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Linked Horizon - Guren no Yumiya (TV Size)

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GugUCorn
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GugUCorn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 8월 22일 목요일 at 오전 11:12:51

Artist: Linked Horizon
Title: Guren no Yumiya (TV Size)
Source: Shingeki no Kyojin
Tags: unitedwesin Kiai
BPM: 180.68
Filesize: 14392kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.14 stars, 79 notes)
  2. Insane (4.9 stars, 332 notes)
  3. KiHard (4.91 stars, 182 notes)
  4. UWS's Normal (4.22 stars, 142 notes)
Download: Linked Horizon - Guren no Yumiya (TV Size)
Download: Linked Horizon - Guren no Yumiya (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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FOR RANK
Easy - Done! By Me
UWS's Normal - Done! By UnitedWeSin
KiHard - Done! By K i A i
Insane - Done! By me
[History]
2013-05-18 : Changed BackGround Image
2013-05-21 : Compeleted All Map Set!
2013-05-25 : :idea: Add StoryBoard Made By Aleksart
2013-06-16 : i decided remapping all Diff!
2013-07-08 : Add UWS's Normal!
2013-07-10 : Add KiHard! Already to Mod and Rank!
[MOD History]
2013-05-18 : HabiHolic mod
2013-05-25 : koreapenguin mod
2013-05-30 : InC0nceNtrateD mod
2013-06-14 : baldrace mod
2013-07-11 : koreapenguin remod
2013-07-11 : Gloria Guard mod
2013-07-11 : Losertic mod
2013-07-22 : sjoy mod
2013-07-22 : EnixYuki mod
2013-08-04 : Alarido mod
2013-08-20 : Zzz mod
Last edited by GugUCorn , edited 42 times in total.
HabiHolic
5,410 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Hi~

하드 다되시면 리체크할테니까 하드매핑 끝나면 불러주세요~

[Insane]

00:00:616 (4) - Ctrl + g?
00:03:272 (2) - ^
00:03:604 (3) - ^
00:06:427 (5) - 이걸 00:06:593 (1) - 머리에 겹칠것 햇갈려서 못칠거같은데..
00:09:914 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거
00:20:540 (2) - 점프거리가 너무멀어요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ
00:24:857 (10) - 뉴콤보
00:25:854 (2) - 이거도 너무 점프가...
00:40:631 (5) - Ctrl + g

Good Luck~~
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~

하드 다되시면 리체크할테니까 하드매핑 끝나면 불러주세요~

[Insane]

00:00:616 (4) - Ctrl + g? no
00:03:272 (2) - ^ ok
00:03:604 (3) - ^ ok
00:06:427 (5) - 이걸 00:06:593 (1) - 머리에 겹칠것 햇갈려서 못칠거같은데.. no
00:09:914 (1) - 뉴콤보 제거 ok
00:20:540 (2) - 점프거리가 너무멀어요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ no
00:24:857 (10) - 뉴콤보 no
00:25:854 (2) - 이거도 너무 점프가...no
00:40:631 (5) - Ctrl + g ok

Good Luck~~
하드 업뎃했어요ㅎ
HabiHolic
5,410 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Ok! Hard Recheck

00:10:744 (1) - Ctrl+g
00:15:559 (2) - 디스턴스 확인
00:55:243 (4) - 반복한번 제거하고 00:55:741 - 여기에 노트추가

다 잘만드셨지만 디스턴스 지켜야할곳은 지켜주시길 바랍니다
good Luck
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

HabiHolic wrote:

Ok! Hard Recheck

00:10:744 (1) - Ctrl+g
00:15:559 (2) - 디스턴스 확인
00:55:243 (4) - 반복한번 제거하고 00:55:741 - 여기에 노트추가

다 잘만드셨지만 디스턴스 지켜야할곳은 지켜주시길 바랍니다
good Luck
ㅠㅠ감사합니다
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
타물님 ><

이런말씀을 제가 드려도되는지모르겠지만

모딩온걸 고치실때 안고치실꺼면 그이유를 써주세요 lol

그래야 모딩하는데에 참고나 도움이되니까요!

그리고 안쓰는것보단 어떠한이유때문에 안고쳤다라고써주면 모더들도 좋아할꺼에요!
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
General

*레터박스 체크해제해주세요.

*모든난이도에 마지막에 나오는 01:27:122 (1) - 이스핀 노말에는 피니시가되어있지만 나머지 난이도는 그렇지않네요.
다른난이도도 피니시를 추가 혹은 모든 난이도의 스핀의 피니시를 제거 혹은 볼륨 5%로 소리를 없애주세요.
[제안] 그냥 볼륨 5%로 소리를 없애는게 좋은거같아요.

Easy

*슬라틱 2가 어울리는거같네요.

00:00:118 (1,1) - [제안] 상관은없지만 저모양은 이쁘다고 생각하지않습니다. 다른 모양으로 재배치해보시는게?
00:05:431 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 추가
00:38:639 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리에 피니시 추가
00:39:967 (2) - 머리와 꼬리 피니시 추가
00:56:073 (3) - 머리에 피니시
01:00:224 (1) - [제안] 의도를 모르겠지만 뉴콤제거후 00:59:892 (4) - 여기뉴콤이맞지않을까요? 가사에 맞춰 뉴콤하신거같은데. 이게맞을꺼에요 아마.
01:05:869 (1) - 꼬리에 피니시
01:08:692 (1) - [제안] 마찬가지로 의도는 모르겠지만 01:08:692 (1) - 뉴콤제거후 01:09:522 (1) - 뉴콤 01:10:352 (1) - 뉴콤제거
01:08:692 (1) - 꼬리에 피니시
01:11:348 (4) - 꼬리에 피니시
01:19:816 (1) - 피니시 추가

Noraml

*슬라틱 2가 어울리는거같네요.

00:38:971 (2) - 슬라이더 꼬리에 피니시 추가
00:39:635 (3) - 슬라이더 리핏 부분 가운데부분에 피니시 추가
00:40:631 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 추가
00:56:073 (1) - 슬라이더 머리와 꼬리에 피니시 추가
00:56:073 (1,1) - [제안] 두노트가 겹쳐있습니다. 다른 모양으로 배치해보시는게 어떨까요?
01:02:548 (1) - 피니시 추가
01:02:880 (2) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 제거

Hard

00:39:303 (3,3) - 피니시 추가
00:40:631 (3) - 머리에 피니시 추가
00:41:129 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 추가
01:17:160 (1) - 머리에 피니시 추가
01:19:816 (1) - ^

Insane

Nice diff :)

00:51:507 (4,5) - [제안] 00:51:092 (3) - 요 슬라 꼬리에 겹치는게 좋지않을까요?

큰점프도좋지만 적당한 디스탄스의 점프를 사용해주세요. 3.5X가 넘어가는 디스탄스는 히도이요..

인센빼곤 나머지난이도는 힛사모딩만 한듯하네요.

타물님 화이팅 >< GL
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

koreapenguin wrote:

General

*레터박스 체크해제해주세요. fixed!

*모든난이도에 마지막에 나오는 01:27:122 (1) - 이스핀 노말에는 피니시가되어있지만 나머지 난이도는 그렇지않네요.
다른난이도도 피니시를 추가 혹은 모든 난이도의 스핀의 피니시를 제거 혹은 볼륨 5%로 소리를 없애주세요.
[제안] 그냥 볼륨 5%로 소리를 없애는게 좋은거같아요.한칸 늘리고 5% 으로 fixed!


Easy

*슬라틱 2가 어울리는거같네요. fixed!

00:00:118 (1,1) - [제안] 상관은없지만 저모양은 이쁘다고 생각하지않습니다. 다른 모양으로 재배치해보시는게? 조금 생각해봐야겠네요..
00:05:431 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 추가 fixed!
00:38:639 (1) - 슬라이더 꼬리에 피니시 추가 fixed!
00:39:967 (2) - 머리와 꼬리 피니시 추가 fixed!
00:56:073 (3) - 머리에 피니시 fixed!
01:00:224 (1) - [제안] 의도를 모르겠지만 뉴콤제거후 00:59:892 (4) - 여기뉴콤이맞지않을까요? 가사에 맞춰 뉴콤하신거같은데. 이게맞을꺼에요 아마. 아하! 맞네요ㅋㅋ
01:05:869 (1) - 꼬리에 피니시 fixed!
01:08:692 (1) - [제안] 마찬가지로 의도는 모르겠지만 01:08:692 (1) - 뉴콤제거후 01:09:522 (1) - 뉴콤 01:10:352 (1) - 뉴콤제거 fixed!
01:08:692 (1) - 꼬리에 피니시 fixed!
01:11:348 (4) - 꼬리에 피니시 fixed!
01:19:816 (1) - 피니시 추가 fixed!

Noraml

*슬라틱 2가 어울리는거같네요. fixed!

00:38:971 (2) - 슬라이더 꼬리에 피니시 추가 fixed!
00:39:635 (3) - 슬라이더 리핏 부분 가운데부분에 피니시 추가 fixed!
00:40:631 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 추가 added!
00:56:073 (1) - 슬라이더 머리와 꼬리에 피니시 추가 fixed!
00:56:073 (1,1) - [제안] 두노트가 겹쳐있습니다. 다른 모양으로 배치해보시는게 어떨까요? 두번째 1번 슬라 보는 데 지장 없어 보이는데..;; 일단 보류!
01:02:548 (1) - 피니시 추가 fixed!
01:02:880 (2) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 제거fixed!

Hard

00:39:303 (3,3) - 피니시 추가 fixed!
00:40:631 (3) - 머리에 피니시 추가 fixed!
00:41:129 (1) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 추가 fixed!
01:17:160 (1) - 머리에 피니시 추가 fixed!
01:19:816 (1) - ^ fixed!

Insane

Nice diff :)

00:51:507 (4,5) - [제안] 00:51:092 (3) - 요 슬라 꼬리에 겹치는게 좋지않을까요? 고민했던 점이었는데 ㅇㅋ! 수정!

큰점프도좋지만 적당한 디스탄스의 점프를 사용해주세요. 3.5X가 넘어가는 디스탄스는 히도이요..전 과감히 점프곡을 만들었습니다ㅋ;

인센빼곤 나머지난이도는 힛사모딩만 한듯하네요.

타물님 화이팅 >< GL
모딩 감사합니다!!
Pipse Cola
204 posts
Joined August 2012
Pipse Cola
Mod Request

GENERAL:
00:46:609 - to 01:05:205 - and 01:06:533 - to 01:29:115 - is Kiai Time, what are 43 seconds in total, short this, your song should not be one half KiaiTime!

Easy

00:00:118 (1) - Make it symmetrical, it just looks bad.
00:20:374 (1,2,3,1,2) - Change this, it absolutely does not fit in any way.
00:26:518 (2,3,1) - Same here, stick to the Beats of the song, the white lines, especially in Easy diff!
00:42:624 (1,2) - Mirror the slider horizontally at this position, first left and then right destroys the flow.
00:44:948 (2,3) - I suggest to make a Slider out of them.
00:54:080 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - It is not wrong, but it is very strange to play... I suggest u to think over it and try to find easier - to - play possibilities, again I think it would be better to follow the beat.
01:05:869 (1) - Well I think you are following lyrics here? I guess so, then the Slider has to be at 01:05:703 -.
01:17:492 (1,2) - Do them like this:
Click Me


Normal

00:03:604 (3) - This slider has to start at 00:03:770 - and end at 00:03:936 -.
00:21:537 (3) - You go along with lyrics again? Then this slider should end at 00:21:869 - and
00:22:367 (4) - got to be at 00:22:201 - BUT I know I am repeating my self, but I highly suggest to go along with the beat in easy and normal diffs.
00:26:850 (4) - This slider should end at 00:27:182 - and make it reversal
00:27:680 (5) - Remove this, I do not see a sense for it.
00:47:439 (3) - Does not fit, put it at 00:47:605 -.
00:48:103 (4) - This does not fit, start it on: 00:48:269 - and end it on: 00:48:601 -
00:59:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to put them more harmonating to each other, that u dont need to move your mouse to the right in the slider and to the left for the button eg.

Hard

00:10:412 (7,1) - I think this jump is too unexpected, lower it.
00:38:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - For hard these jumps are too much, keep this for Insane.
00:43:122 (3,4) - This is too much space for hard.
00:58:895 (4,5) - This looks more like Insane to me, too.
01:01:552 (2,3) - ^
01:07:031 (2,3,4) - Here should be more space, as soon as they r farer away in timing.
01:09:688 (2,3,4) - ^
01:11:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:14:503 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:322 (4,5,6) - ^

Insane

I think AR is too high for 180 BPM, think about lowering it, also, I miss some patterns in it, in scenes like:

00:05:929 (2,3,4,5) -
00:13:567 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:49:763 (2,3,4,5) -
00:52:254 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:54:744 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Especially this one, a star would fit so perfectly in here.
01:19:816 (1,2,3,4) - Or something like a Rectangel here?

Hitsounds are very nice.


Have fun going on with your map! Good luck!!
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

Mod Request

GENERAL:
00:46:609 - to 01:05:205 - and 01:06:533 - to 01:29:115 - is Kiai Time, what are 43 seconds in total, short this, your song should not be one half KiaiTime!

Easy

00:00:118 (1) - Make it symmetrical, it just looks bad.
00:20:374 (1,2,3,1,2) - Change this, it absolutely does not fit in any way.
00:26:518 (2,3,1) - Same here, stick to the Beats of the song, the white lines, especially in Easy diff!
00:42:624 (1,2) - Mirror the slider horizontally at this position, first left and then right destroys the flow.
00:44:948 (2,3) - I suggest to make a Slider out of them.
00:54:080 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - It is not wrong, but it is very strange to play... I suggest u to think over it and try to find easier - to - play possibilities, again I think it would be better to follow the beat.
01:05:869 (1) - Well I think you are following lyrics here? I guess so, then the Slider has to be at 01:05:703 -.
01:17:492 (1,2) - Do them like this:
Click Me


Normal

00:03:604 (3) - This slider has to start at 00:03:770 - and end at 00:03:936 -.
00:21:537 (3) - You go along with lyrics again? Then this slider should end at 00:21:869 - and
00:22:367 (4) - got to be at 00:22:201 - BUT I know I am repeating my self, but I highly suggest to go along with the beat in easy and normal diffs.
00:26:850 (4) - This slider should end at 00:27:182 - and make it reversal
00:27:680 (5) - Remove this, I do not see a sense for it.
00:47:439 (3) - Does not fit, put it at 00:47:605 -.
00:48:103 (4) - This does not fit, start it on: 00:48:269 - and end it on: 00:48:601 -
00:59:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try to put them more harmonating to each other, that u dont need to move your mouse to the right in the slider and to the left for the button eg.

Hard

00:10:412 (7,1) - I think this jump is too unexpected, lower it.
00:38:141 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - For hard these jumps are too much, keep this for Insane.
00:43:122 (3,4) - This is too much space for hard.
00:58:895 (4,5) - This looks more like Insane to me, too.
01:01:552 (2,3) - ^
01:07:031 (2,3,4) - Here should be more space, as soon as they r farer away in timing.
01:09:688 (2,3,4) - ^
01:11:847 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:14:503 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:18:322 (4,5,6) - ^

Insane

I think AR is too high for 180 BPM, think about lowering it, also, I miss some patterns in it, in scenes like:

00:05:929 (2,3,4,5) -
00:13:567 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:49:763 (2,3,4,5) -
00:52:254 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:54:744 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Especially this one, a star would fit so perfectly in here.
01:19:816 (1,2,3,4) - Or something like a Rectangel here?

Hitsounds are very nice.


Have fun going on with your map! Good luck!!
thanks~
Kinomi
1,229 posts
Joined August 2012
Kinomi
Hi~Hi~from my queue
normal mod 0w0

general


kiai time is too long,kiai from 01:06:533 is unnecessary

Easy

click
it's not easy...more like a normal diff

00:17:386 to 00:24:691
this rhythm may be hard to new player,and I think it dosen't fit the song,try a more osteoporotic rhythm

00:27:514 (3) - it is too hard to new player,remove it and lenthen 00:26:518 (2) -

00:29:174 (2,3,4,5) - they should not appear in easy becouse of 180BPM imo

there are some same parts in the diff

00:41:129 (1) - you should avoid snapping notes at red lines in easy

00:47:771 (2) - ^ you can use slider to replace them

01:15:333 (2) - 2 repeat is confusing when there are sth after it in easy

there are some same parts in the diff

use sliders more often can make this diff easier

Normal

click
AR+1

you mostly use x0.9 distance

but 00:18:548 (2) - has an incorrect distance,you must keep using same distance in easy or normal

pls check all of the notes in easy and normal

about blanket,to make pretty blanker sometimes you can turn off grip snap
for example


rhythm is good

click
just some suggestions in hard and insane

many distance problems in hard

in hard and insane you can make jumping but you need a general spacing

too many unnecessary overlaps in hard like 00:19:544 (7,1) -
00:35:484 (1,1) -
not pretty

learn from other ranked maps and try to make better overlaps

a good insane,consider more about using of stream and flow,you can make it better

that's all
keep working in your map
good luck
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
thanks~~
okamiratsu
714 posts
Joined August 2011
okamiratsu
I didn't find anything so I threw you a Star
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

okamiratsu wrote:

I didn't find anything so I threw you a Star
oh! thanks~~ ww
UnitedWeSin
891 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Hey :)
Really sorry it took so long!
Here is the diff:

http://puu.sh/3xLGm.osu1

Don't forget to add my name into the tags. :P
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey :)
Really sorry it took so long!
Here is the diff:

http://puu.sh/3xLGm.osu1

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256,128,84300,2,0,L|256:288,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,320,84798,2,0,B|224:320|256:288|256:288|288:320|328:320,1,160,8|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,160,85462,6,0,L|344:96,1,80,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,85960,2,0,L|168:96,1,80,8|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,224,86458,2,0,L|256:264,8,40,0|0|8|8|8|8|4|4|6,1:0|1:0|0:0|0:0|0:3|0:3|0:3|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87288,12,0,89115,0:0:0:0:

오..오..오래 기다리셨어요/me run
GugUCorn
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Updated!
감사합니다THanks!
koreapenguin
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koreapenguin
:D IRC로 봐요.
Gloria Guard
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Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
[Easy]

AR이 OD 와 비교했을때 너무 낮습니다 AR을 3으로 올려주세요

00:00:118 (1) 슬라이더 박자가 반박자 밀려있습니다... 가운데 애로우 있는 틱은 00:01:280 으로옮겨주시고
마지막 슬라이더끝은 00:02:442 로 옮겨주세요
00:23:529 (1,2) 1번 슬라이더 끝 모양을 좀더 이쁘게 덮어주면 더 깨끗한 패턴모양이 나올거같네요
00:42:292 (1,2) 여기도 엉성하게 덮어버리면 패턴모양도 안이쁘고 좋지않습니다
00:48:601 (1,2,1) 여기는 초보자들이 읽기에는 너무 어려운 리듬입니다.. 리듬을 곡에 맞게 다시 배치해주세요
이런식으로 띄엄띄엄 애매한 박자로 해버리면 초보자들이 플레이하다가 혼란스러울수있어요
01:04:873 (1,2,1) 이 긴 슬라이더 사이사이에도 많은 박자가 들어있습니다. 그런데 이걸 그냥 무시한다는건
제 생각에는 어색하기만하고 아무리 리듬이 맞다고하지만 사이사이에 있는 리듬을 무시하고 비워두는건.
오히려 큰 혼란만 발생할뿐입니다
01:27:454 (1) 이 스피너는 반박자 뒤로 밀려있네요.. 이 스핀을 01:27:205로 옮겨주셔야 박자가 알맞습니다


[UWS's Normal]


00:48:435 (5) Umm.. this slider rhythm a little awkward imo.. i think this slider end move 00:48:767 is better
00:51:590 (3) This note is not needed rhythm because this part not hear this note rhythm.
00:53:748 (5) 00:48:435 Same
01:02:216 (5) 00:51:590 Same


[Hard]

안드레아랑 비슷한 스타일을 가지셨군요.. 저는 개인적으로 좋아하지 않는스타일이지만..
딱히 잡을 문제는없습니다.


[Insane]

큰문제가 되는건 없어보입니다.
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
이런 젠장


Modding

General

  1. Pass.

Easy

  1. 슬라이더 틱들 없애보는건 어떠심?... 꽤 많은듯 한데...
  2. 00:48:601 (2) , 00:50:095 (2) - 이부분은 약간 어색하달까...
  3. 00:59:892 (3) - 뉴 콤보.

UWS's Normal

  1. 00:02:774 (1) - 동글동글하게 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/860629 대충 이런느낌으로?
  2. 00:19:378 (4) - 슬라이더 이동. 00:19:212 부터 00:19:544 까지.
  3. 01:04:378 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:08:578 (2,1) - ^

KiHard

  1. 키아이타임 나오는 시간이 다 틀립니다. 아마도 모든 난이도랑 동일하게 키아이 타임 해야 될듯 한데... 아니면 말구요.
  2. 00:49:265 (1) - 원 하나 대신 00:49:265 부터 00:49:431 까지 슬라이더 추가?
  3. 01:06:035 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/860641 정성스런 부분이네요....

Insane

  1. 00:23:861 (1) - 뉴콤보. 그 뒤에있는 뉴콤보는 제거.
  2. 00:35:484 부터 00:35:816 까지 스트림.
  3. 01:26:624 (4) - 리버스 1회 제거.
  4. 01:27:288 (1) - 스핀을 01:27:122 부터 시작하도록 수정.

좋네요.

깔끔하게 만든게 맘에 드는데... 전 이렇게 몬만듬 ㅠㅠ
GugUCorn
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Easy]

AR이 OD 와 비교했을때 너무 낮습니다 AR을 3으로 올려주세요

00:00:118 (1) 슬라이더 박자가 반박자 밀려있습니다... 가운데 애로우 있는 틱은 00:01:280 으로옮겨주시고
마지막 슬라이더끝은 00:02:442 로 옮겨주세요
00:23:529 (1,2) 1번 슬라이더 끝 모양을 좀더 이쁘게 덮어주면 더 깨끗한 패턴모양이 나올거같네요
00:42:292 (1,2) 여기도 엉성하게 덮어버리면 패턴모양도 안이쁘고 좋지않습니다
00:48:601 (1,2,1) 여기는 초보자들이 읽기에는 너무 어려운 리듬입니다.. 리듬을 곡에 맞게 다시 배치해주세요
이런식으로 띄엄띄엄 애매한 박자로 해버리면 초보자들이 플레이하다가 혼란스러울수있어요
01:04:873 (1,2,1) 이 긴 슬라이더 사이사이에도 많은 박자가 들어있습니다. 그런데 이걸 그냥 무시한다는건
제 생각에는 어색하기만하고 아무리 리듬이 맞다고하지만 사이사이에 있는 리듬을 무시하고 비워두는건.
오히려 큰 혼란만 발생할뿐입니다
01:27:454 (1) 이 스피너는 반박자 뒤로 밀려있네요.. 이 스핀을 01:27:205로 옮겨주셔야 박자가 알맞습니다

수정!



[Insane]

큰문제가 되는건 없어보입니다.
:)
GugUCorn
936 posts
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Losertic wrote:

이런 젠장


Modding

General

  1. Pass.

Easy

  1. 슬라이더 틱들 없애보는건 어떠심?... 꽤 많은듯 한데...보류
  2. 00:48:601 (2) , 00:50:095 (2) - 이부분은 약간 어색하달까...Pass!
  3. 00:59:892 (3) - 뉴 콤보.수정!


Insane

  1. 00:23:861 (1) - 뉴콤보. 그 뒤에있는 뉴콤보는 제거. Pass!
  2. 00:35:484 부터 00:35:816 까지 스트림. Pass!
  3. 01:26:624 (4) - 리버스 1회 제거. Pass!
  4. 01:27:288 (1) - 스핀을 01:27:122 부터 시작하도록 수정.Pass!

좋네요.

깔끔하게 만든게 맘에 드는데... 전 이렇게 몬만듬 ㅠㅠ
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Losertic wrote:

UWS's Normal

  1. 00:02:774 (1) - 동글동글하게 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/860629 대충 이런느낌으로?
  2. 00:19:378 (4) - 슬라이더 이동. 00:19:212 부터 00:19:544 까지.
  3. 01:04:378 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:08:578 (2,1) - ^

Translate

  1. 00:02:774 (1) - Roundly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/860629 Like this?
  2. 00:19:378 (4) - moving slider. 00:19:212 ~ 00:19:544 까지.
  3. 01:04:378 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:08:578 (2,1) - ^
UnitedWeSin
891 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
GG

Gloria Guard wrote:

[UWS's Normal]

00:48:435 (5) Umm.. this slider rhythm a little awkward imo.. i think this slider end move 00:48:767 is better
00:51:590 (3) This note is not needed rhythm because this part not hear this note rhythm.
00:53:748 (5) 00:48:435 Same
01:02:216 (5) 00:51:590 Same
It's for rhythm. The 1 + 1/2 beat gap feels terrible. Taking into consideration a steady rhythm and hitsounds, it's fine that the slider ends there on the white tick because it's more rhythmic and easier to follow.

Losertic

Losertic wrote:

UWS's Normal

  1. 00:02:774 (1) - 동글동글하게 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/860629 대충 이런느낌으로?
    I'd like to keep this because it's in a perpendicular pattern with the 00:00:948 (2,4) and it feels nicer imo to have a rougher flow for this epic part of the song.
  2. 00:19:378 (4) - 슬라이더 이동. 00:19:212 부터 00:19:544 까지.
    It's a great suggestion but it's awkward for me. Vocals are hitting on the red ticks here, I'm just following a simple rhythm to get through the slow section, and the 00:19:378 (4) is pushing through the drum roll into the downbeat at 00:20:042.
  3. 01:04:378 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:08:578 (2,1) - ^
    I don't understand these. :<

Thanks for modding!
And thanks for translation xD. The Korean language looks difficult x_x

Some changes:
http://puu.sh/3ATsj.osu
GugUCorn
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updated!
K i A i
662 posts
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K i A i
채ㅡㄷ ㅐㅜ
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: guren no yumiya.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 46609
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Guren no Yumiya (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:紅蓮の弓矢 (TV Size)
Artist:Linked Horizon
ArtistUnicode:Linked Horizon
Creator:TaMul
Version:KiHard
Source:Shingeki no Kyojin
Tags:unitedwesin Kiai
BeatmapID:273655
BeatmapSetID:93014

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Updated!
sjoy
1,032 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
Hi From M4M :)
Easy:
00:05:099 (2) - - I think it begins on 00:05:431 should be better
00:22:699 (1) - how about add fin?
00:25:355 (1) - ^
00:27:680 (2) - chang it to the note on 00:28:012 add fin
00:46:609 (1) - add fin
01:17:824 add note?
KiHard:
After 00:00:118 (1) - insert a break avoid hp drain?
00:34:670 add a note on 256,328?
01:04:707 (3) - i think it ends on 01:05:039 .and 01:05:205 add a slide to 01:05:537. and 01:05:703 add a note
00:14:985~00:35:484 you can add 24clap because your hissounds are a little low voice
00:38:307 (1) - likes this http://puu.sh/3IZQo.jpg and 00:38:971 (2,3,4) - the same as 00:38:307 (1)
01:16:994 (1) - I think it can be deleted
01:17:658 add note
01:26:458 (3) - divide into 2 the same short slide http://puu.sh/3IZyK.jpg
Insane:
00:02:774 (1) - add fin
00:10:744 add fin .is not the whole slide
00:25:355 (1) - add fin
00:26:186 (5) - i think this rhythm is this http://puu.sh/3J0jl.jpg
00:38:556 (5) - I think it can be deleted
01:26:624 (4) - I think convert slide to the stream
That's all
Good luck :)
eniyan
107 posts
Joined September 2011
eniyan
hi! :)

from my moddin queoe :)

however i could't find many points you should find... ;)

so i give kudosu!

[insane]

01:26:126 (3) - add finish in the biggining of slider!
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

sjoy wrote:

Hi From M4M :)
Easy:
00:05:099 (2) - - I think it begins on 00:05:431 should be better
00:22:699 (1) - how about add fin?
00:25:355 (1) - ^
00:27:680 (2) - chang it to the note on 00:28:012 add fin
00:46:609 (1) - add fin
01:17:824 add note?
Insane:
00:02:774 (1) - add fin
00:10:744 add fin .is not the whole slide
00:25:355 (1) - add fin
00:26:186 (5) - i think this rhythm is this http://puu.sh/3J0jl.jpg
00:38:556 (5) - I think it can be deleted
01:26:624 (4) - I think convert slide to the stream
That's all
Good luck :)
thanks
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
[quote="EnixYuki":945e7]hi! :)

[insane]

01:26:126 (3) - add finish in the biggining of slider![/quote:945e7]
thanks
K i A i
662 posts
Joined March 2011
K i A i
zjahs
osu file format v12

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166,237,19212,2,0,P|104:192|24:192,1,160,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,19876,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,20042,2,0,L|72:280,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,344,20540,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,304,20872,2,0,B|256:304|256:304|296:328|296:328|360:328,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,376,21703,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,376,21869,2,0,P|200:304|200:224,1,160
80,120,22533,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,120,22699,2,0,P|40:192|40:272,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,336,23197,2,0,B|120:336|120:336|152:360,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,288,23529,2,0,B|256:336|256:336|320:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,360,24027,2,0,B|392:336|392:336|432:336,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,280,24359,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,280,24525,2,0,P|504:200|488:120,1,160,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,24,25355,6,0,P|200:64|120:64,1,160,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,112,25854,2,0,P|16:184|16:264,1,160
144,360,26518,2,0,P|184:288|184:208,2,160,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,304,27514,2,0,B|360:304|360:304|384:344|448:344,1,160,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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400,72,28510,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,28842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,29174,2,0,B|192:72|192:72|152:96|152:96|88:96,2,160,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,30171,2,0,P|216:304|144:328,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,328,30669,6,0,B|144:328|144:328|216:368,1,160,2|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,366,31167,2,0,B|368:328|368:328|448:328,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,176,31831,2,0,B|432:216|432:216|352:216,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,40,33159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,328,34820,2,0,B|400:328|400:328|432:288|488:288,2,160,2|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,256,41129,2,0,B|248:200|248:200|264:160|264:160|256:96,1,160,4|0,2:1|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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40,112,42624,2,0,B|80:112|112:144|112:144,1,80,2|2,0:2|2:2,0:0:0:0:
192,144,42956,1,8,0:2:0:0:
152,216,43122,2,0,B|152:272|200:296|200:296|200:360,1,160,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
360,360,43786,6,0,B|440:360|440:360|512:312,1,160,6|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
456,256,44284,1,8,0:2:0:0:
512,200,44450,1,0,2:0:0:0:
464,136,44616,2,0,P|384:136|320:88,1,160,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
256,136,45114,1,0,2:0:0:0:
190,90,45280,2,0,P|128:136|48:136,1,160,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
0,200,45778,1,2,2:0:0:0:
0,200,45944,2,0,L|16:360,1,160,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
152,272,46609,6,0,B|192:272|224:304|224:304,1,80,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,384,46941,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,344,47107,2,2,B|360:344|360:344|392:376|448:376,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,312,47605,5,8,0:0:0:0:
496,312,47771,2,0,P|512:232|496:152,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,136,48269,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,136,48435,2,0,P|400:216|416:296,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,80,49265,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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184,16,49929,2,0,B|144:16|112:48,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,48,50261,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,120,50427,6,0,B|72:176|72:176|96:216|96:216|96:280,1,160,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,344,50926,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,344,51092,2,0,P|216:344|284:384,1,160,2|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,280,51922,6,0,B|424:280|424:280|360:232,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,280,53416,5,2,0:0:0:0:
184,320,53582,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,360,53748,2,0,P|40:336|0:256,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,118,54412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,118,54578,2,0,P|40:48|112:24,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,64,55077,2,0,B|264:64|264:64|336:16,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,240,56239,2,0,B|320:280|352:312|352:312,1,80
432,328,56571,2,0,B|376:328|376:328|336:352|336:352|272:352,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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240,64,57733,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,120,58065,2,0,B|432:120|464:152|464:152,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,216,58397,6,0,L|488:376,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,384,58895,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,384,59061,2,0,L|432:224,2,160,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,344,59892,6,0,B|304:376|264:376,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,344,60224,2,0,B|152:344|120:376,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,272,60722,2,0,B|40:272|72:240,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,160,61054,6,0,B|72:104|28:72|28:72|28:12,1,160,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,16,61552,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,16,61718,2,0,B|256:64|256:64|320:16,1,160,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,16,62216,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,14,62382,5,0,0:0:0:0:
484,14,62548,2,0,B|484:72|484:72|440:104|440:160,1,160,4|12,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,240,63046,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,128,63379,2,0,B|280:128|248:160|248:160,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,240,63711,6,0,B|192:240|192:240|152:280|96:280,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,208,64209,2,0,B|56:160|88:128|88:128,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,8,64707,2,0,B|224:8|256:40|256:40|288:8|328:8,1,160,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,88,65205,6,0,P|256:120|184:88,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,65703,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,66035,2,0,B|256:74|256:74|256:72|256:72|256:110|256:110|256:108|256:108|256:138|256:138|256:136|256:136|256:192,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,216,66533,6,0,B|256:180|256:180|328:216,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,67031,2,0,B|256:332|256:332|184:296,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,256,67529,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,216,67696,2,0,B|40:136|40:136|88:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,68194,2,0,B|208:72|240:104|240:104,1,80,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,32,68692,2,0,B|384:88|432:120|432:120|432:176,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,232,69190,6,0,P|408:232|344:280,1,160,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,200,69688,2,0,B|256:260|256:260|200:200,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
166,277,70186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
166,277,70352,2,0,P|104:232|24:232,2,160,2|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,120,71348,2,0,B|224:120|256:152|256:152|288:120|328:120,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,200,71847,6,0,P|256:236|188:200,1,160,4|8,1:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,72345,2,0,L|256:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,352,72843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,352,73009,2,0,B|408:352|408:352|472:304,2,160,2|8|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,352,74005,2,0,B|104:352|104:352|40:304,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,224,74503,6,0,B|40:184|40:184|64:152,1,80,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,104,74835,2,0,B|168:104|168:104|200:80,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,75333,2,0,B|344:104|344:104|312:80,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,75665,5,6,0:0:0:0:
392,224,75998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,312,76330,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,224,76662,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76994,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77160,2,0,L|256:32,1,160,4|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
360,160,77824,2,0,P|360:224|272:296,1,160,10|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
215,291,78322,2,0,P|152:224|152:160,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,88,78821,1,8,1:2:0:0:
192,88,78987,2,0,B|232:80|256:44|256:44|280:80|320:88,2,160,6|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,8,79817,6,0,B|112:8|112:8|80:40|24:40,2,160,4|8|10,1:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,8,80813,1,8,1:2:0:0:
336,8,80979,2,0,B|400:8|400:8|432:40|488:40,2,160,2|8|6,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,100,81975,2,0,P|256:64|324:100,1,160,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,82473,6,0,B|224:208|288:240|256:304,2,160,4|8|10,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,32,83470,2,0,B|184:32|184:32|216:56,1,80,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,32,83968,2,0,B|328:32|328:32|296:56,1,80,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,128,84300,2,0,L|256:288,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,320,84798,2,0,B|224:320|256:288|256:288|288:320|328:320,1,160,8|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,87205,12,0,89115,0:0:0:0:
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

[Easy]
00:50:760 feels empty ~.~ Add a note here on x:284 y:304.
01:17:824 this beat is important too imo. Add a note here at x:324 y:88 -- cannot be on another place due to 01:15:831 (3).

[Normal]
♥ Nice diff.

[Insane]
♥ Nice too (:

[KiHard]
♥ That's a PERFECT Hard dif ^.^ I Love it ^^

That's it ^^

STAR for very high quality ♥ Why this map is starvin' mods and BATs???

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
* No complaints on General Things

[Easy]
00:50:760 feels empty ~.~ Add a note here on x:284 y:304.
01:17:824 this beat is important too imo. Add a note here at x:324 y:88 -- cannot be on another place due to 01:15:831 (3).

[Normal]
♥ Nice diff.

[Insane]
♥ Nice too (:

[KiHard]
♥ That's a PERFECT Hard dif ^.^ I Love it ^^

That's it ^^

STAR for very high quality ♥ Why this map is starvin' mods and BATs???

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att.
Fixed! thanks!
Rugure
175 posts
Joined March 2011
Rugure
모딩모딩~

[Insane]
00:09:250 (5) - ctrl + g 눌러서 수정하면 약간 맵이 순조로워지는것 같네요.
00:09:582 (6) - ^
00:13:401 (1) - 이거 스핀제거하고 노트 추가하는게 나을듯함 모든난이도에 스핀이 없는데 그것에 맞춰서 스핀을 안넣는게 나을듯.
00:15:061 (2) - 여기 뉴콤보를 제거하고
00:14:729 (1) - http://puu.sh/3WDUM.jpg 혹은 http://puu.sh/3WDVK.jpg 아니면 5연타가 나을지도 모르겠음..
00:16:057 - 이 부분에 노트 하나 추가하는게 박자를 일정하게 유지하는게 좋을 것 같습니다.
00:33:159 (6) - 요기 있는 노트 위치를 바꿔 보는 것이 순조롭게 흘러가는데 도움이 될거 같습니다.
00:51:258 - 예비박자 노트 하나 추가 하면 맨 윗글과 같이 일정하게 유지되는데 도움이 될거같다 싶음.
00:53:582 (3) - 요 노트 위치를 다른데로 놓아서 점프를 일정하게 http://puu.sh/3WDbr.jpg 대충 이렇게 랄까.... 아니면 저상태에서 오른쪽으로 이동시켜서 4각 노트 형성하는것도 좋을듯..
01:24:133 (3) - 요거 오른쪽으로 휘지말고 왼쪽으로 휘는게 좋을거같음.


결과적으로 말하자면 지금 맵이 점프가 큼. 그거에 맞출라면 일단 순조롭게 진행이 되면 좀 덜딱딱한 느낌이 들어서 플레이어들이 하기 편할거같음
그걸 위주로 일단 모딩을 진행했긴 함.
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Rugure wrote:

모딩모딩~

[Insane]
00:09:250 (5) - ctrl + g 눌러서 수정하면 약간 맵이 순조로워지는것 같네요. Pass!
00:09:582 (6) - ^ Pass!
00:13:401 (1) - 이거 스핀제거하고 노트 추가하는게 나을듯함 모든난이도에 스핀이 없는데 그것에 맞춰서 스핀을 안넣는게 나을듯.Pass! 다른 난이도에 스핀없다고해서 같이 맞출 필요없음
00:15:061 (2) - 여기 뉴콤보를 제거하고 Pass!
00:14:729 (1) - http://puu.sh/3WDUM.jpg 혹은 http://puu.sh/3WDVK.jpg 아니면 5연타가 나을지도 모르겠음.. Pass!
00:16:057 - 이 부분에 노트 하나 추가하는게 박자를 일정하게 유지하는게 좋을 것 같습니다.Pass!
00:33:159 (6) - 요기 있는 노트 위치를 바꿔 보는 것이 순조롭게 흘러가는데 도움이 될거 같습니다.Pass!
00:51:258 - 예비박자 노트 하나 추가 하면 맨 윗글과 같이 일정하게 유지되는데 도움이 될거같다 싶음. Pass!
00:53:582 (3) - 요 노트 위치를 다른데로 놓아서 점프를 일정하게 http://puu.sh/3WDbr.jpg 대충 이렇게 랄까.... 아니면 저상태에서 오른쪽으로 이동시켜서 4각 노트 형성하는것도 좋을듯..00:52:918 (6) 하고 겹치는 것때문에 그냥 Pass!
01:24:133 (3) - 요거 오른쪽으로 휘지말고 왼쪽으로 휘는게 좋을거같음.Pass!


결과적으로 말하자면 지금 맵이 점프가 큼. 그거에 맞출라면 일단 순조롭게 진행이 되면 좀 덜딱딱한 느낌이 들어서 플레이어들이 하기 편할거같음
그걸 위주로 일단 모딩을 진행했긴 함.
내가 워낙 자기주장이 강해서.. NO KUDOSU
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
Hi~TaMul

[Easy]

00:06:261 (1,2) - 이거 2번이 1번을 감싸는 형태로 만들어주시면 보기 좋을듯!

00:47:605 (2) - 간격 지켜주시는게 어때요? 점프넣지말고 ㅇㅂㅇ..

01:07:529 (2) - 는 이것도

01:24:466 (2) - x172 y316 으로 해주시는게 더 좋을것같아요 ( 이지는 전부 다 그냥 찔러본말이니 거의다 거절당하겟죠 'ㅂ'!! )

[UWS's Normal]

01:05:869 (2) - Delete

[Insane]

00:57:152 (4) - 위쪽말고 아래쪽으로 향하게 'ㅂ'.. x156 y232 정도로 'ㅂ'..

[KiHard]

SPOILER
AI 모드

00:02:296 (1) - 뉴콤보 해제하는게 더 좋지않을까요?

01:01:718 (3) - HP바 닿는거같은데요 'ㅂ' ..?

01:04:707 (3) - 위와같음 'ㅂ'..

01:19:817 (1) - 이것도 .. 근데 선은 상관없을까요 ? 서서히 좁아지는선 ㅇㅇ.. 노트 칠때 나오는거요 'ㅂ' .. 만약 상관없다면 안고치셔도될듯하네요 'ㅂ'..! 위에 2개랑 이거랑 'ㅂ'!!

맵좋네요!! 스타줄꺠요!! 랭크 힘내세요!!!!!~
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~TaMul

[Easy]

00:06:261 (1,2) - 이거 2번이 1번을 감싸는 형태로 만들어주시면 보기 좋을듯! 이미 그렇게 되어있는데?

00:47:605 (2) - 간격 지켜주시는게 어때요? 점프넣지말고 ㅇㅂㅇ..앞에 노트 수정했어요

01:07:529 (2) - 는 이것도 패스

01:24:466 (2) - x172 y316 으로 해주시는게 더 좋을것같아요수정! ( 이지는 전부 다 그냥 찔러본말이니 거의다 거절당하겟죠 'ㅂ'!! )



[Insane]

00:57:152 (4) - 위쪽말고 아래쪽으로 향하게 'ㅂ'.. x156 y232 정도로 'ㅂ'.. 수정!



맵좋네요!! 스타줄꺠요!! 랭크 힘내세요!!!!!~
감사합니다~ ;)
UnitedWeSin
891 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin

[ Zzz ] wrote:

[UWS's Normal]

01:05:869 (2) - Delete
That's an interesting suggestion, but I'm sorry I think I want to leave it. I'd like to follow the transition with the 2, and I intended for it to flow down into the bend of the 1.

Thanks very much for modding.^^
K i A i
662 posts
Joined March 2011
K i A i
ang
osu file format v12

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166,277,70186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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GugUCorn
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tetsutaro
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comes this mod.

[General]
:?: What does green and neon green combo color has to do with Attack on Titan? Explain or change.
:!: Bad usage of spinners: the beginning of spinners intruded by previous notes. <Easy> 01:26:126 (2,1) and <Hard> 01:26:458 (3,1) and <Insane> 01:26:624 (1,1)

[Easy]
:!: Little regard of how the map presents the music.
:!: Bad use of combo color: we have combo colors for a reason: to signify continuous stanzas of the music. By letting previous combo take over the starting point of the next stanza (like 00:14:729 and 00:28:012).
:!: OMG you are those I-just-make-Easy-because-I-have-to-and-I-don't-f*cking-care-how-it-turn-out kind of people, because your <Insane> is something.

[Normal]
00:39:303 (2,3) - With (1) it is somewhat expected to have the remaining notes only having 1/2 difference. Try lengthening these two by 1/2.
00:45:280 (3) - Vocal considerations, extend the beginning by 1/2.
01:17:160~ - Try something a little bit different OK?
:idea: Thank Easy for blowing the no-crappy-Easy star, because the Normal is nice, too nice for that Easy.

[Hard/Insane]
:idea: <Hard> rated a tad higher than <Insane>. Reduce OD in <Hard> by 1
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