ts8zs wrote:

01:16:378 - preview time
01:16:978 - make kiai longer
from 01:16:978 - to 01:34:678 -
from 01:36:178 - to 01:55:378 - 01:36:178 加了个小喷泉
IS
00:11:878 (11) - 像这种我觉得改成短滑条后加上一个note比较好？没改 我现在做渐进感要强点
00:28:228 (3) - 尾部用normal的默认Finish？ 00:28:978 (1) - 这个Finish去掉？
00:47:428 (3) - 我觉得Ctrl+G之后比较顺手没改
HD
00:58:378 (3) - 没包好k
NM
STR-1不用 我确定2很适合

thou bad wrote:

Hi~m4m
[Insane]

• 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - 间距可以再大一点，推荐ds 0.45x直接0.5ds了
  
  00:21:178 (5,6) - 换个方向好看一点，并且用弧度大一点的slidernice 好主意
  
  01:52:378 (3,4) - 这两个Sampleset-Soft是故意的么？恩 收尾

[Hard]

• AR+15 8 9的ar提升 三维不均匀 等更多人吐槽
  00:13:828 加个note，空着感觉有点奇怪k

[Normal]

• 01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 还是用slider比较好
  或者
  01:21:778 (1,2,1) - 改了一下，和01:31:378 (1,2,1) - 相呼应（233）nice
  

  348,92,81778,6,0,B|410:95|410:95|456:140,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  372,184,82978,2,0,B|337:236|337:236|275:253,2,120
  280,158,84178,6,0,B|251:101|251:101|268:39,2,120
  324,244,85378,2,0,P|279:300|200:335,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

这么好的图要怎么mod？我是神麻婆=w= (被殴打

shikyu wrote:

hi, M4M for your queue~

[General]
it's cut? not really good end of mapping imo o.o will really like if you map full ver song although it's pretty late by now =="
also for Left 4 Dead tag it should be "Left_4_Dead" (example in ranked one is - t e n n y a - , her name in tag is -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-)
ok fixed~
[Normal]
not reacommend slider velocity change in easiest diff, consider to delete 0.75x green line section ok
00:25:378 (3) - place upper and will become like this http://puu.sh/3oK09.jpg k
00:25:978 (4,1,2) - make them symmetry? it will look neater
01:00:178 (3) - stacked by 00:58:978 (2) , move it lower, besides 01:01:378 (4) not really symmetry with 00:58:978 (2) ('cause you copy paste (3) slider from (1))
01:30:178 (3) - ctrl+H, it will look symmetry with 01:28:978 (1) and neater
01:49:378 (3) - ctrl+J, same reason as above and it still looks good http://puu.sh/3oKk1.jpguse other idea
overall pretty good, but still need more mods for design

[Hard]
00:00:178 (1) - add clap? (comsider clap use at 00:04:978 (1) ) k
00:02:878 (2) - clap at slider's start not reall fit, remove it k
00:05:878 (2) - prefer whistle at slider's end
00:06:778 (3) - clap here is pretty good
00:13:978 (2) - make it further from 00:13:378 (1) ? consider jump at 00:11:578 (3,4)
00:23:578 (3,1) - 1,96 then 0,86? too far difference and weird imo, make 00:24:178 (1) further maybe?k
00:28:528 (3) - not really legit anti-jump, make the spacing with 00:28:078 (2) further than now k
00:46:678 - add a note here, weird gap k
00:57:028 (2) - curve it better, like this http://puu.sh/3oLFe.jpg k
01:01:078 (4) - stacked with 01:00:478 (2) , move it somewhere
weird jump pattern at beginning but it become better at the end

[Insane]
00:04:978 - 00:06:778 - fill with some notes, orz. too empty empty is fine, maybe
01:15:778 (1,2,3,4) - something like ? (better jump pattern, switch (2) and (3,4) placement) http://puu.sh/3oM3m.jpg k
can't play insane much but this diff is good imo

I thinks that's all, good luck then~