Hi~ from captin threatening me to mod :3333

[White]
00:52:743 (1,2) - make 1 parallel to 2?
00:58:181 (2,3,4) - make these symmetrical?
01:06:806 (1) - unnecessary NC maybe
01:08:118 (1) - yup as i said before lol.. i'm still against this slowdown-after-big-jumps here. :p no change
02:01:931 (1,2,3,4) - how about changing the rhythm like this↙

(put 2 on (288,256), 3 on (368,336) and Ctrl + G the slider 4)

02:09:056 (1) - unnecessary NC maybe
02:10:368 (1) - hmm this one's fine i guess. it plays well in contrast to the one above
02:12:243 (4,5) - rotate 5 a bit counterclockwise to make the jump more natural?
02:16:931 (10,11,12,13,1) - make these curved upwards, not downwards to flow better I have no idea what you were trying to say here, but I did something and it feels better

[Red]
00:27:618 (6) - (nazi) stack perfectly?
00:37:743 (1) - one suggestion.. Ctrl + H,J,G it? don't really matter if you choose not to but i think this small change looks better and aslo clarifies the rhythm from 7
01:35:868 (7,8) - (nazi) better blanket? (curl 8 more)
01:41:681 (6) - Ctrl + G and blanket 5? more interesting to play + looks better (keeps the criss-cross movement from 5 to 9 consistent)
01:49:556 (5,6,7) - this↓ might look better

01:55:181 (2,3,4) - (nazi) keep the gap between sliders consistent to look better?
02:04:181 (4,5,6) - make a triangle? looks better and you made a triangle with 02:05:118 (1,2,3,4) - these and 02:06:806 (5,6,7,8) - these too so it'll be nice
02:19:556 (6) - give a curve a bit?

[Blue]
00:31:556 (1) - end this on the white tick?
00:33:056 (3,4) - i recommend this↓ rhythm. right now it's kinda confusing for normal players..

00:38:306 (1) - start this on 00:38:306 - and end on 00:38:681 - ?
00:49:556 (1,2) - (nazi) try blanketing 2 with 1 (curve upward 2)
01:04:556 (3) - end this on white tick?
01:35:306 (2) - ^
01:42:806 (4,1) - no touch plz no look good imo (supernazi) hitler
02:19:181 (3) - curve the opposite?

heheeeheheheahaaehuehuehueahue

Hi, Form my modding queues
[Bule]

1. 00:29:306 (2) - move to x304 y272 and how about if slide end 00:30:056 - ?
2. 00:45:056 (3) - why you no mirror with 00:43:556 (1) -
3. 00:47:775 (3) - blanket
4. 00:50:587 (3) - how about this
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:14:025 (3) - blanket
6. 01:35:306 (2) - blanket ?
7. 01:48:806 (1) - don't make touch other note. move this

[Red]

1. 00:35:681 (4) - I think (Ctrl + G) is better flow
2. 01:49:931 (6) - move to x188 y116
3. 01:50:306 (7) - move to x272 y144
4. 01:55:931 (4) - blanket
5. 02:00:806 (4) - move to x256 y328

[White]

1. 00:21:431 (6) - overlap 00:19:556 (1) -
2. 00:23:868 (5) - move 2nd point on slide down 1 gird. it's better overlap I hate this style lol ;p
3. 00:24:618 (7) - up 1 gird if you change ↑
4. 00:26:118 (2) - move to x112 y208
5. 00:35:306 (4) - move to x322 y317 (pass "T" to close Grid snap)
6. 00:49:931 (2) - blanket
7. 02:15:431 (5) - move to x50 y152

All fixed!
That all
Good luck

Hi~ here my ugly mod o3o

[General]

This is a short version, right? changes the name to: Tiara - BALLOON (Short Ver.) There's rules on the percent of the song that needs to be cut before it becomes (Short Ver.). It's like 50%, and this is about 60-70. So I can't do this


[Blue]

00:25:556 (1,2) - Don't overlap notes, thats can be confused for new players
00:39:056 (2) - Changes the slider end to 00:39:806 - , sounds less empty
00:40:556 (4) - ^ Same, slider end to 00:41:306 -

[Red]
I didn't find nothing, I feel so noob >.<

[White]

00:26:112 (2,3) - Moves that something like this: http://puu.sh/2Ml5P.jpg
01:06:612 - add a circle here? and put in the middle to do a anti-jump Don't like how that plays
01:38:862 (6) - ctrl + G, the flow feels better
01:54:987 (1) - Maybe ctrl + G? >.<



Sorry for my short mod, I'm steel noob doing this >.< All good! Keep at it man, you'll get better, I promise

Hello captin~ modding from In-game request

Things in Red must be fixed.
Things in Purple are highly suggested to be considered.
Others are normal suggestions.




That's all~
Nice map~ :3 thanks! all the rest fixed!

Yo. From my queue.

General:
add to title (Cut ver.), because you have is this case; Guidelines are guidelines. If a staff member tells me I should add to the title then I will, but I don't think it's necesssary

Blue:
you have unsnapped patters, for example - all fixed
00:22:550 (1) -
00:27:050 (3) -
00:33:050 (3) -
00:36:050 (4) -
00:46:550 (1,2) -
01:19:550 (2) - make this slider a more beautiful
02:21:800 (2) - ^
also you have somewhere distance error(spacing), fix it please.
and another - add more hitsounds and up volume


Red:
00:34:362 (8) - remove this note k


White:
OD -2, AR -1! Did OD -1, this is too easy OD 7 and AR 8 makes it harder to read
00:36:612 (7) - move on x:152 y:200 k
00:44:112 (1) - remake slider. This slider unrankable k
00:50:112 (1) - remove NC The NC's are there to warn of the slowdown and then keep combo color consistent through a phrase. None of these changed
00:51:612 (1) - ^
01:08:112 (1) - ^
01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove this patterns and add one slider; and add 7 reverses jesus you people can't play this? it's not hard. nobody decent has problems with it
01:20:300 (1) - remove NC
01:36:050 (9) - move on 2 grid in right side not sure what you said here but w/e
01:36:425 (10) - remove note and add one repeat for 01:36:050(9) k
01:39:425 (7) - NC
01:46:362 (1,1) - remove NC and remake 01:47:862(1), he is unrankable
01:52:362 (1,1) - remove NC
02:10:362 (1) - ^
02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5), because this pat is unreadable same as 01:14:675 ^


GL

yo captin1 from #modreqs
I have played this map once from your queue lol



All the rest fixed!
GL captin1

Hi o/
Summoned here because you know why :v hehe

Here I go.

[General]
I could barely hear the hitsounds in some parts, use values around 70~80% when you use the soft sampleset. will poke around with this, I thought so too
I suggest to not use white combo color, it becomes brighter during kiai time, and may hurt the eyes, sadly this likely happens with very light gray too. ;c went with light gray anyways

[Blue]
Increase AR by 1, AR3 is slow for this diff. >-<
00:25:925 (2) - Move this to 00:26:112, sounds better imo, no need to shorten.
00:33:050 (3,4) - I don't like how this overlap looks, you can do something like I show below, it may harm your spacing a bit, so fix if you do, or you can do anything else if you have a better idea.
00:45:987 - I think something like any of this could sound better, actually 00:46:175 (4), sounds a bit weird for me. The first sounds better though, this may be just personal feeling, feel free to ignore.


00:52:175 (4) - Maybe something similar as above.
00:54:050 (3) - A 3/4 slider with 1 repeat would hear very nice instead the one you have now.
01:48:425 (4) - As in 00:45:987
01:53:300 (3) - Maybe make the curve more similar as 01:54:237 (4), it'd look nicer imo.

[Red]
00:18:050 (1) - NC here.
00:19:175 (1) - And maybe here too.
00:51:050 (5) - Maybe make the shape leading to the next slider?
This diff looked nice, I enjoyed playing it, so I can't say much here. :3 thanks

[White]
00:18:050 (1) - NC here.
00:19:175 (1) - And maybe here too.
00:31:550 - 00:43:550 - For this part you could put NC each downbeat, your combos seems a bit large.
01:33:800 - 01:45:800 - ^
And the same for the last kiai.
00:41:862 (6) - You can move this around x:320 y:184, I feel the flow will be better as it's somehow following 00:40:925 (2,3,4,5) and leading to the next slider.
00:43:550 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - This whole part could be better if all was with the 0.50x multiplier, it'd make your slowdown for those sliders more fitting, I felt it quite odd while playing. Also, you can split those sliders into circles and avoid this. this'll stay for now, it's interesting and hopefully makes enough sense
00:49:550 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - ^ ^
00:55:925 (1) - Maybe add a break before this spinner, people would shout in pain due their life keeps being drained (not really, but something similar). nah, the space is too short
01:08:581 - I felt a note is missing here. that note wouldn't fit with how I have this mapped atm, if I have to change this I will add it in
01:45:800 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - You know what I'm going to say here. ^
01:51:237 (1) - Remove the whistles in the blue ticks for this slider, sounds a bit weird.
01:51:800 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2) - Yep. ^
01:58:175 (1) - Same as I mentioned a bit above, a break would be before this. ^
02:21:237 (4) - I hope you didn't place it here just for the sake of being stacked to previous notes, I recommend moving it around x:488 y:192, it'd form a similar pattern like 02:20:675 (2,3).
Sadly I couldn't find anything else that could be improved here :c

All the rest fixed~
I think that's all from my part, good luck /o/

HI~ captin1 mod as you request o3o hehe


White has a fourth color that's used as a warning to odd sections/notes, all other diffs don't need it

Hi from your M4M
In the blue:
00:16:558 (1,2) - Could fold more these slider some like this:


00:21:620 (3,1) - Also could organíze them like this:


00:36:058 (4) - Also could organíze it like this


01:19:558 (2,3) - Here these note are fine but I feel that look a bit weird, I suggest replace for two slider more Little like this

And using only the White note:


In the Red
Just two things 00:52:933 (2,4) - these should be straight?

Good job

In the Winter
Why?, this difficulty have a color more it feel weird
00:32:683 (5) - Move to x:320 y:56
02:09:808 (1,2,3,1) - Here there is a problema because there is not enough time for hit to 02:10:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I think it's fine as it is

Good luck

Hello! Modding for M4M.

[White]

Drain Rate: consider decreasing. The problem is slightly alleviated because you toss in extra NCs in some places, but for the sections where you don't have much purple flying around HP recovery can be very, very slow. All it takes is a couple of mistakes in those sections and suddenly the player is very sad. done

00:22:558 (1,2,3) - counter-intuitive spacing. Your map is somewhat jumpy so with spacing like this the expectation is that these notes are 1/2 beats apart, not 1 beat apart. Consider adding objects to fill the spaces, which I think would also help to improve the flow of the entire section here by making the object placement more continuous. yeah I played around with this idea, think it does work

00:31:933 (2,3) - This fits the rhythm better, in my opinion:

It's also more consistent with your later patterns. kay

In general, I think this section could benefit from a rearrangement. I'm pretty biased against straight sliders, but curved sliders do flow much more smoothly in most cases and feel more "natural". To be honest, this section looks a bit sloppy as well; I think your organization could use more symmetry and equilateral shapes.

Personally, this is how I would possibly arrange the first two measures:
1. this one I liked, did something similar
2. don't like the flow in this one at all, sorry
Of course I'm stepping waaaay beyond my role as modder at this point but I hope I've given you some idea on how to make improvements on both appearance and play in this section. all good, they're solid ideas

01:04:558 (1,2,3) - The spacing here needs adjusting. Considering the player just came from 01:02:683 (4,1,2) they're most likely expecting 1/2 beat jumps, but these notes here are 3/4 beats apart, and the spacing here isn't different enough to suggest this difference in rhythm.

One trick is to use a central anti-jump:

cool thanks

02:06:808 (1,2,3,4) - See above.

01:09:058 - I think this section could also use some remapping. The arrangement does look better here because you use consistent angles for your sliders, but I still think curving out some of these sliders will really help with creating more enjoyable play. Your jumps tend to use a lot of sharp, straight angles, so rather than making your sliders also straight, you can contrast with curved sliders so as the give the flow more variety. I think a remap is pretty extreme. I don't carefully craft my maps with pretty patterns cause that bores me. I pattern when the flow allows the pattern to be there. Flow is first, maps are meant to be played, not looked at

01:12:058 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like this combo, for example, if you just curved this sliders slightly upwards and to the left, this passage would be much more enjoyable to play through, in my opinion.

Overall, I think the map could use a bit more work. Pay special attention to the placement of your objects; for example, your map has a lot of triangular patterns, but these triangles are often arranged asymmetrically, and it does make the map appear somewhat messy.

There are sections where you put gaps in the timeline to better match the vocal rhythm, but keep in mind that one of the most common causes of ambiguity and confusing play in jumpy/variable spacing maps is an inconsistent/non-steady rhythm.

[Red]

00:31:933 (2,3,4,5) - Deceiving stacks. These objects are spaced differently in time, so you should also space them differently on the map.
Note that this isn't exactly a problem at 00:39:808 (7,1) because of the NC.

Because of your consistent spacing in this difficulty, sections like 01:04:558 (4,5,6,7) aren't issues here, as far as I can tell.

This is a very well-designed difficulty! Your arrangement is aesthetically pleasing, the rhythms you've chosen to work with are interesting, and the map flows smoothly with few spacing issues.
thanks :3
[Blue]

00:51:058 (3,4) - A bit awkward. I think something like this would work better:


02:07:558 - Adding a note here would complement the rhythm, I think.

I don't see any other issues. Good work!

[Closing]

Your Blue and Red difficulties are solid and play well. Your White could use some work though, in my opinion. Try and apply some of the symmetry and careful arrangement of your Blue and Red maps to your White as well; while White is much more jump-focused than the other two, don't neglect its aesthetic elements.

Good luck with ranking! very thought provoking mod for white, thank you

[Timing]
BPM:160
Offset:1578 (+20 from the original offsets) did +10

[BLUE]
00:19:183 (3) - add clap to the start of the slider
00:24:058 (3) - add clap to the end of the slider
00:25:558 (1) - add finish
00:40:183 (3,5) - remove clap
01:00:058 (3) - add nc
01:03:808 (2,5) - add clap
02:07:558 - add a note with hitsound of clap

I can't mod other diffs well that's unfortunate

Ello! Random mod! oh my

*Blushes* This song sounds nice tiara so good <3

Hope this helps~!

Make sure changes improve your map.

Blue
There were some parts I would have done differently. A lot of this is only opinion.

00:16:568 (1) - End with whistle
00:21:068 (2,3) - The angle here is not ideal, but it works for what you are trying to do. no change is necessary.
00:27:068 (3,4) - A weird alignment. It looks better if 4 was placed where 3 is pointing. rotated 3 to point at 4 instead
00:34:568 (1) - Whistle
00:35:505 - Add note here. Better flow. Spacing doesn't matter as much.
00:38:318 (1) - I think this looks better with the curve pointing up instead. Now beatwise, there's a strong beat 1/2th earlier. I think it sounds better if it started on the previous beat but you would sacrifice a bit of the look for the better rhythm. I'm not sure you should go that route or not.
00:39:068 (2,3,4) - Very small, but turn grid snap off to get these spacings exactly equal.
00:42:068 (1,2,1) - The gaps are shorter than previous parts of the song. Previous patterns are distances from other objects and this is very close. You can adjust so that the gaps resemble the rest of the song. I see what you mean, however I'm not exactly sure how to correct this well, I'll keep it in mind and maybe something will come to me later but for now no change
00:44:505 (2) - I think you could create a much better pattern if this were extended by 1/2th (follows vocals). The pattern you have is decent though.
01:01:568 (2) - Use a more defined curve to match the other sliders in this section. It's slightly too flat.
01:04:568 (3) - This ends too close to 2 >.< I'm not sure what to suggest to make it better though. I think I figured out what to do here
01:15:630 (1) - add more of a curve? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/950479
01:45:818 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of boring IMO. It doesn't carry much flow. I came up with this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/950496 Incorporates more of the rhythm and the object here 01:48:255 - is avoided. I didn't like the transition into the next combo. If you don't remap, still try to make it go into the next combo better. I didn't remap like that, however I did rearrange a bit so that it flows better
01:54:255 (4) - end with whistle.
02:06:818 (3) - You used a more complex rhythm here, but not in the first section. Maybe go complex for both sections?
02:11:318 (1,2,3,4) - This is so much better than what you did here 01:09:068 (1,2,3,4) -. I like the angles.

Red
Your maps have a trend of getting better the further into the song it gets. Why is that? cause I have no idea what I'm doing usually, I figure it out as I go

00:25:755 (2) - Move to x 332 y 64?
00:37:755 (1) - Use a slighter curve here. It will fit better IMO.
00:44:130 (2,3,4,5) - Transitions awkwardly. I like it better when there is just a note here 00:44:786 - for the vocals. It's cleaner and reduces the confusion through here.
00:46:380 (8,1) - Picking up the triple after the gap is unintuitive. I see you did a similar pattern later in the song but that one was much more intuitive. For some reason the way the next pattern is placed is unintuitive. I think it's because in the other pattern you lead into it with a slider. ah, did that then
00:47:318 (5,6) - I think these should be further apart.
00:58:568 (4,5,6) - Ugly- use a different pattern.
00:59:318 - Whistle to be consistent with next pattern
00:59:880 (1) - whistle on body/redtick doesn't sound good. Only have whistle on end.
01:05:318 (7,1) - Too close.
01:07:755 (2,3) - space closer to 1.20 with grid snap off so that 3,4 spacing doesn't look so small.
01:34:193 (1) - feels so slow, and kills my feel for the beat. Splitting up into a 1/2th slider and a note flows so much better IMO. (Note: it may be my framerate making it feel slower. I realized the sliders in general feel sluggish). no I agree
01:36:818 (1) - ^ similar issues
01:55:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not very interesting IMO. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/950576 ?
02:02:130 (1) - whistle on end instead of start

White
Very fun jumps in this difficulty. <3 <3

00:17:505 - I feel these two sounds should be represented in the map somehow. I like the minimalist intro as it is
00:34:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - weird pattern, but works I guess. stacking the middle notes looks better than making that shape IMO. I suggest increasing the spacing of 00:35:318 (4,5) - and use more complex linear sliders. What do you think? I think the stacked notes are good, however the 4,5 is fine as it is
00:46:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This plays very nicely. yay >//<
00:50:130 (1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - The spacing and velocity changes make this so awkward to play. Please use more 1.3 snap here.
01:03:068 (2,3,1) - I suggest using equal spacing here for more intuitive flow.
01:05:318 (4,5,1) - ^ This is designed with the odd rhythm in mind, so no change for now
01:07:380 - Please add a note here. This gap is making it really difficult to hit the next part correctly. when there is a note here I can hit the next part perfectly fine.
01:34:005 (1,2) - Kind of randomly placed. Don't you think?
01:41:880 (3,4) - I feel this spacing should be larger. This flows badly.
01:43:380 (3,4) - ^
01:45:818 (1,2) - Randomly placed... doesn't look good. I think it looks slightly better if it's a mirror of 01:47:130 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/950606 Make sure the correct notes stack.
01:48:818 (1) - Bad overlap with the purple slider. If the purple slider was further away, I would suggest stacking on the end of it. i'm not sure how that would affect the flow. I think the stack works, so I went with it
01:53:318 (2,3,4) - too large. It feels like an unfitting change in flow. 1.5/1.7 is better flow IMO.
02:03:443 (6) - end whistle?
02:04:568 (2) - whistle
02:05:130 (1) - I think it would look better if this were placed inward rather than outward.

[Blue]
00:25:568 (1) - i'd make a jump here, maybe (156,336)? I'd prefer to avoid that if possible

[Red]
00:19:943 (1) - move somewhere not to overlap 00:19:568 (5) -
00:37:755 (1) - ctrl+g and put 00:38:130 (2) - between 1 and 3
01:49:943 (6) - boring, try making some jumps for such Hard diff

[White]
AR-1, too fast x_x I find it easier to read with ar 9, since I do so many overlapping jumps

Good, but for all 3 diffs, they have pretty bed flows. plz ask me in game about that if you want to improve the flows :/ I'll try and catch you sometime

Hi ! M4M yay








That's all ! Good luck, hope this map gonna be your first ranked map :° You deserve it ! Gogo

After a long time here I am.

[General]
I don't think Vocaloid is a source. It would be like putting "piano" as a source for a piano song.

Add tags: append Tashihun Output-P Shinri Hizumi


[Blue]

00:20:130 (1,2) - nazi blanket fix
00:32:693 (2,3) - nazi blanket fix
00:34:943 (2,3) - I could see this as a potential readability problem for beginners. Consider ctrl+ g on (2) and make it so that they're lined up and not stacked so that it is clear at what point in time (3) happens.
00:55:943 (1) - I think this spinner is too short. Either replace with a slider or remove and have a break then start mapping again at 00:57:068.
01:06:068 (5) - NC here for consistency and
01:07:568 (1) - remove NC here
01:38:318 (2,3) - delete 3 and extend 2 to where 3 was. No reason to have these quick circles after sliders if you can avoid it.
01:52:755 (2) - have this angle more downward for a more natural flow from the previous circle.
01:53:318 (3,4) - This plays better to me if you delete (4) and add a repeat to (3) and then a circle where (4) used to end.

This difficulty is a bit tricky for your easiest one. A lot of polarity swaps and odd rhythms, but i guess the nature of the song makes it hard. yeah, I did my best while trying to keep the rhythm not just 1/1 or 1/2

[Red]

00:21:255 (3,4,5) - I'm not a fan of these red line circles. I think that using 1/4 sliders instead keeps your idea of emphasis on the violin part while at the same time feeling more natural with the flow and rhythm of the music. I did that on all except 5, I want to keep that long space to fit with the music
00:24:255 (3,4) - ^
00:44:130 (2,3,4) - This feels weird to play for me. Better to delete (3) and add a slider at 00:44:693. Right now this is unexpected because (1,2) follow the bg music then suddenly you have a blue line note that doesn't.
00:57:818 (2) - whistle
01:04:568 (4) - NC here to note the difference in rhythm
01:10:193 (1) - remove NC for consistency
02:06:818 (5) - NC for difference in rhythm

[White]

AR -1, I think AR8 fits this song a lot better. I've stated multiple times, this song is much more playable at ar9 due to the high amount of stacking I do, especially the jump patterns

00:37:005 (3,4,5,1) - This is so close to symmetry across the y axis that you might as well do it. It will look cleaner.
00:41:505 (4) - either stack perfectly or offset more to make it more apparent that you didn't want these stacked.
00:44:130 (1) - for this and all sliders like this, I think that 0.5x slider speed is too much of a drop. Maybe increase the speed to .65 or something like that, right now it feels kind of unnatural since the music isn't different enough to justify a halving of the SV. wah, best suggestion on this part I've gotten, thank you >w<
00:54:068 (4) - NC here for these finishes
01:50:318 (1) - don't think this needs a NC, it's perfectly visible and you didn't do it the first time this pattern happened.
01:56:318 (4) - NC for these finishes?
02:10:380 (1) - i really don't like this SV drop. The music is building and building to the kiai, why would you suddenly slow down? consistency with the first time this happens
02:17:880 (2,1,4) - Not sure if you want to stack these or not, but do one or the other, either stack all or unstack all.
02:18:255 (3,1) - fix this overlap
02:19:755 (5) - NC to accentuate these jumps, would look cool.

That's all I've got for you now. Good luck!

For m4m~

All these mod is based on my opinion, feel free to ignore them~

General

- No complaint

[White]
Wow, a lot of jumps there @@. Try to reshape your slider make them look nicer >.o
And also, the flow isn't really good, the jumps is too big for this bpm. Try to re-position your notes to a better place. And I also suggest try not to overlay some notes too much, it makes the pattern kind of boring ._. Odd sllider shaping is something I just generally don't do in insanes, it's a personal preference of mine. I made this jumpy so that's it's a little more exciting for the range of players that I like to map for, the ones who can play and easily pass higher insanes, I want it to stand out a bit more than just any other map in this bpm range.

00:19:943 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I suggest making the notes like this :- http://puu.sh/4CXrR.jpg I think it fits the music better~ I like the way it is now, since it puts the melody on the start of the sliders, rather than the end
00:22:568 (1) - Change this into slider
00:25:193 (4,5,6,1) - I don't see the point for making a big jump at this part, reduce the distance it possible it's the end of the phrase, that seems like reason enough for me, but I did a bit
00:28:755 - 00:31:380 - Please map this part, I don't think placing a spinner here is a good idea.
00:41:318 (3,4,5) - Don't overlay here, is kinda hard to read especially with HD
00:43:943 (2,1) - Try not to make a big jump here, because at this point the slider velocity become lower. Is hard to know whether it'll be a fast slider or not
00:46:099 - I suggest adding a note here and 00:46:287 here too~ I think it's have a better flow
00:52:099 and 00:52:287 - ^Same as above
00:52:287 (1) - Maybe remove NC here? I don't think you need to add NC even though there's a strong beat here I'll keep it
01:04:568 (1,2,3,4) - Place them better, this part of the song is kinda slow, so I don't think jump at 01:04:849 is necessary. I guess, the pattern is there to warn of the offbeat rhythm, moved the two closer together to compromise
01:08:130 (4) - NC here, looks kinda weird @@ there is one o.o
01:08:599 and 01:08:787 , add note here, I think it fits the music more.
01:51:255 (1) - Maybe remove this? Add 1/3 slider instead at 01:51:068 instead and end at 01:51:443 maybe? changed this a different way
01:54:349 add note and 01:54:536 as well, like I said earlier @@
02:04:193 (2) - Move your slider maybe to x: 372 y: 32 ? Half of the note is out of the playfield.
02:05:130 (1) - NC here? Like stated earlier. there is one o.o
02:19:755 (5) - I feel that there's too much single tapping this part, maybe covert this into slider? I like this patterns as they are, plus this is building to the conclusion of the map, so I think it's fine

the rest done


[Red]

This is suppose to be a Hard difficulty? o.o Can't really tell because there's some 1/4 streams and such. And also try make full use of Distance snapping in this difficulty too!

00:19:193 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think 1/4 streams is recommended in this difficulty, maybe replace them with 1/4 repeater slider instead?
00:46:849 (2) - I suggest remove this note, I don't think triple here fits the music well.
01:14:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing about 1/4 streams, change them into 1/4 repeater instead
02:16:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
none of these done, a hard is perfectly fine having a couple easy streams and breaks in distance snapping
That's it I guess? I very bad in modding Hard and Normal difficulty :/ Try to make most of the slider look nicer, is kinda dull to see all the same shaped slider and such. Good luck~

Hi!

M4M from your queue

My map: AZU feat. SEAMO - Jikan yo Tomare (TV Size)

[Blue]
00:44:505 (2) - Inconsistent spacing
00:45:068 (3) - Make this slider same shape as 00:43:568 (1) - but with Ctrl+G same shape but did 180* instead
00:53:318 (2) - Remove this, copy 00:52:568 (1) - and rotate 180* (Ctrl+Shift+R)
01:32:693 (1) - Spinner is too short, remove or extend it
01:56:318 (2) - This is breaking the flow, reverse it
02:16:568 (3) - Stack this on 02:16:943 (4) - would prefer to avoid that, adjusted this a bit a different way

[Red]
Follow beat more, lesser vocal I follow both most of the time, so I don't see an issue
00:49:193 (8) - DS is strange yep, to go with the interesting music here
00:52:755 (1,2) - Make this more visible and avoid overlapping with 00:51:630 (6) -
00:59:130 (5) - Placement like this is not nice ._.
00:59:880 (1) - Don't overlap here
01:04:568 (1,2,3) - Change them into a reverse slider I like this how it is, if it's a huge issue later I will change it
01:39:818 - Add a circle here (tho the violin doesn't sound there but it's strange for 4 hits suddenly) don't want to spoil the silence, so no change
02:00:818 (4,5,6) - Make the placement like picture below:

02:04:193 (4,5,6) - Refer image below:


[White]
HP: +1
AR: -1
OD: -1 I'll keep my settings as they are, they're this way for a reason. OD7 is too easy, the AR9 makes it much easier to read, and the lower HP helps with the jump patterns Did some reworking on this diff, and these settings make more sense now, sorry for being bullheaded hah
Follow more beat and lesser vocal, it's Insane so try to make players feel more comfortable
00:18:630 (1) - Make it 1/4 nope, the piano is much faster than 1/4, this is a lot cooler
01:14:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - Trolling sliders lol, not sure if it's ok for ranking it's fine, plenty of great maps have sliders much faster than this
01:39:818 - Add circle here same as hard
02:01:943 (1,2,1,2) - Change this, it's not in flow and it doesn't look good ._.

Not much big prob, nice