Yo.
[Storyboard]
Well.. Some things that I've noticed about your SB. It's really nice, but you can make it even better!
Good luck!
[Storyboard]
Well.. Some things that I've noticed about your SB. It's really nice, but you can make it even better!
- First of all, there's only one thing that really bugs me. In "compose" tab and during testplay/gameplay there's a white line in the right edge of screen. This line is flashing and it's really annoying sometimes. 01:09:577 - here's the screenshot. But it happens a lot, test your map and you'll see it.
- Try to make fade effect for SB/FG/9 a bit longer. It disappears too fast an dit doesn't look really nice. I thing it's better if you start fading on 99451 (01:39:451)
It looks really good. Hope to see more of your works soon.
- Are you sure that epilepsy warning is needed here? I'd disable it because there's no any strobing effects!
- 00:00:880 (1,3) - nazi - this overlap is not visible during gameplay, but it flows a bit strange. What if we'll try to make blanket slider with (2). It's still the same symmetrical and well-spaced pattern, but it flows much better!
- Start all spinners in this diff 1/2 later. So, beginners will have some time to prepare for spinners and it'll fit with music better! Try it!
- 01:36:174 (2,1) - I don't really like gap between these two beats. It's different from your regular rhythm, so it may confuse beginners. So, I've changeed rhythm here for you, here's the screenshot.
Note: what exactly is changed? 01:37:182 - (2) ends here + 01:37:686 - 1/2 slider + 01:38:443 - 1/2 slider with repeat
Good job!
- Set OD/HP to 4 to get better balanced diff spread. It will fit with your patterns much better. Try it in action, and I promise - you'll like it!
- 00:27:602 (5,1) - nazi - blanket here could be a little bit better. It's not a big deal, but I think you should do it!
Note: feel free to poke me if you want code for any of my suggestions! I'll be happy to provide you with this codes - 00:54:577 (3) - Instead of this sldier, we can make something that will represent music much better. try 1/2 slider with repeat. It'll help you to emphasize clap sound and vocals!
- 01:05:922 (2,3) - these sliders are cute, but that overlap confuses me a bit. You don't use such patterns often, so it looks a little bit strange. What if we'll try to make a blanket slider? example!
- 01:37:686 (1,2,3) - some of loud beats are ignored, and some quite ones are mapped. It sounds kinda weird to me, so I strongly recommend you to use Ctrl+G for 01:37:686 (1,2)
Note: don't forget to fix spacing and hitsounds if you agree!
Rhythm in the end confused me but overall diff is fine.
- 00:19:535 - How about making this tick a little bit louder. It'll fit better with vocals. Anyway, try it before saying "no"!
Note: 00:25:837 - same. Well, it happens some more times. I think you can fix such patterns yourself, if you agree. - 00:19:031 (5) - 00:31:132 (4) - have you missed New Combos here? It sounds like you should place NCs here to emphasize vocals/music changes and to make comboing more consistent!
- 01:02:392 (3,4) - blankets are a bit messy and DS is strange. It's too low for jump and too big for regular spacing. If you want, make spacing more consistent. So, it'll look like this
- 01:38:695 - consider mapping this beat to get more consistent and enjoyable rhythm. It sounds kinda empty without it.
- Try to use consistent spacing for all 1/4 patterns. It'll help us to read/understand your patterns better + it looks much neater.
- 00:04:535 (7) - this circle feels more like overmap. I'd recommend you to remove it, but it's up to you.
Nothing else. Nice diff. Well, just one more thing..think about using AR9, it'd fit better with your pattern.
Good luck!