Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora · forum

Gloria Guard

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-03-14T15:12:37+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 3월 30일 토요일 at 오후 12:16:21

Artist: Koshimizu Ami
Title: Hari no Sora
Tags: C74 Queen Sound Online Tsukasa Bungaku shoujo book girl
BPM: 126
Filesize: 19353kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:

Normal (3.07 stars, 178 notes)
Sora (4.83 stars, 342 notes)

Download: Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora
Download: Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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文学少女

a young lady of literary interests !

小清水亜美 - 玻璃の空

私の願いを遂げる手伝ってくれた文学少女。
私には非常に印象深い作品の曲でした。

Normal : by - me

Sora (Hard) - me

Last edited by Gloria Guard 2013-03-30T03:17:19+00:00, edited 22 times in total.

moonlightleaf

2,155 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2013-03-15T12:53:55+00:00

Hi~From the M4M

General

keep all diff's kika's length to the same

2diffs all are good , just has some distance detail , maybe will be prefect , just my opinion :

Normal

Sore

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-03-16T02:50:43+00:00

Hi, M4M request from your queue
General
The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 for the 4:3 format, or 854x480 for the 16:9 widescreen format. this video has 1280×720, so you should convert it.
Normal
Placement
00:19:667(1) 1 grid up at 2nd tick point?
01:04:905(4,1) move to center between (2) and (3)

SPOILER

01:39:667(1) like this? I suppose this flow seems more better

SPOILER

01:43:177(1) seems not good imo, so like this?

SPOILER

Rhythm
00:38:715 unnecessary green line
01:13:953^
01:45:381^
01:46:334^
Hit Sonud
01:14:905(1) add finish insted of whistle
01:47:286(1) add finish at head

Sora
Placement
00:29:667(6) move to x:256 y:68 to be symmeterical?
Rhythm
00:13:715 unnecessary green line
00:38:715^
01:14:905^
02:02:762^
Hit Sonud
00:37:048(1) add whistle to follow the music?
02:10:143(1) add finish at head

nice map & star~

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-03-16T04:23:51+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
Hi~From the M4M

General

keep all diff's kika's length to the same

2diffs all are good , just has some distance detail , maybe will be prefect , just my opinion :
Normal
00:28:715(2)move to 356|148

00:29:191(3)move to 356|256

00:31:096(1)move to 268|92

00:44:905(2)move to 280|136

00:45:381(3)move to 360|216

01:15:381(2)move to 160|164

01:15:858(3)move to 236|88

01:16:334(4)move to 312|164

01:35:381(3)move to 256|268

01:34:429(1)move to 256|116

01:34:905(2)move to 176|192

01:35:381(3)move to 256|272

01:35:858(1)move to 336|192

01:43:000(3)move to 288|100

01:45:858(2)move to 152|112

01:46:334(3)move to 232|192

01:46:810(4)move to 304|112

02:15:858(1)move to 256|168

02:16:334(2)move to 176|244

02:16:810(3)move to 100|168

Sore
00:35:381(3) move to 348|208

00:35:619(4) move to 396|272 the end move to 476|144

00:36:334(5) move to 396|56 the end move to 244|56

00:48:000(1) move to 140|316

00:48:477(2) move to 28|204

00:48:953(3) move to 140|88

00:48:953(4)(5) move to 252|204

00:50:143(1) end move to 220|288

00:51:096(3) move to 356|284

00:52:524(5) move to 448|132 end move to 496|208

00:53:000(6) move to 496|292

00:54:905(3) move to 220|300

00:56:096(5) end to 464|304 00:56:215 this point move to 420|336

00:57:048(7) move to 480|120

00:57:286(8) end to 436|56

00:58:715(3) move to 240|264

01:02:524(1) 3point: 114|68 184|68 224|84

01:03:000(2)move to 212|168

01:03:239(3)move to 200|256

01:03:953(4)(5)move to 212|168

01:09:429(2) end to 122|68

01:09:786(3) delete,put a note to 256|124

01:11:334(2) , 2point 256|124 312|68

01:11:691(3) delete,put a note to 456|124

01:13:000(1) move to 456|124

01:13:239(2) move to 392|32

01:14:429(3)move to356|304

01:15:381(2) end to 56|288

01:23:715(2)move to 140|244

01:24:905(2)move to 232|200

01:25:143(3)move to 292|200

02:00:858(1)move to 148|144

02:01:096(2)move to 68|48

02:01:334(3)move to 204|32

02:05:143(2)move to 176|372

02:05:381(3)move to 64|308

02:06:334(5)move to 264|172

02:07:643(5)move to 164|88

02:08:000(7)(1) move to 84|172

02:14:905(5)move to 276|304

02:15:381(6)move to 164|192

02:15:858(1)move to 276|80

02:16:334(2) end to 148|48

thank you for modding~

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-03-16T04:28:25+00:00

kajiyatta wrote:
Hi, M4M request from your queue
General
The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 for the 4:3 format, or 854x480 for the 16:9 widescreen format. this video has 1280×720, so you should convert it. ok
Normal
Placement
00:19:667(1) 1 grid up at 2nd tick point? ok
01:04:905(4,1) move to center between (2) and (3) no change
SPOILER
01:39:667(1) like this? I suppose this flow seems more better no change
SPOILER
01:43:177(1) seems not good imo, so like this? ok
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:38:715 unnecessary green line ok
01:13:953^ ok
01:45:381^ ok
01:46:334^ ok
Hit Sonud
01:14:905(1) add finish insted of whistle ok
01:47:286(1) add finish at head ok

Sora
Placement
00:29:667(6) move to x:256 y:68 to be symmeterical? ok
Rhythm
00:13:715 unnecessary green line ok
00:38:715^ ok
01:14:905^ ok
02:02:762^ ok
Hit Sonud
00:37:048(1) add whistle to follow the music? ok
02:10:143(1) add finish at head ok

nice map & star~

Thank you for modding~

Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Totoro 2013-03-16T18:07:29+00:00

M4M From your queue~~

General

전체적으로 굉장히 잘만드셨어요 ^^ 노래도 좋구요 ㅎㅎ 꼭 랭크 돼세요!!

Normal

00:03:000 (2) - x: 48 y: 302로 움직이시면 디스턴스가 맞아요

00:17:762 (3,1) - 이녀석들이 00:19:191 (4) - 애를 감싸는건 어떠시나요

00:49:905 (5) - NC

00:50:143 (1) - Nc 해제

00:53:000 (5) - NC

00:53:477 (1) - NC 해제

01:15:858 (3,1) - 제 의견이지만 이 둘이 어중간하게 겹치는게 상당히 신경 쓰여요

02:01:572 (2) - 2번쨰 점을 1칸 위쪽으로

Sora
00:24:905 (3) - ctrl +g

01:23:477 (1,2,3) - 디스턴스 수정해주세요. 특히 2번은 3번이랑 좀더 가까워야한다고 생각해요

01:45:858 (2,3) - ^

10nya

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10nya 2013-03-17T01:44:22+00:00

Gloria-kun ganbatte! ^p^

Joon

1,359 posts

Joined June 2009

Joon 2013-03-18T11:58:24+00:00

hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[Normal]
02:02:524 (1) - finish 사운드를 50%로 줄이는게 좋을거같습니다.

[Sora]
01:38:715 (7) - remove whistle
01:38:834 (8) - ^ [8번은 별로 중요한 터치는 아닙니다.]
01:46:929 (8,9,10) - remove whistle [원음에서 소리가 줄어드는걸 최대한 이용한 사운드]

good luck

Nickname

128 posts

Joined November 2011

Nickname 2013-03-19T13:39:38+00:00

모딩이 서툴더라도 이해해 주세요~
[Normal]
00:44:429 - 휘슬 제거하고 Finish 처리해주시면 좋겠습니다.
심벌 소리 3박자가 제 귀에는 좀더 듣기가 좋더라구요.(다만 마지막 소리가 좀 작게 들리던데 그건 어떻게 건들이는건지 모르겠음.)
01:15:858 (3) - ^
01:24:429 (3) - nc로 해주시는걸 권장해요.
01:31:572 (2) - ^
02:03:953 (2) - ^
02:11:810 (2) - ^
[Sora]
00:45:858 (10) - 왠지 nc 해야될거 같아요.
00:56:096 (5) - ^
01:38:715 (7) - ^
02:16:810 (3) - 4연타 구간마다 nc처리하는게 어때요?

음... 제가 모딩할 수 있는 곳은 여기까지군요
제가 봐선 이상한 곳도 없고 딱히 손볼곳도 없기에 nc만 줄창 차있는 느낌...

Cerulean Veyron

2,090 posts

Joined August 2012

Cerulean Veyron 2013-03-19T13:55:30+00:00

Hi ^^ M4M from The Queue ~

[Normal]
02:10:143 (1) - Remove NC then 02:11:810 (2) - Add NC here

[Sora]

00:29:667 (6) - use DS and move it between 00:29:429 (5,7) -

01:22:048 (3,4) - it looks ugly to me T.T Do this:-

01:22:048 (3) - 412-140
01:22:286 (4) - 332-124

01:25:858 (4) - Move it to 308-168

02:01:334 (3) - Move it to 188-84
02:17:762 (1) - remove NC

---------------------------------------------------------------
I like your map and the song ^^ just don't use my mod if it's useless *~* ... Good luck

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-03-19T15:18:28+00:00

Normal:

00:00:620 (1) - 대칭
00:03:000 (2) - 1칸 위로
00:04:429 (1) - w도 좋지만 더 둥글게 만드는게 보기 좋을듯요. 싫으면 대칭이라도,,
00:33:477 (4) - 딱히 휘슬을 빠짐 없이 쓰고 계시는데, 굳이 이 끝에 없을 이유는 보이지 않네요
00:44:429 (1) - 휘슬 보단 피니시가 더 나을거 같아요. 음악과도 맞고, 앞 패턴과 호응하므로
01:09:191 (1) - 굳이 뉴콤 안해도 될듯요
01:14:905 (1) - 음,, 어떤 결정을 하시건간에 00:44:429 (1)와 소리 통일 바라요
01:39:429 (3) - 1칸 왼쪽
01:54:429 (2) - 끝도 Normal로 해보세요
02:03:953 (2) - 1칸 왼쪽?
02:17:762 (5) - 마지막이니 뉴콤!

Sora:

00:21:096 (3) - 1칸 오른쪽으로 해서 00:20:381 (2)과 잘 어울리게 해주세요
00:30:262 (2,3,4) - 전부 휘슬 시끄러우니 삭제 바라요
00:44:548 (2,3,4) - ^
00:45:024 (6,7,8) - ^
00:45:381 (9) - 같은 패턴으로 휘슬 만드시길
00:56:096 (5) - 1/4 줄이는게 더 어울리네요
01:07:048 (5) - 끝점 2칸 왼쪽으로 보내서 대칭
01:22:881 (6) - 1칸 왼쪽? 아무튼 거리~~
01:23:477 (1,2) - 둘이 좀 먼건 안어울려보였어요
01:34:905 (6) - 1칸 왼쪽
01:38:834 (8,10) - 휘슬 삭제
01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 휘슬 알아서 절제 바람요
01:52:167 (7,1) - (7)의 엇박과 (1)이 가까워서 많이 헷갈렸어요
02:01:810 (6,7) - 휘슬 제거 02:02:048 (8) 도 잘,,
02:12:762 (2,3) - (2) 끝 보다는 (3) 처음에의 휘슬이 어울려요
02:14:905 (5) - 휘슬 제거

Cancel

956 posts

Joined August 2012

Cancel 2013-03-19T17:36:44+00:00

M4M!!

[Normal]

00:15:858 (1) - Make this slider look good.

[Sora]

Remove long streams like 01:15:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - with short sliders like 01:14:905 (1) . Streams like 02:01:572 (4,5,6,7) - are good for a hard diff.

01:23:953 (3,4,5,6) - not distance snapped good.

01:46:334 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as before.

That suprisingly was alll! Very good made map.

Good luck!!

happy30

Featured Artist

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Joined August 2008

happy30 2013-03-20T00:55:53+00:00

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replay

Sora
Pretty nice diff. You used a nice rhythm
the only thing I noticed while playing were the 1/4 streams, which did not always have consistent spacing.
(00:45:262 (8,9,10) - for example)

the kick hitsound might be a little too loud for the song. I don't know, it doesn't fit that well

especially here: 01:15:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think it sounds better without those whistles

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-03-20T04:47:06+00:00

Thank you happy30

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-03-20T07:37:27+00:00

try m4m in ur queque

[Normal]
00:03:477 (3) - make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662949
00:13:953 (1,1) - please give break after spin >_< , it's hard for newbie
00:17:286 (2) - x:196 y:324
00:34:429 - whistle?
00:40:619 (1) - NC remove for consistency
01:04:905 (4,1) - x:348 y:136 for better triangle, and don't forget fix spacing
01:14:905 (1) - NC remove
01:22:524 (1) - swap NC
01:26:334 (1) - NC remove
01:28:239 (1) - spacing issue (0,91)
01:30:143 (1,3) - swap NC
01:34:429 (1) - NC remove
01:46:334 (3) - (230,192) , make line
01:46:810 (4) - (307,114) , make line .3.
01:49:191 (1) - spacing issue, hmm i make this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/662958 , here is code

144,212,109191,6,0,P|152:169|196:121,1,110,2|0,0:0|1:1,0:0:0:0:
252,128,109905,2,0,P|308:152|348:192,1,110
344,240,110619,1,0,1:1:0:0:

01:54:429 (2,1) - spacing 0,95 . but i think please fix this
02:12:048 (3) - NC for consistency

[Sora]
00:48:000 (1) - NC remove
01:00:143 (2,3,4) - use 0,5x please as 01:08:239 (1,2,3,4) -
00:56:096 (5) - not sure this part can make jump, use normal DS (1,00)?

well, Good Luck~

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-03-20T08:22:51+00:00

summoned via PM ~
Gloria-kun hiii :3

General

convert the BG image into .JPG ? To reduce filesize :3

Normal

00:04:429 (1)- : ctrl+j this would make better flow imo
00:27:286 (1)- : last slider point 1grid to left
00:33:477 (4)- : make this slider straight to make good flow to next slider? imo
00:44:429 (1)- : add finish?
01:00:143 (2)- : make this a bit curve? like this for example
01:14:905 (1)- : add finish?
01:16:810 (1)- : try this slider to make circle symmetry with previous circle? oxo
```
416,196,76810,6,0,P|388:80|300:48,1,220,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
01:30:143 (1)- : remove nc is very recommended, because you didn't add nc at 01:24:429 (3) here, the rhythms is similar.
01:32:048 (3)- : if you do so then NC here

Sora

01:07:048 (5)- : bad symmetry, fix this slider please >< move last slider point to x160 y260
02:07:643 (6)- : there's piano sound, add soft-whistle?

:3/ gll

Gloria Guard

2,273 posts

Joined May 2011

Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-03-20T08:57:13+00:00

Joon wrote:
hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[Normal]
02:02:524 (1) - finish 사운드를 50%로 줄이는게 좋을거같습니다. 수정

[Sora]
01:38:715 (7) - remove whistle 수정
01:38:834 (8) - ^ [8번은 별로 중요한 터치는 아닙니다.] 수정
01:46:929 (8,9,10) - remove whistle [원음에서 소리가 줄어드는걸 최대한 이용한 사운드] 수정

good luck

Gloria Guard

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Topic Starter

Gloria Guard 2013-03-20T09:03:42+00:00

B u B B l E

B u B B l E wrote:
모딩이 서툴더라도 이해해 주세요~
[Normal]
00:44:429 - 휘슬 제거하고 Finish 처리해주시면 좋겠습니다 . 수정
심벌 소리 3박자가 제 귀에는 좀더 듣기가 좋더라구요.(다만 마지막 소리가 좀 작게 들리던데 그건 어떻게 건들이는건지 모르겠음.)
01:15:858 (3) - ^ 수정
01:24:429 (3) - nc로 해주시는걸 권장해요. 수정
01:31:572 (2) - ^ 수정
02:03:953 (2) - ^ 수정
02:11:810 (2) - ^ 수정
[Sora]
00:45:858 (10) - 왠지 nc 해야될거 같아요. 수정
00:56:096 (5) - ^ 수정
01:38:715 (7) - ^ 수정
02:16:810 (3) - 4연타 구간마다 nc처리하는게 어때요? 이건 조금 그렇네요 no 수정.

음... 제가 모딩할 수 있는 곳은 여기까지군요
제가 봐선 이상한 곳도 없고 딱히 손볼곳도 없기에 nc만 줄창 차있는 느낌...

Cancel

M4M!!

[Normal]

00:15:858 (1) - Make this slider look good. no change

[Sora]

Remove long streams like 01:15:858 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - with short sliders like 01:14:905 (1) . Streams like 02:01:572 (4,5,6,7) - are good for a hard diff. no

01:23:953 (3,4,5,6) - not distance snapped good. ok

01:46:334 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same as before. ok

Sonnyc

Normal:

00:00:620 (1) - 대칭 수정
00:03:000 (2) - 1칸 위로 수정
00:04:429 (1) - w도 좋지만 더 둥글게 만드는게 보기 좋을듯요. 싫으면 대칭이라도,, 수정
00:33:477 (4) - 딱히 휘슬을 빠짐 없이 쓰고 계시는데, 굳이 이 끝에 없을 이유는 보이지 않네요 수정
00:44:429 (1) - 휘슬 보단 피니시가 더 나을거 같아요. 음악과도 맞고, 앞 패턴과 호응하므로 수정
01:09:191 (1) - 굳이 뉴콤 안해도 될듯요 수정
01:14:905 (1) - 음,, 어떤 결정을 하시건간에 00:44:429 (1)와 소리 통일 바라요 수정
01:39:429 (3) - 1칸 왼쪽 수정
01:54:429 (2) - 끝도 Normal로 해보세요 수정
02:03:953 (2) - 1칸 왼쪽? 수정
02:17:762 (5) - 마지막이니 뉴콤! 수정

Sora:

00:21:096 (3) - 1칸 오른쪽으로 해서 00:20:381 (2)과 잘 어울리게 해주세요 수정
00:30:262 (2,3,4) - 전부 휘슬 시끄러우니 삭제 바라요 피아노 소리가 있어서 일부만 삭제합니다.
00:44:548 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:45:024 (6,7,8) - ^^
00:45:381 (9) - 같은 패턴으로 휘슬 만드시길 수정
00:56:096 (5) - 1/4 줄이는게 더 어울리네요 수정
01:07:048 (5) - 끝점 2칸 왼쪽으로 보내서 대칭 수정
01:22:881 (6) - 1칸 왼쪽? 아무튼 거리~~ 수정
01:23:477 (1,2) - 둘이 좀 먼건 안어울려보였어요 수정
01:34:905 (6) - 1칸 왼쪽 수정
01:38:834 (8,10) - 휘슬 삭제 수정
01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 휘슬 알아서 절제 바람요 수정
01:52:167 (7,1) - (7)의 엇박과 (1)이 가까워서 많이 헷갈렸어요 수정
02:01:810 (6,7) - 휘슬 제거 02:02:048 (8) 도 잘,, 수정
02:12:762 (2,3) - (2) 끝 보다는 (3) 처음에의 휘슬이 어울려요 수정
02:14:905 (5) - 휘슬 제거 수정

GrayKaiser82

Hi ^^ M4M from The Queue ~

[Normal]
02:10:143 (1) - Remove NC then 02:11:810 (2) - Add NC here ok

[Sora]

00:29:667 (6) - use DS and move it between 00:29:429 (5,7) - ok

01:22:048 (3,4) - it looks ugly to me T.T Do this:- ok

01:25:858 (4) - Move it to 308-168 ok

02:01:334 (3) - Move it to 188-84 ok
02:17:762 (1) - remove NC ok

Gloria Guard

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Gloria Guard 2013-03-20T09:08:35+00:00

- t e n n y a - wrote:
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Gloria-kun hiii :3

General
convert the BG image into .JPG ? To reduce filesize :3
Normal
00:04:429 (1)- : ctrl+j this would make better flow imo No
00:27:286 (1)- : last slider point 1grid to left ok
00:33:477 (4)- : make this slider straight to make good flow to next slider? imo No
00:44:429 (1)- : add finish? ok
01:00:143 (2)- : make this a bit curve? like this for example ok
01:14:905 (1)- : add finish? ok
01:16:810 (1)- : try this slider to make circle symmetry with previous circle? oxo No
416,196,76810,6,0,P|388:80|300:48,1,220,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:30:143 (1)- : remove nc is very recommended, because you didn't add nc at 01:24:429 (3) here, the rhythms is similar. ok
01:32:048 (3)- : if you do so then NC here ok
Sora
01:07:048 (5)- : bad symmetry, fix this slider please >< move last slider point to x160 y260 ok
02:07:643 (6)- : there's piano sound, add soft-whistle? ok
:3/ gll

DeletedUser_1574070

DeletedUser_1574070 2013-03-20T09:59:49+00:00

Normal
00:03:477 (3) - (등등슬라이더 끝부분) 휘슬 없어도 될것같은데 다른슬라이더들에도 다 붙어있으니까 넘어갈게요
00:29:191 (3,1) - 스택
01:49:191 (1) - 잘은 모르겠는데 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/663153 노말에서 1.00 으로 쭉 가다가 갑자기 1.61이뜨길래;; 원래 이지나 노말에서 디스턴스 바꿔가면서 해도 되는거라면 배우고 가겠습니다 (_ _)

Sora

00:19:191 (6,7,1) - 키아이타임 이전이랑 이후랑 스페이싱에 큰차이가 없어보이는데 같은모양에 스페이싱이 약간 달라서 집어만 놓을게요
01:32:762 (2) - 이 슬라이더를 이전 1번슬라이더랑 같은모양으로하면 더 나을 것 같은데 의도하신건가요?
02:00:858 (1,2,3,4) - 이것도 좋은데 조금만 더 5각형같이 다듬어도 괜찮을거같아요

맵 보는 눈이 없어서 쓸모없는부분만 헤짚고 간듯한 느낌;; 나중에 또 찾으면 에딧으로 밑에 추가할게요

AnimeStyle

648 posts

Joined December 2012

AnimeStyle 2013-03-21T20:51:11+00:00

From Modding Queue

[Opinion]

Very cool Sora diff ^^ I like it most

Sry, for less suggestions for improvement in Sora diff, but it`s already very good

[General]

Lots of unsnapped circles and sliders between 00:03:477 and 00:30:619 in Normal

[Normal]

00:00:620 (1) - Before this point theres no music, it's very confusing for the player
00:00:620 (1) - Move first sliderpoint one grid left, it's not symetrical -> ^ if you don't delete it
00:03:000 (2) - Move this 1 grid left, and 1 up
00:03:477 (3) - Unsnapped
00:04:429 (4) - ^
00:04:429 (1) - Move first sliderpoint one grid left, it's not symetrical
00:07:286 (3) - Unsnapped
00:12:048 (1) - Move the second sliderpoint two grids up
00:17:286 (2) - Unsapped
00:17:762 (3) - ^
00:20:739 (1) - ^
00:28:715 (2) - ^
00:30:619 (4) - ^
00:44:905 (2) - Use grid snap
00:45:381 (3) - ^
http://puu.sh/2lxlR <- should be looks like this ^^
01:20:619 (1) - Unsapped
01:27:762 (5) - ^
01:29:667 (2) - ^
01:35:381 (6) - Use grid snap
01:43:000 (3) - ^
01:43:477 (1) - ^
02:06:334 (1) - http://puu.sh/2lxWd <- Looks better
02:10:143 (1) - Maybe delete this new combo
02:11:810 (2) - Set here new combo
02:12:048 (1) - Delete this combo
(I know the combo starts everywhere at 1 2 3 4 , but in Opininion in it's not useful in this moment

)
02:17:762 (1) - Delete this one , too

[Sora]

00:00:620 (1) - Before this point theres no music, it's very confusing for the player
00:15:619 (1) - http://puu.sh/2lyoa <- Maybe add a circle here

I hope I can help you ^^

Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora

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Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora

moonlightleaf wrote:

kajiyatta wrote:

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Joon wrote:

B u B B l E wrote:

- t e n n y a - wrote:

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