1. Hard (4,68 stars, 500 notes)
2. Normal (4,11 stars, 229 notes)
3. Oru's Insane (4,8 stars, 533 notes)

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

BPM : 90
Offset : 55 (Remember to resnap all notes).Fixed.

[Normal]

I suggest to remove some triple notes for make more normal the difficulty. Questo è perchè sono i beats della Hard, come ti avevo detto in #mod

[Hard]

This is the same of the normal. I suggest to change the spacing for make not same as normal. Leggi sopra

Needs hitsounds.
Fixing...

02:05:20 (4,5) - 2 squares down. Strano, perchè prima di questo c'erano due beats impilati, qui e la stessa cosa. Comunque Fixed o_O
02:44:54 (4) - 1 square to the right for match spacingFixed!

On final part of the map there are so much changes of bpm, 0.5x and 2x. They can confuse much players. Per il momento(fino a quando non trovo qualcosa di meglio) rimarrò così. Se puoi suggerirmi qualcosa

Shinde wrote:

Hard
0:40:055 - (1,2,3,4,5) This alignment throws me off a little. Mix it up if you'd like. I have nothing particular in mind, I see what you were doing with it, it feels a little strange to me though.
0:42:721 - (1,2) Both up two?
0:55:555 - (1,2,3,4) Spacing? Too spread apart. Same at 0:53:388. Compare with (5,6,7,8) in the previous combo.
1:15:388 - (1) I think you should round this slider more, but that's just my opinion so whatever you want.
1:24:388 - (8,9) I have alignment issues with these two notes. Compare them with (3,4) and adjust them if you'd like.
2:01:721 - (4,5 and 6,7) These should be 1 closer together to keep with the spacing pattern of the rest of the song.
2:38:xxx - This part of the video made me laugh. xdd I don't care for Yuki very much. =( I liked Bou so much more. T_T
2:55~ - I didn't care for some of the 2x speed sliders at this point but that's probably me being whiny. I did like the .5x ones though, they were very fitting. They're all still very playable though.

Uhh. Hp Drain rate is way high. I was holding in the red for like a full minute with like 92% accuracy . ;_; Take it down a notch? If you miss one note you can't miss any more for like 20 300s.

Closing thought > If you're not going to have anything mapped to the last ~40 seconds of the video you could probably cut that part off. The folder's already 18.3mb so this could be an issue. Cutting off 40 seconds would only reduce the size by about 3mb anyways so. =\ Reducing the video and audio quality would help too. I dunno if it's something to be worried about but the thought popped into my head. I myself don't mind downloading ~20mb files but that seems to be something to avoid.

Ohhh, and you need a background too. xd Make sure the hitcircles don't blend with whatever you choose for one.

^-^ This was realllly fun to play. I reallly hope it gets ranked sometime in the future. Star'd.

1. Smaller hitcircles pls :3,
2. 01:00:37 (5) - This one isn't symmetrical to (4) or it's on purpose o.o,
3. 01:23:37 (4) - Maybe move 1 Grid to left?,
4. 02:20:71 (1) - Auto makes 2000 on it, is it OK on Normal? :<,
5. 02:23:37 (6) - Align with (5)s end,
6. 02:23:71 (1) - Align with (6),
7. 02:25:04 (4) - Align with (3)s end.

1. 01:08:87 (9) - Align with (8)s end,
2. 01:48:71 (3) - Align with (1) OR (2).

1. 00:13:87 (2,3) - Stack manually with (1)s end,
2. 00:18:71 (1,2,3,4) - Stack manually :3,
3. 00:37:37 (3) - If you want Insane effect on this maybe exchange it with 3 beats?,
4. 01:23:71 (1) - Stack manually with (1)s end,
5. 01:30:87 (1,1,1) - Align with (5),
6. 02:17:21 (4,5) - Stack manually,
7. 03:22:71 (1,2,3,4) - Stack manually,
8. 03:41:37 (3) - Same as before, maybe exchange for 3 beats?.

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi~!
[Normal]

1. Smaller hitcircles pls :3, Fixed.
2. 01:00:37 (5) - This one isn't symmetrical to (4) or it's on purpose o.o, Fixed.
3. 01:23:37 (4) - Maybe move 1 Grid to left?, Fixed.
4. 02:20:71 (1) - Auto makes 2000 on it, is it OK on Normal? :<, Not Fixed :3
5. 02:23:37 (6) - Align with (5)s end, Fixed.
6. 02:23:71 (1) - Align with (6), Fixed
7. 02:25:04 (4) - Align with (3)s end.

Fixed.
[Hard]

1. 01:08:87 (9) - Align with (8)s end, Fixed.
2. 01:48:71 (3) - Align with (1) OR (2).

Fixed.
[Oru's Insane]

1. 00:13:87 (2,3) - Stack manually with (1)s end, Fixed.
2. 00:18:71 (1,2,3,4) - Stack manually :3, Fixed.
3. 00:37:37 (3) - If you want Insane effect on this maybe exchange it with 3 beats?, Not Fixed.
4. 01:23:71 (1) - Stack manually with (1)s end, Fixed.
5. 01:30:87 (1,1,1) - Align with (5), Fixed.
6. 02:17:21 (4,5) - Stack manually, Fixed.
7. 03:22:71 (1,2,3,4) - Stack manually, Fixed.
8. 03:41:37 (3) - Same as before, maybe exchange for 3 beats?.

Not Fixed.

Symbolic wrote:

[Oru's Insane]

00:14:54 (1) - Remove new combo. No.
00:15:04 (1) - ^ ^
00:18:21 (1) - ^ ^
00:18:37 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:71 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:87 (1) - ^ ^
00:28:54 (1) - ^ ^
00:28:71 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:21 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:37 (1) - ^ ^
01:19:87 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:20:21 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:54 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:878 (x) - Add a note here. ^
01:31:04 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:31:21 (1) - ^ ^
01:33:87 (1) - ^ ^
01:34:04 (1) - ^ ^
01:34:54 (1) - ^ ^
01:34:71 (1) - ^ ^
01:37:545 (x) - Add a note here. ^
01:37:71 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:38:212 (x) - Add a note here. ^
01:38:37 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:38:878 (x) - Add a note here. ^
01:39:212 (x) - ^ ^
01:44:21 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:44:37 (1) - ^ ^
01:44:54 (1) - ^ ^
01:44:71 (1) - ^ ^
01:47:04 (1) - ^ ^
01:47:37 (1) - ^ ^
02:02:37 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
02:02:54 (1) - ^ ^
02:18:21 (1) - ^ ^
02:18:37 (1) - ^ ^
02:45:54 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
02:45:87 (1) - ^ ^
02:46:21 (1) - ^ ^
03:05:21 (1) - ^ ^
03:05:71 (1) - ^ ^
03:18:54 (1) - ^ ^
03:18:87 (1) - ^ ^
03:19:21 (1) - ^ ^
03:22:545 (x) - Add a note here. ^
03:29:71 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
03:29:87 (1) - ^ ^
03:32:54 (1) - ^ ^
03:32:71 (1) - ^ ^
03:33:21 (1) - ^ ^
03:33:37 (1) - ^ ^
03:37:54 (1) - ^ ^
03:37:71 (1) - ^ ^
03:37:87 (1) - ^ ^
03:38:04 (1) - ^ ^
03:46:878 (x) - Add a note here. ^
03:47:04 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
03:47:545 (x) - Add a note here. ^
03:47:71 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
03:48:212 (x) - Add a note here. ^
03:48:545 (x) - ^ ^
03:53:54 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
03:53:71 (1) - ^ ^
03:53:87 (1) - ^ ^
03:54:04 (1) - ^ ^
03:56:37 (1) - ^ ^
03:56:71 (1) - ^ ^

Symbolic wrote:

[Normal]

Don't use too much 1/4's in Normal. Not Fixed.

[Hard]

00:10:04 (1) - Please make this slider faster, the -2x speed sux imo. Not fixed.
00:42:71 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is inconsistent with the rest of the song and it doesn't fit as a jump. Not Fixed
00:58:71 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:02:21 (7,8,9,10) - ^ ^
01:33:37 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:56:87 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:50:71 (1,2,1,2,1) - Speed-up doesn't fit. ^
03:04:71 (2) - Line this up with (1) FIXED.
03:10:71 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing is inconsistent with the rest of the song and it doesn't fit as a jump. Not Fixed.
03:54:71 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ ^

Eddycted wrote:

First of all, great song.

[Oru's Insane]

Kiai right at the start doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I'd use it only for the climax of the song, at 03:13:37(), which you did as well. The kiai on the last note is rather silly as well. In short; too much kiai. Well, I think that this decision must be taken by HarryOrunitia

[Normal]

See Oru's Insane on kiai. Some kiai fixed.

00:52:21 (6) - Line this up with (5). Fixed.

[Hard]

See Oru's Insane on kiai. Unfortunately I like the kiai mode in this beatmap and I think I will remain it unchanged. s'ry :3

00:15:87 (2,3,4) - This stack doesn't feel intuitive. I have to recheck this. Anyway, not fixed.
03:24:21 (1) and 03:25:71 (1) - These two spinners don't feel like they're based on anything. Fixed.
03:55:37 (1,2,3) - I think this should be a combo of two, like the previous. same at 00:15:87 (2,3,4)

Other than that, great work. I enjoyed your map.

Star.

Eddycted wrote:

First of all, great song.

[Oru's Insane]

I like how you did the hit sounds, very nice. Thanks a lot!! :3

Kiai right at the start doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I'd use it only for the climax of the song, at 03:13:37(), which you did as well. The kiai on the last note is rather silly as well. In short; too much kiai.
I tried to follow Armin's difficulties with kiai. But for me it's totally fine to leave only the kiai at 03:13:37 and the one on the last note, so I guess it's up to him to decide what to do!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:52:22 (6) - move out from under 5 so i can tell this is a slider and not a hitcircle "Fixed"
02:07:88 (1) - end on a tick Fixed

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Normal:
02:28:71 (5) - sovrapposizioni del genere sconsigliate per normal Lo prendo in considerazione, se qualcun'altro lo segnala cambio
02:29:37 (1) - consiglio di farlo finire a 2:32:045 Not fixed

- Hard:
00:42:37 (6) - new combo? not fixed o.o
2:52:38 - KIAI? O.o (non è meglio direttamente a 3:14:712?) Questa parte col kiaimi sembrava più azzeccata. Proverò a togliere le altre
03:46:37 (6) - come 0:42:37 Not fixed o.o

- Oru's:
Troppi clap D: Chiedo a Oru, sempre se si connette
Molto bella

Star'd ^^

Larto wrote:

Overall:
Please watch out that the sections inducing Kiai time on YOUR difficulties, Armin, are placed DIRECTLY on the notes. Because if the timing sections are placed earlier or later, the Kiai fountain does not sync the song, which looks horrible ;( Fixed ;(


Oru's Insane:
[nazi mod] Waiting for Oru's fixes :3
ROFL. Oh well. This mod post is NOT done yet. I'm just posting the mod for this diff already. And if you wanna know, NO, I didn't only check the new combos, I also checked the map itself, and it seemed alright. Just the New Combos... ;_;

Hard is good Oh yes u.u

Normal:
00:20:37 (1) - Remove New Combo Yea, Fixed!
02:20:71 (1) - Spinner is a bit too short for a Normal Yeaaa! Fixed!!!

That's everything.

Thank you Larto

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Oru's:
Troppi clap D:

Larto wrote:

Oru's Insane:
00:14:54 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove New Combos
00:18:21 (1,1) - ^
00:25:71 (1,1) - ^
00:28:54 (1,1) - ^
00:29:21 (1,1) - ^
00:35:04 (1,1) - ^
00:40:54 (1) - ^
01:01:71 (1) - ^
01:19:87 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:23:37 (1,1) - ^
01:31:04 (1,1) - ^
01:33:87 (1,1) - ^
01:34:37 (1,1,1) - Move this combo away from under the combo before please? Oh, and remove the new combos on the second and third note ;p
01:37:71 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:38:37 (1) - ^
01:42:04 (1) - ^
01:42:37 (2) - ADD New Combo. Lol something new.
01:44:21 (1,1,1,1) - Remove New Combos.
02:00:87 (3) - Add New Combo
02:01:71 (1) - Remove New Combo
02:02:37 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
02:10:04 (1) - Don't Start Kiai time on the beginning of this slider, do it at its end. Up to Armin.
02:18:21 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
02:20:54 (1) - Remove New Combo AND maybe move it away from under the other slider.
02:24:54 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
02:28:54 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
02:45:54 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove New Combos
02:49:54 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:05:04 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new Combos
03:18:54 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove New Combos
03:22:04 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
03:29:71 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
03:32:54 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
03:33:21 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
03:37:54 (1,1,1,1) - Remove New Combos
03:39:04 (1,1) - Remove New Combos
03:40:71 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:41:37 (3) - ADD New Combo
03:44:54 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:47:04 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:47:71 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:51:37 (1) - Remove New Combo
03:51:71 (9) - ADD New Combo
03:53:54 (1,1,1,1) - Remove New Combos

ROFL. Oh well. This mod post is NOT done yet. I'm just posting the mod for this diff already. And if you wanna know, NO, I didn't only check the new combos, I also checked the map itself, and it seemed alright. Just the New Combos... ;_;

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

[Oru's Insane]:
01:23:04 (1,1) - I personally don't like these no-whistle at start sliders and such.
01:42:04 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:42:37 (2) - New combo?
02:49:37 (1) - What's this new combo doing here? :O
03:39:71 (x) - Add beat here?
03:51:37 (1,2) - That new combo thing I mentioned up there ^

Armin wrote:

Oru, per il momento ho uppato un'altra difficoltà con i fixes di Larto che riguardavano i colori delle combo e questi due:
01:34:37 (1,1,1) - Move this combo away from under the combo before please? Oh, and remove the new combos on the second and third note ;p
02:10:04 (1) - Don't Start Kiai time on the beginning of this slider, do it at its end.

Di Starrodkirby86 non ho fixato nulla di tuo, mi sono limitato a fixare solo i miei D:
La seconda difficoltà l'ho creata quindi NON per rimpiazzarla con la tua ma per evitarti noie se i colori delle combo vanno male. Ma puoi sempre fixare tu e alla fine mandarmi in allegato la mappa.

HarryOrunitia wrote:

Ok, come ho già detto preferisco lasciare le combo come sono, ma se i bat fanno ancora storie (-___-) fixale. Stesso discorso per gli hitsounds.
Per il kiai scegli tu, mentre per ciò che riguarda lo spacing o il timing preferirei dare un'occhiata personalmente, a meno che non siano cose stupide di allineamento o roba simile. Comunque la mappa è la tua quindi in caso non dovessi farmi sentire per troppo tempo (da ora in poi comunque controllerò regolarmente) fixa pure quello che vuoi e falla rankare D:

Ah, inoltre grazie per il kudosu ma in post come questo o quello di prima non dovresti darmelo dato che non ho moddato nulla :3

MarioBros777 wrote:

I see a lot of flaws in this map... The massive Kiai time (near the end) in Hard is just not needed... Please fix it before I give you the star. Sorry about this made I hate most custom made skins so I won't go bragging about that here. >_> I am worried also about the amount of spinners that you put in one difficulty. Please recheck them and see if they are not necessary and that you can replace them differently.

[Normal]
00:42:71 (1) - Align this with the end of slider 6 (using Grid lvl 3) and move all other placements if necessary...
00:54:04 (3) - Align with 1
2:07:87 (Spinner) - I'm worried about how the two spinners are done one after another. It doesn't seem right for Normal but... It's your call.

[Hard]
00:44:87 (1) - Align with 8 and move all hitcircles in front if necessary.
00:54:37 (4,5,6,7,8) - Together, align them with 3 and it will align with new combo 1.
01:13:21 (Spinner) - With this, you can even put no volume or very little on the hit at the end.
03:49:37 (Spinner) - 3 spinner in a row? Oh come on... You can't be serious. >_>

Seriously... You need to fix some of these. I'll give you a star later.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

blue text = nazi post

Normal:
00:15:54 (1) - start a quarter note later but end where it currently is Fixed
01:05:87 (7) - align with 6? Fixed
01:18:04 (1,2,3,4) - make a straight line Fixed
01:29:71 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2 Fixed
02:01:71 (2) - align with 1? Fixed
get rid of all the extra inherited timing sections at the end Fixed

Hard:
01:00:04 (5) - make a horizontal reflection of 1 Fixed
02:45:04 (6) - align with 5? Fixed
03:16:54 (1) - start a quarter note later but end where it currently is Not Fixed
03:19:87 (1) - " " Not Fixed
03:29:21 (4,5) - I don't like how the spacing between these 2 is inconsistent compared to 1,2. Please a dd a new combo or change it ""Fixed""
03:53:21 (1) - start a quarter note later but end where it currently is Fixed

Insane:
00:09:71 (1) - the beginning of this spinner does not snap to anything, I would recommend to start this a whole note later and change it to a slider because a spinner that long only gets 1k bonus Fixed (only the size of the spinner).
00:36:71 (4) - new combo for to make it easier to read? Fixed
00:52:21 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 1 Fixed
00:52:54 (4) - make a vertical reflection of 2 Fixed
01:15:04 (1) - same as 00:09:71 (1) Not Fixed
01:26:04 (4) - align with 2 Fixed
01:47:04 (1) - make a horizontal reflection of the note before it Fixed
02:27:37 (4) - make a horizontal reflection of 2 Fixed
02:46:87 (4) - new combo for to make it easier to read? Not Fixed
03:11:71 (3) - make a horizontal reflection of 2? Fixed
03:56:37 (1) - make a horizontal reflection of the note before it Fixed

The problem I think most ppl have with your combos is sometimes it feels random when you do it. You should limit those combo changes to when you map to the drums.

Nice map. Star.

Alace wrote:

pretty good mapset
i enjoyed playing all diffs

<Insane>
IMO too many claps here
maybe one clap/2 divisors is better
those random claps sound noisy
Normal and Hard`s hitsounds are pretty good