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Lily Allen - Not Fair

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kioukiou
[Hard]

00:16:34 (1,2) - Spacing too far.
02:06:46 (2,3) - Spacing too close.

[Insane]

Fine.

And star.
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[HARD]

01:01:03 (5) - the end of this sldiers a little off. move it up a little so its completely horozontal
01:12:39 (8) - maybe start the combo here instead of (1)?

[INSANE]

01:03:01 (2) - maybe start combo here instead of (1)?
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - im not sure whether overlapping sliders like these are legal in maps anymore. i'd ask a BAT whether you can have these like that
02:34:86 (5) - new combo?
02:39:55 (10) - move this over to the left by 1, grid level 3



pretty good map. pretty fun too, streams <3

star'd
Alace
plz think about what kioukiou and Doomsday93 mod
i will take a look again

by the way
use volume 85% is better IMO
i see a big improvement in hitsounds
good job
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
lol ok Alace ty :) i've fixed all your things ty and ty doomsday93 :P <3
Mafiamaster
Hard~
  1. 02:11:65 (4) - Redo break after this slider.

Insane~

  1. 00:52:51 (9) - Redo break after beat.
  2. 02:11:40 (1) - Redo break after spinner.
  3. 02:30:41 (6) - Move this up a tick so it aligns diagonally.
Good job.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ty Mafiamaster :) fixed
Starrodkirby86
Whee~

[Hard]:
00:14:36 (6,7,8) - Where's the claps?
01:40:78 (7) - You know, you had a break after this area before. Why not do it again?

[Insane]:
01:42:51 (x) - Add beat? Or replace this whole thing with a spinner like the area before.
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - Hidden sliders :(


You're a beatmap factory. <_>;;; This is good work you did. Not so many mistakes~

Star.
Alace
you didn`t fix what i suggest (85% volume)
if you) don`t like the suggestion
plz post that
I won`t change that................... blabla
Luxary
[Hard]

Perfect <3

[Insane]

00:08:93 (8) - Necessary?
00:10:91 (7) - ^

Awesome Beatmap!!! <3 Starred!

PS: 02:38:07 (7) and 02:44:98 (15): ROTFL@Skype XDXDXD
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Luxary wrote:

PS: 02:38:07 (7) and 02:44:98 (15): ROTFL@Skype XDXDXD
loooool Luxary however ty ;) fixed
Hikato
[Hard]
00:52:39 (6) - Align the end with the start
01:06:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - Align with 01:05:97 (5)
01:32:88 (6) - Align end with start.

[Insane]
00:10:66 (5,6,7) - Align on end of 4 properly
00:27:45 (5,6) - ^
00:33:87(x) - Place one here?
00:41:53 (2) - Align on end of 1 properly.
00:42:76 (9) - 1 grid 3 up.
01:05:72 (4) - Align on end of 3 properly.
01:20:78 (1,2,3) - Align 1 with end of 5.
01:34:86 (6,7) - Align with end of 5.
01:38:56 (7) - Align with 01:38:19 (4)
01:39:06 (1) - ^
01:41:28 (10) - Align the end with 7.
02:01:77 (2) - Align under 1 properly.

Nice map.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
Ty Hikato :) fixed
Lesjuh
Since I won't be able to find some flaws without nazi-modding, ill nazi-mod :D

Insane:
00:10:66 (5) - You see this? Remove the 3 beats that are stacked here and replace them on the sliders end. There are more places with this, I'll mark them with a (*) In many cases yit's hard to see the difference though xD
00:16:34 (6) - Move 1 up and fix the beats after it all following the straight pattern.
00:19:55 (2) - *
00:24:98 (4) - Place 1 to the left
00:27:45 (5) - *
00:41:53 (2) - *
00:49:67 (4) - can you make this stream more rounded?
01:05:72 (4) - *
01:11:90 (6~8) - Place this triple in a line
02:01:28 (1~3) - illegall pattern, Make the sliders more visible, players must see that there are no reverse arrows on the sliders.
02:11:15 (6) - Replace with Distance spacing 1,1x
02:27:94 (9) - New combo
02:29:43 (7) - Un-combo
02:29:92 (1) - New combo
02:30:17 (2) - Un-combo

Hard:
00:20:41 (5) - *
00:28:44 (2) - *
00:28:93 (3) - *
00:29:43 (4) - *
00:50:41 (6) - *
01:01:03 (5~7) - *
01:24:98 (2) - *
02:09:67 (4) - *
02:33:38 (3~6) - This spacing seems out of place


yeah, like Alace said, hitsound volume 85% plz. This doesn't sound right.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
k lesjuh i've fixed all and i've changed the hitsound's volume to 85% :) ty
Gabi
i think you sent me a request but i cant remember, anyway heres my mod ^^

[Hard]
Couldnt find anything

[Insane]
Suggestions:
After this note, 00:33:38 (6), put a note here 00:33:87 (7) ?
if you do make sure you do it on the other places aswell

01:19:80 (4) - abit out of the screen


great map

stär
cesc
ma lol!
è possibile che tu mappi tutte canzoni che adoro???
Grande Marco <3
Ti darei una stella ad occhi chiusi, ma preferisco aspettare che torni il PC, almeno per provarla XD
Spero che sia Ranked prima del mio ritorno...
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:073 - Add a note here,
  2. 00:29:43 (4) - Move it 1/2 foward, add a note at 00:29:431 and then cut the slider by 1/2,
  3. 00:51:15 (1) - Align vertically with (6),
  4. 00:57:82 (5) - Move it 1/2 foward, add a note at 00:57:826 and then cut the slider by 1/2,
  5. 01:50:912 - Add a note here,
  6. 02:06:715 - Add a note here,
  7. 02:29:43 (4) - New combo here,
  8. 02:34:369 - Add a note here,
  9. Just a little suggestion:
    1. 02:43:75 (7) - Move 1/2 foward, add a note at 02:43:628 and then extend slider to 02:44:986 and then 02:44:24 (1) - should start at 02:45:110 and end at 02:45:974.
[Insane]
Clear.
----------------------
You should make an easier diff (like Easy).
For now -> .
Takuma
[Hard]
00:54:86 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe you could tone this down a little? As in make the spacing a little smaller.
01:42:76 (1,1,1) - ^

Eh, I think this needs an easier difficulty as well for this to be ranked, though. ;S
Have a star for now, though.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Takuma wrote:

[Hard]
00:54:86 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe you could tone this down a little? As in make the spacing a little smaller.
01:42:76 (1,1,1) - ^

Eh, I think this needs an easier difficulty as well for this to be ranked, though. ;S
Have a star for now, though.
ok i'll make it :)
Armin
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Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Armin wrote:

Really, this is a cool beatmap!
Star 8-)
ty :) now i make the normal difficult :P
Mashley
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Topic Starter
lthefuryl
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Sir Minelli
[Hard]

00:23:75 (4) - Finish sound


[Insane]

00:23:75 (4) - Finish sound
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Sir Minelli wrote:

[Hard]

00:23:75 (4) - Finish sound


[Insane]

00:23:75 (4) - Finish sound
ty sir :) and ty for your difficult in this song :oops: :P :D
Sir Minelli
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Sir Minelli wrote:

Here you go.
can i add it?? anyway thanks sir minelli :oops: :P

EDIT: i've posted Sir Minelli's Difficult :lol: enjoy
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
so i've added another difficult: KyO's MiX :) :D ;) enjoy
Kyocciola
Modded in IRC/SKYPE the preview point, SO give me a kudosu NAU o.o xD

Also, added kiai sections in my diff, here it is the lastest version.

Ps: Starred~! ;P

Download: Lily Allen - Not Fair (lthefuryl) [KyO's MiX].osu
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Kyocciola wrote:

Modded in IRC/SKYPE the preview point, SO give me a kudosu NAU o.o xD

Also, added kiai sections in my diff, here it is the lastest version.

Ps: Starred~! ;P
ty kyo...i've added your lastest version...now all is ok..
Lokamp
Gran bella canzone!
Per ora, non ci metterò le mani, ma intanto la mia stella è tua!
Starrodkirby86
[Sir Minelli's Normal]:
Lower HP Drain by a bit so at least it can be more of an 'easiest difficulty'?

[KyO's MiX]:
There are now new rules about the usage of Kiai Time. D: Basically fountain-abusing them isn't acceptable anymore. I'll give you the quote:
Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely. Kiai time is meant to accent chorus sections. You can toggle it off and on halfway through the chorus if that looks good, but using it constantly every 4-8 beats is just stupid.
Can you do something about that? ^^

Other than that, it's a pretty solid map. Please move this into Pending.
Kyocciola
Kiai now its only in the refrains and at the end of the sliders... Tell me if I have to change it again, but I dont want to do that .-. 'cause I don't like kiai so much, but when I use it in my maps/difficulties I try to use it with method...

Up

Download: Lily Allen - Not Fair (lthefuryl) [KyO's MiX].osu
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ty kyo :)
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
sir minelli normal and kyo's mix are ok kirby :)...i've fixed all :)
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
sir minelli normal and kyo's mix are ok kirby :)...i've fixed all :)
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ops...double post...lag :X sorry
Sir Minelli
[KyO's MiX]


Please lower the hp drain. It is way too much.
EEeee
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Sir Minelli

EEeee wrote:

well anyways always a nice map, i liked all the diffs, except sir's his was gay j/k j/k Sir, c'mon i was just messin with ya ;_;
Fuck you

EEeee wrote:

Yo, bro i remember u offered me a chance to make a diff, can i still make one? if not, no problem, i should've when u u asked ;_;
Say no, too much difficulties already and his difficulties sux

:)

Also, I hope a BAT mods this map, I really like this gay song and i want it ranked ok? kkthxbai
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Sir Minelli wrote:

EEeee wrote:

well anyways always a nice map, i liked all the diffs, except sir's his was gay j/k j/k Sir, c'mon i was just messin with ya ;_;
Fuck you

EEeee wrote:

Yo, bro i remember u offered me a chance to make a diff, can i still make one? if not, no problem, i should've when u u asked ;_;
Say no, too much difficulties already and his difficulties sux

:)

Also, I hope a BAT mods this map, I really like this gay song and i want it ranked ok? kkthxbai
ahahahahah lol sir :P so plz BAT mods this map!!!!!!!!!
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

EEeee wrote:

Sir Minelli's Normal
00:52:888 - fix break
00:56:83 (5) - new combo?
01:03:75 (3) - what the hell is this, it sounds like ass bro, put in on the white tick, 1/4 divisor
01:06:96 (7) - new combo

Hard
01:55:851 - fix break
wow that's it ;_; ur good

KyO's MiX
00:40:04 (2) - new combo
00:42:76 (1,2) - Nice jump, and the others that look like this
01:43:25 (2) - new combo just like b4, i think it's necessary and will help spacing ^^ (if i missed some that looked like this, plz add new combo)
01:58:56 (2) - ^

Insane
00:55:35 (1) - move down a bit so it's straight like the rest of the pattern
wow again, that's it ;_;

Yo, bro i remember u offered me a chance to make a diff, can i still make one? if not, no problem, i should've when u u asked ;_;

well anyways always a nice map, i liked all the diffs, except sir's his was gay j/k j/k Sir, c'mon i was just messin with ya ;_;
ok EEeee i've fixed all ;)
mtmcl
Bub
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

mtmcl wrote:

Bub
ty mark :P
Jarby
Get a better mp3.

Sir Minelli's Normal:

01:41:53 - Remove break.
01:58:07 (1) - Remove, replace break

Hard:

00:37:08 (4,5,6) - Remove, extend break.

00:54:86 (1) - Remove, extend break.
00:55:35 (1) - Moving this in the top centre to create a triangle pattern would be effective.
01:10:66 (1,2) - Remove, extend break.
01:41:28 - Remove break.
01:56:09 - This break really isn't necessary.

KyO's Mix:

00:29:55 (1) - Too short.
00:55:35 - Remove kiai and all those other bursts. In fact...
Add kiai to the final chorus of all difficulties.
00:42:76 (1) - Annoying jump.
00:44:73 (1) - ^ Yeah, all of those styled jumps are.
01:32:76 (1) - Too short.

Insane:

00:52:51 (9) - Remove.
00:54:86 (1) - Remove, extend break.
01:58:07 (1) - Remove, extend break.
02:44:98 (9) - Unpredictable.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

JarJarJacob wrote:

Get a better mp3.

Sir Minelli's Normal:

01:41:53 - Remove break.
01:58:07 (1) - Remove, replace break

Hard:

00:37:08 (4,5,6) - Remove, extend break.

00:54:86 (1) - Remove, extend break.
00:55:35 (1) - Moving this in the top centre to create a triangle pattern would be effective.
01:10:66 (1,2) - Remove, extend break.
01:41:28 - Remove break.
01:56:09 - This break really isn't necessary.

KyO's Mix:

00:29:55 (1) - Too short.
00:55:35 - Remove kiai and all those other bursts. In fact...
Add kiai to the final chorus of all difficulties.
00:42:76 (1) - Annoying jump.
00:44:73 (1) - ^ Yeah, all of those styled jumps are.
01:32:76 (1) - Too short.

Insane:

00:52:51 (9) - Remove.
00:54:86 (1) - Remove, extend break.
01:58:07 (1) - Remove, extend break.
02:44:98 (9) - Unpredictable.
omg this song is in waiting since 9 months...all osu's players have seen and have moded this song and all of these players haven't found all these problems...i think that for 2011 this song will be ranked... :roll: :roll:
Mafiamaster
Minelli~
Add "Sir Minelli" to the tags.

Kyo~

00:29:55 (1) - Yeah, too short.
01:32:76 (1) - ^
Add "Kyocciola" to the tags.

Insane~

00:52:51 (9) - Doesn't sound too good since it doesn't go with anything.

Fix and I'll bubble.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Mafiamaster wrote:

Minelli~
Add "Sir Minelli" to the tags.

Kyo~

00:29:55 (1) - Yeah, too short.
01:32:76 (1) - ^
Add "Kyocciola" to the tags.

Insane~

00:52:51 (9) - Doesn't sound too good since it doesn't go with anything.

Fix and I'll bubble.
thanks mafiamaster...fixed
Mafiamaster
Kay, bubbled.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Mafiamaster wrote:

Kay, bubbled.
ty :P
mtmcl
Kay ranked.
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