1. Hard (4,68 stars, 500 notes)
2. Normal (4,11 stars, 229 notes)
3. Oru's Insane (4,8 stars, 533 notes)

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

BPM : 90
Offset : 55 (Remember to resnap all notes).Fixed.

[Normal]

I suggest to remove some triple notes for make more normal the difficulty. Questo è perchè sono i beats della Hard, come ti avevo detto in #mod

[Hard]

This is the same of the normal. I suggest to change the spacing for make not same as normal. Leggi sopra

Needs hitsounds.
Fixing...

02:05:20 (4,5) - 2 squares down. Strano, perchè prima di questo c'erano due beats impilati, qui e la stessa cosa. Comunque Fixed o_O
02:44:54 (4) - 1 square to the right for match spacingFixed!

On final part of the map there are so much changes of bpm, 0.5x and 2x. They can confuse much players. Per il momento(fino a quando non trovo qualcosa di meglio) rimarrò così. Se puoi suggerirmi qualcosa

Shinde wrote:

Hard
0:40:055 - (1,2,3,4,5) This alignment throws me off a little. Mix it up if you'd like. I have nothing particular in mind, I see what you were doing with it, it feels a little strange to me though.
0:42:721 - (1,2) Both up two?
0:55:555 - (1,2,3,4) Spacing? Too spread apart. Same at 0:53:388. Compare with (5,6,7,8) in the previous combo.
1:15:388 - (1) I think you should round this slider more, but that's just my opinion so whatever you want.
1:24:388 - (8,9) I have alignment issues with these two notes. Compare them with (3,4) and adjust them if you'd like.
2:01:721 - (4,5 and 6,7) These should be 1 closer together to keep with the spacing pattern of the rest of the song.
2:38:xxx - This part of the video made me laugh. xdd I don't care for Yuki very much. =( I liked Bou so much more. T_T
2:55~ - I didn't care for some of the 2x speed sliders at this point but that's probably me being whiny. I did like the .5x ones though, they were very fitting. They're all still very playable though.

Uhh. Hp Drain rate is way high. I was holding in the red for like a full minute with like 92% accuracy . ;_; Take it down a notch? If you miss one note you can't miss any more for like 20 300s.

Closing thought > If you're not going to have anything mapped to the last ~40 seconds of the video you could probably cut that part off. The folder's already 18.3mb so this could be an issue. Cutting off 40 seconds would only reduce the size by about 3mb anyways so. =\ Reducing the video and audio quality would help too. I dunno if it's something to be worried about but the thought popped into my head. I myself don't mind downloading ~20mb files but that seems to be something to avoid.

Ohhh, and you need a background too. xd Make sure the hitcircles don't blend with whatever you choose for one.

^-^ This was realllly fun to play. I reallly hope it gets ranked sometime in the future. Star'd.

1. Smaller hitcircles pls :3,
2. 01:00:37 (5) - This one isn't symmetrical to (4) or it's on purpose o.o,
3. 01:23:37 (4) - Maybe move 1 Grid to left?,
4. 02:20:71 (1) - Auto makes 2000 on it, is it OK on Normal? :<,
5. 02:23:37 (6) - Align with (5)s end,
6. 02:23:71 (1) - Align with (6),
7. 02:25:04 (4) - Align with (3)s end.

1. 01:08:87 (9) - Align with (8)s end,
2. 01:48:71 (3) - Align with (1) OR (2).

1. 00:13:87 (2,3) - Stack manually with (1)s end,
2. 00:18:71 (1,2,3,4) - Stack manually :3,
3. 00:37:37 (3) - If you want Insane effect on this maybe exchange it with 3 beats?,
4. 01:23:71 (1) - Stack manually with (1)s end,
5. 01:30:87 (1,1,1) - Align with (5),
6. 02:17:21 (4,5) - Stack manually,
7. 03:22:71 (1,2,3,4) - Stack manually,
8. 03:41:37 (3) - Same as before, maybe exchange for 3 beats?.

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi~!
[Normal]

1. Smaller hitcircles pls :3, Fixed.
2. 01:00:37 (5) - This one isn't symmetrical to (4) or it's on purpose o.o, Fixed.
3. 01:23:37 (4) - Maybe move 1 Grid to left?, Fixed.
4. 02:20:71 (1) - Auto makes 2000 on it, is it OK on Normal? :<, Not Fixed :3
5. 02:23:37 (6) - Align with (5)s end, Fixed.
6. 02:23:71 (1) - Align with (6), Fixed
7. 02:25:04 (4) - Align with (3)s end.

Fixed.
[Hard]

1. 01:08:87 (9) - Align with (8)s end, Fixed.
2. 01:48:71 (3) - Align with (1) OR (2).

Fixed.
[Oru's Insane]

1. 00:13:87 (2,3) - Stack manually with (1)s end, Fixed.
2. 00:18:71 (1,2,3,4) - Stack manually :3, Fixed.
3. 00:37:37 (3) - If you want Insane effect on this maybe exchange it with 3 beats?, Not Fixed.
4. 01:23:71 (1) - Stack manually with (1)s end, Fixed.
5. 01:30:87 (1,1,1) - Align with (5), Fixed.
6. 02:17:21 (4,5) - Stack manually, Fixed.
7. 03:22:71 (1,2,3,4) - Stack manually, Fixed.
8. 03:41:37 (3) - Same as before, maybe exchange for 3 beats?.

Not Fixed.

Symbolic wrote:

[Oru's Insane]

00:14:54 (1) - Remove new combo. No.
00:15:04 (1) - ^ ^
00:18:21 (1) - ^ ^
00:18:37 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:71 (1) - ^ ^
00:25:87 (1) - ^ ^
00:28:54 (1) - ^ ^
00:28:71 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:21 (1) - ^ ^
00:29:37 (1) - ^ ^
01:19:87 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:20:21 (1) - ^ ^
01:20:54 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:878 (x) - Add a note here. ^
01:31:04 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:31:21 (1) - ^ ^
01:33:87 (1) - ^ ^
01:34:04 (1) - ^ ^
01:34:54 (1) - ^ ^
01:34:71 (1) - ^ ^
01:37:545 (x) - Add a note here. ^
01:37:71 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:38:212 (x) - Add a note here. ^
01:38:37 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:38:878 (x) - Add a note here. ^
01:39:212 (x) - ^ ^
01:44:21 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
01:44:37 (1) - ^ ^
01:44:54 (1) - ^ ^
01:44:71 (1) - ^ ^
01:47:04 (1) - ^ ^
01:47:37 (1) - ^ ^
02:02:37 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
02:02:54 (1) - ^ ^
02:18:21 (1) - ^ ^
02:18:37 (1) - ^ ^
02:45:54 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
02:45:87 (1) - ^ ^
02:46:21 (1) - ^ ^
03:05:21 (1) - ^ ^
03:05:71 (1) - ^ ^
03:18:54 (1) - ^ ^
03:18:87 (1) - ^ ^
03:19:21 (1) - ^ ^
03:22:545 (x) - Add a note here. ^
03:29:71 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
03:29:87 (1) - ^ ^
03:32:54 (1) - ^ ^
03:32:71 (1) - ^ ^
03:33:21 (1) - ^ ^
03:33:37 (1) - ^ ^
03:37:54 (1) - ^ ^
03:37:71 (1) - ^ ^
03:37:87 (1) - ^ ^
03:38:04 (1) - ^ ^
03:46:878 (x) - Add a note here. ^
03:47:04 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
03:47:545 (x) - Add a note here. ^
03:47:71 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
03:48:212 (x) - Add a note here. ^
03:48:545 (x) - ^ ^
03:53:54 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
03:53:71 (1) - ^ ^
03:53:87 (1) - ^ ^
03:54:04 (1) - ^ ^
03:56:37 (1) - ^ ^
03:56:71 (1) - ^ ^

Symbolic wrote:

[Normal]

Don't use too much 1/4's in Normal. Not Fixed.

[Hard]

00:10:04 (1) - Please make this slider faster, the -2x speed sux imo. Not fixed.
00:42:71 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is inconsistent with the rest of the song and it doesn't fit as a jump. Not Fixed
00:58:71 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:02:21 (7,8,9,10) - ^ ^
01:33:37 (3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:56:87 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
02:50:71 (1,2,1,2,1) - Speed-up doesn't fit. ^
03:04:71 (2) - Line this up with (1) FIXED.
03:10:71 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing is inconsistent with the rest of the song and it doesn't fit as a jump. Not Fixed.
03:54:71 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^ ^

Eddycted wrote:

First of all, great song.

[Oru's Insane]

Kiai right at the start doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I'd use it only for the climax of the song, at 03:13:37(), which you did as well. The kiai on the last note is rather silly as well. In short; too much kiai. Well, I think that this decision must be taken by HarryOrunitia

[Normal]

See Oru's Insane on kiai. Some kiai fixed.

00:52:21 (6) - Line this up with (5). Fixed.

[Hard]

See Oru's Insane on kiai. Unfortunately I like the kiai mode in this beatmap and I think I will remain it unchanged. s'ry :3

00:15:87 (2,3,4) - This stack doesn't feel intuitive. I have to recheck this. Anyway, not fixed.
03:24:21 (1) and 03:25:71 (1) - These two spinners don't feel like they're based on anything. Fixed.
03:55:37 (1,2,3) - I think this should be a combo of two, like the previous. same at 00:15:87 (2,3,4)

Other than that, great work. I enjoyed your map.

Star.

Eddycted wrote:

First of all, great song.

[Oru's Insane]

I like how you did the hit sounds, very nice. Thanks a lot!! :3

Kiai right at the start doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I'd use it only for the climax of the song, at 03:13:37(), which you did as well. The kiai on the last note is rather silly as well. In short; too much kiai.
I tried to follow Armin's difficulties with kiai. But for me it's totally fine to leave only the kiai at 03:13:37 and the one on the last note, so I guess it's up to him to decide what to do!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:52:22 (6) - move out from under 5 so i can tell this is a slider and not a hitcircle "Fixed"
02:07:88 (1) - end on a tick Fixed

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Normal:
02:28:71 (5) - sovrapposizioni del genere sconsigliate per normal Lo prendo in considerazione, se qualcun'altro lo segnala cambio
02:29:37 (1) - consiglio di farlo finire a 2:32:045 Not fixed

- Hard:
00:42:37 (6) - new combo? not fixed o.o
2:52:38 - KIAI? O.o (non è meglio direttamente a 3:14:712?) Questa parte col kiaimi sembrava più azzeccata. Proverò a togliere le altre
03:46:37 (6) - come 0:42:37 Not fixed o.o

- Oru's:
Troppi clap D: Chiedo a Oru, sempre se si connette
Molto bella

Star'd ^^