Teara wrote:

Only thing that concerns me is 01:59:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these type of streams in Insane, but I've asked and it seems to be read-able and playable by the majority of people.

Alright, good job.

Makar wrote:

k full mod go

[General]

1. Source should be "Love Live! School Idol Project" (note: capitalization)

fixed only "School" (capitalization). because it was cleared by official website.

[Easy]

1. 01:11:782 - This break is really short that the arrows show up right after the spinner. Remove the break?
2. 03:27:131 - This spinner is not auditable and is therefore unrankable. Please increase volume to about ~50%

fixed all

[Normal]

1. Apply everything I mentioned on Easy on Normal too.
2. 00:17:713 (2,3) - Change to a 1/2 repeat slider for playability
3. 01:21:550 (3,4) - Same here, but you will need to change it's direction a bit so it looks good http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693890
4. 01:24:515 (4,5) - I highly suggest unstacking this to avoid confusion for Normal players
5. 01:27:829 (4) - Start this slider at 01:27:654 for consistency? Don't forget to extend it by 1/2 too http://puu.sh/2vnii
6. 03:15:271 (3,4) - Change to a repeat slider for playability like before

fixed all except last suggestion

[Hard]

1. Apply everything I mentioned on Easy on Hard too.
2. 02:01:317 (3) - I would suggest not making this slider go under 02:00:620 (1). While test playing, I couldn't tell this was a slider because the whole body is covered. Here is a suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693895

fixed all

[Insane]

1. Apply everything I mentioned on Easy on Insane too.
2. 01:33:236 (6,7) - This flow isn't very good imo, since you make a large jump here then suddenly make the user have to go in the opposite direction in a slower speed due to the slider. I suggest something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693899 (this will take some adjusting though) I won't fix it because my favorite placement and I think very interesting more than anything else.
3. 01:37:509 (3) - Delete this note for consistency (plus its not really fitting in this slow part :c) can you hear bass of drum? I'm following it.
4. 01:59:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Please connect this stream with DS. Having 1/4 stream jumps like this doesn't play well. changed by my self
5. 02:15:445 (4,5,6) - Doesn't flow well like that other pattern. I suggest just moving (6) on the other side like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693902 no change.
6. 02:19:980 (1) - This jump is too high and unexpected after that stream ;w; why not blanket it? (Lowered the AR so you can see everything) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/693906 I wanted to rapid aim. not only here, but also 02:21:026 (4,5) - and 02:21:899 (6,7) - .
7. 02:23:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - These stream patterns do not play well due to the awkward timing of starting them. I suggest using just repeat sliders orz no change.
8. 02:39:515 - add a note stacked on 02:39:602 (1,2) for playability? no, it isn't any sound follow. I'm following the drum.
9. 02:52:945 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Same here about what I said with connecting the streams. changed by my self

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Makar wrote:

[General]

1. In all difficulties, you need to remove that break I mentioned. It seems that you forgot to save before leaving the editor.
2. In all difficulties, you need to increase the volume of the last green timing point to about 50% so that it is auditable

[Insane]

1. 01:37:509 (3) - Delete this note for consistency (plus its not really fitting in this slow part :c) can you hear bass of drum? I'm following it. Yes I can, and there is no bass here, so I still suggest deleting for consistency and to fit the music :v
2. 01:59:922 (1,2,3) - This is still really unexpected. Just change to a regular 1/4 stream with circles.
3. 02:52:945 - forgot to fix this stream.

no kds

Rare wrote:

should I fix it?

Makar wrote:

Oh, I forgot to mention that you have "Best" twice in the tags, so remove one of them too if you decide to self pop.

Jacob wrote:

Rare wrote:

should I fix it?

well, if you do fix both of the issues and pop the bubble, i'm sure you can call Makar back to rebubble it right away.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Rare ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 02:19:980 (1) - The slider a bit offscreen,please move up some. fixed

[Hard]

1. 02:38:294 (1) - Add clap,follow with drum. no change. I use the clap for only a snare drum.

[Normal]

1. 01:24:515 (4,1) - Switch new combo,follow with lyrics. I'm following the music. not lyrics.
2. 01:26:085 (2) - Also add new combo to here,same reason as above. ^
3. 02:01:317 (2) - The slider a bit offscreen,please move up some. fixed
4. 02:38:294 (1) - Add clap,follow with drum. same as reason for hard.
5. 03:17:713 (1,2,3,4) - More better rhythm,like this. no change. something about it doesn't sound right.
   

[Easy]

1. 00:27:829 (5,1) - Try make more better blanket. fixed
2. 02:38:294 (1) - Add clap,follow with drum. same as reason for hard.
3. 03:25:038 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,like this. no change same as reason 03:17:713 (1,2,3,4) -
   

OK ~ That's all ~ Awesome map and nice song ~

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Flask wrote:

Congratz !

xsrsbsns wrote:

moebuta gratz~

Andrea wrote:

00:27:654 (6) - This slider ends on the blue tick on Hard, which is wrong.

I noticed this only now, sadly.