This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月27日 at 0:19:18

Artist: Innocent Key
Title: Lunatic Red Eyes
Source: Touhou
Tags: reisen udongein inaba Invisible Full Moon ZUN Yu Mizogushi Ciel rouran c75
BPM: 180
Filesize: 6942kb
Play Time: 04:32
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.76 stars, 215 notes)
2. Hard (4.83 stars, 601 notes)
3. Lunatic (5 stars, 932 notes)
4. Normal (3.98 stars, 325 notes)

Download: Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes
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status: mod req / BAT req
I maybe accept M4M.
BUT, PLEASE TELL ME YOUR MAP FIRST!
then, I choose accepting M4M or not.

Innocent Key - Lunatic Red Eyes from Touhou
Easy - by me
Normal - by me
Hard - by me
Lunatic - by me

For M4M

GENERAL:

Your BG is not the recommended size of 1024x768, think about resizing it.
As soon as you got no Storyboard, you can deactivate the Letterboxes in breaks.

Easy

00:56:166 - to 00:58:499 - There are definitly missing some Notes in here.
01:27:166 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest to make two Sliders: One out of 2/3, one out of 4/5.
01:37:832 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:41:833 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:52:499 (2,3,4,5) - ^
03:40:499 (2,3,4,5) - ^
03:51:165 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:40:832 (3) - Shorten this one to 01:41:832 - and Move 01:42:499 (4) - to 01:42:166 -.
01:52:832 (1) - Maybe repeat this one?
02:10:832 - to 02:12:832 - There are definitly missing some Notes in here, too.
02:55:499 (3) - You should do this analog to 01:40:832 - .
03:54:166 (3) - ^
04:06:166 (1) - You could put another one after this.
04:36:666 - I'd suggest a Green Line here with audio change to 5%, sounds better imo.

Normal

00:43:832 (1,2,3,4) - Not in Normal please.
00:54:499 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:09:165 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:40:832 (3) - shorten this to 01:41:832 - and add Notes at 01:42:166 - and 01:42:499 - , fits better for me.
03:07:499 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should go along with the "Finish - Sounds" in the song.
03:16:166 (3,4) - Make a Slider like 03:14:832 (5) -.
04:27:499 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Again I suggest you to follow the Finish Sounds of the song.

Hard

00:38:499 (1,2) - I'd suggest you to lower distance between these two, it's C0nfusing with those 00:39:332 (3,4) -.
01:00:166 (5,6) - Feels strange to play according to the Lyrics which I think you are depending on.
01:04:166 (1,2,3,4) - Pls remove Doubletts from Hard diff, they are too hard to play, Insane only imo.
01:14:832 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:18:832 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:29:499 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:21:832 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I suggest to keep one distance between those.
04:27:499 (1,2) - Higher distance here.
04:30:166 (1,2) - ^

Lunatic

AR -1 Because of 180 BPM it fits better.

00:46:999 (2,1) - I'd higher the distance here.
01:22:666 (9,10,11) - Lower distance here.
01:23:832 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do it like this e. g. :01:25:832 (11) - NC, 01:26:166 (1) - delete NC.
01:30:832 (9) - NC,01:31:249 (1) - delete NC.
01:33:332 (10,11,12) - Lower distance here.
01:34:499 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Give it a pattern.
01:36:498 (11,12,13,14,1) - NC for 11, No NC for 1.
01:41:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a Curve or sth, do not just stack it.
02:37:332 (9,10,11) - Lower distance.
02:38:499 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you wanna keep it, do it, but it is not that nice to play and i think lunatic needs more patterns.
02:49:166 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:40:499 (11) - NC, no NC for 02:40:832 (1) -.
02:45:498 (9) - NC, no NC for 02:45:998 (1) -.
02:47:998 (9,10,11) - Lower distance.
02:51:166 (11) - NC, no NC for 02:51:498 (1) -.
02:56:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a Curve... just seems to be better for me.
03:30:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1) - DAAAAAT STREAM!!!!
03:35:999 (9,10,11) - Lower distance here.
03:39:166 (13) - NC, no NC for 03:39:499 (1) -.
03:44:166 (9) - NC, no NC for 03:44:665 (1) -.
03:46:666 (9,10,11) - Lower distance.
03:49:833 (13) - NC, no NC for 03:50:165 (1) -.
03:57:332 (9) - Difficult to see, try to find other place.
03:57:999 (12) - ^
04:07:999 (9) - ^
04:08:666 (12) - ^
04:36:332 (4) - NC?


Good luck in mapping, nice Lunatic diff This can get ranked I am sure!

asaink-san　こんにちは

曲が気に入ったのでmod させてください

[General]

1. 下記をタグに入れてはいかがでしょう？
   　　Invisible Full Moon
2. Inherited-points でFinishの音を頻繁に調整しているようですが、Finishをcustom-hitsoundにしてしまった方が今後譜面をmodifyする際楽だと思います

[Easy]

1. 00:16:832~00:27:499- Kiai-Timeはなくていいと思います(All-diff 共通)
2. 00:56:166~00:58:499- 何かnoteを入れた方がいいです

[Normal]

1. AIM-Modを見るとずれてるnoteが多いので見直してみてください
2. 00:20:166 (2) - 角ばらせなくて良いと思います
3. 00:42:166 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - not stack
4. 00:52:833 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
5. 00:43:832 (1,2,3,4) - stack
6. 00:54:499 (1,2,3,4) - ^
7. 01:19:499- add note
8. 01:39:498 (1,2,3) - 01:40:832 (3) - が01:39:499 (1,2) - と重ならない配置が良いです
9. 03:42:832 (2,3) - 重ならない配置が良いです
10. 03:53:498 (2,3) - ^
11. 04:35:832 (5) - 04:35:999へ移動

[Hard]

1. Normalと同じでずれてるnoteが多いので見直してください
2. DistanceSpacingはもう少し統一してjumpとメリハリをつけた方が良いと思いました
3. 00:45:999 (2,2) - 重ならないように配置
4. 02:40:166 (9,1) - ^
5. 02:50:832 (9,1) - ^
6. 03:16:999 (5,6,7) - ^
7. 04:34:832 (7,1) - ^

１番と２番で配置が同じ印象だったので、個人的にはもう少し違う方が楽しいです

簡単ですみません。がんばってください。

～Good Luck～

Thank you, InC0nceNtrateD!done-

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

For M4M

GENERAL:

Your BG is not the recommended size of 1024x768, think about resizing it.fixed
As soon as you got no Storyboard, you can deactivate the Letterboxes in breaks.fixed

Easy

00:56:166 - to 00:58:499 - There are definitly missing some Notes in here.fixed　　add break time
01:27:166 (2,3,4,5) - I suggest to make two Sliders: One out of 2/3, one out of 4/5.fixed
01:37:832 (2,3,4,5) - ^fixed
02:41:833 (2,3,4,5) - ^fixed
02:52:499 (2,3,4,5) - ^fixed
03:40:499 (2,3,4,5) - ^fixed
03:51:165 (2,3,4,5) - ^fixed
01:40:832 (3) - Shorten this one to 01:41:832 - and Move 01:42:499 (4) - to 01:42:166 -.hold　　Vocal's end is 01:42:166 and you can hear cymbal sound at 01:42:499.so I think this rhythm is good.
01:52:832 (1) - Maybe repeat this one?hold　　Yes, repeat is good.but, if I do, circle is placed soon after the second spinner's end.It isn't good for Easy.---(1)
02:10:832 - to 02:12:832 - There are definitly missing some Notes in here, too.fixed　　add break time
02:55:499 (3) - You should do this analog to 01:40:832 - .hold　　There is a difference in music between 01:40:832 (3,4) and 02:55:499 (3).and, I think this rhythm match music in here.---(2)
03:54:166 (3) - ^ hold　　The reason is same as (2).
04:06:166 (1) - You could put another one after this.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
04:36:666 - I'd suggest a Green Line here with audio change to 5%, sounds better imo.hold　　You can hear cymbal sound at 04:36:666.so I want to use "finish" in here.

Normal

00:43:832 (1,2,3,4) - Not in Normal please.fxed
00:54:499 (1,2,3,4) - ^fxed
02:09:165 (1,2,3,4) - ^fxed
01:40:832 (3) - shorten this to 01:41:832 - and add Notes at 01:42:166 - and 01:42:499 - , fits better for me.hold　　Vocal's end is 01:42:166 and you can hear cymbal sound at 01:42:499.so I think this rhythm is good.
03:07:499 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should go along with the "Finish - Sounds" in the song.hold　　I think that rhythm is hard to play in Normal.---(1)
03:16:166 (3,4) - Make a Slider like 03:14:832 (5) -.fixed
04:27:499 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Again I suggest you to follow the Finish Sounds of the song.hold　　The reason is same as (1).

Hard

00:38:499 (1,2) - I'd suggest you to lower distance between these two, it's C0nfusing with those 00:39:332 (3,4) -.fixed
01:00:166 (5,6) - Feels strange to play according to the Lyrics which I think you are depending on.hold　　sorry, but I don't feel so.
01:04:166 (1,2,3,4) - Pls remove Doubletts from Hard diff, they are too hard to play, Insane only imo.fixed
01:14:832 (1,2,3,4) - ^fixed
02:18:832 (1,2,3,4) - ^fixed
02:29:499 (1,2,3,4) - ^fixed
01:21:832 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I suggest to keep one distance between those.fixed
04:27:499 (1,2) - Higher distance here.hold　　DS is a constant here.
04:30:166 (1,2) - ^hold　　DS is a constant here.

Lunatic

AR -1 Because of 180 BPM it fits better.hold　　nowadays, AR9 is used to Insane of BPM 180.and, AR9 fits this map I think.

00:46:999 (2,1) - I'd higher the distance here.hold　　It is a little hard, no jump is better imo.
01:22:666 (9,10,11) - Lower distance here.hold　　sorry, but I want to use this pattern.---(1)
01:23:832 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do it like this e. g. :hold　　The reason is same as (1).

Click Me

01:25:832 (11) - NC, 01:26:166 (1) - delete NC.fixed
01:30:832 (9) - NC,01:31:249 (1) - delete NC.fixed
01:33:332 (10,11,12) - Lower distance here.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
01:34:499 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Give it a pattern.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
01:36:498 (11,12,13,14,1) - NC for 11, No NC for 1.fixed
01:41:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a Curve or sth, do not just stack it.hold　　My mapping style is "stop & go".The previous(01:39:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) is big circle flow.so, I want to stack here.---(2)
02:37:332 (9,10,11) - Lower distance.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
02:38:499 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - If you wanna keep it, do it, but it is not that nice to play and i think lunatic needs more patterns.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
02:49:166 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^hold　　The reason is same as (1).
02:40:499 (11) - NC, no NC for 02:40:832 (1) -.fixed
02:45:498 (9) - NC, no NC for 02:45:998 (1) -.fixed
02:47:998 (9,10,11) - Lower distance.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
02:51:166 (11) - NC, no NC for 02:51:498 (1) -.fixed
02:56:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make a Curve... just seems to be better for me.hold　　The reason is same as (2).
03:30:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1) - DAAAAAT STREAM!!!!yeah!!
03:35:999 (9,10,11) - Lower distance here.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
03:39:166 (13) - NC, no NC for 03:39:499 (1) -.fixed
03:44:166 (9) - NC, no NC for 03:44:665 (1) -.fixed
03:46:666 (9,10,11) - Lower distance.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
03:49:833 (13) - NC, no NC for 03:50:165 (1) -.fixed
03:57:332 (9) - Difficult to see, try to find other place.fixed
03:57:999 (12) - ^fixed
04:07:999 (9) - ^fixed
04:08:666 (12) - ^fixed
04:36:332 (4) - NC?fixed
sorry for many no change...but, I want to keep my mapping style.

Good luck in mapping, nice Lunatic diff This can get ranked I am sure!Thanks!

Thank you, RandomEffect!done-

RandomEffect wrote:

asaink-san　こんにちは

曲が気に入ったのでmod させてくださいありがとうございます！

[General]

1. 下記をタグに入れてはいかがでしょう？fixed
   　　Invisible Full Moon
2. Inherited-points でFinishの音を頻繁に調整しているようですが、Finishをcustom-hitsoundにしてしまった方が今後譜面をmodifyする際楽だと思いますhold　　提案ありがとうございます。しかし、そうするとカスタムヒットサンドを使用しているプレイヤーにはfinishだけ別の音になってしまい、それはあまり好ましくないと自分は思います。この音にこだわっているわけではなく、あくまで他のヒットサウンドとのバランスで調整しているだけなのでこのままにします。

[Easy]

1. 00:16:832~00:27:499- Kiai-Timeはなくていいと思います(All-diff 共通)hold　　ここは全難易度でそれぞれ少し難しくしてあるつもりなのでkiai timeにしてあります。
2. 00:56:166~00:58:499- 何かnoteを入れた方がいいですfixed　　break timeを追加しました

[Normal]

1. AIM-Modを見るとずれてるnoteが多いので見直してみてくださいfixed　　これはひどいミスですね…原因がよく分からないのですが、以後気を付けます。
2. 00:20:166 (2) - 角ばらせなくて良いと思いますfixed
3. 00:42:166 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - not stackhold　　Normalでは白線-赤線-白線の３連単発は少し難しいと思うのでここはstackさせています。
4. 00:52:833 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^hold　　同上です
5. 00:43:832 (1,2,3,4) - stackfixed　　前の方のmodでここは音取りを変えました。
6. 00:54:499 (1,2,3,4) - ^fixed　　同上です
7. 01:19:499- add notefixed
8. 01:39:498 (1,2,3) - 01:40:832 (3) - が01:39:499 (1,2) - と重ならない配置が良いですhold　　01:40:832 (3)が表示されるときには既に前のサークルは消えているので今の配置で問題ないと思います。
9. 03:42:832 (2,3) - 重ならない配置が良いですhold　　サークルが少し接触しているだけでプレイに支障が出るほど見にくくはないと思うのでこのままで
10. 03:53:498 (2,3) - ^fixed　　こっちは少し重なりが広かったので直しました。
11. 04:35:832 (5) - 04:35:999へ移動fixed

[Hard]

1. Normalと同じでずれてるnoteが多いので見直してくださいfixed
2. DistanceSpacingはもう少し統一してjumpとメリハリをつけた方が良いと思いましたご意見ありがとうございます。んー…ジャンプはあくまで感覚的なもので明確な定義がないうえ、また、これはマッピングスタイルにもかかわることですので、こちらのmodを反映するのは少し難しそうです…。
3. 00:45:999 (2,2) - 重ならないように配置hold　　00:46:499 (2)が表示されるときには既に前のサークルは消えているので今の配置で問題ないと思います。
4. 02:40:166 (9,1) - ^fixed　　前の方のmodでここは配置を変えました。
5. 02:50:832 (9,1) - ^fixed　　前の方のmodでここは配置を変えました。
6. 03:16:999 (5,6,7) - ^fixed
7. 04:34:832 (7,1) - ^hold　　キックスライダーの後にスライダーが連続しているので、この配置でないとプレイが難しいと思います。

１番と２番で配置が同じ印象だったので、個人的にはもう少し違う方が楽しいです自分のマッピングスタイル・好きな譜面が、「同じフレーズのところは同じ音取り・配置をしている譜面」なので、つまらないと感じる方もいらっしゃると思います。もちろん、できるだけ多くの方が楽しいと思う譜面を作りたいとは思いますが、好みの問題なので難しいですね。

簡単ですみません。がんばってください。

～Good Luck～

Hello, I'm DingGGu From your M4M

Thank you, DingGGu!done-

DingGGu wrote:

Hello, I'm DingGGu From your M4M

[General]

1. Why not use New Combo? you have to use NC more!hmm...I think NC is enough.
2. I think you have to see others beatmap first but, you make very well. Good!thanks
3. i mod only Lunatic diffs sorry

[Lunatic]

1. Slider Velocity is very fast.yes, but I think it fits the song.
2. 00:40:832 (2) - do not use like this long sliders. if you want, make some style! (like "S")
3. 00:57:999 (3) - ^
4. 01:05:999 (10) - ^
5. 01:07:332 (5) -
6. 01:16:666 (10) - ^
7. 01:18:166 (3) - ^ and others looooooooong slidersreally sorry, but all no change... This depends on slider velocity, and these are not so long.
   
8. 01:04:166 (1,2) - How about like this:hold　　I want to keep this rhythm.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:14:832 (1,2) - ^hold　　I want to keep this rhythm.

my m4m finally xD sorry for long wait D:

g-luck

Thank you, zorefire!done-

zorefire wrote:

my m4m finally xD sorry for long wait D:no problem-

[Easy]

1. a little to low 00:23:499 (2)fixed
2. 00:44:832 (2) x:444 y:68fixed
3. 00:45:832 don't leave that empty it feels weird in my opinionhold　　I can't find the rhythm for Easy...but many break times need for Easy, so I think this is good.---(1)
4. 00:56:666 add something here (yes/no) your choice.hold　　The reason is same as (1).
5. 00:59:499 (3) ? just my opninionfixed
6. 01:01:832 (1,2) move up just a tiny bit gunu fall off the screen xD 01:03:832 (3) and that to woopsfixed
7. 01:15:499 (1) going a little off screenfixed
8. 01:23:499 (1,2) a little off screenfixed
9. might wanna move this a little bit up 01:27:832 (3) and move the previous note alsofixed
10. 01:52:832 (1) feels like you got bored so you just put anything maybe a some slow notes? here to 01:58:166hold　　This is a common part with other difficulty.and, if spinner is placed twice, circle is placed soon after the second spinner's end.It isn't good for Easy.---(2)
11. 02:38:166 (1,2) little off screen againfixed
12. 04:06:166 (1) boredom again?hold　　The reason is same as (2).
    [Normal]
13. I might let that stay there I'm thinking about it 00:48:832 (8)so, what should I do?
14. move a little bit up 01:12:499 (2)fixed
15. little bit to the right little bit up 01:22:832 (6)fixed
16. again with this xD01:52:832 (1) this should rarely happen unless a singer holds a note for a very long timehold　　This is a common part with other difficulty.and, if spinner is placed twice, circle is placed soon after the second spinner's end.It isn't good for Normal.---(1)
17. move back end up a little bit 02:04:832 (3)fixed
18. move front part up a little 02:35:832 (1)fixed
19. little to low dont you think? 02:42:166 (4)fixed
20. 02:48:166 (6) to low againfixed
21. slider if off screen 02:55:499 (3)fixed
22. 04:06:166 (1) ?hold　　The reason is same as (1).
    [Hard]
23. A little to insane ish? 00:23:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)fixed
24. 00:48:499 (5,6,7,8,9) reconsider?hold　　hmm...This is allowed at Hard, I think.

[Insane]
Still learning how to modd this as you can clearly see by my poor Hard modd xD sorry.

g-luckthanks!

hi m4m here~

[General]

1. Add to tags: ZUN Yu Mizogushi (the arranger) Ciel (singer) rouran (album name) and c75 (it released from comiket 75)
2. Use custom combo colors perhaps? current one is a bit boring for me orz.

[Easy]

1. 00:45:499 until 00:48:499 : why did you make them empty ;_;
   You can add spinner on 00:45:999 and end the spinner at 00:47:332 :3
2. 00:56:166 : same here, you can add spinner start from 00:56:666 and end at 00:57:999
3. 01:27:832 (3)- : 2nd slider point move 1grid down to make this slider similar with previous slider?
4. 02:11:332 : start spinner here and end at 02:12:666
5. 02:23:832 (3)- : add finish?
6. 03:16:832 (3)- : make the slider like this to make a better flow?
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:27:499 (7)- : NC here? combo is so long for Normal diff
2. 00:43:499 (9,1)- : NC should be at circle 9
3. 00:48:832 (8,1)- : NC should be at circle 8
4. 00:54:166 (9,1)- : ^ 9
5. 01:25:499 (6,8)- : I see you're using whistle here, so add whistle to these 2 circle to make whistle consistent? :3
6. 01:36:166 (6,8)- : ^
7. 02:08:832 (9,1)- : same nc issue as 00:43:499
8. 02:40:166 (6,8)- : same issue as 01:25:499
9. 02:50:832 (6,8)- : ^
10. 03:38:832 (6,8)- : ^
11. 03:49:499 (6,8)- : ^
12. 04:35:999 (5,1)- : NC should be at circle 5

[Hard]

1. 00:27:499 (11)- : NC here?
2. 00:46:499 (2)- : rearrange the slider like this? it'll make better shape i guess
   
   SPOILER

   

[Lunatic]
good diff, can't tell anything tough

Nice mapset, also you need to use some clap~
good luck~

Thank you, - t e n n y a -!done-

- t e n n y a - wrote:

hi m4m here~

[General]

1. Add to tags: ZUN Yu Mizogushi (the arranger) Ciel (singer) rouran (album name) and c75 (it released from comiket 75)fixed
2. Use custom combo colors perhaps? current one is a bit boring for me orz.fixed

[Easy]

1. 00:45:499 until 00:48:499 : why did you make them empty ;_;
   You can add spinner on 00:45:999 and end the spinner at 00:47:332 :3fixed　　start timing is 00:45:666
2. 00:56:166 : same here, you can add spinner start from 00:56:666 and end at 00:57:999fixed　　start timing is 00:56:332
3. 01:27:832 (3)- : 2nd slider point move 1grid down to make this slider similar with previous slider? fixed
4. 02:11:332 : start spinner here and end at 02:12:666fixed　　start timing is 02:10:999
5. 02:23:832 (3)- : add finish?fixed
6. 03:16:832 (3)- : make the slider like this to make a better flow?hold　　I think this flow is good.
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:27:499 (7)- : NC here? combo is so long for Normal difffixed
2. 00:43:499 (9,1)- : NC should be at circle 9fixed
3. 00:48:832 (8,1)- : NC should be at circle 8fixed
4. 00:54:166 (9,1)- : ^ 9fixed
5. 01:25:499 (6,8)- : I see you're using whistle here, so add whistle to these 2 circle to make whistle consistent? :3fixed
6. 01:36:166 (6,8)- : ^fixed
7. 02:08:832 (9,1)- : same nc issue as 00:43:499fixed
8. 02:40:166 (6,8)- : same issue as 01:25:499fixed
9. 02:50:832 (6,8)- : ^fixed
10. 03:38:832 (6,8)- : ^fixed
11. 03:49:499 (6,8)- : ^fixed
12. 04:35:999 (5,1)- : NC should be at circle 5fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:27:499 (11)- : NC here?fixed
2. 00:46:499 (2)- : rearrange the slider like this? it'll make better shape i guesshold　　There is a symmetry about 00:45:832 (1,2) and 00:46:332 (1,2).
   
   SPOILER

   

[Lunatic]
good diff, can't tell anything tough wow, Thanks!

Nice mapset, also you need to use some clap~
good luck~Thanks!

Hello, M4M from Modding Queue

Reisen <3

[General]

1. I don't like combo-colors, they are totally different from bg and they don't fit to Reisen. Try with two purple and two blue colors (a pale and a dark one each)

[Lunatic]

1. 00:16:499 (1,2,1) - Excessive jump for the beginning of the map, reduce spacing
2. 00:26:332 (5) - Add a repeat
3. 00:42:832 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not really accurate, I suggest a diagonal straight line
4. 00:44:166 (3) - Same inclination of 00:44:832 (6) - pls
5. 01:04:666 (3) - NC
6. 01:15:332 (3) - Same pattern, i you did above do it here too
7. 02:19:332 (3) - ^
8. 01:18:166 (3) - Bad imo, I suggest to add timingpoints to slow the slider velocity and fix this slider shape.
9. 02:32:832 (3) - ^
10. 01:31:832 (8) - NC
11. 02:46:499 (8) - ^
12. 03:11:332 (?) - Add a beat
13. 03:16:832 (8) - New combo

[Hard]

1. 00:38:999 (2) - Stack on (1)'s end?
2. 00:59:666 (3) - What about this?
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:06:166 (8) - Stack on 01:04:666 (2,3,4) -
4. 01:29:499 (3) - CTRL+G
5. 01:35:499 (5) - New combo because combo will be so loooong
6. 03:11:332 (?) - Add a beat

[Normal]

1. 00:20:166 (2) - Try to flip horizzontaly like this
   SPOILER

   
2. [00:52:166 (2) - Again, a better slider imo :3 (fix spacing then)
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:08:166 (6,7,8) - It sounds REALLY weird, do a 1/4 slider with repeat and a note instead.
4. 02:12:332 (3,4,5) - Better symmetry?

[Easy]

1. 00:56:666 - Make spinner starts here
2. 01:12:833 (2) - Symmetry with 01:11:499 (2) - ?
3. 02:18:499 (3) - Not perfectly stacked with 02:16:499 (1) -
4. 03:18:499 - Make spinner starts here, let noob players give a bit of recovery :3
   Pretty good diff.

Good luck ~

Thank you, Leader!done-

Leader wrote:

Hello, M4M from Modding Queue

Reisen <3

[General]

1. I don't like combo-colors, they are totally different from bg and they don't fit to Reisen. Try with two purple and two blue colors (a pale and a dark one each)fixed

[Lunatic]

1. 00:16:499 (1,2,1) - Excessive jump for the beginning of the map, reduce spacinghold　　I think that it is not problem at Lunatic difficulty.
2. 00:26:332 (5) - Add a repeatfixed
3. 00:42:832 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Not really accurate, I suggest a diagonal straight linehold　　This is on purpose.This placement is easy to play.
4. 00:44:166 (3) - Same inclination of 00:44:832 (6) - plshold　　^
5. 01:04:666 (3) - NCfixed
6. 01:15:332 (3) - Same pattern, i you did above do it here toofixed
7. 02:19:332 (3) - ^fixed
8. 01:18:166 (3) - Bad imo, I suggest to add timingpoints to slow the slider velocity and fix this slider shape.hold　　I don't want to use changing slider velocity in this map.
9. 02:32:832 (3) - ^hold　　^
10. 01:31:832 (8) - NCfixed
11. 02:46:499 (8) - ^fixed
12. 03:11:332 (?) - Add a beathold　　hmm...I don't think it is needed.
13. 03:16:832 (8) - New combofixed

[Hard]

1. 00:38:999 (2) - Stack on (1)'s end?fixed
2. 00:59:666 (3) - What about this?hold　　Now flow is good I think.
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:06:166 (8) - Stack on 01:04:666 (2,3,4) - fixed
4. 01:29:499 (3) - CTRL+Ghold　　I want to use this pattern.
5. 01:35:499 (5) - New combo because combo will be so loooongfixed
6. 03:11:332 (?) - Add a beathold　　hmm...I don't think it is needed.

[Normal]

1. 00:20:166 (2) - Try to flip horizzontaly like thisfixed
   SPOILER

   
2. [00:52:166 (2) - Again, a better slider imo :3 (fix spacing then)fixed
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:08:166 (6,7,8) - It sounds REALLY weird, do a 1/4 slider with repeat and a note instead.hold　　I think that 1/4 slider mustn't be placed in Normal.
4. 02:12:332 (3,4,5) - Better symmetry?hold　　Now placement is good I think.

[Easy]

1. 00:56:666 - Make spinner starts herehold　　I want to make spinner longer for new player.
2. 01:12:833 (2) - Symmetry with 01:11:499 (2) - ?fixed
3. 02:18:499 (3) - Not perfectly stacked with 02:16:499 (1) - fixed
4. 03:18:499 - Make spinner starts here, let noob players give a bit of recovery :3fixed
   Pretty good diff.Thanks!

Good luck ~Thanks

I'm sorry to get back at you this late, but I will also have to tell you I kinda hate this song. Since you requested it via my queue and did a valid mod on my map, I gave you a ticket instead which you can use at any time. I updated my queue with an explanation of the tickets and if you need more info you can contact me over IRC.

Ayu wrote:

I'm sorry to get back at you this late, but I will also have to tell you I kinda hate this song. Since you requested it via my queue and did a valid mod on my map, I gave you a ticket instead which you can use at any time. I updated my queue with an explanation of the tickets and if you need more info you can contact me over IRC.

OK, I understand. No problem.
Thank you for ticket!

From my queue.

[General]
select letterbox during breaks, because you haven't video or storyboard.

[Easy]
00:27:499 (4) - missed NC
00:45:832 (1) - IMO this rhytmsample more better -

00:56:332 (1) - ^
00:59:499 (3) - NC
01:08:832 (3) - NC
01:16:833 (2) - this pattern overlap 01:18:166(1); Move 01:18:166(1) in other place
01:19:499 (3) - make this pattern same as 01:40:832(3)
01:24:832 (3) - NC
01:42:499 (4) - NC !!!!
02:34:166 (3) - same as 01:19:499(3)
03:11:499 (5) - NC
04:32:832 (1) - Extend slider on 2 ticks (1/4 snapbeat)

[Normal]
00:26:832 (4,5,6) - change on slider please. Leave these techniques for high diffs. And this too hard for normal diff.
00:42:166 (3,4,5) - ^
00:42:832 (6,7,8) - ^
00:52:832 (3,4,5) - ^
00:53:499 (6,7,8) - ^
01:03:499 (3) - stack with 01:01:499(1)
01:18:166 (5) - make a mode beautiful slider pls
01:22:166 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:832(4,5,6)
01:25:499 (6,7,8) - ^
01:32:832 (3,4,5) - ^
01:36:166 (6,7,8) - ^
01:39:499 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) overlap (3)
02:07:499 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:832(4,5,6)
02:08:166 (6,7,8) - ^
02:22:166 (5) - NC
02:32:832 (5) - same as 01:18:166(5)
02:36:832 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:832(4,5,6)
02:40:166 (6,7,8) - ^
You have to fix all of these similar moments in map. This is the biggest drawback of this diff.

[Hard]
AR -1
Why you use distance spacing 2 here? Use 1!
and i recommend you - use regular spacing in this diff. Because your spacing is random
01:22:166 (7) - NC
01:32:832 (7) - ^
01:40:166 (3) - ctrl+G
02:36:832 (7) - ^
02:44:166 (3) - ^^
02:47:499 (7) - NC
03:35:499 (7) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:40:082 (7,9) - remove notes
00:42:832 (5) - NC
00:48:166 (5) - ^
01:22:999 (11) - overlap 01:23:332(1)
01:33:666 (10) - overlap 01:33:999(1)
02:45:999 (7) - make clear slider pls
02:46:832 (3) - ^
03:39:499 (5) - ^
04:00:166 (9) - NC

That's all. Sry for small mod. GL with rank

Thank you, Verlaren!done-

Verlaren wrote:

From my queue.

[General]
select letterbox during breaks, because you haven't video or storyboard.Because another modder said that it isn't need, I disabled it.hmm...which is correct?

[Easy]
00:27:499 (4) - missed NCfixed
00:45:832 (1) - IMO this rhytmsample more better - hold　　Yes, it rhythm is better.but if I do, circle is placed soon after the spinner's end.It isn't good for Easy.---(1)

00:56:332 (1) - ^hold　　The reason is same as (1).
00:59:499 (3) - NCfixed
01:08:832 (3) - NCfixed
01:16:833 (2) - this pattern overlap 01:18:166(1); Move 01:18:166(1) in other placehold　　I think that this placement isn't overlap.
01:19:499 (3) - make this pattern same as 01:40:832(3)hold　　I think that this rhythm is good.---(2)
01:24:832 (3) - NCfixed
01:42:499 (4) - NC !!!!fixed
02:34:166 (3) - same as 01:19:499(3)hold　　The reason is same as (2).
03:11:499 (5) - NCfixed
04:32:832 (1) - Extend slider on 2 ticks (1/4 snapbeat)hold　　This rhythm is good imo.

[Normal]
00:26:832 (4,5,6) - change on slider please. Leave these techniques for high diffs. And this too hard for normal diff.hold　　I'm really sorry, but I think that this isn't so hard.Thank you for mention. ---(1)
00:42:166 (3,4,5) - ^hold　　The reason is same as (1).
00:42:832 (6,7,8) - ^hold　　^
00:52:832 (3,4,5) - ^hold　　^
00:53:499 (6,7,8) - ^hold　　^
01:03:499 (3) - stack with 01:01:499(1)fixed
01:18:166 (5) - make a mode beautiful slider plshold　　This is a common part with other difficulty.---(2)
01:22:166 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:832(4,5,6)hold　　The reason is same as (1).
01:25:499 (6,7,8) - ^hold　　^
01:32:832 (3,4,5) - ^hold　　^
01:36:166 (6,7,8) - ^hold　　^
01:39:499 (1,2,3) - (1) and (2) overlap (3)hold　　When 3 appear, 1 and 2 are already disappeared.so this is fine imo.
02:07:499 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:832(4,5,6)hold　　The reason is same as (1).
02:08:166 (6,7,8) - ^hold　　^
02:22:166 (5) - NCfixed
02:32:832 (5) - same as 01:18:166(5)hold　　The reason is same as (2).
02:36:832 (3,4,5) - same as 00:26:832(4,5,6)hold　　The reason is same as (1).
02:40:166 (6,7,8) - ^hold　　^
You have to fix all of these similar moments in map. This is the biggest drawback of this diff.

[Hard]
AR -1hold　　AR8 is better imo.
Why you use distance spacing 2 here? Use 1!I don't use auto DS.Thank you for mention.
and i recommend you - use regular spacing in this diff. Because your spacing is random
01:22:166 (7) - NCfixed
01:32:832 (7) - ^fixed
01:40:166 (3) - ctrl+Ghold　　I want to use this pattern.
02:36:832 (7) - ^fixed　　maybe NC?
02:44:166 (3) - ^^hold　　I want to use this pattern.
02:47:499 (7) - NCfixed
03:35:499 (7) - ^fixed

[Lunatic]
00:40:082 (7,9) - remove noteshold　　This is fine imo.
00:42:832 (5) - NCfixed
00:48:166 (5) - ^fixed
01:22:999 (11) - overlap 01:23:332(1)hold　　I think that this overlap is fine in Lunatic dff.
01:33:666 (10) - overlap 01:33:999(1)hold　　^
02:45:999 (7) - make clear slider plsfixed
02:46:832 (3) - ^hold　　This is fine imo.
03:39:499 (5) - ^hold　　^
04:00:166 (9) - NCfixed

That's all. Sry for small mod. GL with rank Thanks! and too many no change, sorry...

yoo

Easy

1. 00:18:166 (2) - move last point 1 grid down
2. 00:42:166 (3) - new combo for keep the consistent comboing?
3. 00:45:666 (1) - add finish for sound in last spinner
4. 00:52:832 (3) - new combo too
5. 00:56:332 (1) - add finish
6. 01:01:832 (1) - would be better if remove nc in here and add in next one
7. 01:04:166 (4) - this pattern seems boring if straight.. maybe move some grid up like this http://puu.sh/3nO4F.jpg
8. 01:11:499 (2,2) - imo these slider curve seems can more be improved. use code?
   

   196,240,71499,2,0,P|124:280|60:244,1,160

   56,104,72833,2,0,P|124:72|200:112,2,160

9. 01:12:499 (1) - also same here, remove nc and add in next one
10. 02:07:499 (3) - add nc
11. 02:10:999 (1) - add finish
12. 02:16:499 (1) - remove nc and add in next
13. 02:27:166 (1) - ^
14. 03:13:499 (1) - remove nc so that same combo w/ 03:15:499 (1) - (3)
15. 03:16:832 (3) - imo this slider will trap beginner cuz the tail was close with (2), maybe rotate that like this http://puu.sh/3nOp4.jpg or whatever you want to make that tail isn't close w/ (2)
16. 03:42:832 (2,3) - maybe more better blanket (2)? http://puu.sh/3nOru.jpg

Normal

1. 00:43:832 (2,3) - this is a bit hard to understand that follow vocal in normal diff imo. I got 100 in (2) lol. maybe just 1/1 more easier http://puu.sh/3nOEZ.jpg
2. 00:45:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - this too, change rhythm into something more easier
3. 00:54:499 (2,3) - same as 00:43:832 (2,3) -
4. 00:56:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as before lol
5. 01:11:166 (3) - move last point to x:64 y:24, weird blanket in here..
6. 01:12:166 (1) - remove nc in here and add in next note
7. 01:40:832 (3) - uh a bit touching (2), rotate a bit like this http://puu.sh/3nOQy.jpg
8. 02:09:166 (2,3) - same as before
9. 02:11:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as before
10. 02:24:832 (1) - would make more better flow if just curve this into regular curve
11. 03:52:499 (5) - overlap with (3) a bit, i guess more better if move to another place
12. I guess rhythm like 00:26:832 (4) - is too much.. maybe more easier if reduce some and change into 1/2 repeat slider since this is still normal diff~

Hard

1. 00:18:332 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I guess would be more fit if make the rhythm just like 00:23:666 (1,2,3) - since guitar sound is more audible in here
2. 00:20:999 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^
3. 00:26:332 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
4. 00:43:166 (8,9,10) - this jump is a bit suprising because after the triplets. maybe add nc in (8) for more readable
5. 00:46:499 (2) - move this some grid down or stack with 00:45:999 (2) - ? this overlap is ugly imo
6. 00:53:832 (8) - add nc too
7. 01:00:166 (5,6) - this notes seems forcing with vocal, i guess more better if the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/3nYuB.jpg
8. 01:07:832 (5) - nc for different pattern?
9. 01:10:832 (3,4) - same as 01:00:166 (5,6) -
10. 01:18:166 (4) - move 2 grid left so (3) in middle (4)
11. 01:25:832 (8) - decrease spacing, seems a bit difficult to reach this after triplet. this is still in hard diff imo.. or if you don't want add nc in (5)
12. 01:36:499 (8) - ^
13. 02:08:499 (8) - add nc
14. 02:16:166 (1) - remove nc and add in next one
15. 02:22:499 (5) - add nc
16. 02:40:499 (8) - same as before
17. 02:51:166 (8) - ^
18. 02:51:499 (1) - uh this slider seems overlap with triplet and this is a bit not good in here imo
19. 03:16:832 (4) - add nc so previous combo set is consistent
20. 03:20:749 (timing point) - increase volume into 20%, 5% is too little.. should be heard more ><
21. 03:36:666 (1) - overlap.. more better if just stack at (3)
22. 03:39:166 (8) - same as before
23. 03:47:332 (1) - stack w/ (3)
24. 03:49:832 (8) - same as before
25. 04:34:832 (7) - add nc and remove in next note so player can noticed that reverse is much

I will mod lunatic diff later and edit in this post~ kinda tired now >3<

Thank you, Yasora!done-

Yasora wrote:

yoo

Easy

1. 00:18:166 (2) - move last point 1 grid downhold　　This shape is fine.
2. 00:42:166 (3) - new combo for keep the consistent comboing?fixed
3. 00:45:666 (1) - add finish for sound in last spinnerfixed
4. 00:52:832 (3) - new combo toofixed
5. 00:56:332 (1) - add finishfixed
6. 01:01:832 (1) - would be better if remove nc in here and add in next onefixed
7. 01:04:166 (4) - this pattern seems boring if straight.. maybe move some grid up like this http://puu.sh/3nO4F.jpg fixed
8. 01:11:499 (2,2) - imo these slider curve seems can more be improved. use code?hold　　Original is better.
   

   196,240,71499,2,0,P|124:280|60:244,1,160

   56,104,72833,2,0,P|124:72|200:112,2,160

9. 01:12:499 (1) - also same here, remove nc and add in next onefixed
10. 02:07:499 (3) - add ncfixed
11. 02:10:999 (1) - add finishfixed
12. 02:16:499 (1) - remove nc and add in nextfixed
13. 02:27:166 (1) - ^fixed
14. 03:13:499 (1) - remove nc so that same combo w/ 03:15:499 (1) - (3)fixed
15. 03:16:832 (3) - imo this slider will trap beginner cuz the tail was close with (2), maybe rotate that like this http://puu.sh/3nOp4.jpg or whatever you want to make that tail isn't close w/ (2)fixed
16. 03:42:832 (2,3) - maybe more better blanket (2)? http://puu.sh/3nOru.jpgfixed

Normal

1. 00:43:832 (2,3) - this is a bit hard to understand that follow vocal in normal diff imo. I got 100 in (2) lol. maybe just 1/1 more easier http://puu.sh/3nOEZ.jpgfixed
2. 00:45:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - this too, change rhythm into something more easierfixed　　change to spinner
3. 00:54:499 (2,3) - same as 00:43:832 (2,3) -fixed
4. 00:56:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as before lolfixed　　change to spinner
5. 01:11:166 (3) - move last point to x:64 y:24, weird blanket in here..fixed
6. 01:12:166 (1) - remove nc in here and add in next notefixed
7. 01:40:832 (3) - uh a bit touching (2), rotate a bit like this http://puu.sh/3nOQy.jpgfixed
8. 02:09:166 (2,3) - same as beforefixed
9. 02:11:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as beforefixed　　change to spinner
10. 02:24:832 (1) - would make more better flow if just curve this into regular curvefixed
11. 03:52:499 (5) - overlap with (3) a bit, i guess more better if move to another placefixed
12. I guess rhythm like 00:26:832 (4) - is too much.. maybe more easier if reduce some and change into 1/2 repeat slider since this is still normal diff~fixed　　change some of them to slider

Hard

1. 00:18:332 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - I guess would be more fit if make the rhythm just like 00:23:666 (1,2,3) - since guitar sound is more audible in herefixed　　change to slider
2. 00:20:999 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^fixed　　change to slider
3. 00:26:332 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^hold　　This rhythm is fit in here.
4. 00:43:166 (8,9,10) - this jump is a bit suprising because after the triplets. maybe add nc in (8) for more readablefixed
5. 00:46:499 (2) - move this some grid down or stack with 00:45:999 (2) - ? this overlap is ugly imofixed
6. 00:53:832 (8) - add nc toofixed
7. 01:00:166 (5,6) - this notes seems forcing with vocal, i guess more better if the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/3nYuB.jpgfixed
8. 01:07:832 (5) - nc for different pattern?fixed
9. 01:10:832 (3,4) - same as 01:00:166 (5,6) -fixed
10. 01:18:166 (4) - move 2 grid left so (3) in middle (4)fixed
11. 01:25:832 (8) - decrease spacing, seems a bit difficult to reach this after triplet. this is still in hard diff imo.. or if you don't want add nc in (5)fixed
12. 01:36:499 (8) - ^fixed
13. 02:08:499 (8) - add ncfixed
14. 02:16:166 (1) - remove nc and add in next onefixed
15. 02:22:499 (5) - add ncfixed
16. 02:40:499 (8) - same as beforefixed
17. 02:51:166 (8) - ^fixed
18. 02:51:499 (1) - uh this slider seems overlap with triplet and this is a bit not good in here imofixed
19. 03:16:832 (4) - add nc so previous combo set is consistentfixed
20. 03:20:749 (timing point) - increase volume into 20%, 5% is too little.. should be heard more ><fixed
21. 03:36:666 (1) - overlap.. more better if just stack at (3)fixed
22. 03:39:166 (8) - same as beforefixed
23. 03:47:332 (1) - stack w/ (3)fixed
24. 03:49:832 (8) - same as beforefixed
25. 04:34:832 (7) - add nc and remove in next note so player can noticed that reverse is muchfixed

I will mod lunatic diff later and edit in this post~ kinda tired now >3<OK, I'm waiting.

Hello, from modding queue!
GENERAL: Find a normal_hitclap sound that suits the song and make the needed changes after.





Good luck, and hope my mod was helpful!