Aoi Eir - INNOCENCE (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-16T18:48:31+00:00

Updated with changes in Hard and the new video. reDL if you care.

Mapian101

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Joined August 2012

Mapian101 2012-10-16T20:20:07+00:00

Love it.! <3

DJKero

231 posts

Here since the beginning

DJKero 2012-10-16T22:32:21+00:00

- Fear's Hard -

Approach Rate is SO HIGH for Hard though...

Life Drain could be 1 or 2 minus than it's right now...

There'll i can mod it coz its really hard for me, lol... u_u"

kriers

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kriers 2012-10-17T01:54:40+00:00

inb4 rank by the end of this week. Well I'll help with a star /o/

winber1

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Joined February 2010

winber1 2012-10-18T05:43:33+00:00

i heard you should let me map another insane difficulty because i'm so damn awesome.

hi

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-18T14:56:29+00:00

Well, usually I would just tell you to go ahead, but I want to keep this mapset with 1 of each difficulty (and be consistent with my other SAO map), so I'll have to decline this time, sorry

There are like 29383 other maps for this song though, so you could probably ask one of them

winber1

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winber1 2012-10-19T04:27:39+00:00

MY LIFE DREAMS AHHHHHHHhhhhHhHhHHhHHhHHHNNNHNHNNNNNNGHHHHH

nbd

alacat

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alacat 2012-10-19T14:53:40+00:00

Hi:3 As requested.

[General]
●AVI file size is very large o.o If you can , change to around 10M ~ 15M

[Easy]
●00:42:197 (4) - add new combo and remove new combo here.00:43:509 (1) -
●00:46:788 - Try 60% volume . same as here.00:49:411 -
●01:12:362 (4,5) - it is hard to take a little for easy. Try to make slider ? ><
●01:13:017 (1) - remove clap from the head since it follows nothing.
●01:15:640 (2) - add new combo ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.
●01:20:230 (2) - Ctrl + G ? move near to the center for spinner.

[NoHitter's Normal]
●00:54:001 - put volume 70% here? gradually add volume better imo :3
●01:23:509 (4) - add new combo ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.and remove it here 01:24:493 (1) -

[f e a r's Hard]
●00:06:624 (5) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:06:952 - overmap here. try to reduce one slider's reverse.
●00:17:115 (3) - hmm.. more spacing here ?
●00:22:197 - put volume 40~50% here? a little loud ><
●00:28:427 (3) - add new combo ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.
●00:57:771 (2) - remove clap from the head since it follows nothing.
●01:16:952 (1,2) - it doesn't follow the music well on the slider's head and reverse .remove clap ?

[Insane]
●00:17:607 - volume up to 40% ? it is very small >.<
●00:29:082 (3) - Ctrl + G ? try to make jump :3
●00:30:230 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:34:984 (4) - move to 1 grid right on next slider .
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/466627

nice map CXu ~

Hope you fine this helpful :3

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-19T17:26:48+00:00

alacat wrote:
Hi:3 As requested. - Yay, thaanks~~ >w<

[General]
●AVI file size is very large o.o If you can , change to around 10M ~ 15M - Mmm, I'll ask ampzz if that's cool to do without loosing too much quality or anything~

[Easy]
●00:42:197 (4) - add new combo and remove new combo here.00:43:509 (1) -
●00:46:788 - Try 60% volume . same as here.00:49:411 -
●01:12:362 (4,5) - it is hard to take a little for easy. Try to make slider ? ><
●01:13:017 (1) - remove clap from the head since it follows nothing.
●01:15:640 (2) - add new combo ? as the synth's phrase should begin here. - I'm just making the combo start one note earlier since it's a stack. Looks better imo, and the difference isn't big
●01:20:230 (2) - Ctrl + G ? move near to the center for spinner. - Changed this a bit~

[Insane]
●00:17:607 - volume up to 40% ? it is very small >.<
●00:29:082 (3) - Ctrl + G ? try to make jump :3 - Mm, I don't quite like the flow when I reverse the slider, so keeping~
●00:30:230 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:34:984 (4) - move to 1 grid right on next slider .
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/466627

nice map CXu ~

Hope you fine this helpful :3 - Yeah it was Anything I didn't comment has been fixed~

Thanks for modding! ></

MMzz

Elite Mapper

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MMzz 2012-10-19T18:56:56+00:00

Taiko diff are here. /o/

Oni: http://puu.sh/1guEO
Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/1guFg

The BG fits pretty well in taiko already so I don't see a need for another BG.

/me gets modders

Phish_old

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Phish_old 2012-10-19T19:18:28+00:00

i forgot how to mod orz
dont expect this mod to be usefull or something
lol you need a transparent custom spinner for this vid

[Easy]
00:32:034 - add note?
01:02:525 - i dont like this spinner, try this? http://puu.sh/1guFG because you know it's kiai time and i dont like long spinners in kiai and u know there is green in the video and there is green on the hitobjects and u know there is some *drum* *drum* *drum* *drum* *guitar solo* in the background and it would totally fit and u know. lol jk just a suggestion

[NoHitter's Normal]
00:42:853 (2) - add a reverse arrow? if you do, dont forget a clap on the sliderend.
00:46:460 - and 00:49:083 - there is missing a circle srsly plz add circles here ._.
uhm i thougt kiai time has to be the same in all difficultys? you have a break in kiai time, [Easy] has not.. but i could have missed some ranking criteria update stuff or whatever, i dont really mod or map lately

[f e a r's Hard]
faine, but i think 00:23:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is totally overmapped and not fitting

[Insane]
01:03:181 (3) - rotate 180°?
01:16:131 (2,4) - flip vertically?
absolutely awesome diff (and mapset)!

no kudos

Pereira006

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Pereira006 2012-10-19T19:18:52+00:00

Hello !!

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[Easy]

Hitsound:

00:10:722 (3) - Missing add clap if you keep it consistency in insane
00:12:689 (1) - Missing add Whistle in end slider
00:24:493 (2) - Need add whistle in slider end is sense because here song piano
00:40:886 (3) - add Whistle in start slider? is more sense for me as is here piano
00:44:820 (2) - add clap in start slider i guess is missing like insane if you keep it consistency
00:45:476 (3) - ^ same
00:47:442 (2) - ^ same
00:48:099 (3) - ^ same
00:49:411 (6) - Finish normal ? is not here Soft ? like insane

look good

Gameplay:

01:02:525 (1) - This spinner is don't sense here because the vocals or guitar if you follow, just remap this part imo, the spinner don't sense

look good

[NoHitter's Normal]

Hitsound:

perfect o.o

Gameplay:

00:14:329 (3,4) - when you do Manual CTRL+h I really don't see 100% align with this sliders maybe perfect align? (just copy and then CTRL+H so will be perfect 100% align) just my imo
00:15:968 (2,3) - ^ same
00:29:738 (4) - New combo? because here vocals start high i mean is like change that really fit more imo
00:34:984 (2) - New combo too? is same explain before like you did at 00:37:607 (1) imo
00:50:722 (3) - need really move little left will better align with 00:50:066 (2)
00:51:378 (4) - why don't try better alignt with 00:49:411 (1) ? look better to gameplay imo

look great

[f e a r's Hard]

Hitsound:

00:26:788 (1) - No here whislte ? i feel you missing add here if you keep it consistency
00:35:804 (5) - remove here not sense
00:35:968 (6) - add whistle in begin slider piano is really here is fit more
00:37:279 (10) - add whistle in begin slider too
00:43:673 (6) - kick slider with clap high that hurt don't try add timing here and reduce volume ? or remove clap is most better imo
01:04:656 (7) - ^ same
01:15:312 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same

this just more little work hitsound imo

Gameplay:

00:01:050 (2) - Don't fit piano the end slider i don't really sense because is not here piano i feel like overmapped just remove slider and add note at 00:01:050 is most better if you fix that be carefully spacing
00:08:755 (4) - New combo look like vocals is change is fit more imo
00:24:493 (4) - New combo here too is same explain before ^
00:31:050 (4) - New combo here too
00:32:197 (7) - ^ same
00:36:460 (7) - ^ same
00:38:919 (3) - ^ same
00:41:542 (5) - put new combo and at 00:42:034 (1) - remove new combo that sense lot with vocals
00:43:017 (4) - new combo ? because vocals is change
01:03:837 (5) - ^ same
01:24:656 (7) - New combo as guitar as change

The gameplay look armazing but new combo need more work some don't fit vocals and guitar

[Insane]

Hitsound:

look perfect for me

Gameplay:

00:42:689 (4) - here need add new combo because here vocals stat long and high i mean is change that really fit more imo

look armazing i really enjoy this

[]
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye ![/quote]

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-19T22:35:20+00:00

Phish wrote:
i forgot how to mod orz
dont expect this mod to be usefull or something
lol you need a transparent custom spinner for this vid - Well, totally if I had someone to make it

[Easy]
00:32:034 - add note? - Hmm, I'm leaving this as it is for now as adding a note makes the sequence of 1/1 quite long, but I might rearrange this later if I randomly feel like it
01:02:525 - i dont like this spinner, try this? http://puu.sh/1guFG because you know it's kiai time and i dont like long spinners in kiai and u know there is green in the video and there is green on the hitobjects and u know there is some *drum* *drum* *drum* *drum* *guitar solo* in the background and it would totally fit and u know. lol jk just a suggestion - Actually, good point, changed spinner for some other stuff \o\

[Insane]
01:03:181 (3) - rotate 180°? - Well, the drums sounds the same, so I think it's fine to just leave them pointing the same way
01:16:131 (2,4) - flip vertically? - Nooot sure what you mean, but by vertically flipping this I get overlapping sliders and unrankable stuff xD
absolutely awesome diff (and mapset)! - Yay!

no kudos - Aww but ok :<

Thanks for modding~

Pereira006 wrote:
Hello !! - Hi~

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[Easy]

Hitsound:

00:10:722 (3) - Missing add clap if you keep it consistency in insane
00:12:689 (1) - Missing add Whistle in end slider
00:24:493 (2) - Need add whistle in slider end is sense because here song piano
00:40:886 (3) - add Whistle in start slider? is more sense for me as is here piano - A whistle here sounds a bit out of place to me tho, so I'll leave this for now.
00:44:820 (2) - add clap in start slider i guess is missing like insane if you keep it consistency
00:45:476 (3) - ^ same
00:47:442 (2) - ^ same
00:48:099 (3) - ^ same
00:49:411 (6) - Finish normal ? is not here Soft ? like insane
look good

Gameplay:

01:02:525 (1) - This spinner is don't sense here because the vocals or guitar if you follow, just remap this part imo, the spinner don't sense - Yeah, fixed this \o\
look good

[Insane]

Hitsound:

look perfect for me

Gameplay:
00:42:689 (4) - here need add new combo because here vocals stat long and high i mean is change that really fit more imo
look armazing i really enjoy this

[]
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye !

Thanks for modding! Anything I haven't commented have been fixed~

And added MMzz's Taiko-diffs.

f e a r

317 posts

Joined March 2011

f e a r 2012-10-19T23:03:06+00:00

alacat

alacat wrote:
Hi:3 As requested.

[f e a r's Hard]
●00:06:624 (5) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:06:952 - overmap here. try to reduce one slider's reverse.
●00:17:115 (3) - hmm.. more spacing here ?
●00:22:197 - put volume 40~50% here? a little loud >< ^ All okissu
●00:28:427 (3) - add new combo ? as the synth's phrase should begin here. I think this one is fine since it already follows the guitar.
●00:57:771 (2) - remove clap from the head since it follows nothing. I find it too quiet, and I feel it has a rhythm already as is.
●01:16:952 (1,2) - it doesn't follow the music well on the slider's head and reverse .remove clap ? I don't really want to, but I changed it a little bit, considering it follows the bass drum I think 'twas okay.

Hope you fine this helpful :3

Phish

Phish wrote:
[f e a r's Hard]
faine, but i think 00:23:181 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is totally overmapped and not fitting Somewhat fixed it

no kudos

Pereira006

Pereira006 wrote:
Hello !!

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[f e a r's Hard]

Hitsound:

00:26:788 (1) - No here whislte ? i feel you missing add here if you keep it consistency
00:35:804 (5) - remove here not sense
00:35:968 (6) - add whistle in begin slider piano is really here is fit more
00:37:279 (10) - add whistle in begin slider too
00:43:673 (6) - kick slider with clap high that hurt don't try add timing here and reduce volume ? or remove clap is most better imo
01:04:656 (7) - ^ same
01:15:312 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^ same
^All fixed
this just more little work hitsound imo

Gameplay:

00:01:050 (2) - Don't fit piano the end slider i don't really sense because is not here piano i feel like overmapped just remove slider and add note at 00:01:050 is most better if you fix that be carefully spacing Oke
00:08:755 (4) - New combo look like vocals is change is fit more imo I dunno, it's pretty much the same. It should be fine as it is.
00:24:493 (4) - New combo here too is same explain before ^ Did a few changes so I think it's fine as it is now.
00:31:050 (4) - New combo here too ^^
00:32:197 (7) - ^ same For not changing the above I won't change this
00:36:460 (7) - ^ same I don't understand this one.
00:38:919 (3) - ^ same ^
00:41:542 (5) - put new combo and at 00:42:034 (1) - remove new combo that sense lot with vocals Idd
00:43:017 (4) - new combo ? because vocals is change Naah, I think it's fine.
01:03:837 (5) - ^ same ^
01:24:656 (7) - New combo as guitar as change
The gameplay look armazing but new combo need more work some don't fit vocals and guitar

that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye !

Thanks a lot for the mods guys! I fixed quite a bit :p CXu: http://puu.sh/1gzyi

mintong89

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Joined July 2011

mintong89 2012-10-19T23:19:14+00:00

Taiko Modreq from My Queue~ <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[MM's Taiko Oni]
where taiko hitsound?

change all to Normal 70% (Drum hitsound is current not using for taiko skin or other)

00:09:247 - k
00:28:099 - this SV change is make people confused, seriously. i think you better check this
00:52:034 - ^ same
00:54:165 - ^ same
00:30:640 - re
01:25:804 - k

[MM's Taiko Muzukashii]
where taiko hitsound?

change all to Normal 70% (Drum hitsound is current not using for taiko skin or other)

no problem....

MMzz

Elite Mapper

3,979 posts

Joined June 2009

MMzz 2012-10-19T23:31:25+00:00

mintong89 wrote:
Taiko Modreq from My Queue~ <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[MM's Taiko Oni]
where taiko hitsound? change all to Normal 70% (Drum hitsound is current not using for taiko skin or other)

00:09:247 - k Alright
00:28:099 - this SV change is make people confused, seriously. i think you better check this Fixed, read below
00:52:034 - ^ same ^
00:54:165 - ^ same ^
00:30:640 - re No, the beat fits perfectly fine and you didn't explain why so I don't understand you reason.
01:25:804 - k No

[MM's Taiko Muzukashii]
where taiko hitsound? change all to Normal 70% (Drum hitsound is current not using for taiko skin or other)

no problem....

I'm not sure where all the green point came from, CXu baka =w=. All of that got removed.

Oni: http://puu.sh/1gA1f
Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/1gA2r

S o r d a

1,576 posts

Joined July 2009

S o r d a 2012-10-20T08:04:26+00:00

from in-games

[overall]:

nothing wrong here.

[Insane]:

00:14:656 (6) - beginning whistle(soft)
00:17:279 (5) - ^
00:19:902 (3) - ^
00:29:574 (5) - I prefer stack with 00:30:230 (2) - slider end
00:50:722 (6) - x244 y70 ?
01:12:935 (2) - add note?

[f e a r's Hard]:

00:19:902 (1) - x384 y72?
01:24:656 (7) - add newcombo?

[NoHitter's Normal]:

01:23:509 (4) - add newcombo
01:24:493 (1) - remove newcombo

[Easy]:

looks fine

Nice map ~
good luck!

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2012-10-20T09:35:26+00:00

alacat wrote:
[NoHitter's Normal]
●00:54:001 - put volume 70% here? gradually add volume better imo :3 - Done.
●01:23:509 (4) - add new combo ? as the synth's phrase should begin here.and remove it here 01:24:493 (1) - Done.

Phish wrote:
[NoHitter's Normal]
00:42:853 (2) - add a reverse arrow? if you do, dont forget a clap on the sliderend. - The current one plays better IMO.
00:46:460 - and 00:49:083 - there is missing a circle srsly plz add circles here ._. - I'm trying to emphasize the soft-finish at the end of the sliders by omitting the notes there.
uhm i thougt kiai time has to be the same in all difficultys? you have a break in kiai time, [Easy] has not.. but i could have missed some ranking criteria update stuff or whatever, i dont really mod or map lately - Guest diffs are allowed to have different kiai.

Pereira006 wrote:
[NoHitter's Normal]

Hitsound:

perfect o.o

Gameplay:

00:14:329 (3,4) - when you do Manual CTRL+h I really don't see 100% align with this sliders maybe perfect align? (just copy and then CTRL+H so will be perfect 100% align) just my imo Fixed this.
00:15:968 (2,3) - ^ same I'd rather not touch that. They're symmetrical enough.
00:29:738 (4) - New combo? because here vocals start high i mean is like change that really fit more imo Not really a fan of unnecessarily short combos.
00:34:984 (2) - New combo too? is same explain before like you did at 00:37:607 (1) imo Well I was following the vocals strictly there.
00:50:722 (3) - need really move little left will better align with 00:50:066 (2) Fixed by moving it left by only 1 x coordinate >.<
00:51:378 (4) - why don't try better alignt with 00:49:411 (1) ? look better to gameplay imo They are already aligned?
look great

S o r d a wrote:
[NoHitter's Normal]:
01:23:509 (4) - add newcombo
01:24:493 (1) - remove newcombo Done both of these in a previous mod.

Thanks all!

Updated

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: SAOP2.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15963,82027
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:Aoi Eir
Creator:CXu
Version:NoHitter's Normal
Source:Sword Art Online
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BeatmapID:183493
BeatmapSetID:61401

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.32
SliderTickRate:1

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Combo2 : 65,167,72
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f e a r

317 posts

Joined March 2011

f e a r 2012-10-20T11:30:26+00:00

S o r d a wrote:
from in-games

[f e a r's Hard]:
00:19:902 (1) - x384 y72? Yeah (:
01:24:656 (7) - add newcombo? Done in previous mod~

Nice map ~
good luck!

TY for mod!

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-20T11:38:44+00:00

S o r d a wrote:
from in-games -

[overall]:
nothing wrong here.
[Insane]:
00:14:656 (6) - beginning whistle(soft) - Whistle on these sliders sound kind of weird to me.
00:17:279 (5) - ^ - ^
00:19:902 (3) - ^ - ^
00:29:574 (5) - I prefer stack with 00:30:230 (2) - slider end
00:50:722 (6) - x244 y70 ?
01:12:935 (2) - add note?
^All fixed.
[Easy]:
looks fine

Nice map ~
good luck!

Thanks for modding!

@MMzz: I swear it's the editor randomly adding the inherited sections from the other difficulties

Fixed! (hopefully)
@NoHitter & f e a r: Updated!

BadLuckExpert

252 posts

Joined March 2010

BadLuckExpert 2012-10-21T05:24:53+00:00

Okay i have no idea how to criticize a beatmap but i can say that so far i love it! The insane one is kinda tricky, but after i tried it a few times i managed to pass. It was really fun ^^

Coro

2,394 posts

Joined September 2010

Coro 2012-10-21T13:18:27+00:00

Taiko mod~
All are suggestions unless in red.

[General]
Use alternating colours next time, it makes life easier for modders~

[MM's Taiko Muzukashii]
01:04:329 - d

[MM's Taiko Oni]
no problems~

Really good map, sorry I can't find anything wrong~

Stefan

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Stefan 2012-10-21T21:19:46+00:00

hue

Disable the Letterboxes.

[Muzukashii]
00:03:509 (2) - k
00:04:820 (3) - d
00:08:427 (7) - k
00:35:640 (111,112) - k
01:01:378 - Circle with d
01:12:197 (283) - ^

[Oni]
00:08:427 (2) - k
00:14:493 - Circle with d?
00:48:755 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - I personally don't like the Stream at this Part. Make something similar like 00:44:165 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121)

Well nothing much to find.

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-10-21T22:00:37+00:00

Good Map! Nothing found. STAR~

Star Stream

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Joined June 2010

Star Stream 2012-10-22T09:49:40+00:00

From my queue

[Easy]

00:15:312 (5) - NC it to be easier to read? a bit hard to read in 'Easy' diff now
01:20:886 (1) - doesn't fit well with the music and hard to play, i highly recommend to replace it with a slider

[Normal]

00:27:771 (2) - maybe follow vocal? its rhythm is a bit weird now imo
00:37:607 (1) - i think there's no reason to NC it
00:43:509 - clap fits better imo

[Hard]

00:00:886 (1,2) - wrong beat here, they acutally should be like this, listen it carefully in 25%
SPOILER
00:06:624 (5) - really don't think it fits well, i'd just put a circle on there
00:22:525 (1,2) - with the music, ctrl+g would make sense imo
00:23:181 (1) - are you following vocal now? then shorten it to 00:23:837 - plz.
00:51:214 (1) - its arrow is overlapped by 3's hitburst, can you move it to somewhere
00:51:706 (2) - a bit weird beat with a slider here for me, 2 circles would make sense imo
01:12:853 (3) - clap would fit imo
01:20:066 - ^
01:22:689 (1) - too sharp jump, can you use 1.6x or at least 1.8x here plz?

[Insane]

00:14:328 (5) - there's no reason to use 3/4 here, use 1/1 plz
00:16:951 (4) - ^

With the Insane diff, i think you'd better add an easier Insane diff for diff spread. you may know it's pretty hard now

Good luck with rank~

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-22T15:12:45+00:00

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue

[Easy]
00:15:312 (5) - NC it to be easier to read? a bit hard to read in 'Easy' diff now - Sure.
01:20:886 (1) - doesn't fit well with the music and hard to play, i highly recommend to replace it with a slider - I think the spinner fits the same way I think the spinning pattern I have in Insane fits this part :p

[Insane]
00:14:328 (5) - there's no reason to use 3/4 here, use 1/1 plz - These have grown on me, so I'd like to keep them.
00:16:951 (4) - ^ - ^
With the Insane diff, i think you'd better add an easier Insane diff for diff spread. you may know it's pretty hard now - Mmm, I'd say the only part that's really harder than a regular insane is the jump-part in the middle, which I intended to make harder anyway (same in [Easy]) so I think the diffspread is fine, and that the Insane diff is all right in difficulty

Good luck with rank~

Thanks for modding!

rEdo

809 posts

Joined November 2008

rEdo 2012-10-22T15:39:27+00:00

[General]
TIMING CHECK:
913, 183.00 BPM
7458, 183.00 BPM

you lack a custom drum-hitnormal, thus your hitsounds are blending with my custom hitsounds and that sounds kinda meh

[Easy]
00:00:558 (1) - start it at the big white tick
00:16:624 (6,1) - swap new combos
01:19:574 (1) - unnecessary NC
~~you suck at mapping easies~~

[NoHitter's Normal]
00:17:935 (1,2) - I could complain about that being not centered, but I guess you can't do anything against that

00:37:607 (1) - this new combo doesn't really fit
nothing really to be honest, that's a honest difficulty you've got there.

[f e a r's Hard]
00:00:886 (1,2,3) - I don't want to be bitchy here, but that part doesn't really fit the song.
00:14:984 (1) - place it a bit further, click on green (6) and take a look at the upper-right corner of the window
00:14:984 (1,2) - and yeah, avoid to use new combos like that. it's rather recommended to start them whenever you're starting a new pattern. for now, just swap them over here
01:25:148 (8,9,10) - that doesn't fit the song, don't you think a longer slider like that (7) one would fit a lot better here?

[Insane]
00:45:147 (1) - you should move this a lot to the right

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-22T16:01:58+00:00

rEdo wrote:
[General]
TIMING CHECK:
913, 183.00 BPM
7458, 183.00 BPM
^I'll fix this in a bit
you lack a custom drum-hitnormal, thus your hitsounds are blending with my custom hitsounds and that sounds kinda meh
^Sure I'll add one, inb4 remove cuz unnecessary.

[Easy]
00:00:558 (1) - start it at the big white tick - But the sound starts on the not-big white tick D:
00:16:624 (6,1) - swap new combos - That would result in a shooort combo.
01:19:574 (1) - unnecessary NC - Removed
~~you suck at mapping easies~~ - <3

[Insane]
00:45:147 (1) - you should move this a lot to the right - Intentional. Same as 00:47:115 (2,1)

Thanks for modding =w=b

Last edited by CXu 2012-10-22T16:26:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-22T16:24:19+00:00

~* Changed timing to: *~
BPM 183 & Offset -403
BPM 183 & Offset 7453

If you can't fix the timing or something, just ask me to do it

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-22T17:09:30+00:00

I'll mod this map soon,first check taiko mods pls ~

EDIT : OK, if you ready send me a from pm.

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-10-22T17:17:06+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-22T17:14:07+00:00

Yay! ww
I have to wait for MMzz, f e a r and NoHitter to check and fix their diffs, so might need to wait a bit though, hope that's all right =w="

Stefan

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Stefan 2012-10-22T17:14:44+00:00

~~Just want to leave this here: Did MMzz took something from my Mod?~~
nvm

MMzz

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MMzz 2012-10-22T18:22:14+00:00

Stefan wrote:
hue

Disable the Letterboxes.

[Muzukashii]
00:03:509 (2) - k No, I would like to keep my d d k k pattern I have for the sake of design.
00:04:820 (3) - d See Oni.
00:08:427 (7) - k Alright.
00:35:640 (111,112) - k No, I'm not very sure why there should be a k here.
01:01:378 - Circle with d Alright.
01:12:197 (283) - ^ No, I don't want to flood this section when the drum beat it just going d d k d d k.

[Oni]
00:08:427 (2) - k No, I reserved the k just for the 1 snare note. (00:09:247 (4) - )
00:14:493 - Circle with d?No, the drum beat is only going d d k d d k if you listen, so there is not need to map past that constantly.
00:48:755 (131,132,133,134,135,136,137) - I personally don't like the Stream at this Part. Make something similar like 00:44:165 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) This stream fits the song almost perfectly I would need more of an explanation before I consider changing it.

Well nothing much to find.

Ty for the mod.

Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/1hzzC
Oni: There were no changes. P:

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2012-10-22T18:33:15+00:00

Star Stream wrote:
[Normal]
00:27:771 (2) - maybe follow vocal? its rhythm is a bit weird now imo Following the beat sounds fine too. Its also for consistency since in the slow part, I mapped to the beat.
00:37:607 (1) - i think there's no reason to NC it Reworked the combo.
00:43:509 - clap fits better imoSounds too noisy IMO.

rEdo wrote:
[NoHitter's Normal]
00:17:935 (1,2) - I could complain about that being not centered, but I guess you can't do anything against that Yep xD
00:37:607 (1) - this new combo doesn't really fit Same as above mod. Reworked it.
nothing really to be honest, that's a honest difficulty you've got there.

Thanks to all!
Also fixed timing

Updated

osu file format v10

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

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Bookmarks: 15963,82027
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

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Title:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:Aoi Eir
Creator:CXu
Version:NoHitter's Normal
Source:Sword Art Online
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BeatmapID:183493
BeatmapSetID:61401

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
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CXu

osu! Alumni

3,558 posts

Joined March 2009

Topic Starter

CXu 2012-10-22T18:57:09+00:00

Well then, time to wait for f e a r to finish his LoL tournament =3=
Updated everything else for now!

Wreath

435 posts

Joined February 2012

Wreath 2012-10-22T20:00:14+00:00

i like this~

☆~

good luck

f e a r

317 posts

Joined March 2011

f e a r 2012-10-22T20:32:45+00:00

Star Stream

Star Stream wrote:
From my queue

[Hard]
00:00:886 (1,2) - wrong beat here, they acutally should be like this, listen it carefully in 25% Fixed
SPOILER
00:06:624 (5) - really don't think it fits well, i'd just put a circle on there No change
00:22:525 (1,2) - with the music, ctrl+g would make sense imo I didn't understand this.
00:23:181 (1) - are you following vocal now? then shorten it to 00:23:837 - plz.
00:51:214 (1) - its arrow is overlapped by 3's hitburst, can you move it to somewhere I'm fairly sure that you'd be able to catch the repeat slider. No change
00:51:706 (2) - a bit weird beat with a slider here for me, 2 circles would make sense imo Meh, it's fine imo + I think this one was weirder..
01:12:853 (3) - clap would fit imo Yeah
01:20:066 - ^ ^
01:22:689 (1) - too sharp jump, can you use 1.6x or at least 1.8x here plz? I think it's fine as it is.
Good luck with rank~

rEdo

rEdo wrote:
[f e a r's Hard]
00:00:886 (1,2,3) - I don't want to be bitchy here, but that part doesn't really fit the song. ? I think it's fine
00:14:984 (1) - place it a bit further, click on green (6) and take a look at the upper-right corner of the window
00:14:984 (1,2) - and yeah, avoid to use new combos like that. it's rather recommended to start them whenever you're starting a new pattern. for now, just swap them over here
01:25:148 (8,9,10) - that doesn't fit the song, don't you think a longer slider like that (7) one would fit a lot better here? Well not really, but I'll change it... All fixed (:

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-10-23T00:29:29+00:00

Hi ~ CXu ~

My mod here for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Inconsistency in tags,pls check osu file and fix.
Remove Letterbox during breaks.
I guess last spinner end to 01:28:764 is much better.

[Insane]

00:54:665 - Unsanpped kiai time point.
01:22:206 - ^

[f e a r's Hard]

00:00:853 (1,2) - If you change a slider much better with start.
00:34:665 (3) - Change curved slider looks better,here is code.
```
92,108,34665,2,0,B|60:120|36:148,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```

[NoHitter's Normal]

Change kiai time,same as other diff?
00:00:908 (1) - Start on 00:00:580.
00:28:764 (1,2) - Make perfect symmetry to here.
01:09:420 (4,5) - ^

[Easy]

00:20:895 (1) - Add whistle.
00:52:043 (4) - Should extend to 00:53:026.

That's all i can find ~ really awesome map and nice song >_<

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

NoHitter

osu! Alumni

3,785 posts

Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2012-10-23T03:41:24+00:00

Thanks Rika!

Fixed all except for the kiai. Guest diffs are allowed to have different kiai and IMO having it refountain is better.
(I would suggest that all other diffs place the refountain actually instead of removing mine xD)

Updated

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: SAOP2.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 54329
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

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Title:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INNOCENCE (TV Size)
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:Aoi Eir
Creator:CXu
Version:NoHitter's Normal
Source:Sword Art Online
Tags:SAO Aincrad ALfheim Online ALO kirigaya kazuto kirito Yuuki Asuna Lyfa Suguha Yui OP Opening 2 2nd  f_e_a_r NoHitter MMzz
BeatmapID:183493
BeatmapSetID:61401

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.32
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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386,80,33682,6,4,B|362:148|430:216|499:193,1,198.000007553101,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,265,34993,2,4,B|304:330|208:330|176:265,1,198.000007553101,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,224,35977,1,0,0:0:0
336,180,36305,6,4,B|304:115|208:115|176:180,1,198.000007553101,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,40,37616,2,0,B|96:140|40:232,1,198.000007553101,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,356,38928,5,4,1:0:0
260,316,39256,1,8,0:0:0
352,316,39584,1,2,2:0:0
436,356,39912,1,8,0:0:0
440,264,40239,6,0,B|400:208|420:136,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,64,40895,2,0,B|516:120|496:192,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,264,41551,6,0,B|312:264|312:264|268:320,2,198,4|2|8,1:0|2:0|0:0,2:0:0
444,172,42862,2,0,B|308:172,2,132,2|8|2,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0
340,52,44174,5,4,3:0:0
224,24,44830,1,8,0:0:0
108,56,45485,2,4,B|43:88|43:184|108:216,1,198.000007553101,2|4,2:0|2:0,0:0:0
196,296,46797,5,4,3:0:0
256,192,47452,1,8,0:0:0
316,296,48108,2,4,B|384:319|452:251|429:182,1,198.000007553101,2|4,2:0|2:0,0:0:0
368,80,49420,5,2,2:0:0
316,184,50075,1,8,0:0:0
196,184,50731,1,2,2:0:0
144,80,51387,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,52043,12,4,54010,2:0:0
176,96,54666,6,0,B|216:28|296:28|336:96,2,198,4|2|8,1:0|2:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,184,55977,2,0,B|88:192|20:184,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
20,276,56633,2,0,B|84:268|152:276,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
233,232,57289,6,0,B|314:251|314:251|312:307|380:335,2,198,2|2|8,2:0|2:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,140,58600,1,0,0:0:0
280,52,58928,2,0,B|200:28|200:28|168:48|144:60,1,132,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0
84,108,59584,1,8,0:0:0
16,168,59912,6,0,B|28:304,1,132,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,328,60567,2,0,B|104:192,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,148,61223,1,2,2:0:0
260,96,61551,1,8,0:0:0
352,92,61879,1,2,2:0:0
432,136,62207,1,8,0:0:0
390,218,62534,6,0,B|316:229|302:305,1,132,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
209,303,63190,2,8,B|195:228|121:217,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
121,124,63846,2,0,B|194:112|208:38,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,38,64502,2,0,B|317:112|391:123,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,212,65157,5,4,1:0:0
336,300,65485,1,8,0:0:0
428,292,65813,2,0,B|508:324,2,66,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,300,66469,1,2,2:0:0
248,332,66797,1,8,0:0:0
160,300,67125,2,0,B|92:300,2,66,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,208,67780,6,0,B|140:152|140:152|160:120|180:104,1,132,4|8,1:0|2:0,0:0:0
256,52,68436,1,2,0:0:0
332,104,68764,2,0,B|352:120|372:152|372:152|332:208,1,132,8|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0
302,296,69420,1,8,0:0:0
210,296,69748,2,0,B|110:296,2,66,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,216,70403,6,0,B|256:80,1,132,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,28,71059,2,0,B|468:28,1,132,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
504,108,71715,1,2,2:0:0
456,184,72043,1,8,0:0:0
508,260,72371,1,2,2:0:0
444,328,72698,1,8,0:0:0
364,280,73026,6,0,B|256:228|256:228|156:132|256:60|356:132|256:228|256:228|148:280,1,528,4|2,2:0|2:0,0:0:0
148,96,74993,2,0,B|188:12|328:12|364:96,1,264,2|4,2:0|2:0,0:0:0
468,248,76305,5,8,0:0:0
320,356,76961,2,0,B|256:340|188:356,2,132,2|0|8,2:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,184,78272,5,4,2:0:0
256,60,78928,1,8,0:0:0
120,184,79584,1,2,2:0:0
195,130,79912,2,0,B|256:176|316:132,2,132,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,60,80895,2,8,B|256:296,1,198.000007553101,2|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,258,82207,5,4,1:0:0
72,228,82862,1,0,3:0:0
100,140,83190,1,8,0:0:0
192,160,83518,6,0,B|256:180|324:160,1,132,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,140,84174,1,0,0:0:0
376,224,84502,2,0,B|364:296,1,66,8|4,0:0|2:0,0:0:0
290,343,84993,2,0,B|210:343,2,66,2|8|4,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0
146,289,85649,2,0,B|136:224,2,66,2|8|4,2:0|0:0|2:0,0:0:0
256,192,86141,12,0,88436,0:0:0

f e a r

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f e a r 2012-10-23T08:16:57+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
My mod here for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[f e a r's Hard]
00:00:853 (1,2) - If you change a slider much better with start.
00:34:665 (3) - Change curved slider looks better,here is code. Fixed everything (:
92,108,34665,2,0,B|60:120|36:148,1,64,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Thanks for mod!

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-23T08:28:45+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ CXu ~ - Hi~

My mod here for my Queue ~

More Little Busters!

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Inconsistency in tags,pls check osu file and fix.
Remove Letterbox during breaks.
I guess last spinner end to 01:28:764 is much better.

[Insane]

00:54:665 - Unsanpped kiai time point.
01:22:206 - ^

[Easy]

00:20:895 (1) - Add whistle.
00:52:043 (4) - Should extend to 00:53:026.
^Why did I even quote this post; fixed everything xD.

That's all i can find ~ really awesome map and nice song >_< - >.<~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

I hope NoHitter won't kill me for extending his spinner to 01:28:764, or f e a r for adding another kiai fountain

I thiiiiink everything have been fixed right and stuff! Thanks for modding!

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-23T08:56:09+00:00

OK ~ Good job ~

Here you go :3

EDIT : Rechecked and bubble back ~

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-10-23T19:45:04+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-23T09:00:37+00:00

Weeeeee~~

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2012-10-23T09:16:24+00:00

The spinner is fine.

Flower

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Flower 2012-10-23T12:18:16+00:00

Hi~ mod from the queue~
Only unrankable stuff marked. others are all suggestions, you can choose to take or not.

[Easy]
00:03:531 (1) - The piano hit is so weak that cannot be the reason to place it here, as beginners will often mis-hit it on 00:03:367. You should either place the note here or change it to a slider.
00:06:154 (3) - ^
00:20:895 (1) - relatively short spinner. the next note start at 00:23:190 which make the beginners confusing on handling the spinner. you can put note at 00:21:223 ,00:21:879 and 00:22:534 instead.
00:26:797 (1) - The stack is confusing. I suggest you put it further, at least like this

SPOILER

00:31:715 (2) - confusing. the vocal is on 00:31:551 and the downbeat here is not significant. beginners are not able to find out the regularity. suggest add note at 00:31:387 and 00:32:043 .

[Normal]
This level must have been easier than CXu's Easy?
00:03:531 (1,2) - Same as easy. A bit strange. suggest adding a note at 00:03:859
00:06:810 (6) - neither on vocal nor on drum. suggest moving to 00:06:646
00:31:387 (2,3) - unnecessary to put the sliders like that. suggestion:

SPOILER

01:25:649 (5) - confusing jump :O

[Hard]
00:16:469 (1,2,3,4) - imo, it flows better if the notes are put like this

SPOILER

00:20:567 (1) - better end at 00:21:879
00:23:190 (1) - shape not quite good.

SPOILER

392,120,23190,6,0,B|416:200|416:200|392:272,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:46:141 (6) - ^

SPOILER

256,72,46141,2,0,B|176:56|96:68,2,160,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:45:157 (3,4,5,6) - not quite neat. since it's hard level you can put it like this

SPOILER

00:47:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - since you are using Ctrl+H then fix it with the previous suggestion.
00:48:436 - delete finish.
01:13:026 (1) - better end at 01:14:174 and the next 01:14:174 (1) - start at 01:14:338 ,and 01:14:502 (2) - delete, add note at 01:14:666
01:22:698 (1) - make a slowdown slider here?

[Insane]
00:02:055 (1,2,3) - significantly DS inconsistency?
00:10:567 (2,3,4,5,6) - note quite neat... put a circle anywhere and use its approach circle as a reference (recently Niva taught me xD) then delete the reference circle

SPOILER

00:11:878 (2) - don't forget the stack
00:28:108 (4) - alternative: put a bit further following DS. if so, add NC
00:49:009 (2) - suggest delete
00:49:911 (3,6) - stack with 00:49:091 (3) - ?

[Taiko Muzukashii]
No difficulty spread. Muzukashii level is not easy enough for inexperienced taikoers. Remove streams like xxxxo in 00:43:847 (145,146,147,148,149) , and some of the compact triplets.

[Taiko Oni]
00:02:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - same as Muzukashii is ok. The combination is confusing.
00:39:912 (82) - x
00:40:075 (83) - remove
00:40:239 - add o

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-23T15:19:07+00:00

Flower wrote:
Hi~ mod from the queue~
Only unrankable stuff marked. others are all suggestions, you can choose to take or not.

[Easy]
00:03:531 (1) - The piano hit is so weak that cannot be the reason to place it here, as beginners will often mis-hit it on 00:03:367. You should either place the note here or change it to a slider.
00:06:154 (3) - ^ - I'd say they're a good enough reason to place a note there, as well as hitting 1/1 being easier than hitting 1/2.
00:20:895 (1) - relatively short spinner. the next note start at 00:23:190 which make the beginners confusing on handling the spinner. you can put note at 00:21:223 ,00:21:879 and 00:22:534 instead. - Mmm, the spinner is long enough for auto to 8k it, and the slider after it is close enough to the center imo.
00:26:797 (1) - The stack is confusing. I suggest you put it further, at least like this - Well, unless this is some aeofiheoarih unrankable thing for Easy, I'd like to keep it, since I like the "meaningful pause"-ish feel :p
SPOILER
00:31:715 (2) - confusing. the vocal is on 00:31:551 and the downbeat here is not significant. beginners are not able to find out the regularity. suggest add note at 00:31:387 and 00:32:043 . - Mapping to the vocals would be more confusing imo, and having 10 1/1 notes right after each other is more than I want to do in an easy, which is why I did it like this.

[Insane]
00:02:055 (1,2,3) - significantly DS inconsistency? - What?
00:10:567 (2,3,4,5,6) - note quite neat... put a circle anywhere and use its approach circle as a reference (recently Niva taught me xD) then delete the reference circle - I really don't think this is very important, and it plays fine already.
SPOILER
00:11:878 (2) - don't forget the stack - ^
00:28:108 (4) - alternative: put a bit further following DS. if so, add NC - ? This is fine even according to distance snap (1.0x).
00:49:009 (2) - suggest delete - That would be kinda silly, since there is clearly a drumsound there
00:49:911 (3,6) - stack with 00:49:091 (3) - ? - Well, it's almost unnoticable, so I guess it should be fine

No changes for now, but thanks for modding anyway!

I'll see if the other people want to change anything~

f e a r

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f e a r 2012-10-23T15:23:35+00:00

Flower wrote:
Hi~ mod from the queue~
Only unrankable stuff marked. others are all suggestions, you can choose to take or not.

[Hard]
00:16:469 (1,2,3,4) - imo, it flows better if the notes are put like this Done
SPOILER
00:20:567 (1) - better end at 00:21:879 I don't think so..
00:23:190 (1) - shape not quite good. Added
SPOILER
392,120,23190,6,0,B|416:200|416:200|392:272,1,160,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:46:141 (6) - ^ Noh
SPOILER
256,72,46141,2,0,B|176:56|96:68,2,160,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:45:157 (3,4,5,6) - not quite neat. since it's hard level you can put it like this
SPOILER
00:47:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - since you are using Ctrl+H then fix it with the previous suggestion.
00:48:436 - delete finish.
01:13:026 (1) - better end at 01:14:174 and the next 01:14:174 (1) - start at 01:14:338 ,and 01:14:502 (2) - delete, add note at 01:14:666
01:22:698 (1) - make a slowdown slider here? ^no change, I feel they're fine as they are.

Thanks for the mod (:!

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CXu 2012-10-23T15:29:31+00:00

*pop*

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NoHitter 2012-10-23T15:39:05+00:00

Flower wrote:
[Normal]
This level must have been easier than CXu's Easy? There are 1/2's :/
00:03:531 (1,2) - Same as easy. A bit strange. suggest adding a note at 00:03:859 Don't want to add a 1/1 yet considering this is a slow part.
00:06:810 (6) - neither on vocal nor on drum. suggest moving to 00:06:646 You can hear the piano there. Plus it's a 1/1 rhythm.
00:31:387 (2,3) - unnecessary to put the sliders like that. suggestion: The current one plays better and emphasizes the vocals at 00:32:207.
SPOILER
01:25:649 (5) - confusing jump :O I disagree. It's readable goes well with the song.

Thanks but no changes for now.

CXu

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CXu 2012-10-23T15:41:56+00:00

Actually, might as well fix that stacking thing in Insane now that I popped the bubble anyway.

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MMzz 2012-10-23T16:46:54+00:00

Flower wrote:
[Taiko Muzukashii]
No difficulty spread. Muzukashii level is not easy enough for inexperienced taikoers. Remove streams like xxxxo in 00:43:847 (145,146,147,148,149) , and some of the compact triplets. I'm sorry but last I looked Muzukashii means difficult/hard, it's not for totaly inexperienced players.

[Taiko Oni]
00:02:219 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - same as Muzukashii is ok. The combination is confusing. If you could explain why it's confuseing that would be great.
00:39:912 (82) - x No, I would rather keep my current patterns for this section unless you have a reason I should change it.
00:40:075 (83) - remove ^
00:40:239 - add o ^

No changes.