Lily Allen - Not Fair · forum

lthefuryl

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-14T20:30:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 18 ottobre 2009 at 20.54.55

Artist: Lily Allen
Title: Not Fair
BPM: 121,5
Filesize: 3187kb
Play Time: 02:44
Difficulties Available:

Hard (4,77 stars, 367 notes)
Insane (4,99 stars, 499 notes)
KyO's MiX (4,98 stars, 527 notes)
Sir Minelli's Normal (4,35 stars, 257 notes)

Download: Lily Allen - Not Fair
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Omg my third beatmap in 2 weeks :O

Last edited by lthefuryl 2009-10-18T18:54:58+00:00, edited 38 times in total.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2009-05-15T13:06:07+00:00

[Hard]

01:40:80 (7) - Suona meglio se finisce qui : 01:41:301
01:43:27 (2) - New combo causa jump.
01:43:77 (3) - ^
01:44:26 (4) - New combo.
01:50:68 (2) - Aggiungi clap.
02:06:48 (2) - ^

Ottima mappa. Migliore sempre piu bravo fury. Star

[Youmu]

87 posts

Joined August 2008

[Youmu] 2009-05-16T03:06:03+00:00

Star for hard

eee

692 posts

Joined January 2008

eee 2009-05-16T18:36:01+00:00

hi hi

[Hard]
00:14:63 (7) - move this back 1/4 so it lands on blue tick, then space it
00:20:56 (5) - ^ same here, move back 1/4 to blue tick
00:22:53 (4) - ^ same here
01:03:89 (4) - ^
01:17:84 (6) - ^
02:44:26 (1) - this, I think this should end on 02:45:992

[Insane]
it's not finished, but it looks pretty fine so far

btw, hard was pretty fun ;D
star4you*

Sir Minelli

524 posts

Joined September 2008

Sir Minelli 2009-05-17T22:59:14+00:00

Offset:

7.456

=)

[Youmu]

87 posts

Joined August 2008

[Youmu] 2009-05-17T23:13:17+00:00

forgot to star now it starred from me xD

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-17T23:40:15+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-05-22T01:07:24+00:00

K Claps looks cool dude

but fix ur breaks in insane, and slighty fix em in hard, but if this advice isn't worth it, don't give kudosu, cause ur not done yet
right?

hard
01:03:505 - add note here and make sure its still spaced with the pattern
01:32:88 (6) - end on the white tick it's close to

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-22T01:36:58+00:00

ok ty EEeee...i've fixed all ur things

happy30

Featured Artist

2,064 posts

Joined August 2008

happy30 2009-05-31T16:01:33+00:00

Found nothing on hard, just some nazi things on Insane.

[insane]

00:09:43 (2,3) - 1 grid right? dunno
00:10:17 (4) - 1 grid left
01:12:14 (8) - 1 grid up
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - these overlaps aren't realy visible

Sleep Powder

1,540 posts

Joined October 2008

Sleep Powder 2009-05-31T16:20:31+00:00

[Hard]
01:01:03 (5) - Make it a smoother horizontal slider
02:09:18 (3) - Take out grid snap to make this a smoother vertical slider
02:11:65 (4) - End this on the white tick 02:12:394
02:23:75 (4) - Just a suggestion but add finishes after the end of the combos like this one?
02:33:62 (4) - You could align this with 1

[Insane]
00:52:39 (8) - Make the slider start at 8 instead?
01:34:12 (5) - Start the slider at 5
01:55:23 (4,5) - Place on the blue ticks instead
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - This will probably confuse some people
02:10:41 (x) - Add a note here?
02:11:40 (1) - End at white tick before break
02:23:75 (7) - Add a finish?
02:25:72 (8) - ^
02:27:70 (8) - ^
02:31:40 (9,10,11) - The spacing doesn't seem right here
02:44:98 (15) - This also might trick people

The beatmap seems fun

kioukiou

774 posts

Joined June 2008

kioukiou 2009-05-31T16:20:32+00:00

[Hard]

00:16:34 (1,2) - Spacing too far.
02:06:46 (2,3) - Spacing too close.

[Insane]

Fine.

And star.

Doomsday

osu! Alumni

1,960 posts

Joined July 2008

Doomsday 2009-05-31T17:33:33+00:00

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[HARD]

01:01:03 (5) - the end of this sldiers a little off. move it up a little so its completely horozontal
01:12:39 (8) - maybe start the combo here instead of (1)?

[INSANE]

01:03:01 (2) - maybe start combo here instead of (1)?
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - im not sure whether overlapping sliders like these are legal in maps anymore. i'd ask a BAT whether you can have these like that
02:34:86 (5) - new combo?
02:39:55 (10) - move this over to the left by 1, grid level 3

pretty good map. pretty fun too, streams <3

star'd

Alace

osu! Alumni

3,088 posts

Joined August 2008

Alace 2009-05-31T18:25:55+00:00

plz think about what kioukiou and Doomsday93 mod
i will take a look again

by the way
use volume 85% is better IMO
i see a big improvement in hitsounds
good job

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-05-31T19:03:17+00:00

lol ok Alace ty

i've fixed all your things ty and ty doomsday93

<3

Mafiamaster

osu! Alumni

3,460 posts

Joined July 2008

Mafiamaster 2009-05-31T19:18:45+00:00

Hard~

02:11:65 (4) - Redo break after this slider.

Insane~

00:52:51 (9) - Redo break after beat.
02:11:40 (1) - Redo break after spinner.
02:30:41 (6) - Move this up a tick so it aligns diagonally.

Good job.

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-06-01T10:46:15+00:00

ty Mafiamaster

fixed

Starrodkirby86

osu! Alumni

3,723 posts

Here since the beginning

Starrodkirby86 2009-06-02T05:44:33+00:00

Whee~

[Hard]:
00:14:36 (6,7,8) - Where's the claps?
01:40:78 (7) - You know, you had a break after this area before. Why not do it again?

[Insane]:
01:42:51 (x) - Add beat? Or replace this whole thing with a spinner like the area before.
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - Hidden sliders

You're a beatmap factory. <_>;;; This is good work you did. Not so many mistakes~

Star.

Alace

osu! Alumni

3,088 posts

Joined August 2008

Alace 2009-06-02T08:35:12+00:00

you didn`t fix what i suggest (85% volume)
if you) don`t like the suggestion
plz post that
I won`t change that................... blabla

Luxary

826 posts

Joined August 2008

Luxary 2009-06-02T18:01:28+00:00

[Hard]

Perfect <3

[Insane]

00:08:93 (8) - Necessary?
00:10:91 (7) - ^

Awesome Beatmap!!! <3 Starred!

PS: 02:38:07 (7) and 02:44:98 (15): ROTFL@Skype XDXDXD

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-06-02T18:06:55+00:00

Luxary wrote:
PS: 02:38:07 (7) and 02:44:98 (15): ROTFL@Skype XDXDXD

loooool Luxary however ty

fixed

Hikato

444 posts

Joined August 2008

Hikato 2009-06-02T18:08:59+00:00

[Hard]
00:52:39 (6) - Align the end with the start
01:06:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - Align with 01:05:97 (5)
01:32:88 (6) - Align end with start.

[Insane]
00:10:66 (5,6,7) - Align on end of 4 properly
00:27:45 (5,6) - ^
00:33:87(x) - Place one here?
00:41:53 (2) - Align on end of 1 properly.
00:42:76 (9) - 1 grid 3 up.
01:05:72 (4) - Align on end of 3 properly.
01:20:78 (1,2,3) - Align 1 with end of 5.
01:34:86 (6,7) - Align with end of 5.
01:38:56 (7) - Align with 01:38:19 (4)
01:39:06 (1) - ^
01:41:28 (10) - Align the end with 7.
02:01:77 (2) - Align under 1 properly.

Nice map.

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-06-02T18:18:23+00:00

Ty Hikato

fixed

Lesjuh

Elite Mapper

2,442 posts

Joined October 2008

Lesjuh 2009-06-02T18:20:08+00:00

Since I won't be able to find some flaws without nazi-modding, ill nazi-mod

Insane:
00:10:66 (5) - You see this? Remove the 3 beats that are stacked here and replace them on the sliders end. There are more places with this, I'll mark them with a (*) In many cases yit's hard to see the difference though xD
00:16:34 (6) - Move 1 up and fix the beats after it all following the straight pattern.
00:19:55 (2) - *
00:24:98 (4) - Place 1 to the left
00:27:45 (5) - *
00:41:53 (2) - *
00:49:67 (4) - can you make this stream more rounded?
01:05:72 (4) - *
01:11:90 (6~8) - Place this triple in a line
02:01:28 (1~3) - illegall pattern, Make the sliders more visible, players must see that there are no reverse arrows on the sliders.
02:11:15 (6) - Replace with Distance spacing 1,1x
02:27:94 (9) - New combo
02:29:43 (7) - Un-combo
02:29:92 (1) - New combo
02:30:17 (2) - Un-combo

Hard:
00:20:41 (5) - *
00:28:44 (2) - *
00:28:93 (3) - *
00:29:43 (4) - *
00:50:41 (6) - *
01:01:03 (5~7) - *
01:24:98 (2) - *
02:09:67 (4) - *
02:33:38 (3~6) - This spacing seems out of place

yeah, like Alace said, hitsound volume 85% plz. This doesn't sound right.

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-06-03T18:33:56+00:00

k lesjuh i've fixed all and i've changed the hitsound's volume to 85%

ty

Gabi

2,554 posts

Joined December 2008

Gabi 2009-06-09T15:52:38+00:00

i think you sent me a request but i cant remember, anyway heres my mod ^^

[Hard]
Couldnt find anything

[Insane]
Suggestions:
After this note, 00:33:38 (6), put a note here 00:33:87 (7) ?
if you do make sure you do it on the other places aswell

01:19:80 (4) - abit out of the screen

great map

stär

cesc

1,066 posts

Joined August 2008

cesc 2009-06-11T13:07:44+00:00

ma lol!
è possibile che tu mappi tutte canzoni che adoro???
Grande Marco <3
Ti darei una stella ad occhi chiusi, ma preferisco aspettare che torni il PC, almeno per provarla XD
Spero che sia Ranked prima del mio ritorno...

SteRRuM

678 posts

Joined October 2008

SteRRuM 2009-06-19T21:53:02+00:00

Hi!
[Hard]

00:18:073 - Add a note here,
00:29:43 (4) - Move it 1/2 foward, add a note at 00:29:431 and then cut the slider by 1/2,
00:51:15 (1) - Align vertically with (6),
00:57:82 (5) - Move it 1/2 foward, add a note at 00:57:826 and then cut the slider by 1/2,
01:50:912 - Add a note here,
02:06:715 - Add a note here,
02:29:43 (4) - New combo here,
02:34:369 - Add a note here,
Just a little suggestion:
1. 02:43:75 (7) - Move 1/2 foward, add a note at 02:43:628 and then extend slider to 02:44:986 and then 02:44:24 (1) - should start at 02:45:110 and end at 02:45:974.

[Insane]
Clear.
----------------------
You should make an easier diff (like Easy).
For now ->

.

Takuma

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined October 2008

Takuma 2009-06-19T23:58:40+00:00

[Hard]
00:54:86 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe you could tone this down a little? As in make the spacing a little smaller.
01:42:76 (1,1,1) - ^

Eh, I think this needs an easier difficulty as well for this to be ranked, though. ;S
Have a star for now, though.

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-06-20T00:24:37+00:00

Takuma wrote:
[Hard]
00:54:86 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe you could tone this down a little? As in make the spacing a little smaller.
01:42:76 (1,1,1) - ^

Eh, I think this needs an easier difficulty as well for this to be ranked, though. ;S
Have a star for now, though.

ok i'll make it

Armin

osu! Alumni

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Armin 2009-06-25T19:21:19+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

lthefuryl

183 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

lthefuryl 2009-06-25T19:27:39+00:00