1. Easy (1.67 stars, 97 notes)
2. Hard (3.2 stars, 240 notes)
3. Lunasa's Taiko Muzukashii (2.58 stars, 320 notes)
4. Lunasa's Taiko Oni (3.15 stars, 413 notes)
5. Nardo's Taiko Oni (3.18 stars, 408 notes)
6. Normal (1.9 stars, 137 notes)

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EmPao wrote:

Hi!meetmeetdee
Mod from my queue~

[General]
-Soure:Yosuga no Sora Fixed
-沒記錯的話,新訂的rule說Taiko BG不能再使用了,請用其他BG代替吧 改了
-音效有點大聲..改成50%左右吧? 改了
[Easy]
00:01:500 (2) - spacing Fixed
00:31:703 (4) - Ctrl+G好看些 OK
00:29:271 (1) - 頭加whistle 加了
00:35:757 (1) - ^ 加了
00:42:041 (1) - ^ 加了
00:48:325 (3) - 加clap 加了
00:53:190 (3) - 頭加clap 加了
01:11:433 (1,2,3) - 試試這樣?(http://puu.sh/23KG3) Link看不到
01:22:379 (1,2) - spacing Fixed
01:24:406 (1) - 頭加finish 加了
[Normal]
00:02:311 (4) - This slider is weird to me 改掉了
00:06:568 (1) - 加whistle 加了
00:09:811 (1) - 頭加finish 加了
01:12:852 (3) - 頭加whistle 加了

抱歉 最近很忙沒什麼時間mod ;_; It is fine, 謝了
Good Luck

1. 感觉offset+15要好些（只是感觉orz
2. 总感觉默认clap声音很吵，考虑换一个？

1. 00:00:082这里的红绿线因为只是调了音量所以没理由放在一起
2. 00:24:811(3)clap
3. 00:15:487(1,2,3)试试这个节奏呢
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4. 00:37:379(3)whistle

1. 00:03:325(6)这个finish感觉音量太大了点
2. 00:11:027(2)x:336 y:152
3. 00:46:703(1)左移一格
4. 01:03:325(1)这个slider还是不要放在之前的slider下面，不好看

1. 00:07:379(1)whistle
2. 00:08:595(5)remove whistle
3. 00:12:244(6,7)感觉间距稍微大了点
4. 00:22:379(1)删掉finish然后在后面00:22:784(2)加一个finish
5. 00:47:109(4)kiai time开始可以加个nc
6. 01:12:852(4,7)没叠好

Melt wrote:

Hi :3
mod request from queue

[General]

1. 感觉offset+15要好些（只是感觉orz
2. 总感觉默认clap声音很吵，考虑换一个？

會考虑一下，之后可能再转
[Easy]

1. 00:00:082这里的红绿线因为只是调了音量所以没理由放在一起 Fixed
2. 00:24:811(3)clap Added
3. 00:15:487(1,2,3)试试这个节奏呢 不错
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:37:379(3)whistle Added

[Normal]

1. 00:03:325(6)这个finish感觉音量太大了点 Fixed
2. 00:11:027(2)x:336 y:152 Ok
3. 00:46:703(1)左移一格 Ok
4. 01:03:325(1)这个slider还是不要放在之前的slider下面，不好看 Fixed

[Sora]

1. 00:07:379(1)whistle Added
2. 00:08:595(5)remove whistle Ok
3. 00:12:244(6,7)感觉间距稍微大了点 暂时不动，再看看其他人的意见
4. 00:22:379(1)删掉finish然后在后面00:22:784(2)加一个finish Ok
5. 00:47:109(4)kiai time开始可以加个nc 不了，nc跟vocal
6. 01:12:852(4,7)没叠好 Fixed

另外你的图好像还在wip里面 因為not ready for rank
Star for sora :3 Thanks
加油

1. 01:14:271 - better if u place note with clap in there
2. 01:15:892 - ^

1. 00:21:163 (4) - Remove Clap in the end of slider
2. 00:22:379 (5) - Add clap hitsound

1. 00:49:946 (2) - Add clap hitsound
2. 00:50:149 (3) - Remove Clap Hitsound
3. 01:05:352 (4) - You can add clap hitsound if you want

Rey-vo wrote:

[Easy]

1. 01:14:271 - better if u place note with clap in there ok
2. 01:15:892 - ^ ok

[Normal]

1. 00:21:163 (4) - Remove Clap in the end of slider No since i want to keep the clap hit sound consistent in all diff
2. 00:22:379 (5) - Add clap hitsound ^

[Sora]

1. 00:49:946 (2) - Add clap hitsound ok
2. 00:50:149 (3) - Remove Clap Hitsound ok
3. 01:05:352 (4) - You can add clap hitsound if you want ok

1. Source of Normal: Yosuga no sora → Yosuga no Sora
2. Slider slide sound is really noisy in this sweet music. Please consider to add silent slider slide .wav file.
3. The second combo color doesn't fit to this melody imo. I think the combo colors are enough if you remove it.
4. Kiai Time looks too long. End at 01:16:298 will be better imo.

• 00:05:149 (4,5) - I think it will sound good if you add a note at 00:05:352 because I can hear the violin.
  00:06:365 (3) - The sounds of the violin are at 00:05:960, 00:06:163, 00:06:365 and 00:06:568, but this slider couldn't follow the last sound.
  Please consider to move this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:06:365. I think it will be nice.
  00:12:244 (8,9) - It's not a good idea to make a large jump suddenly. Before these sliders, you use the distance snap by 1.2x, so that we can't expect this jump and it will cause misreading of the rhythm. Please consider to change the placement to enable us understanding the rhythm visually.
  00:16:703 (7,8) - These two claps don't sound good. According to your previous pattern of hitsounds, I suggest you to remove the clap from (7).
  00:28:054 (6,1) - I don't like to make a jump just before a stream in Hard diff because it's actually so difficult.
  00:41:838 (3,4) - Why don't you remove the stacking of these notes? It will become more easy to read the rhythm.
  00:46:703 (2) - NC here because a new melody starts.
  00:47:116 - This green line isn't snapped. Please fix to 00:47:109.
  00:51:365 (1) - I don't understand the purpose of this changing of slider velocity. In my view, nothing has changed here in the melody.
  00:55:014 (3,4,5,6) - Hm.. why don't you use larger distance here? The melody isn't so quiet.
  00:59:473 (3) - same as 00:51:365
  01:21:163 (8,9,10,11) - These four finishes are too loud to me. Why don't you remove it from (9) and (10), and additionally, add finish on the repeat of 01:22:176 (3)?
  01:25:622 (3) - No need to silent this note.

• 00:03:527 (1) - By moving this spinner 1/2 later, it will follow the music completely.
  00:08:190 (1) - I don't think this spinner is long enough for Normal diff. Please consider to use other notes in this place.
  Also putting a circle/slider one beat later of a spinner is not recommended in Normal or Easy because it's so difficult to follow.
  00:13:865 (6) - This circle is covered by previous hitburst, so that it's hard to see to newbie players. Please move it to the other place.
  00:16:703 (2,3,4,5) - I wonder why you used 1/2 rhythm frequently only in this part. For example, you ignored the sound of 00:12:852 and 00:15:284, but suddenly put a note at 00:16:906: the rhythm seems to be confusing. Please consider to make them more simple.
  00:34:946 (1) - Don't forget to add NC:P
  00:39:406 (2) - Please consider about the hitburst :3
  00:44:676 (1) - Why don't you start this spinner 1/2 earlier? I can hear the vocal from 00:44:473.
  00:46:703 (1) - Remove this circle to keep more interval between the spinner and the next note.
  00:47:116 - Same as Sora.
  00:49:136 (6,1) - I don't think it's a bad idea to make a little jump even though in Normal diff, but I don't understand why it's here. The most emphasized part is 00:46:703 (1,2), but they are placed according to the distance snap..
  01:15:487 (7) - Consider the hitburst, please.
  01:19:338 (6) - ^
  01:20:352 (2) - ^, but I highly recommend to fix here because it's covered with the reverse arrow.
  01:22:176 (1,2,3,4) - Why didn't you stack (4) with others? It's a bit confusing to read the rhythm visually.

• 00:00:082 (1) - Is this whistle on the slider's body intentionally?
  00:16:298 (2,3) - Uhm, I want you to avoid overlapping in Easy in order to see all of notes clearly.
  00:51:771 (1,2) - When you think about the purpose of making Normal and Easy, you could find out that you should avoid using 1/2 rhythm in this diff.
  01:23:595 (3) - About hitburst.

h-728 wrote:

[General]

1. Source of Normal: Yosuga no sora → Yosuga no Sora Fixed
2. Slider slide sound is really noisy in this sweet music. Please consider to add silent slider slide .wav file. I am still not familiar with custom hitsound, but i will consider it
3. The second combo color doesn't fit to this melody imo. I think the combo colors are enough if you remove it. OK, i remove it
4. Kiai Time looks too long. End at 01:16:298 will be better imo. OK

[Sora]
First of all, using more than 4 kinds of slider velocity is not rankable. Also I don't recommend to change the slider velocity rashly except in the case it's really fit to the melody because it's just only confusing. Please reduce the kinds of SV maximum 3, though I think 1 or 2 is enough. Reduced to 3 now

• 00:05:149 (4,5) - I think it will sound good if you add a note at 00:05:352 because I can hear the violin. Added
  00:06:365 (3) - The sounds of the violin are at 00:05:960, 00:06:163, 00:06:365 and 00:06:568, but this slider couldn't follow the last sound.
  Please consider to move this slider 1/2 later and add a circle at 00:06:365. I think it will be nice. OK
  00:12:244 (8,9) - It's not a good idea to make a large jump suddenly. Before these sliders, you use the distance snap by 1.2x, so that we can't expect this jump and it will cause misreading of the rhythm. Please consider to change the placement to enable us understanding the rhythm visually. canceled the jump and changed some placement
  00:16:703 (7,8) - These two claps don't sound good. According to your previous pattern of hitsounds, I suggest you to remove the clap from (7). Fixed
  00:28:054 (6,1) - I don't like to make a jump just before a stream in Hard diff because it's actually so difficult. In fact, i think it is ok, but i reduce the distance
  00:41:838 (3,4) - Why don't you remove the stacking of these notes? It will become more easy to read the rhythm. Removed the stack of (1) and (2)
  00:46:703 (2) - NC here because a new melody starts. OK
  00:47:116 - This green line isn't snapped. Please fix to 00:47:109. Fixed
  00:51:365 (1) - I don't understand the purpose of this changing of slider velocity. In my view, nothing has changed here in the melody. just want to increase the difficult, but it seems not fit, i remove the change
  00:55:014 (3,4,5,6) - Hm.. why don't you use larger distance here? The melody isn't so quiet. OK
  00:59:473 (3) - same as 00:51:365 same as 00:51:365
  01:21:163 (8,9,10,11) - These four finishes are too loud to me. Why don't you remove it from (9) and (10), and additionally, add finish on the repeat of 01:22:176 (3)? sound nice, OK
  01:25:622 (3) - No need to silent this note. OK

[Normal]

• 00:03:527 (1) - By moving this spinner 1/2 later, it will follow the music completely. OK
  00:08:190 (1) - I don't think this spinner is long enough for Normal diff. Please consider to use other notes in this place. I change it to slider
  Also putting a circle/slider one beat later of a spinner is not recommended in Normal or Easy because it's so difficult to follow. OK
  00:13:865 (6) - This circle is covered by previous hitburst, so that it's hard to see to newbie players. Please move it to the other place. Fixed
  00:16:703 (2,3,4,5) - I wonder why you used 1/2 rhythm frequently only in this part. For example, you ignored the sound of 00:12:852 and 00:15:284, but suddenly put a note at 00:16:906: the rhythm seems to be confusing. Please consider to make them more simple. OK
  00:34:946 (1) - Don't forget to add NC:P Fixed
  00:39:406 (2) - Please consider about the hitburst :3 Fixed
  00:44:676 (1) - Why don't you start this spinner 1/2 earlier? I can hear the vocal from 00:44:473. OK
  00:46:703 (1) - Remove this circle to keep more interval between the spinner and the next note. OK
  00:47:116 - Same as Sora. Fixed
  00:49:136 (6,1) - I don't think it's a bad idea to make a little jump even though in Normal diff, but I don't understand why it's here. The most emphasized part is 00:46:703 (1,2), but they are placed according to the distance snap.. it is not a intentional jump, fixed
  01:15:487 (7) - Consider the hitburst, please. change a bit
  01:19:338 (6) - ^ change a bit
  01:20:352 (2) - ^, but I highly recommend to fix here because it's covered with the reverse arrow. I don't think there is the problem
  01:22:176 (1,2,3,4) - Why didn't you stack (4) with others? It's a bit confusing to read the rhythm visually. OK

[Easy]

• 00:00:082 (1) - Is this whistle on the slider's body intentionally? No and removed
  00:16:298 (2,3) - Uhm, I want you to avoid overlapping in Easy in order to see all of notes clearly. OK
  00:51:771 (1,2) - When you think about the purpose of making Normal and Easy, you could find out that you should avoid using 1/2 rhythm in this diff. Fixed
  01:23:595 (3) - About hitburst. Fixed

I'm really sorry for this huge late. It is fine, i am not in a hurry
If you have any trouble during seeing my mod, please don't hesitate to ask me.

meetmeetdee wrote:

[Normal]

• 01:20:352 (2) - ^, but I highly recommend to fix here because it's covered with the reverse arrow. I don't think there is the problem

SPOILER

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h-728 wrote:

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meetmeetdee wrote:

[Normal]

• 01:20:352 (2) - ^, but I highly recommend to fix here because it's covered with the reverse arrow. I don't think there is the problem

Nah, covering a reverse arrow with a hitburst isn't rankable.

SPOILER

Here's the rule.

All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible. Make sure that hitbursts (100s/300s/etc) from previous notes are not covering the repeat arrows or even the paths/ends of sliders (use the default skin to check if using hitbursts from another skin). This way, all sliders will be easily visible and playable. However, very short repeating sliders (e.g. 1/4 or 1/8 sliders, generally called "kick" sliders) only require the first repeat arrow to be visible (since it's nearly impossible to see any other repeats due to the short length and the cursor covering most of the visible space).

If you say that you can see it clearly before the hitburst appears, but sadly it's under the slider.

SPOILER

Totally, I should say you to change the placement to something like this image, but I don't think it will harm the consistent of your placement.

SPOILER

Oops, and please don't give a kds to this post.
Good luck for being ranked!

smallboat wrote:

嗨 來幫你MOD:D
我從我的Queue接你的case：）

以下是mod

整體難度都OK

Easy: 音量要不要-10% clap會比較不會那麼大聲? OK
00:34:541 (1) - 加slider拉到00:34:946 不,因為那裏是預留讓Beginner找回指標的
00:35:352 (2) - 加note ^, 我把slider放到00:34:946

Normal:
00:14:879 (8) - 加slider折返一次到00:15:284 不,好像太密了
00:19:136 (6) - 加note OK
00:34:541 (1) - 加note 不,因為那裏是預留讓Beginner找回指標的
00:46:703 (1) - 加slider 尾端拉到紅線 或用2個note代替 ^

Sora
00:12:852 (9) - slider縮到前面大白線 不,好像有點奇怪
00:13:257 (10,11) - 加note ^
接著00:12:244 (8) - 這邊NC 不用,跟vocal
00:14:879 (5) - 加note +whistle 不,不太需要
00:15:284 (2) - 前端 +whistle OK
00:28:460 (1,2,3) - 1.3 +whistle 只加在3
00:38:291 (10) - 加note +whistle OK
00:41:636 (1,2) - +whistle OK
01:24:406 (1) - ^ 不,不太需要

ok 先mod這些 斟酌使用 如有問題可PM給我 謝謝:)

Saten wrote:

hi~

[General]
imo, this hitclap fits pretty well http://puu.sh/2kuBq Sounds good, thanks
You probably want to adjust the hitsound patterns (especially the intro).

00:10:825 (3) - 1 grid down, so the spacing becomes more equal Fixed
00:14:271 (4) - this looks kinda misplaced. Looks was better if you moved it further down instead Fixed

SPOILER

00:36:771 (6) - finish on end Added
00:40:419 (4) - finish on start Added
00:41:636 (1,2,3,4) - do NC on (4) instead. It's confusing otherwise D: OK
00:42:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is this irregular spacing on purpose? m... No, it just a mistake after change in placement, fixed
00:42:852 (3) - add a whistle on end Added
00:44:473 (6) - finish on start Added
00:51:365 (1,2,3,4,5) - this was really an uncalled jump section. This is a Hard right? You should really try to avoid 2x jumps (especially 2,5x). I guess it's alright with single or double jumps at that level. But really not recommended with 3 or more. I don't think it is a problem in Hard, but OK, I reduce the spacing and change the placement a little bit
01:08:190 (5) - finish on start Added
01:04:946 (2,3,4) - try to reduce the spacing a bit in these jumps. Well it's not really that hard. but, this is really unexpected change imo Reduced
01:11:433 (1) - finish on start Added
01:14:068 (5,6,7,8) - reduce the spacing here as well, to make a better balance/flow in this difficulty. Fixed the placement
01:16:298 (6) - finish on start Added
01:25:825 (1) - silence this in the beginning or ending. Either way works. silenced the ending

[Normal]
I suggest you increase the AR by 1. For making a smoother flow and getting a better spread OK
00:12:649 (4) - 1 grip up & right to make the spacing prefect here Fixed
00:19:136 (6,1,2) - I think it's better if you put NC on (6) instead OK
00:32:514 (1) - add a whistle on this spinner Added
01:22:176 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's a bit much having a stack with this many hitcircles Fixed the placement
01:25:825 (1) - like I mentioned in the previous difficulty. Silence it at beginning or ending, but make sure to be consistent OK

[Easy]
00:08:190 (1,2) - to be more equal with spacing, move either (2) 1 grid upwards or (1) 1 grid downwards Fixed
00:22:784 (1,2) - Well in Normal, it's more ok to use this. But in an Easy I really don't recommend using 1/1 stacks.
00:27:244 (3,1) - nothing wrong really, but it looks kinda odd that the tail is much closer the previous object OK, fixed the placement

SPOILER

I suggest some kind of re-arrangement here

00:57:649 (5,1) - This part could be better. How about trying this? looks good, OK

SPOILER

00:39:000 (1,2) - same as 00:22:784 (1,2) - Fixed
01:16:298 (1,2,3,4) - looks kinda bad that 01:15:892 (6,2) - are overlapping each-other like this. I suggest you move these objects more to the right while you still keep the same patterns Fixed the placement

SPOILER

Of course, you might wanna adjust the last slider by rotating it so it fits with the current spacing

01:21:568 (3,4) - same as 00:39:000 (1,2) - Fixed
01:25:825 (1) - same as the other difficulties about the spinner OK


That should be it. Also, be sure to review the hitsounds a bit if you changed to my suggested clap.
Good luck with this~

Banana wrote:

喵 喵

[General]
Normal & Easy: 00:47:116 - unsnapped kiai section, move them to 00:47:109 Fixed

[Sora]
00:05:960 (1,2,3) - 虽然不能说是问题..建议这三个圈的整体方向是向右移动（可能说明的不清楚 现在的感觉是向右下） 这样接前面一段会比较舒服 不错的建议
00:31:298 (2) - 稍微往左移动一点x:167 y:123附近 Fixed
00:45:386 - 滑条在这里结束？ 好像有点怪，就像空了一点，少了收结的那一下
00:46:298 (1) - 放界面正中间没什么必要嘛 左边空的地方比较大 放过去平衡一下吧 Fixed
01:05:554 (5) - 这边接过来是一个反向的跳 个人感觉有点过了并不合适 建议是和前一个圈叠在一起 不错的建议
01:16:703 (7,1) - 这边跟vocal的节奏比较适合圈滑条圈 现在这样音还比较长然后中间空了一拍有点闷 后面的空拍音稍微短一点就好一点 改了一些节奏及排列
01:25:622 (3) - 最后这个clap有点多余 考虑降音量或者干脆删掉 删掉了

[Normal]
00:22:379 (6) - 这个间距稍微大了一点 如果是故意的就当我没说（喂.. 其实不是的，fixed
00:58:460 (1) - Normal不推荐用变化的间距 OK, fixed
01:03:933 (2) - 没叠好 关grid snap修下 Fixed
01:09:406 (4) - 以后做图最好注意往之前没摆过note的地方摆 现在上面就比较挤了 XD，明白，改了一些排列

前半部分排列看出来很用心 后面节奏下的稍微密了一些排的有点乱 最好自己check过 因为排列这种东西不会被说unrankable 而且mod起来也无从下手...所以总感觉没什么人挑 不过会影响图的质量 得靠自己努力 （嗯 只是觉得节奏很棒然后排列有提升空间而已 所以不要有什么负担
嗯，会努力的，谢谢你的意见

[Easy]
00:17:514 (3) - 中间两个锚点向下一格 Fixed
00:45:386 - 感觉vocal是这边结束 不过既然是easy放到长白线再结尾也没问题 不过whistle建议去掉 去掉了
01:01:298 (3) - 和之前的(2)叠在一起会比较好 不过排列得修一会 OK

Good Luck~

Lundlerol wrote:

hi~
mod req from my mod queue

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]
00:04:541 - add k or d added k
00:40:419 (152) - K(finish) fixed
00:41:838 (160,161) - K d>fixed> k D changed to k D
00:43:663 (169) - D fixed
00:44:473 (173) - ^ fixed
01:08:190 (284) - ^ fixed
01:08:798 (286) - ^
01:12:244 - plz add notes added k
01:12:852 (307) - D fixed

Good luck~_(:3 」∠)_

Verlaren wrote:

Hi. From Aincrad's Modding queue.

Easy:
AR -1 OK
00:46:298(4) - NC OK
00:46:703(1) - Move NC to 00:47:109(2) OK

Normal:
good job! Thanks

Sora:
00:21:973(6) - remove note. No, It sound empty if i remove the note
00:38:291(4) - ^ OK
01:12:649(3) - maybe delete this circle? He did not much fit into the rhythm of the song. No, There is a hitsound at that point

Sorry for a small mod and for being that for so long.

Katty Pie wrote:

SPOILER

Hi from Moe Moe Russian Modding Room

[General]

• On Easy different kiai time, plz fix it~
• Plz make all bgs identical size~ (800x600 or 1024x768)
• On all taiko diffs and on normal unsnapped grin section 00:47:116 - snap to 00:47:109
• 00:00:082 - 00:03:325 - here better use volume 30%
00:03:325 - 00:09:609 - 40%
00:09:609 - 00:21:163 - 30% It sounds much better for this low part.

All fixed

[Sora]

00:16:298 - here should stay slider 1/1 and note on 00:16:906 it's better follow for rhythm
00:21:365 - add nc here and delete from next slider, bcz here new moment in music
00:22:784 - here shoud be new combo, bcz it's better folow for music
00:29:271 - maybe you make this slider symmetric? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682433 It looks more pleasant
00:37:581(1,2,3) - fix disrtance between this notes, now it a bit different 1.82 and 1.85
00:44:473 - better add nc here and remove from next note, it will be looks much better
00:47:109(3) - unsnapped slider end
01:07:176 - this note not sound here, better remove it.
01:14:068 - remove nc here and add on 01:16:298 better follow for vocal
01:16:906(8,1) - stack it better without grid snap
01:19:136 - remove nc here and add on slider 3
01:21:973 - remove nc here and add on 01:22:784
01:25:825 - if you will be better follow for vocal then here should be this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682439

Fixed

Hm hitsounds on kiai time sounds very randomly. I give you some suggestion for consistency of hitsounds.

00:50:352 - add finish here
00:52:987 - here better replace this slider on 2 notes in red ticks 00:52:987<---whistle, and 00:53:392<---- here finish, and add finish on note 00:52:581(5)
01:05:149 - ^ same with rhythm and hs
00:55:014 - remove finish here and add on slider end.
01:03:325 - add finish
00:58:054 - replace this slider on note in white tick bcz slider sounds overmapped. It is OK in my sense, so no change
00:57:852(5) - remove clap
00:57:446 - add whistle
00:57:649 - if you want make this moment more strong then add clap here, if not then not add
Followed most
^--- It's sounds much better for me~ If you will be use it then put on all standard diifs~

[Normal]

• You have many mistakes with NC~ Plz put nc on every downbeat for consistency. It will be better follow for music.
• The same with hitsounds on kiai time

00:02:717(5) - for better rhythm make this slider double.
00:06:568(spin) - delete this note and end spin here, bcz it not sound on 00:05:757
00:19:136(1,2,3) - this hard for normal diff and note on red tick not sounds here, remove this note.
00:27:649(1,2,1,2) - this sliders looks very randomly, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682448 - this pattern and this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682450 will be better ^^ (Sorry my puush is broken ) I keep the pattern unchange , it sounds better to me but fixed the placement
00:29:271 - add finish here
00:35:757 - ^
00:39:000 - ^
01:19:541 - ^
01:21:163 - ^
01:22:784 - ^ This finishes better check on all diffs too, bcz it's better combined with music.
01:14:068(4,5,6,7) - make this pattern more symmetry http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682454

Fixed

[Easy]

AR +1

00:16:298(2) - better ctrl+J http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682466 this will be more comfortable to play for begginers
00:51:568 - remove nc here and add on next slider
00:54:811(1,2) - make this blanket better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/682469
01:22:379 - remove nc here and add on next slider.
• And all suggests with hitsounds~

Fixed

Good luck~

1. The Background is 800x600 - The recommended is 1024x768
2. The Taiko guest difficulties have different colors from the rest ones.
3. Inconsistency in Kiai Times
   The Taiko difficulties Kiai times should end as well at 01:16:298

1. Add Lunasa and Nardo to the Beatmaps Tags

1. 00:16:298 (2) - NC fits better here in my opinion but the current is fine as well
2. 01:04:946 (3) - Fix the curve, use the next sliders approach circle for more help.
3. 01:17:514 (3) - Move this to x:208 y:220
4. That's all!! Nice diff

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
From my queue.~
Sr for delayed for a long time. Real life....

General

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:47:109, ends on 01:16:298

- [Lunasa's Taiko Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:47:109, ends on 01:27:649

- [Lunasa's Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:47:109, ends on 01:27:649

- [Nardo's Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:47:109, ends on 01:27:649

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:47:109, ends on 01:16:298

- [Sora] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:47:109, ends on 01:16:298

Since the rule said


But i'm not quite sure if this apply for taiko mapset too. So ignore if you want. I don't know whether it apply to taiko, but those three taiko diff are GD, which means this rule does not apply in this case

My Mod
[Sora]
00:24:203 (4) - This whisle on whole slider is a bit strange. Fixed
00:47:109 (1) - Clap at the end of slider. Fixed
01:02:311 (6) - Move to x:104, y: 64 OK
01:02:514 (7) - Move to x:232, y: 64 OK
01:07:176 - Add note here? It still has music and not blank. Added
01:12:852 (4) - You can add whistle in whole slider here. It seems weird to me
01:19:136 (8) - Clap. Added
01:25:014 (2) - Remove whistle. Fixed

[Normal]
00:08:190 (1) - I prefer no hitsound than clap at the end of slider. Fixed

[Easy]
00:00:082 (1) - This slider should be ended at 00:01:095 instead of 00:01:146 Fixed
00:02:717 (4) - Remove clap at the end. Too weird Fixed
00:08:190 (1) - Same as Normal diff. And also, i think you and add whistle whole of slider here. Fixed, but whistle seems weird to me
00:24:406 (3) - No need whistle at the end. Only clap is enough. Fixed
00:39:000 (1) - Finish instead of whistle. Fixed
00:51:973 (1) - Clap on repeat. Fixed
00:53:190 (2) - No need whistle at start. Fixed
01:16:298 (1) - Finish at start. Fixed

Good luck~ <3

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello there!

From my Modding Queue :3

[Genera]
There are some serious errors here .-.

1. The Background is 800x600 - The recommended is 1024x768 800 x 600 is fine also
2. The Taiko guest difficulties have different colors from the rest ones. It is fine for Taiko diff
3. Inconsistency in Kiai Times It is fine for GD
   The Taiko difficulties Kiai times should end as well at 01:16:298

^

[Tags]

1. Add Lunasa and Nardo to the Beatmaps Tags

I do't know whether they are needed, will confirm it later

[Easy]

1. 00:16:298 (2) - NC fits better here in my opinion but the current is fine as well No change for it
2. 01:04:946 (3) - Fix the curve, use the next sliders approach circle for more help. Fixed
3. 01:17:514 (3) - Move this to x:208 y:220 Fixed
4. That's all!! Nice diff

[Normal]
Omfg nothing wrong, very nice work ._.

[Sora]
01:02:109 (5,6,7,8,1) - Those 4 could make a much better shape I guess. They are placed intentionally, I may change them if I have other idea of placement
01:04:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - Those too ^ ^


Nothing bad with the difficulties it selfs, more issues where in general stuff :3

Good luck!

Irreversible wrote:

Hey, from my queue :3



[General]

I can't mod taiko, thats why i'll skip it :3

[Easy]

00:18:730 (4) - 4 should be placed under 3, not above 3 Fixed
00:49:946 (1) - replace this with 2 circles, to follow the rhythm I think slider is better at that point

Well, the diff is nicely done, but the rhythm placed in the kiai time is a bit weird. try to improve it yourself, if you need any further help feel free to pm me ingame ^^ i'll help you more there I think we may discuss it ingame

[Normal]

00:02:717 (5) - double reverse isn't a good idea :c Fixed
00:24:406 (3,4,5,1,2,1,2) - in this part, you used way too many sliders, try to reduce them, and place some circles. if you ran out of ideas, you can ask me still thinking about it, I may ask you ingame
01:22:176 (1,2,3,4) - number 1 looks a bit wrong placed, make it look like a diamond Fixed


[Sora]

00:22:784 (1,2,4) - This looks a bit weird.. maybe try another pattern, where the sliders don't touch each other like this It seems fine to me
00:40:419 (4) - make this look a bit rounder?1) delete it 2) make it new, but only with one white point Fixed
01:04:136 (4) - press ctrl + h, ctrl +j, and then place it to x: 348 and y: 352 It is weird in my view
01:24:406 (1,2) - i miss some finishes here Fixed


call me for a recheck if you made the changes, especially in the kiai time of easy!

0gre wrote:

Mod Req ~

[Nardo's Taiko Oni]

MOD information

* 00:28:054 ●
* 00:28:257 a gap
* 00:50:554 ● ● ●
* 00:52:379 ● ●　　● ● ◎
* 00:55:115 combo here added k between d dkd=>dkdkd
* 00:55:926 same above added d between d kdkdd=>ddkdkdd
* 01:17:717 ●
* 01:18:730 or 01:18:933 try to prevent having a gap looking like this => added d at 01:18:730
* 01:20:757 ●

please have a check ~

1. 00:02:109 - Add circle
2. 00:02:311 (6) - move to be symmetrical
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:05:960 (1) - move to y=48
4. 00:24:811 (5,6,7) - Out of the grid, can you move a bit?
5. 00:52:176 (3,4,5) - move to the right 1 grid

1. 00:25:217 (5) - Add NC
2. 00:51:771 (4) - Add NC
3. 00:51:973 (1) - Remove NC
4. 01:19:541 (1,2) - move 1 grid down

1. 00:08:190 (1,1) - Are theese 2 sliders suposed to be symmetrical? if yes, move any of them
2. 01:21:568 (3) - move to the right 1 grid (you maybe need to move 01:19:541 (1,2) aswell)

Drianel wrote:

Hello from my mod queue :3

[[[[ OVERALL ]]]]

Well, this map is almost perfect!! i love it but here are some suggestions and minor fixes okay? let's go

[[[[ Sora ]]]]

(grid level = 4)

1. 00:02:109 - Add circle No, it is not fit imo
2. 00:02:311 (6) - move to be symmetrical Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:05:960 (1) - move to y=48 It is already
4. 00:24:811 (5,6,7) - Out of the grid, can you move a bit? Fixed
5. 00:52:176 (3,4,5) - move to the right 1 grid Fixed

[[[[ Normal ]]]]

1. 00:25:217 (5) - Add NC Fixed
2. 00:51:771 (4) - Add NC Fixed
3. 00:51:973 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
4. 01:19:541 (1,2) - move 1 grid down Fixed

[[[[ Easy ]]]]

1. 00:08:190 (1,1) - Are theese 2 sliders suposed to be symmetrical? if yes, move any of them Fixed
2. 01:21:568 (3) - move to the right 1 grid (you maybe need to move 01:19:541 (1,2) aswell) Change some placement at this part

That's all, good luck with your map meetmeetdee



- Drianel -

EmingK wrote:

Mod Request from Poor Modding Team
懒死我得了。。= =
专注渣mod三十年>_<

[Easy]
00:00:082 (1) - 头加whistle 不太合適imo
00:02:717 (4) - 尾加whistle [color=#FF0000加了clap[/color]
00:54:811 (1) - Add a finish on repeat #1 (at 00:55:216). 加了
01:09:406 (4) - 【不改也行】bracket有点歪 Fixed
01:16:298 (1) - 头加finish Fixed

[Normal]
00:00:082 (1) - 头加whistle 不太合適imo
00:42:041 (1) - 头加finish 加了
00:43:460 (2,3) - (2)往上一点，(3)头部也往上一点，使整个轨迹在一条弧线上 Fixed
00:47:109 (1) - kiai的滑条体上适当加些whistle吧。。尤其是长滑条，没音效会很别扭，比如下面几个 再想想看
00:51:973 (2) 00:56:027 (2) 00:58:460 (1) 01:00:081 (1)
01:03:325 (1) 01:06:365 (6) 01:12:852 (3) 01:24:406 (1)

[Sora]
00:00:082 (1) - whistle. 不太合適imo
00:02:919 (6) - whistle. [color=#FF0000加了clap[/color]
00:20:149 (3,4) - (3)跟(2)没对上，动完 (3)动下(4) Fixed
00:21:365 (1) - 没叠好 Fixed
00:51:973 (2) - whistle. 不太合適imo
01:12:852 (4) - 长滑条没声不觉得很奇怪么0w0 加个whistle吧（同normal）Fixed
01:18:527 (7) & 01:25:014 (2) - ↑ （这滑条不长的喵。。 不太合適imo
01:24:406 (1) - 【不改也行】尾端结点往下拽一格 Fixed

and no black

1. 01:27:649 - 我覺得kiai在這裡停比較好 不用這麼早停
2. Audio Lead-In 2500就夠了 不必到3

1. 00:00:082 - 20%大概就夠了 30%把soft-hitnormal的聲音弄得很吵
2. 00:17:919 (9) - 去finish 挺吵
3. 00:34:946 - ^
4. 00:32:109 (4,5,6) - 等距
5. 00:40:419 (4) - 這好醜 建議重拉
6. 00:42:852 (3,5) - 頭都上finish 音樂裡有
7. 00:58:054 (6) - 這裡跳得太突然了 前面00:57:041 (2,3) - 也沒有跳 建議ctrl+G
8. 00:59:068 (2) - / 01:06:365 (8) - / 01:08:798 (6) - / 01:09:609 (8) - / 01:12:041 (2) - / 01:25:014 (2,3) - +finish
9. 01:23:392 (2,3,4,5,1) - 試著用polygon circles擺擺看 (ctrl+alt+D)
10. 01:26:433 (6) - 去clap 已經到後面的安靜段了就顯得很多餘

1. 00:40:622 (3) - 這個拉長1/2移到00:40:419 - (跟00:42:041 (1) - 差不多)
2. 01:06:365 (6) - 頭上Finish

1. 00:42:041 - / 00:44:473 - / 01:25:419 (2) - Finish

Flask wrote:

我也專注渣mod30年 ;__; XD
Mod request from my Mod Queue.

[General]

1. 01:27:649 - 我覺得kiai在這裡停比較好 不用這麼早停 OK
2. Audio Lead-In 2500就夠了 不必到3 Fixed

[Sora]

1. 00:00:082 - 20%大概就夠了 30%把soft-hitnormal的聲音弄得很吵 Fixed
2. 00:17:919 (9) - 去finish 挺吵 Fixed
3. 00:34:946 - ^ Fixed
4. 00:32:109 (4,5,6) - 等距 Fixed
5. 00:40:419 (4) - 這好醜 建議重拉 Fixed
6. 00:42:852 (3,5) - 頭都上finish 音樂裡有 Fixed
7. 00:58:054 (6) - 這裡跳得太突然了 前面00:57:041 (2,3) - 也沒有跳 建議ctrl+G Fixed，但不是ctrl+G
8. 00:59:068 (2) - / 01:06:365 (8) - / 01:08:798 (6) - / 01:09:609 (8) - / 01:12:041 (2) - / 01:25:014 (2,3) - +finish Fixed
9. 01:23:392 (2,3,4,5,1) - 試著用polygon circles擺擺看 (ctrl+alt+D) Fixed
10. 01:26:433 (6) - 去clap 已經到後面的安靜段了就顯得很多餘 Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:40:622 (3) - 這個拉長1/2移到00:40:419 - (跟00:42:041 (1) - 差不多) OK
2. 01:06:365 (6) - 頭上Finish OK

[Easy]

1. 00:42:041 - / 00:44:473 - / 01:25:419 (2) - Finish OK, 但最後那一個用了Whistle

做的滿好的 比起那個夏娜來講 o.o 加油!

• Unrankable
  You Need to Change/Add this
  It'll be better if you follow this
  Suggestions

- t e n n y a - wrote:

from my queue (request by Zero__wind)

Modding Guide:

• Unrankable
  You Need to Change/Add this
  It'll be better if you follow this
  Suggestions

General

1. Nothing

Easy

1. 00:54:811 (1,2)- : I'm sure you can make better shape of this 2 sliders. Like this perhaps? Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   

   448,224,54811,6,0,P|464:272|448:324,2,100,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   360,272,56027,2,0,P|344:224|360:172,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 01:01:703 (4)- : remove whistle from the body, its noisy x_x Fixed
3. 01:07:784 (1)- : NC should be at 01:08:190 (2)- Fixed

Normal

1. Nice BG x_x XD
2. 00:03:325 (6)- : place this at x396 y160 would be good Fixed
3. 00:37:379 (3)- : Copy previous slider at 00:35:757 (1) and paste it here would be good! Fixed
4. 00:40:419 (3)- : Add Finish at slider's head Fixed
5. 01:01:703 (4)- : remove whistle from the body, noisy x_x Fixed
6. 01:03:933 (2)- : Unstack this slider. Player can confuse to play at this part since at previous part you didn't use stacked slider Fixed
7. 01:18:325 (4)- : copy previous slider 01:17:514 and paste it right here would be good Fixed

Sora

1. 00:03:325 (1)- : add Additions set to Normal and low the volume -5%? Fixed
2. 00:55:014 (3)- : remove finish from slider head and add finish at slider tail? Fixed
3. 01:12:852 (4)- : remove whistle from the body its noisy x_x Fixed
4. Good diff actually

that's all I can find, good luck

Naryuga wrote:

Hello! from my Taiko modding queue~

Marks:
"d" = don (red note)
"k" = kat (blue note)
"D" = Big Don (red + finisher)
"K" = Big Kat (blue + finisher)
"^" = "same as above"

here we go!

Nardo's Taiko Oni

1. 00:05:554 (18) - k..?
2. 00:14:473 - I want d here with the bass drum
3. 01:18:730 (343) - I prefer moving this to 01:18:933 - owo

That's all from me. Good luck!

Naryuga wrote:

SPOILER

Hello! from my Taiko modding queue~

Marks:
"d" = don (red note)
"k" = kat (blue note)
"D" = Big Don (red + finisher)
"K" = Big Kat (blue + finisher)
"^" = "same as above"

here we go!

Lunasa's Muzukashii

1. 00:18:831 (3) - delete this? sounds a bit excessive...
2. 00:22:784 (1) - a finisher here? You put finishes on 00:21:163 (1) - , 00:21:771 (1) - and 00:22:379 (1) - so I want here, too
3. 00:28:865 (1) - remove the finish? well here the drum sounds a bit louder than the other place but I don't like the big note here because the big KAT's sound is much lighter during playing than when you hear in the editor. Small k is enough here, in my opinion
4. 00:31:906 (2) - I'm not sure why finish is on this note
5. 00:33:325 (1,1,2) - I prefer d k k here
6. 00:34:642 (1,2) - delete these notes, no sounds follow here. follow the vocal.
7. 00:40:217 (1) - remove the finish -> 00:40:419 (1) - add it here instead. It sounds very weird to me...
8. 00:42:244 (1) - delete this in order to fit the vocal
9. 00:43:054 (2) - if you follow the ^ suggestion, maybe deleting this note sounds good to emphasize 00:42:852 (1) -
10. 00:44:676 (1) - delete this and add k k k like your Oni diff. The drumroll to spin sounds really devastating for this quiet part...
11. KIAI time - please stop abusing to use big notes, it really sounds bad when used wrongly, because too much big notes is too loud... I'll suggest removing finishers from some notes
12. 00:47:717 (1) - remove the finisher, small d is enough here. You can add it on 00:47:109 (2) - instead to fit the symbal
13. 00:49:338 (1) - remove the finish
14. 00:50:960 (1) - ^
15. 00:51:973 (3) - ^
16. 00:57:446 (1) - ^
17. 01:00:690 (1) - ^ and you can add it on 00:59:473 (1) -
18. 00:59:676 (1) - move to 00:59:879 - to emphasize 00:59:473 (1) -
19. 01:02:514 (2) - move to 01:02:311 - to follow the drum
20. 01:07:379 (2,3,1,1) - before[ddk d] -> after[ddd k]?
21. 01:11:433 (1) - add finish?
22. 01:14:271 - add k here (and remove 01:14:879 (2) - not to the stream too long?)
23. 01:20:757 (1,1,1) - this pattern may be hard for this Muzu diff even with the low BPM because many notes around this... I'll suggest making this ddd to be easier or deleting 01:20:859 (1) -

Lunasa's Oni

1. 00:22:784 (1,2,1) - delete 00:22:886 (2,1) - and add finisher on 00:22:784 (1) - ? triplets from white tick often doesn't sounds well and this is the case.
2. 00:42:244 (1) - delete this to fit the vocal?
3. 00:46:602 - you can add extra d here
4. 00:47:109 (4,5,6,1) - [kdd k] -> [k dd sounds better, as 00:49:946 (1,2,3,1) - does so
5. 00:55:622 (1,2,1,2) - [ddk k] -> [d kkk]?
6. 01:11:433 (1) - add finish

Nardo's Taiko Oni

1. 00:05:554 (18) - k..?
2. 00:14:473 - I want d here with the bass drum
3. 01:18:730 (343) - I prefer moving this to 01:18:933 - owo

I had a look at the standard diffs, just found a whistle at 00:54:203 (4) - (Sora diff) on the slider way sounds somehow strange to me o.o Others looks fine

That's all from me. Good luck!

1. Why different bg in all diffs? You can just use one and make file size a bit lower.
2. All BGs are 800x600. You can try to find a 1024x768 version so the quality won't be so low.

1. 00:47:109 (1) - Spacing
2. 00:51:973 (1) - Spacing
3. 01:06:163 (4,5) - This sounds bad. Invert the note/slider order to this:
   
4. 01:20:352 (2) - This slider overlaps with 01:18:325 (4) - Please fix it.

1. 00:56:027 (2,3,4) - This sounds bad. Try these notes:
   
2. 01:22:176 (1,2,3) - Too hard for a normal. Change (2) and (3) for a 1/2 slider

1. The spacing is so unconcistest in this diff. Hard/Insane diff must have some logical order too. Please try work a little on this.
2. Try to find a better bg for this diff. Look at the left side of this screenshot: http://puu.sh/36wxD.png That white spot looks really ugly in widescreen
3. 00:05:149 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same pattern but with different spacing. Use consisten spacing here please.
4. 00:37:581 (1,2,3) - Nazi. Move: (1): x:248 y:188 (2) x:192 y:288 (3)x:308 y:288
5. 00:51:973 (2,3,4,5) - Nazi again. Move (2)x:12 y:120 (3)x:104 y56 (4)x:200 y:120 (5)x:296 y:56
6. 01:04:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Such a bad placing. Try this code. It fixes all making a square with 1,2,3,4,5 and a triangle with 6 7 and 8.
   
   Code

   272,344,64744,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   152,344,64946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   216,240,65149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   96,248,65352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   216,240,65554,2,0,P|188:208|152:188,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   64,112,65960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   160,40,66163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   252,112,66365,2,2,P|316:152|372:248,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Zeroarg wrote:

Hi and sorry for huge delay. a lot of problems came to me.

Mod from my queue

[General]

1. Why different bg in all diffs? You can just use one and make file size a bit lower.
2. All BGs are 800x600. You can try to find a 1024x768 version so the quality won't be so low.

[Easy]

1. 00:47:109 (1) - Spacing
2. 00:51:973 (1) - Spacing
3. 01:06:163 (4,5) - This sounds bad. Invert the note/slider order to this:
   
4. 01:20:352 (2) - This slider overlaps with 01:18:325 (4) - Please fix it.

[Normal]

1. 00:56:027 (2,3,4) - This sounds bad. Try these notes:
   
2. 01:22:176 (1,2,3) - Too hard for a normal. Change (2) and (3) for a 1/2 slider

[Sora]

1. The spacing is so unconcistest in this diff. Hard/Insane diff must have some logical order too. Please try work a little on this.
2. Try to find a better bg for this diff. Look at the left side of this screenshot: http://puu.sh/36wxD.png That white spot looks really ugly in widescreen
3. 00:05:149 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - Same pattern but with different spacing. Use consisten spacing here please.
4. 00:37:581 (1,2,3) - Nazi. Move: (1): x:248 y:188 (2) x:192 y:288 (3)x:308 y:288
5. 00:51:973 (2,3,4,5) - Nazi again. Move (2)x:12 y:120 (3)x:104 y56 (4)x:200 y:120 (5)x:296 y:56
6. 01:04:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Such a bad placing. Try this code. It fixes all making a square with 1,2,3,4,5 and a triangle with 6 7 and 8.
   
   Code

   272,344,64744,5,2,0:0:0:0:
   152,344,64946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   216,240,65149,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   96,248,65352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   216,240,65554,2,0,P|188:208|152:188,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   64,112,65960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   160,40,66163,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   252,112,66365,2,2,P|316:152|372:248,1,160,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Lunasa's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:09:811 (2) Add NC to spinner? tbh I dunno anything about Taiko but this is what AIBAT suggested.

The map needs some more work, specially Sora diff. Good luck and bye o3o

Satellite wrote:

hi

[General]
BG (Lunasa's Taiko) is unrankable should be change 1024/768 Fixed
I think AudioLeadIn: 2500 is so long → change 2000 is better 2500 seems better imo

[Sora]
AR-1? OK
00:00:487 (2,6) - clap is not fit? change whistle is better OK
00:05:149 (4) - add whistle? OK
00:09:203 - add note? OK
00:16:298 (6) - first point add whistle? OK
00:20:757 (4) - last point add finish is better 00:21:163 - here OK
00:22:176 (3) - add clap 00:22:379 - here? OK
00:25:014 (6,7) - hummm.. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. current one is better in my view

00:27:446 (4) - last point 00:27:649 - here add whistle is fit. OK
00:32:514 (6) - add whistle? 00:32:514 - here OK
00:34:541 (1) - try this. sounds good

00:35:757 (4) - first point add whistle OK
00:39:000 (1,2) - first point add finish is better~ (00:39:000 - and 00:39:609 - )here Add for the first one
00:41:940 - add note. OK
00:44:473 (1) - last point remove whistle? OK
00:51:973 (2) - add finish OK
00:52:987 (1) - last point add finish 00:53:392 - here it isn't fit imo
01:04:946 (2) - add finish it isn't fit imo

I think. You should give more add whistle
but, really nice map~

[Hard]
00:00:082 (1,5) - remove clap change whistle? OK
00:08:190 (1) - ^ OK
00:25:419 (2) - remove note OK
00:51:973 (2) - add finish 00:58:460 - here OK

good

[Easy]
00:02:717 (4) - same other diff OK
00:08:190 (1) - ^ OK
00:17:514 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. OK

00:35:757 (2) - add NewCombo? your Pattern OK
00:58:460 (1) - add finish remove whistle OK

other good~

good luck~