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MinusP - Shura no Niwa

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wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月9日 at 18:46:38

Artist: MinusP
Title: Shura no Niwa
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 Kagamine Rin Len Left_4_Dead wonderful opportunity! vol.2
BPM: 200
Filesize: 3645kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.94 stars, 314 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 479 notes)
  3. Normal (3.08 stars, 141 notes)
Download: MinusP - Shura no Niwa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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insane hitsound by Left 4 Dead
shInjiju'nana'c17 by Osu_Cc1Y7
Last edited by wantuole , edited 43 times in total.
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
BG好評
Cyc17-
128 posts
Joined July 2011
Cyc17-
老前辈的教诲深深的刻在我心中
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Please choose a better fitting BG lol
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

Saten wrote:

Please choose a better fitting BG lol
sorry,lol
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
Artist: mainasuP
Title: Shura no Niwa
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 Kagamine Rin Len Left 4 Dead wonderful opportunity! vol.2

BG以下自選 :3
SPOILER
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

Azure wrote:

Artist: mainasuP
Title: Shura no Niwa
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 Kagamine Rin Len Left 4 Dead wonderful opportunity! vol.2

BG以下自選 :3
SPOILER
thx :)
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
听不到歌词QAQQQQQQQQQ
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
;w;
mintong89
3,695 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
SPOILER
21:26 wantuole: hi~
21:26 mintong89: hey :3
21:26 wantuole: 来求mod了~
21:26 wantuole: ;w;
21:26 mintong89: hao
21:27 wantuole: thx~
21:27 *wantuole is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262126 mainasuP - Shura no Niwa [Insane]]
21:27 mintong89: irc can?
21:27 wantuole: 好啊好啊
21:28 mintong89: delete Letterbox
21:28 mintong89: untick*
21:28 mintong89: duibuqi xianzai buneng huawen
21:29 wantuole: 看拼音也无压力i~
21:29 mintong89: .
21:29 mintong89: hao
21:30 mintong89: 00:09:628 (7,8,1) - zhe ge jue de zhi jie NC zai 00:09:628 (7) - jiu hao le
21:31 wantuole: k
21:31 mintong89: 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - zhe ge ke yi nong ruan(circle) dian
21:31 mintong89: puu.sh/3n9tX.jpg
21:31 mintong89: http://puu.sh/3n9tX.jpg
21:32 wantuole: ok
21:34 mintong89: 01:28:978 (1,2) - xi wang keyi bu yao stack
21:35 wantuole: 好
21:35 mintong89: 01:55:378 (1) - zui hou gan jue keyi zuoge 0.5x slider
21:36 mintong89: 01:56:278 - dao zhe li
21:36 wantuole: 这个感觉一般哦
21:36 mintong89: enen~
21:36 mintong89: mei le
21:36 wantuole: :3 thx
21:37 mintong89: hard
21:37 mintong89: .
21:37 mintong89: meile
21:37 mintong89: too poor mod omg
21:38 mintong89: 哦好了, 01:16:678 - 这里hard可以加个小声的绿线
21:39 wantuole: 好

too naziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii mod ;w;
stared!
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib

Osu_Cc1Y7 wrote:

老前辈的教诲深深的刻在我心中
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
01:16:378 - preview time
01:16:978 - make kiai longer
from 01:16:978 - to 01:34:678 -
from 01:36:178 - to 01:55:378 -
IS
00:11:878 (11) - 像这种我觉得改成短滑条后加上一个note比较好？
00:28:228 (3) - 尾部用normal的默认Finish？ 00:28:978 (1) - 这个Finish去掉？
00:47:428 (3) - 我觉得Ctrl+G之后比较顺手
HD
00:58:378 (3) - 没包好
NM
STR-1
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Citrus
Hi~m4m
[Insane]
  • 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - 间距可以再大一点，推荐ds 0.45x

    00:21:178 (5,6) - 换个方向好看一点，并且用弧度大一点的slider

    01:52:378 (3,4) - 这两个Sampleset-Soft是故意的么？
[Hard]
  • AR+1
    00:13:828 加个note，空着感觉有点奇怪
[Normal]
  • 01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 还是用slider比较好
    或者
    01:21:778 (1,2,1) - 改了一下，和01:31:378 (1,2,1) - 相呼应（233）
    348,92,81778,6,0,B|410:95|410:95|456:140,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    372,184,82978,2,0,B|337:236|337:236|275:253,2,120
    280,158,84178,6,0,B|251:101|251:101|268:39,2,120
    324,244,85378,2,0,P|279:300|200:335,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
这么好的图要怎么mod？
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu
hi, M4M for your queue~

[General]
it's cut? not really good end of mapping imo o.o will really like if you map full ver song although it's pretty late by now =="
also for Left 4 Dead tag it should be "Left_4_Dead" (example in ranked one is - t e n n y a - , her name in tag is -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-)

[Normal]
not reacommend slider velocity change in easiest diff, consider to delete 0.75x green line section
00:25:378 (3) - place upper and will become like this http://puu.sh/3oK09.jpg
00:25:978 (4,1,2) - make them symmetry? it will look neater
01:00:178 (3) - stacked by 00:58:978 (2) , move it lower, besides 01:01:378 (4) not really symmetry with 00:58:978 (2) ('cause you copy paste (3) slider from (1))
01:30:178 (3) - ctrl+H, it will look symmetry with 01:28:978 (1) and neater
01:49:378 (3) - ctrl+J, same reason as above and it still looks good http://puu.sh/3oKk1.jpg
overall pretty good, but still need more mods for design

[Hard]
00:00:178 (1) - add clap? (comsider clap use at 00:04:978 (1) )
00:02:878 (2) - clap at slider's start not reall fit, remove it
00:05:878 (2) - prefer whistle at slider's end
00:06:778 (3) - clap here is pretty good
00:13:978 (2) - make it further from 00:13:378 (1) ? consider jump at 00:11:578 (3,4)
00:23:578 (3,1) - 1,96 then 0,86? too far difference and weird imo, make 00:24:178 (1) further maybe?
00:28:528 (3) - not really legit anti-jump, make the spacing with 00:28:078 (2) further than now
00:46:678 - add a note here, weird gap
00:57:028 (2) - curve it better, like this http://puu.sh/3oLFe.jpg
01:01:078 (4) - stacked with 01:00:478 (2) , move it somewhere
weird jump pattern at beginning but it become better at the end

[Insane]
00:04:978 - 00:06:778 - fill with some notes, orz. too empty
01:15:778 (1,2,3,4) - something like ? (better jump pattern, switch (2) and (3,4) placement) http://puu.sh/3oM3m.jpg
can't play insane much but this diff is good imo :)

I thinks that's all, good luck then~
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole
SPOILER

ts8zs wrote:

01:16:378 - preview time
01:16:978 - make kiai longer
from 01:16:978 - to 01:34:678 -
from 01:36:178 - to 01:55:378 - 01:36:178 加了个小喷泉
IS
00:11:878 (11) - 像这种我觉得改成短滑条后加上一个note比较好？没改 我现在做渐进感要强点
00:28:228 (3) - 尾部用normal的默认Finish？ 00:28:978 (1) - 这个Finish去掉？
00:47:428 (3) - 我觉得Ctrl+G之后比较顺手没改
HD
00:58:378 (3) - 没包好k
NM
STR-1不用 我确定2很适合
SPOILER

thou bad wrote:

Hi~m4m
[Insane]
  • 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - 间距可以再大一点，推荐ds 0.45x直接0.5ds了

    00:21:178 (5,6) - 换个方向好看一点，并且用弧度大一点的slidernice 好主意

    01:52:378 (3,4) - 这两个Sampleset-Soft是故意的么？恩 收尾
[Hard]
  • AR+15 8 9的ar提升 三维不均匀 等更多人吐槽
    00:13:828 加个note，空着感觉有点奇怪k
[Normal]
  • 01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 还是用slider比较好
    或者
    01:21:778 (1,2,1) - 改了一下，和01:31:378 (1,2,1) - 相呼应（233）nice
    348,92,81778,6,0,B|410:95|410:95|456:140,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    372,184,82978,2,0,B|337:236|337:236|275:253,2,120
    280,158,84178,6,0,B|251:101|251:101|268:39,2,120
    324,244,85378,2,0,P|279:300|200:335,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
这么好的图要怎么mod？我是神麻婆=w= (被殴打
SPOILER

shikyu wrote:

hi, M4M for your queue~

[General]
it's cut? not really good end of mapping imo o.o will really like if you map full ver song although it's pretty late by now =="
also for Left 4 Dead tag it should be "Left_4_Dead" (example in ranked one is - t e n n y a - , her name in tag is -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-)
ok fixed~
[Normal]
not reacommend slider velocity change in easiest diff, consider to delete 0.75x green line section ok
00:25:378 (3) - place upper and will become like this http://puu.sh/3oK09.jpg k
00:25:978 (4,1,2) - make them symmetry? it will look neater
01:00:178 (3) - stacked by 00:58:978 (2) , move it lower, besides 01:01:378 (4) not really symmetry with 00:58:978 (2) ('cause you copy paste (3) slider from (1))
01:30:178 (3) - ctrl+H, it will look symmetry with 01:28:978 (1) and neater
01:49:378 (3) - ctrl+J, same reason as above and it still looks good http://puu.sh/3oKk1.jpguse other idea
overall pretty good, but still need more mods for design

[Hard]
00:00:178 (1) - add clap? (comsider clap use at 00:04:978 (1) ) k
00:02:878 (2) - clap at slider's start not reall fit, remove it k
00:05:878 (2) - prefer whistle at slider's end
00:06:778 (3) - clap here is pretty good
00:13:978 (2) - make it further from 00:13:378 (1) ? consider jump at 00:11:578 (3,4)
00:23:578 (3,1) - 1,96 then 0,86? too far difference and weird imo, make 00:24:178 (1) further maybe?k
00:28:528 (3) - not really legit anti-jump, make the spacing with 00:28:078 (2) further than now k
00:46:678 - add a note here, weird gap k
00:57:028 (2) - curve it better, like this http://puu.sh/3oLFe.jpg k
01:01:078 (4) - stacked with 01:00:478 (2) , move it somewhere
weird jump pattern at beginning but it become better at the end

[Insane]
00:04:978 - 00:06:778 - fill with some notes, orz. too empty empty is fine, maybe
01:15:778 (1,2,3,4) - something like ? (better jump pattern, switch (2) and (3,4) placement) http://puu.sh/3oM3m.jpg k
can't play insane much but this diff is good imo :)

I thinks that's all, good luck then~

thx for mod :)
update
Last edited by wantuole , edited 2 times in total.
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

wantuole wrote:

SPOILER

ts8zs wrote:

01:16:378 - preview time
01:16:978 - make kiai longer
from 01:16:978 - to 01:34:678 -
from 01:36:178 - to 01:55:378 - 01:36:178 加了个小喷泉
IS
00:11:878 (11) - 像这种我觉得改成短滑条后加上一个note比较好？没改 我现在做渐进感要强点
00:28:228 (3) - 尾部用normal的默认Finish？ 00:28:978 (1) - 这个Finish去掉？
00:47:428 (3) - 我觉得Ctrl+G之后比较顺手没改
HD
00:58:378 (3) - 没包好k
NM
STR-1不用 我确定2很适合
SPOILER

thou bad wrote:

Hi~m4m
[Insane]
  • 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - 间距可以再大一点，推荐ds 0.45x直接0.5ds了

    00:21:178 (5,6) - 换个方向好看一点，并且用弧度大一点的slidernice 好主意

    01:52:378 (3,4) - 这两个Sampleset-Soft是故意的么？恩 收尾
[Hard]
  • AR+15 8 9的ar提升 三维不均匀 等更多人吐槽
    00:13:828 加个note，空着感觉有点奇怪k
[Normal]
  • 01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 还是用slider比较好
    或者
    01:21:778 (1,2,1) - 改了一下，和01:31:378 (1,2,1) - 相呼应（233）nice
    348,92,81778,6,0,B|410:95|410:95|456:140,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    372,184,82978,2,0,B|337:236|337:236|275:253,2,120
    280,158,84178,6,0,B|251:101|251:101|268:39,2,120
    324,244,85378,2,0,P|279:300|200:335,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
这么好的图要怎么mod？我是神麻婆=w= (被殴打

感谢mod :)
update
为什么会这么抢手……噗
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
赞
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello!

Modding

General

  1. I want long KIAI TIME.

Normal

  1. 00:38:128 (3,2) - overlap. move note another location.
  2. 00:58:978 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:04:378 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:08:578 (2,1) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:21:478 (4,1) - overlap.
  2. 00:41:878 (7,1) - ^
  3. 01:04:078 (6,7) - ^
  4. 01:09:328 (4,1) - ^
  5. 01:14:578 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about you? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835781 / https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835782

Insane

  1. 00:09:778 (3,4) - delete "4" note. and "3"slider end at 00:10:078
  2. too many blue line bit end slider. ex. 00:43:378 (1,2) 00:45:178 (4) (you can ignore this mod)
  3. 01:12:028 (6,1) - overlap.
  4. 01:54:328 (2,3) - too hard :? ......maybe?

i'm noob modder.

End!
sjoy
1,023 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
我来MOD了._.不好请见谅._.
HARD:
00:07:978 (4) - 换颜色吧。试试换成 2短条+1单点如何？
00:09:628 (5) - 2个单点？
00:28:978 (1) - 把来回滑条换成长条？
00:29:428 (2) - 感觉可以删掉。
01:00:178 (1) - 不考虑摆01:00:478 (2) - 远的距离吗？感觉2分单点以内叠比较好._.
01:07:078 (6) - 试试摆在01:07:378 (1) - 这里？
01:16:378 (2) - 感觉要滑到01:16:828这里
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

sjoy wrote:

01:07:078 (6) - 试试摆在01:07:378 (1) - 这里？

Losertic wrote:

Insane

  1. 01:12:028 (6,1) - overlap.

fix this, thx for mod :)
sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
From 复读群 很久以前(?
以前Plan8坑了我就试试这张吧
Red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=just advice
Normal
01:31:528 - 多余的绿线
Looks Good!
Hard
00:07:978 (4) - 改成往返一次吧.节奏太散了
00:23:578 (3) - Ctrl+G?
00:35:878 (2) - 这个可以和00:34:978 (1) - 的结尾重合，感觉会很坑
01:11:578 (2) - Ctrl+G?
00:56:503 - 可以add a circle做个三连 感觉Hard都没四分音符好枯燥:O
Insane
00:10:453 - 00:10:528 - 做个滑条+二连感觉不错
00:13:078 (5) - NC?

really good map
我mod能力有限,说不出来什么了....
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Jycool
m4m from your queue
[general]
感觉音效下的很散，没有形成一个很好的音轨，特别是哨音，建议重下
[normal]
nothing
[hard]
00:21:778 (1) - 建议从00:21:178 (3,4) - 中间穿过，不要有重叠，不是很好看
00:35:878 (2) - 建议摆远点，容易读错
00:42:178 (1) - 建议这么摆
SPOILER
00:42:178 (1) - 加note
01:18:628 (2) - 和01:18:178 (1) - 摆的近点
[insane]
00:24:553 (2) - 去掉note，这个加的效果不好
00:48:628 (3) - 建议和00:47:428 (3) - 的滑调头stack



祝rank :)
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

sammy711 wrote:

From 复读群 很久以前(?
以前Plan8坑了我就试试这张吧
Red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=just advice
Normal
01:31:528 - 多余的绿线既然发现就删了=w=
Looks Good!
Hard
00:07:978 (4) - 改成往返一次吧.节奏太散了 no
00:23:578 (3) - Ctrl+G? no
00:35:878 (2) - 这个可以和00:34:978 (1) - 的结尾重合，感觉会很坑这ok的说
01:11:578 (2) - Ctrl+G?no
00:56:503 - 可以add a circle做个三连 感觉Hard都没四分音符好枯燥:O 我是善良麻婆
Insane
00:10:453 - 00:10:528 - 做个滑条+二连感觉不错 有三个人吐槽了 于是我换了个节奏
00:13:078 (5) - NC?

really good map
我mod能力有限,说不出来什么了....

jyc-Binggan wrote:

m4m from your queue
[general]
感觉音效下的很散，没有形成一个很好的音轨，特别是哨音，建议重下音乐已经很嘈杂了 一点重音和clap符合着是我认为最好的
[normal]
nothing
[hard]
00:21:778 (1) - 建议从00:21:178 (3,4) - 中间穿过，不要有重叠，不是很好看中间穿过这串就显得拥挤了
00:35:878 (2) - 建议摆远点，容易读错三个人提到了这个地方 改的远了
00:42:178 (1) - 建议这么摆
SPOILER
00:42:178 (1) - 加noteno 两可的造型 我觉得现在的玩起来顺手
01:18:628 (2) - 和01:18:178 (1) - 摆的近点 no 1 2 3合起来是一个图形
[insane]
00:24:553 (2) - 去掉note，这个加的效果不好k
00:48:628 (3) - 建议和00:47:428 (3) - 的滑调头stackk



祝rank :)

感谢mod :)
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
我是来支持的
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
from my queue

庭和(中间应该留个空格，记得两个title都改掉
不到2分你不加个easy?

[Normal]
00:46:978 (4) - 你把00:45:778 (2) - 复制过去感觉好得多
01:00:178 (3) - 你不觉得1对称过去好看么
01:08:578 (2,1) - 别overlap
感觉就这diff看着比较顺眼。。

[Hard]
00:07:978 (4) - 不应该在00:08:128开始么
00:11:878 (4,1) - 这是hard?
00:21:778 (1,2,3) - clap让你吃了吗。。。
01:04:378 (7,1) - 这是hard?
01:15:178 (2,1) - ^
虽然比insane强点但是还是乱 不少跳在200之下对于hard来说挺大的，你自己斟酌下

[Insane]
00:06:178 (4) - tick毁气氛
00:09:628 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:678 (1,2) - 不看上面的话你觉得哪个比较像1/4?
00:11:578 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这么摆比较顺 http://puu.sh/3rtI5.jpg
00:17:578 (3,4) - 为啥这边又挫了
00:40:978 (1,2,3) - 你开test看看这边效果多吃翔
01:12:178 (1,2) - 太近
01:31:528 (2) - 这节奏有意义?
乱就一个字，我只说一次。。
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
wantuole (ｏ´艸｀ｏ)

[General]
title: Shura no Niwa (Short Ver.)
修羅ノ庭 (Short Ver.)
remember adding space before "(Short Ver.)"

[Normal]
  1. 01:09:778 (1) slider's tail stick with 01:08:578 (2) head
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:628 (2) DS?
  2. 00:21:178 (2,3,4,1) WT try this (focus on 00:21:028 (2)、00:21:778 (1) )
  3. 00:22:228 (2) stick with 00:21:178 (3) slider's tail
  4. 01:00:478 (2,4) OMG please fix it http://puu.sh/3rxIP.jpg
  5. 01:21:478 (4) move to x:168, y:164
  6. 01:30:478 (2,4) ctrl+G then 01:30:778 (3,4) ctrl+G
  7. 01:40:678 (4) move to x:240, y:80
  8. 01:43:078 (4) move to x:236, y:144
  9. 01:50:278 (4) move to x:240, y:216
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:378 (4) move to x:196, y:176
  2. 00:06:178 (4) ctrl+G
  3. 00:16:378 (2,5) try this http://puu.sh/3r5Yf.jpg
  4. 00:20:728 (2,4) try this http://puu.sh/3r6eS.jpg
    let 00:21:028 (4) stick with 00:19:303 (6)
  5. 00:25:378 (1) ctrl+G
  6. 00:26:278 (5,6) try this http://puu.sh/3r65F.jpg
  7. 00:30:778 (3) stick with 00:30:328 (1) slider's tail
  8. 00:30:928 (3,4,5) DS
  9. 00:32:878 (2) move to x:180, y:64
  10. 00:34:528 (6) stick with 00:33:178 (3) slider's head
  11. 00:51:478 (4) ctrl+G
  12. 01:08:728 (2,3,4) try this http://puu.sh/3r78g.jpg
  13. 01:39:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I like this
that's all ((●゜c_゜●))
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[Insane]
00:06:178 (4) - 我感觉没对齐
01:29:428 (3,4) - 跳过来的感觉有点不顺？
01:34:378 (4,5) - 感觉3跳到这里有点牵强...移右点试试？
01:35:878 (5) - 为什么不改成5连(其实这么燃的曲子不放5连衬托真是太可惜
01:55:378 (1) - 加个finish?

[Hard]
00:47:428 (2) - 滑条头加whistle?
01:55:378 (1) - 同insane

[Normal]
01:55:378 (1) - 不加点什么吗...

[Other]
你的insane我打起来就是在飞来飞去...感觉没什么爽的感觉...莫名

Goodluck

另外有时间的话可不可以看看我这图 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/82542 thx
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

庭和(中间应该留个空格，记得两个title都改掉k
不到2分你不加个easy?=w=

[Normal]
00:46:978 (4) - 你把00:45:778 (2) - 复制过去感觉好得多还是压红线感觉好
01:00:178 (3) - 你不觉得1对称过去好看么微调了下
01:08:578 (2,1) - 别overlapk
感觉就这diff看着比较顺眼。。

[Hard]
00:07:978 (4) - 不应该在00:08:128开始么好怪 没改
00:11:878 (4,1) - 这是hard?近了点
00:21:778 (1,2,3) - clap让你吃了吗。。。忘了加=w=
01:04:378 (7,1) - 这是hard?k
01:15:178 (2,1) - ^没改动
虽然比insane强点但是还是乱 不少跳在200之下对于hard来说挺大的，你自己斟酌下

[Insane]
00:06:178 (4) - tick毁气氛调低了音量
00:09:628 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:678 (1,2) - 不看上面的话你觉得哪个比较像1/4?调整了
00:11:578 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这么摆比较顺 http://puu.sh/3rtI5.jpg
00:17:578 (3,4) - 为啥这边又挫了我是那神挫挫的人啊=w=
00:40:978 (1,2,3) - 你开test看看这边效果多吃翔看了以后我大吃一斤 改了
01:12:178 (1,2) - 太近这段spacing调整下
01:31:528 (2) - 这节奏有意义?拆分了
乱就一个字，我只说一次。。感谢批评 其实我也一直对这难度很无语 自己搞的那么乱 别人又乱黑 乱赞 :o 奇怪的现象

Azure wrote:

wantuole (ｏ´艸｀ｏ)

[General]
title: Shura no Niwa (Short Ver.)
修羅ノ庭 (Short Ver.)
remember adding space before "(Short Ver.)" 有提到了 fixed

[Normal]
  1. 01:09:778 (1) slider's tail stick with 01:08:578 (2) head
fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:628 (2) DS? no
  2. 00:21:178 (2,3,4,1) WT try this (focus on 00:21:028 (2)、00:21:778 (1) ) 这是原稿位子-3 -
  3. 00:22:228 (2) stick with 00:21:178 (3) slider's tail用其他的摆设了
  4. 01:00:478 (2,4) OMG please fix it http://puu.sh/3rxIP.jpg 没问题的说
  5. 01:21:478 (4) move to x:168, y:164 k
  6. 01:30:478 (2,4) ctrl+G then 01:30:778 (3,4) ctrl+G no
  7. 01:40:678 (4) move to x:240, y:80k
  8. 01:43:078 (4) move to x:236, y:144k
  9. 01:50:278 (4) move to x:240, y:216
no

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:378 (4) move to x:196, y:176k
  2. 00:06:178 (4) ctrl+Gk
  3. 00:16:378 (2,5) try this http://puu.sh/3r5Yf.jpgno
  4. 00:20:728 (2,4) try this http://puu.sh/3r6eS.jpg其他用法
    let 00:21:028 (4) stick with 00:19:303 (6) ^
  5. 00:25:378 (1) ctrl+Gk
  6. 00:26:278 (5,6) try this http://puu.sh/3r65F.jpgno
  7. 00:30:778 (3) stick with 00:30:328 (1) slider's tail no
  8. 00:30:928 (3,4,5) DS fix
  9. 00:32:878 (2) move to x:180, y:64 fix
  10. 00:34:528 (6) stick with 00:33:178 (3) slider's head k
  11. 00:51:478 (4) ctrl+G no
  12. 01:08:728 (2,3,4) try this http://puu.sh/3r78g.jpg 又回到初稿了 yeah
  13. 01:39:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I like this
thx

that's all ((●゜c_゜●)) ((●゜c_゜●))

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:178 (4) - 我感觉没对齐 已改
01:29:428 (3,4) - 跳过来的感觉有点不顺？没变动
01:34:378 (4,5) - 感觉3跳到这里有点牵强...移右点试试？不用
01:35:878 (5) - 为什么不改成5连(其实这么燃的曲子不放5连衬托真是太可惜我才不会说还一个难度太鬼畜被我砍了
01:55:378 (1) - 加个finish?没必要的感觉

[Hard]
00:47:428 (2) - 滑条头加whistle? nice
01:55:378 (1) - 同insane^

[Normal]
01:55:378 (1) - 不加点什么吗... 去了clap 让你失望了

[Other]
你的insane我打起来就是在飞来飞去...感觉没什么爽的感觉...莫名和来爽点啊！ 那是被人黑的啊！

Goodluck

另外有时间的话可不可以看看我这图 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/82542 thx 当然可以！ :)
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
家里网太差下不下来啊;w;

不好意思可能得等明天家里通了光纤TAT
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M
[General]
Audio-Lead-In 2504→2500?
[Normal]
Placement
00:20:578(3) make a blanket like this?
SPOILER
00:39:178(2) move this note like this? it would be more neatly
SPOILER
00:49:978(4,5) not overlapped better
00:51:778(6) 1 or 2 bit up, and it would be nice blanket.
01:01:378(2) again, this overlapped will make newbie confused, since it is a easiest diff, you can put more easily.
01:30:178(3) maybe, you can put it symmetrically with (1)
SPOILER
01:40:978(1) tiny thing, spacing error.1 or 2 bit far away better
Rhythm
00:00:178 unnecessary green line
00:15:778(3) this reverse tick doesn't follow any audio and vocal, so more simply for newbie better
SPOILER
[Hard]
Placement
00:25:678(2) Ctrl+G makes nice jump I suppose.
01:27:478(4)^
00:42:178(1) looks ugly, maybe like this? it would nice flow
SPOILER
01:06:778(5,6) I don't suppose it is good spacing, keep proper distance better. so like this?
SPOILER
01:19:828(2,4) stack will stop the flow of playing, move away?
Rhythm
01:14:578(1) the reverse doesn't follow any music or vocal...
Hit Sonud
01:31:378(1) add whistle at head same as other diffs.
01:45:478(1) add finish at end
[Insane]
Placement
00:15:178(3) move like this? just a suggestion
SPOILER
00:25:978(3,4,5,6) make a consistence jumping?
SPOILER
01:24:778(4,5)to make a noce flow, stack(4) and (6) not (5)
Hit Sonud
00:28:228(3) finish better than clap at end

overall fine I suppose. good luck and star~
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
Hello 迟来的M4M


[G]
  1. Don't know why but I see Normal is 3.5 star rating. It should be a bug but in order to make confusion, try to reduce the difficulty?
    SPOILER
  2. I found a hitsound which serves perfectly as hitnormal sound for beginning - 00:09:628, you can set it as hitnormal2 and copy the other hitsounds to the second set of hitsound as well.
    http://puu.sh/3tf3S.wav
    Have a try. It's really nice
  3. I don't know how the rules change but according to the current rules and guidelines, you should not have "Short Ver." in your title as this post suggests, which is a silly rule imo. But ╮(╯▽╰)╭ you know...

[N]
  1. 00:06:778 (3) - move 2-3 grids right? make it the same vertical line with 00:05:878 (2) - , would be cleaner imo
  2. 00:16:978 (1) - pretty ugly imo.. maybe u can try something like this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:578 (3) - compare to the current one I would prefer
    SPOILER
  4. 00:44:578 (1) - hmmm. kinda nazi but can you see the difference? I prefer the second one 0.0
    SPOILER

  5. 00:50:578 (5) - maybe rotate clockwise by 4°-5° in order to prevent overlap with 00:49:978 (4) - just like
    SPOILER
  6. 00:54:178 (2) - hmmm... try this
    SPOILER
  7. 01:01:378 (2) - I really don't suggest this kind of overlap in E/N. Kinda difficult for new babies. .w.
  8. 01:21:778 (1) - nazi, one grid up to have the same horizontal line with 01:21:478 (4) -
  9. 01:30:178 (3) - why not copy a 01:28:978 (1) - and ctrl+g and move to the current position?

[H]
  1. 00:21:778 (1) - I would prefer
    SPOILER
  2. 00:51:928 (2) - move left and down a little bit? To make the spacing btw 1-2 and 2-3 equal
  3. 00:58:378 (3) - ctrl+g makes the flow better imo. and ctrl+g 00:58:678 (4) - as well if you do it
  4. 01:09:478 (5) - Try ctrl+g
  5. 01:21:178 (3) - I would add a NC to prevent confusion. But not really important ╮(╯▽╰)╭
  6. 01:37:077 (4) - Try ctrl+g to have a better flow
  7. 01:40:378 (3) - same as previous

[I]
  1. 00:17:878 (5) - I would suggest this:
    SPOILER
    looks better imo
  2. 01:22:228 (3) - Still, Move down a little bit to make the spacing btw 2-3 3-4 equal

Nothing else~ Good Luck !
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello 迟来的M4M


[G]
  1. Don't know why but I see Normal is 3.5 star rating. It should be a bug but in order to make confusion, try to reduce the difficulty?
    SPOILER
    ~改低了难度
  2. I found a hitsound which serves perfectly as hitnormal sound for beginning - 00:09:628, you can set it as hitnormal2 and copy the other hitsounds to the second set of hitsound as well. ~尝试着使用
    http://puu.sh/3tf3S.wav
    Have a try. It's really nice
  3. I don't know how the rules change but according to the current rules and guidelines, you should not have "Short Ver." in your title as this post suggests, which is a silly rule imo. But ╮(╯▽╰)╭ you know...
~ I Know ......

[N]
  1. 00:06:778 (3) - move 2-3 grids right? make it the same vertical line with 00:05:878 (2) - , would be cleaner imo fix
  2. 00:16:978 (1) - pretty ugly imo.. maybe u can try something like this ok
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:578 (3) - compare to the current one I would prefer用了大点幅度的
    SPOILER
  4. 00:44:578 (1) - hmmm. kinda nazi but can you see the difference? I prefer the second one 0.0ok
    SPOILER

  5. 00:50:578 (5) - maybe rotate clockwise by 4°-5° in order to prevent overlap with 00:49:978 (4) - just like换note了
    SPOILER
  6. 00:54:178 (2) - hmmm... try thisk
    SPOILER
  7. 01:01:378 (2) - I really don't suggest this kind of overlap in E/N. Kinda difficult for new babies. .w. 改了
  8. 01:21:778 (1) - nazi, one grid up to have the same horizontal line with 01:21:478 (4) - k
  9. 01:30:178 (3) - why not copy a 01:28:978 (1) - and ctrl+g and move to the current position?
k

[H]
  1. 00:21:778 (1) - I would prefer ok
    SPOILER
  2. 00:51:928 (2) - move left and down a little bit? To make the spacing btw 1-2 and 2-3 equalk
  3. 00:58:378 (3) - ctrl+g makes the flow better imo. and ctrl+g 00:58:678 (4) - as well if you do it 接近3了 有点远了
  4. 01:09:478 (5) - Try ctrl+g并不喜欢note切换slider的时候加大ds ╮(╯▽╰)╭我也很倔
  5. 01:21:178 (3) - I would add a NC to prevent confusion. But not really important ╮(╯▽╰)╭:>
  6. 01:37:077 (4) - Try ctrl+g to have a better flow略远了。
  7. 01:40:378 (3) - same as previous
和屁股的mod两种方向了~

[I]
  1. 00:17:878 (5) - I would suggest this:
    SPOILER
    looks better imo k
  2. 01:22:228 (3) - Still, Move down a little bit to make the spacing btw 2-3 3-4 equal

Nothing else~ Good Luck !

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Audio-Lead-In 2504→2500?k
[Normal]
Placement
00:20:578(3) make a blanket like this? do not want blanket here
SPOILER
00:39:178(2) move this note like this? it would be more neatlycool idea
SPOILER
00:49:978(4,5) not overlapped betterk'
00:51:778(6) 1 or 2 bit up, and it would be nice blanket.k
01:01:378(2) again, this overlapped will make newbie confused, since it is a easiest diff, you can put more easily.k
01:30:178(3) maybe, you can put it symmetrically with (1)k
SPOILER
01:40:978(1) tiny thing, spacing error.1 or 2 bit far away better
Rhythm
00:00:178 unnecessary green line del
00:15:778(3) this reverse tick doesn't follow any audio and vocal, so more simply for newbie better k
SPOILER
[Hard]
Placement
00:25:678(2) Ctrl+G makes nice jump I suppose. other idea
01:27:478(4)^
00:42:178(1) looks ugly, maybe like this? it would nice flow
SPOILER
01:06:778(5,6) I don't suppose it is good spacing, keep proper distance better. so like this?use other idea
SPOILER
01:19:828(2,4) stack will stop the flow of playing, move away?k
Rhythm
01:14:578(1) the reverse doesn't follow any music or vocal... 1 is ok, change 2 be a note
Hit Sonud
01:31:378(1) add whistle at head same as other diffs.k
01:45:478(1) add finish at end add whistle
[Insane]
Placement
00:15:178(3) move like this? just a suggestionk
SPOILER
00:25:978(3,4,5,6) make a consistence jumping? other idea
SPOILER
01:24:778(4,5)to make a noce flow, stack(4) and (6) not (5) nice idea
Hit Sonud
00:28:228(3) finish better than clap at endno

overall fine I suppose. good luck and star~
thx for mod :)
update
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Hi wantuole~ Trying m4m from your queue here xD

[General]

-> Err, is 'normal-sliderslide - ò¢û{.wav' used? I can't find its usage (even in the Storyboard Sound Samples) o.o
-> I'd like to recolor the title text for this map, tell me if you're interested though

[Insane]

  1. 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make a sharper inward angle here instead on this arc perhaps?
    SPOILER
    456,40,7978,1,2,2:0:0:0:
    425,76,8128,1,0,2:0:0:0:
    419,123,8278,1,2,2:0:0:0:
    440,165,8428,1,0,2:0:0:0:
    481,189,8578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:13:078 (1,2) - Suggestion, make (1,1,2) in a straight line like this perhaps? It's tidier here but I can't figure out how to adjust the next part though...
    SPOILER
  3. 00:15:553 (1,2,3,4) - Another pattern suggestion here, I liked how this has circular movement around it personally though~
    SPOILER
  4. 00:25:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - Err, if you're aiming for a pentagon here try this perhaps? Your current one definitely can be tidied up though xD
    SPOILER
    159,230,25378,6,0,L|64:224,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    244,206,25678,2,0,P|292:190|339:212,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    160,319,25978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    285,276,26128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    240,344,26278,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  5. 00:29:278 (2) - Face this to the opposite direction (upward) instead?
    SPOILER
  6. 00:33:178 (3,4) - The jump idea here is nice already - perhaps use something continuous like this?
    SPOILER
    ...or with the same slider, you can make (4) stacked to the previous (2) like this:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:39:778 (1,2,3) - Arrange somehow so that (2) will be stacked to previous 00:38:128 (4)'s end? Not a major issue though (:
  8. 00:40:378 (4) - Rather than facing this downward I prefer to copy-pasting (5)'s shape here and then flip it like this, plays good imo because after (5) your flow goes to the right:
    SPOILER
  9. 00:47:128 (2) - I prefer to slightly curve this to the left instead to make it point at (3)'s start somehow, your call though...
  10. 00:50:578 (1) - I experimented around here and got this shape, much better than the current overlap imo xD
    SPOILER
  11. 01:00:478 (4) - Rotate it ~20° so it'll do a fan pattern with (6) perhaps?
  12. 01:01:978 (4,5) - Another suggestion here, create a circle-ish formation from these two? (a test circle in the middle which you can delete afterwards may help here, but an approximate circle would do good already)
    SPOILER
  13. 01:05:278 (4) - Would be best if you copy-pasted 01:05:578 (5)'s shape here imo, your call though~
  14. 01:06:778 (4,5) - Split the rhythm here to 1/2 slider + circle + 1/2 slider? I hear a triple starting from 01:06:928 o.o
  15. 01:17:878 (5,2) - Would be good imo if you can stack these two ((5)'s end with (2)) to let the circular pattern here make more sense, again up to you :3
  16. 01:21:178 (3,4,5,6) - Umm, a back-and-forth pattern like this plays more fun here imo (especially with the current AR9 - you can also simply stack (4) and (6) to (2)'s end without manual stacking like this for variation though)
    SPOILER
  17. 01:23:278 (3,4,5) - Another suggestion, use a 120° rotation here?
    SPOILER
  18. 01:26:578 (1) - Umm, rather than a narrow curve like this I prefer to encircle (4) from the outside here... Up to you though~
  19. 01:28:678 (6,4,5) - Much better if these three can achieve a symmetry here so that the (4,5) will somewhat encircle (6) xD
  20. 01:34:828 (6) - Use default normal-hitfinish here? (there's a cymbal from the song)
  21. 01:46:078 (2) - Err, why not add a slight curve to the left as well so that (1,2) will form a fan o.o - Not a big issue though
  22. 01:52:978 (1) - Default soft-hitfinish is very fitting on slider's repeat here (due to that crashing cymbals :3)
  23. 01:55:378 (1) - Just my thoughts here, I'd make the last combo red instead of purple to make it more intense
[Hard]

  1. 00:00:778 (2,2,...) - Err, use inherit sections to make the slider's tick quieter on the opening part's sliders (as you used on that single slider on Insane)?
  2. 00:09:778 (1,2,3) - Is the distance inconsistency here intentional? (also it's better to place (3) in ~y:219 imo (same y-axis as (1)'s end) to create a neat symmetry here)
  3. 00:11:578 (3) - The clap on slider's start here - is this intentional? (should be on (4)'s start though)
  4. 00:16:078 (2) - CTRL+G this here for a circular movement perhaps? Also
  5. 00:16:378 (3) - I experimented further here with rotate tool on (2), this carries a better flow to your next (1) imo:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:19:378 (1) - Whistle + Finish on slider's start here? (you used Finish on insane here at least xD)
  7. 00:24:778 (3,1,2) - Here, how about making the (3) as the straight slider instead and (1,2) as the slightly curved sliders? The purple (2,3) looks cute this way imo (:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:36:028 (x) - Add note here to continue the rhythm? (feels a bit weird having this part blank)
  9. 00:42:178 (1) - I'd start this on ~x:205 y:261 so that (5,6,7,1) forms a neat diamond and clusters less, not a major issue though
  10. 00:46:228 (2) - Err, I don't really get the clap on slider's end here personally o.o (I think if you want clap to emphasize that vocals (as you did on (1)'s end), you can try adding it on 00:46:828 (4) instead)
  11. 00:49:978 (3,4,1) - This formation looks nice imo (especially (1) with (3)'s flow) but (4,1) might be too harsh orz... Your call though :3
    SPOILER
  12. 00:55:378 (1) - I'd aim for perfect encircle with (3)'s repeat instead here:
    182,120,55378,6,0,B|188:156|188:156|153:218|188:268,1,148,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  13. 00:55:828 (2) - ...and then readjust this by putting this on ~x:262 y:315 - (1,2,3,4) will create a neat pentagon-ish shape this way (:
  14. 01:06:928 (x) - To fulfill the drums use a repeating 1/4 slider here perhaps? Just a suggestion though (current (4,5,6) pattern is solid already)
  15. 01:15:778 (1) - Add clap on slider's repeat and end as well (to follow the background drums)? You might add clap on the following (2) as well if you want though o.o
  16. 01:22:978 (1,2,3,4) - Err, the circular flow is a bit weird here imo... idk, something simpler works better imo:
    SPOILER
  17. 01:29:578 (3) - Umm, I much prefer to face this slider upward instead of downward though to avoid clusters with the next red combos (the arc idea here is really nice though xD)
  18. 01:36:478 (2,3) - I think it's better if you face (2) to the left instead of upward, for example like this: (I added a slight curve though)
    SPOILER
  19. 01:42:477 (2,4) - These two isn't an identical slider, is this intentional?
  20. 01:55:378 (1) - Same as Insane - use red combo color here?
[Normal]

-> On the chorus, every 01:17:878 (2), 01:19:078 (4), 01:20:278 (2) and other parts like this (the circle before your 3/2 slider) would be best if added clap imo (as there's background claps from the drums as well xD)

  1. 00:00:778 (2) - Same as other diffs here, in the opening parts the sliderticks sound too loud imo - make it quieter using inherit sections?
  2. 00:06:778 (3) - I'd leave this without any hitsound to emphasize the previous clap on (2)'s end, up to you though~
  3. 00:13:378 (3) - Minor stuff, put the midpoint at ~x:231 y:319 to encircle (1) better? (won't hurt to do imo because the flow to your next (1) is unaffected)
  4. 00:19:378 (1) - Whistle + Finish here? (same reason as Hard)
  5. 00:24:178 (1,2,3) - Actually you can turn off dist. snap here for a while and put these three in a straight line like this (it's not fully following the spacing but it's still intuitive though)
    SPOILER
  6. 00:36:178 (1,2) - Add a slight curve downward on (1) here and upward on (2) for accent? Just a suggestion though
  7. 00:48:178 (1,2,3) - Umm, is (1,2) meant to be a fan? The flow is a bit weird here imo, perhaps try something like this:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:50:578 (5) - New combo here? (you haven't used combos up to 6 until this point)
  9. 00:55:378 (3) - If you did above suggestion you might want as well to new combo this...
  10. 01:03:778 (3) - Just a suggestion here, perhaps use (1)'s flipped shape here instead?
    SPOILER
  11. 01:04:978 (4,5) - Err, perhaps consider using this kind of blanket here:
    SPOILER
  12. 01:09:778 (1) - Move the whistle on this slider's start to 01:08:578 (2)'s end instead? (due to the vocals :3)
  13. 01:12:178 (1) - Same as above here~
  14. 01:31:378 (1) - Umm, I much prefer to curve this slider upward instead (to get a wave effect with (2)) but it's up to you
  15. 01:34:978 (2) - Err, if you're aiming symmetry on (2,3,1) here altering (2)'s shape to this might give a better effect:
    SPOILER
  16. 01:49:378 (3) - I'd curve this downward (to get a contrary effect with (1)) instead, your call though (:
Interesting mapset o.o

(yes, I was only looking for a m4m at first however feel free to contact me back after your fixes though - posted my map in your queue btw :3)
wantuole
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wantuole

Niva wrote:

Hi wantuole~ Trying m4m from your queue here xD

[General]

-> Err, is 'normal-sliderslide - ò¢û{.wav' used? I can't find its usage (even in the Storyboard Sound Samples) o.o =w= delete now
-> I'd like to recolor the title text for this map, tell me if you're interested though

[Insane]

  1. 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to make a sharper inward angle here instead on this arc perhaps? ok used
    SPOILER
    456,40,7978,1,2,2:0:0:0:
    425,76,8128,1,0,2:0:0:0:
    419,123,8278,1,2,2:0:0:0:
    440,165,8428,1,0,2:0:0:0:
    481,189,8578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:13:078 (1,2) - Suggestion, make (1,1,2) in a straight line like this perhaps? It's tidier here but I can't figure out how to adjust the next part though...a few minor changes, not use you idea
    SPOILER
  3. 00:15:553 (1,2,3,4) - Another pattern suggestion here, I liked how this has circular movement around it personally though~a few minor changes~
    SPOILER
  4. 00:25:378 (1,2,3,4,5) - Err, if you're aiming for a pentagon here try this perhaps? Your current one definitely can be tidied up though xD XD
    SPOILER
    159,230,25378,6,0,L|64:224,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    244,206,25678,2,0,P|292:190|339:212,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    160,319,25978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    285,276,26128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    240,344,26278,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  5. 00:29:278 (2) - Face this to the opposite direction (upward) instead? good idea,use blanket with 00:28:228 (3)
    SPOILER
  6. 00:33:178 (3,4) - The jump idea here is nice already - perhaps use something continuous like this? use second idea~
    SPOILER
    ...or with the same slider, you can make (4) stacked to the previous (2) like this:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:39:778 (1,2,3) - Arrange somehow so that (2) will be stacked to previous 00:38:128 (4)'s end? Not a major issue though (: (: ok
  8. 00:40:378 (4) - Rather than facing this downward I prefer to copy-pasting (5)'s shape here and then flip it like this, plays good imo because after (5) your flow goes to the right: :oops: ok
    SPOILER
  9. 00:47:128 (2) - I prefer to slightly curve this to the left instead to make it point at (3)'s start somehow, your call though...ok
  10. 00:50:578 (1) - I experimented around here and got this shape, much better than the current overlap imo xDXD
    SPOILER
  11. 01:00:478 (4) - Rotate it ~20° so it'll do a fan pattern with (6) perhaps?Rotate it -20°~
  12. 01:01:978 (4,5) - Another suggestion here, create a circle-ish formation from these two? (a test circle in the middle which you can delete afterwards may help here, but an approximate circle would do good already) remap this place~
    SPOILER
  13. 01:05:278 (4) - Would be best if you copy-pasted 01:05:578 (5)'s shape here imo, your call though~^ little remap
  14. 01:06:778 (4,5) - Split the rhythm here to 1/2 slider + circle + 1/2 slider? I hear a triple starting from 01:06:928 o.ok
  15. 01:17:878 (5,2) - Would be good imo if you can stack these two ((5)'s end with (2)) to let the circular pattern here make more sense, again up to you :3:3 ok
  16. 01:21:178 (3,4,5,6) - Umm, a back-and-forth pattern like this plays more fun here imo (especially with the current AR9 - you can also simply stack (4) and (6) to (2)'s end without manual stacking like this for variation though)interesting flow~ used
    SPOILER
  17. 01:23:278 (3,4,5) - Another suggestion, use a 120° rotation here?ok
    SPOILER
  18. 01:26:578 (1) - Umm, rather than a narrow curve like this I prefer to encircle (4) from the outside here... Up to you though~tryed
  19. 01:28:678 (6,4,5) - Much better if these three can achieve a symmetry here so that the (4,5) will somewhat encircle (6) xD XD
  20. 01:34:828 (6) - Use default normal-hitfinish here? (there's a cymbal from the song)k
  21. 01:46:078 (2) - Err, why not add a slight curve to the left as well so that (1,2) will form a fan o.o - Not a big issue though
  22. 01:52:978 (1) - Default soft-hitfinish is very fitting on slider's repeat here (due to that crashing cymbals :3)k
  23. 01:55:378 (1) - Just my thoughts here, I'd make the last combo red instead of purple to make it more intensek
[Hard]

  1. 00:00:778 (2,2,...) - Err, use inherit sections to make the slider's tick quieter on the opening part's sliders (as you used on that single slider on Insane)?ok
  2. 00:09:778 (1,2,3) - Is the distance inconsistency here intentional? (also it's better to place (3) in ~y:219 imo (same y-axis as (1)'s end) to create a neat symmetry here) k
  3. 00:11:578 (3) - The clap on slider's start here - is this intentional? (should be on (4)'s start though)fixed
  4. 00:16:078 (2) - CTRL+G this here for a circular movement perhaps? Alsook
  5. 00:16:378 (3) - I experimented further here with rotate tool on (2), this carries a better flow to your next (1) imo:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:19:378 (1) - Whistle + Finish on slider's start here? (you used Finish on insane here at least xD) added XD
  7. 00:24:778 (3,1,2) - Here, how about making the (3) as the straight slider instead and (1,2) as the slightly curved sliders? The purple (2,3) looks cute this way imo (: ok
    SPOILER
  8. 00:36:028 (x) - Add note here to continue the rhythm? (feels a bit weird having this part blank) new slider add 00:35:728~00:35:878
  9. 00:42:178 (1) - I'd start this on ~x:205 y:261 so that (5,6,7,1) forms a neat diamond and clusters less, not a major issue thoughuse other idea, half of six star
  10. 00:46:228 (2) - Err, I don't really get the clap on slider's end here personally o.o (I think if you want clap to emphasize that vocals (as you did on (1)'s end), you can try adding it on 00:46:828 (4) instead) used
  11. 00:49:978 (3,4,1) - This formation looks nice imo (especially (1) with (3)'s flow) but (4,1) might be too harsh orz... Your call though :3ok
    SPOILER
  12. 00:55:378 (1) - I'd aim for perfect encircle with (3)'s repeat instead here:ok
    182,120,55378,6,0,B|188:156|188:156|153:218|188:268,1,148,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  13. 00:55:828 (2) - ...and then readjust this by putting this on ~x:262 y:315 - (1,2,3,4) will create a neat pentagon-ish shape this way (:(: ok
  14. 01:06:928 (x) - To fulfill the drums use a repeating 1/4 slider here perhaps? Just a suggestion though (current (4,5,6) pattern is solid already)
  15. 01:15:778 (1) - Add clap on slider's repeat and end as well (to follow the background drums)? You might add clap on the following (2) as well if you want though o.o ok
  16. 01:22:978 (1,2,3,4) - Err, the circular flow is a bit weird here imo... idk, something simpler works better imo:~
    SPOILER
  17. 01:29:578 (3) - Umm, I much prefer to face this slider upward instead of downward though to avoid clusters with the next red combos (the arc idea here is really nice though xD) difficult to change this place.:(
  18. 01:36:478 (2,3) - I think it's better if you face (2) to the left instead of upward, for example like this: (I added a slight curve though)ok~
    SPOILER
  19. 01:42:477 (2,4) - These two isn't an identical slider, is this intentional? my careless
  20. 01:55:378 (1) - Same as Insane - use red combo color here? ok
[Normal]

-> On the chorus, every 01:17:878 (2), 01:19:078 (4), 01:20:278 (2) and other parts like this (the circle before your 3/2 slider) would be best if added clap imo (as there's background claps from the drums as well xD) ok

  1. 00:00:778 (2) - Same as other diffs here, in the opening parts the sliderticks sound too loud imo - make it quieter using inherit sections?ok
  2. 00:06:778 (3) - I'd leave this without any hitsound to emphasize the previous clap on (2)'s end, up to you though~ added
  3. 00:13:378 (3) - Minor stuff, put the midpoint at ~x:231 y:319 to encircle (1) better? (won't hurt to do imo because the flow to your next (1) is unaffected)ok
  4. 00:19:378 (1) - Whistle + Finish here? (same reason as Hard) ok
  5. 00:24:178 (1,2,3) - Actually you can turn off dist. snap here for a while and put these three in a straight line like this (it's not fully following the spacing but it's still intuitive though) ok
    SPOILER
  6. 00:36:178 (1,2) - Add a slight curve downward on (1) here and upward on (2) for accent? Just a suggestion though ok
  7. 00:48:178 (1,2,3) - Umm, is (1,2) meant to be a fan? The flow is a bit weird here imo, perhaps try something like this:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:50:578 (5) - New combo here? (you haven't used combos up to 6 until this point) ok
  9. 00:55:378 (3) - If you did above suggestion you might want as well to new combo this...let me try
  10. 01:03:778 (3) - Just a suggestion here, perhaps use (1)'s flipped shape here instead? ok
    SPOILER
  11. 01:04:978 (4,5) - Err, perhaps consider using this kind of blanket here:ok
    SPOILER
  12. 01:09:778 (1) - Move the whistle on this slider's start to 01:08:578 (2)'s end instead? (due to the vocals :3)ok
  13. 01:12:178 (1) - Same as above here~ ok
  14. 01:31:378 (1) - Umm, I much prefer to curve this slider upward instead (to get a wave effect with (2)) but it's up to you keep it
  15. 01:34:978 (2) - Err, if you're aiming symmetry on (2,3,1) here altering (2)'s shape to this might give a better effect:used
    SPOILER
  16. 01:49:378 (3) - I'd curve this downward (to get a contrary effect with (1)) instead, your call though (: ok~
Interesting mapset o.o

(yes, I was only looking for a m4m at first however feel free to contact me back after your fixes though - posted my map in your queue btw :3)
thx niva~
very helpful Mod :D
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wantuole
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:D thx fanzheng009 irc suggestion

edit:update

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Rechecked, only one another small suggestion though : Consider using Slider Tick Rate 1 only on Normal diff perhaps? (due to the usage of many 2/1 sliders on this diff tick rate 1 fits better here than 2 somehow)

Also if you want me to recolor the title text just tell me the color you want :3

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EDIT : Good luck with this mapset, I've recolored the title text also (:

Bubbled ~
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wantuole
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Niva wrote:

Rechecked, only one another small suggestion though : Consider using Slider Tick Rate 1 only on Normal diff perhaps? (due to the usage of many 2/1 sliders on this diff tick rate 1 fits better here than 2 somehow)

Also if you want me to recolor the title text just tell me the color you want :3
fixed ~
change the title text color to red and orange plz :>
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