A lot of this might be already covered by blissfulyoshi. I'm too lazy to remove the ones that are already done. Brace yourself.
[Normal]:
00:37:86 (9) - New combo.
00:39:25 (11) - I don't think you need this beat.
00:50:97 (8) - New combo?
00:59:12 (5) - New combo.
01:01:11 (9) - This overlap looks ugly. And new combo?
01:17:40 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
01:22:56 (8) - New combo.
01:26:14 (1) - Remove this beat?
01:30:11 (3) - I don't think you need this beat.
01:32:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move 1 to the right on the timeline in Beat Snap Divisor 1/1.
01:44:81 (1) - Make this slider repeat only THREE times and move it to 1:45:21.
01:49:98 (6) - New combo.
01:51:57 (9) - This overlap looks ugly. New combo.
01:57:53 (1) - Move this to 1:57:927.
01:58:32 (2) - Move this to 1:58:523.
01:59:51 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1.
02:00:70 (1) - Remove this beat.
02:01:10 (2) - This isn't necessary, but new combo.
02:02:69 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1.
02:03:88 (1) - Remove this beat.
02:04:28 (2) - This isn't necessary, but new combo.
02:31:30 (11) - New combo.
02:32:89 (15) - New combo.
02:37:66 (11) - New combo.
02:41:63 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
02:46:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:47:19 (2) - Add new combo.
03:09:44 (11) - New combo.
03:11:03 (15) - New combo.
03:15:80 (11) - New combo.
03:19:77 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
03:24:94 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:25:33 (2) - New combo.
[Hard]:
00:14:62 (10) - New combo.
00:19:19 (4) - It's spaced a little too far.
00:20:98 (10) - New combo.
00:23:96 (1,1,1) - These spinners are illegal because Auto cannot 2000 them. It's a new rule.
00:36:07 (2,3) - This spacing is inconsistent.
00:37:86 (8) - New combo.
00:44:62 (9) - New combo.
00:59:32 (1,2) - This spacing can trip someone up because it looks like the 1/4 ones. Space it out more.
01:16:60 (12) - New combo.
01:26:93 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:28:72 (8) - New combo.
01:35:47 (9) - New combo.
01:50:18 (1,2) - This spacing can trip someone up because it looks like the 1/4 ones. Space it out more.
01:54:74 (10) - New combo.
02:11:83 (4) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 2.
02:31:30 (7) - New combo.
02:32:89 (12) - New combo~
02:37:66 (11) - New combo.
02:43:61 (1) - Move this to 2:44:01 and make it only 5 repeats. Then add a beat at 2:43:61.
03:09:44 (8) - New combo.
03:15:80 (11) - New combo.
03:20:37 (5) - Move to the center of the playing field.
03:22:16 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looks sloppy.
03:25:33 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above.
03:29:70 (3,4) - Move them more to the left so they'll be looking like they're the middle of (1) and (2). The final shape should be a trapezoid.
This is an interesting map. Somewhat. Yes. Make the corrections and you'll earn a star, haha.
The song feels a little too repetitious, especially on [Normal].
Also, create an easier difficulty.
Good luck!
Also give kudosu where kudosu is due :>