1. Normal (3.07 stars, 178 notes)
2. Sora (4.83 stars, 342 notes)

General

keep all diff's kika's length to the same

2diffs all are good , just has some distance detail , maybe will be prefect , just my opinion :

moonlightleaf wrote:

Hi~From the M4M

General

keep all diff's kika's length to the same

2diffs all are good , just has some distance detail , maybe will be prefect , just my opinion :

Normal

00:28:715(2)move to 356|148

00:29:191(3)move to 356|256

00:31:096(1)move to 268|92

00:44:905(2)move to 280|136

00:45:381(3)move to 360|216

01:15:381(2)move to 160|164

01:15:858(3)move to 236|88

01:16:334(4)move to 312|164

01:35:381(3)move to 256|268

01:34:429(1)move to 256|116

01:34:905(2)move to 176|192

01:35:381(3)move to 256|272

01:35:858(1)move to 336|192

01:43:000(3)move to 288|100

01:45:858(2)move to 152|112

01:46:334(3)move to 232|192

01:46:810(4)move to 304|112

02:15:858(1)move to 256|168

02:16:334(2)move to 176|244

02:16:810(3)move to 100|168

Sore

00:35:381(3) move to 348|208

00:35:619(4) move to 396|272 the end move to 476|144

00:36:334(5) move to 396|56 the end move to 244|56

00:48:000(1) move to 140|316

00:48:477(2) move to 28|204

00:48:953(3) move to 140|88

00:48:953(4)(5) move to 252|204

00:50:143(1) end move to 220|288

00:51:096(3) move to 356|284

00:52:524(5) move to 448|132 end move to 496|208

00:53:000(6) move to 496|292

00:54:905(3) move to 220|300

00:56:096(5) end to 464|304 00:56:215 this point move to 420|336

00:57:048(7) move to 480|120

00:57:286(8) end to 436|56

00:58:715(3) move to 240|264

01:02:524(1) 3point: 114|68 184|68 224|84

01:03:000(2)move to 212|168

01:03:239(3)move to 200|256

01:03:953(4)(5)move to 212|168

01:09:429(2) end to 122|68

01:09:786(3) delete,put a note to 256|124

01:11:334(2) , 2point 256|124 312|68

01:11:691(3) delete,put a note to 456|124

01:13:000(1) move to 456|124

01:13:239(2) move to 392|32

01:14:429(3)move to356|304

01:15:381(2) end to 56|288

01:23:715(2)move to 140|244

01:24:905(2)move to 232|200

01:25:143(3)move to 292|200

02:00:858(1)move to 148|144

02:01:096(2)move to 68|48

02:01:334(3)move to 204|32

02:05:143(2)move to 176|372

02:05:381(3)move to 64|308

02:06:334(5)move to 264|172

02:07:643(5)move to 164|88

02:08:000(7)(1) move to 84|172

02:14:905(5)move to 276|304

02:15:381(6)move to 164|192

02:15:858(1)move to 276|80

02:16:334(2) end to 148|48

kajiyatta wrote:

Hi, M4M request from your queue
General
The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 for the 4:3 format, or 854x480 for the 16:9 widescreen format. this video has 1280×720, so you should convert it. ok
Normal
Placement
00:19:667(1) 1 grid up at 2nd tick point? ok
01:04:905(4,1) move to center between (2) and (3) no change

SPOILER

01:39:667(1) like this? I suppose this flow seems more better no change

SPOILER

01:43:177(1) seems not good imo, so like this? ok

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:38:715 unnecessary green line ok
01:13:953^ ok
01:45:381^ ok
01:46:334^ ok
Hit Sonud
01:14:905(1) add finish insted of whistle ok
01:47:286(1) add finish at head ok

Sora
Placement
00:29:667(6) move to x:256 y:68 to be symmeterical? ok
Rhythm
00:13:715 unnecessary green line ok
00:38:715^ ok
01:14:905^ ok
02:02:762^ ok
Hit Sonud
00:37:048(1) add whistle to follow the music? ok
02:10:143(1) add finish at head ok

nice map & star~

144,212,109191,6,0,P|152:169|196:121,1,110,2|0,0:0|1:1,0:0:0:0:
252,128,109905,2,0,P|308:152|348:192,1,110
344,240,110619,1,0,1:1:0:0:

Joon wrote:

hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[Normal]
02:02:524 (1) - finish 사운드를 50%로 줄이는게 좋을거같습니다. 수정

[Sora]
01:38:715 (7) - remove whistle 수정
01:38:834 (8) - ^ [8번은 별로 중요한 터치는 아닙니다.] 수정
01:46:929 (8,9,10) - remove whistle [원음에서 소리가 줄어드는걸 최대한 이용한 사운드] 수정


good luck

- t e n n y a - wrote:

summoned via PM ~
Gloria-kun hiii :3

General

1. convert the BG image into .JPG ? To reduce filesize :3

Normal

1. 00:04:429 (1)- : ctrl+j this would make better flow imo No
2. 00:27:286 (1)- : last slider point 1grid to left ok
3. 00:33:477 (4)- : make this slider straight to make good flow to next slider? imo No
4. 00:44:429 (1)- : add finish? ok
5. 01:00:143 (2)- : make this a bit curve? like this for example ok
   
6. 01:14:905 (1)- : add finish? ok
7. 01:16:810 (1)- : try this slider to make circle symmetry with previous circle? oxo No
   

   416,196,76810,6,0,P|388:80|300:48,1,220,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

8. 01:30:143 (1)- : remove nc is very recommended, because you didn't add nc at 01:24:429 (3) here, the rhythms is similar. ok
9. 01:32:048 (3)- : if you do so then NC here ok

Sora

1. 01:07:048 (5)- : bad symmetry, fix this slider please >< move last slider point to x160 y260 ok
2. 02:07:643 (6)- : there's piano sound, add soft-whistle? ok

:3/ gll

AnimeStyle wrote:

From Modding Queue

[Opinion]

Very cool Sora diff ^^ I like it most
Sry, for less suggestions for improvement in Sora diff, but it`s already very good

[General]

Lots of unsnapped circles and sliders between 00:03:477 and 00:30:619 in Normal

[Normal]

00:00:620 (1) - Before this point theres no music, it's very confusing for the player
00:00:620 (1) - Move first sliderpoint one grid left, it's not symetrical -> ^ if you don't delete it
00:03:000 (2) - Move this 1 grid left, and 1 up
00:03:477 (3) - Unsnapped
00:04:429 (4) - ^
00:04:429 (1) - Move first sliderpoint one grid left, it's not symetrical
00:07:286 (3) - Unsnapped
00:12:048 (1) - Move the second sliderpoint two grids up
00:17:286 (2) - Unsapped
00:17:762 (3) - ^
00:20:739 (1) - ^
00:28:715 (2) - ^
00:30:619 (4) - ^
00:44:905 (2) - Use grid snap
00:45:381 (3) - ^
http://puu.sh/2lxlR <- should be looks like this ^^
01:20:619 (1) - Unsapped
01:27:762 (5) - ^
01:29:667 (2) - ^
01:35:381 (6) - Use grid snap
01:43:000 (3) - ^
01:43:477 (1) - ^
02:06:334 (1) - http://puu.sh/2lxWd <- Looks better
02:10:143 (1) - Maybe delete this new combo
02:11:810 (2) - Set here new combo
02:12:048 (1) - Delete this combo
(I know the combo starts everywhere at 1 2 3 4 , but in Opininion in it's not useful in this moment )
02:17:762 (1) - Delete this one , too

I don't know you said unsapped... but new combo all fix

[Sora]

00:00:620 (1) - Before this point theres no music, it's very confusing for the player no change
00:15:619 (1) - http://puu.sh/2lyoa <- Maybe add a circle here no change

I hope I can help you ^^

Nyquill wrote:

AAAAAAAAAAAA BUNGAKU SHOUJO AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
its been a while since I've read the series and I remember loving it.

[Normal]
00:17:286 (2) - I guess this was intentional? Variable spacing is still pretty annoying though. Consider distance snapping. ok
01:04:905 (4) - A random 1/1 stack will be quite confusing. Want to unstack it? http://puu.sh/2lDzJ ok
01:22:048 (2) - This will do better unstacked because of difficulty.. Should be pretty easy with distance snap. http://puu.sh/2lDv4 (This is in fact, still on screen). ok

[Hard]
00:07:286 (4) - Suggesting you add a whistle here because there's a very high piano note here (consistent with where you have been adding whistles before). ok
00:48:715 - might be wise to add a note here to keep 00:47:762 (3) and 00:49:667 (8) consistent with the rest of the rhythm. what..? this is pattern beat, this song lyrics here
00:56:096 (5) - Shouldn't the whistle be at the end of this slider to keep hitsounds consistent? The current variation is a little random. ok
00:57:286 (8) - ^ Beginning of this slider. ok
01:46:691 (6,10) - These whistles could use more variation (straight spam might be annoying). Remove whistles from these notes and see if you like it better. ok

The custom in that whistle in that last section could actually be used with effect within the entire map save for the intro.

1. Tag Bungaku shoujo book girl (文學少女)

1. 00:08:239 - The background music (piano) is pretty high, add a whistle perhaps?
2. 00:19:667 (1) - Can you add some curve on this slider? Since (2) is kinda curve, straight slider here would be so boring. Even the sliderslide has been overlapped by (6) or (7), that's not a big deal. :3
3. 00:27:048 (7,1) - Prefer a jump here actually, just same thing with 00:25:381 (4,5) - . Here's an example:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:37:048 (1,2,3,4) - Those sliders are too curve, as they're not really flow/beautiful. Try to make them not-that-curve, that would be great I suppose. Try this!
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:45:381 (9) - A bit nazi, but this would be fit with that curve stream.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:00:620 (5,6,7) - Since you didn't separate the stream notes by distance spacing 2, I'll highly recommend you to reduce the spacing here. At least like this!
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:09:429 (2,3) - I dislike what you're doing here a bit, these 1/4 sliders appear so fast imo. Perhaps do like this?
   
8. 01:11:334 (2,3) - Well here too. ((3) is following the vocal, right? :V)
   
9. 01:43:477 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why you reduce the spacing here? I don't see the reason actually. The music is still in high tide, so it should be same spacing as the previous kiai parts.
10. 01:45:858 - Perhaps a whistle to follow the loud piano sound?
11. 02:00:143 (6) - Perhaps 1/4 shorter, then add a note at the downbeat? The music changes here, so the rhythm shouldn't be that boring you know. :3
12. 02:03:477 (3,4) - I don't see the reason for using 1/4 sliders, which's really unfit and inconsistent. I like the clap what you use, but the rhythm is more important issue. The rhythm should be random as same as the other parts, like some 1/2 or 1/1. Please change it to another kind, or just make them consistent.
13. 02:06:334 (5,6,7) - Dat spacing must confuse the player. As you see, 02:06:096 (4,5,6) - they're just same spacing, but with the inconsistent rhythm! Please use at least 1.5 to (6), then the players won't be confused while playing anymore.
14. 02:15:858 - / 02:16:334 - As I said above, whistle.
    Others are just nazi o3o!

1. 00:00:620 (1) - Make this symmetrical? You can do that by simply move the second node 1 gird right. Meh this is too nazi lul
2. 00:00:620 - ~ 00:13:477 - Those whistles are really annoyed to me. Try to put them on the downbeat/second short white tick, not all the notes, it's annoying!
3. 00:50:143 (1) - nazi but second node x:412, y:376, yeah that's more curve I think. :3
4. 01:54:667 - That Normal sampleset is really weird! Since you didn't add it at [Sora], remove it to keep consistent between the diffs please.
   I dislike the whistle after 00:15:381 -, that's really annoying imo. So many whistles spamming may be really weird and loudly. Try to add them only at the first/third short white tick. (Or the downbeat/second short white tick)
   Also the last part in this map use a lot of whistles too, just do something to them.

Flask wrote:

Hi GG o3o/

[General]

1. Tag Bungaku shoujo book girl (文學少女)

[Sora]

1. 00:08:239 - The background music (piano) is pretty high, add a whistle perhaps?
2. 00:19:667 (1) - Can you add some curve on this slider? Since (2) is kinda curve, straight slider here would be so boring. Even the sliderslide has been overlapped by (6) or (7), that's not a big deal. :3
3. 00:27:048 (7,1) - Prefer a jump here actually, just same thing with 00:25:381 (4,5) - . Here's an example:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:37:048 (1,2,3,4) - Those sliders are too curve, as they're not really flow/beautiful. Try to make them not-that-curve, that would be great I suppose. Try this!
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:45:381 (9) - A bit nazi, but this would be fit with that curve stream.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:00:620 (5,6,7) - Since you didn't separate the stream notes by distance spacing 2, I'll highly recommend you to reduce the spacing here. At least like this!
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:09:429 (2,3) - I dislike what you're doing here a bit, these 1/4 sliders appear so fast imo. Perhaps do like this?
   
8. 01:11:334 (2,3) - Well here too. ((3) is following the vocal, right? :V)
   
9. 01:43:477 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why you reduce the spacing here? I don't see the reason actually. The music is still in high tide, so it should be same spacing as the previous kiai parts.
10. 01:45:858 - Perhaps a whistle to follow the loud piano sound?
11. 02:00:143 (6) - Perhaps 1/4 shorter, then add a note at the downbeat? The music changes here, so the rhythm shouldn't be that boring you know. :3
12. 02:03:477 (3,4) - I don't see the reason for using 1/4 sliders, which's really unfit and inconsistent. I like the clap what you use, but the rhythm is more important issue. The rhythm should be random as same as the other parts, like some 1/2 or 1/1. Please change it to another kind, or just make them consistent.
13. 02:06:334 (5,6,7) - Dat spacing must confuse the player. As you see, 02:06:096 (4,5,6) - they're just same spacing, but with the inconsistent rhythm! Please use at least 1.5 to (6), then the players won't be confused while playing anymore.
14. 02:15:858 - / 02:16:334 - As I said above, whistle.
    Others are just nazi o3o!

[Normal]

1. 00:00:620 (1) - Make this symmetrical? You can do that by simply move the second node 1 gird right. Meh this is too nazi lul
2. 00:00:620 - ~ 00:13:477 - Those whistles are really annoyed to me. Try to put them on the downbeat/second short white tick, not all the notes, it's annoying!
3. 00:50:143 (1) - nazi but second node x:412, y:376, yeah that's more curve I think. :3
4. 01:54:667 - That Normal sampleset is really weird! Since you didn't add it at [Sora], remove it to keep consistent between the diffs please.
   I dislike the whistle after 00:15:381 -, that's really annoying imo. So many whistles spamming may be really weird and loudly. Try to add them only at the first/third short white tick. (Or the downbeat/second short white tick)
   Also the last part in this map use a lot of whistles too, just do something to them.

Good luck GG /boom

thanks for modding all fix

LKs wrote:

hi
[general]

fine

[Sora]

placement:

00:00:620 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2oQBi All patterns consist of several notes with rotation technic, should be done this way(symmetrically) fix
00:10:143 (1,2,3,4,5) - bad pentagon, use the tool preassembled in the editor plz fix
00:23:477 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2oR02 better looking， blanket and flow imo fix
00:37:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/2oRdpadjustment
01:04:905 (6) - http://puu.sh/2oRnM I'd say move it a bit farther and make it a line. it's better to have a well proportion of line and curved sliders, which will convey better experience fix


Hitsound:

I found the normal-hitnormal you used from 1:02 unfitting. use this http://puu.sh/2oRly or find some other better hitsounds?
01:46:572 (5,8) - remove whistle from these two, sounds more fllexible and impressive such a beautiful song, low difficulty, the way to let it be more attractive is adding SB, or more flexible hitsound. you didn't not bad on hitsound but you can do it better fix and this is hitsound used end 01:09:191 - because since I don't think it

01:52:762 (8) - need a note here fix

[Normal]

00:04:429 (1) - NC fix
01:51:096 (1) - needs a custom slidertick ok i'm add slidertick2

LKs wrote:

http://puu.sh/2pmDg

revamped hitsound, DL the pack and drag to your folder, overwrite all files. Only finished Sora, if you can change hitsound in normal by yourself, just do it. if you can't, pm me I'll do for you

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change log:

Removed useless inherited sections in all diffs
Fixed minor nazi issues
New custom hitsound files provided
Remapped Hitsound
Fixed some broken NC
http://puu.sh/2ppmM Normal's hitsound done
http://puu.sh/2ptNL updated Sora


[Normal]

00:48:949 (4) - fix this spacing fix

LKs wrote:

bubbled

video is great.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Gloria Guard ~

No kds pls ~

[General]

1. Please remove unused hitsound file : soft-sliderslide12

Yeah ~ relax map again ~

Call me back ~

Flask wrote:

Congratz again o3o

Flask wrote:

Congratz again o3o

Flask wrote:

Congratz again o3o

Flask wrote:

Congratz again o3o

Garven wrote:

This was surprisingly nice. Good work on this map!