1. 00:29:570 (46) - Kat? this is so empty, read the pitches more.
   00:36:370 (57,58,59,60,61,62) - This objects really weird for me about the pitch. i suggest you to change it to d d k__k d d
   01:21:170 (35) - Kat? this is higher too instead before object.
   02:32:370 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - You are using k d k so many, consider make new style pattern. really boring at playing.
   03:42:770 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - ^

1. Clean.

1. 02:28:370 (48,49) - Swap? (49) still higher than (48).

1. 00:19:370 (72,73) - Delete kat? seems too many kat here, and these note is lower.

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

beb
i'm too lazy C:~ i was really busy D:

[General]

1. All is fine. i think generals is ready for ranking.

I didn't use my modding template. this is just little mod anyways not helping you more again, >:D

[Kantan]

1. 00:29:570 (46) - Kat? this is so empty, read the pitches more. fixed
   00:36:370 (57,58,59,60,61,62) - This objects really weird for me about the pitch. i suggest you to change it to d d k__k d d changed to d d k, k d k
   01:21:170 (35) - Kat? this is higher too instead before object. no change
   02:32:370 (36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44) - You are using k d k so many, consider make new style pattern. really boring at playing. changed the pattern to k d, k k d, k k d, d k d d k
   03:42:770 (150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158) - ^ ^

[Fuutsu]

1. Clean.

[Muzu (it's short because my lazy)]

1. 02:28:370 (48,49) - Swap? (49) still higher than (48). no change as I followed the drum

[Oni]

1. 00:19:370 (72,73) - Delete kat? seems too many kat here, and these note is lower. I think these kats fit.

Shit, can't mod inner onis :OO
I think it's really good. Call bat please!
Also, Good luck~

Nofool wrote:

My first mod is done !_! (The Jik's Ura Oni is missing atm sorry)
First mod so I'm not experienced n_n ofc don't take this mod too seriously, I'm just training...
Everything looked already perfect... so I mostly suggested some k/d changes that sounded good to me (with the voices mostly).
I hope it'll be a bit usefull.

[Kantan]

SPOILER

• 00:07:170 (7) K instead of D ?
  00:53:570 (87,88) d k instead of k d ? fixed
  01:13:170 maybe add k ? This will form a long stream of 1/1 notes, which is a bit hard for Kantan.
  01:31:570 (52) remove ? fixed
  02:03:970 (108,109) d k instead of k d ? fixed
  02:23:570 same as 01:13:170
  03:33:970 ^

[Futsuu]

SPOILER

• 00:07:170 (11) K instead of D ?
  00:38:570 (80) k instead of d ? fixed
  00:46:570 (100) ^
  00:48:770 (106) ^
  00:52:770 (112) d instead of k ? I followed the snare drum.
  00:55:570 (117,118) dk instead of kd ? ^
  00:59:570 (128,129) dk instead of kd ? ^
  01:15:170 (32) D instead of K ?
  01:48:970 (107) k instead of d ? fixed
  01:55:570 (124) d instead of k ?
  02:09:170 (152,153,154,155,156)) dk instead of kd, or kd kdK instead of kd dkD ?
  02:24:770 (30,31) K D instead of D K ? D K suits the pitch difference imo
  03:35:170 (168,169) ^
  03:41:370 (183,184,185,186) ddk k instead of dkk d ? changed to dkd d instead

[Muzukashii]

SPOILER

• 00:07:170 (22) K instead of D ?
  00:15:370 (46,47,48) k d k instead of d k d ? d k d could fit the snares
  01:09:970 (24) d insteak of k ?
  01:15:170 (39) D instead of K ?
  01:40:170 (114,115,116) same as 00:15:370
  01:56:970 (163) d instead of k ? fixed
  02:25:570 (40) same as 01:15:170
  02:26:970 (43) d instead of k ? fixed
  03:24:370 (186) ^
  03:35:970 (224) same as 01:15:170
  03:37:370 (227) same as 02:26:970 fixed
  03:48:370 (264,265) d k instead of k d ?
  03:59:570 (296) d instead of k ? k is for snare consistency as the sound is obvious
  04:00:970 (300,301,302) same as 00:15:370 ^

[Oni]

SPOILER

• 00:07:170 (28) K instead of D ?
  00:16:770 (63) remove ?
  00:49:370 (195,196) k d instead of d k ?
  01:47:170 (185) k instead of d ?
  01:48:970 (192) ^ fixed
  01:56:970(223) ^ fixed
  02:11:170 (279,280,281) k k d instead of d d k (it sounds cool as k k d 8D) fixed
  02:13:370 (1) remove ?
  02:41:970 (127) k instead of d ?
  03:23:770 (251) ^
  03:24:570 (255) d instead of k ?
  04:04:670 (428) k instead of d ? fixed

[Inner Oni]

SPOILER

• 00:11:370 (48) d instead of k ? fixed
  00:23:570 (106,107) k k instead of d d ? fixed
  00:28:770 (131,132) d d instead of k k ?
  00:33:770 (155) d instead of k and then ↓
  00:34:170 (157) k instead of d ?
  00:37:370 (175,176) k d instead of d k ? fixed
  00:43:770 (205) k instead of d ?
  00:51:770 (244) ^ fixed
  00:52:370 (246) ^
  00:56:170 (266,267,268,269) k d k k instead of d k d d ? changed to d k k d instead
  01:03:370 (3) d instead of k ?
  01:14:370 (59) K d k instead of D k d ? D K D is nice imo
  01:25:370 (111) k instead of d ? fixed
  01:39:770 (174) d instead of k ?
  01:56:970 (248) ^
  02:03:170 (273) ^
  02:06:970 (290) ^ fixed
  02:14:170 (5) ^
  02:24:770 (63) same as 01:14:370
  02:26:570 (73,74) k d instead of d k ?
  02:33:770 (106) k instead of d ?
  02:41:970 (142) ^ fixed
  03:04:970 (216,217) k d instead of d k ? fixed
  03:24:170 (291,292) ^
  02:28:770 (318) k instead of d and then ↓
  03:29:370 (321) d instead of k ?
  03:34:170 (342,343) k d instead of d k ?
  03:35:170 (346,347,348) same as 01:14:370
  03:36:970 (355,356) same as 02:26:570
  03:40:170 (370) k instead of d ? fixed
  03:44:170 (388) ^

Thanks for having proposed me this map Nardo n_n
Oh and I forgot that you don't have to explain why you refuse something ! Do it if you don't mind but don't waste your time hue
(I'll edit later to add the Jikson[m9]'s difficulty mod)

Nofool wrote:

[Jik's Ura Oni]

• 00:14:570 (47) k instead of d ? it matces the pitch so no.
  00:15:970 (53) ^ ^
  00:23:970 (97) k ddk instead of d ddk ? sounds wierd if k hmm
  00:25:170 (103) k instead of d ? ^
  00:27:170 (113) same as 00:23:970 ^
  00:27:970 (117,118,119) k d k instead of d d d ? ^
  00:34:370 (151) k instead of d ? seems will weaken the K afterwards...
  01:01:170 (309) d instead of k ? I'll take this in to consideration
  01:07:970 (349) ^ fixed
  01:08:570 (353) k instead of d ? fixed
  01:11:570 (371,372,373) d k k instead of k k d ? pitch issue
  01:12:970 (377,378) d d instead of D D ?
  01:13:570 (379,380,381) k k k instead of K K K ?
  01:14:370 (382,383,384,385,386,387,388) D d D d K k k instead of D D D D K K K ?
  I like this part
  01:17:970 (404,405) d k instead of k d ? does not match the d k afterwards
  01:57:370 (50) K instead of D ? fixed
  02:08:970 (106) remove ? I copied the first part as a correction
  02:09:570 (111) d instead of k ? ^
  02:19:170 (167) remove this k or add another k at 02:19:370 ? I did both
  02:23:370 (189,190) same as 01:12:970 ^
  02:23:970 (190,191,192) same as 01:13:570 ^
  02:24:770 (194,195,196,197,198,199,300) same as 01:14:370 ^
  02:28:570 (217,218) k d instead of d k ? same as 02:19:170
  03:02:270 (40) remove ? I added that for sake of difficulty
  03:09:370 (86) K instead of D ? fixed
  03:10:970 – 03:16:570 It looks like you are mostly following the voice on this part, maybe drums are enough, it feels a bit over mapped at least. (it’s only my inexperienced personnal feeling ;_;) I don't think it is overmapped, but I made some changes to fit both the voices and drum
  03:33:770 (199,200) same as 01:12:970 ^
  03:34:370 (201,202,203) same as 01:13:570 ^
  03:35:170 (204,205,206,207,208) D d D d K instead of D D D D K ? ^
  03:38:770 (225,226) d k instead of k d ? unchanged

Kurodragon wrote:

Kantan
00:06:770 (6) - Delete fixed
00:13:570 (18) - ^ fixed
00:19:170 (27) - ^ no change. The vocal is better to be mapped.
00:46:170 (77) - OMG!!! Delete delete please changed this part in another way that is easier to follow.
01:20:370 (33,34,35) - kdk I think the current one could fit the vocal.
01:37:570 (61) - Delete deleted 01:38:370 - instead.
01:56:570 (95) - delete did similar fixes as 00:46:170 (77) -
03:17:370 (102) - delete fixed

Futsuu
Its ok

Muzukashii
01:58:770 (169) - k I think the pitch is the same as 01:58:570 (168) - no change.

I dont mod onis, iner onis or ura onis D:

ts8zs wrote:

[Inner]
00:02:970 (12) - k fixed
00:54:470 (266) - k fixed
01:23:370 (105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - dkk kdk dkk kdk changed to dkk dkk dkk kdk instead.
>01:26:970 (119) - k no change as the vocal pitch does not increase greatly.
03:09:370 (243) - D K is used for the high-pitched electric guitar.
03:14:170 (258) - k? because 03:17:370 (269) - I mapped this as k before. But I found that 03:14:170 (258) actually has lower vocal pitch than 03:17:370 (269)
03:35:570 (362,363) - D K I followed the vocal.
04:02:170 (518) - k The pitch of the instrument goes down, so I keep d here.
[Oni]
00:02:270 (7,8) - kk no change, as it has lower pitch than 00:00:670 (2,3) -
00:53:770 (212) - d fixed
01:33:370 (135) - d no change. To keep it consistent to 00:08:570 (32) and 03:54:170 (393) -
[Muzu]
00:02:970 (8) - k? fixed
03:02:970 (137) - k fixed
03:03:370 (138) - k fixed
03:35:570 (226) - D refer to Inner Oni
再骗要断电断网了……就酱

lovekotori wrote:

加油(///▽///)LoveLive<333

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Hi~~! Nardo~! :3
From Simple Taiko Modding Queue >w</~!
sorry for delay~ :/

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat

• [General]

1. Fine~! :3

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:48:370 (237) - change to k~? no change, as the pitch of guitar is the same as 00:48:170 (236) -
2. 01:57:770 (258) ~ 01:58:770 - How about change like this~? It's smae pattern with 00:47:370 (231,232,233,234,235,236,237).
   fixed except 264
3. 02:25:970 (70) - k~? so make kkkdddk. changed to ddkkkkd, like the one in the first kiai.
4. 03:05:770 (228) - change to k~! kkd dkk. no change. d could follow the bass better.

• [Oni]

1. 00:28:070 - add d here~? so make same rhythm with 01:51:270. OK
2. 02:56:070 - add d here~? then you can make symmetry pattern like this.
   fixed

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:22:570 (66) - change to k. so make dkkd. fixed
2. 01:07:770 (17) - k here~? OK
3. 02:55:370 - add d here~? I think it's more easy to follow.(because sounds of this part is 1/4) fixed
4. 02:58:570 - same here~! ^
5. 03:01:770 - ^ ^

Futsuu and Kantan is really nice~! I can't find any issue.

It's really nice song and map~!
GL to Rank~!

ts8zs wrote:

[Jik's Ura Oni]
00:33:770 (148,149) - kk Nochange. 考慮變成kk後譜面的樣子
00:40:170 (191) - k? No change
02:07:770 (101) - d? fixed
03:17:770 (111,112,113) - d d d? 同第一個

Akemi_Homura wrote:

• [Jik's Ura Oni]

1. 00:23:170 (94) - change to k~ I can hear loud piano sound here. fixed
2. 00:32:570 (142,143,144,145,146,147,148,19,150) - How about this~? I changed to k loud drum sounds. No change. The whole stream of dons have meaning here.
   
3. 01:18:170 (305) - change to k. same beat with 01:11:770 (372) fixed
4. 01:38:770 (17) ~ 01:41:970 (38) - How about this pattern~? I think It's more follow music. just look k fixed. I like this
   

mliencheng wrote:

Oni and Inner Oni mods

Oni

00:02:370 k fixed
00:02:970 k fixed
00:56:170 k no change as the vocal pitch is lower than 00:55:570 (221,222) -
01:04:170 k fixed
01:14:370 K remain unchanged. 55 has the highest pitch among 01:14:370 (54,55,56) -
02:19:770 k no change, since it has a lower pitch than 02:19:970 (32) -
02:28:570 k no change because of pattern consistency
02:48:370 k fixed
02:51:570 k the current pattern could show a better contrast to the upcoming 02:52:770 (149,150,151) -
03:09:370 D K could fit the high-pitched electric guitar well

Inner Oni

00:34:170 k no change. Snares occur at 00:33:770 (163,164) -
00:59:770 K fixed
02:39:170 k fixed
02:42:370 k fixed
03:09:370 D refer to Oni
03:35:170 K ^

mliencheng wrote:

Oni and Inner Oni mods

Jik's Ura Oni

00:25:170 k
00:28:370 k
00:34:370 D
00:35:670 k
01:13:170 K <--
02:18:970 k
02:22:370 d
03:22:370 K
03:22:770 K
03:33:970 K<--

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Jik's Ura Oni

SPOILER

General : Only 67 notes more than Inner Oni. How about just Jik's Inner Oni?
00:00:770 (3) - k done
00:33:770 (148,149) - ^ nochange
00:35:270 (154) - ^ nochange
00:40:070 (190) - d changed together with previous one
01:12:370 (374,375) - ^ only changed 374
01:15:370 (387) - D nochange
01:23:770 (439) - k nochange
01:29:070 (473) - Move to 01:29:170 - changed with the next one
01:44:770 - just slider plz 1/4 slider is difficult to hit here so I chose spinner
02:04:870 (81) - k done
02:30:770 (228,233) - d changed
03:04:970 (56,59) - ^ done
03:21:570 (126,127,128,129) - k no change
03:23:970 (133) - K done
03:50:170 (303,304) - k nochange
04:01:570 (22,24) - ^ done
04:04:170 (37) - ^ done
04:05:370 (43,44) - You can make it 1/6 stream, because it works. I doubt...

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Kantan

SPOILER

00:36:370 (55) - k Retained to keep it consistent to 00:39:570 (61) -
01:05:170 (5) - ^ no change because of the drop in vocal pitch .
01:57:370 (94) - K....? change 01:56:570 (93) - to K instead.
02:11:570 (117) - d k is used to map the snare.
02:28:370 (29) - k same as 01:05:170 (5) -

Futsuu

SPOILER

00:06:370 (9,10) - k fixed
00:22:770 (46) - ^ nope, the sound is identical to 00:22:370 (45) -
00:55:770 (119) - d Taking 00:56:170 (120,121) - into consideration, k would be fine imo.
00:56:570 (121) - k It has the same vocal pitch as 00:56:170 (120) - , so no change.
01:20:170 (44) - ^ fixed
01:44:770 (97) - D The background sound is softer than that in 01:46:370 (100) - , so d would be better.
03:06:770 (109) - k fixed

Muzukashii

SPOILER

00:06:370 (19) - k The instrument there has a lower pitch than 00:05:970 (17) - , so d could fit.
00:19:170 (57) - There's no slider tick at the end Umm... how to fix it? In fact I think it doesn't matter.
01:09:570 (23) - D fixed
01:50:170 (143) - k fixed
02:56:970 (119) - ^ no change. The pitch is lowest among 02:56:370 (117,118,119,120,121,122) -
03:14:370 (168) - ^ The pitch of the instrument goes down, so d is fine imo.
03:50:370 (276) - ^ no change, same pitch as 03:50:170 (275) -

Oni

SPOILER

00:06:370 (23) - d refer to Muzukashii
00:19:770 (76) - ^ k is fine imo, as it fits the snare.
00:22:770 (86,87) - reverse remain unchanged to keep it consistent to 00:22:370 (84) -
00:54:970 (219) - k fixed
01:44:770 (181) - D fixed
01:47:770 (191,192) - reverse The vocal at 01:47:970 (192) - is high-pitched, so no change.
02:05:170 (259,260,261,262) - k ddd would fit the song imo changed 02:05:570 (262) - as K instead.
02:46:770 (139) - Doesn't fit Why?
03:14:370 (226) - k refer to Muzukashii
03:21:870 (251) - d I'll keep the kkk first and seek further opinion.
04:02:170 - Add a note for the guitar. added d there.

Inner Oni

SPOILER

00:06:370 (25) - k refer to Muzukashii
00:30:470 (148) - d fixed
00:35:970 (176) - ^ k would be better for the strong cymbal
01:06:370 (19) - ^ k could fit the relatively high-pitched vocal in a way better.
01:28:570 (131) - ^ It is already a don.
01:44:570 (198) - d I keep mine here as both are okay imo.
02:01:870 (279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - Out of topic, this part is so great. Nice to hear that~
02:21:870 (53) - I don't think this is needed fixed
02:25:870 (69) - k I think the snares start at 02:25:970 -
02:33:170 (108) - ^ d would be better, as it has the same vocal pitch as 02:34:570 (114) -
02:38:770 (139,142) - reverse no change, as high-pitched vocal occurs at 02:39:170 (141) -
03:14:170 (258) - k pitch mapping for the vocal, no change here.
03:21:870 (293) - d same as Oni
04:05:270 (537) - k..? Do it if you want d could result in a better flow.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello~ :3
Here's a Taiko Mod via Juda Taiko Moding Queue

My mod is for suggetions. if you dont like, ignore please.
~Taiko~
d is Red Note.
k is Blue Note.
and, D ,K is finisher .. .
“+ ?” is I like pattern (※example→ add? , remove?
Big text is strong suggestion.

To “ Nardo”

[Kantan]

• 
  uum,Good. Nothing to say for this time but I guess this is hard.
  Break times over divisor 2/1 are very few , and I felt density is even flat yet.
  
  I recommend you to change on this density. http://puu.sh/agvdI/a2747abf80.zip
  I will come again after check your response. Hmm... To be honest the Kantan is not very hard, as 2/1 breaks are everywhere. (e.g. 01:03:570 (2) - ; 01:41:170 (67) - ; 02:47:170 (58) - , etc.) Anyway, I'll seek further opinion about this.

[Futsuu]

1. 00:19:970 (39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - uum, I recommend to change the strategy to follow simple. These sounds little and I think its not important to follow on this density as futsuu. How about this? I think 1/2 k d and d k is not very hard for Futsuu, so I would like to keep them.
   
2. 00:28:370 (57) – delete? ^
3. delete finisher 00:46:170 (3) –lol , fixed
4. and if can, 00:45:570 (1) – too. looks hard to play as futsuu..? The stressed sound is so prominent that it cannot be ignored, so no change here.
5. 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36,1) - notes>>stream , stream >>>notes sounds better as Vocal slar.but you put 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36) - notes to follow drums. So I recommend to (1) spiiner change to finisher K for decreasing uncomfortable. I think the spinner serves as a good transition to the kiai time and sounds good, so I would like to keep it.
6. 01:21:370 (48) - k ?, same as 01:08:570 (15) -, 01:15:170 (32) - . kd>>dk>>kd>dk… fixed
7. 01:56:570 (127) – delete the finisher? , same as 1st phrase. fixed
8. 02:11:770 (1) – same as 1st phrase. same as 00:59:770 (33,34,35,36,1) -
9. 02:31:370 (47,48) – same as 1st phrase. fixed
10. 02:41:970 (68) – delete, or change k? no bass drums. sounds better than don imo. changed to k.
11. 03:12:770 (121,122,123) – delete these finishers. no change, as they need to be emphasized.
12. 03:41:770 (184,185) – change to kk? changed to d k.
13. 03:49:170 (199) – add don here? It sounds good, fixed.

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:08:170 (4,5,6,7) - listening only 4567, weird for me this (7) k. I think the reason is k makes to cut as previous phrase atmosphere . Try to change Either suggestions? Applied option A+C
   A. 00:07:970 (3) – change to k. can linked 00:09:170 (7) –k sound.
   B. 00:09:170 (7) – move to 00:10:170 (10) - and, 00:09:370 (7) – change　k same as 00:08:570 (5) - this k.
   C. 00:09:170 (7) – delete or move to 00:10:170 (10) - , and change 00:09:570 (9) - 　k.
   └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
2. 00:20:170 (8) – delete this ? fixed
3. 00:32:170 (47,48,49) – kd*d >> dkdd ? or kddd? changed 00:32:770 (99) - as k instead.
4. 01:01:370 (1) – same as Futsuu. refer to the explanation in Futsuu.
5. 01:33:970 (98) – same as 1st phrase. fixed
6. 02:03:570 (181,182) - swap , same as 02:00:770 (175) – d, that follows 02:03:770 (182) - tinpani . fixed
7. 02:11:970 (1) – delete ? refer to the explanation in Futsuu.
8. 02:57:170 (120) - k…? fixed
9. 03:00:370 (131) - ^? ^
10. 03:10:570 (162) – add d? fixed
11. 03:21:170 (185,186,187) - how about additions divisor 1/2 note ? like… ddkkk It sounds good, fixed
12. 03:54:770 (291) – same as others. fixed using option A.

[Oni]

1. 00:12:170 (47) - add don? plays better , I guess. fixed
2. 00:13:770 (52) – delete? same as 00:07:370 -. fixed
3. 00:41:770 (167) – add d? sounds not cut perfective. fixed
4. 01:27:170 (111,112,113,114) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ? fixed
5. 01:31:370 (128) - k? no bass sound. It seems to be fine, fixed.
6. 01:41:370 (165) – add don. fixed
7. 01:41:770 (167) – delete? ^
8. 02:00:370 (1,2,3,4) – kkd,d … uum Either? Applied option B.
   A. (2,3) delete?
   B. (1,2,3,4,) kkd,d >>k,ddd ?
   └――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――――
9. 02:04:570 (256) – add don?, feels lonely a bit. fixed
10. 02:41:770 (130,131) – change k? remain unchanged, k d d k suits the vocal pitch.
11. 02:56:070 (163) - k? fixed
12. 02:58:970 (174,175,176,177) – k,kdd> kkd,d ? how about? fixed
13. 03:17:770 (232) – delete ? for back sound slar. fixed
14. 03:21:870 (250) – delete? unnecessary imo fixed
15. 03:52:170 (385) - k? fixed

[Inner Oni]

1. 1st playing~
   
2. 00:06:670 (27) - I think you can add d? for harp. fixed
3. 00:28:770 (140) – don? no change, as the sound is similar to 00:25:970 (125,126) -
4. 01:01:070 (305) – add don? make up more power~. fixed
5. 01:03:470 (4) – add don? fixed
6. 01:12:770 (57) - k? or 01:12:670 (56) - ? changed the former.
7. 02:00:470 (296) – delete this? , unnecessary imo fixed
8. 02:02:670 (308) - ^ not sound …? Nope. It pairs with 02:01:870 (303,304) - so that the patterns could be more balanced.
9. 02:11:470 (355) – add don? fixed
10. 02:17:370 (25,26,27,28,29) - kkddk? Or kkdkk ? changed to kkddk.
11. 02:37:570 (129,130,131,132) – ddd,k >>d,ddk ? more increasing vocal power. fixed
12. 02:49:570 (165,166,167) – k,d,k? just my opinion. More smoother? Comparing 02:48:770 (164,166) - , 166 is higher-pitched than 164, so d k d is preferred.
13. 03:17:570 (269) – finisher? fixed
    
14. good Inner~ Nice to hear that~

ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.
Good Luck!

Q____X wrote:

Hello again here's my poor mod again

kantan

the diff it's fine

Futsuu

00:09:201 - d Leaving a break here would be better.
00:15:570 - ^ ^
00:51:970 (112) - D As cymbal sound is absent, d is enough imo.
02:02:370 (138) - D ^

Muzukashii

00:57:370 - d fixed
00:57:570 (173) - move to 00:57:770 - fixed
01:33:170 - d No change for the sake of pattern consistency.
01:34:970 - d ^
02:07:770 - d fixed
02:07:970 (197) - move to 02:08:170 - fixed
03:56:170 - d No change for the sake of pattern consistency.

Oni

03:56:170 - d It is already a don.
01:37:470 - maybe d no change, as I want to make this Oni easier.

Good luck

JUDYDANNY wrote:

To “Jikson"

[Jik’s Ura Oni]

1. 1st playing~
2. uuum, too hard to listen... but I will do my best... ._.
   
3. 00:20:170 (77,80) – delete, OOO,OOO rhythm is unnecessary imo.
4. 00:21:670 (84) - ^?
5. since00:33:370 (143) - ~~ . add 1/4 triplet … kkk?
6. 00:46:770 (234) – delete the finisher, plz…
7. 00:50:670 (251) – move 1/4 left I’m not sure that how other players feel this.but I guess sounds not good.
8. 00:53:870 (265) -^
9. 00:57:370 (287,288) – swap?
10. 01:01:770 (309,310) – k sounds better.
11. 01:12:770 (374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) – wat..
12. 01:14:570 (381,383) – delete? too noisy , I guess.
13. 01:31:170 (478,479,480,481,482) – all k? same as 01:01:770 (309,310) – suggestion.
14. 01:45:370 (1) - delete , plz…
15. 01:49:370 (18) – add don?
16. 01:52:570 (31) – add don?
17. and, 01:52:370 (30) – change k? hits snare.
18. 02:18:370 (161) - change d?
19. 02:24:970 (195,197) – same as 1st part.
20. 03:11:170 (88) - ~~~ 03:17:570 (110) - finisher K >>> D ? I feel this sounds low.
21. 03:28:770 (165) - k?
22. 03:29:370 (169) – and k?
23. 03:42:270 (249) –delete this ? why rhythm was changed ? too hard I guess.

ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.
Good Luck!

Lunaris Filia wrote:

Hi~
I'm Lunaris Filia, mapping beginner
I will do my best

Oni

00:09:570 d k d k fixed
00:53:170 d k d k d changed to d k d k k instead.
03:36:770 k fixed

Jik's Inner Oni

00:15:170 delete
00:15:370 k d k d kkd ?
01:11:770 d
01:11:970 move to 01:12:170
01:44:770 I think this spinner is too short. fixed
02:47:970 k fixed

u's is so great!

Septembre wrote:

Oni : 00:08:170 (31) - out of rythm I think There is a sound.
and maybe add note here : 00:08:370 (32) -

No kudo

neonat wrote:

Kantan

I think reducing the amount of finishes here in this difficulty would be better, especially the more denser areas, where there are consecutive 1/1 beats instead 1.5~2 beats apart, but other than that I felt that you should have had those impacts and finishes on 01:09:570 (9) - 02:19:970 (9) - 03:01:570 (59) - 03:30:370 (99) - instead Rearranged the use of finishes accordingly.

Futsuu

00:09:570 (16) - shift to 00:09:370 Hmm... I think the current position could result in a smoother flow.
00:15:970 (30) - shift to 00:15:770 - it lands better on the music here ^
01:20:970 (44) - k instead? Too many kats would lower the impact of the current ones, so it would be better to keep it as don.
01:34:370 (70) - shift to 01:34:170 same as 00:09:570 (16) -
01:40:770 (84) - ^ ^
03:01:570 (92) - finish fixed
03:55:170 (203) - shift to 03:54:970 same as 00:09:570 (16) -
04:01:570 (217) - ^ ^

Muzukashii

00:31:570 (96,97,98,99,100,101) - try dk k kd k, I think that works nicer The current pattern could follow the changes of vocal pitch in a way better imo.

Oni

03:02:770 (197) - d instead? fixed

Checking on behalf of Jikson as authorized.

Inner Oni

00:08:570 - should have an object here like a d so that the rhythm here does not feel incomplete, the rest of the song you made it along with the music, but this part feels detached Retained for break consistency as 00:07:770 -
00:15:170 (50) - shift to 00:15:370 and it can either be d or k fixed
00:27:170 (110) - change to k, have it differ from 00:26:770 (109) It would be better to keep the note consistent to the previous 00:23:970 (94) -
01:22:370 (430) - finish? fixed
02:09:370 (110) - I don't think the finish should be here, rather it should be at 02:08:770 (107) fixed
02:32:770 (246) - finish? fixed
03:43:170 (260) - ^ ^


Good Luck

• 
  Maybe rise up more +10%.
  Vocal and accompaniment sounds loud.

1. 00:59:770 (75,76,77,1) - how about? spinner > finish seems better with vocal finish ww.
   
   
   • 1. 00:59:770 (75,76,77) - remove
     2. 01:01:370 (1) - move to 00:59:770 - .
     3. 01:01:370 - add note with finish!! and rise up the volume (80%?)
     http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7384495
2. 02:10:170 (90,91,92,1) - same
   
   If you agree, try to reconsider other diffs too.

1. 03:13:770 - add k? seems lack of hit sound and the 2nd similar patterns appeared them.
2. 03:14:170 - ^? or 03:17:370 - remove?
3. 03:18:170 (129) - , 03:19:770 - try to move ½ right (or 3/2 left?) . it seems better with play on-beat( white-tick lines).
   
   00:22:370 (44,45,46) - , 00:33:570 (68,69,70) - only twice appeared 1/2 -triplet, but I think you can add more (to adjust the sounds pressure).
   
   1. 00:10:170 - add k , 00:16:570 - add d ? to enhance the trumpet.
   2. 01:34:970 - , 01:41:370 - ^
   3. 03:55:770 - , 04:02:170 - ^
   4. 00:48:170 - add d? the role is like 00:33:570 (68,69,70) - .
   5. 01:58:570 - ^?
   6. 03:10:570 - ^?

1. 03:50:270 - try add d? to enhance the more drum rolls.
2. 00:12:770 (39,40) - not K only? if changed , 00:12:170 - how about add d too?
3. 01:37:570 (116,117) - ^

• 
  Seems ok to me.

1. 00:03:370 - change to d? to different sound with back-sound appeared.
2. 00:09:470 - remove?
3. 00:10:170 - add k?
4. 00:22:170 (85,86,87) - maybe change to k-dd ,and 00:22:770 - change to k seems better with plays pitch.
5. 00:23:070 (90,91) - kd? 00:23:170 (91,92,93) - k-d-d seems … weired with vocal
6. 00:38:670 - remove? feel a bit over.
7. 00:41:870 (199,200) - dk? 00:41:970 (200,201) - k-d seems better with guitar tone.
8. 00:46:970 - D? any sounds pitch are different from 00:45:570 - ,00:46:170 - .
9. 01:00:770 - d seems better to make a balance with bass.
10. 01:02:870 - maybe not bad to add k?
11. 01:15:670 - ^
12. 01:04:770 - k? not lower vocal pitch.
13. 01:20:970 - change to d to make a balance? (different the sounds with any accompaniment sounds and vocals)
14. 01:21:370 - ^?
15. 01:23:770 - k the linked with 01:22:170 (430) - on vocal.
16. 01:29:770 - maybe not bad to add k to make the smoother.
17. 01:31:170 (483,484) - change to d? different from 2nd kiai colors. seems weird...uum..;;
    
    

    JUDYDANNY wrote:

    • No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

    　or JUST MY OPINION.

18. 02:13:270 - add k?
19. 02:15:170 - change k?
20. 02:26:070 - add k?
21. 02:31:370 (239,241) - change to d?
22. 02:34:170 - change to k?
23. 02:41:970 (305,306) - change to k?
24. 02:51:370 - remove ? feel a bit over.
    
25. 02:57:170 - add k , 02:57:870 - move to 02:57:470 - , 02:57:670 - add k?
    seems monotone ¼-triples, instrumental needs to make more variation imo.
26. and, 03:00:370 - add k , 03:00:570 - ~~~ make the 1/4 -5plot d-kkddk?
27. and, 03:03:570 - add k, 03:03:870 - add d, 03:04:270 - change to k?
28. 03:17:570 - change to normal d same as 03:19:170 - .
29. 03:25:570 - change to k?
30. 03:28:770 - change to d?
31. 03:36:470 - add k.
32. 03:41:770 (256) - ,03:42:170 - change to d.
33. 03:44:570 - change to k?
34. 03:52:370 (326,327) - change to k?
35. 03:55:970 - make a shorter spinner and , add ¼ triple ddd, same as Intro.
36. 03:56:770 - , 03:57:570 - ,same.
37. 03:58:170 - , 03:58:570 - add d. same as Intro.
38. 04:00:370 (22,23,24,25) - change to ddk-”remove”. same as Intro.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Hello, Requested to check the oldest map via M4M.

Introduction

• 
  Inner Oni needs more improvement and consistency… orz

Symbol meaning

　

• 
  | >> Little question and small suggestion.
  >> idea lol

1. >> Normal suggestion.
   Big text >> Strong suggestion.
   >> Questionable imo.
   >>> Needs to improve some. (Rhythm is not good , plays or sounds weird)
   No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

　or JUST MY OPINION.

[Timing]

• 
  Maybe rise up more +10%.
  Vocal and accompaniment sounds loud. Done.

[Kantan]

1. 00:59:770 (75,76,77,1) - how about? spinner > finish seems better with vocal finish ww. Hmm, I would prefer the current arrangement as the spinner could accompany the guitar starting from 01:01:370 -
   
   
   • 1. 00:59:770 (75,76,77) - remove
     2. 01:01:370 (1) - move to 00:59:770 - .
     3. 01:01:370 - add note with finish!! and rise up the volume (80%?)
     http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7384495
2. 02:10:170 (90,91,92,1) - same -> same as ^
   
   If you agree, try to reconsider other diffs too.

[Futsuu]

1. 03:13:770 - add k? seems lack of hit sound and the 2nd similar patterns appeared them. fixed
2. 03:14:170 - ^? or 03:17:370 - remove? Applied the former.
3. 03:18:170 (129) - , 03:19:770 - try to move ½ right (or 3/2 left?) . it seems better with play on-beat( white-tick lines). Hmm, retained to follow the vocals there.
   
   00:22:370 (44,45,46) - , 00:33:570 (68,69,70) - only twice appeared 1/2 -triplet, but I think you can add more (to adjust the sounds pressure).
   
   1. 00:10:170 - add k , 00:16:570 - add d ? to enhance the trumpet. fixed
   2. 01:34:970 - , 01:41:370 - ^ ^
   3. 03:55:770 - , 04:02:170 - ^ ^
   4. 00:48:170 - add d? the role is like 00:33:570 (68,69,70) - . No change here for the spread.
   5. 01:58:570 - ^? ^
   6. 03:10:570 - ^? ^

[Muzukashii]

1. 03:50:270 - try add d? to enhance the more drum rolls. fixed
2. 00:12:770 (39,40) - not K only? if changed , 00:12:170 - how about add d too? ^
3. 01:37:570 (116,117) - ^ ^ and fixed 03:57:570 - as well.

[Oni]

• 
  Seems ok to me.

[Inner Oni]

1. 00:03:370 - change to d? to different sound with back-sound appeared. fixed
2. 00:09:470 - remove? No change here to keep the complexity.
3. 00:10:170 - add k? Retained to keep a consistent break like 00:10:970 and 00:11:770 -
4. 00:22:170 (85,86,87) - maybe change to k-dd ,and 00:22:770 - change to k seems better with plays pitch. fixed
5. 00:23:070 (90,91) - kd? 00:23:170 (91,92,93) - k-d-d seems … weired with vocal ^
6. 00:38:670 - remove? feel a bit over. ^
7. 00:41:870 (199,200) - dk? 00:41:970 (200,201) - k-d seems better with guitar tone. ^
8. 00:46:970 - D? any sounds pitch are different from 00:45:570 - ,00:46:170 - . ^
9. 01:00:770 - d seems better to make a balance with bass. ^
10. 01:02:870 - maybe not bad to add k? fixed
11. 01:15:670 - ^ I guess he wanted to keep the triplet dynamic, but fixed to make it more interesting to play.
12. 01:04:770 - k? not lower vocal pitch. fixed
13. 01:20:970 - change to d to make a balance? (different the sounds with any accompaniment sounds and vocals) ^
14. 01:21:370 - ^? ^
15. 01:23:770 - k the linked with 01:22:170 (430) - on vocal. ^
16. 01:29:770 - maybe not bad to add k to make the smoother. ^
17. 01:31:170 (483,484) - change to d? different from 2nd kiai colors. seems weird...uum..;; I think this is due to the difference in lyrics. Fixed.
    
    

    JUDYDANNY wrote:

    • No comment >>simple (you can notice easily: just hits on drums or simple beats) , or already explained on the other place.

    　or JUST MY OPINION.

18. 02:13:270 - add k? fixed
19. 02:15:170 - change k? ^
20. 02:26:070 - add k? same as 01:15:670 -
21. 02:31:370 (239,241) - change to d? fixed
22. 02:34:170 - change to k? ^
23. 02:41:970 (305,306) - change to k? ^
24. 02:51:370 - remove ? feel a bit over. ^
    
25. 02:57:170 - add k , 02:57:870 - move to 02:57:470 - , 02:57:670 - add k?
    seems monotone ¼-triples, instrumental needs to make more variation imo. Nice.
26. and, 03:00:370 - add k , 03:00:570 - ~~~ make the 1/4 -5plot d-kkddk? ^
27. and, 03:03:570 - add k, 03:03:870 - add d, 03:04:270 - change to k? ^
28. 03:17:570 - change to normal d same as 03:19:170 - . Done.
29. 03:25:570 - change to k? fixed
30. 03:28:770 - change to d? ^
31. 03:36:470 - add k. same as 01:15:670 -
32. 03:41:770 (256) - ,03:42:170 - change to d. fixed
33. 03:44:570 - change to k? ^
34. 03:52:370 (326,327) - change to k? ^
35. 03:55:970 - make a shorter spinner and , add ¼ triple ddd, same as Intro. ^
36. 03:56:770 - , 03:57:570 - ,same. ^
37. 03:58:170 - , 03:58:570 - add d. same as Intro. ^
38. 04:00:370 (22,23,24,25) - change to ddk-”remove”. same as Intro. Okay.

Good luck (¦3[___]

JUDYDANNY wrote:

Rererecheck inner.

suggestions

1. 00:10:170 - suggest to add k...? its too closed. Remain unchanged to keep it consistent with the stand alone ddd k at 01:35:170 and 03:55:970 -
   
   About 01:46:370 - ~ 01:59:170 - comparing with 00:35:970 - ~ 00:48:770 - ,
   Its too airy dense. Agreed.
   
   
   1. 01:46:970 - , 01:47:770 - , add k the gap with 1st.
   2. 01:48:170 - add 1/4 triple ddk, same reason.
   3. 01:48:770 - change to d,01:49:070 - move to 01:48:670 - ? same reason.
   4. 01:49:370 - change k? small suggestion, plays better imo.
   1. 01:50:170 - add k , 01:50:970 - add d? same reason.
   2. 01:51:370 - add 1/4 triple.....ddk or kkk?
      
      • →if apply kkk, 01:51:770 - add d , 01:51:970 (37,38,39) - change kkd?
        http://puu.sh/v12NH/eb340763c9.jpg
        
        →if apply ddk, 01:51:770 - add k , 01:52:270 - move to 01:51:870 - (+ change k too)?
        http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676791
   1. 01:53:370 - , 01:54:170 - add k,
   2. 01:54:370 - change to d, 01:54:570 - add 1/4 triple ddk.
   3. 01:55:470 - remove and ,01:54:970 - add 1/4 triple... dkddd like 1st.
   4. 01:55:770 - change k, 01:56:270 - add k, 01:56:770 - remove? like 1st? fixed
2. 00:45:470 (60,61) - change to...(remove, finisher)?
3. 02:08:570 - add k, same 1st. and 02:08:270 - add k too? just small suggestion but it looks a bit bored 1/2 kkkk.
   
4. 02:10:970 - add d, 02:11:170 - change to k? to make a similar dense like 1st. Its following the guitar...? maybe?
5. 02:11:570 - change to k? the drum.. percussion sounds up.
6. 02:09:570 (5,6,7,8) - maybe change to 5plet ddkkd seems better?
   
   • 　※1st 00:59:370 (6,7,8) - k-d-k → 01:00:970 (14,15,16) - kkd
     　※2nd 02:09:570 (5,6,7,8,9) - ddkkd→ 02:11:370 (15,16,17) - ddk
7. 01:10:470 - , 02:20:870 - add d? 3times 1/4 seems a bit bored, Its needed more power imo.
8. 01:20:070 - , 02:30:470 - add d? same.
   
   
9. 02:39:170 (170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - prefer imo the colors lol,
   http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676908 Done
10. 03:49:770 - add d, 03:50:570 - add k , 03:50:970 (325,326) - change kk? same reason, and drums sounds noisy. It needs more power.
    
    
11. 02:53:570 (1) - maybe seems better to put the circles.
    how about"K-dK-dK" ? fixed
    http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7676869
    
    
12. 03:10:970 - remove and from 03:10:370 - ,add 1/2 triple KDD? Changed something different to focus on the vocal and add variation.
13. 03:11:170 (96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117) -
    This is not enough to following the accompaniment . Suggest to no use the finish and focus the vocal?
    
    1. @Finishers: change to normal?
    2. @some kats: change to don?
       e.g. 03:11:370 - ,03:12:770 (102,103,104) - , 03:14:370 - , 03:15:970 - ?
14. 03:18:770 - add d? the different sounds snare.
    
15. 03:21:170 (133,134,135,136,137) - kkdkk? build up to next K-K-K. Good idea.
16. 03:23:770 - add d...?　maybe it plays better as single diff imo,
    
17. 03:31:270 - , 03:40:870 - add d? same reason 01:10:470 - , 02:20:870 - .

1. 00:05:770 - Taiko doesn't sound clear because of drums. I suggest adding a line (70~80%) here.

1. 02:41:570 (66,67) - should be removed for consistency with other kiais.

1. 01:31:170 (97) - 02:41:570 (97,98) - 03:51:970 (295) - It seems like that vocals emphasize on upbeat rather than downbeat, so these 1/1 rhythms are kinda weird to me. I suggest removing them.

1. 00:00:770 - Change the hitsound volume as well as other difficulties.
2. 00:07:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern is questionable to me. Do you think it appropriate, Nardo?
3. 01:30:770 (479) - 02:41:170 (323) - 03:51:570 (328) - Overemphasized notes
4. 03:08:570 (89,90,91,92) - placing of finishers seems uncomfortable. no need normal notes there.
   
   
5. 01:28:470 (466) - there is no drum sound.
6. 02:38:870 (309) - ^
7. 03:07:270 (80) - ^
8. 03:48:870 (308) - ^
   
9. 03:07:470 (82,83) - Color should be reversed considering drums.

tasuke912 wrote:

sorry for late

[ General]

1. 00:05:770 - Taiko doesn't sound clear because of drums. I suggest adding a line (70~80%) here. fixed

[ Futsuu]

1. 02:41:570 (66,67) - should be removed for consistency with other kiais. fixed

[ Muzukashii]

1. 01:31:170 (97) - 02:41:570 (97,98) - 03:51:970 (295) - It seems like that vocals emphasize on upbeat rather than downbeat, so these 1/1 rhythms are kinda weird to me. I suggest removing them. Alright.

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:00:770 - Change the hitsound volume as well as other difficulties. Done.
2. 00:07:170 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pattern is questionable to me. Do you think it appropriate, Nardo? I think it is somewhat improvised by the mapper. Changed to something else in attempt to interpret the music better.
3. 01:30:770 (479) - 02:41:170 (323) - 03:51:570 (328) - Overemphasized notes fixed
4. 03:08:570 (89,90,91,92) - placing of finishers seems uncomfortable. no need normal notes there. ^
   
   
5. 01:28:470 (466) - there is no drum sound. Deleted the note there.
6. 02:38:870 (309) - ^ ^
7. 03:07:270 (80) - ^ ^
8. 03:48:870 (308) - ^ ^
   
9. 03:07:470 (82,83) - Color should be reversed considering drums. fixed
   
   Additional changes have been made for the pattern from 03:49:770 to 03:51:170 -