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Tiara - BALLOON

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captin1
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 10, 2013 at 4:12:26 AM

Artist: Tiara
Title: BALLOON
Tags: Vocaloid hatsune miku vocaloid2 studio@tiara append Tashihun Output-P Shinri Hizumi
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4946kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blue (2.76 stars, 130 notes)
  2. Red (4.88 stars, 283 notes)
  3. White (5 stars, 379 notes)
Download: Tiara - BALLOON
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Our very fate, it has been decided from that day
Even now within these hands,
I hold on to a white balloon


full song: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm20315560

Click to download with the original insane before any mods (beware for high spacing jumps)
Broccoly
first!
Topic Starter
captin1

Broccoly wrote:

first!
be first mod too then :P
Woofie

osumania ~ i winss
Broccoly
Hi~ from captin threatening me to mod :3333

[White]
00:52:743 (1,2) - make 1 parallel to 2?
00:58:181 (2,3,4) - make these symmetrical?
01:06:806 (1) - unnecessary NC maybe
01:08:118 (1) - yup as i said before lol.. i'm still against this slowdown-after-big-jumps here.
02:01:931 (1,2,3,4) - how about changing the rhythm like this↙

(put 2 on (288,256), 3 on (368,336) and Ctrl + G the slider 4)

02:09:056 (1) - unnecessary NC maybe
02:10:368 (1) - hmm this one's fine i guess. it plays well in contrast to the one above
02:12:243 (4,5) - rotate 5 a bit counterclockwise to make the jump more natural?
02:16:931 (10,11,12,13,1) - make these curved upwards, not downwards to flow better

[Red]
00:27:618 (6) - (nazi) stack perfectly?
00:37:743 (1) - one suggestion.. Ctrl + H,J,G it? don't really matter if you choose not to but i think this small change looks better and aslo clarifies the rhythm from 7
01:35:868 (7,8) - (nazi) better blanket? (curl 8 more)
01:41:681 (6) - Ctrl + G and blanket 5? more interesting to play + looks better (keeps the criss-cross movement from 5 to 9 consistent)
01:49:556 (5,6,7) - this↓ might look better

01:55:181 (2,3,4) - (nazi) keep the gap between sliders consistent to look better?
02:04:181 (4,5,6) - make a triangle? looks better and you made a triangle with 02:05:118 (1,2,3,4) - these and 02:06:806 (5,6,7,8) - these too so it'll be nice
02:19:556 (6) - give a curve a bit?

[Blue]
00:31:556 (1) - end this on the white tick?
00:33:056 (3,4) - i recommend this↓ rhythm. right now it's kinda confusing for normal players..

00:38:306 (1) - start this on 00:38:306 - and end on 00:38:681 - ?
00:49:556 (1,2) - (nazi) try blanketing 2 with 1 (curve upward 2)
01:04:556 (3) - end this on white tick?
01:35:306 (2) - ^
01:42:806 (4,1) - no touch plz no look good imo (supernazi)
02:19:181 (3) - curve the opposite?

heheeeheheheahaaehuehuehueahue
Topic Starter
captin1
"Broccoly"
Hi~ from captin threatening me to mod :3333

[White]
00:52:743 (1,2) - make 1 parallel to 2?
00:58:181 (2,3,4) - make these symmetrical?
01:06:806 (1) - unnecessary NC maybe
01:08:118 (1) - yup as i said before lol.. i'm still against this slowdown-after-big-jumps here. :p no change
02:01:931 (1,2,3,4) - how about changing the rhythm like this↙

(put 2 on (288,256), 3 on (368,336) and Ctrl + G the slider 4)

02:09:056 (1) - unnecessary NC maybe
02:10:368 (1) - hmm this one's fine i guess. it plays well in contrast to the one above
02:12:243 (4,5) - rotate 5 a bit counterclockwise to make the jump more natural?
02:16:931 (10,11,12,13,1) - make these curved upwards, not downwards to flow better I have no idea what you were trying to say here, but I did something and it feels better

[Red]
00:27:618 (6) - (nazi) stack perfectly?
00:37:743 (1) - one suggestion.. Ctrl + H,J,G it? don't really matter if you choose not to but i think this small change looks better and aslo clarifies the rhythm from 7
01:35:868 (7,8) - (nazi) better blanket? (curl 8 more)
01:41:681 (6) - Ctrl + G and blanket 5? more interesting to play + looks better (keeps the criss-cross movement from 5 to 9 consistent)
01:49:556 (5,6,7) - this↓ might look better

01:55:181 (2,3,4) - (nazi) keep the gap between sliders consistent to look better?
02:04:181 (4,5,6) - make a triangle? looks better and you made a triangle with 02:05:118 (1,2,3,4) - these and 02:06:806 (5,6,7,8) - these too so it'll be nice
02:19:556 (6) - give a curve a bit?

[Blue]
00:31:556 (1) - end this on the white tick?
00:33:056 (3,4) - i recommend this↓ rhythm. right now it's kinda confusing for normal players..

00:38:306 (1) - start this on 00:38:306 - and end on 00:38:681 - ?
00:49:556 (1,2) - (nazi) try blanketing 2 with 1 (curve upward 2)
01:04:556 (3) - end this on white tick?
01:35:306 (2) - ^
01:42:806 (4,1) - no touch plz no look good imo (supernazi) hitler
02:19:181 (3) - curve the opposite?

heheeeheheheahaaehuehuehueahue

terrible mod never come here again no kds

jk thanks all the rest fixed <3
Natsuki Nanaka
Hi, Form my modding queues
[Bule]
  1. 00:29:306 (2) - move to x304 y272 and how about if slide end 00:30:056 - ?
  2. 00:45:056 (3) - why you no mirror with 00:43:556 (1) -
  3. 00:47:775 (3) - blanket
  4. 00:50:587 (3) - how about this
  5. 01:14:025 (3) - blanket
  6. 01:35:306 (2) - blanket ?
  7. 01:48:806 (1) - don't make touch other note. move this
[Red]
  1. 00:35:681 (4) - I think (Ctrl + G) is better flow
  2. 01:49:931 (6) - move to x188 y116
  3. 01:50:306 (7) - move to x272 y144
  4. 01:55:931 (4) - blanket
  5. 02:00:806 (4) - move to x256 y328
[White]
  1. 00:21:431 (6) - overlap 00:19:556 (1) -
  2. 00:23:868 (5) - move 2nd point on slide down 1 gird. it's better overlap I hate this style lol
  3. 00:24:618 (7) - up 1 gird if you change ↑
  4. 00:26:118 (2) - move to x112 y208
  5. 00:35:306 (4) - move to x322 y317 (pass "T" to close Grid snap)
  6. 00:49:931 (2) - blanket
  7. 02:15:431 (5) - move to x50 y152
That all
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
captin1
"- N a n a k a -"
Hi, Form my modding queues
[Bule]
  1. 00:29:306 (2) - move to x304 y272 and how about if slide end 00:30:056 - ?
  2. 00:45:056 (3) - why you no mirror with 00:43:556 (1) -
  3. 00:47:775 (3) - blanket
  4. 00:50:587 (3) - how about this
  5. 01:14:025 (3) - blanket
  6. 01:35:306 (2) - blanket ?
  7. 01:48:806 (1) - don't make touch other note. move this
[Red]
  1. 00:35:681 (4) - I think (Ctrl + G) is better flow
  2. 01:49:931 (6) - move to x188 y116
  3. 01:50:306 (7) - move to x272 y144
  4. 01:55:931 (4) - blanket
  5. 02:00:806 (4) - move to x256 y328
[White]
  1. 00:21:431 (6) - overlap 00:19:556 (1) -
  2. 00:23:868 (5) - move 2nd point on slide down 1 gird. it's better overlap I hate this style lol ;p
  3. 00:24:618 (7) - up 1 gird if you change ↑
  4. 00:26:118 (2) - move to x112 y208
  5. 00:35:306 (4) - move to x322 y317 (pass "T" to close Grid snap)
  6. 00:49:931 (2) - blanket
  7. 02:15:431 (5) - move to x50 y152
All fixed!
That all
Good luck :)

Thanks for the mod!
Topic Starter
captin1
Owaaaah ton of changes to white today >.< hope it sucks less
Broccoly
bule

ffufufu
P A N
ayayaya :D

good luck captin
Topic Starter
captin1

P A N wrote:

ayayaya :D

good luck captin
thanks <3
Tsumetaku
.w. i pretend to make it next week though. But if you made it. Let it go~ I'll do my best to help it ranked.
Love this song with Dark App. If possible,can i make a GD? ;)


Maybe i'll make long version...


Suggested Tag:たしふん アウトプットP 真理惠 真理歪 studio@tiara
Source:Vocaloid
Offset 1550
Topic Starter
captin1

Tsumetaku wrote:

.w. i pretend to make it next week though. But if you made it. Let it go~ I'll do my best to help it ranked.
Love this song with Dark App. If possible,can i make a GD? ;)


Maybe i'll make long version...


Suggested Tag:たしふん アウトプットP 真理惠 真理歪 studio@tiara
Source:Vocaloid
Offset 1550
I'm gonna keep this a three spread set, thanks for the info though!
Luna-
Hi~ here my ugly mod o3o

[General]

This is a short version, right? changes the name to: Tiara - BALLOON (Short Ver.)


[Blue]

00:25:556 (1,2) - Don't overlap notes, thats can be confused for new players
00:39:056 (2) - Changes the slider end to 00:39:806 - , sounds less empty
00:40:556 (4) - ^ Same, slider end to 00:41:306 -

[Red]
I didn't find nothing, I feel so noob >.<

[White]

00:26:112 (2,3) - Moves that something like this: http://puu.sh/2Ml5P.jpg
01:06:612 - add a circle here? and put in the middle to do a anti-jump
01:38:862 (6) - ctrl + G, the flow feels better
01:54:987 (1) - Maybe ctrl + G? >.<



Sorry for my short mod, I'm steel noob doing this >.<
Topic Starter
captin1
"Dark Accelerator"
Hi~ here my ugly mod o3o

[General]

This is a short version, right? changes the name to: Tiara - BALLOON (Short Ver.) There's rules on the percent of the song that needs to be cut before it becomes (Short Ver.). It's like 50%, and this is about 60-70. So I can't do this


[Blue]

00:25:556 (1,2) - Don't overlap notes, thats can be confused for new players
00:39:056 (2) - Changes the slider end to 00:39:806 - , sounds less empty
00:40:556 (4) - ^ Same, slider end to 00:41:306 -

[Red]
I didn't find nothing, I feel so noob >.<

[White]

00:26:112 (2,3) - Moves that something like this: http://puu.sh/2Ml5P.jpg
01:06:612 - add a circle here? and put in the middle to do a anti-jump Don't like how that plays
01:38:862 (6) - ctrl + G, the flow feels better
01:54:987 (1) - Maybe ctrl + G? >.<



Sorry for my short mod, I'm steel noob doing this >.< All good! Keep at it man, you'll get better, I promise :D

All the rest fixed, thanks!
Kirino Kousaka
Hello captin~ modding from In-game request

Things in Red must be fixed.
Things in Purple are highly suggested to be considered.
Others are normal suggestions.

[General]
  1. Disable letterbox for all diffs?

[Blue]
  1. SliderMultiplier is 0.999999999999999 change it to 1.
  2. 00:45:050 (3) - Is this a jump? Please fix spacing and avoid spacing infringements on the easiest diffs.
  3. 00:51:050 (3) - ^
  4. 02:06:800 (3) - Use this.

[Red]
  1. Just use 1/4 Snap Divisor lol.
  2. I think AR8 would be nice. :3
  3. 00:59:112 (5) - Unstack from next slider's start for a better flow imo, like 00:59:112 (5).

[White]
  1. If you would use 1/8, it should be on this diff lol.
  2. 01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is not quite readable imo, change it to a single slider with many repeats?
  3. 02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
That's all~
Nice map~ :3
Topic Starter
captin1
"Kirino Kousaka"
Hello captin~ modding from In-game request

Things in Red must be fixed.
Things in Purple are highly suggested to be considered.
Others are normal suggestions.

[General]
  1. Disable letterbox for all diffs?

[Blue]
  1. SliderMultiplier is 0.999999999999999 change it to 1.
  2. 00:45:050 (3) - Is this a jump? Please fix spacing and avoid spacing infringements on the easiest diffs. >.< oops
  3. 00:51:050 (3) - ^
  4. 02:06:800 (3) - Use this.

[Red]
  1. Just use 1/4 Snap Divisor lol. ha was probably just too lazy to switch it back after editing white
  2. I think AR8 would be nice. :3
  3. 00:59:112 (5) - Unstack from next slider's start for a better flow imo, like 00:59:112 (5).

[White]
  1. If you would use 1/8, it should be on this diff lol.
  2. 01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is not quite readable imo, change it to a single slider with many repeats? Most people who playtested this didn't have an awful time with it, I think it plays well so no change for now
  3. 02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ^
That's all~
Nice map~ :3 thanks! :D all the rest fixed!

Thanks for the mod!
Verlaren
Yo. From my queue.

General:
add to title (Cut ver.), because you have is this case;


Blue:
you have unsnapped patters, for example -
00:22:550 (1) -
00:27:050 (3) -
00:33:050 (3) -
00:36:050 (4) -
00:46:550 (1,2) -
01:19:550 (2) - make this slider a more beautiful
02:21:800 (2) - ^
also you have somewhere distance error(spacing), fix it please.
and another - add more hitsounds and up volume


Red:
00:34:362 (8) - remove this note


White:
OD -2, AR -1!
00:36:612 (7) - move on x:152 y:200
00:44:112 (1) - remake slider. This slider unrankable
00:50:112 (1) - remove NC
00:51:612 (1) - ^
01:08:112 (1) - ^
01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove this patterns and add one slider; and add 7 reverses
01:20:300 (1) - remove NC
01:36:050 (9) - move on 2 grid in right side
01:36:425 (10) - remove note and add one repeat for 01:36:050(9)
01:39:425 (7) - NC
01:46:362 (1,1) - remove NC and remake 01:47:862(1), he is unrankable
01:52:362 (1,1) - remove NC
02:10:362 (1) - ^
02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5), because this pat is unreadable same as 01:14:675


GL
Topic Starter
captin1
"Verlaren"
Yo. From my queue.

General:
add to title (Cut ver.), because you have is this case; Guidelines are guidelines. If a staff member tells me I should add to the title then I will, but I don't think it's necesssary

Blue:
you have unsnapped patters, for example - all fixed
00:22:550 (1) -
00:27:050 (3) -
00:33:050 (3) -
00:36:050 (4) -
00:46:550 (1,2) -
01:19:550 (2) - make this slider a more beautiful
02:21:800 (2) - ^
also you have somewhere distance error(spacing), fix it please.
and another - add more hitsounds and up volume


Red:
00:34:362 (8) - remove this note k


White:
OD -2, AR -1! Did OD -1, this is too easy OD 7 and AR 8 makes it harder to read
00:36:612 (7) - move on x:152 y:200 k
00:44:112 (1) - remake slider. This slider unrankable k
00:50:112 (1) - remove NC The NC's are there to warn of the slowdown and then keep combo color consistent through a phrase. None of these changed
00:51:612 (1) - ^
01:08:112 (1) - ^
01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - remove this patterns and add one slider; and add 7 reverses jesus you people can't play this? it's not hard. nobody decent has problems with it
01:20:300 (1) - remove NC
01:36:050 (9) - move on 2 grid in right side not sure what you said here but w/e
01:36:425 (10) - remove note and add one repeat for 01:36:050(9) k
01:39:425 (7) - NC
01:46:362 (1,1) - remove NC and remake 01:47:862(1), he is unrankable
01:52:362 (1,1) - remove NC
02:10:362 (1) - ^
02:16:925 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5), because this pat is unreadable same as 01:14:675 ^


GL

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