This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, June 17, 2009 at 7:57:16 PM

Artist: Haru
Title: Voyage 1969 (Instrumental)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Techno Touhou Instrumental Viotex
BPM: 117
Filesize: 9667kb
Play Time: 03:02
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.9 stars, 421 notes)
2. Normal (3.96 stars, 227 notes)

Download: Haru - Voyage 1969 (Instrumental)
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For the Viotex Project.

Comments & criticism always appreciated!
Credits to Shinxyn for helping with the spinner and Cyclone for most of the images.

Thanks to everyone who helped!

waah you started playing with all hitsounds
Nevertheless its still your style~~ but more jumps than usual

And wheres my spinner credit! (unless of course you plan to change it later )

Nexy...
This map
is
freaking
awesome.
Bad thing is you struggle clicking design and timing with the green lines =P
Dramatic Song.
Cute Spinner =3

You seriously liked it? @_@ Am I the only one that found it boring D:? Thanks for checking!

Hard:
In the beginning before the slider, the drain is really bad with so few notes, but the drain is fine for later. You might want to try to map a little more in the beginning.
00:06:86 (4) - I think it would look better if you put the start of 4 directly under the end of 2
00:13:14 (1,2,3,4) - 1 and 3 are not aligned, but 2 and 4 are. Choose what you want to do.
00:18:40 (1) - align with blue 3?
00:27:63 (2,3,4) - make this a vertical reflection of the red 1 before it
00:33:78 (4) - make this a horizontal reflection of 2
00:35:58 (4,5) - make these horizontal reflections of 2 and 1 respectively
00:37:89 (2) - make this a horizontal reflection of 1 (a few pixels off)
00:42:50 (2) - align with the red 3 two combos before
00:45:07 (4) - align with the white 2 3 combos before
00:48:40 (7) - make a vertical reflection of 5
00:57:76 (4,5) - align with the red 4
01:01:73 (2,4) - make these vertical reflections of the pink 1 and 3
01:13:01 (5) - spacing between 1 and 3 is different from the spacing between 3 and 5
01:15:07 (7) - align with 5
01:19:68 (7) - align vertically with 5?
01:20:96 (3) - align vertically with 1?
01:25:32 (3) - make a replica of 1
01:26:86 (3,4,5) - it might look nice if all 3 of these were parallel
01:29:42 (3) - make a replica of 2
01:30:45 (1) - realign with the end of 3
01:31:22 (3) - align with the end of 1
01:35:58 (4) - make a replica of 1
01:36:60 (1) - don't use grid snap and align this with 3
01:59:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make this a horizontal reflection of the red combo before it
02:16:60 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it would be nice if this formed a straight line
02:28:14 (1,1) - this jump is quite a bit harder than your other jumps. It would be nice if you made a vertical edge jump
02:34:04 (5,6,7,8) - arrange these so they from a x
02:51:73 (1,2,3,4) - 2 and 4 are different distance from the center and 1 and 3 are
02:53:01 (1,2,3,4) - " "

Nice beatmap. Star. (awaiting future diff.)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Hard:
In the beginning before the slider, the drain is really bad with so few notes, but the drain is fine for later. You might want to try to map a little more in the beginning.
This was intentional. I want the drain to be going down and for the player to pick it up. If that made any sense. o.o
00:57:76 (4,5) - align with the red 4
Can't. Either I align (1,2) with the red 3 or do yours. The spacing becomes inconsistent if I go with yours.
01:15:07 (7) - align with 5
Looks better where it is D:!
01:26:86 (3,4,5) - it might look nice if all 3 of these were parallel
Parallel as in the same slant or right next to each other?
01:59:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make this a horizontal reflection of the red combo before it
I like the way it is right now D:!
02:28:14 (1,1) - this jump is quite a bit harder than your other jumps. It would be nice if you made a vertical edge jump
These are stacked. Not a jump unless you meant from 8 to 1, which I don't see how it's hard o.o.
02:34:04 (5,6,7,8) - arrange these so they from a x
Don't they already? Unless you mean stack the ends o.o.

Thanks for the mod!

As far as keeping the BG art consistent to what song they go to, This song needs a picture of Kaguya and/or Eirin. Looking at your folder, Touhou48 should do the trick. (seeing as that's the only picture they appear in)

Also, The character used for the spinner doesn't even appear for 2 games. It IS a nice spinner though.

Also, the image you have would work well with "Septette for the Dead Princess"

Nexy your normal request is still not finish. And I might make a "fog" effect, if you want.

Thanks Cyclone. Not really familiar with the Touhou games all that well. I'll ask Shin to change the spinner. Changed the background to the one you mentioned.

@WyndII: Take your time. Go ahead with the fog effect. o:!

Nexy wrote:

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Hard:
Parallel as in the same slant or right next to each other?
same slant
02:28:14 (1,1) - this jump is quite a bit harder than your other jumps. It would be nice if you made a vertical edge jump
These are stacked. Not a jump unless you meant from 8 to 1, which I don't see how it's hard o.o.
I accidentally rearranged that one while I was modding sorry
02:34:04 (5,6,7,8) - arrange these so they from a x
Don't they already? Unless you mean stack the ends o.o.
if you look at the the current pattern, the location of each of the ends have different positions in respect to each other. I would like all the sliders to end in a way that forms a square with the ends.

Thanks for the mod!

The new bg fits a lot better, but I was wondering if there was any pic in that folder that has Kaguya and/or Eirin stand more in the foreground. That would probably look better than having the two rabbits dominate the image.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

The new bg fits a lot better, but I was wondering if there was any pic in that folder that has Kaguya and/or Eirin stand more in the foreground.

Cyclone wrote:

Looking at your folder, Touhou48 should do the trick. (seeing as that's the only picture they appear in)

I supposed i could look around for more pictures if you all want. Also, Nexy, go ahead and PM me everytime a map gets put up, and i'll make sure the BG's match the songs.

That would be awesome Cyclone. I actually did want another more dramatic BG than the current one but I really can't find any that has Erin/Kaguya in it.

Thank You!

Hi Nexy
, touhou19, touhou34, tohou38, tohou41, of course tohou45 can help for the SB XD

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http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=11d3 ... f6e8ebb871

^ SB: is just a test but if you like it say yes. If you don't say no.
SB is not yet done though and its only a test.
if I'll show maybe you can give me ideas etc etc. and more pix plox ^o^ those pix are not helping me I want Eirin... EIrin Eirin Eirin! and moon and sky.. mine has bad quality >.<.

I love it WyndII. Some stuff I noticed that wasn't that good:

It would be better if the image didn't zoom for the 2nd time when your difficulty starts and after my first spinner. Maybe something else?
The reimu was here picture is really dark. You can try this one: Click Me if you like it.

BTW, did you use storyboard sounds? A lot of my hitsounds have changed and I don't like them that much o.o! If you have MSN or Xfire, I can send you a lot of pictures.

Other than that it's great. Thanks !

uhm yea... I use a custom overdrive 1. for softfinish instead I put normalhit O.O

and Glad you like it now to edit it xD

It's awesome. Realy.

[Normal]
01:25:325 (1) - Maybe add clap here?
01:29:428 (1) - ^
01:33:531 (1) - ^
01:37:633 (1) - ^
02:28:402 (1) - Sorry, but why new combo?
03:01:223 (1) - Another new combo... Don't get it. =(

[Hard]
02:20:967 (6) - Maybe place this note here 02:21:224?

Amazing.
Starred.

tieff wrote:

[Normal]
02:28:402 (1) - Sorry, but why new combo?
03:01:223 (1) - Another new combo... Don't get it. =(

The music is different on both 1's. @_@ If that made any sense. Also, I just didn't like the claps at the timings you mentioned.

Thanks for modding!

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Normal:
00:13:91 (3,4) - move down 1 notch (3) to align with 1 and 2 respectively
00:22:24 (3) - align with the rest of the combo
00:25:83 (3) - spacing is slightly off here
00:27:88 (3) - " "
00:51:99 (3) - spacing
01:05:32 (4) - make a vertical reflection of 2
01:08:40 (3) - spacing
01:09:68 (3) - " "
01:13:53 (4,1) - make both horizontal reflection of 2 from either combo
01:31:47 (3,4) - might want to align with 1,2 respectively
01:32:50 (1) - this is not a 180º spin of 01:28:40 (1) (probably not a problem)
01:35:58 (3,4) - same as 01:31:47 (3,4)
02:00:96 (3,5,6,7,8) - 3 and 5 are not vertical reflections of the bottom combo. After fixing that, remember to fix sliders 6,7,8
02:05:32 (1,2,3,4) - make this a square centered around the origin
02:09:17 (3) - spacing
02:10:45 (2) - " "
02:17:12 (2) - " "
02:18:65 (4) - " "
02:33:78 (3) - align with 4 from previous combo
02:38:40 (1,2,3,4) - the spacing is slightly off through these 4 notes
02:47:37 (2,4) - make a 180º spin of 1,3
02:50:45 (2) - make a 180º spin of 1
02:58:91 (3) - slightly off reflection of 1

I am a little afraid about 00:09:42 (1,2,1,2) being too hard for normal.

That is all. Fine map.

Offset: 1,757 ms?

- All:
Nice hitsounds and spinner, but nothing is spinning! Haha.

Ahh, I have no problems with this map!

Thanks blissfulyoshi and Takuma. I'll wait for another opinion on the offset, as I will have to move every single green timing point >_<!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I am a little afraid about 00:09:42 (1,2,1,2) being too hard for normal.

I'll wait for a 2nd opinion on this too.

new spinner is ok

great map

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Thank you leimiliya, Gabi and Jeffro !

Man... Your current avatar has such a small head compared to the body. ._.

Normal~

1. 00:13:91 (3,4) - Move 1 tick to the right.
2. 01:38:65 (1) - Yay! Redo break after spinner. (It'll shorten)

Hard~

1. 00:44:04 (4) - Move 1 tick to the left.
2. 02:20:19 (2,3,4) - LOL!!!! Move a tick down.
3. 02:24:04 (1,1) - Move 1 tick to the right.
4. 02:26:86 (6,7,8) - Move 1 tick to the left. OR stack the circles on top of the sliders exactly like what you we're doing.
5. 02:35:58 (8) - Move a tick down. Then fix up 02:36:09 (1), etc. to your liking.

Great job!

Lol @ avatar comment xD! Thanks for modding !

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star_count++;

o: Thank you!

Offset feels early. Maybe add 10 ms. Also it is preferred if you have a timing section either before or on the first note. If you were to add a section on the 1st note, the offset comes out to 1737, so something like 1747 or so should do the trick.

Hard:

00:13:14 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds incredibly awkward. I'd say more notes would clean it up. I would like you to mess around with it though instead of me suggesting something here.
02:51:73 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4) - This just seems kinda lazy.

EDIT I should probably mod normal, eh?

Normal:

Gets kinda jumpy at times for a normal... Like at 01:08:91() - and 02:58:65() -

00:13:14 (1,2,3,4) - Same thing as Hard.

Changed everything you mentioned except the jumps in Normal. I figured Normal shouldn't be too easy and the jumps are not that hard to reach, even for a Normal.

Thanks for modding!

Normal- Most of these mods are to make normal easier (your probably NOT ganna do them...)
00:09:43 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - rather not have these 1/4 next to each other
02:01:74 (6,7,8) - don't place behind the combo?
02:08:15 (1) - would sound better as just 3 notes (reduce two repeats and add note to where this used to end?)
02:09:69 (1) - ^
02:32:25 (6) - nazi- up a tick
02:40:46 (1,2,1) - space this instead of stack
Kinda jumpy, but whatever

Hard-
00:28:79 (1,2) - sounds weird to me
00:52:51 (5) - right two or three ticks?
01:34:05 (7) - right a tick?
02:20:20 (2) - down a tad bit?
Hitsounds are very unique, don't think I want to really mod those xD

Too lazy to re-download atm >_<;

^Didn't do everything but thanks for the mod!

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wonderful beatmap

Thank you Cyclone and Kyou! I changed the patterns again at 00:13:15 and made the jumps at 02:55:59 a little closer.

WyndII wrote:

Nexy...
This map
is
freaking
awesome.

^
<3 it. Star.

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Thanks for the mod and stars! I removed the jumps you mentioned osuplayer111.

Nothing, starred

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00:34:56 (6,1) - Interesting jump...

I used distance snap 2.0 for this jump. It should be fine o.o.

00:51:49 (1,2,3,4,5) - The shape here looks a bit odd. ( (5) seems to stick out a bit...)

I do not see what you see here D:!

00:57:38 (1,2,3,4,5,7,8) - It could get slightly confusing when the notes are cluttered up like this.

It's not that cluttered D:<!

Thanks for the mod !

[Normal]
02:01:74 (6) - Align the end with 5 also not the same angle as 7 and 8
02:02:25 (7) - Align the end with 3

[Hard]
00:13:15 (1) - O.o Align with 1
02:51:74 (1,3) - why are these further away from 1 than 3 and 4?

Only things I can point out.

Starred.

Hikato wrote:

[Normal]
02:01:74 (6) - Align the end with 5 also not the same angle as 7 and 8
02:02:25 (7) - Align the end with 3

Nuuu! I want them to be the same angle. Thanks for the mod !

Holy carp @ yellow bars

I got nothin

*

hahahaha
i don`t need to find a custom hitsound for you
you only need to do one thing
the hitsounds will be 1000000% better

Remove all normal whistles

Nice map <3