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Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size)

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Kawayi Rika
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 12월 16일 일요일 at 오전 12:13:53

Artist: Horie Yui
Title: Hikari (TV Size)
Source: Inukami!
Tags: cRyo[iceeicee] alacat opening
BPM: 144
Filesize: 13981kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. alacat's Easy (2.24 stars, 91 notes)
  2. cRyo's Hard (4.89 stars, 218 notes)
  3. Normal (4.12 stars, 134 notes)
  4. Rika (5 stars, 351 notes)
Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size)
Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 35th Ranked beat map.

Dec 6, 2012 ~ My 2 years in osu :3 ~ Cute Skin by sherrie__fay.

Rika(Insane),Normal by me.

Hard by cRyo[iceeicee].

Easy by alacat.
Scorpiour
/me hugs Kawayi Rika
LKs
Despiting all the mistakes you've made and any other adverse influences caused by you

You are still an ardent, helpful and energetic person who has contributed pretty a lot to the mapping&modding community

Nobody can deny your tremendous input on modding maps and great assistance provided by you alone with hundreds of hours of your time being spent

You trid your best to keep yourself zealous even you had been being suffered from negative comments. So you're still one of the most noteworthy staff members ever

Best wishs to you :3


and you lost all your kds
Nymph
加 油
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
0.0
Sure


(。♋‸♋。)
cRyo[iceeicee]

Scorpiour wrote:

/me hugs Kawayi Rika
x.x
YTYuyu
LKs is right, don't let these comments bring you down. you did whatever you can to help out in the mapping community. i'd help you out but i guess it's too late to do that orz. even though we had rough times, you're still special to me because of the number of maps you did, and how much you contributed to the mapping community. i wanna see the Rika i met. the one who enjoys to mod and map no matter what people say, not this one because it'll worry a lot of people that are close to you, especially me...
NoHitter
Keep on keeping on Rika! :)
S_Wings
Well, i don't know you so much yet but i think i understand what's going on here, i think you have to ignore this comments and keep on your work in the staff, and very people close to you will be very sad if they see you like this...

So please keep on!
haha5957
I have to 300% agree with her userpage

cheer up~
xsrsbsns

Scorpiour wrote:

/me hugs Kawayi Rika
~
Konei
Well, me and many others can say, that you helped community really much ~
Would have liked to see you keeping up the work but, well ok :3

Good luck then, whatever you will do ~
BeatofIke
:(
Stefan
I accept the fact that you helped a big Part of the osu! Communtiy with your suggestions and your Mods. And the Fact that you actually never learned the english Language, changed my opinion to you for a bit. However, to be honest: Your Skills aren't far/good enough for the MAT position. And I personally thinks that you bubble sometimes after Sympathy.

Before anyone says that it isn't right or start flamming over me, let me say that this is my Opinion. I don't care how you think about her. I just gave my honest opinion to Rika. Good Luck, whatever you gonna do in the future.
No_Gu
恩不多说啥了。加油吧
hoLysoup
<3 you
LQA20Ans
You worked very hard as a MAT. Everybody knows that.

Cheer up Rika!

Weez
Learn from your mistakes and move on, simple as that. Take all bad criticisms and just use that as constructive criticism and just learn from your mistakes and move on. Wish you the best of luck with everything Rika
x847606653
blissfulyoshi
I feel really bad about not supporting you as much as I should have, so I wish you the best of luck.
To cheer up, have a video: http://www.puu.sh/1y40p
DarknessAngel
看到妳射的那些星,不知怎的讓我覺得很難過 (透漏了妳自暴自棄和想發洩的心情)
加油啊,支持妳
Fumika

xsrsbsns wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

/me hugs Kawayi Rika
~
~ Cheer up !
Andrea
I don't know what to say, you've helped this community really much and you won't be forgotten, at least by me.

Keep up the good work Rika, you're a great person!
Stefan
lol Andrea no BAT anymore :O
meiikyuu
_Azusa_
Please don't go away :o
Sekai
Well i know you dislike me a bit but.... But i dont care what people think of you but. I just know one thing that you are good person and i dont think of as bad person so. I hope you feel better soon or I wish you good luck in what you'll do..... (btw dont be made at what all people say because they dont know you, there many people that cares about you here like me and other once too)

I guess that's all i want to say~ I just hope you feel better soon~ osu needs moe Rika QAQ
mintong89
osu need moe rika 0.0/
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Thanks very much guys T_T

I'll feel get better ~
Snowy Dream
日卡2周岁快乐=v=
Quilt
good luck
Makar
Just look at what has happened to the others that have been in your position. If you really try things will go the way you want eventually.
xsrsbsns
SPOILER
19:12 xsrsbsns: 00:38:448 (2,3,4) - 这个太近(1)了觉得
19:13 xsrsbsns: 00:23:240 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/1zkWA ?
19:14 Kawayi Rika: 00:23:448 (3) - 这个往后挪1/4?
19:15 xsrsbsns: 00:23:448 (3) - delete // 00:23:657 (4) - 移前
19:15 xsrsbsns: (just suggestion)
19:16 xsrsbsns: delete and move front*
19:17 Kawayi Rika: 00:23:761 -
19:17 Kawayi Rika: 这加个note 怎么样
19:18 xsrsbsns: 我不鼓励这么做:<
19:19 Kawayi Rika: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/521888
19:19 Kawayi Rika: 我改成这样了
19:19 Kawayi Rika: 00:38:032 (1) - 还有这个也往左移动了
19:19 xsrsbsns: 嗯~
19:20 xsrsbsns: 01:24:282 (1) -
19:20 xsrsbsns: 这个节奏会难捉
19:20 xsrsbsns: 看你要不要改
19:21 xsrsbsns: 1就remove repeat & add note at 01:24:490
19:22 xsrsbsns: 额 其实我就只有那一个建议
19:22 Kawayi Rika: 嗯
good luck :D
Topic Starter
Kawayi Rika
Thanks for IRC Mod ~ ;)
raririn
。-。
虽然不知道啥但是
sherrie__fay
http://puu.sh/1zLfX

what your req nyan

btw scorpiour is no longer yours now OwO
Akiyama Mizuki
ㅇㅅㅇ
ㅋㅅㅋ
ㅎㅅㅎ
ㅠㅅㅠ
ㄱㅅㄱ
Darksonic
Go Rika, don't give up <3
h3k1ru
welcome back :3
Fumika

h3k1ru wrote:

welcome back :3
<333333
Frostmourne
hihi Rika, WB :P

M4M here !

General
seems ! fine even some green lines are unsnapped in cRyo's diff but they don't affect any game play
missing video on cRyo's diff so please add it ~~~
I'm not sure about spinner-background.png and BG.jpg. They have different size so when the spin is running, it shows not perfectly comparing to each other

alacat's Easy
fine~

Normal
HP+1 , I think it's not too high as it is
00:36:157 (5) - suggest to new combo here because the next note starts with different beat(it has been running 1/2 beats so far) so it will notice people for large gaps there
01:10:323 (5) - move this 1/2 back (will start on 01:10:115) from the logic and vocal of this song, it should follow the vocal exactly here imo and then add slider on 01:10:740 ending at 01:10:948 instead, I think it plays more naturally for this one

cRyo's Hard
01:08:865 (2,3) - ctrl+g this, I think this flows better than the previous , the current, distance from (3) to (4) is quite too short and doesn't fit with vocal(with higher volume of Horie's voice)
01:24:907 (5) - suggest new combo here , nothing else other than personal feeling :)

Rika
00:18:657 (5) - add more repeat and more it closer to the next ? it's quite empty on 00:18:969 , music has the obvious sound here
00:37:719 (7) - suggest to move to x:256 y:304 or somewhere around that because it plays bettter from the previous run imo
00:42:407 (5) - down 1 grid here, it's too close to the 00:42:407 (5) - 's body
01:08:240 (2) - improve this slider ? it's placed on the middle so I think it should be more balanced slider
01:20:323 (9) - down 1 grid, reason is the same

good luck !
Guy
hi~ from your queue!
try m4m :3

 [Rika]

 ● 00:52:823 (5,6) - Like this slider?
 ● 00:56:157 (1) - 1grid up? this is not straight.
 ● 01:16:677 - add note?

 [cRyo's Hard]

 ● 00:52:823 (4) - blanket (2)? 1grid right. and slider end point 1grid up and 1grid left.
 ● 00:57:407 (5) - 1grid down? slider end stack with 00:58:865 (1) -

 [Normal]

 ● 00:30:323 (2) - It is not perfect symmetry. try this code.
132,176,30323,2,0,P|200:176|200:176|212:224|300:224|312:176|312:176|380:176,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
 ● 01:23:240 (4,5) - like this?

 [alacat's Easy]

 ● 00:34:490 (1) - 微妙にスタックできてないのでしっかり00:32:823 (2) - の始端にスタックしましょう。
 ● 01:00:740 (3) - x:424 y:244あたりに移動して、直線を作る感じの配置のほうが自分は好みです。

That's all~
Good Luck ;)

Edit:
100th Kudosu \:D/
S h i o n
yo M4M~?

[alacat's Easy]
00:52:823 (3) - 折返点去掉whistle?

[Normal]
00:42:407 (5) - NC 堆叠的提示 还能避免太长的combo
00:54:490 (1,2) - swap nc? 对pattern和vocal都比较好
01:24:907 (6) - 25%的音量太小声了很奇怪
01:25:323 (1) - 当中的折返点好像听起来没什么意义 试试在01:26:157放折返? 然后后面再调整加note slider什么的

[Rika]
00:09:386 (6,9) - 稍微微调下让这两个不碰到= =? 还有00:10:115 (9,11) - 如果是故意的话就算了~
00:22:511 (x) - 这个音挺明显的 索性加note变成1串连打
00:37:615 (6,7,8) - 很突兀啊.. 全图只有这个3连的spacing那么大
01:07:823 (1,2,3) - 3/2slider 的节奏不太明显 还是1/2适合点?
00:18:657 (5,6,7) - 挺random的节奏排列 虽然合音乐 试试这个http://puu.sh/1ArWl

;)
MerryGate
Hi( ´ ▽ ` )ノ from your queue

[General]
fine.

[Easy]
OD-1...?
01:01:990 (2) - add clap to start

[Normal]
hmm...a little difficulty.
Probably due to the high SV.
I recommended OD3
00:18:657 (2) - add whistle to start
00:19:490 (1) - whistle to end
00:25:323 (5) - whistle to start
00:36:157 (5) - whistle
00:39:073 (3) - Looks a little not good.example code. maybe,53~60line
SPOILER
388,60,35115,2,0,P|452:80|484:144,1,140
484,196,35740,1,8,0:0:0
376,224,36157,1,0,0:0:0
256,340,36782,1,2,0:0:0
136,224,37407,2,0,P|72:204|40:140,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,108,38240,5,8,0:0:0
192,144,38448,2,0,P|256:168|324:140,1,140
364,108,39073,2,0,P|396:88|428:88,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Hard]
Snap green sections

[Rika]
00:18:657 (5) - add hoistle to start
00:19:282 (7) - whoistle to end
00:25:323 (3) - whistle to start
00:36:157 (1) - ^

Nice Mapset!
good luck
Lally
M4M >u< hope <3
[General]
omg cute sliders OAO
spinner-background have other size as bg is not cute to look it please fix it
[Easy]
00:16:990 (4) - curve it i think it's better
00:18:240 - whistle or finish
00:23:240 (4) - move it under this slider 00:24:490 (4) to do a blanket for it
00:27:823 (1) - this slider is curved why don't you try to fix it so:
00:59:490 (2) - do a blanket for 01:00:740 (3)

[Normal]
00:09:907 (5,6,1) - try something like that
00:36:782 (6) - this cirle stop a little bit the rithm why don't you try to replace it with a small slider ?

00:42:407 (5) - new combo

[Hard]
some unsnapped green lines
00:09:282 (4) - curve this slider for a better flow
00:38:448 (2,3,4,5,6) - do a better star

[Rika]

00:25:323 (3,4) - stack they
00:27:823 (1) - this slider is to close to the pervious
00:48:240 82,3) - stack they a little bit better


nice map :3
Irie Miyuki
Nice map. Good luck :3
I don't know what happened to you because i did't read every reply.. but i hope you feel better now xD
SPOILER
[Rika]
00:09:907 (7,8,9) - 这个节奏是不是好一点

00:19:073 (6,7,1,2,3) - ^

00:48:657 (3) - stack better
01:07:823 -

01:19:907 (8) - 感觉形状需要改一下.. 把第二个锚点往上改一改?
01:27:094 (7) - 这个note删掉?

[cRyo's Hard]
00:23:865 (5,6) - 跟着鼓点么? 应该是这样的感觉..

00:57:823 (6) - NC?
00:59:490 (1) - ^

That's all. Sorry for my poor mod :( I‘ve done my best, I wish these can help u a little.

edit: 本子触摸板不舒服不小心按上了个表情..用edit删了T.T 请别介意
RikiH_
Hi, I want to make m4m from your queue but not a fast and poor mod only for get the slot. I hope you will check my map, anyways:

General

There is a mistake with your spinner's BG and normal BG. I don't know how to exploain it but when you play a spinner this happens:


Fix please :o


alacat's easy

Why no video here? D:
00:04:490 (4,1) - Blanketing them can make the pattern more interesting
00:21:573 I'd add a note with clap
00:32:407 The same
00:32:823 (2) - Fix stack with following 1
00:37:823 (1) - Not perfectly stacked, move 2nd sliderpoint in 352|220 and slider's tail in 328|128. This should do
01:02:823 (3,4) - I'm not sure about this pattern, it breaks the flow a bit
01:06:573 (4) - Make this symmetric to the center?
01:27:407 (5) - Put the repeat in 172|204

Normal

00:33:448 (4,5) - I' not sure about them, I'd change them or place a bit up
01:12:823 (4,5,6) - They look a bit random, adjust this pattern in another way
01:24:073 (5) - make this symmetric with the previous one? You used symmetry until now D:
01:25:323 (1) - Not perfectly symmetric, put slider's tail in 424|180

cRyo's Hard

00:10:740 (1) - More curved?
00:47:823 (8) - A bit weird, put this in 280|64
00:49:490 (5) - I'm not sure but it seems to be a bit asymmetric
00:57:407 (5) - Ctrl+g? I'm absolutely not sure about this but try it
00:58:865 (1) - This should be stacked with the previous 5

Rika

00:06:990 (9) - I think you should add a NC here because the song changes radically in this point
00:09:907 (7,8,9) - Put these a bit more on the left, I don't like that overlapping :o
00:22:302 I think you missed a note here, you should change the whole pattern and make a unique stream here
00:33:240 (7) Ctrl+g? It flows a bit better
00:42:615 (6) 136|192 for a better flow
00:51:782 (3,4,5) - Adjust them in another way, they look random
00:53:240 (6,7) Blanket?
00:58:761 (7) This is a bit meeh, it breaks the simmetry of the whole pattern


Good map. Please fix spinner's BG, it's important!
I tried to make a good mod, so I hope you will accept to m4m. My map is this: t/90571
Thank you in any case, bye O:
alacat

Frostmourne wrote:

alacat's Easy
fine~ \^^/

Guy wrote:

 [alacat's Easy]

 ● 00:34:490 (1) - 微妙にスタックできてないのでしっかり00:32:823 (2) - の始端にスタックしましょう。 oops fixed :3
 ● 01:00:740 (3) - x:424 y:244あたりに移動して、直線を作る感じの配置のほうが自分は好みです。 Nope ~ >_<

S h i o n wrote:

[alacat's Easy]
00:52:823 (3) - 折返点去掉whistle? hmm , I have already added it >.<

MerryGate wrote:

[Easy]
OD-1...? ok :3
01:01:990 (2) - add clap to start I want to put sound with constant rhythm here

Lally wrote:

[Easy]
00:16:990 (4) - curve it i think it's better i like this pattern >_<
00:18:240 - whistle or finish Nope
00:23:240 (4) - move it under this slider 00:24:490 (4) to do a blanket for it ^

00:27:823 (1) - this slider is curved why don't you try to fix it so: fixed :3

00:59:490 (2) - do a blanket for 01:00:740 (3) same as above .

RikiH_ wrote:

alacat's easy

Why no video here? D: :o
00:04:490 (4,1) - Blanketing them can make the pattern more interesting Nope
00:21:573 I'd add a note with clap Nope
00:32:407 The same ^
00:32:823 (2) - Fix stack with following 1 ok :3
00:37:823 (1) - Not perfectly stacked, move 2nd sliderpoint in 352|220 and slider's tail in 328|128. This should do ^
01:02:823 (3,4) - I'm not sure about this pattern, it breaks the flow a bit mm , I want to keep current pattern >_<
01:06:573 (4) - Make this symmetric to the center? Nope.
01:27:407 (5) - Put the repeat in 172|204 fixed ~


Thank you for modding ヽ(*´∀`*)ノ




Edit : http://puu.sh/1AsTC
DarknessAngel
as your request via in-game PM ~ :)


我是看到妳的queue才想到:「對了!還沒mod妳的圖!」 lol
(最近玩其他遊戲玩得太開心=.=)
抱歉慢了點T.T

話說大家為了求快而mod出來的東西果然看起來不怎麼樣xD


Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



General

  1. none !

Rika



  • (here are some suggestions about rhythm,you can ignore the suggestion you don't agree.)
  1. 00:23:240 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 我認為這樣的節奏會更好

    這節奏跟隨著音樂中比較強烈的部分,在打擊上可能會舒適一點
  2. 00:28:657 (3,4,5) - 節奏改成下圖那樣 ? 理由同上面所說
  3. 00:37:615 (6,7,8) - 這個這麼分開看起來有點怪IMO,我覺得間距弄成像00:44:177 (5,6,7,8)會好一點
  4. 01:19:073 (5) - ↓節奏換一下 ? 對我來說省略人聲聽起來不大對勁,換成這樣聽起來舒服一點
  5. 01:21:886 (3) - 抱歉nazi一下,這note往下一格的話01:21:157 (1,2,3,4)就等間距了,看起來好看一點

cRyo



  • (just ignore the suggestion you don't agree,but you should snap green sections which are unsnapped.)
  1. 00:30:740 (1) - too many whistle in a short time sounds noizy to me.
    I feel better if you let the volume down to 35%.
  2. 01:16:990 (1,2) - I think the spacing between 01:16:990 (1,2) should be larger since the NC is just 2.
    also the large spacing can emphasize the vocal well.
  3. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections
    00:04:590 - snap to 00:04:594
    00:09:382 - snap to 00:09:386
    00:12:715 - snap to 00:12:719
    00:16:048 - snap to 00:16:052
    00:32:923 - snap to 00:32:927
    00:34:590 - snap to 00:34:594
    00:36:257 - snap to 00:36:261
    00:37:923 - snap to 00:37:927
    00:39:590 - snap to 00:39:594
    00:41:257 - snap to 00:41:261
    00:44:590 - snap to 00:44:594
    00:46:257 - snap to 00:46:261
    00:47:923 - snap to 00:47:927
    00:49:590 - snap to 00:49:594
    00:51:257 - snap to 00:51:261
    00:52:923 - snap to 00:52:927
    00:54:590 - snap to 00:54:594
    00:59:590 - snap to 00:59:594
    01:06:048 - snap to 01:06:052
    01:09:382 - snap to 01:09:386
    01:12:715 - snap to 01:12:719
    01:14:382 - snap to 01:14:386
    01:17:090 - snap to 01:17:094
    01:19:382 - snap to 01:19:386
    01:22:715 - snap to 01:22:719
    01:24:590 - snap to 01:24:594

Normal



  • (please consider the suggestion about rhythm.)
  1. 00:04:073 (4) - 這個聽起來就真的不好了,我覺得至少不能省略00:04:490的voice,改成這樣:
  2. 00:28:032 (3) - 又個nazi lol,移到(444,240),看看00:27:407 (2,3,4),感覺曲線會流暢一點
  3. 00:36:157 (5,6,7) - 在(6)的地方有種節奏"急停"的感覺,造成打擊感和聽覺上的空虛,換一下節奏來完全跟著人聲 ?
  4. 00:50:115 (x) - 試試看放個note在這邊 ? 不知怎的我覺得就是該加,我也不大會解釋 ..
  5. 00:52:407 (3) - 做個跟00:53:240 (4)契合的slider看起來更好\:D/,像這樣

bakacat



  • (I just point out a suggestion,it's up to you to decide to fix or not.)
  1. bakabakabakabakabaka !! \>A</
  2. 00:13:240 (2) - if I were you,I would move this note to (348,308).
    it looks better,and flow is better,too.
  3. I'm not a fan with your soft-whistle setting,but I think I shouldn't point out them cuz it would break your setting patterns if I did that.


overall,a good map.
GJ ~
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