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Lily Allen - Not Fair

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lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 18 ottobre 2009 at 20.54.55

Artist: Lily Allen
Title: Not Fair
BPM: 121,5
Filesize: 3187kb
Play Time: 02:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,77 stars, 367 notes)
  2. Insane (4,99 stars, 499 notes)
  3. KyO's MiX (4,98 stars, 527 notes)
  4. Sir Minelli's Normal (4,35 stars, 257 notes)
Download: Lily Allen - Not Fair
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Omg my third beatmap in 2 weeks :O
Last edited by lthefuryl , edited 38 times in total.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Hard]

01:40:80 (7) - Suona meglio se finisce qui : 01:41:301
01:43:27 (2) - New combo causa jump.
01:43:77 (3) - ^
01:44:26 (4) - New combo.
01:50:68 (2) - Aggiungi clap.
02:06:48 (2) - ^

Ottima mappa. Migliore sempre piu bravo fury. Star :)
[Youmu]
87 posts
Joined August 2008
[Youmu]
Star for hard
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
hi hi

[Hard]
00:14:63 (7) - move this back 1/4 so it lands on blue tick, then space it
00:20:56 (5) - ^ same here, move back 1/4 to blue tick
00:22:53 (4) - ^ same here
01:03:89 (4) - ^
01:17:84 (6) - ^
02:44:26 (1) - this, I think this should end on 02:45:992

[Insane]
it's not finished, but it looks pretty fine so far

btw, hard was pretty fun ;D
star4you*
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
Offset:

7.456

=)
[Youmu]
87 posts
Joined August 2008
[Youmu]
forgot to star now it starred from me xD
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
K Claps looks cool dude

but fix ur breaks in insane, and slighty fix em in hard, but if this advice isn't worth it, don't give kudosu, cause ur not done yet
right?

hard
01:03:505 - add note here and make sure its still spaced with the pattern
01:32:88 (6) - end on the white tick it's close to
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ok ty EEeee...i've fixed all ur things :P
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Found nothing on hard, just some nazi things on Insane.

[insane]

00:09:43 (2,3) - 1 grid right? dunno
00:10:17 (4) - 1 grid left
01:12:14 (8) - 1 grid up
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - these overlaps aren't realy visible
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Hard]
01:01:03 (5) - Make it a smoother horizontal slider
02:09:18 (3) - Take out grid snap to make this a smoother vertical slider
02:11:65 (4) - End this on the white tick 02:12:394
02:23:75 (4) - Just a suggestion but add finishes after the end of the combos like this one?
02:33:62 (4) - You could align this with 1

[Insane]
00:52:39 (8) - Make the slider start at 8 instead?
01:34:12 (5) - Start the slider at 5
01:55:23 (4,5) - Place on the blue ticks instead
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - This will probably confuse some people
02:10:41 (x) - Add a note here?
02:11:40 (1) - End at white tick before break
02:23:75 (7) - Add a finish?
02:25:72 (8) - ^
02:27:70 (8) - ^
02:31:40 (9,10,11) - The spacing doesn't seem right here
02:44:98 (15) - This also might trick people


The beatmap seems fun :)
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
[Hard]

00:16:34 (1,2) - Spacing too far.
02:06:46 (2,3) - Spacing too close.

[Insane]

Fine.

And star.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[HARD]

01:01:03 (5) - the end of this sldiers a little off. move it up a little so its completely horozontal
01:12:39 (8) - maybe start the combo here instead of (1)?

[INSANE]

01:03:01 (2) - maybe start combo here instead of (1)?
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - im not sure whether overlapping sliders like these are legal in maps anymore. i'd ask a BAT whether you can have these like that
02:34:86 (5) - new combo?
02:39:55 (10) - move this over to the left by 1, grid level 3



pretty good map. pretty fun too, streams <3

star'd
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
plz think about what kioukiou and Doomsday93 mod
i will take a look again

by the way
use volume 85% is better IMO
i see a big improvement in hitsounds
good job
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
lol ok Alace ty :) i've fixed all your things ty and ty doomsday93 :P <3
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Hard~
  1. 02:11:65 (4) - Redo break after this slider.

Insane~
  1. 00:52:51 (9) - Redo break after beat.
  2. 02:11:40 (1) - Redo break after spinner.
  3. 02:30:41 (6) - Move this up a tick so it aligns diagonally.
Good job.
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ty Mafiamaster :) fixed
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,739 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
Whee~

[Hard]:
00:14:36 (6,7,8) - Where's the claps?
01:40:78 (7) - You know, you had a break after this area before. Why not do it again?

[Insane]:
01:42:51 (x) - Add beat? Or replace this whole thing with a spinner like the area before.
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - Hidden sliders :(


You're a beatmap factory. <_>;;; This is good work you did. Not so many mistakes~

Star.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
you didn`t fix what i suggest (85% volume)
if you) don`t like the suggestion
plz post that
I won`t change that................... blabla
Luxary
826 posts
Joined August 2008
Luxary
[Hard]

Perfect <3

[Insane]

00:08:93 (8) - Necessary?
00:10:91 (7) - ^

Awesome Beatmap!!! <3 Starred!

PS: 02:38:07 (7) and 02:44:98 (15): ROTFL@Skype XDXDXD
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Luxary wrote:

PS: 02:38:07 (7) and 02:44:98 (15): ROTFL@Skype XDXDXD
loooool Luxary however ty ;) fixed
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
[Hard]
00:52:39 (6) - Align the end with the start
01:06:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - Align with 01:05:97 (5)
01:32:88 (6) - Align end with start.

[Insane]
00:10:66 (5,6,7) - Align on end of 4 properly
00:27:45 (5,6) - ^
00:33:87(x) - Place one here?
00:41:53 (2) - Align on end of 1 properly.
00:42:76 (9) - 1 grid 3 up.
01:05:72 (4) - Align on end of 3 properly.
01:20:78 (1,2,3) - Align 1 with end of 5.
01:34:86 (6,7) - Align with end of 5.
01:38:56 (7) - Align with 01:38:19 (4)
01:39:06 (1) - ^
01:41:28 (10) - Align the end with 7.
02:01:77 (2) - Align under 1 properly.

Nice map.
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
Ty Hikato :) fixed
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Since I won't be able to find some flaws without nazi-modding, ill nazi-mod :D

Insane:
00:10:66 (5) - You see this? Remove the 3 beats that are stacked here and replace them on the sliders end. There are more places with this, I'll mark them with a (*) In many cases yit's hard to see the difference though xD
00:16:34 (6) - Move 1 up and fix the beats after it all following the straight pattern.
00:19:55 (2) - *
00:24:98 (4) - Place 1 to the left
00:27:45 (5) - *
00:41:53 (2) - *
00:49:67 (4) - can you make this stream more rounded?
01:05:72 (4) - *
01:11:90 (6~8) - Place this triple in a line
02:01:28 (1~3) - illegall pattern, Make the sliders more visible, players must see that there are no reverse arrows on the sliders.
02:11:15 (6) - Replace with Distance spacing 1,1x
02:27:94 (9) - New combo
02:29:43 (7) - Un-combo
02:29:92 (1) - New combo
02:30:17 (2) - Un-combo

Hard:
00:20:41 (5) - *
00:28:44 (2) - *
00:28:93 (3) - *
00:29:43 (4) - *
00:50:41 (6) - *
01:01:03 (5~7) - *
01:24:98 (2) - *
02:09:67 (4) - *
02:33:38 (3~6) - This spacing seems out of place


yeah, like Alace said, hitsound volume 85% plz. This doesn't sound right.
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
k lesjuh i've fixed all and i've changed the hitsound's volume to 85% :) ty
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
i think you sent me a request but i cant remember, anyway heres my mod ^^

[Hard]
Couldnt find anything

[Insane]
Suggestions:
After this note, 00:33:38 (6), put a note here 00:33:87 (7) ?
if you do make sure you do it on the other places aswell

01:19:80 (4) - abit out of the screen


great map

stär
cesc
1,066 posts
Joined August 2008
cesc
ma lol!
è possibile che tu mappi tutte canzoni che adoro???
Grande Marco <3
Ti darei una stella ad occhi chiusi, ma preferisco aspettare che torni il PC, almeno per provarla XD
Spero che sia Ranked prima del mio ritorno...
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:073 - Add a note here,
  2. 00:29:43 (4) - Move it 1/2 foward, add a note at 00:29:431 and then cut the slider by 1/2,
  3. 00:51:15 (1) - Align vertically with (6),
  4. 00:57:82 (5) - Move it 1/2 foward, add a note at 00:57:826 and then cut the slider by 1/2,
  5. 01:50:912 - Add a note here,
  6. 02:06:715 - Add a note here,
  7. 02:29:43 (4) - New combo here,
  8. 02:34:369 - Add a note here,
  9. Just a little suggestion:
    1. 02:43:75 (7) - Move 1/2 foward, add a note at 02:43:628 and then extend slider to 02:44:986 and then 02:44:24 (1) - should start at 02:45:110 and end at 02:45:974.
[Insane]
Clear.
----------------------
You should make an easier diff (like Easy).
For now -> .
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
[Hard]
00:54:86 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe you could tone this down a little? As in make the spacing a little smaller.
01:42:76 (1,1,1) - ^

Eh, I think this needs an easier difficulty as well for this to be ranked, though. ;S
Have a star for now, though.
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Takuma wrote:

[Hard]
00:54:86 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe you could tone this down a little? As in make the spacing a little smaller.
01:42:76 (1,1,1) - ^

Eh, I think this needs an easier difficulty as well for this to be ranked, though. ;S
Have a star for now, though.
ok i'll make it :)
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
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lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Armin wrote:

Really, this is a cool beatmap!
Star 8-)
ty :) now i make the normal difficult :P
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
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Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
[Hard]

00:23:75 (4) - Finish sound


[Insane]

00:23:75 (4) - Finish sound
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Sir Minelli wrote:

[Hard]

00:23:75 (4) - Finish sound


[Insane]

00:23:75 (4) - Finish sound
ty sir :) and ty for your difficult in this song :oops: :P :D
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
Here you go.

Download: Lily Allen - Not Fair (lthefuryl) [Sir Minelli's Normal].osu
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Sir Minelli wrote:

Here you go.
can i add it?? anyway thanks sir minelli :oops: :P

EDIT: i've posted Sir Minelli's Difficult :lol: enjoy
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
so i've added another difficult: KyO's MiX :) :D ;) enjoy
Kyocciola
146 posts
Joined November 2008
Kyocciola
Modded in IRC/SKYPE the preview point, SO give me a kudosu NAU o.o xD

Also, added kiai sections in my diff, here it is the lastest version.

Ps: Starred~! ;P

Download: Lily Allen - Not Fair (lthefuryl) [KyO's MiX].osu
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Kyocciola wrote:

Modded in IRC/SKYPE the preview point, SO give me a kudosu NAU o.o xD

Also, added kiai sections in my diff, here it is the lastest version.

Ps: Starred~! ;P
ty kyo...i've added your lastest version...now all is ok..
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Gran bella canzone!
Per ora, non ci metterò le mani, ma intanto la mia stella è tua!
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,739 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
[Sir Minelli's Normal]:
Lower HP Drain by a bit so at least it can be more of an 'easiest difficulty'?

[KyO's MiX]:
There are now new rules about the usage of Kiai Time. D: Basically fountain-abusing them isn't acceptable anymore. I'll give you the quote:
Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely. Kiai time is meant to accent chorus sections. You can toggle it off and on halfway through the chorus if that looks good, but using it constantly every 4-8 beats is just stupid.
Can you do something about that? ^^

Other than that, it's a pretty solid map. Please move this into Pending.
Kyocciola
146 posts
Joined November 2008
Kyocciola
Kiai now its only in the refrains and at the end of the sliders... Tell me if I have to change it again, but I dont want to do that .-. 'cause I don't like kiai so much, but when I use it in my maps/difficulties I try to use it with method...

Up

Download: Lily Allen - Not Fair (lthefuryl) [KyO's MiX].osu
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ty kyo :)
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
sir minelli normal and kyo's mix are ok kirby :)...i've fixed all :)
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lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
sir minelli normal and kyo's mix are ok kirby :)...i've fixed all :)
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ops...double post...lag :X sorry
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
[KyO's MiX]


Please lower the hp drain. It is way too much.
EEeee
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EEeee
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