02:896 with a repeat on the blue tick, just like at 00:06:930 (6). alright
   
2. 00:15:501 (3,4,5) - Missing claps here I suppose. ok
   
3. 00:22:560 (4) - Clap on head.
   
4. 00:23:064 (5,1) - Switch NC makes more sense to me to follow vocals. ok
   
5. 00:24:577 (2) - Since we were following vocals with the 00:23:064 (5,6,1) I'd rather you not have this large jump here. It's a bit surprising. Instead I'd like if you would follow vocals with a rhythm like so: fixed
   
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6. 00:27:854 (6) - The repeat is not following anything in the song and is missing the vocal hit at 00:28:358. I'd like it if you would extend the slider by 1/2. That or shorten it by 1/2 if you don't want to miss out on the clap. oh i didn't see it @@
   
7. 00:32:644 (5) - Clap on the head and on the end is nice to follow the music here. ok
   
8. 01:04:409 (3) - Clap on first repeat. ok
   
9. 01:33:653 (1,2,3) - Try increasing spacing to make the rhythm more obvious and to avoid the overlap with the 01:32:896 (6). fixed but lower distance
   
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10. 01:39:199 (4) - Missing clap on head I suppose. ok

Pretty nice diff.

[Normal]

1. 00:00:880 (1,2) - I think it's a confusing way to start the map. I'd prefer that you combine these into one slider. ok
   
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2. 00:06:426 (4,5) - The 5 being on the blue tick is a bit weird and it's difficult for the player to even notice the difference in spacing from previous notes. I highly suggest changing the rhythm before this so that you could have a repeating slider here. The idea is this: fixed
   
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   Circle at 00:06:426 and then slider starting at 00:06:930. Also move the spinner to the right 1/4 tick.
3. 00:16:006 - I'd like you to remove the slider tick hitsound from this spot. After the finish at 00:15:753 this clap is really noisy. It's just too much noise and may confuse the player. Also the clap at 00:16:006 is much softer than the one at 00:15:501 so it's fine not to have it hitsounded here imo. ok ok
   
4. 00:27:602 (5) - I think you can make a more intuitive rhythm if you shorten this slider to end at 00:28:611 instead and have the clap on the end. Then have a 1/1 slider at 00:29:115 to follow the vocals. The reason why I say this is because the clap at 00:28:611 is really loud and it's an important beat in the section. It's better to have it on a hit like the slider end instead of in the middle of the slider. Like this:
   
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   This is why the ranking guidelines discourage the use of slidertick hitsounds. They encourage mappers to make unintuitive rhythms because they can add the hitsounds in the middle of sliders and it confuses the player.
   
5. Some times in the kiai you use a soft whistle instead of a finish, like at 01:21:048 (4,1) for example, at places where you normally use finishs (in other diffs. It's not a problem, just listing it here. fixed

Great diff.

[Easy]

1. 00:06:930 (4,1) - I highly suggest that you even out the spacing here. New players will enjoy more movement, and there's plenty of space here to make it 1.0 spacing. ok fixed
   
2. 00:20:543 (4,1,2,3) - Try changing the rhythm here to follow the vocals more closely. Try removing the repeat from the 4 and then moving the 1,2,3 to the left 1/2. Then add a repeat to the 3. Like so: ok
   
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   That or you could extend the 3 by one beat like this:
   
3. 01:37:686 (1) - Remove NC? Unnecessary imo fixed.

Nice.

Ok well that's all for now. I have similar complaints that Winber1 had. I'd like you to work some more on it before calling me back.
I'm gonna star the map now because it's got lots of great potential.^^

1. 00:05:922 (4) - Move to (348,236). Make same blanket as 00:06:426 (5,6) for better pattern.
   
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2. 00:09:199 (1) - Seems nice to move this to 00:09:325 and stack on 00:09:451 (2). Follows drums and gives time after spinner.
   
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3. 00:13:358 - Consider add note here. You can make triplet on head of 00:13:485 (6). Follows music and makes nice jump here which fits.
   
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4. 00:19:409 (2,3) - More spacing plays better IMO because there is gap in rhythm. Try moving 00:20:291 (3,4,5,6) to the right.
   
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5. 00:24:073 (2,3,4) - You stop follow vocal here and the linear flow plays not so great IMO. Try to continue follow vocals:
   
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   Sample placement. The drop to 3 fits vocals well IMO.
6. 00:34:913 (5) - Try move to 00:35:165 to follow vocal better. If you delete 00:35:417 (1) and add circle at 00:34:913 you can follow vocal better and make better flow from 00:34:157 (3,4,5). Here is example:
   
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   4-5 jump fits with vocals well.
7. 00:48:527 (5) - Try stack on head of 00:47:518 (2) and make jump. It fits better after 00:47:896 (3,4) jump.
   
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8. 00:56:342 (3,4,5,6) -

   -iCo- wrote:

   00:56:342 (3,4,5,6) - make these jumps neater. They look scattered

   That's a good suggestion, these jumps are a bit scattered. Try to fix them up, maybe have 00:56:846 (5) in blanket with 00:55:333 (1). Here's a sample placement you could try:
   
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9. 01:03:401 (1) - Because you stack them, you should extend this by 1/4. That way it ends on the white tick and we play triplet. It is easier to read.
   
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   Or you could shorten it to red tick and use 1/4 slider with repeat:
   
   If you do, stack 2 - 3 is better to read.
10. 01:07:182 (1,2) - Switch NC seems better to make 01:06:174 (3,4,1) all same combo and because vocals change on this jump 01:07:686 (2).
    
11. 01:17:266 (6,1) - Make blanket? It will be more nice flow and more pretty placement.
    
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12. 01:31:636 (5,6,7,8) - You can make a more interesting placement here. Try to have 1.5 spacing to the 5 then a jump to the 7 for the loud crash. I'll give you example placement that you might like:
    
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UnitedWeSin wrote:

I'm sorry Oyatsu. Sometimes I forget about language barrier, so I'll try again.

No KD.

[Insane]

1. 00:05:922 (4) - Move to (348,236). Make same blanket as 00:06:426 (5,6) for better pattern. fixed
   
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2. 00:09:199 (1) - Seems nice to move this to 00:09:325 and stack on 00:09:451 (2). Follows drums and gives time after spinner. ok
   
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3. 00:13:358 - Consider add note here. You can make triplet on head of 00:13:485 (6). Follows music and makes nice jump here which fits. ok
   
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4. 00:19:409 (2,3) - More spacing plays better IMO because there is gap in rhythm. Try moving 00:20:291 (3,4,5,6) to the right. fixed
   
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5. 00:24:073 (2,3,4) - You stop follow vocal here and the linear flow plays not so great IMO. Try to continue follow vocals: ok
   
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   Sample placement. The drop to 3 fits vocals well IMO.
6. 00:34:913 (5) - Try move to 00:35:165 to follow vocal better. If you delete 00:35:417 (1) and add circle at 00:34:913 you can follow vocal better and make better flow from 00:34:157 (3,4,5). Here is example: ok
   
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   4-5 jump fits with vocals well.
7. 00:48:527 (5) - Try stack on head of 00:47:518 (2) and make jump. It fits better after 00:47:896 (3,4) jump. ok
   
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8. 00:56:342 (3,4,5,6) -

   -iCo- wrote:

   00:56:342 (3,4,5,6) - make these jumps neater. They look scattered

   That's a good suggestion, these jumps are a bit scattered. Try to fix them up, maybe have 00:56:846 (5) in blanket with 00:55:333 (1). Here's a sample placement you could try:ok, also i will give kudosu for ico afterward
   
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9. 01:03:401 (1) - Because you stack them, you should extend this by 1/4. That way it ends on the white tick and we play triplet. It is easier to read. fixed
   
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   Or you could shorten it to red tick and use 1/4 slider with repeat:
   
   If you do, stack 2 - 3 is better to read.
10. 01:07:182 (1,2) - Switch NC seems better to make 01:06:174 (3,4,1) all same combo and because vocals change on this jump 01:07:686 (2). ok
    
11. 01:17:266 (6,1) - Make blanket? It will be more nice flow and more pretty placement. ok
    
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12. 01:31:636 (5,6,7,8) - You can make a more interesting placement here. Try to have 1.5 spacing to the 5 then a jump to the 7 for the loud crash. I'll give you example placement that you might like: ok
    
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I have a lot of issues with the Insane diff.

I feel that sections like 00:17:014 to 00:31:132 are great and have clever placements. You use nice jumps and good flow.

But sections like (just examples):
00:33:148 to 00:41:342
01:05:417 to 01:13:485
01:27:350 to end
These sections are really not so great and need more work on placements/flow. You stop your good flow/jumps. I gave some examples on ways to fix that.

I'm sorry Oyatsu, I don't think I'm the right one to bubble right now. I think you should find a few more mods and work more on the Insane.

Insane

That's all ~ I don't guess this will become good modding. anyway, GL almost there !

scanter wrote:

before bubble check :3 no kds plz.

Insane

1. 00:06:930 (6) - Add NC? ok
2. 00:20:039 - Rhythm is a little strange. How about this rhythm? this will become following more better about guitar & vocal sound. I don't like here full ><
   
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3. 00:21:426 - Add 1 circle here? you can hear drum sound. i will consider after
4. 00:30:627 (7) - Change this to 1/2 reverse slider one? because of vocals. V pattern can creat 2 rhythm instead of repeat =w=
5. 00:35:669 (2) - this note should be put to jump IMO. sound was suddenly turned up. how about move to like x:294, y:372? i don't understand x y
6. 00:53:695 (3) - To ignore strong clap sound on 00:53:821 this point is not good idea. I recommend this rhythm. fixed
   
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7. 00:57:350 (1) - Move to x:193, y:163. not perfect stacked. use shift + mouse. ok
8. 00:58:358 (1) - Why NC here? before you did put NC consistently, so put NC 00:59:367 here is right way ok
9. 01:04:913 - Change whistle to clap fixed
10. 01:07:182 (6,1,2) - I dunno what you followed sound. how about this tempo? ok
    
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11. 01:08:695 (4) - Move to x:225, y:118. not perfect stacked. ok
12. 01:13:989 (3,5) - NC? players might confuse this, but low-bpm. fix or not as you wish nope sorry ><
13. 01:18:527 (4) - Move to x:360, y:271. ok
14. 01:28:485 (5,6) - I think, this rhythm much better for play IMO. fixed my own
    
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15. 01:31:636 (5) - NC. your pattern. it is not NC spam. ok

That's all ~ I don't guess this will become good modding. anyway, GL almost there !

Gero wrote:

don't give up! GO GO GO!

1. IRC Mod

2013-09-05 22:52 Gero: i will play in the bed xD
2013-09-05 22:54 Gero: nice
2013-09-05 22:54 Oyatsu: and no fail ><
2013-09-05 22:54 Gero: yeah
2013-09-05 22:54 Gero: is awesome goob job
2013-09-05 22:55 Gero: but i have say some things
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: playing in the bed
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: lazy gero ><
2013-09-05 22:55 Gero: yeah xD
2013-09-05 22:55 Gero: ahaha 
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: let say
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/296160 Duca - Kokoro no Tane (Short Ver.) [Isane]]
2013-09-05 22:56 Gero: disabled widescreen support 
2013-09-05 22:56 Gero: please xD
2013-09-05 22:56 Oyatsu: why?
2013-09-05 22:56 Gero: SB is 1024X768
2013-09-05 22:56 Oyatsu: ?
2013-09-05 22:56 Gero: you use only a minimal part of the space 
2013-09-05 22:57 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 22:57 Gero: you need disabled
2013-09-05 22:57 Gero: o3o
2013-09-05 22:57 Gero: all diff please
2013-09-05 22:57 Gero: 00:04:913 (1,2) -  spacing
2013-09-05 22:57 Oyatsu: done~
2013-09-05 22:58 Oyatsu: i want it variours spacing?
2013-09-05 22:58 Oyatsu: ><
2013-09-05 22:58 Gero: 00:06:426 (6) -  add whistle in the head
2013-09-05 22:58 Oyatsu: fixed
2013-09-05 22:58 Gero: but that space is very random 
2013-09-05 22:58 Gero: .w.
2013-09-05 22:59 Gero: fixed this xD
2013-09-05 22:59 Oyatsu: ok ><
2013-09-05 22:59 Oyatsu: fixed
2013-09-05 23:01 Gero: 00:19:031 (1,2) -  well this sounds wrong , try this http://puu.sh/4kdel.jpg
2013-09-05 23:02 Gero: 00:25:585 (2) -  whistle
2013-09-05 23:02 Oyatsu: fixed 2nd
2013-09-05 23:02 Oyatsu: 1st, i think fine ><
2013-09-05 23:02 Gero: nope
2013-09-05 23:02 Gero: sounds bad 
2013-09-05 23:03 Oyatsu: maybe you want follow vocal, right?
2013-09-05 23:03 Gero: 00:31:510 (6,7) -  nazi* move this circle to X: 00:32:392 (7) -  x:430 y:187 
2013-09-05 23:03 Gero: and yes
2013-09-05 23:03 Gero: is better
2013-09-05 23:03 Gero:  you do not follow nothing here
2013-09-05 23:04 Gero: imo
2013-09-05 23:04 Gero: 00:31:510 (6) -  whistle in the end 
2013-09-05 23:04 Oyatsu: instrument
2013-09-05 23:04 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 23:04 Gero: I don't hear nothing there but well
2013-09-05 23:04 Gero: ...
2013-09-05 23:05 Oyatsu: =w=
2013-09-05 23:05 Oyatsu: continue, gero...
2013-09-05 23:05 Gero: 00:32:140 (7,1) -  spacing
2013-09-05 23:05 Gero: 00:34:157 (3) -  whistle
2013-09-05 23:06 Oyatsu: fixed all
2013-09-05 23:06 Gero: 00:39:199 -  imo would be much better follow the drums 
2013-09-05 23:06 Gero: but this can omit
2013-09-05 23:06 Oyatsu: so
2013-09-05 23:06 Oyatsu: add drum?
2013-09-05 23:06 Oyatsu: remove finish?
2013-09-05 23:06 Gero: nope
2013-09-05 23:07 Oyatsu: hm?
2013-09-05 23:07 Gero: i mean this http://puu.sh/4kdtG.jpg
2013-09-05 23:07 Gero: change the slider for circles
2013-09-05 23:08 Gero: to better follow the background
2013-09-05 23:08 Gero: 00:43:232 (1) -  add finish in the head
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: 00:46:384 -  add note here 
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: o3o
2013-09-05 23:09 Oyatsu:  whistle is good with me
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: listen well
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: kk
2013-09-05 23:09 Oyatsu: ?
2013-09-05 23:09 Oyatsu: add note where?
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: 00:46:384 - 
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: here
2013-09-05 23:10 Oyatsu: idk the way to fix rhythm ><
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: three circles here 00:46:258 -  and finish here 00:46:510 -  add clap ofc
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: 00:52:056 (2) -  remove the whistle at the end and add the whistle in the head sounds better
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: imo
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: 00:53:695 (2) -  whistle in the head o3o
2013-09-05 23:11 Oyatsu: 00:45:753 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 
2013-09-05 23:11 Oyatsu: all is notes @@
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: nope
2013-09-05 23:12 Gero: this time
2013-09-05 23:12 Gero: 00:46:258 -  
2013-09-05 23:12 Gero: three claps are heard here
2013-09-05 23:12 Gero: xD
2013-09-05 23:12 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 23:12 Oyatsu: continue
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: 01:04:409 -  same here 
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: 01:04:913 -  and here
2013-09-05 23:13 Oyatsu: i keep sorry ><
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: listen well to the background o3o
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: ok
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: ..
2013-09-05 23:13 Oyatsu: i make as piano
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: kk
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: continue~~~~~~~~~~
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: =w=
2013-09-05 23:14 Gero: 01:07:812 (2) -  whistle in head 
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: fix
2013-09-05 23:14 Gero: and end
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: ...ed
2013-09-05 23:14 Gero: 01:08:443 (3) -  remove this
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 23:14 Gero: 01:22:560 -  stream here please D:<
2013-09-05 23:15 Gero: 01:23:569 -  and you end up here
2013-09-05 23:15 Gero: 01:23:569 -  i mean add note here with finish :B
2013-09-05 23:16 Gero: this is all very clean diff

Gero wrote:

Duca - Kokoro no Tane (Short Ver.)

official site:

http://www.cuffs.co.jp/products/cafesou ... _Short.mp3
http://www.cuffs.co.jp/products/cafesourire/download/

Oyatsu Baka xD!


EDIT:

1. IRC Mod

BTW isane? Insane please

Note: please do not lie me! and be honest, about things which fixed and that does not change! . . .

IRC Mod

2013-09-05 22:52 Gero: i will play in the bed xD
2013-09-05 22:54 Gero: nice
2013-09-05 22:54 Oyatsu: and no fail ><
2013-09-05 22:54 Gero: yeah
2013-09-05 22:54 Gero: is awesome goob job
2013-09-05 22:55 Gero: but i have say some things
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: playing in the bed
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: lazy gero ><
2013-09-05 22:55 Gero: yeah xD
2013-09-05 22:55 Gero: ahaha 
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: let say
2013-09-05 22:55 Oyatsu: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/296160 Duca - Kokoro no Tane (Short Ver.) [Isane]]
2013-09-05 22:56 Gero: disabled widescreen support 
2013-09-05 22:56 Gero: please xD
2013-09-05 22:56 Oyatsu: why?
2013-09-05 22:56 Gero: SB is 1024X768
2013-09-05 22:56 Oyatsu: ?
2013-09-05 22:56 Gero: you use only a minimal part of the space 
2013-09-05 22:57 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 22:57 Gero: you need disabled
2013-09-05 22:57 Gero: o3o
2013-09-05 22:57 Gero: all diff please
2013-09-05 22:57 Gero: 00:04:913 (1,2) -  spacing
2013-09-05 22:57 Oyatsu: done~
2013-09-05 22:58 Oyatsu: i want it variours spacing?
2013-09-05 22:58 Oyatsu: ><
2013-09-05 22:58 Gero: 00:06:426 (6) -  add whistle in the head
2013-09-05 22:58 Oyatsu: fixed
2013-09-05 22:58 Gero: but that space is very random 
2013-09-05 22:58 Gero: .w.
2013-09-05 22:59 Gero: fixed this xD
2013-09-05 22:59 Oyatsu: ok ><
2013-09-05 22:59 Oyatsu: fixed
2013-09-05 23:01 Gero: 00:19:031 (1,2) -  well this sounds wrong , try this http://puu.sh/4kdel.jpg
2013-09-05 23:02 Gero: 00:25:585 (2) -  whistle
2013-09-05 23:02 Oyatsu: fixed 2nd
2013-09-05 23:02 Oyatsu: 1st, i think fine ><
2013-09-05 23:02 Gero: nope
2013-09-05 23:02 Gero: sounds bad 
2013-09-05 23:03 Oyatsu: maybe you want follow vocal, right?
2013-09-05 23:03 Gero: 00:31:510 (6,7) -  nazi* move this circle to X: 00:32:392 (7) -  x:430 y:187 
2013-09-05 23:03 Gero: and yes
2013-09-05 23:03 Gero: is better
2013-09-05 23:03 Gero:  you do not follow nothing here
2013-09-05 23:04 Gero: imo
2013-09-05 23:04 Gero: 00:31:510 (6) -  whistle in the end 
2013-09-05 23:04 Oyatsu: instrument
2013-09-05 23:04 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 23:04 Gero: I don't hear nothing there but well
2013-09-05 23:04 Gero: ...
2013-09-05 23:05 Oyatsu: =w=
2013-09-05 23:05 Oyatsu: continue, gero...
2013-09-05 23:05 Gero: 00:32:140 (7,1) -  spacing
2013-09-05 23:05 Gero: 00:34:157 (3) -  whistle
2013-09-05 23:06 Oyatsu: fixed all
2013-09-05 23:06 Gero: 00:39:199 -  imo would be much better follow the drums 
2013-09-05 23:06 Gero: but this can omit
2013-09-05 23:06 Oyatsu: so
2013-09-05 23:06 Oyatsu: add drum?
2013-09-05 23:06 Oyatsu: remove finish?
2013-09-05 23:06 Gero: nope
2013-09-05 23:07 Oyatsu: hm?
2013-09-05 23:07 Gero: i mean this http://puu.sh/4kdtG.jpg
2013-09-05 23:07 Gero: change the slider for circles
2013-09-05 23:08 Gero: to better follow the background
2013-09-05 23:08 Gero: 00:43:232 (1) -  add finish in the head
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: 00:46:384 -  add note here 
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: o3o
2013-09-05 23:09 Oyatsu:  whistle is good with me
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: listen well
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: kk
2013-09-05 23:09 Oyatsu: ?
2013-09-05 23:09 Oyatsu: add note where?
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: 00:46:384 - 
2013-09-05 23:09 Gero: here
2013-09-05 23:10 Oyatsu: idk the way to fix rhythm ><
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: three circles here 00:46:258 -  and finish here 00:46:510 -  add clap ofc
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: 00:52:056 (2) -  remove the whistle at the end and add the whistle in the head sounds better
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: imo
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: 00:53:695 (2) -  whistle in the head o3o
2013-09-05 23:11 Oyatsu: 00:45:753 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 
2013-09-05 23:11 Oyatsu: all is notes @@
2013-09-05 23:11 Gero: nope
2013-09-05 23:12 Gero: this time
2013-09-05 23:12 Gero: 00:46:258 -  
2013-09-05 23:12 Gero: three claps are heard here
2013-09-05 23:12 Gero: xD
2013-09-05 23:12 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 23:12 Oyatsu: continue
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: 01:04:409 -  same here 
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: 01:04:913 -  and here
2013-09-05 23:13 Oyatsu: i keep sorry ><
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: listen well to the background o3o
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: ok
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: ..
2013-09-05 23:13 Oyatsu: i make as piano
2013-09-05 23:13 Gero: kk
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: continue~~~~~~~~~~
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: =w=
2013-09-05 23:14 Gero: 01:07:812 (2) -  whistle in head 
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: fix
2013-09-05 23:14 Gero: and end
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: ...ed
2013-09-05 23:14 Gero: 01:08:443 (3) -  remove this
2013-09-05 23:14 Oyatsu: ok
2013-09-05 23:14 Gero: 01:22:560 -  stream here please D:<
2013-09-05 23:15 Gero: 01:23:569 -  and you end up here
2013-09-05 23:15 Gero: 01:23:569 -  i mean add note here with finish :B
2013-09-05 23:16 Gero: this is all very clean diff

Teara wrote:

Very very nice.



Small IRC mod.

SPOILER

13:44 Teara: 00:19:409 (2) -
13:44 Teara: whislte on the start to maybe, for more impact
13:45 Oyatsu: yea
13:46 Teara: 01:23:695 (1,1) -
13:46 Teara: I know its a insane, but I prefer it if the next note after a spinner is proximity is around the ceneter
13:46 Teara: center*
13:46 Oyatsu: hm...
13:47 Teara: feel free to igorte
13:47 Oyatsu: your mean is circle at center spin?
13:47 Teara: not in center
13:47 Teara: second
13:47 Oyatsu: i think mine is fine =w=
13:48 Teara: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/983221
13:48 Oyatsu: ah
13:48 Oyatsu: you copy wrong @@
13:49 Teara: orz
13:49 Teara: http://puu.sh/4qWTJ.png <
13:49 Oyatsu: fixed
13:49 Teara: :3
13:49 Oyatsu: let you mod all before
13:49 Oyatsu: mode i will fix after
13:49 Teara: kk
13:50 *Teara is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/274697 Duca - Kokoro no Tane (Short Ver.) [Hard]]
13:50 Oyatsu: ok
13:50 Teara: 00:17:770 (2,3) -
13:51 Teara: I'd start the slider on the prev blue tik
13:51 Teara: tick*
13:51 Teara: http://puu.sh/4qWZl.jpg
13:51 Oyatsu: hm
13:51 Oyatsu: ok
13:54 Teara: 01:17:896 (2) -
13:54 Teara: I'd add a finish here
13:54 Teara: at 50% volume
13:54 Teara: to hightlight vocals
13:54 Oyatsu: added
13:55 Oyatsu: at 01:17:896 (2) - ?
13:55 Teara: 01:17:770 -
13:55 Teara: 01:18:022 -
13:55 Oyatsu: ok
13:56 Teara: 01:34:031 (2) - same as above, but at 45%
13:57 Oyatsu: added
14:00 Teara: normal is <3
14:00 Oyatsu: =w=
14:00 Oyatsu: ty
14:02 Teara: fix the other stuff and update mapset lease
14:03 Teara: easy is <3 too

popner wrote:

[Genaral]
Kiai in Normal is inconsistent with other diffs.
There are two osb files in song folder.

[Insane]
01:27:350 (1) - missed an NC on after-spinner note.

1. 00:16:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the claps here heard messed. remove current and put claps on (2,3) & (5,6) please
2. 00:40:081 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ similar, put claps on 00:40:081 (3) - 's end and (4,7,8)
3. 00:46:258 (4,5,6) - nonsense triplet.. i'd like to choose two 1/2 slider here
   
4. 01:27:350 (1) - i suppose it's unnecessary so suggest to remove
5. 01:39:451 - due to the cymbal here i'd like to change 01:39:199 (6) - to three notes.

1. 00:15:501 (3,4) - similar clap suggestion as Insane

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:16:006 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the claps here heard messed. remove current and put claps on (2,3) & (5,6) please I still don't understand this, so I will ask u after
2. 00:40:081 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ similar, put claps on 00:40:081 (3) - 's end and (4,7,8) ^
3. 00:46:258 (4,5,6) - nonsense triplet.. i'd like to choose two 1/2 slider here it isn't nonsense, i can hear a clap at 00:46:384 (5) - so I want it is so to sensible with instrument
   
4. 01:27:350 (1) - i suppose it's unnecessary so suggest to remove fixed
5. 01:39:451 - due to the cymbal here i'd like to change 01:39:199 (6) - to three notes.

[Hard]

1. 00:15:501 (3,4) - similar clap suggestion as Insane remove it? right? ><

Call me back to recheck when you're ready :>

Scorpiour wrote:

Ranked~~!!

kantokun wrote:

Gratz OyaBAKA ><!!