Almost all fixed, except some was changed in my own way to meet the mod. Thx for mod!JUDYDANNY wrote:
To “Jikson"ok, That's all. I hope you to get rank this ><.[Jik’s Ura Oni]
- 1st playing~
- uuum, too hard to listen... but I will do my best... ._.
- 00:20:170 (77,80) – delete, OOO,OOO rhythm is unnecessary imo.
- 00:21:670 (84) - ^?
- since00:33:370 (143) - ~~ . add 1/4 triplet … kkk?
- 00:46:770 (234) – delete the finisher, plz…
- 00:50:670 (251) – move 1/4 left I’m not sure that how other players feel this.but I guess sounds not good.
- 00:53:870 (265) -^
- 00:57:370 (287,288) – swap?
- 01:01:770 (309,310) – k sounds better.
- 01:12:770 (374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386) – wat..
- 01:14:570 (381,383) – delete? too noisy , I guess.
- 01:31:170 (478,479,480,481,482) – all k? same as 01:01:770 (309,310) – suggestion.
- 01:45:370 (1) - delete , plz…
- 01:49:370 (18) – add don?
- 01:52:570 (31) – add don?
- and, 01:52:370 (30) – change k? hits snare.
- 02:18:370 (161) - change d?
- 02:24:970 (195,197) – same as 1st part.
- 03:11:170 (88) - ~~~ 03:17:570 (110) - finisher K >>> D ? I feel this sounds low.
- 03:28:770 (165) - k?
- 03:29:370 (169) – and k?
- 03:42:270 (249) –delete this ? why rhythm was changed ? too hard I guess.
Good Luck!
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