1. Easy (3.18 stars, 225 notes)
2. Hard (4.93 stars, 515 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 706 notes)
4. Normal (4.19 stars, 297 notes)

1. Minami Kotori Koizumi HanayoのtagがEasy,Normal,Hardの難易度で重複しています。確認してみてください。

1. 03:03:410 (3) - 'Drum' SamplesetでClapがこの場所と合うと思いました。強調出来そうな場所なのでhit sound入れてみると良いかもしれません。

1. AR+1ガ個人的に好きです。
2. 00:32:538 (1) - Remove NC. NCの必要性がわかりませんでした
3. 00:42:480 (5) - Add NC.　01:45:271 (1) - 同じ曲partの対象であるココにはNCが付いています。
4. 01:39:689 (5) - Add NC. 規則性より、ここでNC打つといいかなと思いました。
5. 01:00:271 (1) - 手前の(5)と1gridズレているのが個人的には気になりました。並行にしてみては?
6. 01:17:887 (2,3) - 両方のスライダーの頭にwhistle追加してみてはどうでしょう?_? 良い雰囲気が出ると思いました。
7. 01:56:433 (1) - Remove NC? ←適用するならば 01:57:829 (3) - Add NC. 01:59:224 (1) - Remove NC.
8. 02:48:061 (3) - 曲を聴いている限りここはNCつけたほうがフォローできてるかなと思いました。
9. 03:03:410 (3) - Same as Easy~. (Slider Tail)

1. 00:36:550 (8) - Ctral+Gをして軽くjumpさせるのはどうでしょうか。個人的にやり易かったのと音ともjumpがfit出来てるように感じました!
2. 01:17:887 (1,3) - Normalと同じく両方のスライダーの頭にwhistleが合うと思いました。
3. 03:03:410 (1) - Same as Easy~. (Slider Head)

1. 01:32:364 (4) - Ctrl+Gが個人的に好きです。
2. 03:03:410 (5) - Same as Easy~.
   Insaneとても良い譜面でした。

P o M u T a wrote:

M4M from your queue Normal Mod
[General]

1. Minami Kotori Koizumi HanayoのtagがEasy,Normal,Hardの難易度で重複しています。確認してみてください。fixed

[Easy]

1. 03:03:410 (3) - 'Drum' SamplesetでClapがこの場所と合うと思いました。強調出来そうな場所なのでhit sound入れてみると良いかもしれません。ちょっと保留で。僕もどうしようか決めかねているので他の人に聞いて回ったりしてどっちがいいかなど聞いてみます。

[Normal]

1. AR+1ガ個人的に好きです。fixed
2. 00:32:538 (1) - Remove NC. NCの必要性がわかりませんでした removed
3. 00:42:480 (5) - Add NC.　01:45:271 (1) - 同じ曲partの対象であるココにはNCが付いています。fixed
4. 01:39:689 (5) - Add NC. 規則性より、ここでNC打つといいかなと思いました。つけ忘れでした fixed
5. 01:00:271 (1) - 手前の(5)と1gridズレているのが個人的には気になりました。並行にしてみては? 平行にしたつもりができてませんでした fixed
6. 01:17:887 (2,3) - 両方のスライダーの頭にwhistle追加してみてはどうでしょう?_? 良い雰囲気が出ると思いました。added
7. 01:56:433 (1) - Remove NC? ←適用するならば 01:57:829 (3) - Add NC. 01:59:224 (1) - Remove NC. fixed
8. 02:48:061 (3) - 曲を聴いている限りここはNCつけたほうがフォローできてるかなと思いました。fixed
9. 03:03:410 (3) - Same as Easy~. (Slider Tail) 保留で。

[Hard]

1. 00:36:550 (8) - Ctral+Gをして軽くjumpさせるのはどうでしょうか。個人的にやり易かったのと音ともjumpがfit出来てるように感じました! 今のところ直すつもりはないのでNoで。
2. 01:17:887 (1,3) - Normalと同じく両方のスライダーの頭にwhistleが合うと思いました。他にも言われたら考えてみます。added
3. 03:03:410 (1) - Same as Easy~. (Slider Head) 保留で。

[Insane]

1. 01:32:364 (4) - Ctrl+Gが個人的に好きです。あえてこの配置にしてるのでNoで。
2. 03:03:410 (5) - Same as Easy~. 保留で。
   Insaneとても良い譜面でした。

細かいmodばかりですが頑張ってください

1. 00:52:160 - add a note here, it's better to play http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673319
2. 00:56:957 (8) - like this o.o?
3. 01:06:899 (3) - add finish on this slider head :3
4. 02:37:596 (3) - better make this one go to the opposite direction http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673332
5. 02:37:945 (4) - ^

1. map is good, just that streams after slow sliders like 00:39:428 (8) - 01:42:218 (8) - are easy to get hit100 0,0
2. 02:33:933 (9) - ^
3. 03:02:713 (1) - too many notes? maybe 03:02:713 (1,3) - sliders

1. 03:17:015 (3) - length -50% 0,0

1. the whole map filled with 1/1 spaced notes
2. could make more spaces at some points since this is easy diff 0,0

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

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Insane

1. 00:52:160 - add a note here, it's better to play http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673319 No, I'm following the vocal here.
2. 00:56:957 (8) - like this o.o? following the drum here ><
3. 01:06:899 (3) - add finish on this slider head :3 no, I cannot hear it.
4. 02:37:596 (3) - better make this one go to the opposite direction http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673332 i'll fix it if anybody else says so.
5. 02:37:945 (4) - ^ ^

Hard

1. map is good, just that streams after slow sliders like 00:39:428 (8) - 01:42:218 (8) - are easy to get hit100 0,0 i'll fix it if anybody else says so.
2. 02:33:933 (9) - ^ ^
3. 03:02:713 (1) - too many notes? maybe 03:02:713 (1,3) - sliders nice suggestion, fixed

Normal

1. 03:17:015 (3) - length -50% 0,0 fixed

Easy

1. the whole map filled with 1/1 spaced notes
2. could make more spaces at some points since this is easy diff 0,0 isn't good use 1x spacing if easy diff ?

good map as for rank, yeah

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ From you m4m Queue

[Easy]
00:16:317 (4) - Remove 00:16:492 (5) - This slider 00:16:317 - Start 00:17:015 - End? ill fix it anynody else say so.
00:24:689 (2) - Why overlap? I making the triangle these slider on head 00:22:945 (1,2,3) -
00:29:922 (3) - ^ ^
00:31:317 (1) - Remove Nc? no
00:42:480 (1) - ^ ^
00:51:375 (4) - Hmm ..Not feel the same pattern too difficult considering the difficulty .. I don't think so.
00:56:433 (1) - Remove Nc? no
01:17:364 (1) - Try This? no, my pattern isn't issue.

[Hard]
01:43:178 (4) - It's covered by score board. please avoid it. you mean approach circle is covered? if so, it's not such a big issue.

Good Luck Star +1~

Piscis wrote:

こんにちは

[Easy]
00:11:782 (1) -finish追加 added

[Normal]
01:15:968 (1) - NC追加？ 曲調によってコンボを変えているのでNoで
01:29:922 (3) - スライダーの最初にwhistle追加 1番の歌詞につけていないのでこのままで！
01:30:445 (4) - whitle追加 ^
01:31:317 (1) - スライダーの最初にfinish追加 added


[Hard]
00:06:201 - Easy,NormalはここにnoteがあるのでHard,Insaneにもnoteを加えるべきです　加えるのであればfinishも追加で added
00:54:166 (3) - 00:53:294 (4) の後ろに最初を重ねるhttp://puu.sh/2rfdM (4)から(3)の間には3拍空いていてそこまで大きな問題とは思わないのと、プレイには支障がないのでNoで
01:14:573 (1) - whistleを追加
01:27:829 (7) - スライダーの最後にwhistle追加
01:28:178 (8) - スライダーの最初にwhistle追加
01:28:526 (1) - whistle追加
01:29:922 (6) - スライダーの最初にwhistle追加
01:30:445 (7) - ^
whistle系は全て追加しました

[Insane]
00:06:201 - Hardと同じく added
00:03:061 (2) - 00:02:015 (4) と重なってないのが気になります http://puu.sh/2rf2K Hardと同じ
01:02:713 (7) - finishをスライダーの最初に追加 ドラムの音が聞こえてこないのでNoで
01:06:899 (3) - ^ ^
01:07:596 (1) - ^ 自分的にはclapをつけるのが最優先でそのあとにfinishって感じなんですが、2つを同じノートにつけると非常にうるさくなってしまうので今回はNoで
01:08:294 (4) - ^ ^
01:25:387 (4) - 1grid左だと思います 違いがよくわからないです…
03:04:282 (1) - 好みですが私はNCを入れたほうがいいと思いました このままで～
03:14:747 (5) - 03:14:050 (3) と重ねる？http://puu.sh/2rf9Y ここもこのままで

がんばってください～
ラブライブ

KSHR wrote:

it's just me, but I think you should fix 00:29:922 (3) - not to overlap other objects as HabiHolic said if possible.
02:00:620 (1) - 02:06:201 (1) - 02:08:992 (1) - these also.
because placements which players can look clearly are one of important things in Easy difficulty. yet the starts of these sliders are overlapped.


unrankではないけど、もしできるのなら上で言った4つのスライダーを重ならないようにするのがベターかも
低難易度だから読みやすさって大事だと思うし
最初に言ったとおり「もしできるのであれば」だから、修正が困難であれば次から気を付けて配置してみるともっといい低難易度が作れるんじゃないかなって

ただの個人的な感想だから、もちろんno kdsでおねがい

Satellite wrote:

こんにちは こんにちは
From My queue

主観でたくさん書いてるので、流し目程度に見てください＞＜

[Insane]
00:15:968 (5) - 00:16:492 (7) - 個人的な感想なんですが finish追加したほうが好きです ドラムカバーで音はなっていないのでこのままで。
00:17:364 (1,2,3,4) - 音取りの提案です。歌詞がきっちり拾えるのでどうでしょうか？ 青線を使うスライダーはあまり好きではないのと、個人的にはあまりしっくりこなかったのでこのままで。

00:24:864 (2,3) - 音とりの提案です。00:24:864 - ここから 00:25:213 - ここまで１本のスライダーでどうでしょうか？ 音取りが下手くそなのでわかりにくいと思いますが後ろの音をフォローしていてボーカルカバーはしていない（つもり）なのでこのままで
00:27:131 (4) - Finishはどうでしょうか ドラムカバーです
00:27:654 (5,6) - 上記と同じように音とりをしてみてはどうでしょうか？ 後ろの音フォローしてます
00:30:620 (8) - 少し見栄えが悪いように思いました　こんな感じではどうでしょうか？ 参考にして自分なりに変えました。

00:35:154 (4) - Ctrl+G? このままで。
00:36:550 (8) - こんな形はどうでしょう？(手前7を上下反転とCtrl+Gして-9度傾けた形です) ここもこのままで。

00:47:015 (2) - 次の３をフォローするように少し曲げてみては？ nice suggestion, fixed.

00:48:759 (3,4) - 音とりの提案です　3と4を逆にしてみてはどうでしょう？一応音とりです↓ スペーシングが異常に広がってしまうのと個人的にしっくりこなかったのでNoで。

01:08:207 (3,4,5,6) - プレイ時にずれることを想定してのこと配置でしょうか？少しやりづらいように思いました 直すの忘れてました。fixed.

01:19:806 (8) - clapが後ろについていますがこれはミス・・・？ わかりづらいと思いますが、鳴っているのはタムですがクラップで音付けをしています。
01:41:782 (8) - Ctrl+G? 見た目重視なのでこのままで。
01:52:945 (3) - Ctrl+Gのほうが流れに合ってるように思いました 僕自身迷ったんですが、未だに決まらないのでまた同じような指摘があれば直します。

[Hard]
OD-1? reduced.
03:04:283 (2) - Tickで判断できないからここからNewcombo・・・？ 見た目的には大丈夫だと思うんですが、またなにかあれば考えてみます。

[Normal]
00:30:271 (3,4) - 音とりの提案です 保留で。


[Easy]
私に出せる提案はありませんでした・・・。

sorry noob mod lol
ランクまで頑張ってください！★
good luck~

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ Here is my mod ~~ Love Live!! >3<!

Pic

Red - Must Fix!
Black - Suggestion

[General]
all good

[Easy]
01:18:759(3) - finish/clap
01:50:852(4) - clap[/color] I already add clap on slidertick.
02:41:782(1) - whistle(front) no change.

[Normal]
00:18:061(2) - clap already add clap here too.
00:36:550(4) - whistle
00:39:340(4) - ^
02:35:503(3) - ^
02:41:782(2) - ^
02:55:038(1) - ^
02:56:433(1) - ^
sry, all no change whistle suggestion because I thought not fit these hitsounds.

[Hard]
OD -1 fixed
02:41:782(3) - whistle(front) i dunno which to choose add whistle to vocal covering.

[Insane]
02:14:399(1) - whole slider whistle
02:24:166(1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - hmm i don't know about this but.... looks fine i guess? http://puu.sh/2sWaD I mapped shit jump zone ww
02:41:782(5) - whistle(front)[/color] same as Hard
03:04:108 - add note
03:04:195 - ^ I think not fit makes 5 beat streams.


Yep That's all >3<! Please make it ranked and Take my star please!!

Teara wrote:

Hi!

[General]

The things I pointed out in red, must be fixed. Otherwise the map wont be able to get ranked.

Kiai

Insane:
Kiai Starts on 00:46:666, ends on 01:09:079 fixed kiai time.

Easy, Normal, Hard:
Kiai Starts on 00:46:666, ends on 01:08:992

Hitsounds

The finish hitsound you use a lot in all the difficulties really don't sound that nice, try finding a custom hitsound for them. do you think no good default finish? I think it fit this song ._.

Final Thoughts

Nice! Take my star!

Very solid beatmap. Find one or two more mods and call me back for a re-check & bubble. i got it~.

[Easy]

00:16:317 (4) - This might be a little too hard for an Easy. I'd suggest you delete this circle and repeat 00:15:620 (3) - once. fixed



00:28:526 (1) - While this plays ok, try to keep overlapping to a minimum. Since only new players will play easy maps. And this could potentially confuse them. Once they are ready for a challenge, they will move on to normal maps. Rotate this by 41ｰ degrees maybe. fixed



00:36:550 (3,1) - ^ suggest you curve the slider around (3) no change. My favorite this placement.

00:39:689 (1) - See below. fixed



00:43:875 (1) ・This spinner is quite short which is very hard to do for new players, a good alternative is a long slider. fixed all spinners.

00:57:829 (1,2,3) ・This overlap is perfectly readable and can stay. Good job. thanks

Well, I wont say anything more about the overlaps, you should get the general idea, if you do fix the above, please do so for every other overlap in the difficulty. I'd prefer not to see any kind of overlaps in a Easy map. I'll be more careful in the future D:

[Normal]

01:16:840 (7) ・Plays a bit awkward, a see below for a suggestion. fixed



01:19:282 (2) - move to x: 156 y: 184 (and maybe give it a small curve) fixed but I'm keep slider.

02:40:910 ・Circle here? added

03:03:759 - Slider here with end point on 03:04:108 - (not to break the flow) changed by myself.

[Hard]

00:46:317 (2,1) - I don't like seeing patterns like this in a Hard. Please don't stack it. I want to keep my placement as possible...

00:52:596 (2,3) - This mini jump doesn't flow with the music. fixed

01:23:992 (6,1) - This isn't allowed in a Hard, only Insane. You are hiding the starting point of the next slider. This is not rankable. fixed

01:49:108 (2,1) - Same as before (00:46:317)
02:00:271 (2,1) - ^
02:42:131 (4,1) - ^
02:53:294 (2,1) - ^ I want to keep my placement as possible...

03:03:061 (2,1) - This isn't rankable, because you are hiding the slider ticks with the previous slider, making it hard to see that the slider speed change. This will also cause a lot misses. Revisit this pattern please. Fixed so that slider follow point can be visible

[Insane]

00:29:922 (6) - NC, to follow vocals better. fixed
00:38:294 (5) - ^ fixed

01:05:503 (3,4,5) - The spacing on this pattern is really awkward and doesn't flow with the rest of the map. This is the only place in the whole difficulty you use this. Maybe consider revamping it. unexpected error. fixed.

01:28:875 (6) - NC again, to follow vocals. added

01:59:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing on these streams are really hard to read and aren't that fun to play. Please remap this. no change, I like this placement.

02:12:482 (2) - Object isn't snapped!
02:12:656 (2) - Object's end is not snapped!
02:13:003 (2) - Object isn't snapped! fixed these unsnapped

02:19:108 (2,3) - This jump is hard to read. I made 2x jumps.

02:23:120 (1) ・Make this circles and stack with 4. fixed

02:26:085 (4,5,6,7) - Hard to read.. changed to 1/4 slider

02:27:306 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - <3 love this. me too~!!

This is very well mapped. Good job!

Takos wrote:

As requested.

General
ﾌﾞ､ﾌﾞﾋｰ!ﾌﾞﾋﾋﾋｰ!!!ﾌﾞﾋﾌﾞﾋﾌﾞﾋﾌﾞﾋﾌﾞﾋ!!!!!!
ﾌﾞﾋﾋﾌﾞﾋｰ!ﾌﾞﾌﾞﾋﾋﾌﾞﾋｰ!!ﾌﾞﾋｰﾌﾞﾋｰ!　ぶひいいいいいいい

Easy
01:06:201 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音がすかすかな気がします。01:07:596 - ここは何かノーツを置きたいところ。提案 http://puu.sh/2tKTS (3)のsliderfollowpointにclapを追加しました！
02:41:085 (1,2) - 何の音に対してリズム取ってるか分かりづらいので削除するのも手かと思います。ボーカルカバーのつもりですがわかりづらいすかねこれ？一応1/1スライダーを2つにしました

Normal
02:40:910 (1,2,3) - Easyと同様に音取りが分かりづらい ボーカルカバーです;-;

Hard
02:40:910 (1,2,3) - Easy,Normal同様 ボーカルカバーです;-;
03:03:410 (1) - 前のスライダーと少し近い気がします 直しました

Insane
01:20:765 (3) - overmap
01:37:509 (3) - overmap わかりづらいと思うけどバスドラの音をとってるので3連打にしてます

色んな意味で楽しくプレイ出来ました

Teara wrote:

Only thing that concerns me is 01:59:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these type of streams in Insane, but I've asked and it seems to be read-able and playable by the majority of people.

Alright, good job.

Makar wrote:

k full mod go

[General]

1. Source should be "Love Live! School Idol Project" (note: capitalization)

fixed only "School" (capitalization). because it was cleared by official website.

[Easy]

1. 01:11:782 - This break is really short that the arrows show up right after the spinner. Remove the break?
2. 03:27:131 - This spinner is not auditable and is therefore unrankable. Please increase volume to about ~50%

fixed all

[Normal]

1. Apply everything I mentioned on Easy on Normal too.
2. 00:17:713 (2,3) - Change to a 1/2 repeat slider for playability
3. 01:21:550 (3,4) - Same here, but you will need to change it's direction a bit so it looks good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693890
4. 01:24:515 (4,5) - I highly suggest unstacking this to avoid confusion for Normal players
5. 01:27:829 (4) - Start this slider at 01:27:654 for consistency? Don't forget to extend it by 1/2 too http://puu.sh/2vnii
6. 03:15:271 (3,4) - Change to a repeat slider for playability like before

fixed all except last suggestion

[Hard]

1. Apply everything I mentioned on Easy on Hard too.
2. 02:01:317 (3) - I would suggest not making this slider go under 02:00:620 (1). While test playing, I couldn't tell this was a slider because the whole body is covered. Here is a suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693895

fixed all

[Insane]

1. Apply everything I mentioned on Easy on Insane too.
2. 01:33:236 (6,7) - This flow isn't very good imo, since you make a large jump here then suddenly make the user have to go in the opposite direction in a slower speed due to the slider. I suggest something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693899 (this will take some adjusting though) I won't fix it because my favorite placement and I think very interesting more than anything else.
3. 01:37:509 (3) - Delete this note for consistency (plus its not really fitting in this slow part :c) can you hear bass of drum? I'm following it.
4. 01:59:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Please connect this stream with DS. Having 1/4 stream jumps like this doesn't play well. changed by my self
5. 02:15:445 (4,5,6) - Doesn't flow well like that other pattern. I suggest just moving (6) on the other side like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693902 no change.
6. 02:19:980 (1) - This jump is too high and unexpected after that stream ;w; why not blanket it? (Lowered the AR so you can see everything) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693906 I wanted to rapid aim. not only here, but also 02:21:026 (4,5) - and 02:21:899 (6,7) - .
7. 02:23:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - These stream patterns do not play well due to the awkward timing of starting them. I suggest using just repeat sliders orz no change.
8. 02:39:515 - add a note stacked on 02:39:602 (1,2) for playability? no, it isn't any sound follow. I'm following the drum.
9. 02:52:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same here about what I said with connecting the streams. changed by my self

Call me back (again)

Makar wrote:

[General]

1. In all difficulties, you need to remove that break I mentioned. It seems that you forgot to save before leaving the editor.
2. In all difficulties, you need to increase the volume of the last green timing point to about 50% so that it is auditable

[Insane]

1. 01:37:509 (3) - Delete this note for consistency (plus its not really fitting in this slow part :c) can you hear bass of drum? I'm following it. Yes I can, and there is no bass here, so I still suggest deleting for consistency and to fit the music :v
2. 01:59:922 (1,2,3) - This is still really unexpected. Just change to a regular 1/4 stream with circles.
3. 02:52:945 - forgot to fix this stream.

no kds

Rare wrote:

should I fix it?

Makar wrote:

Oh, I forgot to mention that you have "Best" twice in the tags, so remove one of them too if you decide to self pop.

Jacob wrote:

Rare wrote:

should I fix it?

well, if you do fix both of the issues and pop the bubble, i'm sure you can call Makar back to rebubble it right away.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Rare ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 02:19:980 (1) - The slider a bit offscreen,please move up some. fixed

[Hard]

1. 02:38:294 (1) - Add clap,follow with drum. no change. I use the clap for only a snare drum.

[Normal]

1. 01:24:515 (4,1) - Switch new combo,follow with lyrics. I'm following the music. not lyrics.
2. 01:26:085 (2) - Also add new combo to here,same reason as above. ^
3. 02:01:317 (2) - The slider a bit offscreen,please move up some. fixed
4. 02:38:294 (1) - Add clap,follow with drum. same as reason for hard.
5. 03:17:713 (1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm,like this. no change. something about it doesn't sound right.
   

[Easy]

1. 00:27:829 (5,1) - Try make more better blanket. fixed
2. 02:38:294 (1) - Add clap,follow with drum. same as reason for hard.
3. 03:25:038 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,like this. no change same as reason 03:17:713 (1,2,3,4) -
   

OK ~ That's all ~ Awesome map and nice song ~

Call me back ~

Flask wrote:

Congratz !