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Aaron Kwok - Para Para Sakura

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antony11
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 7 July, 2009 at 2:11:06

Artist: Aaron Kwok
Title: Para Para Sakura
BPM: 151
Filesize: 3957kb
Play Time: 03:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.2 stars, 262 notes)
  2. Echo's Insane (5 stars, 576 notes)
  3. Hard (4.87 stars, 528 notes)
  4. Normal (4.55 stars, 359 notes)
Download: Aaron Kwok - Para Para Sakura
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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郭富城-Para Para Sakura (芭啦芭啦櫻之花電影主題曲)

Enjoy it..

13/5 Added Echo's insane
blissfulyoshi
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Starrodkirby86
A lot of this might be already covered by blissfulyoshi. I'm too lazy to remove the ones that are already done. Brace yourself.

[Normal]:
00:37:86 (9) - New combo.
00:39:25 (11) - I don't think you need this beat.
00:50:97 (8) - New combo?
00:59:12 (5) - New combo.
01:01:11 (9) - This overlap looks ugly. And new combo?
01:17:40 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
01:22:56 (8) - New combo.
01:26:14 (1) - Remove this beat?
01:30:11 (3) - I don't think you need this beat.
01:32:10 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Move 1 to the right on the timeline in Beat Snap Divisor 1/1.
01:44:81 (1) - Make this slider repeat only THREE times and move it to 1:45:21.
01:49:98 (6) - New combo.
01:51:57 (9) - This overlap looks ugly. New combo.
01:57:53 (1) - Move this to 1:57:927.
01:58:32 (2) - Move this to 1:58:523.
01:59:51 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1.
02:00:70 (1) - Remove this beat.
02:01:10 (2) - This isn't necessary, but new combo.
02:02:69 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/1.
02:03:88 (1) - Remove this beat.
02:04:28 (2) - This isn't necessary, but new combo.
02:31:30 (11) - New combo.
02:32:89 (15) - New combo.
02:37:66 (11) - New combo.
02:41:63 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
02:46:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:47:19 (2) - Add new combo.
03:09:44 (11) - New combo.
03:11:03 (15) - New combo.
03:15:80 (11) - New combo.
03:19:77 (3,4) - Spacing looks irregular here.
03:24:94 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:25:33 (2) - New combo.

[Hard]:
00:14:62 (10) - New combo.
00:19:19 (4) - It's spaced a little too far.
00:20:98 (10) - New combo.
00:23:96 (1,1,1) - These spinners are illegal because Auto cannot 2000 them. It's a new rule.
00:36:07 (2,3) - This spacing is inconsistent.
00:37:86 (8) - New combo.
00:44:62 (9) - New combo.
00:59:32 (1,2) - This spacing can trip someone up because it looks like the 1/4 ones. Space it out more.
01:16:60 (12) - New combo.
01:26:93 (2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:28:72 (8) - New combo.
01:35:47 (9) - New combo.
01:50:18 (1,2) - This spacing can trip someone up because it looks like the 1/4 ones. Space it out more.
01:54:74 (10) - New combo.
02:11:83 (4) - Move 1 up on Grid Level 2.
02:31:30 (7) - New combo.
02:32:89 (12) - New combo~
02:37:66 (11) - New combo.
02:43:61 (1) - Move this to 2:44:01 and make it only 5 repeats. Then add a beat at 2:43:61.
03:09:44 (8) - New combo.
03:15:80 (11) - New combo.
03:20:37 (5) - Move to the center of the playing field.
03:22:16 (1,2,3,4,5) - This looks sloppy.
03:25:33 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above.
03:29:70 (3,4) - Move them more to the left so they'll be looking like they're the middle of (1) and (2). The final shape should be a trapezoid.

This is an interesting map. Somewhat. Yes. Make the corrections and you'll earn a star, haha.

The song feels a little too repetitious, especially on [Normal].

Also, create an easier difficulty. :)

Good luck!

Also give kudosu where kudosu is due :>
Topic Starter
antony11
thank^^

easy mod added
Starrodkirby86
Hey again.

[Easy]:
00:34:88 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:68 (2) - New combo.
00:38:46 (1) - Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 2.
01:22:96 (x) - I feel like there should be a beat here. If there is, that would get the new combo.
02:09:06 (5) - Remove this beat.
02:09:45 (1) - Move this to where (5) used to be. Extend it by 1/1.
02:42:43 (5) - New combo?
02:45:61 (5) - New combo?
02:48:79 (5) - New combo?
02:52:17 (1) - A near ninja-spinner on Easy? O_o

I liked [Easy] a lot...

I may as well Star this and all so you can have something here. :P

Get this map modded more^^ Good luck.
aquabluu
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Topic Starter
antony11
Thank all of you@@
Alace
<Hard>
I am sure those spinners will get troubke REMOVE PLZ
spacing
00:36:08 (2) (3)
01:09:45 (3) (4)
01:27:33 (3) (4)
01:29:52 (4) (5)
01:40:45 (6) (7)
01:50:18 (1) (2)
02:18:39 (3) (1)
02:32:90 (6) (7)
02:34:09 (13) (14)
dawn010
It is great
mtmcl
00:59:32 (1,2) - These are spaced just like (3,4) and (5,6) yet they are timed differently. There is room for some creativity in spacing, but this case may be unacceptable. That said, have a star for now. Great map!


EDIT: I keep forgetting to put difficulty. I think this was Hard?
Topic Starter
antony11

mtmcl wrote:

00:59:32 (1,2) - These are spaced just like (3,4) and (5,6) yet they are timed differently. There is room for some creativity in spacing, but this case may be unacceptable. That said, have a star for now. Great map!


EDIT: I keep forgetting to put difficulty. I think this was Hard?
Ha...actually 00:59:32 (1,2) is a spacing mistake =口=
Fixed it already, thank^^
mtmcl
Fragile Mark bubble. Don't poke it too hard.
yanki
Support <3 HK ppl :)
stAR !!!!!!
vytalibus
[Easy]
01:59:92 (1) - Really short for my liking, especially since it's an Easy.
02:03:10 (1) - ^
02:06:27 (1) - ^
02:09:06 (1) - Extend this by 1/1.
02:42:43 (1) - I don't know about this jump. It's a surprise. Many beginners (who are supposed to be the targets of Easy difficulties) will definitely get confused.
02:52:17 (1) - Same with 02:09:06.
03:20:58 (1) - Same with 02:42:43. I also sense copy-pasta, which isn't really bad.

[Normal]
01:44:82 (1) - Move the starting point forward by 1/1. Sounds WAY better.

[Hard]
00:23:96 (1,1,1) - I don't like these streams of spinners, especially the first one since it's too short for my liking.
Topic Starter
antony11
Fixed all already
thanks vytalibus :P
Echo
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Echo
Here you go~

One thing - perhaps offset 11420?

edit: offset now at 11435 as discussed on irc

Download: Aaron Kwok - Para Para Sakura (antony11) [Echo's insane].osu
Topic Starter
antony11
Awesome map, Echo yoyo~ :)
I can't find any problem with your map.

But only one suggestion to you
02:21:35 (6) and 02:22:94 (6) - extend 1/6 beat will be better
Echo
I think if I make it longer there isn't enough time to get to the next beat.

Update for mine, I changed the ending slightly. It was too 乱 before.

Download: Aaron Kwok - Para Para Sakura (antony11) [Echo's insane].osu
WyndII
Can't find anything wrong. :)
Topic Starter
antony11
Echo: reuploaded
WyndII: Thank :P
Echo
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Topic Starter
antony11

Echo wrote:

I just noticed there's a break at 02:25:44 in my map, please remove it :)
Fixed~
Rolled
I hate to be a bad news bear but this offset feels pretty early to me. 11445 is a lot more comfortable.

Other than that, everything is great. Only slight bothersome thing is that hard's overall difficulty is greater than insane, but I realize they were made my different mappers with their own style. But with that higher overall difficulty, I only notice the early offset more.

I've been doubting my UO lately so I'm actually not going to pop this. Consider the offset suggestion a "how do you feel about this?" and if you do not agree with it, I'll reevaluate ranking. And if you do agree with it, I'll most likely rank.

Note if any other BATs come in here trying to pick off a bubble, please consider the offset.
Topic Starter
antony11
Rolled: 11445 is the offset I used before.

But Echo thinks that is too late for him, so I think the final decession should depend on Echo.

Edit: Just lower the overall difficulty in Hard
tieff
Wow... Song is awesome! And your map awesome too!
Just little siggestions. ^^

[Easy]
01:24:14 (3) - Maybe... Place near to 2?
01:36:46 (3) - Maybe add 1 returne?
02:46:40 (3) - Add clap.
02:50:176 (3) - Delete whistle here.

[Normal]
00:31:10 (7) - Why it so close to 6?
02:30:90 (10) - New combo here OR here 02:31:30 (11)
03:09:05 (10) - New combo here OR here 03:09:44 (11)
03:15:80 (1) - New combo?

[Hard]
01:40:64 (7) - Left 1 grid.

Staaaaaaaar.
Topic Starter
antony11
Changed the offset to 11445. It also more comfortable to me
Pasonia
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Topic Starter
antony11
Thank Pasonia!

Easy: I want to keep the whole song beacuse I think someone will expect to listen the full version. If he think it is boring, he can just ignore this difficulty.

Normal and hard have been changed

Echo's diff just wait Echo to fix it by himself
Echo
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Pasonia
Re-checked. Satisfied.

And...

deepsea
Just some minor personal nazi stuffs, so I will keep bubble.

Easy:

Since most notes are follow 1/1 divisor, some 1/2 notes under the slider is little hard and sonfusing to newers IMO, like 00:52:76(3)(4), 01:43:63(3)(4)

Normal:
02:42:04(1)-(5):Stack on end of slider?
03:20:58(1)-(5)^

Hard:
00:52:37(6)-(11)^
01:43:23(6)-(11)^

Echo’s insane:
Everything is good and cool…change difficulty name to [Echo’s Insane] if Echo and you want?

These are personal nazi, decide if you want to change these things or not and tell me, then I will rank this.
Topic Starter
antony11

deepsea wrote:

Just some minor personal nazi stuffs, so I will keep bubble.

Easy:

Since most notes are follow 1/1 divisor, some 1/2 notes under the slider is little hard and sonfusing to newers IMO, like 00:52:76(3)(4), 01:43:63(3)(4)

Changed 00:52:76(3)(4), Now all notes under slider are 1/2 note

Normal:
02:42:04(1)-(5):Stack on end of slider?
03:20:58(1)-(5)^

Hard:
00:52:37(6)-(11)^
01:43:23(6)-(11)^

I love this style=V= So i won't change it

Echo’s insane:
Everything is good and cool…change difficulty name to [Echo’s Insane] if Echo and you want?

Changed

These are personal nazi, decide if you want to change these things or not and tell me, then I will rank this.
deepsea
Then that's it.
tieff
Cool map. Cool style.
Gabi
great beatmap set!!!!!, however

/me slaps echo

why did you force default skin D: so hard to see my mouse :/
Echo
I did? o.O
Starrodkirby86
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EEeee
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GabrielRKF
Why I can't stop playing this?
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